高三英语复习第16讲短文改错专题课件（34张PPT）+学案（教师版+学生版）

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考查的词类覆盖面广，分布合理。错误包括词法、句法、语篇结构、行文逻辑等，涉及名词、冠词、代词、介词、形容词、副词、连词、动词时态、动词语态、非谓语动词、主谓一致等语法知识。在改错题中，占相当大比例的主要是动词的形式变化、一般现在时第三人称单数、一般过去时、－ed分词、－ing分词及被动语态等。其他如名词复数的变化、主谓一致、词与词之间的搭配、词法、句法及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面也会交替出现。
2.
短文改错试题的难度保持平稳，体裁以记叙文为主，记叙文较说明文和议论文更易理解；句子结构以简单句为主，过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。句子的长度是控制难度的一个重要因素，句子越长难度越高。从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。
3.
从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查要点的主要方面有：
短文改错做题技巧
要想在高考英语中做好短文改错，按照“四步走”，实施“四查法”可有效减少不必要的失误。具体做法如下：
一、“四步走”
1.通读全文，了解大意
注意语篇结构和行文逻辑，不能在未了解大意的情况下就按部就班地一行一行地改。
2.先易后难，缩小范围
通读短文的过程中，可以把其中明显的错误找出来，这样就缩小了范围，为下一步的分析判断提供更充分的依据，也能把注意力集中在较难判断的句子上。
如：Susan
think
Paul
is
just
the
man
she
can
depend
on.此句中谓语没用单数第三人称形式就是一个明显的错误。
3.把握句意，逐句判断
逐句扫描，各个击破。为了使每行长度相差不大，往往一个句子分成两行或三行，而一个句子是否有错只有看完整个句子，甚至还要瞻前顾后才能判断出错误之处。所以在通读全文时，要以句子为最小单位，千万别以行为单位。请记住下面的口诀：
动词形，名词数，注意形和副；
非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。
4.反复通读，复查验证
在大部分错误都改正之后，如果还有拿不准的，应当再次通读短文，利用语感做最后判断；也可以根据此类题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来定夺。错词一般有7～8个，多词和缺词约有2～3处。
二、“四查法”
1.左顾右盼查名词
要注意搜寻名词之前及其本身出现的错误。看该名词前是否缺限定词，该用何种限定词。尤其要查冠词的使用情况。碰到代词要弄清它代替什么。当名词前有形容词时更要加倍注意。如：Catherine，to
whom
you
can
turn
for
help,
has
good
knowledge
of
Greek.(knowledge为不可数名词，在has之后加上不定冠词a)
2.“语”“时”俱进查动词
认真分析动词所用的时态、语态。尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息，“语”“时”俱进地反复推敲。如：Martin
gained
so
much
confidence
that
he
goes
back
to
school...(goes改为went)
3.启承转合查连词
为使短文结构严谨，短文中往往会出现好多连词。这些连词的使用，在结构和意义上都要通顺流畅，恰如其分。如：It
started
to
rise
higher
again.So
it
was
still
too
close
to
the
water.
(So改为But)
4.文通理顺查逻辑
文通即行文合乎英语词法、句法；理顺指行文逻辑符合人们的认知规律，即符合常理。如：The
air
keeping
the
balloon
up
was
escaping
quickly
and
the
balloon
was
coming
up.(第二个up改为down)
考点一、词法型错误
1.冠词
【方法指导】
冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
(1)After
a
hour
or
so
we
began
to
feel
very
frightened.
解析　因hour以元音音素开头。
答案　a→an
(2)I
decided
to
climb
the
tree
to
see
where
we
were.
解析　因此处并非特指，而是泛指。
答案　the→a
(3)Good
health
is
person's
most
valuable
possession.
解析　这里的a表泛指。
答案　person's前加a
(4)Maybe
you
could
come
during
a
winter
holidays.
解析　此处的winter
holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。
答案　a→the
(5)Suddenly，I
caught
a
sight
of
my
English
teacher
in
the
crowd.
解析　catch
sight
of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见”
答案　去掉a
2.名词
【方法指导】
名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
(6)We
stopped
to
rest
for
a
while
and
to
drink
some
waters
from
a
stream.
解析　因“水”为物质名词，不可数。
答案　waters→water
(7)There
are
branch
library
in
many
villages.
解析　因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。
答案　library→libraries
(8)I
hope
that
you
two
could
come
and
visit
us
some
times
soon.
解析　some
time意为“某时”。
答案　times→time
(9)They
were
eager
to
know
everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
question.
解析　因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots
of。
答案　question→questions
3.代词
【方法指导】
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
(10)David
pointed
to
a
path
which
it
he
thought
would
probably
lead
to
a
village.
解析　因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。
答案　去掉it
(11)When
we
walked
to
the
car，Bill
smiled
and
shook
head.
解析　汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake
one's
head。
答案　head前加his
(12)We
climb
everywhere，not
only
in
America.They
have
been
to
Europe
many
times.
解析　前后人称不一致。
答案　They→We
(13)The
Smiths
did
his
best
to
make
me
feel
at
home.
解析　因前面的the
Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。
答案　his→their
4.形容词与副词
【方法指导】
形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。包括近义形容词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以－ly结尾的副词和不是以－ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词－ing形式和动词－ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a
bit，a
little，much，far，many，a
lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by
far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。
(14)Last
Sunday，police
cars
hurried
to
the
taller
building
in
New
York.
解析　因从含义上看此处应是最高级。
答案　taller→tallest
(15)As
a
result，people
in
the
modern
world
generally
live
much
more
longer
than
people
in
the
past.
解析　因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。
答案　去掉more
5.介词与介词短语
【方法指导】
短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，reply，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory
over，advantage
over，respect
for，prize
for等。
(16)Bill
insisted
in
staying
near
the
car.
解析　insist
on为固定搭配。
答案　in→on
(17)When
they
came
down，the
police
were
angry
to
them.
解析　要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be
angry
with
sb。
答案　to→with
(18)Most
people
can
quickly
get
for
help
from
a
doctor
or
go
to
a
hospital
since
they
are
ill.
解析　因其前的get是及物动词。
答案　去掉for
6.动词
【方法指导】
除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。
(19)Charles
and
Linda
were
seeing
near
the
top
of
the
building.
解析　因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。
答案　seeing→seen
(20)Books
may
be
keep
for
four
weeks.
解析　因此处要用被动语态。
答案　keep→kept
(21)...and
let
you
know
when
the
book
you
want
has
returned.
解析　因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。
答案　returned前加been
(22)Uncle
Ben
will
also
go
back
for
Christmas.
解析　由句意可知。
答案　go→come
(23)They
eager
to
know
everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
questions.
解析　因此处缺谓语动词。
答案　eager前加were
7.非谓语动词
【方法指导】
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
(24)David
and
I
wanted
go
off
to
find
help
but
Bill
insisted
on
staying
near
the
car.
解析　因为want后要接不定式。
答案　wanted后加to
(25)...rather
than
go
into
the
forest
and
getting
lost.
解析　因为get与其前的go并列。
答案　getting→get
(26)Modern
people
know
more
about
health，have
better
food，and
to
live
in
clearer
surroundings.
解析　因为live与其前的know，have并列。
答案　去掉live前的to
(27)...you
pay
the
cost
of
send
a
postcard，the
librarian
will
write
to
you.
解析　因为介词后接动名词作宾语。
答案　send→sending
考点二、句法型错误
【方法指导】
句法型错误包括：主谓一致；各种从句的引导词；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
1.主谓一致
对主谓一致的考查主要根据语法、意义、就近、就远等一致原则，判断人称和数是否与主语保持一致。常考点如下：
(1)由or，nor，either...or，neither...nor，not
only...but
also等连接并列主语时，谓语动词的单复数遵循就近原则；
(2)当主语是A
with/together
with/as
well
as/including/...B时，谓语动词的单复数由A决定，遵循就远原则；
(3)动名词、不定式或名词从句作主语时，谓语动词常用单数；
(4)“half/most/part/the
rest/分数/百分数＋of＋名词”作主语时，谓语动词要和of之后的名词的单复数保持一致；
(5)a
quantity
of/quantities
of后既可接复数名词，也可接不可数名词，其谓语动词一般取决于quantity的单复数。
对点练习：
Today，I
am
going
to
talk
with
(about)
what
you
should
do
when
a
fire
alarm
go
off.
解析　该句的主语为a
fire
alarm，为单数名词，其谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
答案　go→goes
2.连接词
连接词主要包括名词性从句中的连接词，定语从句中的关系词，状语从句中的连接词，以及主从复合句和并列句中的连接词等。特别是对which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等的考查。
对点练习：
(2)People
would
like
to
take
part
in
this
contest
should
go
to
the
office
of
the
Students'
Union
and
sign
up.
