中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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高考应用文（书信类）作文指导
)
应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关,
实用性很强的文体,
包括书信(或电子邮件)等,
每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。
（一）书信类应用文写作结构
第一段：表明写作意图。
第二段：就意图展开（如：投诉产品或服务特点／列举建议或解决措施／表明观点的理由…）
第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的想法。
（二）书信类应用文主要分类
1.
投诉信：
（1）写作结构指导：
开头：称呼。
第一段：开门见山地说明意图．倌的开头要交代事由。
第二段：投诉产品或服务，可看重对比反差．即产品或服务应该如何或在广告中被宣传成什么效果．而实际并非如此。
第三段：提出要求及解决办法。
结尾；结束语和署名。
（2）常用句型
①
I
am
writing
to
complain
about
…
我写信投诉…
②
I
am
disappointed
to
find
that
things
were
quite
the
opposite.
我很失望发现情况完全相反。
③
Since
I
have
suffered
a
lot
both
physically
and
psychologically,
I
demand
that
you
refund
the
cost
and
solve
the
problems
as
soon
as
possible.
我的身心皆遭受伤害，因此我坚决要求你们退还所有费用并尽快解决此问题。
④
If
you
do
not
do
this,
I
will
complain
to
the
consumer
council
and
resort
to
law.
如果你们不按我的要求去做，我将会向消费者协会投诉并诉诸法律。
2.
申请信：
（1）写作结构指导
第一段：表明自己对某个工作或职位感兴趣，并提出申请。
第二段：介绍相关的个人信息，主要包括你具备了什么样的素质来胜任这份工作和你为什么想得到这份工作。
第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的申请。
（2）常用句型
①
In
answer
to
your
advertisement.
I
wish
to
apply
for…
看到你们的招聘广告，我希望申请…
②
Your
advertisement
offers
a
most
tempting
job
to
a
young
man
just
out
of
college.
你们的招聘广告提供了一份十分吸引刚出校门的年轻人的工作。
③
I'd
like
to
apply
for
the
position
advertised
in…
我想申请在……上刊登的这一职位。
④
I’m
rather
keen
on…
我对……很感兴趣。
⑤
I've
been…since…
自从……以来，我一直在……
⑥
I
have
the
education
and
the
experience
that
fit
well
with
your
advertised
position.
我所受的教育和经历适合你们招聘的职位。
⑦
I
have
a
personality
that
is
cheerful
and
optimistic.我的个性开朗又乐观。
⑧
I
did
well
at
school
and
I
have
got
impressive
letters
of
recommendation
from
my
professors.
我在校学习很好并且有教授肯定的推荐信。
⑨I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
consider
my
application.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。我期待您的回信。
⑩I
am
available
for
the
interview
at
your
convenience.
Please
contact
me
at
the
above
address
or
call
me.
在您方便之时我随时恭候你的面试。请按照上述地址联系或者给我电话。
3.
邀请信：
（1）写作结构指导
邀请信包括宴会，舞会，晚餐，婚礼等等各种邀请信件，形式上大体分为两种：一种为正规格式亦称为请柬，一种为非正式格式，即一般的邀请信。虽然一般邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但是要求叙事一定要清楚、明白。
（2）常用句型
①写作目的：发出邀请
It
gives
me
the
greatest
pleasure
to
invite
you
to
……
It’s
my
pleasure/a
great
honor
for
me
to
invite
you
to…
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to…
I’d
like
to
invite
you
to…
②说明事由及活动地点和时间：
Will
you
and
Mrs.
Smith
give
the
pleasure
of
dining
with
us
at
the
Beijing
Hotel
on
Sunday,
October
10th,
at
eight
o’clock?
There
will
be
a
dinner
party
to
be
held
at
the
Beijing
Hotel
on
Sunday,
October
10th,
at
eight
o’clock.
Will
you
and
Mrs.
Smith
come
and
join
us?
I
hope
that
you
have
no
previous
engagement
and
can
join
us
for
the
English
Evening
at
7:00
p.m.
on
Feb.
1st.
③表示期待和感谢：
I
do
hope
that
you
will
be
able
to
come.
We
should
be
very
pleased
if
you
could
honor
us
with
your
company.
