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学年佛山市普通高中教学质量检测高三英语试题
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第一部分
阅读（共两节,
满分
50
分）
第一节（共
15
小题；每小题
2.5
分,
满分
37.5
分）
阅读下列短文,
从每题所给的A、B、C、D
四个选项中选出最佳选项。
A
There
are
many
options
for
free
video
conferencing
(会议)
apps.
Here’s
our
short
list
of
the
best
ones,
where
they
shine
and
where
they
fall
short.
Google
Hangouts
The
free
video
chat
app
from
Google
is
a
great
example
of
a
consumer-grade
app.
It
integrates
with
Gmail
and
Google
Calendar,
making
it
easier
for
users
to
operate.
Up
to
10
participants
can
join
the
live
conference
with
a
plug-in
application.
And
as
it
doesn’t
support
dual
stream
video
and
content,
some
users
complain
that
the
video
is
not
clear
or
reliable.
Skype
The
app,
developed
by
Microsoft,
gives
10
users
access
to
a
conference.
It’s
worth
noting
that
Microsoft
is
integrated
with
Skype.
A
plug-in
application
is
required.
Advanced
features
are
fascinating,
but
only
available
for
paid
subscription.
Zoom
The
free
video
conferencing
solution
from
Zoom
provides
a
service
for
group
video
calls
with
over
100
participants.
The
Zoom
Basic
plan
allows
users
to
have
40-minute
calls
with
a
handful
of
features
like
screen
sharing,
local
recording
and
camera
filters.
A
plug-in
application
is
necessary.
All
calls,
which
are
limited
to
40
minutes
or
less,
are
secured.
Lifesize
Lifesize
has
been
in
the
video
conferencing
industry
for
long.
By
setting
up
a
free
account
with
Lifesize,
you
can
quickly
start
a
free
video
call
with
up
to
25
participants.
It
is
web-based
and
doesn’t
require
downloads
or
an
application
on
your
devices.
Guests
can
join
the
live
call
right
from
the
website
by
clicking
on
your
personal
meeting
ID
link.
To
use
the
additional
features
like
300-way
calling,
Microsoft
integrations
and
4K
video
conference
room
systems
requires
a
paid
subscription.
Which
aspect
of
Google
Hangouts
is
not
satisfactory?
User
capacity.
Video
quality.
User-friendliness.
Technical
support.
Which
app
offers
a
ten-minute
conference
service
with
30
people
for
free?
Google
Hangouts.
B.
Skype.
C.
Zoom.
D.
Lifesize.
What
is
special
about
Lifesize?
It
integrates
with
Microsoft.
It
is
completely
free
of
charge.
There
is
no
time
limit
to
its
conferences.
No
application
is
needed
for
participants.
B
Moving
can
be
daunting
–
whether
it’s
to
a
new
city
or
an
entirely
new
country.
The
good
news?
Volunteering
can
be
a
great
way
to
settle
into
a
new
community,
meet
people,
and
learn
valuable
skills.
Kajal
Patil
moved
to
the
United
States
from
India
in
February
2017.
Having
previously
volunteered
for
two
years
as
an
assistant
yoga
teacher
in
her
home
country,
Kajal
was
enthusiastic
about
volunteering
and
began
looking
for
volunteer
opportunities
that
match
her
interests.
She
was
drawn
to
a
volunteer
opportunity
to
review
applications
on
behalf
of
the
Young
Leaders
of
the
Americas
Initiative
(YLAI),
which
aims
to
help
Latin
American
and
Caribbean
business
to
bring
positive
changes
to
their
societies
and
contribute
more
fully
to
economic
development,
prosperity
and
security
in
those
places.
After
connecting
with
the
opportunity
and
successfully
completing
the
application
process,
Kajal
got
to
work.
Her
role
involved
reviewing
44
in-depth
applications
from
potential
candidates
across
Latin
America
and
the
Caribbean
for
a
four-week
fellowship
in
the
U.S..
