中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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精研提纲材料，轻松驾驭提纲作文
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一、题型指导
提纲作文是英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、邮件、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。
1．提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个不能遗漏。
2．思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。
提纲作文的写作步骤
一般分为：审题，明确文体形式；构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文。注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。
二、提纲作文高分策略
要想在提纲式作文上拿高分，不妨采用以下三种策略。
全面审题，确定层次
（1）．审主题：要认真分析，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行写作。
（2）．审内容：审查要点，做到要点全面，避免丢三落四、要点不全，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝。
（3）．审层次：最好是三段式成文，忌想到什么写什么，缺乏层次与条理。
把握“三性”，提升档次
“三性”即文章的逻辑性、可读性和连贯性。首先考虑文章的逻辑性。弄清先写什么，后写什么。其次考虑文章的可读性。要求使用准确、丰富的词汇，还要注意地道而富于变化的句型的使用。一是注意简单句、并列句以及复合句的交叉使用，以增强文章的可读性；二是注意使用高级框架结构的句子，使文章的结构错落有致。再次考虑文章的连贯性。注意使用恰当的关联词、过渡句等，使文章连贯通顺，让前后表达浑然一体。
借鉴范文，多加仿练
英语写作离不开好的模板。同学们只要牢记模板，加以模仿，就可事半功倍。下面为大家提供一个提纲式作文的写作模板，希望同学们可以借鉴学习。
范文赏析：
例1：学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：
1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，就学校英语报改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报事宜发表自己的观点。写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
【写作要点】
1．表示对客人的欢迎；
2．介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）
3．表达对客人的祝愿；
【重要短语】
reform
sth（代表），be
replaced
by（被代替），share
sth
with
sb（与某人分享某物），needless
to
say
（更不用说），according
to
（根据），have
positive
effects
on（对…有影响），be
of
great
significance（非常有意义），loss
of
（损失），keep
fit（保持健康），contributes
to（促成），broaden
one's
horizons（拓宽某人的视野），in
turn
（反过来又），be
beneficial
to
（对…有益）．
【高分句型一】
1．①Compared
to
the
entertainment,
I
hold
the
view
②that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important．
①此处是过去分词作状语，主句为"I
hold
the
view
that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important"，主句的主语为"I"与所给动词存在逻辑上的被动关系．
②此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"引导的同位语从句解释说明"view"的具体内容．
【高分句型二】
2．The
main
factor
is
that
it
is
of
great
significance
to
keep
healthy
while
loss
of
health
means
kissing
goodbye
to
life．
此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"The
main
factor"，谓语动词为"is"．
【高分句型三】
3．the
progress
in
acquiring
cultures
contributes
to
broadening
one's
horizons，which
in
turn
is
beneficial
to
one's
study
and
the
establishment
of
philosophy
of
life．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句内容。
【高分句型四】
4．Here
I
am
in
the
hope
that
my
advice
will
add
a
brilliant
touch
to
the
improved
version
of
our
school
English
Post．此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，连接词"that"解释说明名词"hope"的具体内容．
【参考范文】
Dear
Editor，
I've
learned
that
our
English
Post
is
being
reformed
and
one
of
the
three
columns
is
to
be
replaced
by
a
new
one．I'm
writing
this
e﹣mail
to
share
with
you
my
opinions．Needless
to
say，the
columns
will
definitely
be
designed
according
to
students'interest
and
have
positive
effects
on
their
study
and
life．（写信的目的）
Compared
to
the
entertainment，I
hold
the
view
that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important．【高分句型一】The
main
factor
is
that
it
is
of
great
significance
to
keep
healthy
while
loss
of
health
means
kissing
goodbye
to
life．【高分句型二】Consequently，more
knowledge
of
how
to
keep
fit
can
improve
the
quality
of
life．In
addition，the
progress
in
acquiring
cultures
contributes
to
broadening
one's
horizons，which
in
turn
is
beneficial
to
one's
study
and
the
establishment
of
philosophy
of
life．【高分句型三】（建议去除的栏目及去除的理由）
Furthermore，the
career
planning
should
be
taken
into
account
in
the
school
English
Post．On
the
one
hand，it
covers
one's
career
development
a
great
deal．On
the
other
hand，it
makes
a
great
difference
to
one's
career
success
in
the
future．（建议增加的栏目及去除的理由）
What
has
been
mentioned
above
is
my
personal
ideas．Here
I
am
in
the
hope
that
my
advice
will
add
a
brilliant
touch
to
the
improved
version
of
our
school
English
Post．【高分句型四】（希望）
Yours
sincerely,
Cheng
Fei
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
例2：你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高二学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：
结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；
就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件，就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．