We
should
be
very
grateful
if
you
could
….
I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
accept
my
invitation.
4.
求助信：
（1）写作结构指导
主要涉及学生学习或生活上的各种问题或困惑，写求助信应注意清楚描述所遇到的困难，表达清楚所希望得到的帮助，语言得体，语气诚恳礼貌。
（2）常用句型
①写作目的：求助
I’m
writing
to
ask
for/get
some
help.
I’m
writing
to
ask
whether
you
can
give
me
help.
I’m
sorry
that
I
have
to
ask
you
to
do
me
a
favor,
with
the
hope
that
you
will
be
kind
to
help
me.
Sorry
to
bother
you
but
I
really
get
some
problems
recently.
I’m
writing?this
letter
to
ask
you
to
do
me
a
favor.
②描述困难
But
I
have
met
some
difficulties
with/in
……
But
unfortunately,
I’m
encountering
difficulty
in…
Faced
with/Facing
so
much
difficulty,
I
have
to
ask
you
for
some
help.
I
face
the
choice
between…and…
It’s
really
hard
for
me
to
decide/deal
with
…
I
need
your
help
because
……
③表达希望得到的帮助
I
wonder
if
you
can
help
me
with
these
difficulties.
I
really
appreciate
it
if
you
could
help
me.
I
believe
I
will
benefit
a
lot
from
your
valuable
and
timely
advice.
I
am
sure
with
your
help
I
can
make
great
progress.
Can
you
manage
to
give
me
some
constructive
guidance?
④列举困难：first,
besides,
also,
what’s
more,
at
the
same
time,
in
the
meanwhile,
in
addition,...
⑤请求系列帮助：so,
thus,
however,
but,
in
order
that,
so
that
…
⑥情感词汇：sorry,
bother,
beg,
would
you
like….
unfortunately,
unluckily,
especially,
sincerely,
badly,
hopefully
5.
咨询信：
常用句型：
①写信目的
I
am
a?high
school
student
and
planning
to
study
in
your
university
this
summer.
I
am
a
Chinese
student
who
wishes
to
study
at
your
university.
I’m
writing
to
ask
if
…
②介绍背景&询问详情
I
am
writing
at
the
suggestion
of
a
friend
who
graduated
from
your
university
last
year
and
has
warmly
recommended
it
to
me.
I
will
have
graduated
from
high
school
by
the
end
of
this
term?and
wish
to
continue
my
study
at
your
university.
My
plan
is
to
start
my
course
from
the
next
term,
and
I
would
be
grateful
if
it’s
so
kind
of
you
to
give
me
some
essential
information.
Could
you
please
tell
me
something
about
your
…?
Would
you
please
send
me
an
application
form
and
other
materials
necessary
for
my
application?
Would
you
please
send
me
all
the
information
and
the
forms
as
soon
as
possible?
Thank
you
very
much.
I
would
be
much
obliged
to
you
if
you
let
me
know
the
procedures
I
have
to
go
through.
③表示谢意，期盼回复
Sorry
to
bother
you,
your
kind
help
would
be
greatly
appreciated.
I
will
appreciate
it
very
much
if
you
can
give
me
a
reply.
6.
建议信：
常用句型：
①写信目的
I
have
received
your
letter
saying
that
you
plan
to
have
a
visit
to
China
for
ten
days
next
month.
I
recommend
that……
I
am
writing
to
you
to
present
what
I
think
on
the
further
improvement
of
our
hotel
so
as
to
establish
a
website
of
our
own
to
attract
more
clients.
I'm?sorry?(that)?you?are?having?trouble/difficulty/problems?in?making?friends.??
I?know?you?are?now?having?trouble?communicating?with?others,?and?you?may?often?feel?lonely.??
I'm?glad?to?receive?your?letter?asking?for?my?advice?on?...??
However,?the?situation?is?easy?to?change?if?you?take?my?advice.???
Here?are?some?tips?to?help?you./Here?are?a?few?suggestions.??
I?think?you?can?make?it?if?you?follow?the?advice?below.?