She
was
responsible
for
describing
the
business
ideas
presented
by
these
candidates,
assessing
the
social
impact
of
their
businesses,
and
determining
the
strength
of
candidates
to
carry
out
their
plans.
With
almost
4,000
applicants
in
2017,
volunteers
like
Kajal
were
important
members
of
the
YLAI
team.
Kajal
says
that
this
volunteer
opportunity
super-charged
her
existing
skills,
while
helping
her
build
new
ones
such
as
time
management,
business
analysis,
decision-making,
planning,
and
presenting.
She
is
now
looking
for
her
next
volunteer
opportunity
and
reflects
positively
on
her
experience
with
YLAI.
“A
new
country
brings
in
a
lot
of
new
experiences
and
volunteering
helped
me
to
settle
into
a
new
environment,”
adds
Kajal.
“By
helping
others,
I
felt
needed
in
society.
It
promoted
my
confidence,
and
other
people
benefited
too.
Volunteering
is
a
great
opportunity
to
improve
yourself,
others,
and
the
whole
society.”
Whether
you
recently
moved
to
a
new
place
or
are
looking
to
expand
your
influence
on
your
current
community,
find
a
volunteer
opportunity
to
empower
yourself,
and
others.
What
do
we
know
about
Kajal?
She
is
an
experienced
volunteer.
She
received
education
in
the
U.S..
She
founded
a
volunteer
organization.
She
worked
as
a
professional
yoga
teacher.
What
was
included
in
Kajal’s
voluntary
work
for
YLAI?
Carrying
out
the
selected
business
plans.
Assessing
the
applications
of
candidates.
Helping
candidates
think
up
business
ideas.
Simplifying
candidates’
application
process.
What
does
Kajal
think
of
volunteering?
It
contributes
to
local
economy.
It
focuses
on
skills
development.
It
helps
develop
people’s
interests.
It
benefits
individuals
and
society.
What
is
the
purpose
of
this
text?
To
share
experience
of
volunteering.
To
recognize
the
contribution
of
YLAI.
To
suggest
a
way
to
settle
into
a
new
place.
To
evaluate
the
benefits
of
volunteering
abroad.
C
For
most
business
speakers,
the
necessary
stage
time,
structure,
and
conscious
editing
to
bring
about
maximum
effect
just
aren’t
there
–
most
people
don’t
have
to
speak
often
enough
to
get
it.
Conversely,
the
speakers
who
deliver
their
talk
most
tend
to
be
the
best
and
most
polished.
They
know
where
the
laugh
lines
are,
they
know
what
phrasing
works
best,
and
they
know
their
timing.
Just
like
standup
comedians.
Standup
comedy,
at
its
basic
principles,
is
a
combination
of
material
(what
you
say)
and
delivery
(how
you
say
it).
It
is
no
different
than
typical
speeches
or
presentations.
TV
slots
(节目时间)
for
new
comedians
tend
to
be
under
five
minutes,
which
forces
them
to
continuously
refine
and
refine
again
in
order
to
achieve
maximum
effect
from
each
word.
Conference
organizers
still
tend
to
book
speakers
in
40-60
minute
time
slots
but
who,
these
days,
has
an
hour
to
focus
on
one
person?
Some
of
the
best
speeches
in
history
have
clocked
in
at
less
than
20
minutes.
Abraham
Lincoln’s
Gettysburg
Address
was
272
words
and
lasted
two
minutes.
Winston
Churchill’s
“Blood,
Toil,
Tears
and
Sweat”
speech
was
688
words.
The
most
powerful
emotional
expression
two
humans
can
say
to
each
other
is
just
three
words:
“I,”
“love,”
and
“care.”
Most
people
switch
off
at
around
the
ten-minute
mark.
As
mentioned
in
Brain
Rules,
studies
by
noted
educator
Wilbert
McKeachie
demonstrate
that
“typically,
attention
increases
from
the
beginning
of
the
lecture
to
ten
minutes
into
the
lecture
and
decreases
after
that
point.”
