中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
(
解读图表信息，稳固构建图表作文
)
一、题型指导
图表类书面表达常以曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式、数据表格形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，主要是一些关于情况调查、生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛，因此，读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。由于这类试题文字少、信息简洁，如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地记叙出来，进行清单式的罗列，就会索然乏味，并且达不到字数要求。
二、提纲作文高分策略
对于这类形式的书面表达，首先要根据图表前的文字说明，弄清楚图表的性质、内容、规律，并做到如下几点：
细读图表，抓住特征
图表中的数据信息往往较多，首先要读懂其中的符号和数字所代表的意思。然后，从图表的整体着手，认真分析各项数据，抓住其主要特征，弄懂它们所揭示的规律。经常使用的词汇有：table，chart，figure，graph，describe，tell，show，represent等。
认真审读，确定主题
认真审读试题所提供的数据信息，结合文字提示，确定短文的主题。短文的主题往往隐含在图表中，需要考生从图表数据中概括出事情或事件的规律和特征，然后归纳出主题。有时，试题给出了短文的题目，也就等于为考生点明了主题。
巧用数据，突出主题
引用数据说明基本趋势，比较数据揭示基本特征。由于图表中的数据信息较多，写作时要巧妙地引用一些数据来说明主题，不要作任何发挥。表达时，既要包含所有要点，但又不能面面俱到。经常使用的词汇有：rise，drop，reduce，increase，decrease，fall，while，but，on
the
contrary，however，compare...to/with...，in
contrast
to，as...as，the
same
as，similar
to，different
from，difference
between，among，more
than，less
than等。
词句多变，表达灵活
由于图表数据比较单调，很容易使人选用相同的词语和句式进行表达，结果文章显得很乏味。因此，写作时要尽量避免重复使用同一词语或句型，选择一些异曲同工的词语和句式来表达。
适当发挥，表明观点
图表类书面表达有时要求考生在对数据进行分析、对比后，简单地谈谈自己的看法或提出建议，这属于让考生自主发挥的部分，更是短文最精彩的部分。考生要在该部分陈述自己的看法，表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法或建议。表述观点时，可以引用人们普遍的观点，也可说出自己独到的见解。借题发挥时，不可偏离主题，只要把观点表述清楚即可，不必作更多的解释或说明。经常使用的词有：in
a
word，in
short,
generally
speaking,
It’s
clear
from
the
chart
that...,
we
can
draw
the
conclusion
that...,
we
can
learn/know...等。
范文赏析：
例1：假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因
【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论。时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主。
【写作要点】
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．
【重要的词汇及短语】
make
a
survey
做调查；hold
the
same
opinion
持相同的观点；according
to…根据…；approve
同意，认可；cause
起因，原因；figure
out
找出；lead
to
导致；subtle
细微的；conservative
保守的；accustom
to
习惯于；convey
传递（信息）；tendency
趋势；conceal
隐藏；the
current
education
system
常规的教育体系；bias
偏爱，偏见；excessively
过分地
【高分句型一】
There
seems
to
be①two
causes
as②we
tried
to
figure
out
what③led
to
this
subtle
difference．
there
seems
to
be
句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；
as
引导时间状语从句，表示伴随，主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；
what
引导宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
The
current
education
system
excessively
emphasizes
the
value
of
academic
performance，thus
forcing
children
to
extensively
believe
that
only
by
achieving
excellent
scores
can
they
make
their
parents
proud．
常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．
【高分句型三】
This
bias
unfairly
undermines
the
significance
of
talents
for
art
and
sports，which
easily
frustrates
children
and
renders
them
more
likely
to
underestimate
themselves．
这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．
【参考范文】
Recently，we
made
a
survey
about
whether
the
parents
agree
that
they
are
proud
of
their
children．The
result
shows
that
80%
of
parents
are
proud
of
their
children
while
only
60%
of
children
hold
the
same
opinion．According
to
the
survey，we
can
conclude
that
the
number
of
parents
who
approved
the
idea
is
20%
more
than
of
children．（描述调研数据）
There
seems
to
be
two
causes
as
we
tried
to
