中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
七年级下册英语(人教版)
Unit 11 How was your school trip?
单元写作专题
本单元以“学校旅行”为话题,主要描述旅行期间所发生的事情的经过及自己的感受。具体到书面表达中,要求同学们会写一篇关于学校旅行的文章。此类文章以记叙为主,要说明事件的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果。在写作中,要分清主次,详略得当;另外,由于是写一篇印象深刻的经历,故文中应有描述性的句子,比如描述人物的心理、感受、天气状况等。
教材中出现的相关句型:
①Today I went on a school trip.今天我进行了一次学校旅游。
②I think today's school trip was terrible.我认为今天的学校旅游很糟糕。
③We took the train to the museum.我们乘火车去博物馆。
④We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.我们参观了科学博物馆,那真的很有趣。
⑤I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents.我去了礼品店给我父母买了一些可爱的礼物。
⑥All in all,it was an exciting day.总的来说,这是激动人心的一天。
⑦I didn't like the trip at all.我一点儿也不喜欢这次旅行。
【名师点拨】
本文属于叙事为主的记叙文。写作时首先要审明题意,围绕“我的学校旅游”这一中心来组织材料,发挥想象,交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程、结果等;还要注意在记述当天活动的同时,要写出自己的感受;最后还要注意正确运用人称和动词时态。
【佳作赏析】
My School Trip
Yesterday was a sunny day.My school went to the zoo.It was really interesting.We went there by bus.The zoo is very big.In the zoo,I saw lots of animals and I took many photos.I learned a lot about animals.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.They weren't expensive.It was an exciting day.
【佳作赏析】
Sunday,May 15th
My school trip was great.It was sunny.I went to a farm with my classmates by bus.I saw quite a lot of cows and I milked a cow on the farm.It was interesting.I also saw some chickens,but I didn't feed them.My friends and I went for a walk around the farm and talked with a farmer.He was very friendly and he showed us around the farm.We learned a lot from him about farming.We picked some strawberries and took some home.They were delicious.
All in all,our school trip was exciting.We had a great time on the farm.
上周六你们班的同学在老师的带领下,参观了博物馆。请根据下列提示写一篇短文,介绍一下活动的过程和你的感受。
提示:1.出发时间(8:30 am);
2.交通方式(by bus);
3.路上所用时间(about twenty minutes);
4.活动内容(see old things,listening to the guide,watch videos);
5.返程时间及感受(5:00 pm,tired,happy and excited)。
要求:短文必须包括所有提示点,不少于60词。
Last Saturday our teacher took us to the museum.We left at 8:30 am by bus.It took us about twenty minutes to get to the museum.In the museum,we saw many old and interesting things.We also listened to the guide along the way.He told us the history and the stories of the things.And we watched videos about the museum,too.We got back at 5:00 pm.We were tired but happy and excited.
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