中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文
)
一、题型指导
图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画,要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。
1.素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景,画面生动形象,具有趣味性,体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明,考生易获得直观信息。
2.文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。
二、写作步骤
1.确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。
2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称。
3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
4.合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行适度的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。
5.虚实结合、详略得当。对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述描写的,就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。
三、注意事项
1.看图记叙文的写作
要注意把握写作素材的时间、地点、人物,以及事件的叙述。可以采取倒叙的方式,也可按事件的发生顺序进行描写。
2.看图议论文的写作
首先要认真阅读图画,把握图的意义,有时还要注意其隐含的观点与意图,并联系生活实际进行思考与阐述。
3.看图说明文的写作
要注意观察图画材料,找出所有内容,然后按一定的顺序有条理地阐述。说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种:时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序(比如按图画反映的数字大小进行叙述)。注意文章开头与结尾的呼应。
四、常用句式
1.用于描述图画或引入话题的句式
①As
is
described
in
the
picture...
②As
is
shown
in
the
picture,we
can
see
clearly
the
relationship
between...
③The
sight
reminds
me
of
something
in
my
daily
life.
2.用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的句式
①At
first...then...five
minutes
later...finally/in
the
end/at
last...
开始时……然后……五分钟后……最后……
②Some
were
doing...,some
were
doing...and/while
others
were
doing...
一些人在做……,一些人在做……,而另一些人在做……
③...was/were
doing...when
sb./sth.
did...
当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一件事。
④More
and
more
people
have
come
to
realize
the
importance
of...
3.用于发表议论或总结的句式
①If
such
measures
were
not
taken,the
problem
of...would
be
more
serious.
如果不采取这样的措施的话,……的问题会更加严重。
②We
can
conclude
from
this
picture
that...
从这幅图画我们可以推断……
③As
has
been
stated
above,we
must...
如上所述,我们必须……
五、图片作文的模板
As
is
vividly
shown
in
the
picture,
________
(描述图片).
It
is
a
common
phenomenon
that
________(简单说现象).
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
________(我的观点).
My
reasons
are
listed
as
follows.
To
begin
with,
________(观点一).
_______(论据).
What’s
more,
________(观点二).
________(论据).
Last
but
not
least,
________
(观点三).
________(论据).
In
conclusion,________________
(重复主题,呼吁人们应该这样做......).
Only
by
doing
this
can
we__________(美好的憧憬seize
every
golden
minute
to
welcome
a
splendid
future/
achieve
our
success
and
living
out
our
values/......).
范文赏析:
例1:请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;词数120左右;文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:铺路pave
the
way
内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3.提出你的看法。
【分析】
第一步
定体裁
本文为典例的议论式图画作文,体现其特点的常用句型有:
开始句:用一句话概括漫画内容
句型一:从这幅图画中我们可以看到一家三口正走在红地毯上。
From
the
picture
we
can
see
a
family
of
three
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.
句型二:正如上面图画生动呈现给我们的是一家三口正走在红地毯上。
As
is
vividly
presented
in
the
picture
above/As
the
picture
above
vividly
presents
to
us,
a
family
of
three
are
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.(使用as引导的非限制性定语从句)
中间过渡句:用一句话揭示图画的含义
它反映了当今的一个普遍现象:孩子是家庭的中心,肩负着父母的希望。
It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
nowadays
that
children
are
the
focus
of
families,shouldering(shoulder)
the
hope
of
their
parents.
结束句:用一句话强调所提建议的重要性(常用only引起的倒装句)
只有用这种方式,他们才能在成长过程中学会独立,才能成为真正意义上的成功者。
Only
in
this
way
can
they
grow
up
to
be
independent
and
become
truly
successful.
第二步
定人称、内容要点、关键词及动词时态。
要点全而不漏,时态合理运用。
人称要对:本文主要使用第三人称。
时态要准:基本时态为一般现在时。
要点要全:
①描述漫画内容;
②分析漫画所揭示的问题;
③提出你的看法。
核心词汇:
①穿着讲究的:be
well
dressed
②朝前弯腰:bend
forward
③家庭的中心:the
focus
of
families
④肩负……的期望:
shoulder
the
hope
of...
⑤为孩子安排一切:arrange
everything
for
children
⑥不遗余力:spare
no
effort
⑦结果:as
a
consequence
⑧不独立思考,没有创造力:have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas
⑨表明……的普遍现象:It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
that…
第三步
根据要点提示,写出句式。表达准确得体,避免汉式英语
要点一:儿子精心打扮,高傲地挥手走在中间。
The
son
is
well
dressed
and
waves
proudly
in
the
middle.