解析　定语从句缺少引导词。此句中的引导词who或that在从句中作主语，不能省略。
答案　People后加who或that
3.句子成分赘余
句子成分赘余一般有如下几种类型：(1)受母语思维影响，出现汉语式结构，造成冗言；(2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠；(3)介词多余；(4)助动词、系动词多余；(5)多冠词；(6)定语从句中成分重复；(7)程度副词和频率副词，如much，more，often等的多余；(8)小品词to多余等。
对点练习：
(3)If
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing
and
(or)
hurt，tell
your
teacher
immediately.
解析　该句的意思是“若发现有人失踪或受伤了，就要立刻告诉老师”。句中的if引导条件状语从句，when多余。
答案　去掉when
4.缺词错误
缺词现象常见的有：(1)缺系动词；(2)缺介词；(3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；(4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；(5)缺连接词；(6)缺否定词；(7)缺不定式符号to等。
对点练习：
(4)He
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.
解析　want作“想要做某事”讲时后接带to的不定式。
答案　wanted后加to
考点三、
语篇型错误
【方法指导】
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
(1)I
was
taking
a
train
to
London's
Victoria
Station.I
had
noticed
that
the
carriage
was
noise
(noisy)
and
filled
with
people.
解析　考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。
答案　去掉had
(2)Then
everyone
in
the
carriage
began
searching
(∧
for)
the
ticket，which
was
eventually
found
under
a
seat
several
rows
from
his
owner.
解析　此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。
答案　his→its
(3)As
(∧
a)
result，the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.
解析　根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。
答案　somewhere→everywhere
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When
I
was
a
child，I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.I
think
I
would
be
happy
there.Now
I
am
living
in
a
city，but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.There
the
air
is
clean
or
the
mountains
are
green.Unfortunately，on
the
development
of
industrialization，the
environment
has
been
polluted.Lots
of
studies
have
been
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
seriously
problem.The
airs
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier.Much
rare
animals
are
dying
out.We
must
found
ways
to
protect
your
environment.If
we
fail
to
do
so，we'll
live
to
regret
it.
答案　
When
I
was
a
child，I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.I
I
would
be
happy
there.Now
I
am
living
in
a
city，but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.There
the
air
is
clean
the
mountains
are
green.Unfortunately，
the
development
of
industrialization，the
environment
has
been
polluted.Lots
of
studies
have
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
problem.The
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier.
rare
animals
are
dying
out.We
must
ways
to
protect
environment.If
we
fail
to
do
so，we'll
live
to
regret
it.
1.解析　考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。
答案　第2句：think→thought
2.解析　考查冠词的用法。in
the
countryside
(在乡村)为固定短语。
答案　第3句：countryside前加the
3.解析　考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。
答案　第4句：or→and
4.解析　考查介词的用法。with
the
development
of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。
答案　第5句：on→with
5.解析　考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。
答案　第6句：去掉been
6.解析　考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。
答案　第6句：seriously→serious
7.解析　考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。
答案　第7句：airs→air
8.解析　考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。
答案　第8句：Much→Many
9.解析　考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。
答案　第9句：found→find
10.解析　考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。
答案　第9句：your→our
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One
day，little
Tony
went
to
a
shopping
center
with
his
parent.It
was
very
crowded.Tony
saw
a
toy
on
a
shop
window.He
liked
it
so
very
much
that
he
quickly
walked
into
the
shop.After
looks
at
the
toy
for
some
time，he
turned
around
and
found
where
his
parents
were
missing.Tony
was
scared
and
begun
to
cry.A
woman
saw
him
crying
and
telling
him
to
wait
outside
a
shop.Five
minutes
later，Tony
saw
parents.Mom
said，“How
nice
to
see
you
again！Dad
and
I
were
terrible
worried.”Tony
promised
her
that
this
would
never
happen
again.
答案　
One
day，little
Tony
went
to
a
shopping
center
with
his
.It
was
very
crowded.Tony
saw
a
toy
a
shop
window.He
liked
it
so
much
that
he
quickly
walked
into
the
shop.After
at
the
toy
for
some
time，he
turned
around
and
found
his
parents
were
missing.Tony
was
scared
and
to
cry.A
woman
saw
him
crying
and
him
to
wait
outside
shop.Five
minutes
later，Tony
saw
parents.Mom
said，“How
nice
to
see
you
again！Dad
and
I
were
worried.”Tony
promised
her
that
this
would
never
happen
again.
1.解析　考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his
parents
were
missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。
答案　第1句：parent→parents
2.解析　考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。
答案　第3句：
on→in
3.解析　考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以致于……”，故去掉very。
答案　第4句：
去掉very
4.解析　考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look
at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。
答案　第5句：
looks→looking
5.解析　考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。
答案　第5句：
去掉where或where→that
6.解析　考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was
scared并列，因此，要用一般过去时。
答案　第6句：begun→began
7.解析　考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。
答案　第7句：telling→told
8.解析　考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。
答案　第7句：a→the
9.解析　考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。
答案　第8句：saw后加his
10.解析　考查副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。
答案　第10句：terrible→terribly
Passage
3　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi,
Janice，
It's
been
a
month
since
I
came
to
this
new
school
and
I
really
want
share
with
you
some
of
the
problems
I
have
been
experiencing.
As
I
tell
you
last
time,
I
made
three
new
friend
here.We
hang
out
together
during
lunch
and
after
school.We've
been
spending
a
lot
of
time
sing
in
karaoke
bars.It's
been
three
Saturdays
now
and
it
really
costs
me
many.And
I
started
to
see
this
as
a
time－wasting
activity!
In
fact，I
don't
like
to
go
anymore,
so
I'm
afraid
I'll
lose
their
friendship.How
do
you
think
I
should
do?
If
you
are
me，would
you
talk
to
him?
Please
help
with
me
and
give
me
some
advice.
Grace
答案　
Hi,
Janice，
It's
been
a
month
since
I
came
to
this
new
school
and
I
really
want
∧to
share
with
you
some
of
the
problems
I
have
been
experiencing.
As
I
you
last
time,
I
made
three
new
here.We
hang
out
together
during
lunch
and
after
school.We've
been
spending
a
lot
of
time
in
karaoke
bars.It's
been
three
Saturdays
now
and
it
really
costs
me
.And
I
started
to
see
this
as
a
time－wasting
activity!
In
fact，I
don't
like
to
go
anymore,
I'm
afraid
I'll
lose
their
friendship.
do
you
think
I
should
do?
If
you
me，would
you
talk
to
？
Please
help
me
and
give
me
some
advice.
Grace
1.解析　考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。
答案　want后加to
2.解析　考查时态。根据时间状语last
time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。
答案　tell→told
3.解析　考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。
答案　friend→friends
4.解析　考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend...(in)doing
sth结构，故把sing改成singing。
答案　sing→singing
5.解析　考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。
答案　many→much
6.解析　考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
答案　so→but
7.解析　考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。
答案　How→What
8.解析　考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。
答案　are→were
9.解析　考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？
答案　him→them
10.解析　考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。
答案　去掉with
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
soccer
coach
retired
in
last
week.I
wanted
to
do
anything
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.My
mum
makes
the
better
biscuits
in
the
world，so
I
decide
to
ask
her
for
help.Mum
taught
me
some
basic
step
of
baking.I
insisted
on
doing
most
of
the
baking
myself.I
thought
the
biscuits
were
really
well.My
only
mistake
was
that
I
dropped
some
on
the
floor
after
I
was
packing
them
up.
At
a
party，my
coach，with
a
biscuit
in
his
mouth，asked
surprisingly
who
made
them
and
joked，“I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”
My
favorite
picture
at
the
party
is
of
my
coach
and
me
enjoy
the
biscuits
with
happy
laughter!
答案　
My
soccer
coach
retired
last
week.I
wanted
to
do
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.My
mum
makes
the
biscuits
in
the
world，so
I
to
ask
her
for
help.Mum
taught
me
some
basic
of
baking.I
insisted
on
doing
most
of
the
baking
myself.I
thought
the
biscuits
were
really
.My
only
mistake
was
that
I
dropped
some
on
the
floor
I
was
packing
them
up.
At
party，my
coach，with
a
biscuit
in
his
mouth，asked
surprisingly
who
made
them
and
joked，“I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”
My
favorite
picture
at
the
party
is
of
my
coach
and
me
the
biscuits
with
happy
laughter!