This
is
why
the
organization
for
online
talk
TED
has
shortened
its
earlier
18-minute
format.
They
figured
out
that
brevity
is
levity.
However,
many
conference
and
event
producers
haven’t
got
it
right.
Most
speakers
can’t
hold
the
attention
of
an
audience
for
40-60
minutes.
It’s
something
even
the
best
standup
comedians
battle
with.
Yet
business
speakers
seldom
ask
for
a
shorter
slot.
They
should.
What
pushes
new
standup
comedians
to
improve
their
presentations?
The
limited
given
time.
The
topic
of
their
speeches.
The
audience’s
expectation.
The
place
of
their
performance.
Why
does
the
author
mention
the
best
speeches
in
history
in
Paragraph
3?
To
expand
the
influence
of
the
two
speeches.
To
prove
that
powerful
speeches
can
be
brief.
To
illustrate
the
power
of
emotional
expressions.
To
show
how
famous
people
shortened
speeches.
Why
did
TED
reset
a
time
limit?
The
organizers
can’t
book
long
TV
slots.
The
audience
cannot
focus
for
a
long
time.
The
access
to
online
speeches
was
limited.
The
speakers
tend
to
deliver
short
speeches.
What
are
business
speakers
advised
to
do?
To
cut
down
their
speech
time.
To
interact
more
with
the
audience.
To
pay
more
attention
to
the
contents.
To
battle
against
the
standup
comedians.
D
Social
distancing
is
not
a
new
concept
in
the
natural
world,
where
infectious
diseases
are
commonplace.
Through
specialized
senses
animals
can
detect
certain
diseases
and
change
their
behavior
to
avoid
getting
ill.
In
1966,
while
studying
chimps
(猩猩)
in
a
Tanzanian
national
park,
zoologist
Jane
Goodall
observed
a
chimp
named
McGregor
who
had
caught
a
highly
infectious
virus.
His
fellow
chimps
attacked
him
and
threw
him
out
of
the
troop.
In
one
instance,
McGregor
approached
chimps
in
a
tree.
He
reached
out
a
hand
in
greeting,
but
the
others
moved
away
without
a
backward
glance.
“For
a
full
two
minutes,
old
McGregor
sat
motionless,
staring
after
them,”
Goodall
notes
in
her
1971
book
In
the
Shadow
of
Man.
“It’s
really
not
that
different
to
how
some
societies
react
today
to
such
a
tragedy.”
Not
all
animals
are
so
aggressive
toward
their
ailing
neighbors.
Sometimes
it’s
as
simple
as
avoiding
those
who
may
infect
you.
When
Kiesecker,
a
lead
scientist
in
America,
studied
American
bullfrog
in
the
late
1990s,
he
found
that
bullfrogs
could
not
only
detect
a
deadly
smell
of
infection
in
other
bullfrogs,
but
healthy
members
actively
avoided
those
that
were
sick.
Bullfrogs
rely
on
chemicals
signals
to
determine
who
is
sick
or
not.
Caribbean
lobsters
also
shun
diseased
members
of
their
community,
well
before
they
become
infectious.
It
takes
about
eight
weeks
for
lobsters
infected
with
the
deadly
virus
Panulirus
argus
mininuceovirus
to
become
dangerous
to
others.
Normally
social
animals,
lobsters
begin
keeping
away
from
the
diseased
as
early
as
four
weeks
after
infection
–
once
the
lobsters
can
smell
certain
chemicals
released
by
sick
individuals.
Overall,
it’s
important
to
note
that,
unlike
us,
animals
don’t
realize
if
they
stay
home,
they
might
actually
reduce
the
infection
rate,”
Kiesecker
explains.
“As
humans,
we
have
that
ability.
It’s
a
big
difference.”
What
can
we
learn
about
the
chimps
from
Goodall’s
observation?
They
kept
a
distance
from
one
another.
They
became
aggressive
when
infected.