【写作要点】
结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由；
就复习迎考提出主要建议。写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。重要短语：invite
sb
to
do
（邀请某人做某事），prepare
for
（为…作准备），be
able
to
do（能够做某事），be
similar
to
（与…相似），depend
on
（取决于，依赖），be
of
no
use
（没有用处），When
it
comes
to…（当谈到，涉及到），be
poor
at
（在…薄弱），be
accompanied
with（带有，兼有），capture
all
the
details（掌握所有细节），achieve
a
good
score（取得好成绩）．
【高分句型】
1．Hearing
that
you're
wondering
whether
you
should
invite
a
tutor
to
help
you
prepare
for
the
coming
final
examination，I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact'No'．
这里是由现在分词hearing作状语，主句为I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact'No'，主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．A
tutor
costs
high，usually
150
yuan
or
more
per
hour，which
you
may
not
be
able
to
afford．
这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作宾语，指代前面的名词150
yuan
or
more
per
hour．
3．I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
②that
of
school's，①which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials，③so
it's
absolutely
no
use
if
you
listen
to
the
teachers
with
full
attention
in
the
school
and
review
what
is
on
your
notebook
carefully
after
class．
①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词the
information，that=the+名词．
③这里是由连词so引导的句子，与前面的句子I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
that
of
school's，which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials构成因果关系．
【参考范文】
Hearing
that
you're
wondering
whether
you
should
invite
a
tutor
to
help
you
prepare
for
thecoming
final
examination，I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact
'No'．【高分句型】（表达观点）
A
tutor
costs
high,
usually
150
yuan
or
more
per
hour，which
you
may
not
be
able
to
afford．【高分句型】Besides,
having
studied
that
detailed
information
of
tutor
classes
from
my
classmates,
I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
that
of
school's，which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials,
so
it's
absolutely
no
use
if
you
listen
to
the
teachers
with
full
attention
in
the
school
and
review
what
is
on
your
notebook
carefully
after
class．【高分句型】What's
more，a
tutor
may
make
you
depend
fully
on
him
and
lose
your
self﹣motivation
on
study，which
isexactly
the
truth
of
study．【高分句型】Without
it,
you
may
never
learn
better．And
that's
why
I
say
there's
no
need
for
you
to
invite
a
home
tutor．（理由）
When
it
comes
to
preparing
for
the
exam，I'd
like
to
give
you
two
suggestions．First，review
the
points
which
you're
poor
at．You
will
achieve
twice
the
result
with
half
the
effort
if
reviewing
the
notes
accompanied
with
several
particular
exercises．Second，check
all
the
notes
and
make
sure
that
you've
captured
all
the
details．【高分句型】（建议）
Try
hard
and
I
believe
you
can
achieve
a
good
score
in
the
exam．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
实战演练
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
参考范文：
Dear
LiHong,
Having
heard
that
you
will
participate
in
an
overseas
communication
activity
in
Britain
which
will
last
two
months,
I’m
now
writing
to
extend
a
helping
hand,
hoping
that
my
suggestions
that
you
should
choose
working
as
a
volunteer
thirty
hours
every
month
for
the
local
community
nursing
home
to
gain
an
opportunity
to
stay
in
it
for
free
may
be
beneficial
to
you
to
some
extent.
There
are
three
main
reasons
accounting
for
my
proposal.
First
and
foremost,
only
by
working
as
a
volunteer
can
you
attain
a
free
stay.
Apparently,
in
contrast
with
the
accommodation
arranged
by
the
host,
you
can
save
a
substantial
amount
of
money.
In
addition,
staying
at
a
community
nursing
home,
not
only
can
you
be
exposed
more
to
real
life
in
society
and
enhance
your
social
experiences,
thus
helping
you
to
get
more
mature,
but
your
arrival
will
add
colors
to
the
atmosphere
and
reduce
the
burdens
there
as
well.
Last
but
not
least,
there
is
no
denying
that
the
interaction
with
the
elderly
can
polish
up
your
socializing
skills
as
well
as
raise
your
awareness
to
cooperate
with
strangers,
which
will
contribute
to
your
comprehensive
and
coordinated
development.
As
an
old
saying
goes,
‘We
can
gain
both
things
at
the
same
time.’
So
why
not
choose
it?
I
genuinely
hope
that
you
will
take
my
suggestions
into
consideration.
Best
wishes
that
you
will
have
a
good
time
there.
It
is
a
golden
chance
for
you
in
summer
vacation.
In
short,
Enjoy
yourself.