1.解析　last
week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。
答案　去掉in
2.解析　something用在肯定句中，表示“一些事”，anything“任何事”。
答案　anything→something
3.解析　我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。
答案　better→best
4.解析　全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。
答案　decide→decided
5.解析　根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。
答案　step→steps
6.解析　作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。
答案　well→good
7.解析　我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候，after
在……之后。
答案　after→when/while
8.解析　此处表特指，at
the
party
在晚会上。
答案　a→the
9.解析　动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。
答案　just后加to
10.解析　and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。
答案　enjoy→enjoying
Passage
5　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
old
classroom
was
interesting
because
three
side
of
the
classroom
were
made
from
glass.I
enjoyed
sit
close
to
the
windows
and
looking
at
the
view.On
the
left－hand
side
of
the
class，I
could
easy
see
the
football
field.In
the
mornings，it
was
full
of
students
exercising.The
view
from
the
back
of
the
classroom
is
also
splendid.Close
to
the
school
there
was
a
beautiful
park
with
many
trees
around
them.Farther
in
the
distance，I
could
not
enjoy
the
view
of
snowy
mountains.On
the
right
side
of
the
class
was
the
road.I
was
always
interested
to
see
the
drivers
in
hurry
in
the
morning.The
position
of
the
classroom
with
its
view
made
me
felt
like
I
was
dreaming.If
I
was
only
a
child
when
I
studied
in
that
classroom，I
will
never
forget
it.
1.解析　考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。
答案　第一句：side→sides
2.解析　考查固定表达。be
made
of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be
made
from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。
答案　第一句：from→of
3.解析　考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。
答案　第二句：sit→sitting
4.解析　考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。
答案　第三句：easy→easily
5.解析　考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。
答案　第五句：is→was
6.解析　考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a
beautiful
park要用it。
答案　第六句：them→it
7.解析　考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。
答案　第七句：not去掉
8.解析　考查固定表达。in
a
hurry匆匆忙忙。
答案　第九句：in后加a
9.解析　考查非谓语动词。make
sb
do...使某人做某事。
答案　第十句：felt→feel
10.解析　考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。
答案　最后一句：If→Although/Though
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly
five
years
before，and
with
the
help
by
our
father，my
sister
and
I
planted
some
cherry
tomatoes(圣女果)in
our
back
garden.Since
then—for
all
these
year—we
had
been
allowing
tomatoes
to
self－seed
where
they
please.As
result，the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.The
fruits
are
small
in
size，but
juicy
and
taste.There
are
so
much
that
we
often
share
them
with
our
neighbors.Although
we
allow
tomato
plants
to
grow
in
the
same
place
year
after
year，but
we
have
never
had
any
disease
or
insect
attack
problems.We
are
growing
wonderfully
tomatoes
at
no
cost!
1.解析　ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted，用的是过去式，故用ago。
答案　第一句中before→ago
2.解析　with
the
help
of...在……的帮助下。
答案　第一句中by→of
3.解析　由前面all
these可知应用year的复数形式。
答案　第二句中year→years
4.解析　根据时间状语“since
then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。
答案　第二句中had→have
5.解析　as
a
result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。
答案　第三句中as后加a
6.解析　因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere到处；somewhere某处。
答案　第三句中somewhere→everywhere
7.解析　are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。
答案　第四句中taste→tasty
8.解析　根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而much修饰不可数名词。
答案　第五句中much→many
9.解析　although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。
答案　第六句中but去掉或改为yet
10.解析　因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。
答案　第七句中wonderfully→wonderful
Passage
7　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
was
taking
a
train
to
London's
Victoria
Station.I
had
noticed
that
the
carriage
was
noise
and
filled
with
people.
Before
long，a
train
inspector
comes
to
check
our
tickets.A
passenger
realized
he
couldn't
find
his
ticket
but
became
quite
upset.Then
everyone
in
the
carriage
began
searching
the
ticket，which
was
eventually
found
under
a
seat
several
rows
from
his
owner.The
person
who
found
a
ticket
smiled
with
pleasure
at
his
success.
No
one
in
the
carriage
had
previous
spoken
to
or
even
noticed
the
ticket－owner
before.Yet
they
had
so
quickly
offered
the
strangers
their
help.If
we
could
show
concern
to
others
on
need，the
world
would
be
a
better
place
to
live
in.
1.解析　考查时态一致。文章主体时态为一般过去时。
答案　去掉had
2.解析　考查词性。be动词后应用形容词，noise为名词。
答案　noise→noisy
3.解析　考查时态，before
long后用一般过去时。
答案　comes→came
4.解析　考查句子关系。一位乘客意识到他的票不见了，他开始不安起来。应为承接关系，而非转折关系。
答案　but→and
5.解析　考查固定搭配。search
for＝look
for寻找。
答案　searching后加for
6.解析　考查代词指代。此处是票的主人用its或主人the
owner。
答案　his→its/the
7.解析　考查冠词。上文提到过用the表特指。
答案　a→the
8.解析　考查形容词、副词用法。修饰动词的应为副词，previous是形容词。
答案　previous→previously
9.解析　考查前后一致。从上文看，丢票的是一个人，故应用单数。
答案　strangers→stranger
10.解析　考查固定结构。in
need需要。
答案　on→in
Passage
8　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，boys
and
girls！Today，I
am
going
to
talk
with
what
you
should
do
when
a
fire
alarm
go
off.If
you
hear
the
alarm，stand
in
line
at
the
door
and
wait
your
teacher
to
lead
you
outside.Stay
close
to
your
teacher
and
classmate.Don't
panic
or
get
out
of
line，and
trying
to
remain
quiet
and
calmly.Soon
the
firefighters
will
come
and
put
out
a
fire.If
it's
a
false
alarm
and
there
is
no
fire，your
teacher
will
lead
us
back
to
the
classroom.If
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing
and
hurt，tell
your
teacher
immediately.
【语篇导读】　这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。
1.解析　talk
with后面常跟指人的词，意思是“同某人交谈”。talk
about意为“谈论”。
答案　with→about
2.解析　表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态。a
fire
alarm为单数名词，故谓语动词应当用单数第三人称形式。
答案　go→goes
3.解析　wait为不及物动词，后跟宾语时要加上介词for。
答案　在wait之后加上for
4.解析　classmate为可数名词，此处应当用复数形式。
答案　classmate→classmates
5.解析　根据and一词可知本句与前面的祈使句并列，所以应当用动词原形。
答案　trying→try
6.解析　由并列连词and可知本词与quiet都作系动词remain的表语。故词性应与quiet一致。
答案　calmly→calm
7.解析　前文已提到火灾，这里特指那场火。
答案　a→the
8.解析　根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项。用的均是第二人称。
答案　us→you
9.解析　宾语从句中使用了两个连接词，根据句意“如果你们注意到有人失踪或受伤……”可知when是多余的。
答案　去掉when
10.解析　如果某人失踪了，就无法判断他受伤与否。这两个词之间是选择关系，故用or。
答案　and→or
Passage
9　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\
)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
father
took
me
out
camping
for
the
first
time
when
I
was
seven.He
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.My
uncles
all
come
along
with
bows
and
arrows
for
hunting.
One
evening
at
sunset，we
sat
by
the
fire，have
our
barbecue.Just
then
a
bird
was
flying
over
us.My
uncles
immediate
jumped
up
and
shot
their
arrows
on
the
bird.Neither
of
the
arrows
hit
the
target.Suddenly
the
arrows
was
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky－they
were
looked
like
rain！We
ran
to
escape
but
fortunately
no
one
was
injured.
That
day
I
didn't
learn
much
about
animals，insects
or
trees，but
I
learnt
a
impressive
lesson
about
gravity!
1.解析　考查非谓语动词。want
to
do
sth想要做某事，为固定搭配。
答案　He
wanted后加to
2.解析　考查动词时态。本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
答案　come→came
3.解析　考查非谓语动词。一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，因此此处应为非谓语动词作伴随状语。
答案　have→having
4.解析　考查形容词副词修饰关系。副词修饰后面的动词jumped
up。
答案　immediate→immediately
5.解析　考查介词的使用。shoot
at...朝……射击。下文的Suddenly
the
arrows
was
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky.也给本句提供了答案。
答案　on→at
6.解析　考查不定代词。根据前文的arrows一词可以看出，此处不是只有两只箭，因此把Neither改为None，表示三支以上。
答案　Neither→None
7.解析　考查主谓一致。主语为复数形式arrows，谓语动词应用复数。
答案　was→were
8.解析　考查语态。look作为系动词，无需用被动语态。
答案　去掉were
9.解析　考查连词。根据句意：我们跑开了，幸运的是，没有人受伤。可以看出，此处为承接关系，并非转折关系。
答案　but→and
10.解析　考查冠词的使用。后面的impressive一词第一个读音为元音，因此用an。
答案　a→an
Passage
10　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jeremy
and
Alice，
Although
we've
been
delighted
to
have
you
as
neighbors，we're
hoping
to
settle
something
that
bothers
to
us.In
a
word，your
dog—Cleo.
We've
called
several
time
about
Cleo's
early
morning
barking.It
is
difficult
to
understanding
why
she
barks
every
minute
she's
outside.The
early
morning
barking
have
been
disturbing
us
as
we
are
often
up
all
night
with
the
baby.Beside，Cleo
tends
to
bark
a
average
of
six
hours
a
day.This
morning
she
starts
barking
even
before
5
o'clock.That
is
too
much
for
us，considering
how
closely
the
houses
are.