The
infected
avoided
contact
with
others.
The
infected
were
forced
to
leave
the
group.
What
does
the
underlined
word
“shun”
in
Paragraph
6
probably
mean?
Avoid.
B.
Cure.
C.
Get
rid
of.
D.
Get
along
with.
How
are
humans
different
from
animals
according
to
Kiesecker?
Humans
are
more
sensitive
to
virus.
Humans
are
less
likely
to
get
infected.
Humans
treat
infectious
diseases
in
a
wiser
way.
Humans
can
detect
chemical
signals
more
quickly.
Which
might
be
the
best
title
for
the
text?
Help
Me
Out
Leave
Me
Alone
Stay
Away
From
Us
Stay
Home
Stay
Healthy
第二节（共
5
小题；每小题
2.5
分,
满分
12.5
分）
阅读下面短文,
从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Most
people
don’t
change.
They
just
become
more
the
way
they
already
are.
While
there
are
exceptions,
most
people
find
change
difficult
for
several
reasons.
16
Few
people
have
an
accurate
view
of
who
they
are
and
therefore
don’t
recognize
the
aspects
of
themselves
that
need
improvement.
Most
people
want
to
believe
they’re
well-balanced
and
even
outstanding
in
many
ways.
17
Then
there
is
the
human
tendency
to
explain
one’s
difficulties,
short-comings
and
failures
by
blaming
somebody
else.
You
may
find
many
people
around
you
blame
their
poor
performance
on
others.
18
You
will
probably
never
hear
anyone
tell
you,
“I
got
fired
because
I
was
doing
a
terrible
job.”
Few
people
are
willing
to
accept
that
their
own
character
traits
(弱点)
and
choices
are
the
main
causes
of
the
kind
of
life
they
lead.
Finally,
most
people
find
it
too
challenging
to
change
as
it
involves
a
lot
of
hard
work
and
difficult
choices.
Even
when
you
have
learned
enough
about
your
true
nature,
you
then
need
to
do
something
about
it.
19
Meanwhile,
the
reality
can
be
really
discouraging:
you
do
much
hard
work
but
the
results
are
never
the
sort
of
ideal
change
you’re
looking
for.
No
matter
how
difficult
it
is,
you
still
need
to
find
your
own
way
to
change.
20
Real
change
begins
with
the
recognition
of
these
ways
in
which
you
have
remained
the
same
and
made
the
same
unfortunate
choices
your
entire
life.
And
you
need
to
do
that
over
and
over
again.
However,
you
have
little
choice
but
to
change.
They
don’t
know
themselves
very
well,
to
begin
with.
They
all
want
to
think
of
themselves
as
special
and
gifted.
At
first,
they
don’t
think
change
can
bring
about
encouraging
results.
You
can
review
the
past
and
make
a
list
of
the
ways
in
which
you
haven’t
changed.
They
are
likely
to
paint
themselves
as
victims
but
never
recognize
their
own
problems.
第二部分
语言运用（共两节,
满分
30
分）
第一节（共
15
小题；每小题
1
分,
满分
15
分）
阅读下面短文,
从每题所给的A、B、C、D
四个选项中选出可以填入空格处的最佳选项。
There’s
a
lot
that
can
be
conveyed
in
a
handshake.
Throughout
history,
such
a(n)
21
was
used
to
complete
a
business
deal,
22
friendship,
or
signal
trust.
But
touching
strangers
can
also
lead
to
other,
less
beneficial
shared
23
–
like
disease
outbreaks.
As
fears
about
COVID-19
increase,
France
has
warned
its
citizens
to
24
handshakes.
However,
with
histories
dating
back
thousands
of
years,
the
greeting
is
likely
too
25
established
to
be
so
easily
stopped.
A
popular
theory
about
the
handshake’s
26
is
that
it
began
as
a
gesture
of
27
.
Grasping
hands
proved
you
were
not
holding
a
weapon
–
and
28
them
was
a
way
to
ensure
your
partner
had
nothing
hiding
up
their
sleeve.