要点二:在后面,父亲向前倾着托起上衣。
The
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket.
要点三:在前面,母亲汗流浃背地展开地毯。
The
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
要点四:父母为孩子安排好了所有的事情,不遗余力地为孩子的成功铺平道路。
Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children
and
spare
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.
要点五:孩子们对于父母变得如此依赖以至于他们没有独立的想法或创造性的观点。
Children
become
so
reliant
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
要点六:这种状况让人感到忧心忡忡。
Such
a
situation
is
of
great
concern.
要点七:过度保护和太多的关心对孩子的发展极其有害。
Overprotection
and
too
much
care
are
extremely
bad
for
children's
development.
要点八:父母应该鼓励孩子克服困难,激励孩子独立发展而不是为他们做一切事情。
Parents
should
encourage
their
children
to
overcome
difficulties
and
inspire
them
to
develop
by
themselves
rather
than
do
everything
for
them.
第四步
词汇、句式升级。追求高级表达,张扬个性风采
升级句式一:用分词短语“well
dressed”作定语改写要点一
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle.
升级句式二:用and连接要点二、三
The
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
升级句式三:用while连接升级句式一、二
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle
while
the
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
升级句式四:把要点四中的后半句改为分词短语作状语
Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children,sparing
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.
升级句式五:把要点五改成倒装句
So
reliant
do
children
become
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
第五步
巧用过渡词。巧妙衔接过渡,读文如沐春风
升级句式四和五之间为因果关系,可以使用过渡词语as
a
result/consequence;要点七、八是针对上文提到的社会现象发表的个人观点,故可以使用in
my
opinion作为过渡词语。
第六步
正确分段。行文条理清晰,力避一段到底
第一段:描述漫画内容(开始句;升级句式三)
第二段:分析漫画所揭示的问题(中间段的开始句;升级句式四、五)
第三段:提出自己的看法(要点六至八;结尾句中的强调句)
第七步
完善成文。书写清晰规范,卷面漂亮美观
【参考范文】
From
the
picture
we
can
see
a
family
of
three
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle
while
the
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
nowadays
that
children
are
the
focus
of
families,shouldering
the
hope
of
their
parents.Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children
and
spare
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.As
a
consequence,children
become
so
reliant
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
Such
a
situation
is
of
great
concern.In
my
opinion,over
protection
and
too
much
care
are
extremely
bad
for
children's
development.Instead
of
doing
everything
for
them,parents
should
encourage
their
children
to
overcome
difficulties
and
inspire
them
to
develop
by
themselves.Only
in
this
way
can
they
grow
up
to
be
independent
and
become
truly
successful.
实战演练
请描述如图所示的图片,并谈谈你的感受.
【分析】本文为看图作文,主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活".写作时可按"三段式"来写,首先描述图片点明主题,然后分析概述其含义,发表感想.基本时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主.重要短语:do
some
actions
(做一些动作…),look
like…(看上去像…),be
faced
with
(面临,面对),manage
to
do
(成功地做某事),have
a
positive
attitude
toward…(对…有积极的态度),have
great
influence
on(有很大影响),keep
peace(保持平静).
写作看图作文时,首先认真看图,结合图片和文字,确定所要表达的主题是什么,然后围绕主题,提炼要点,合理想象,对译出的要点通过合理的组合,加上必要的连接词使表达连贯.同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
【参考范文】
As
is
vividly
shown
in
the
picture,an
old
granny
who
looks
ugly
in
a
wheelchair
does
some
actions.The
actions
reflect
on
the
wall,which
makes
her
look
like
a
young
beautiful
girl.(描述图片)【高分句型】
The
picture
conveys
that
some
people
are
positive
when
they
are
faced
with
life.They
are
always
so
energetic
and
enterprising
that
they
manage
to
finish
most
of
tasks
well.Life
returns
color
to
those
people
who
have
positive
and
optimistic
attitudes
toward
life.(联系实际,反映问题)【高分句型】
Now
that
a
positive
attitude
can
lead
us
a
better
life,how
can
we
develop
a
positive
attitude?For
one
thing,we
should
hold
a
dream
about
future
to
provide
our
life
a
clear
direction.For
another,it
is
necessary
for
us
to
be
confident
which
is
the
energy
of
life,perhaps
the
beauty
of
life.【高分句型】Whether
we
can
find
it
have
a
great
influence
on
our
attitude
towards
life,so
we
should
keep
peace
in
our
heart
to
find
the
beauty
of
life.In
my
opinion,if
we
can
do
like
that
mentioned
above,better
life
will
hug
us
tightly.(观点)
下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境。请就此图谈谈你的想法,你的文章应包括:
●
具体描述两幅图;
●
简要分析造成这两种现象的原因;
●
提出解决问题的建议。
(注:请勿出现真实姓名和学校)
【参考范文】
As
is
symbolically
demonstrated
from
the
drawings,?on
the
children’s
back
lay?two
heavy
things,
school
bag
for
the
city
boy
while
match
bunch
for
the
countryside
boy,
making
both
of
them
exhausted.However,it
is?a
vivid
reflection
of
our
society
that
we
children
are
struggling
between
the
life
and
study.