We
appreciate
our
apologies
and
goodwill，but
we
hope
that
you
can
figure
a
good
way
of
settling
the
matter.
Sincerely，
Jack
and
Rose
1.解析　bother为及物动词，无需加to。
答案　去掉to
2.解析　当“次数”讲时，time为可数名词。
答案　time→times
3.解析　动词不定式符号to后跟动词原形。
答案　understanding→understand
4.解析　主谓一致问题。主语为单数，谓语动词用单数形式。
答案　have→has
5.解析　besides除此之外，连词。beside在……一边，介词。
答案　Beside→Besides
6.a→an
7.解析　考查时态。今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时。
答案　starts→started
8.解析　考查形容词close和closely的区别，房子距离近用close，具体意义；closely表抽象意义。
答案　closely→close
9.解析　考查人称代词。我们感激你的歉意，后句的you给本题提供了答案。
答案　our→your
10.解析　考查固定搭配。figure
out找出。
答案　figure后加out
Passage
11　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
book
I'm
reading
of
talks
about
afternoon
tea
in
Britain.It
is
said
to
have
started
in
the
early
1800's.Have
tea
in
the
late
afternoon
provides
a
bridge
between
lunch
and
dinner，that
might
not
be
served
until
8
o'clock
at
night.This
custom
soon
becomes
another
meal
of
day.Interesting，it
had
a
connection
by
the
British
porcelain(瓷器)
industry.Tea
in
China
was
traditionally
drank
from
cups
without
handles.When
tea
got
popular
in
Britain，there
was
a
crying
need
for
good
cup
with
handles
to
suit
British
habits.This
made
for
the
grow
in
the
porcelain
industry.
答案　
The
book
I'm
reading
of\
talks
about
afternoon
tea
in
Britain.It
is
said
to
have
started
in
the
early
1800's.
tea
in
the
late
afternoon
provides
a
bridge
between
lunch
and
dinner，
might
not
be
served
until
8
o'clock
at
night.This
custom
soon
another
meal
of
∧,the)
day.，it
had
a
connection
the
British
porcelain(瓷器)
industry.Tea
in
China
was
traditionally
from
cups
without
handles.When
tea
got
popular
in
Britain，there
was
a
crying
need
for
good
with
handles
to
suit
British
habits.This
made
for
the
in
the
porcelain
industry.
Passage
12　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today
we
had
a
chemistry
test.I
found
the
test
difficulty，but
I
tried
hardly
to
do
it.Suddenly
Mary,
my
best
friend，asking
me
to
let
her
to
copy
my
answers.After
think
for
some
time，I
let
her
copy
my
answers.But
after
the
test，all
of
us
were
called
to
the
teacher's
office.The
teacher
was
angry
because
we
had
same
answers
in
the
tests.We
were
warned
not
to
cheat
again
so
she
would
need
to
see
our
parents.I
was
very
upset.I
didn't
cheat.I
was
just
helping
a
friend.Why
does
she
punish
me?
答案　
Today
we
had
a
chemistry
test.I
found
the
test
，but
I
tried
hardly,hard)
to
do
it.Suddenly
Mary,
my
best
friend，
me
to
let
her
copy
my
answers.After
for
some
time，I
let
her
copy
my
answers.But
after
the
test，
of
us
were
called
to
the
teacher's
office
.The
teacher
was
angry
because
we
had
the
same
answers
in
the
.We
were
warned
not
to
cheat
again
she
would
need
to
see
our
parents.I
was
very
upset.I
didn't
cheat.I
was
just
helping
a
friend.Why
she
punish
me?
Passage
13　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
father
and
I
stayed
at
the
South
Lake
Hotel
for
a
week
when
we
visit
Beijing
last
month.
It
is
in
the
downtown
area,
but
it
is
easy
to
go
to
anywhere
from
the
hotel
by
public
transport.
We
lived
in
a
comfortably
double－room
with
a
big
bath.
What
I
liked
best
were
the
free
high－speed
Internet
connection
in
the
room.
I
checked
my
email
messages
every
day.
I
also
shared
for
my
friends
many
photos
taking
in
Beijing.
The
food
was
wonderful
with
reasonable
prices,
and
we
enjoyed
several
local
dish.
It
is
such
great
hotel
that
I
would
recommend
it
to
any
friend
of
me
who
is
going
to
Beijing.
答案　
My
father
and
I
stayed
at
the
South
Lake
Hotel
for
a
week
when
we
Beijing
last
month.
It
is
in
the
downtown
area,
it
is
easy
to
go
to\
anywhere
from
the
hotel
by
public
transport.
We
lived
in
a
double－room
with
a
big
bath.
What
I
liked
best
the
free
high－speed
Internet
connection
in
the
room.
I
checked
my
email
messages
every
day.
I
also
shared
my
friends
many
photos
in
Beijing.
The
food
was
wonderful
with
reasonable
prices,
and
we
enjoyed
several
local
.
It
is
such
∧a
great
hotel
that
I
would
recommend
it
to
any
friend
of
who
is
going
to
Beijing.
Passage
14　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
was
playing
at
my
cousin
house.Since
his
family
was
rich
than
mine，he
had
more
toys
than
I
did.There
was
one
on
particular
I'd
always
wanted.I
put
into
my
pocket
when
he
wasn't
looking.I
guessed，even
at
that
age，I
would
never
be
able
to
enjoy
to
playing
with
the
toy
or
faced
my
cousin
again；I
would
always
know
I'd
done
something
wrong.Late
on，my
aunt
drove
my
home.When
she
dropped
me
off，I
pulled
out
the
toy
slow
and
gave
it
back.She
knows
what
had
happened，but
she
thanked
me
and
ever
mentioned
it
again.
答案　
I
was
playing
at
my
house.Since
his
family
was
than
mine，he
had
more
toys
than
I
did.There
was
one
particular
I'd
always
wanted.I
put
into
my
pocket
when
he
wasn't
looking.I
guessed，even
at
that
age，I
would
never
be
able
to
enjoy
playing
with
the
toy
or
my
cousin
again；I
would
always
know
I'd
done
something
wrong.
on，my
aunt
drove
my
home.When
she
dropped
me
off，I
pulled
out
the
toy
and
gave
it
back.She
what
had
happened，but
she
thanked
me
and
mentioned
it
again.
A组　模拟基础题
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，everyone.It's
nice
to
speak
about
that
we
can
do
for
our
school，and
I
think
small
actions
can
make
big
difference.The
first
thing
we
can
do
is
to
make
our
campus
more
beautifully.Every
one
of
them
may
plant
a
tree
in
the
school
or
to
organize
a
thorough
cleaning
on
the
campus.We
can
also
form
a
good
habit
of
putting
rubbishes
into
trashcans.Never
forget
to
turn
off
the
lights
and
close
the
doors.We
should
not
leave
the
tap
water
run
or
waste
any
materials
in
the
laboratory
class.In
that
case，I
believe
we'll
turn
our
school
in
a
better
place
to
study
and
live
in.
How
I
wish
we
can
enjoy
a
better
school
life!
Thank
you
for
listening!
答案　
Hello，everyone.It's
nice
to
speak
about
we
can
do
for
our
school，and
I
think
small
actions
can
make
big
difference.The
first
thing
we
can
do
is
to
make
our
campus
more.Every
one
of
may
plant
a
tree
in
the
school
or
organize
a
thorough
cleaning
on
the
campus.We
can
also
form
a
good
habit
of
putting
into
trashcans.Never
forget
to
turn
off
the
lights
close
the
doors.We
should
not
leave
the
tap
water
or
waste
any
materials
in
the
laboratory
class.In
that
case，I
believe
we'll
turn
our
school
a
better
place
to
study
and
live
in.
How
I
wish
we
enjoy
a
better
school
life!
Thank
you
for
listening!
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jack，
Welcome
to
my
school！Upon
your
arrival，there
will
be
a
party
for
you
organizing
by
my
classmates.You
may
attend
to
English
classes
to
feel
a
differently
learning
style.After
that，you
can
go
to
your
host
family
that
you
can
experience
the
Chinese
way
of
life.You
can
have
meals
together
chatting
about
whatever
interest
you.
The
host
family
will
also
show
you
off
some
famous
scenic
spots.You
can
see
people
selling
kites
everywhere
because
our
city
was
home
to
kites.There
are
varieties
of
kites
to
choose.So
isn't
that
a
good
idea
to
buy
some
for
your
friends？Write
to
me
unless
you
have
any
questions
about
the
schedule.
Yours，
Li
Hua
答案　
Dear
Jack，
Welcome
to
my
school！Upon
your
arrival，there
will
be
a
party
for
you
by
my
classmates.You
may
attend
English
classes
to
feel
a
learning
style.After
that，you
can
go
to
your
host
family
you
can
experience
the
Chinese
way
of
life.You
can
have
meals
together
chatting
about
whatever
you.