figure
out
what
led
to
this
subtle
difference．【高分句型一】First，conservative
Chinese
parents
are
never
accustomed
to
conveying
directly
how
much
they
are
proud
of
their
children．This
tendency
to
conceal
feelings
hardly
helps
children
develop
a
strong
sense
of
self﹣confidence．（原因一）Second，the
current
education
system
excessively
emphasizes
the
value
of
academic
performance，thus
forcing
children
to
extensively
believe
that
only
by
achieving
excellent
scores
can
they
make
their
parents
proud．【高分句型二】This
bias
unfairly
undermines
the
significance
of
talents
for
art
and
sports，which
easily
frustrates
children
and
renders
them
more
likely
to
underestimate
themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二）
Without
the
genuine
encouragement
from
parents
and
the
reversal
of
exam﹣oriented
educational
methods，a
kid
would
never
end
up
with
a
positive
grown﹣up．（结论）
【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．
例2：你们学校学生会最近组织了一次“有烦恼时向谁倾诉？”的调查活动。请根据以下的调查数据，用英语给校报写一篇新闻稿，反映调查结果。
倾诉对象
同学和朋友
老师和家长
没有
百分比
61%
22%
17%
理由
同龄人容易交流和理解
老师家长阅历丰富
不愿和别人说自己的事或难以与别人相处
有生活和教育经验
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Editor，
Recently
the
Student
Union
carried
out
a
survey，the
title
of
which
is
“To
whom
do
you
go
to
when
in
trouble？”
The
results
are
as
follows.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
sincerely，
The
Student
Union
【参考范文】
Dear
Editor，
Recently
the
Student
Union
carried
out
a
survey，the
title
of
which
is
“To
whom
do
you
go
to
when
in
trouble？”
The
results
are
as
follows.
61%
of
the
students
surveyed
go
to
friends
and
classmates
as
their
ideal
listeners
when
they
have
trouble①.The
primary
reason
lies
in
the
fact
that
they
have
a
better
understanding
of
each
other②
so
they
can
communicate
well
with
each
other③.Another
22%
choose
parents
and
teachers
to
talk
to
for
in
their
opinion，teachers
and
parents
are
rich
in
life
and
education
experience
and
they
can
offer
them
practical
advice
on
how
to
deal
with
the
trouble.However④,
17%
don’t
tell
their
trouble
to
anyone.For
one
thing⑤,
they
don’t
want
to
share
their
inner
thoughts
with
others.For
another
thing⑥,
they
find
it
hard
to
get
along
well
with
others⑦.
To
sum
up,
the
process
of
growing
may
usually
be
painful,
and
young
students
may
have
to
face
various
kinds
of
troubles.
As
long
as
they
take
optimistic
views
and
proper
methods,
those
troubles
will
no
longer
obstacles.
Just
open
your
heart
and
pick
up
your
courage.
Yours
sincerely，
The
Student
Union
【点评】
本文流畅通顺，逻辑性强，作者使用语言得体，句式多变，具体说：
1．使用了①状语从句，说明了遇到麻烦的情况；②同位语从句解释说明fact；③结果状语从句说明前因后果；
2．插入语④、⑤、⑥的使用增加了文章的逻辑性；
3．形式宾语⑦的使用使得语言得体，简练。
实战演练
请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
1.The
other
day，a
netizen
shared
a
photo
on
Sina
Weibo.It
was
about
an
old
lady
standing
in
front
of
a
car
that
was
on
a
bicycle
lane，and
insisting
that
it
leave
the
track.The
photo
drew
about
7，000
comments
on
the
social
media
platform.Despite
the
thumbs?up
given
to
the
old
lady，some
argued
that
attention
should
be
paid
to
our
heavy
road
traffic.
2.Some
riders
of
e?bikes
and
bicycles
come
and
go
in
all
directions，ignoring
traffic
lights
and
other
vehicles.Such
rude
riding
contributes
to
the
disorder
of
traffic.Thus
the
avoidable
road
accidents
become
unavoidable.