After
a
careful
consideration,I
find
two
different
reasons
to
explain
that.
For
the
city
boy
whose
living
condition
is
pretty
good,
his
trouble
is
the
heavy
study
burden.?To
be
more
detailed,every
minute?has
been
occupied
by
the
endless
extra
courses
and
tests.?Whereas,?for
the
countryside
one
whose
priority
is
working
to
raise
the
family,?study?seems
to
be
a
luxury
thing.
After
realizing
the
causes,I
have
some
constructive
suggestions.?Firstly,city
parents?should?encourage
their
child
to
explore
the
world
as
well
as
acquiring
more
living
skills,
which
seems
easy
to
be
achieved.?Then
for
the
trouble
one,
while
the
things
we
can
do
is
so
little,?it?is
high
time
that
we
donated
our
old
books
and
clothes
to
the
rural
mountain
areas
to
better
their
living
condition,
thus
making
some
possibilities
for
them
to
go
to
the
classroom.?In
brief,I
sincerely
hope
everything
will
be
all
right
with
my
suggestions.
如图反映了一种常见的现象:拖延症(procrastination).请写一篇作文,内容包括:
1.给procrastination下定义;
2.用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法.
【分析】这是一篇图画作文,让我们写一篇关于拖延症(procrastination)的作文,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:给procrastination下定义;用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为拖延症的定义.第二部分为作者结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法.
重点短语与句型:
mean
doing
意味着做…
because
of
因为
when
it
comes
to
当谈到,提到
rely
on依靠,依赖
高分句型一:Although
we've
been
constantly
reminded
that
time
and
tide
waits
for
no
man,when
it
comes
to
the
crux,we
still
procrastinate
and
complain
so
much.此句用了that引导宾语从句
高分句型二:And
that
is
the
reason
why
we
are
in
a
materialistic
chase
nowadays此句why引导定语从句,修饰
the
reason.
【参考范文】
Procrastination
means
delaying
huge
and
important
deals
on
uncertain
time
because
of
out
of
understanding
how
we
must
do
it(拖延症的定义)
I
will
do
my
homework
tomorrow.
That's
a
sentence
many
students
will
say
at
least
once
in
their
lifetime.
Although
we've
been
constantly
reminded
that
time
and
tide
waits
for
no
man,
when
it
comes
to
the
crux,we
still
procrastinate
and
complain
so
much.(高分句型一)People
are
born
to
be
lazy
at
times
and
the
intrinsic
motivation
levels
aren't
high
enough
to
warrant
action.
Thus,
we
rely
on
extrinsic
motivation
to
help
push
us
to
complete
the
tasks
we
have
on
hand.And
that
is
the
reason
why
we
are
in
a
materialistic
chase
nowadays.(高分句型二)Because
extrinsic
motivation
blinds
our
eyes
to
the
intrinsic
motivations
that
we
should
have.(结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法.)
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(
揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文
)
一、题型指导
图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式,是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画,要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。
1.素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景,画面生动形象,具有趣味性,体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明,考生易获得直观信息。
2.文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。
二、写作步骤
1.确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。
2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称。
3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
4.合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行适度的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。
5.虚实结合、详略得当。对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述描写的,就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。
三、注意事项
1.看图记叙文的写作
要注意把握写作素材的时间、地点、人物,以及事件的叙述。可以采取倒叙的方式,也可按事件的发生顺序进行描写。
2.看图议论文的写作
首先要认真阅读图画,把握图的意义,有时还要注意其隐含的观点与意图,并联系生活实际进行思考与阐述。
3.看图说明文的写作
要注意观察图画材料,找出所有内容,然后按一定的顺序有条理地阐述。说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种:时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序(比如按图画反映的数字大小进行叙述)。注意文章开头与结尾的呼应。
四、常用句式
1.用于描述图画或引入话题的句式
①As
is
described
in
the
picture...