Yours
sincerely,
WangLei
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group
dancing
competition），班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：
你是否会参加比赛。
你做出该决定的具体理由
参考范文1
A
group
dancing
competition
will
be
held
in
our
school
and
the
monitor
calls
on
everybody
to
take
an
active
part
in
it.
While
most
of
my
classmates
are
still
hesitating
whether
to
participate,
I
have
said
yes
to
our
monitor
with
great
pleasure.
Generally
speaking,
there
are
two
reasons
for
my
decision.
First,
it
is
a
good
opportunity
for
me
to
relax
myself,
which
will
enable
me
to
study
more
efficiently.
As
the
saying
says,
“All
work
and
no
play
makes
Jack
a
dull
boy”,
which
clearly
shows
us
the
importance
of
relaxation.
Besides,
I
think
I
am
a
good
dancer
after
learning
dance
for
more
than
five
years.
Participating
in
the
contest
will
be
a
golden
chance
for
me
to
show
my
dancing
skills
and
make
some
contributions
to
the
class.
For
the
two
reasons
mentioned
above,
it
is
no
surprise
that
I
have
such
a
strong
enthusiasm
on
the
group
dancing
competition.
参考范文2
Today
the
monitor
calls
on
everybody
to
take
an
active
part
in
the
group
dancing
competition
which
will
be
held
in
a
couple
of
days
in
our
school.
But
after
some
careful
consideration,
I
have
decided
not
to
participate.
There
are
a
number
of
reasons
for
my
decision.
First
and
foremost,
as
the
College
Entrance
Exam
is
just
around
the
corner,
study
is
the
top
priority
for
me.
The
idea
of
participating
in
the
group
dancing
competition
has
to
be
given
up
because
it
might
take
me
too
much
time.
What’s
more,
without
any
experience
of
dancing,
I
don’t
think
I
can
be
a
good
dancing
partner.
I
am
afraid
my
poor
dancing
skills
will
probably
spoil
the
performance
of
the
whole
class.
In
this
case,
it’s
better
for
me
to
be
a
spectator
cheering
for
my
classmates.
For
these
reasons,
it
seems
more
appropriate
for
me
to
watch
the
competition
than
to
dance
myself.
假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；组织一次班级新年派对。作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。你的写作中必须包括：
在三项方案中选择其一；
对该方案提出建议；
谈谈你提出建议的理由．
参考范文
Recently,
what
has
become
a
heated
topic
of
our
class
is
that
an
important
decision
about
the
coming
winter
festival
event
must
be
made
among
three
different
choices．After
a
careful
consideration，the
proposal
to
hold
a
New
Year
Party
earns
my
favor．
Several
suggestions
about
the
party
are
listed
as
follows．Firstly，a
clear
and
absorbing
theme
must
be
settled．Only
with
a
specific
theme，such
as
Welcoming
the
New
Ourselves
or
Changes
in
the
New
Year，can
we
eventually
work
out
the
suitable
activities
and
decorations．Besides,
a
proper
schedule
and
a
name
list
are
necessary．In
other
words，when
to
hold
the
party
and
who
will
attend
it
are
sure
to
make
a
big
difference
in
its
evolving
purpose
and，more
importantly,
the
success．Last
but
not
least，about
the
expense，any
amount
of
money
we
spend
shall
be
listed，through
which
we
can
better
control
the
whole
process
and
make
full
use
of
the
resources
we
have．
From
what
has
been
mentioned
above，if
all
these
suggestions
can
be
carried
out
strictly，it
is
no
surprise
that
our
NewYear
Party
will
leave
a
deep
impression
on
everyone． ．
3.高三学生在高考结束后将迎来很长的一个暑假，很多学生已在为这个假期制定计划。假设你是林敏，你的网友王华今年也将高中毕业，前几天他通过邮件跟你讲述了他的三个暑假计划，分别是：①参加一些学习班；②做一份兼职工作；③外出旅游。但由于时间安排的问题，只能做其中的两件事情，至于如何选择，王华犹豫不决。请你给王华回一封电子邮件，内容需包括：
比较分析王华的三个计划；
谈谈你的建议，并陈述理由。
（注：邮件中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。）
参考范文
Dear
Tom，
I
am
so
glad
to
receive
your
email.
I
knew
you
had
made
three
plans
for
the
holiday,
but
you
only
have
time
to
choose
two
from
them.
Now
I
am
writing
to
give
you
some
suggestions.
You
plan
to
take
a
course
after
the
exam
and
you
want
to
find
a
part-time
job.
More
importantly,
you
would
like
to
travel
to
some
places
of
interest.