From
2005
to
2014，the
total
number
of
private
cars
in
China
rose
sharply
from
32
million
to
154
million.Currently，China
had
15%
of
the
world’s
total
vehicles.
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；
3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules
and
regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【参考范文】
The
traffic
issue
is
a
hard
nut
to
crack.It
not
only
affects
our
everyday
life,
but
may
also
threaten
people’s
lives.The
three
selections
presented
above
are
typical
examples.
Quite
a
few
things
give
rise
to
the
traffic
problem.In
spite
of
the
large?scale
construction
of
roads
and
highways,
there
is
still
much
room
for
improvement,
because
of
the
ever
increasing
number
of
cars
these
years.What’s
worse,
some
drivers,
cyclists
and
pedestrians
do
not
think
it
vital
to
obey
traffic
rules.
In
fact,
traffic
rules
are
part
of
the
rules
and
regulations
closely
related
to
public
order.Without
them,
people
could
not
enjoy
harmony
or
the
country
would
be
in
chaos.But
rules
alone
don’t
secure
an
orderly
society.It
is
the
people
who
obey
the
rules
that
matter.It
is
everybody’s
duty
to
observe
them
to
keep
our
society
in
order
and
going
on
the
right
track.
写作良方
1．认真审题
(1)审素材：概括其内容，提炼要点，确定短文时态、人称；(2)审图表，素材与图表结合表明导致交通问题的原因；(3)从两方面所得到的启示。
2．构思写作
文章可分成三段来写作：(1)概括素材内容，完成素材与图表的有机结合；(2)分析导致以上交通问题的原因；(3)得到的启示。
3．连句成篇
考生应该学会用适当的关联词，把整篇文章衔接起来，使其有序、合理、得体。
受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇调查报告。
1．调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种
2．调查范围
上海市10所中学
3．调查对象：高中生
4．调查人数：1
000
5．调查方式：访谈
6．调查结果：(见下图)选择各类英文文章人数的百分比
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．标题及首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Reading
Interests
of
Senior
Middle
School
Students
Recently
a
survey
has
been
done
to
find
out
the
reading
interests
of
senior
middle
school
students.
【参考范文】
Reading
Interests
of
Senior
Middle
School
Students
Recently
a
survey
has
been
done
to
find
out
the
reading
interests
of
senior
middle
school
students.In
this
survey，one
thousand
senior
middle
school
students
from
ten
schools
in
Shanghai
were
interviewed.They
were
asked
which
they
liked
reading
most
among
the
four
categories
of
English
articles：news,
stories,
popular
science
articles
and
articles
about
learning
methods.
The
survey
shows
that
more
than
half①
of
the
students
like
to
read
news
most.Twenty?six
percent
of
the
students
say
that
English
stories
are
their
favorite.Only②
seven
percent
of
the
students
are
most
interested
in
reading
articles
about
learning
methods.However③,
the
number
of
students
who
enjoy
reading
popular
science
articles④
doubles⑤
that
of
those
who
prefer
reading
articles
about
learning
methods.
亮点点评
短文条理清楚，层次分明。先是交代了此次调查的背景、对象、内容等，接着在第二段里，作者成功地把图表信息转换成了文字信息。作者没有按照图表顺序，机械地罗列数据而是用①more
than
half，⑤double等词语把53%,14%等数据巧妙地表达了出来。另外，像②Only，③However及④定语从句的使用让短文既流畅又简洁、紧凑。
近期，你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研，结果如图所示，请结合图表信息写一份调研报告，须包括以下内容：
（1）图表产生的背景和基本内容；
（2）就你个人而言，你会考虑哪些因素？
请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素，并说明原因。
【参考范文】
Some
senior
middle
school
graduates
have
different
opinions
on
how
to
choose
their
majors
and
universities.
About
35%
of
the
students
insist
that
the
choice
should
be
based
on
their
own
interest.
They
say
interest
is
the
way
leading
to
success.