②As
is
shown
in
the
picture,we
can
see
clearly
the
relationship
between...
③The
sight
reminds
me
of
something
in
my
daily
life.
2.用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的句式
①At
first...then...five
minutes
later...finally/in
the
end/at
last...
开始时……然后……五分钟后……最后……
②Some
were
doing...,some
were
doing...and/while
others
were
doing...
一些人在做……,一些人在做……,而另一些人在做……
③...was/were
doing...when
sb./sth.
did...
当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一件事。
④More
and
more
people
have
come
to
realize
the
importance
of...
3.用于发表议论或总结的句式
①If
such
measures
were
not
taken,the
problem
of...would
be
more
serious.
如果不采取这样的措施的话,……的问题会更加严重。
②We
can
conclude
from
this
picture
that...
从这幅图画我们可以推断……
③As
has
been
stated
above,we
must...
如上所述,我们必须……
五、图片作文的模板
As
is
vividly
shown
in
the
picture,
________
(描述图片).
It
is
a
common
phenomenon
that
________(简单说现象).
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
________(我的观点).
My
reasons
are
listed
as
follows.
To
begin
with,
________(观点一).
_______(论据).
What’s
more,
________(观点二).
________(论据).
Last
but
not
least,
________
(观点三).
________(论据).
In
conclusion,________________
(重复主题,呼吁人们应该这样做......).
Only
by
doing
this
can
we__________(美好的憧憬seize
every
golden
minute
to
welcome
a
splendid
future/
achieve
our
success
and
living
out
our
values/......).
范文赏析:
例1:请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;词数120左右;文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:铺路pave
the
way
内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3.提出你的看法。
【分析】
第一步
定体裁
本文为典例的议论式图画作文,体现其特点的常用句型有:
开始句:用一句话概括漫画内容
句型一:从这幅图画中我们可以看到一家三口正走在红地毯上。
From
the
picture
we
can
see
a
family
of
three
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.
句型二:正如上面图画生动呈现给我们的是一家三口正走在红地毯上。
As
is
vividly
presented
in
the
picture
above/As
the
picture
above
vividly
presents
to
us,
a
family
of
three
are
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.(使用as引导的非限制性定语从句)
中间过渡句:用一句话揭示图画的含义
它反映了当今的一个普遍现象:孩子是家庭的中心,肩负着父母的希望。
It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
nowadays
that
children
are
the
focus
of
families,shouldering(shoulder)
the
hope
of
their
parents.
结束句:用一句话强调所提建议的重要性(常用only引起的倒装句)
只有用这种方式,他们才能在成长过程中学会独立,才能成为真正意义上的成功者。
Only
in
this
way
can
they
grow
up
to
be
independent
and
become
truly
successful.
第二步
定人称、内容要点、关键词及动词时态。
要点全而不漏,时态合理运用。
人称要对:本文主要使用第三人称。
时态要准:基本时态为一般现在时。
要点要全:
①描述漫画内容;
②分析漫画所揭示的问题;
③提出你的看法。
核心词汇:
①穿着讲究的:be
well
dressed
②朝前弯腰:bend
forward
③家庭的中心:the
focus
of
families
④肩负……的期望:
shoulder
the
hope
of...
⑤为孩子安排一切:arrange
everything
for
children
⑥不遗余力:spare
no
effort
⑦结果:as
a
consequence
⑧不独立思考,没有创造力:have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas
⑨表明……的普遍现象:It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
that…
第三步
根据要点提示,写出句式。表达准确得体,避免汉式英语
要点一:儿子精心打扮,高傲地挥手走在中间。
The
son
is
well
dressed
and
waves
proudly
in
the
middle.
要点二:在后面,父亲向前倾着托起上衣。
The
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket.
要点三:在前面,母亲汗流浃背地展开地毯。
The
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
要点四:父母为孩子安排好了所有的事情,不遗余力地为孩子的成功铺平道路。
Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children
and
spare
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.