There
may
be
a
29
explanation
for
its
lasting
power.
In
a
2015
study,
researchers
in
Israel
filmed
handshakes
between
hundreds
of
strangers
and
found
nearly
a
quarter
of
participants
30
their
hands
unconsciously
afterwards.
31
,
they
concluded
that
a
handshake
may
be
used
to
detect
chemical
signals,
and
possibly
as
a
means
of
32
–
just
as
other
animals
do
by
smelling
each
other.
Behavioral
scientist
Val
Curtis
in
London
says
that
one
possible
33
for
the
handshake
as
greeting
is
to
imply
that
the
other
person
is
34
enough
to
share
germs
(细菌)
with.
Because
of
this,
the
35
can
go
in
and
out
of
style
depending
on
public
health
concerns.
21.
A.
message
B.
expression
C.
act
D.
solution
22.
A.
indicate
B.
describe
C.
value
D.
end
23.
A.
outcomes
B.
beliefs
C.
concerns
D.
emotions
24.
A.
understand
B.
pause
C.
study
D.
change
25.
A.
clearly
B.
originally
C.
officially
D.
firmly
26.
A.
advantage
B.
meaning
C.
benefit
D.
origin
27.
A.
peace
B.
appreciation
C.
power
D.
satisfaction
28.
A.
waving
B.
holding
C.
shaking
D.
searching
29.
A.
detailed
B.
historical
C.
scientific
D.
cultural
30.
A.
washed
B.
sniffed
C.
clapped
D.
grasped
31.
A.
Besides
B.
Therefore
C.
Meanwhile
D.
However
32.
A.
protection
B.
warning
C.
control
D.
communication
33.
A.
role
B.
reason
C.
means
D.
source
34.
A.
mature
B.
cautious
C.
reliable
D.
tough
35.
A.
theory
B.
topic
C.
research
D.
practice
第二节（共
10
小题：每小题
1.5
分,
满分
15
分）
阅读下面短文,
在空白处填入
1
个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
The
day
before
last
Chinese
Lunar
New
Year’s
Eve,
La
Rinascente
Department
Store
in
Milan
of
Italy
displayed
a
special
Chinese
painting
to
welcome
the
Year
of
the
Rat.
Elements
of
both
the
East
and
the
West
36
(combine)
in
this
artwork.
It
was
the
work
of
a
young
designer,
Chen
Zuer.
Chen
says
that
it
was
really
37
(stress)
when
she
first
met
staff
members
from
the
department
store
to
propose
her
ideas
for
displaying
her
work
in
shop
windows.
“They
seemed
very
strict
38
that
made
me
nervous,”
she
recalls.
“I
kept
telling
39
(I)
just
to
show
them
the
real
me.”
When
40
(ask)
about
her
opinion
of
Chinese
culture,
she
said
“it
can
be
41
(true)
magnificent
like
the
Palace
Museum,
but
it
can
also
be
as
simple
as
42
I
drew
as
a
Chinese
girl”.
After
her
presentation,
she
won
the
opportunity
43
(exhibit)
her
work,
which
turned
out
to
be
44
great
success.
The
young
Chinese
artist’s
fresh
design
enjoyed
great
45
(popular)
in
the
old
Italian
store.
第三部分
写作（共两节,
满分
40
分）
第一节（满分
15
分）
假定你是你校英语诗社的负责人。请你写一则启事，发布到学校英文小报，介绍诗社并欢迎大家加入，内容包括：
诗社成立的时间和目的；
诗社日常活动。注意:
写作词数应为
80
左右；
请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第二节（满分
25
分）
阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walter
John
was
a
20-year-old
college
student
from
Homewood,
Alabama.
As
a
young
man
in
college
far
away
from
home,
he
didn’t
have
much
money.
He
had
to
work
part-time
to
cover
his
living
costs.
Recently
he
gave
up
his
part-time
job
in
the
fast-food
business
and
found
a
new
one
at
a
home-moving
company
called
Bellhops.