They
think
it
a
miserable
thing
to
be
obliged
to
study
what
they
have
no
interest
in.
About
45%
of
the
students,
however,
consider
it
is
the
need
of
the
society
that
matters
a
lot,
for,
they
say,
it
will
help
them
find
the
job
they
like
best.
In
addition,
interest
can
be
developed
and
changed.
Interestingly,
there
are
about
20%
of
the
students
who
find
it
so
difficult
to
make
a
choice
that
they
prefer
to
follow
the
advice
offered
by
their
parents
or
teachers.
In
my
opinion,
interest
is
the
most
important
of
all.
Without
interest
you
can’t
study
the
subject
very
well
and
may
have
more
difficult
with
your
career.
以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例。
请简要描述该图，
选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。
【参考范文】
Chinese
senior
middle
school
graduates
have
different
opinions
on
how
to
choose
their
courses
and
universities，We
can
see
from
the
graph
that
about
35%
of
the
students
believe
the
choice
should
be
based
on
their
own
interest．More
students
（around
45%）,
however,
insist
that
main
consideration
should
be
given
to
the
needs
of
the
society．Interestingly,
there
are
about
20%
who
find
it
too
difficult
to
make
a
choice
and
would
rather
depend
on
their
parents
or
teachers
to
make
a
decision．Personally,
I
would
like
to
choose
my
courses
and
university
according
to
my
own
interest．The
reasons
can
be
listed
as
follows．
To
begin
with,
it
is
widely
acknowledged
that
interest
is
the
best
teacher．With
the
help
of
this
best
teacher,
my
four-
year
learning
experience
in
the
university
will
be
made
more
enjoyable
and
much
easier
as
well．While
on
the
other
hand,
it
is
a
miserable
thing
to
have
to
spend
most
of
your
time
studying
what
you
have
no
interest
in．Quite
apart
from
that,
interest
helps
to
arouse
your
curiosity,
stimulate
your
motivation
for
exploring
new
things,
thus
leading
to
creativity
and
even
a
new
invention,
which
might
be
beneficial
to
the
whole
world．
For
these
reasons,
/As
mentioned
above,
I
can
draw
a
safe
conclusion
that
there
is
nothing
that
will
make
my
college
life
more
fascinating
than
interest．I
have
every
reason
to
believe
that,
with
a
goal
in
my
mind,
along
with
the
interest
and
effort,
I
will
surely
achieve
great
success
in
the
coming
university
life．
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解读图表信息，稳固构建图表作文
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一、题型指导
图表类书面表达常以曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式、数据表格形式及平面图形式出现。这类题型具有文字少、信息简洁、要点分散等特征。图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，主要是一些关于情况调查、生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛，因此，读懂它并能用英语清晰地表述出来具有很强的现实意义。图表作文主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。由于这类试题文字少、信息简洁，如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地记叙出来，进行清单式的罗列，就会索然乏味，并且达不到字数要求。
二、提纲作文高分策略
对于这类形式的书面表达，首先要根据图表前的文字说明，弄清楚图表的性质、内容、规律，并做到如下几点：
细读图表，抓住特征
图表中的数据信息往往较多，首先要读懂其中的符号和数字所代表的意思。然后，从图表的整体着手，认真分析各项数据，抓住其主要特征，弄懂它们所揭示的规律。经常使用的词汇有：table，chart，figure，graph，describe，tell，show，represent等。
认真审读，确定主题
认真审读试题所提供的数据信息，结合文字提示，确定短文的主题。短文的主题往往隐含在图表中，需要考生从图表数据中概括出事情或事件的规律和特征，然后归纳出主题。有时，试题给出了短文的题目，也就等于为考生点明了主题。
巧用数据，突出主题
引用数据说明基本趋势，比较数据揭示基本特征。由于图表中的数据信息较多，写作时要巧妙地引用一些数据来说明主题，不要作任何发挥。表达时，既要包含所有要点，但又不能面面俱到。经常使用的词汇有：rise，drop，reduce，increase，decrease，fall，while，but，on
the
contrary，however，compare...to/with...，in
contrast
to，as...as，the
same
as，similar
to，different
from，difference
between，among，more
than，less
than等。
词句多变，表达灵活
由于图表数据比较单调，很容易使人选用相同的词语和句式进行表达，结果文章显得很乏味。因此，写作时要尽量避免重复使用同一词语或句型，选择一些异曲同工的词语和句式来表达。
适当发挥，表明观点