②提出建议
I’d
like
to
suggest
that
……
May
I
suggest
that……
In
my
opinion
……
I
would
like
to
make
a
recommendation
that
…
I
am
writing
to
advise
you
of
……
If
I
were
you,
I
would
……
First(ly),?why?not?...??If?you?do?this,?...?????
Secondly,?you?should/can?...Then/That?way,?...??
Thirdly,?it?would?be?a?good?idea?if?...?By?doing?this,?...???
Last?but?not?least?...?
③希望采纳建议，并表示谢意
Thank
you
for
your
attention.
Please
take
good
consideration
of
my
advice.
Thanks.
I?hope?you?will?find?these?ideas?useful.??
I?hope?what's?mentioned?above?might?be?helpful?...??
I?believe?that?if?you?follow?my?advice,?you'll?get?along?well?with?your?classmates.??????
I?believe,?with?your?determination,?you?can?manage?to?overcome?these?difficulties.??
7.
感谢信：
（1）写作结构指导
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件主要写明感谢他人的理由，要感情真挚，措辞得体。
（2）常用词汇:
v.
thank,
appreciate;
owe?
欠债,
感激
n.
thanks,
gratitude,
appreciation;
adj.
thankful,
grateful,
appreciative,?
appreciate
one’s
doing
…
be
grateful/thankful
to
sb.
for
…
convey/express/extend
my
thanks/gratitude/appreciation
for
…
owe
sb.
a
lot
for
…
thank
sb.
for
…
范文赏析1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自
China
Daily
21
Century）.以李明的名义给该同学回信。
Dear
Editor，
I
am
a
new
student
at
Haining
Hongda
Senior
High
School.
My
home
is
far
from
Haining,
so
I
must
live
at
school.
This
is
the
first
time
for
me
to
get
away
from
my
parents.
I
feel
very
sad.
When
I
left
home,
I
couldn’t
help
tearing
myself
away
from
them.
I
do
not
want
to
be
alone
at
school,
and
I
am
a
shy
girl.
I
have
been
crying
in
bed
at
night
these
days.
I
want
to
stay
at
home
forever.
I
miss
my
parents
very
much.
Could
you
tell
me
what
to
do
?
Your
early
reply
is
expected.
Regards,
Amy
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
范文赏析2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假如你是明启中学（
Ming
Qi
Middle
School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。
启事
国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。
有意者请来信告知：
1）
你个人的基本情况；
2）
你对申请项目的基本设想；
3）
项目经费的使用计划。
联系方式:
2011hope@icf.org
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
Word
came
that
the
International
Children
Funds
Association
intended
to
aid
middle
school
students
financially
in
launching
programs
designed
to
help
children
in
poor
areas.
And
I
am
writing
to
you
to
apply
for
one,
hoping
that
the
fund
as
much
as
2000
yuan
can
realize
my
wish
to
help
these
children.
As
a
normal
student
of
MingQi
Middle
School,
I,
Li
Ming,
have
been
long
cherishing
a
dream
that
every
single
child
in
poverty
can
have
free
access
to
knowledge,
thus
devoting
themselves
to
society
to
make
it
more
harmonious
in
turn.
Consequently,
if
my
application
can
be
luckily
agreed
to,
I
will
spare
no
effort
to
build
a
library
for
those
children
as
my
program.
To
be
more
specific,
the
fund
will
be
divided
into
three
parts.
First
of
all,
800
yuan
of
it
will
be
spent
on
buying
books
which
may
be
mainly
second-hand,
in
order
to
ensure
the
quantity.
Also,
another
400
yuan
will
be
intended
to
carry
out
advertisements
that
call
on
the
people
with
a
sense
of
responsibility
in
society
to
donate
textbooks
and
so
forth.
What’s
more,
the
remaining
800
yuan,
according
to
my
design,
shall
be
given
to
those
children,
entitling
them
the
right
to
buy
their
favorite
books
that
are
beyond
what
is
mentioned
above.