The
host
family
will
also
show
you
some
famous
scenic
spots.You
can
see
people
selling
kites
everywhere
because
our
city
home
to
kites.There
are
varieties
of
kites
to
choose
∧from.So
isn't
a
good
idea
to
buy
some
for
your
friends？Write
to
me
you
have
any
questions
about
the
schedule.
Yours，
Li
Hua
Passage
3　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
am
very
happy
that
you
are
interested
in
the
protection
of
antelopes
in
China，so
I'd
like
to
tell
you
everything
about
it.
In
the
past，some
people
kill
antelopes
for
their
free
fur
which
can
be
made
into
many
beautiful
things
that
are
very
expensive.As
the
result，the
number
of
antelopes
was
decreasing
day
by
day.Now
things
are
begun
to
change.The
government
and
the
local
people
take
powerful
measures
to
protect
antelopes
so
that
they
will
not
die
in
the
future.They
had
taken
many
effective
measures，such
as
making
strict
laws
to
protecting
antelopes，setting
up
several
reserves
for
the
antelopes，and
so
on.Of
course，it's
strong
prohibited
to
buy
or
sell
anything
made
of
antelopes
fur.
Nowadays，to
our
joy，there
are
much
more
and
more
antelopes
in
China.What's
more，their
living
conditions
have
greatly
improved.
答案　
I
am
very
happy
that
you
are
interested
in
the
protection
of
antelopes
in
China，so
I'd
like
to
tell
you
about
it.
In
the
past，some
people
antelopes
for
their
free
fur
which
can
be
made
into
many
beautiful
things
that
are
very
expensive.As
result，the
number
of
antelopes
was
decreasing
day
by
day.Now
things
/
to
change.The
government
and
the
local
people
take
powerful
measures
to
protect
antelopes
so
that
they
will
not
die
in
the
future.They
taken
many
effective
measures，such
as
making
strict
laws
/
antelopes，setting
up
several
reserves
for
the
antelopes，and
so
on.Of
course，it's
prohibited
to
buy
or
sell
anything
made
of
fur.
Nowadays，to
our
joy，there
are
more
and
more
antelopes
in
China.What's
more，their
living
conditions
have
greatly
improved.
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In
the
summer
holiday，we
travelled
to
Qingdao
and
paid
visit
to
my
uncle
there.It's
a
long
and
bored
journey.But
the
moment
I
arrived，I
fall
in
love
with
the
city.It's
such
beautiful
a
city
that
I
can
hardly
find
any
word
to
describe
it.The
streets
are
cleaning
and
the
sky
is
blue.If
you
walk
along
the
coast，you
can
feel
the
wind
to
blowing
on
your
face.The
sea
is
vast
and
sometimes
you
can
find
a
boat
or
a
ship.You
may
also
do
some
fishing
as
far
as
it
is
permitted.Moreover，I
think
the
driver
there
drive
too
fast
in
the
street.You
can
never
be
too
careless
when
crossing
the
street.
答案　
In
the
summer
holiday，we
travelled
to
Qingdao
and
paid
visit
to
my
uncle
there.It's
a
long
and
journey.But
the
moment
I
arrived，I
in
love
with
the
city.It's
beautiful
a
city
that
I
can
hardly
find
any
word
to
describe
it.The
streets
are
and
the
sky
is
blue.If
you
walk
along
the
coast，you
can
feel
the
wind
blowing
on
your
face.The
sea
is
vast
and
sometimes
you
can
find
a
boat
or
a
ship.You
may
also
do
some
fishing
as
as
it
is
permitted.，I
think
the
there
drive
too
fast
in
the
street.You
can
never
be
too
when
crossing
the
street.
Passage
5　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As
we
all
know，everyone
have
a
dream.I
have
dreamed
of
being
a
doctor
since
I
entered
into
the
primary
school.Nowadays
with
modern
life
go
rapidly，many
people
suffer
from
different
kind
of
diseases，both
mentally
and
physically.As
a
result，doctors
are
in
great
need
at
home
and
abroad.My
dream
is
to
become
successful
doctor，helping
to
save
people's
lives.Although
to
be
a
good
doctor
was
very
difficult，I
will
do
whatever
I
can
to
keep
everyone
health.To
make
my
dream
come
true，I
have
told
me
over
and
over
again
that
I'll
concentrate
more
to
studies.After
all，only
by
working
hardly
can
one
succeed.
答案　
As
we
all
know，everyone
a
dream.I
have
dreamed
of
being
a
doctor
since
I
entered
into\
the
primary
school.Nowadays
with
modern
life
rapidly，many
people
suffer
from
different
of
diseases，both
mentally
and
physically.As
a
result，doctors
are
in
great
need
at
home
and
abroad.My
dream
is
to
become
successful
doctor，helping
to
save
people's
lives.Although
to
be
a
good
doctor
very
difficult，I
will
do
whatever
I
can
to
keep
everyone.To
make
my
dream
come
true，I
have
told
over
and
over
again
that
I'll
concentrate
more
studies.After
all，only
by
working
can
one
succeed.
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We
all
have
dreams，but
not
all
these
dreams
can
come
true.People
give
up
his
dreams
for
this
or
that
reason.Those
who
dreams
have
come
true
have
at
least
one
thing
in
common，which
is，they
always
hold
fast
to
their
dreams.
Marie
Curie
set
us
the
good
example.In
1898，Marie
has
found
a
new
element.In
order
to
prove
her
discovery，she
had
to
get
it
and
showed
it
to
the
world.Then
to
get
the
new
element
become
her
dream
and
goal
of
her
life.After
four
years'
hard
work，Marie
and
her
husband
last
saw
the
dim
blue
light
of
the
new
element—radium.
Hold
fast
to
your
dreams，no
matter
how
big
and
small
they
are.The
path
to
your
dreams
may
not
be
smoothly
and
wide，even
some
sacrifices
are
needed，but
hold
on
to
the
end.
答案　
We
all
have
dreams，but
not
all
these
dreams
can
come
true.People
give
up
dreams
for
this
or
that
reason.Those
dreams
have
come
true
have
at
least
one
thing
in
common，
is，they
always
hold
fast
to
their
dreams.
Marie
Curie
set
us
good
example.In
1898，Marie
has\
found
a
new
element.In
order
to
prove
her
discovery，she
had
to
get
it
and
it
to
the
world.Then
to
get
the
new
element
her
dream
and
goal
of
her
life.After
four
years'
hard
work，Marie
and
her
husband
/
saw
the
dim
blue
light
of
the
new
element—radium.
Hold
fast
to
your
dreams，no
matter
how
big
small
they
are.The
path
to
your
dreams
may
not
be
and
wide，even
some
sacrifices
are
needed，but
hold
on
to
the
end.
Passage
7　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'd
like
to
give
you
some
advices
on
how
to
learn
Chinese
well.
First，it
was
important
to
take
a
Chinese
course，as
you'll
be
able
to
learn
from
the
teacher
and
practising
with
your
fellow
students.Then，it
also
help
to
watch
TV
and
read
books，newspapers
and
magazines
in
the
Chinese
whenever
possible.It
will
make
you
familiar
to
Chinese
characters
and
enlarge
your
vocabulary
even
before
you
notice
it!
Besides，it
is
a
good
idea
learn
and
sing
Chinese
songs，because
by
doing
so
you'll
learn
and
remember
Chinese
words
more
easy.You
can
also
make
more
Chinese
friends，they
will
tell
you
a
lot
about
China
and
help
you
learn
Chinese.Try
to
speak
Chinese
as
many
as
possible.
答案　
I'd
like
to
give
you
some
on
how
to
learn
Chinese
well.
First，it
important
to
take
a
Chinese
course，as
you'll
be
able
to
learn
from
the
teacher
and
with
your
fellow
students.Then，it
also
to
watch
TV
and
read
books，newspapers
and
magazines
in
the\
Chinese
whenever
possible.It
will
make
you
familiar
Chinese
characters
and
enlarge
your
vocabulary
even
before
you
notice
it!
Besides，it
is
a
good
idea
learn
and
sing
Chinese
songs，because
by
doing
so
you'll
learn
and
remember
Chinese
words
more.You
can
also
make
more
Chinese
friends，
will
tell
you
a
lot
about
China
and
help
you
learn
Chinese.Try
to
speak
Chinese
as
as
possible.
Passage
8　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It's
pleasure
for
me
to
have
a
chance
to
make
a
short
speech
today.I
have
found
that
some
of
my
classmates
study
deeply
into
the
night.What's
more，they
did
not
spare
any
time
to
exercise
during
the
day.But
they
are
less
energetic
than
the
others
in
class
and
can't
always
stay
focusing
on
their
lessons.Worse
than
that，some
of
them
seldom
have
breakfast，with
which
is
also
a
bad
habit
and
will
certainly
do
harm
for
their
health.