I
think
it
is
a
good
idea
to
take
a
course,
because
you
can
learn
more
knowledge
through
it.
What’s
more,
I
hope
you
can
pay
a
visit
to
some
scenic
spots.
The
reason
is
that
you
can
broaden
your
horizon
and
relax
yourself
after
the
tough
exam.
As
for
finding
a
part-time
job,
it
is
not
necessary,
for
you
can
have
more
chances
to
take
a
job.
Are
you
satisfied
with
it?
I
wish
you
could
agree
with
my
suggestions.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲式作文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I
wish
you
could
agree
with
my
suggestions.是虚拟语气。The
reason
is
that
you
can
broaden
your
horizon
and
relax
yourself
after
the
tough
exam.这句话是表语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语
plan
to,
would
like
to
do
,be
satisfied
with,
as
for等。插入语what’s
more，以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
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一、题型指导
提纲作文是英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、邮件、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。
1．提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个不能遗漏。
2．思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。
提纲作文的写作步骤
一般分为：审题，明确文体形式；构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文。注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。
二、提纲作文高分策略
要想在提纲式作文上拿高分，不妨采用以下三种策略。
全面审题，确定层次
（1）．审主题：要认真分析，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行写作。
（2）．审内容：审查要点，做到要点全面，避免丢三落四、要点不全，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝。
（3）．审层次：最好是三段式成文，忌想到什么写什么，缺乏层次与条理。
把握“三性”，提升档次
“三性”即文章的逻辑性、可读性和连贯性。首先考虑文章的逻辑性。弄清先写什么，后写什么。其次考虑文章的可读性。要求使用准确、丰富的词汇，还要注意地道而富于变化的句型的使用。一是注意简单句、并列句以及复合句的交叉使用，以增强文章的可读性；二是注意使用高级框架结构的句子，使文章的结构错落有致。再次考虑文章的连贯性。注意使用恰当的关联词、过渡句等，使文章连贯通顺，让前后表达浑然一体。
借鉴范文，多加仿练
英语写作离不开好的模板。同学们只要牢记模板，加以模仿，就可事半功倍。下面为大家提供一个提纲式作文的写作模板，希望同学们可以借鉴学习。
范文赏析：
例1：学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：
1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，就学校英语报改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报事宜发表自己的观点。写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
【写作要点】
1．表示对客人的欢迎；
2．介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）
3．表达对客人的祝愿；
【重要短语】
reform
sth（代表），be
replaced
by（被代替），share
sth
with
sb（与某人分享某物），needless
to
say
（更不用说），according
to
（根据），have
positive
effects
on（对…有影响），be
of
great
significance（非常有意义），loss
of
（损失），keep
fit（保持健康），contributes
to（促成），broaden
one's
horizons（拓宽某人的视野），in
turn
（反过来又），be
beneficial
to
（对…有益）．
【高分句型一】
1．①Compared
to
the
entertainment,
I
hold
the
view
②that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important．
①此处是过去分词作状语，主句为"I
hold
the
view
that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important"，主句的主语为"I"与所给动词存在逻辑上的被动关系．
②此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"引导的同位语从句解释说明"view"的具体内容．
【高分句型二】
2．The
main
factor
is
that
it
is
of
great
significance
to
keep
healthy
while
loss
of
health
means
kissing
goodbye
to
life．
此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"The
main
factor"，谓语动词为"is"．
【高分句型三】
3．the
progress
in
acquiring
cultures
contributes
to
broadening
one's
horizons，which
in
turn
is
beneficial
to
one's
study
and
the
establishment
of
philosophy
of
life．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句内容。
【高分句型四】
4．Here
I
am
in
the
hope
that
my
advice
will
add
a
brilliant
touch
to
the
improved
version
of
our
school
English
Post．此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，连接词"that"解释说明名词"hope"的具体内容．
【参考范文】
Dear
Editor，
I've
learned
that
our
English
Post
is
being
reformed
and
one
of
the
three
columns
is
to
be
replaced
by
a
new
one．I'm
writing
this
e﹣mail
to
share
with
you
my
opinions．Needless
to
say，the
columns
will
definitely
be
designed
according
to
students'interest
and
have
positive
effects
on
their
study
and
life．（写信的目的）
Compared
to
the
entertainment，I
hold
the
view
that
the
value
of
the
columns
concerning
health
and
culture
is
more
important．【高分句型一】The
main
factor
is
that
it
is
of
great
significance
to
keep
healthy
while
loss
of
health
means
kissing
goodbye
to
life．【高分句型二】Consequently，more
knowledge
of
how
to
keep
fit
can
improve
the
quality
of
life．In
addition，the
progress
in
acquiring
cultures
contributes
to
broadening
one's
horizons，which
in
turn
is
beneficial
to
one's
study
and
the
establishment
of
philosophy
of
life．【高分句型三】（建议去除的栏目及去除的理由）
Furthermore，the
career
planning
should
be
taken
into
account
in
the