图表类书面表达有时要求考生在对数据进行分析、对比后，简单地谈谈自己的看法或提出建议，这属于让考生自主发挥的部分，更是短文最精彩的部分。考生要在该部分陈述自己的看法，表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法或建议。表述观点时，可以引用人们普遍的观点，也可说出自己独到的见解。借题发挥时，不可偏离主题，只要把观点表述清楚即可，不必作更多的解释或说明。经常使用的词有：in
a
word，in
short,
generally
speaking,
It’s
clear
from
the
chart
that...,
we
can
draw
the
conclusion
that...,
we
can
learn/know...等。
范文赏析：
例1：假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因
【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论。时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主。
【写作要点】
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．
【重要的词汇及短语】
make
a
survey
做调查；hold
the
same
opinion
持相同的观点；according
to…根据…；approve
同意，认可；cause
起因，原因；figure
out
找出；lead
to
导致；subtle
细微的；conservative
保守的；accustom
to
习惯于；convey
传递（信息）；tendency
趋势；conceal
隐藏；the
current
education
system
常规的教育体系；bias
偏爱，偏见；excessively
过分地
【高分句型一】
There
seems
to
be①two
causes
as②we
tried
to
figure
out
what③led
to
this
subtle
difference．
there
seems
to
be
句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；
as
引导时间状语从句，表示伴随，主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；
what
引导宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
The
current
education
system
excessively
emphasizes
the
value
of
academic
performance，thus
forcing
children
to
extensively
believe
that
only
by
achieving
excellent
scores
can
they
make
their
parents
proud．
常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．
【高分句型三】
This
bias
unfairly
undermines
the
significance
of
talents
for
art
and
sports，which
easily
frustrates
children
and
renders
them
more
likely
to
underestimate
themselves．
这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．
【参考范文】
Recently，we
made
a
survey
about
whether
the
parents
agree
that
they
are
proud
of
their
children．The
result
shows
that
80%
of
parents
are
proud
of
their
children
while
only
60%
of
children
hold
the
same
opinion．According
to
the
survey，we
can
conclude
that
the
number
of
parents
who
approved
the
idea
is
20%
more
than
of
children．（描述调研数据）
There
seems
to
be
two
causes
as
we
tried
to
figure
out
what
led
to
this
subtle
difference．【高分句型一】First，conservative
Chinese
parents
are
never
accustomed
to
conveying
directly
how
much
they
are
proud
of
their
children．This
tendency
to
conceal
feelings
hardly
helps
children
develop
a
strong
sense
of
self﹣confidence．（原因一）Second，the
current
education
system
excessively
emphasizes
the
value
of
academic
performance，thus
forcing
children
to
extensively
believe
that
only
by
achieving
excellent
scores
can
they
make
their
parents
proud．【高分句型二】This
bias
unfairly
undermines
the
significance
of
talents
for
art
and
sports，which
easily
frustrates
children
and
renders
them
more
likely
to
underestimate
themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二）
Without
the
genuine
encouragement
from
parents
and
the
reversal
of
exam﹣oriented
educational
methods，a
kid
would
never
end
up
with
a
positive
grown﹣up．（结论）
【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．
例2：你们学校学生会最近组织了一次“有烦恼时向谁倾诉？”的调查活动。请根据以下的调查数据，用英语给校报写一篇新闻稿，反映调查结果。
倾诉对象
同学和朋友
老师和家长
没有
百分比
61%
22%
17%
理由
同龄人容易交流和理解
老师家长阅历丰富
不愿和别人说自己的事或难以与别人相处
有生活和教育经验
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Editor，
Recently
the
Student
Union
carried
out
a
survey，the
title
of
which
is
“To
whom
do
you
go
to
when
in
trouble？”
The
results
are
as
follows.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
sincerely，
The
Student
Union
【参考范文】
Dear
Editor，
Recently
the
Student
Union
carried
out
a
survey，the
title
of
which
is
“To
whom
do
you
go
to
when
in
trouble？”
The
results
are
as
follows.