As
you
can
see
from
what
is
talked
about
above,
my
plan
may
still
leave
something
to
be
desired,
but
as
far
as
my
strong
wish
to
help
those
children
is
concerned,
I
genuinely
hope
you
and
your
association
can
grant
me
the
opportunity
to
turn
it
into
reality.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming
实战演练1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你是李华，你的表弟张强被一所寄宿制高中（boarding
high
school）录取了，写一份信祝贺他。信的内容需包括：
对表弟进入高中表示祝贺
介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同
对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。
参考范文:
Dear
brother,
I’m
thrilled
to
be
informed
that
you
have
been
admitted
into
a
boarding
high
school.
I
firmly
believe
that
all
your
family
members
will
take
pride
in
you,
for
you
will
go
through
a
shift
from
adolescent
to
grown-up.
What
a
fabulous
life
period
it
will
be!
It
won’t
be
strange
for
you
find
it
hard
to
gear
yourself
to
the
high
school
life
at
the
beginning.
You’d
better
bear
in
mind
that
not
only
does
the
extent
of
learning
difficulties
elevate
incredibly,
but
also
the
classmates
around
you
are
more
mature
compared
with
your
former
ones.
It’s
high
time
for
you
to
uplift
yourself
by
picking
up
those
valuable
qualities
from
your
classmates.
You
can
never
pay
too
much
attention
to
making
progress
in
the
field
you
like.
The
prominent
difference
between
the
boarding
high
school
and
the
Junior
school
is
that
you
need
to
endeavor
to
fulfill
your
own
ultimate
goal
independently.
Chances
are
that
you
will
miss
your
parents
and
friends,
but
it
is
what
you
have
experienced
that
will
pave
the
way
for
you
to
keep
going.
By
and
large,
no
matter
what
kind
of
twists
and
turns
come
to
or
what
sorts
of
excitement
faces
you,
you
should
be
grateful
to
the
precious
days
that
you
have
and
value
the
acquisition
of
qualities.
Yours,
Li
Hua
实战演练2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1.
你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2.
你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
参考范文:
Dear
Editor,
????Word
comes
that
our
school’s
English
newspaper
is
going
to
have
a
change
on
its
content.
As
a
hardcore
fan
of
it,
I’m
writing
to
voice
some
of
my
opinions
towards
our
school’s
English
newspaper.
????In
my
point
of
view,
among
health,
entertainment
and
culture,
I
would
choose
“entertainment”
to
be
the
one
to
be
eliminated.
Not
only
is
this
topic
far
from
our
study
life,
but
also
it
may
distract
our
attention
from
learning.
We
are
already
living
in
a
world
that
is
crammed
with
useless
information,
and
there’s
no
need
to
add
some
more.
Instead,
I
suggest
that
some
interesting
stories
can
be
put
to
the
topic
of
"culture",
which
are
sure
to
serve
quite
the
equal
function
of
the
topic
of
entertainment.
????In
terms
of
the
column
to
be
added,
what
I
highly
recommend
is
the
readers’
feedback.
It’s
crucial
for
the
editor
to
know
the
reaction
of
the
readers
to
the
newspaper.
Only
in
this
way
can
the
newspaper
carry
something
of
great
value
to
students
and
as
a
result
I’m
fully
convinced
that
it
will
gain
more
popularity
among
students.
????Given
the
advice
mentioned
above,
I
acutely
hope
that
our
English
paper
can
achieve
greater
success
and
I
would
appreciate
it
very
much
if
you
can
take
my
advice
into
serious
account.
Yours,
Chengfei
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter非常关心你的备考情况及你的高考后的安排，因此，他来信向你询问相关的情况。请你据此给
Peter写封回信。写一封邮件介绍有关情况。
参考范文：
Dear
Peter,
Delighted
to
receive
your
letter
inquiring
about
my
preparations
for
the
upcoming
Gaokao
and
my
arrangements
after
the
exam,
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
more
details.
When
making
preparations,
I
spare
no
effort
to
do
exercises
every
day
and
even
stay
up
late
so
that
I
can
be
admitted
into
a
key
university.
Besides,
I
attach
importance
to
adjusting
my
state
of
mind,
aiming
to
relieve
my
stress.
As
for
my
plans
after
the
exam,
taking
a
part-time
job
comes
on
the
top
of
my
list,
which
helps
me
learn
to
be
independent
and
prepare
myself
for
my
college
life.
Thanks
for
your
care
and
concern,
so
what
about
your
holiday
plan?