Obvious，it's
important
for
us
to
have
enough
sleep
and
a
proper
diet.We
must
learn
to
make
wise
use
of
our
time，and
only
in
this
way
can
we
keep
fit
and
study
well.I
hope
my
advices
can
help
you.
Thanks
for
listen.
答案　
It's
pleasure
for
me
to
have
a
chance
to
make
a
short
speech
today.I
have
found
that
some
of
my
classmates
study
into
the
night.What's
more，they
not
spare
any
time
to
exercise
during
the
day.
they
are
less
energetic
than
the
others
in
class
and
can't
always
stay
on
their
lessons.Worse
than
that，some
of
them
seldom
have
breakfast，with\
which
is
also
a
bad
habit
and
will
certainly
do
harm
their
health.
，it's
important
for
us
to
have
enough
sleep
and
a
proper
diet.We
must
learn
to
make
wise
use
of
our
time，and
only
in
this
way
can
we
keep
fit
and
study
well.I
hope
my
can
help
you.
Thanks
for.
Passage
9　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，Peter.I'm
very
grateful
for
your
concern
about
my
coming
exam.To
tell
you
truth，I
have
been
busy
prepare
for
the
exam
recently.Some
classmates
are
feeling
real
stressed
due
to
the
exam，but
I
don't
take
them
so
seriously.I
always
learn
in
a
relaxing
mood
and
I'm
making
a
great
progress.Now
that
I
had
tried
my
best，it
doesn't
matter
much
to
me
what
the
result
is.
In
my
opinion，we
should
keep
a
good
balance
among
our
study，rest
or
exercise.I
believe
we
can
be
succeeded
if
we
prepare
for
the
exam
in
a
proper
way.
I'd
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
good
advices.
答案　
Hello，Peter.I'm
very
grateful
for
your
concern
about
my
coming
exam.To
tell
you
truth，I
have
been
busy
for
the
exam
recently.Some
classmates
are
feeling
stressed
due
to
the
exam，but
I
don't
take
so
seriously.I
always
learn
in
a
mood
and
I'm
making
a\
great
progress.Now
that
I
tried
my
best，it
doesn't
matter
much
to
me
what
the
result
is.
In
my
opinion，we
should
keep
a
good
balance
among
our
study，rest
exercise.I
believe
we
can
be
if
we
prepare
for
the
exam
in
a
proper
way.
I'd
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
good.
Passage
10　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mother
is
very
good
for
raising
plants
and
flowers.
We
have
plants
and
flowers
indoors
and
outdoors
all
the
years
round.
Some
of
our
plants
were
very
small
several
years
before,
but
now
they
are
large
and
very
beautifully.
On
top
of
our
roof
there
is
a
larger
glass－enclosed
green－house.
All
our
friends
love
to
come
to
our
house
see
the
beautiful
world
my
mother
had
made
for
us.
Every
morning
and
evening
we
see
my
mother
taken
care
of
her
plants
like
little
children.
As
her
real
children
have
grown
up,
and
my
mother
devotes
more
time
to
her
garden.
This
is
the
very
good
way
of
spending
her
free
time.
答案　
My
mother
is
very
good
raising
plants
and
flowers.
We
have
plants
and
flowers
indoors
and
outdoors
all
the
round.
Some
of
our
plants
were
very
small
several
years,
but
now
they
are
large
and
very.
On
top
of
our
roof
there
is
a
glass－enclosed
greenhouse.
All
our
friends
love
to
come
to
our
house
see
the
beautiful
world
my
mother
made
for
us.
Every
morning
and
evening
we
see
my
mother
care
of
her
plants
like
little
children.
As
her
real
children
have
grown
up,
and\
my
mother
devotes
more
time
to
her
garden.
This
is
very
good
way
of
spending
her
free
time.
B组　模拟能力题
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
saying
that
practice
makes
perfect
mean
that
after
you
have
plenty
of
practice
in
what
you
were
doing，you
will
be
perfect
in
it.If
you
want
improve
your
study
and
work，remembering
that
the
most
important
thing
is
how
to
put
the
knowledge
you
have
learned
into
practice.For
example，when
learning
a
language，though
you
can
make
full
use
for
your
talent，practice
is
necessary.If
you
only
learn
grammar
rules
by
the
heart
and
don't
do
enough
exercise，it's
certain
that
you
can't
understand
the
language
perfectly.But
if
you
real
practise
a
lot，maybe
you
will
understand
them
much
better.In
this
way，you
can
apply
that
you
have
learned
better.
答案　
The
saying
that
practice
makes
perfect
that
after
you
have
plenty
of
practice
in
what
you
doing，you
will
be
perfect
in
it.If
you
want
improve
your
study
and
work，
that
the
most
important
thing
is
how
to
put
the
knowledge
you
have
learned
into
practice.For
example，when
learning
a
language，though
you
can
make
full
use
your
talent，practice
is
necessary.If
you
only
learn
grammar
rules
by
the\
heart
and
don't
do
enough，it's
certain
that
you
can't
understand
the
language
perfectly.But
if
you
practise
a
lot，maybe
you
will
understand
much
better.In
this
way，you
can
apply
you
have
learned
better.
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm
very
grateful
for
my
parents.They
not
only
gave
me
life，but
also
brought
me
up
with
endless
love
and
support，feel
so
proud
of
my
every
improvements.I
still
remember
once
I
was
seriously
ill.They
were
so
worrying
and
almost
kept
me
company
the
whole
night.Now
I'm
Grade
3.
Lucky
for
me，my
parents
can
understand
my
stressful
condition
but
often
communicate
with
me
with
encouraging
words.Furthermore，they
give
me
enough
personal
space，which
I
appreciate
it
so
much.
I
should
study
hard.When
I
grow
up，I
will
become
an
useful
person
and
make
my
parents
lived
a
happy
life.
答案　
I'm
very
grateful
my
parents.They
not
only
gave
me
life，but
also
brought
me
up
with
endless
love
and
support，
so
proud
of
my
every.I
still
remember
once
I
was
seriously
ill.They
were
so
and
almost
kept
me
company
the
whole
night.Now
I'm
Grade
3.
for
me，my
parents
can
understand
my
stressful
condition
often
communicate
with
me
with
encouraging
words.Furthermore，they
give
me
enough
personal
space，which
I
appreciate
it\
so
much.
I
should
study
hard.When
I
grow
up，I
will
become
useful
person
and
make
my
parents
a
happy
life.
Passage
3　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mom
and
I
am
fighting.We
used
to
get
up
so
well.But
these
days，she
has
been
arguing
with
me
about
me
not
come
home.She
thinks
I
should
spend
more
time
help
her
with
the
housework
instead
going
out
a
lot.In
her
eyes，I'm
just
a
lazy
boy
whom
only
loves
playing.The
fact
is
that
some
of
my
friends
and
I
are
going
to
different
school
soon.So
I
want
to
spend
as
many
time
as
I
can
with
her
now.I
know
I
should
try
to
understand
the
situation
from
her
point
of
a
view.But
I
hope
she
can
understand
how
important
these
friends
are
to
me.
答案　
My
mom
and
I
fighting.We
used
to
get
so
well.But
these
days，she
has
been
arguing
with
me
about
me
not
home.She
thinks
I
should
spend
more
time
her
with
the
housework
instead
going
out
a
lot.In
her
eyes，I'm
just
a
lazy
boy
only
loves
playing.The
fact
is
that
some
of
my
friends
and
I
are
going
to
different
soon.So
I
want
to
spend
as
time
as
I
can
with
now.I
know
I
should
try
to
understand
the
situation
from
her
point
of
a\
view.But
I
hope
she
can
understand
how
important
these
friends
are
to
me.
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It
was
a
year
ago
when
Joshua
got
a
bike
for
Christmas，but
he
rode
it
every
day.One
morning，he
suddenly
found
the
bike
gone.Ran
to
his
front
yard，he
saw
a
man
loading
it
into
his
car.He
shouted，but
the
man
drive
off.As
a
devoted
Christian，he
told
his
dad
he
real
forgave
the
thief.What's
more，he
wanted
the
thief
know
he
was
forgiven.So
the
next
day，he
posted
the
message
on
a
poster－board
and
put
it
in
the
front
yard：“To
the
person
who
stole
my
bike；You
hurt
my
feeling.But
I
am
a
Christian
and
I
forgive
him！”When
he
left
for
home
the
next
morning，at
the
end
of
the
driveway，the
bike
was
back
with
new
brakes.
答案　
It
was
a
year
ago
Joshua
got
a
bike
for
Christmas，
he
rode
it
every
day.One
morning，he
suddenly
found
the
bike
gone.
to
his
front
yard，he
saw
a
man
loading
it
into
his
car.He
shouted，but
the
man
off.As
a
devoted
Christian，he
told
his
dad
he
forgave
the
thief.What's
more，he
wanted
the
thief
know
he
was
forgiven.So
the
next
day，he
posted
message
on
a
poster－board
and
put
it
in
the
front
yard：“To
the
person
who
stole
my
bike；You
hurt
my.But
I
am
a
Christian
and
I
forgive！”When
he
left
for\
home
the
next
morning，at
the
end
of
the
driveway，the
bike
was
back
with
new
brakes.
