北师大版高中英语导学案
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课题
Unit5
Communication
Workshop
主备人
课型
写作课
审核人
时间
2021年12月28日
领导签字
学习
目标
To
understand
the
important
sentences.
Be
able
to
master
the
method
of
writing.
导学过程
笔记
【课前预习与检测】
10min
音乐会评论
佳作观摩
请根据下表提示,以“A
Concert
Review”为题,写一篇关于音乐会的短文,词数100左右。
时间昨天晚上主演Justine地点
Bournemouth
Centre表演棒极了乐团
Elastica,
a
pop
rock
group观众①座无虚席,门票抢购一空
②随歌起舞
③等待歌手签名
A
Concert
Review
Last
night,1,500
young
people
went
to
the
Bournemouth
Centre
to
see
Elastica,
a
pop
rock
group
with
a
growing
number
of
fans.
All
the
tickets
were
sold
out
and
there
was
not
an
empty
seat
anywhere.
③Elastica
played
short,3-minute
songs?④Justine,the
lead
singer
and
guitarist
in
the
group,
proved
that
she’s
a
true
performer.
⑤From
the
start,the
fans
were
jumping
up
and
down
to
the
rhythm
and
they
did
not
stop
until
the
very
end.
⑥Everyone
left
the
hall
feeling
excited?⑦
Although
it
was
very
cold
in
Bournerr.onth,a
small
crowd
of
fans
were
waiting
outside
.The
group
happily
signed
autographs
before
they
got
on
to
their
tour
bus
and
left.
【小组讨论分析,教师点拨。】10min
结构分析
第一段点明时间、地点、人物及Elastica
的受欢迎程度。
第二、三段描写音乐会的热烈场面,重点
描写Justine及观众的反应。
第四段写音乐会结束后,歌迷等待签名。
亮点点击
①句中介词短语作定语,②句sell
out,⑤句
up
and
down和not
???
until短语,⑥句中现
在分词短语作伴随状语的运用等均显示出作
者扎实的语言基本功。
⑤⑦⑧句中状语从句的恰当运用彰显出作者
的语言表达能力。
三.(小组成员展示,总结。)10min
(●)技法指导
下面我们就以3—场音乐会为例,来学习一下写
音乐评论的方法:
第一步:我们要列一列这次音乐会的信息,例如:
音乐会的类型(是摇滚还是爵士乐)、歌手、乐队、时
间、地点;表演者的演技:音乐、声音及灯光效果;听众的反应;等等。
第二步:把列举的内容用适当的句型连缀成句,
然后再用适当的连接词连句成篇即可。
[黄金表达]
1.表示并列:what’s
more,
in
addition,too,as
well,
besides,furthermore,
moreover,what’s
worse。
2.表示因果:therefore,
for
this
reason,thus,consequently。
3.表示转折:but,however?
on
the
contrary,
instead,
on
one
hand
on
the
other
hand。
4.表时间顺序:later,
afterwards,from
then
on,
eventually,
in
the
meantime,
then,at
the
same
time,after
a
while,at
present,after
that,finally。
5.表示列举:first,to
begin
with,secondly,first
of
all,then.
四.(当堂训练)10min
请根据以下内容写一篇关于音乐会的短文。
1.2016年7月,中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举
办演唱会。我很幸运买到了一张票,去听了他的演唱。他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。
2.
虽然天气很热,观众还是很开心。全场欢呼,跟着唱。
3.
周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一,出了很多唱片。
4.
他此次唱了《七里香》《青花瓷》等歌曲。我被他的歌曲深深打动了,盼望能再次听到他演唱。
参考词汇:周杰伦Jay
Chou《青花瓷》Green
Flower
Porcelain
《七里香》Seven
Feets
Soundly
注意:
1.
词数100左右;
2.
不要逐句翻译
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
Dear
Bob,
Thank
you
for
your
last
letter
asking
about
our
library
.
Yours,
Li
Hua
五.
【课下作业】
课时跟踪检测,
综合提升板块,
请完成课时跟踪检测(十二)。
参考范文
Jay
Chou,
whose
songs
are
very
popular
among
young
people
gave
his
singing
performs
nee
in
Shanghai
last
year.
l
was
lucky
enough
to
get
a
ticket.
lt
was
very
hot
in
the
summer
time,
but
we
had
a
very
good
time.
Jay
Chou,
one
of
the
most
famous
Chinese
singe,
has
made
many
records.
Not
only
has
he
given
performances
throughout
China
but
also
we
often
hear
his
songs
broadcast
both
on
TV
and
on
the
radio.
He
sang
many
well-known
songs
such
as
Green
Flower
Porcelain
and
Seven
Feets
Soundly.
all
of
which
were
beautiful
and
natural.
I
was
deeply
impressed
by
his
singing
and
am
looking
forward
to
hearing
him
sing
aga
in.