Yours,
Li
Hua
目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象大使”(image
ambassador
on
campus)活动。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐，并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。(信中请勿出现具体校名和姓名)
参考范文：
Dear
Mr
Principal,
With
the
recent
“Image
ambassador
on
campus”
campaign
launched,a
suitable
candidate
just
comes
up
into
my
mind
and
I
cannot
wait
to
introduce
this
my
dear
fellow
to
you
heartily.
The
guy,named
Ben,has
been
class
monitor
since
his
first
debut.He
is
such
a
person
with
a
high
sense
of
responsibility
as
is
always
ready
to
offer
people
a
helping
hand
with
no
hesitation
and
reluctance.
He
is
also
a
role
model
possessing
precious
virtues
which
we
all
are
endeavoring
to
learn
from.Never
is
he
arrogant
no
matter
what
achievements
he
has
made
in
study.
So
he
is
never
tired
of
learning
from
all
that
he
finds
a
point
in
improving
himself.
He
is
always
on
the
run
of
clarifying
his
own
soul
as
well
as
ours.
If
you
share
the
same
opinion
as
mine,
please
take
Ben
into
account.
I’m
sure
he
can
assume
the
role
of
image
ambassador
on
campus
and
maximize
his
positive
energy
for
us
students’
deeper
internal
development
in
the
mean
time.
Anyway,thanks
for
your
reading
time.
Yours,
Serena
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defence）、护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么
为什么想学这些内容
参考范文：
Dear
leader，
I
am
very
glad
that
your
school
will
hold
the
English
Summer
Camp
that
contains
many
courses,
such
as
gardening;
cooking;
self-defence;
nursing
and
so
on.
I
want
to
register
to
attend
a
course
bout
gardening,
because
I
have
liked
flowers;
grasses
etc
since
I
was
a
little
child.
I
especially
like
playing
in
the
garden
where
I
can
enjoy
the
beauty
of
nature.
For
one
thing,
I
hope
to
gain
a
bit
more
knowledge
of
gardening
so
that
it
can
help
me
to
major
in
the
gardening
after
attending
college.
Besides
I
wish
to
get
much
more
information
about
gardening
so
as
to
study
it
more
easily
when
I
enter
the
university.
What's
more,
I
can
realize
the
bitterness
of
the
gardeners
to
treasure
the
plants
much
more.
For
another,
after
graduation
from
college
I
will
devote
my
life
to
cultivate
the
flowers
and
grasses
to
turn
our
country
into
a
more
beautiful
state
and
make
many
more
foreigners
come
to
visit
our
country.
Yours，
Wang
yue
hua
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高考应用文（书信类）作文指导
)
应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关,
实用性很强的文体,
包括书信(或电子邮件)等,
每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。
（一）书信类应用文写作结构
第一段：表明写作意图。
第二段：就意图展开（如：投诉产品或服务特点／列举建议或解决措施／表明观点的理由…）
第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的想法。
（二）书信类应用文主要分类
1.
投诉信：
（1）写作结构指导：
开头：称呼。
第一段：开门见山地说明意图．倌的开头要交代事由。
第二段：投诉产品或服务，可看重对比反差．即产品或服务应该如何或在广告中被宣传成什么效果．而实际并非如此。
第三段：提出要求及解决办法。
结尾；结束语和署名。
（2）常用句型
①
I
am
writing
to
complain
about
…
我写信投诉…
②
I
am
disappointed
to
find
that
things
were
quite
the
opposite.
我很失望发现情况完全相反。
③
Since
I
have
suffered
a
lot
both
physically
and
psychologically,
I
demand
that
you
refund
the
cost
and
solve
the
problems
as
soon
as
possible.
我的身心皆遭受伤害，因此我坚决要求你们退还所有费用并尽快解决此问题。
④
If
you
do
not
do
this,
I
will
complain
to
the
consumer
council
and
resort
to
law.
如果你们不按我的要求去做，我将会向消费者协会投诉并诉诸法律。
2.