Passage
5　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A
recent
survey
shows
that
many
students
have
got
into
some
bad
living
habit，which
do
great
harm
to
their
health.
As
we
all
know
it，health
is
more
important
than
wealth.Without
a
healthy
body，you
cannot
do
everything
even
if
you
are
a
millionaire.In
order
keep
healthy，it's
necessary
to
get
rid
of
unhealthy
habits
and
form
good
ones.
First
of
all，eat
a
healthy
breakfast
is
a
great
way
to
start
the
day.You
should
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables，which
are
rich
of
vitamins.Secondly，getting
enough
sleep.Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
make
you
feel
great
all
day
long.Lastly，take
exercise
every
day
to
make
your
body
strong.
As
long
as
you
form
health
habits
and
keep
them，you'll
have
a
strong
body
and
live
the
healthy
life.
答案　
A
recent
survey
shows
that
many
students
have
got
into
some
bad
living，which
do
great
harm
to
their
health.
As
we
all
know
it\，health
is
more
important
than
wealth.Without
a
healthy
body，you
cannot
do
even
if
you
are
a
millionaire.In
order
keep
healthy，it's
necessary
to
get
rid
of
unhealthy
habits
and
form
good
ones.
First
of
all，
a
healthy
breakfast
is
a
great
way
to
start
the
day.You
should
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables，which
are
rich
vitamins.Secondly，
enough
sleep.Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
you
feel
great
all
day
long.Lastly，take
exercise
every
day
to
make
your
body
strong.
As
long
as
you
form
habits
and
keep
them，you'll
have
a
strong
body
and
live
healthy
life.
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here
are
the
information
about
Manchester
University.It
is
about
200
miles
far
away
from
London，and
it
has
a
very
big
schoolyard.You
can
live
in
the
school
or
near
the
school.They
have
all
sorts
of
course.I'm
sure
you
will
find
one
you
like
it.I
know
you
are
particular
interested
in
Human
Rights.So
I
will
see
that
there
is
anything
in
their
websites.I'll
send
my
friend
Charlie
meet
you
at
the
airport
when
you
arrived.You
met
him
a
few
years
ago，but
he
has
changed
a
lot
since
then.Both
your
aunt
or
I
look
forward
to
seeing
you
again.
答案　
Here
the
information
about
Manchester
University.It
is
about
200
miles
far\
away
from
London，and
it
has
a
very
big
schoolyard.You
can
live
in
the
school
or
near
the
school.They
have
all
sorts
of.I'm
sure
you
will
find
one
you
like
it\.I
know
you
are
interested
in
Human
Rights.So
I
will
see
there
is
anything
their
websites.I'll
send
my
friend
Charlie
meet
you
at
the
airport
when
you.You
met
him
a
few
years
ago，but
he
has
changed
a
lot
since
then.Both
your
aunt
I
look
forward
to
seeing
you
again.
Passage
7　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jim，
Our
friend
Li
Ming
will
leave
to
Shanghai
to
study.So
we
are
going
to
have
a
get－together
on
3：30
this
Friday
afternoon.He
lived
at
No.225
Dongfeng
Street.It
is
not
very
difficulty
to
find
your
way
to
your
home.Take
a
No.2
bus，the
stop
of
that
is
on
the
left
of
your
university，and
get
off
at
second
crossing.There
is
a
cinema
cross
the
street.Turning
right
at
the
corner，and
you
will
find
Dongfeng
Street.Li
Ming's
home
is
200
yards
down
the
street
on
the
right.There
is
a
post
office
is
opposite
to
Li
Ming's
home.
Yours，
Zhang
Hua
答案　
Dear
Jim，
Our
friend
Li
Ming
will
leave中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
命题趋势
考查的词类覆盖面广，分布合理。错误
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)包括词法、句法、语篇结构、行文逻辑等，涉及名词、冠词、代词、介词、形容词、副词、连词、动词时态、动词语态、非谓语动词、主谓一致等语法知识。在改错题中，占相当大比例的主要是动词的形式变化、一般现在时第三人称单数、一般过去时、－ed分词、－ing分词及被动语态等。其他如名词复数的变化、主谓一致、词与词之间的搭配、词法、句法及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面也会交替出现。
2.
短文改错试题的难度保持平稳，体裁以记
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)叙文为主，记叙文较说明文和议论文更易理解；句子结构以简单句为主，过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。句子的长度是控制难度的一个重要因素，句子越长难度越高。从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。2·1·c·n·j·y
3.
从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查要点的主要方面有：
短文改错做题技巧
要想在高考英语中做好短文改错，按照“四步走”，实施“四查法”可有效减少不必要的失误。具体做法如下：
一、“四步走”
1.通读全文，了解大意
注意语篇结构和行文逻辑，不能在未了解大意的情况下就按部就班地一行一行地改。
2.先易后难，缩小范围
通读短文的过程中，可以把
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)其中明显的错误找出来，这样就缩小了范围，为下一步的分析判断提供更充分的依据，也能把注意力集中在较难判断的句子上。
如：Susan
think
Paul
is
just
the
man
she
can
depend
on.此句中谓语没用单数第三人称形式就是一个明显的错误。
3.把握句意，逐句判断
逐句扫描，各个击破。为了使每行长
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)度相差不大，往往一个句子分成两行或三行，而一个句子是否有错只有看完整个句子，甚至还要瞻前顾后才能判断出错误之处。所以在通读全文时，要以句子为最小单位，千万别以行为单位。请记住下面的口诀：
动词形，名词数，注意形和副；
非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。
4.反复通读，复查验证
在大部分错误都改正之后，如果还有拿不准的，应
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)当再次通读短文，利用语感做最后判断；也可以根据此类题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来定夺。错词一般有7～8个，多词和缺词约有2～3处。
二、“四查法”
1.左顾右盼查名词
要注意搜寻名词之前及其本身
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)出现的错误。看该名词前是否缺限定词，该用何种限定词。尤其要查冠词的使用情况。碰到代词要弄清它代替什么。当名词前有形容词时更要加倍注意。如：Catherine，to
whom
you
can
turn
for
help,
has
good
knowledge
of
Greek.(knowledge为不可数名词，在has之后加上不定冠词a)
2.“语”“时”俱进查动词
认真分析动词所用的时态、
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)语态。尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息，“语”“时”俱进地反复推敲。如：Martin
gained
so
much
confidence
that
he
goes
back
to
school...(goes改为went)
3.启承转合查连词
为使短文结构严谨，短文中往往会出现好多连词
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)。这些连词的使用，在结构和意义上都要通顺流畅，恰如其分。如：It
started
to
rise
higher
again.So
it
was
still
too
close
to
the
water.
(So改为But)
4.文通理顺查逻辑
文通即行文合乎英语词法、句
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)法；理顺指行文逻辑符合人们的认知规律，即符合常理。如：The
air
keeping
the
balloon
up
was
escaping
quickly
and
the
balloon
was
coming
up.(第二个up改为down)
考点一、词法型错误
1.冠词
【方法指导】
冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)及定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。
(1)After
a
hour
or
so
we
began
to
feel
very
frightened.
解析　因hour以元音音素开头。
答案　a→an
(2)I
decided
to
climb
the
tree
to
see
where
we
were.
解析　因此处并非特指，而是泛指。
答案　the→a
(3)Good
health
is
person's
most
valuable
possession.
解析　这里的a表泛指。
答案　person's前加a
(4)Maybe
you
could
come
during
a
winter
holidays.
解析　此处的winter
holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。
答案　a→the
(5)Suddenly，I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
caught
a
sight
of
my
English
teacher
in
the
crowd.
解析　catch
sight
of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见”
答案　去掉a
2.名词
【方法指导】
名词的考查主要包括名词的
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。
(6)We
stopped
to
re
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)st
for
a
while
and
to
drink
some
waters
from
a
stream.
解析　因“水”为物质名词，不可数。
答案　waters→water
(7)There
are
branch
library
in
many
villages.
解析　因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。
答案　library→libraries
(8)I
hope
that
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)you
two
could
come
and
visit
us
some
times
soon.
21
cnjy
com
解析　some
time意为“某时”。
答案　times→time
(9)They
were
eag
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)er
to
know
everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
question.
解析　因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots
of。
答案　question→questions
3.代词
【方法指导】
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
(10)David
pointed
t
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)o
a
path
which
it
he
thought
would
probably
lead
to
a
village.
解析　因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。
答案　去掉it
(11)When
we
walked
to
the
car，Bill
smiled
and
shook
head.