要点五:孩子们对于父母变得如此依赖以至于他们没有独立的想法或创造性的观点。
Children
become
so
reliant
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
要点六:这种状况让人感到忧心忡忡。
Such
a
situation
is
of
great
concern.
要点七:过度保护和太多的关心对孩子的发展极其有害。
Overprotection
and
too
much
care
are
extremely
bad
for
children's
development.
要点八:父母应该鼓励孩子克服困难,激励孩子独立发展而不是为他们做一切事情。
Parents
should
encourage
their
children
to
overcome
difficulties
and
inspire
them
to
develop
by
themselves
rather
than
do
everything
for
them.
第四步
词汇、句式升级。追求高级表达,张扬个性风采
升级句式一:用分词短语“well
dressed”作定语改写要点一
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle.
升级句式二:用and连接要点二、三
The
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
升级句式三:用while连接升级句式一、二
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle
while
the
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
升级句式四:把要点四中的后半句改为分词短语作状语
Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children,sparing
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.
升级句式五:把要点五改成倒装句
So
reliant
do
children
become
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
第五步
巧用过渡词。巧妙衔接过渡,读文如沐春风
升级句式四和五之间为因果关系,可以使用过渡词语as
a
result/consequence;要点七、八是针对上文提到的社会现象发表的个人观点,故可以使用in
my
opinion作为过渡词语。
第六步
正确分段。行文条理清晰,力避一段到底
第一段:描述漫画内容(开始句;升级句式三)
第二段:分析漫画所揭示的问题(中间段的开始句;升级句式四、五)
第三段:提出自己的看法(要点六至八;结尾句中的强调句)
第七步
完善成文。书写清晰规范,卷面漂亮美观
【参考范文】
From
the
picture
we
can
see
a
family
of
three
walking
on
a
long
red
carpet.
The
son,well
dressed,waves
proudly
in
the
middle
while
the
father
behind
bends
forward
to
hold
the
jacket
and
the
mother
in
front
rolls
out
the
carpet,sweating.
It
shows
a
common
phenomenon
nowadays
that
children
are
the
focus
of
families,shouldering
the
hope
of
their
parents.Parents
arrange
everything
for
their
children
and
spare
no
effort
to
pave
the
way
for
their
success.As
a
consequence,children
become
so
reliant
on
their
parents
that
they
have
no
independent
thought
or
creative
ideas.
Such
a
situation
is
of
great
concern.In
my
opinion,over
protection
and
too
much
care
are
extremely
bad
for
children's
development.Instead
of
doing
everything
for
them,parents
should
encourage
their
children
to
overcome
difficulties
and
inspire
them
to
develop
by
themselves.Only
in
this
way
can
they
grow
up
to
be
independent
and
become
truly
successful.
实战演练
请描述如图所示的图片,并谈谈你的感受.
【分析】本文为看图作文,主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活".写作时可按"三段式"来写,首先描述图片点明主题,然后分析概述其含义,发表感想.基本时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主.重要短语:do
some
actions
(做一些动作…),look
like…(看上去像…),be
faced
with
(面临,面对),manage
to
do
(成功地做某事),have
a
positive
attitude
toward…(对…有积极的态度),have
great
influence
on(有很大影响),keep
peace(保持平静).
写作看图作文时,首先认真看图,结合图片和文字,确定所要表达的主题是什么,然后围绕主题,提炼要点,合理想象,对译出的要点通过合理的组合,加上必要的连接词使表达连贯.同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境。请就此图谈谈你的想法,你的文章应包括:
●
具体描述两幅图;
●
简要分析造成这两种现象的原因;
●
提出解决问题的建议。
(注:请勿出现真实姓名和学校)
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如图反映了一种常见的现象:拖延症(procrastination).请写一篇作文,内容包括:
1.给procrastination下定义;
2.用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法.
【分析】这是一篇图画作文,让我们写一篇关于拖延症(procrastination)的作文,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:给procrastination下定义;用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为拖延症的定义.第二部分为作者结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法.
重点短语与句型:
mean
doing
意味着做…
because
of
因为
when
it
comes
to
当谈到,提到
rely
on依靠,依赖
高分句型一:Although
we've
been
constantly
reminded
that
time
and
tide
waits
for
no
man,when
it
comes
to
the
crux,we
still
procrastinate
and
complain
so
much.此句用了that引导宾语从句
高分句型二:And
that
is
the
reason
why
we
are
in
a
materialistic
chase
nowadays此句why引导定语从句,修饰
the
reason.
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