申请信：
（1）写作结构指导
第一段：表明自己对某个工作或职位感兴趣，并提出申请。
第二段：介绍相关的个人信息，主要包括你具备了什么样的素质来胜任这份工作和你为什么想得到这份工作。
第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的申请。
（2）常用句型
①
In
answer
to
your
advertisement.
I
wish
to
apply
for…
看到你们的招聘广告，我希望申请…
②
Your
advertisement
offers
a
most
tempting
job
to
a
young
man
just
out
of
college.
你们的招聘广告提供了一份十分吸引刚出校门的年轻人的工作。
③
I'd
like
to
apply
for
the
position
advertised
in…
我想申请在……上刊登的这一职位。
④
I’m
rather
keen
on…
我对……很感兴趣。
⑤
I've
been…since…
自从……以来，我一直在……
⑥
I
have
the
education
and
the
experience
that
fit
well
with
your
advertised
position.
我所受的教育和经历适合你们招聘的职位。
⑦
I
have
a
personality
that
is
cheerful
and
optimistic.我的个性开朗又乐观。
⑧
I
did
well
at
school
and
I
have
got
impressive
letters
of
recommendation
from
my
professors.
我在校学习很好并且有教授肯定的推荐信。
⑨I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
consider
my
application.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。我期待您的回信。
⑩I
am
available
for
the
interview
at
your
convenience.
Please
contact
me
at
the
above
address
or
call
me.
在您方便之时我随时恭候你的面试。请按照上述地址联系或者给我电话。
3.
邀请信：
（1）写作结构指导
邀请信包括宴会，舞会，晚餐，婚礼等等各种邀请信件，形式上大体分为两种：一种为正规格式亦称为请柬，一种为非正式格式，即一般的邀请信。虽然一般邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但是要求叙事一定要清楚、明白。
（2）常用句型
①写作目的：发出邀请
It
gives
me
the
greatest
pleasure
to
invite
you
to
……
It’s
my
pleasure/a
great
honor
for
me
to
invite
you
to…
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to…
I’d
like
to
invite
you
to…
②说明事由及活动地点和时间：
Will
you
and
Mrs.
Smith
give
the
pleasure
of
dining
with
us
at
the
Beijing
Hotel
on
Sunday,
October
10th,
at
eight
o’clock?
There
will
be
a
dinner
party
to
be
held
at
the
Beijing
Hotel
on
Sunday,
October
10th,
at
eight
o’clock.
Will
you
and
Mrs.
Smith
come
and
join
us?
I
hope
that
you
have
no
previous
engagement
and
can
join
us
for
the
English
Evening
at
7:00
p.m.
on
Feb.
1st.
③表示期待和感谢：
I
do
hope
that
you
will
be
able
to
come.
We
should
be
very
pleased
if
you
could
honor
us
with
your
company.
We
should
be
very
grateful
if
you
could
….
I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
accept
my
invitation.
4.
求助信：
（1）写作结构指导
主要涉及学生学习或生活上的各种问题或困惑，写求助信应注意清楚描述所遇到的困难，表达清楚所希望得到的帮助，语言得体，语气诚恳礼貌。
（2）常用句型
①写作目的：求助
I’m
writing
to
ask
for/get
some
help.
I’m
writing
to
ask
whether
you
can
give
me
help.
I’m
sorry
that
I
have
to
ask
you
to
do
me
a
favor,
with
the
hope
that
you
will
be
kind
to
help
me.
Sorry
to
bother
you
but
I
really
get
some
problems
recently.
I’m
writing?this
letter
to
ask
you
to
do
me
a
favor.
②描述困难
But
I
have
met
some
difficulties
with/in
……
But
unfortunately,
I’m
encountering
difficulty
in…
Faced
with/Facing
so
much
difficulty,
I
have
to
ask
you
for
some
help.
I
face
the
choice
between…and…
It’s
really
hard
for
me
to
decide/deal
with
…
I
need
your
help
because
……
③表达希望得到的帮助
I
wonder
if
you
can
help
me
with
these
difficulties.
I
really
appreciate
it
if
you
could
help
me.
I
believe
I
will
benefit
a
lot
from
your
valuable
and
timely
advice.
I
am
sure
with
your
help
I
can
make
great
progress.
Can
you
manage
to
give
me
some
constructive
guidance?