The
pay
for
his
new
job
was
higher,
and
John
gained
more
flexibility
with
his
hours,
which
allowed
him
to
focus
on
his
studies
a
bit
more.
He
wanted
to
do
everything
he
could
to
secure
this
new
employment
opportunity,
so
he
thought
he
had
to
try
his
best
to
make
sure
that
everything
would
go
well
on
his
first
day!
But
sometimes,
life
hits
you
unexpectedly.
A
day
before
John
began
his
new
job,
his
car
broke
down!
With
little
money
to
his
name,
he
couldn’t
have
his
car
repaired
at
the
garage.
None
of
his
friends
were
able
to
take
him
to
work.
What
was
worse,
the
public
transportation
was
not
running
at
his
working
time.
If
he
took
a
taxi,
it
would
cost
him
half
his
salary.
Therefore,
he
decided
to
walk
to
the
company.
In
order
to
get
there
by
six
in
the
morning,
he
thought
that
the
safest
way
would
be
to
leave
at
midnight.
John
even
challenged
himself
to
arrive
there
one
hour
earlier.
Even
though
it
seemed
like
such
a
far
walk,
John
knew
he
was
fit
enough
to
do
it.
This
was
challenging,
but
John
knew
it
was
possible.
He
grabbed
his
wallet
and
his
phone
and
left
his
apartment.
As
soon
as
he
stepped
out
of
the
door,
he
realized
that
walking
alone
in
the
dark
at
midnight
can
be
dangerous.
Moreover,
he
had
to
walk
through
a
large
wood
as
well
as
many
blocks
of
the
city.
Therefore,
he
went
back
to
take
a
bat
(球棒)
and
a
kitchen
knife
for
safety
purposes.
In
case
a
wild
animal
or
some
bad
person
attacked
him,
at
least
he
would
have
something
for
protection.
注意：
续写词数应为
150
左右：
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
Finally
John
started
his
long
walk.
At
that
time,
a
car
was
drawing
closer.
)
2020~2021
学年佛山市普通高中教学质量检测
高三英语答案与评分标准
第一部分（共
20
小题，每小题
2.5
分）
1
B
2
C
3
D
4
A
5
B
6
D
7
C
8
A
9
B
10
B
11
A
12
D
13
A
14
C
15
C
16
C
17
D
18
G
19
A
20
F
第二部分
第一节：（共
15
小题，每小题
1
分）
21
C
22
A
23
A
24
B
25
D
26
D
27
A
28
C
29
C
30
B
31
B
32
D
33
B
34
C
35
D
第二节：（共
10
小题，每小题
1.5
分）
36
were/are
combined
37
stressful
38
and
39
myself
40
asked
41
truly
42
what
43
to
exhibit
44
a
45
popularity
第三部分
第一节
(满分
15
分)
一、参考范文：
Dear
fellow
students,
I’m
honored
to
introduce
the
English
Poetry
Society
to
you.
Founded
in
2013,
the
English
Poetry
Society
in
of
our
school
enjoys
a
good
reputation
with
the
aim
of
providing
a
platform
for
poetry
lovers
to
learn
English
and
to
appreciate
the
beauty
of
this
form
of
literature.
Every
Tuesday
afternoon,
a
variety
of
meaningful
activities
are
available,
ranging
from
lectures
by
renowned
professors
to
inspiring
group
discussions
on
classic
English
poems.
This
society
is
undoubtedly
your
best
choice
to
improve
your
English
and
enrich
your
school
life!
Just
contact
us
soon!