school
English
Post．On
the
one
hand，it
covers
one's
career
development
a
great
deal．On
the
other
hand，it
makes
a
great
difference
to
one's
career
success
in
the
future．（建议增加的栏目及去除的理由）
What
has
been
mentioned
above
is
my
personal
ideas．Here
I
am
in
the
hope
that
my
advice
will
add
a
brilliant
touch
to
the
improved
version
of
our
school
English
Post．【高分句型四】（希望）
Yours
sincerely,
Cheng
Fei
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
例2：你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高二学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：
结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；
就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件，就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．
【写作要点】
结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由；
就复习迎考提出主要建议。写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。重要短语：invite
sb
to
do
（邀请某人做某事），prepare
for
（为…作准备），be
able
to
do（能够做某事），be
similar
to
（与…相似），depend
on
（取决于，依赖），be
of
no
use
（没有用处），When
it
comes
to…（当谈到，涉及到），be
poor
at
（在…薄弱），be
accompanied
with（带有，兼有），capture
all
the
details（掌握所有细节），achieve
a
good
score（取得好成绩）．
【高分句型】
1．Hearing
that
you're
wondering
whether
you
should
invite
a
tutor
to
help
you
prepare
for
the
coming
final
examination，I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact'No'．
这里是由现在分词hearing作状语，主句为I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact'No'，主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．A
tutor
costs
high，usually
150
yuan
or
more
per
hour，which
you
may
not
be
able
to
afford．
这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作宾语，指代前面的名词150
yuan
or
more
per
hour．
3．I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
②that
of
school's，①which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials，③so
it's
absolutely
no
use
if
you
listen
to
the
teachers
with
full
attention
in
the
school
and
review
what
is
on
your
notebook
carefully
after
class．
①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词the
information，that=the+名词．
③这里是由连词so引导的句子，与前面的句子I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
that
of
school's，which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials构成因果关系．
【参考范文】
Hearing
that
you're
wondering
whether
you
should
invite
a
tutor
to
help
you
prepare
for
thecoming
final
examination，I'm
shocked
and
I'll
give
you
an
exact
'No'．【高分句型】（表达观点）
A
tutor
costs
high,
usually
150
yuan
or
more
per
hour，which
you
may
not
be
able
to
afford．【高分句型】Besides,
having
studied
that
detailed
information
of
tutor
classes
from
my
classmates,
I
find
that
most
of
the
information
is
similar
to
that
of
school's，which
is
even
with
little
or
no
extended
materials,
so
it's
absolutely
no
use
if
you
listen
to
the
teachers
with
full
attention
in
the
school
and
review
what
is
on
your
notebook
carefully
after
class．【高分句型】What's
more，a
tutor
may
make
you
depend
fully
on
him
and
lose
your
self﹣motivation
on
study，which
isexactly
the
truth
of
study．【高分句型】Without
it,
you
may
never
learn
better．And
that's
why
I
say
there's
no
need
for
you
to
invite
a
home
tutor．（理由）
When
it
comes
to
preparing
for
the
exam，I'd
like
to
give
you
two
suggestions．First，review
the
points
which
you're
poor
at．You
will
achieve
twice
the
result
with
half
the
effort
if
reviewing
the
notes
accompanied
with
several
particular
exercises．Second，check
all
the
notes
and
make
sure
that
you've
captured
all
the
details．【高分句型】（建议）
Try
hard
and
I
believe
you
can
achieve
a
good
score
in
the
exam．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
实战演练
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
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你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group
dancing
competition），班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：
你是否会参加比赛。
你做出该决定的具体理由
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假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；组织一次班级新年派对。作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。你的写作中必须包括：
在三项方案中选择其一；
对该方案提出建议；
谈谈你提出建议的理由．
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3.高三学生在高考结束后将迎来很长的一个暑假，很多学生已在为这个假期制定计划。假设你是林敏，你的网友王华今年也将高中毕业，前几天他通过邮件跟你讲述了他的三个暑假计划，分别是：①参加一些学习班；②做一份兼职工作；③外出旅游。但由于时间安排的问题，只能做其中的两件事情，至于如何选择，王华犹豫不决。请你给王华回一封电子邮件，内容需包括：
比较分析王华的三个计划；
谈谈你的建议，并陈述理由。
（注：邮件中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。）
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