④列举困难：first,
besides,
also,
what’s
more,
at
the
same
time,
in
the
meanwhile,
in
addition,...
⑤请求系列帮助：so,
thus,
however,
but,
in
order
that,
so
that
…
⑥情感词汇：sorry,
bother,
beg,
would
you
like….
unfortunately,
unluckily,
especially,
sincerely,
badly,
hopefully
5.
咨询信：
常用句型：
①写信目的
I
am
a?high
school
student
and
planning
to
study
in
your
university
this
summer.
I
am
a
Chinese
student
who
wishes
to
study
at
your
university.
I’m
writing
to
ask
if
…
②介绍背景&询问详情
I
am
writing
at
the
suggestion
of
a
friend
who
graduated
from
your
university
last
year
and
has
warmly
recommended
it
to
me.
I
will
have
graduated
from
high
school
by
the
end
of
this
term?and
wish
to
continue
my
study
at
your
university.
My
plan
is
to
start
my
course
from
the
next
term,
and
I
would
be
grateful
if
it’s
so
kind
of
you
to
give
me
some
essential
information.
Could
you
please
tell
me
something
about
your
…?
Would
you
please
send
me
an
application
form
and
other
materials
necessary
for
my
application?
Would
you
please
send
me
all
the
information
and
the
forms
as
soon
as
possible?
Thank
you
very
much.
I
would
be
much
obliged
to
you
if
you
let
me
know
the
procedures
I
have
to
go
through.
③表示谢意，期盼回复
Sorry
to
bother
you,
your
kind
help
would
be
greatly
appreciated.
I
will
appreciate
it
very
much
if
you
can
give
me
a
reply.
6.
建议信：
常用句型：
①写信目的
I
have
received
your
letter
saying
that
you
plan
to
have
a
visit
to
China
for
ten
days
next
month.
I
recommend
that……
I
am
writing
to
you
to
present
what
I
think
on
the
further
improvement
of
our
hotel
so
as
to
establish
a
website
of
our
own
to
attract
more
clients.
I'm?sorry?(that)?you?are?having?trouble/difficulty/problems?in?making?friends.??
I?know?you?are?now?having?trouble?communicating?with?others,?and?you?may?often?feel?lonely.??
I'm?glad?to?receive?your?letter?asking?for?my?advice?on?...??
However,?the?situation?is?easy?to?change?if?you?take?my?advice.???
Here?are?some?tips?to?help?you./Here?are?a?few?suggestions.??
I?think?you?can?make?it?if?you?follow?the?advice?below.?
②提出建议
I’d
like
to
suggest
that
……
May
I
suggest
that……
In
my
opinion
……
I
would
like
to
make
a
recommendation
that
…
I
am
writing
to
advise
you
of
……
If
I
were
you,
I
would
……
First(ly),?why?not?...??If?you?do?this,?...?????
Secondly,?you?should/can?...Then/That?way,?...??
Thirdly,?it?would?be?a?good?idea?if?...?By?doing?this,?...???
Last?but?not?least?...?
③希望采纳建议，并表示谢意
Thank
you
for
your
attention.
Please
take
good
consideration
of
my
advice.
Thanks.
I?hope?you?will?find?these?ideas?useful.??
I?hope?what's?mentioned?above?might?be?helpful?...??
I?believe?that?if?you?follow?my?advice,?you'll?get?along?well?with?your?classmates.??????
I?believe,?with?your?determination,?you?can?manage?to?overcome?these?difficulties.??
7.
感谢信：
（1）写作结构指导
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件主要写明感谢他人的理由，要感情真挚，措辞得体。
（2）常用词汇:
v.
thank,
appreciate;
owe?
欠债,
感激
n.
thanks,
gratitude,
appreciation;
adj.
thankful,
grateful,
appreciative,?
appreciate
one’s
doing
…
be
grateful/thankful
to
sb.
for
…
convey/express/extend
my
thanks/gratitude/appreciation
for
…
owe
sb.
a
lot
for
…
thank
sb.
for
…
范文赏析1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自
China
Daily
21
Century）.以李明的名义给该同学回信。
Dear
Editor，
I
am
a
new
student
at
Haining
Hongda
Senior
High
School.