61%
of
the
students
surveyed
go
to
friends
and
classmates
as
their
ideal
listeners
when
they
have
trouble①.The
primary
reason
lies
in
the
fact
that
they
have
a
better
understanding
of
each
other②
so
they
can
communicate
well
with
each
other③.Another
22%
choose
parents
and
teachers
to
talk
to
for
in
their
opinion，teachers
and
parents
are
rich
in
life
and
education
experience
and
they
can
offer
them
practical
advice
on
how
to
deal
with
the
trouble.However④,
17%
don’t
tell
their
trouble
to
anyone.For
one
thing⑤,
they
don’t
want
to
share
their
inner
thoughts
with
others.For
another
thing⑥,
they
find
it
hard
to
get
along
well
with
others⑦.
To
sum
up,
the
process
of
growing
may
usually
be
painful,
and
young
students
may
have
to
face
various
kinds
of
troubles.
As
long
as
they
take
optimistic
views
and
proper
methods,
those
troubles
will
no
longer
obstacles.
Just
open
your
heart
and
pick
up
your
courage.
Yours
sincerely，
The
Student
Union
【点评】
本文流畅通顺，逻辑性强，作者使用语言得体，句式多变，具体说：
1．使用了①状语从句，说明了遇到麻烦的情况；②同位语从句解释说明fact；③结果状语从句说明前因后果；
2．插入语④、⑤、⑥的使用增加了文章的逻辑性；
3．形式宾语⑦的使用使得语言得体，简练。
实战演练
请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
1.The
other
day，a
netizen
shared
a
photo
on
Sina
Weibo.It
was
about
an
old
lady
standing
in
front
of
a
car
that
was
on
a
bicycle
lane，and
insisting
that
it
leave
the
track.The
photo
drew
about
7，000
comments
on
the
social
media
platform.Despite
the
thumbs?up
given
to
the
old
lady，some
argued
that
attention
should
be
paid
to
our
heavy
road
traffic.
2.Some
riders
of
e?bikes
and
bicycles
come
and
go
in
all
directions，ignoring
traffic
lights
and
other
vehicles.Such
rude
riding
contributes
to
the
disorder
of
traffic.Thus
the
avoidable
road
accidents
become
unavoidable.
From
2005
to
2014，the
total
number
of
private
cars
in
China
rose
sharply
from
32
million
to
154
million.Currently，China
had
15%
of
the
world’s
total
vehicles.
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；
3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules
and
regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
写作良方
1．认真审题
(1)审素材：概括其内容，提炼要点，确定短文时态、人称；(2)审图表，素材与图表结合表明导致交通问题的原因；(3)从两方面所得到的启示。
2．构思写作
文章可分成三段来写作：(1)概括素材内容，完成素材与图表的有机结合；(2)分析导致以上交通问题的原因；(3)得到的启示。
3．连句成篇
考生应该学会用适当的关联词，把整篇文章衔接起来，使其有序、合理、得体。
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受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇调查报告。
1．调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种
2．调查范围
上海市10所中学
3．调查对象：高中生
4．调查人数：1
000
5．调查方式：访谈
6．调查结果：(见下图)选择各类英文文章人数的百分比
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．标题及首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Reading
Interests
of
Senior
Middle
School
Students
Recently
a
survey
has
been
done
to
find
out
the
reading
interests
of
senior
middle
school
students.
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近期，你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研，结果如图所示，请结合图表信息写一份调研报告，须包括以下内容：
（1）图表产生的背景和基本内容；
（2）就你个人而言，你会考虑哪些因素？
请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素，并说明原因。
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以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例。
请简要描述该图，
选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。
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