二、评分原则
本题总分为
15
分，按五个档次进行评分。
评分时，应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为:
对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性;
使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;
上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
(
2020~2021
学年佛山市普通高中教学质量检测高三英语答案
第
1
页
共
3
页
)
评分时还应注意:
词数少于
60
或多于
100
的，从总分中减去
2
分。
单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
书写较差以致影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。三、内容要点
诗社成立时间和目的;
诗社的日常活动;
呼吁大家加入诗社。
四、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13
-
15
分)：能与明全部要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯，表达清楚;
第四档(10
-
12
分)：能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚;
第三档(7
-
9
分)：能写明基本要点;语言虽有较多借误，但能基本达意;
第二档(4
-
6
分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达;
第一档(1
-
3
分)：只能写出一两个要点;语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确。第二节
(满分
25
分)
一、参考范文
Version
1:
Paragraph
1:
Finally
John
started
his
long
walk.
A
few
hours
into
the
trek,
he
saw
eyes
in
the
distance,
so
he
grabbed
his
bat
before
realizing
it
was
just
a
stray
dog.
He
walked
across
the
street,
hoping
the
dog
wouldn’t
bother
him,
and
he
also
picked
up
a
ball
and
threw
it
in
the
opposite
direction.
It
worked.
John
walked
for
three
hours
straight
and
felt
great
about
it.
His
legs
burned
a
bit,
but
another
three
hours
would
hurt
him.
He
thought
a
quick
rest
could
give
him
more
energy,
so
it
was
a
calculated
decision
to
take
a
break.
Paragraph
2:
At
that
time,
a
car
was
drawing
closer.
When
the
driver,
Mark,
pulled
up
to
John,
he
rolled
down
the
window
and
asked
why
he
was
all
alone
in
the
morning
on
the
road.
John
told
the
Mark
what
he
was
doing.
Impressed
by
his
story,
Mark
offered
to
give
him
a
lift.
Thanks
to
Mark’s
help,
John
managed
to
make
it
to
the
destination
at
5:30.
With
the
sun
peeking
over
the
horizon,
John’s
face
glowed
with
gratitude.
Feeling
energetic,
he
couldn’t
wait
to
get
started.
Version
2:
Paragraph
1:
Finally
John
started
his
long
walk.
He
walked
nonstop
and
soon
he
was
deep
in
the
forest.
Apart
from
the
creepy
cry
from
owls
and
the
rustling
of
trees,
the
wood
was
in
a
deathly
silence.
Unconsciously,
he
quickened
up
and
held
onto
the
bat
tightly.
Abruptly,
a
terrible
howl,
from
what
sounded
like
a
wolf,
broke
the
silence
and
startled
him.
He
jumped
up
and
ran
as
fast
as
his
legs
could
carry
him.
He
didn’t
stop
running
until
he
saw
a
flash
of
light
at
a
distance,
moving
quickly
towards
him.
Paragraph
2:
At
that
time,
a
car
was
drawing
closer.
At
the
sight
of
John,
the
driver
slowed
down
and
stopped.
He
asked
cautiously,
“What
are
you
doing
here
at
this
time?”
Hearing
that
there
were
probably
wolves
in
the
forest
ahead,
the
man
immediately
urged
John
to
get
in
and
turned
around
the
car.
After
John
told
the
man
why
he
was
in
the
wood,
the
man
burst
into
laughter,
“I
know
your
company,
young
man.
I’m
the
boss.
You
see,
I
was
just
off
work
when
you
went
to
work.
Now,
would
you
like
to
have
breakfast
together?”
二、评分原则
本题总分为
25
分，按七个档次进行评分。
评分时，应主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为:
续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度;
所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;
上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
评分时还应注意:
词数少于
120
的，酌情扣分;
书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分;
单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次
描述
第七档
(22—25
分)
—创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高;
—使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解;
—自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。
第六档
(18—21
分)
—创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高;
—使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解;
—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第五档
(15—17
分)
—创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性,续写基本完整，与原文情境相关;
—使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解;
—使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第四档
(11—14
分)
—创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关;
—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解;
—尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第三档
(6—10
分)
—内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节;
—所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解;
—未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
第二档
(1—5
分)
—内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节;
—所使用的词汇非常有限,语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解;
—几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
第一档
(0
分)
—未作答;所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判;
—所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。