My
home
is
far
from
Haining,
so
I
must
live
at
school.
This
is
the
first
time
for
me
to
get
away
from
my
parents.
I
feel
very
sad.
When
I
left
home,
I
couldn’t
help
tearing
myself
away
from
them.
I
do
not
want
to
be
alone
at
school,
and
I
am
a
shy
girl.
I
have
been
crying
in
bed
at
night
these
days.
I
want
to
stay
at
home
forever.
I
miss
my
parents
very
much.
Could
you
tell
me
what
to
do
?
Your
early
reply
is
expected.
Regards,
Amy
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
Dear
Amy，
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I
am
so
glad
to
have
a
talk
about
your
present
situation
with
you.
People
often
miss
their
parents
the
first
time
they
leave
home.
Most
people
do
have
to
leave
home
for
higher
education
or
employment.
You
cannot
live
with
your
parents
forever.
I
think
you
should
realize
that
present
separation
will
help
your
academic
development
and
your
improvement
of
personal
ability.
You
need
to
make
friends
on
your
school
campus,
sharing
ideas
with
your
classmates
who
are
physically
closest
to
you
now.
Maybe
you
will
still
miss
your
parents,
but
your
new
friends
will
bring
you
happiness
and
joy
to
your
new
life.
Also
I
suggest
you
should
enjoy
yourself
by
taking
an
active
part
in
different
kinds
of
activities
in
school.
You
will
get
much
pleasure
from
it.
Wish
you
happy
every
day.
Faithfully
yours，
Li
Ming
范文赏析2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假如你是明启中学（
Ming
Qi
Middle
School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。
启事
国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。
有意者请来信告知：
1）
你个人的基本情况；
2）
你对申请项目的基本设想；
3）
项目经费的使用计划。
联系方式:
2011hope@icf.org
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
Word
came
that
the
International
Children
Funds
Association
intended
to
aid
middle
school
students
financially
in
launching
programs
designed
to
help
children
in
poor
areas.
And
I
am
writing
to
you
to
apply
for
one,
hoping
that
the
fund
as
much
as
2000
yuan
can
realize
my
wish
to
help
these
children.
As
a
normal
student
of
MingQi
Middle
School,
I,
Li
Ming,
have
been
long
cherishing
a
dream
that
every
single
child
in
poverty
can
have
free
access
to
knowledge,
thus
devoting
themselves
to
society
to
make
it
more
harmonious
in
turn.
Consequently,
if
my
application
can
be
luckily
agreed
to,
I
will
spare
no
effort
to
build
a
library
for
those
children
as
my
program.
To
be
more
specific,
the
fund
will
be
divided
into
three
parts.
First
of
all,
800
yuan
of
it
will
be
spent
on
buying
books
which
may
be
mainly
second-hand,
in
order
to
ensure
the
quantity.
Also,
another
400
yuan
will
be
intended
to
carry
out
advertisements
that
call
on
the
people
with
a
sense
of
responsibility
in
society
to
donate
textbooks
and
so
forth.
What’s
more,
the
remaining
800
yuan,
according
to
my
design,
shall
be
given
to
those
children,
entitling
them
the
right
to
buy
their
favorite
books
that
are
beyond
what
is
mentioned
above.
As
you
can
see
from
what
is
talked
about
above,
my
plan
may
still
leave
something
to
be
desired,
but
as
far
as
my
strong
wish
to
help
those
children
is
concerned,
I
genuinely
hope
you
and
your
association
can
grant
me
the
opportunity
to
turn
it
into
reality.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming
实战演练1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你是李华，你的表弟张强被一所寄宿制高中（boarding
high
school）录取了，写一份信祝贺他。信的内容需包括：
对表弟进入高中表示祝贺
介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同
对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。
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实战演练2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1.
你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2.
你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
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1假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter非常关心你的备考情况及你的高考后的安排，因此，他来信向你询问相关的情况。请你据此给
Peter写封回信。写一封邮件介绍有关情况。
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目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象大使”(image
ambassador
on
campus)活动。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐，并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。(信中请勿出现具体校名和姓名)
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某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defence）、护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么
为什么想学这些内容
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