解析　汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake
one's
head。
答案　head前加his
(12)We
climb
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)everywhere，not
only
in
America.They
have
been
to
Europe
many
times.
解析　前后人称不一致。
答案　They→We
(13)The
Smiths
did
his
best
to
make
me
feel
at
home.
解析　因前面的the
Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。
答案　his→their
4.形容词与副词
【方法指导】
形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)包括近义形容词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以－ly结尾的副词和不是以－ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词－ing形式和动词－ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a
bit，a
little，much，far，many，a
lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by
far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。
(14)Last
Sunday，police
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
cars
hurried
to
the
taller
building
in
New
York.
解析　因从含义上看此处应是最高级。
答案　taller→tallest
(15)As
a
result，peopl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
in
the
modern
world
generally
live
much
more
longer
than
people
in
the
past.
解析　因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。
答案　去掉more
5.介词与介词短语
【方法指导】
短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，repl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory
over，advantage
over，respect
for，prize
for等。
(16)Bill
insisted
in
staying
near
the
car.
解析　insist
on为固定搭配。
答案　in→on
(17)When
they
came
down，the
police
were
angry
to
them.
解析　要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be
angry
with
sb。
答案　to→with
(18)Most
people
can
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
quickly
get
for
help
from
a
doctor
or
go
to
a
hospital
since
they
are
ill.
解析　因其前的get是及物动词。
答案　去掉for
6.动词
【方法指导】
除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。
(19)Charles
and
Linda
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
were
seeing
near
the
top
of
the
building.
解析　因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。
答案　seeing→seen
(20)Books
may
be
keep
for
four
weeks.
解析　因此处要用被动语态。
答案　keep→kept
(21)...and
let
you
know
when
the
book
you
want
has
returned.
解析　因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。
答案　returned前加been
(22)Uncle
Ben
will
also
go
back
for
Christmas.
解析　由句意可知。
答案　go→come
(23)They
eager
to
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)know
everything
about
China
and
asked
me
lots
of
questions.
解析　因此处缺谓语动词。
答案　eager前加were
7.非谓语动词
【方法指导】
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
(24)David
and
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
I
wanted
go
off
to
find
help
but
Bill
insisted
on
staying
near
the
car.
解析　因为want后要接不定式。
答案　wanted后加to
(25)...rather
than
go
into
the
forest
and
getting
lost.
www-2-1-cnjy-com
解析　因为get与其前的go并列。
答案　getting→get
(26)Modern
people
kno
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)w
more
about
health，have
better
food，and
to
live
in
clearer
surroundings.
解析　因为live与其前的know，have并列。
答案　去掉live前的to
(27)...you
pay
the
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)cost
of
send
a
postcard，the
librarian
will
write
to
you.
解析　因为介词后接动名词作宾语。
答案　send→sending
考点二、句法型错误
【方法指导】
句法型错误包括：主谓一致；各种从句的引导词；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
1.主谓一致
对主谓一致的考查主要根据语法、意义、就近、就远等一致原则，判断人称和数是否与主语保持一致。常考点如下：21世纪教育网版权所有
(1)由or，nor，ei
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ther...or，neither...nor，not
only...but
also等连接并列主语时，谓语动词的单复数遵循就近原则；
(2)当主语是A
with/together
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
with/as
well
as/including/...B时，谓语动词的单复数由A决定，遵循就远原则；
(3)动名词、不定式或名词从句作主语时，谓语动词常用单数；
(4)“half/most/part/the
rest/分数/百分数＋of＋名词”作主语时，谓语动词要和of之后的名词的单复数保持一致；
(5)a
quantity
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
of/quantities
of后既可接复数名词，也可接不可数名词，其谓语动词一般取决于quantity的单复数。
对点练习：
(1)(2014·四川)Today，I
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)m
going
to
talk
with
(about)
what
you
should
do
when
a
fire
alarm
go
off.
解析　该句的主语为a
fire
alarm，为单数名词，其谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
答案　go→goes
2.连接词
连接词主要包括名词性从句中的连接词，定
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)语从句中的关系词，状语从句中的连接词，以及主从复合句和并列句中的连接词等。特别是对which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等的考查。
对点练习：
(2)People
wo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)uld
like
to
take
part
in
this
contest
should
go
to
the
office
of
the
Students'
Union
and
sign
up.
解析　定语从句缺少引导词。此句中的引导词who或that在从句中作主语，不能省略。
答案　People后加who或that
3.句子成分赘余
句子成分赘余一般有如下几种类型：(
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)1)受母语思维影响，出现汉语式结构，造成冗言；(2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠；(3)介词多余；(4)助动词、系动词多余；(5)多冠词；(6)定语从句中成分重复；(7)程度副词和频率副词，如much，more，often等的多余；(8)小品词to多余等。
对点练习：
(3)(2014·四川)I
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)f
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing
and
(or)
hurt，tell
your
teacher
immediately.
解析　该句的意思是“若发现有人失踪或受伤了，就要立刻告诉老师”。句中的if引导条件状语从句，when多余。
答案　去掉when
4.缺词错误
缺词现象常见的有：(1)
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)缺系动词；(2)缺介词；(3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；(4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；(5)缺连接词；(6)缺否定词；(7)缺不定式符号to等。
对点练习：
(4)(2014·陕西)He
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.
解析　want作“想要做某事”讲时后接带to的不定式。
答案　wanted后加to
考点三、
语篇型错误
【方法指导】
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
(1)(2014·浙江)I
wa
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s
taking
a
train
to
London's
Victoria
Station.I
had
noticed
that
the
carriage
was
noise
(noisy)
and
filled
with
people.
解析　考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。
答案　去掉had
(2)(2014·浙江)T
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)hen
everyone
in
the
carriage
began
searching
(∧
for)
the
ticket，which
was
eventually
found
under
a
seat
several
rows
from
his
owner.
解析　此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。
答案　his→its
(3)(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)As
(∧
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
a)
result，the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.
解析　根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。
答案　somewhere→everywhere
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When
I
was
a
chi
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ld，I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.I
think
I
would
be
happy
there.Now
I
am
living
in
a
city，but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.There
the
air
is
clean
or
the
mountains
are
green.Unfortunately，on
the
development
of
industrialization，the
environment
has
been
polluted.Lots
of
studies
have
been
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
seriously
problem.The
airs
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier.Much
rare
animals
are
dying
out.We
must
found
ways
to
protect
your
environment.If
we
fail
to
do
so，we'll
live
to
regret
it.
答案　
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One
day，littl
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
Tony
went
to
a
shopping
center
with
his
parent.It
was
very
crowded.Tony
saw
a
toy
on
a
shop
window.He
liked
it
so
very
much
that
he
quickly
walked
into
the
shop.After
looks
at
the
toy
for
some
time，he
turned
around
and
found
where
his
parents
were
missing.Tony
was
scared
and
begun
to
cry.A
woman
saw
him
crying
and
telling
him
to
wait
outside
a
shop.Five
minutes
later，Tony
saw
parents.Mom
said，“How
nice
to
see
you
again！Dad
and
I
were
terrible
worried.”Tony
promised
her
that
this
would
never
happen
again.21教育网
答案　
Passage
3　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi,
Janice，
It's
been
a
mont
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)h
since
I
came
to
this
new
school
and
I
really
want
share
with
you
some
of
the
problems
I
have
been
experiencing.www.21-cn-jy.com
As
I
tell
yo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)u
last
time,
I
made
three
new
friend
here.We
hang
out
together
during
lunch
and
after
school.We've
been
spending
a
lot
of
time
sing
in
karaoke
bars.It's
been
three
Saturdays
now
and
it
really
costs
me
many.And
I
started
to
see
this
as
a
time－wasting
activity!
In
fact，I
don't
like
to
go
anymore,
so
I'm
afraid
I'll
lose
their
friendship.How
do
you
think
I
should
do?
If
you
are
me，would
you
talk
to
him?21·世纪
教育网
Please
help
with
me
and
give
me
some
advice.
Grace
答案　
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
soccer
co
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ach
retired
in
last
week.I
wanted
to
do
anything
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.My
mum
makes
the
better
biscuits
in
the
world，so
I
decide
to
ask
her
for
help.Mum
taught
me
some
basic
step
of
baking.I
insisted
on
doing
most
of
the
baking
myself.I
thought
the
biscuits
were
really
well.My
only
mistake
was
that
I
dropped
some
on
the
floor
after
I
was
packing
them
up.
At
a
party，my
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)coach，with
a
biscuit
in
his
mouth，asked
surprisingly
who
made
them
and
joked，“I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”
My
favorite
pictur
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)e
at
the
party
is
of
my
coach
and
me
enjoy
the
biscuits
with
happy
laughter!
答案　
Passage
5　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
old
classroom
was
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)interesting
because
three
side
of
the
classroom
were
made
from
glass.I
enjoyed
sit
close
to
the
windows
and
looking
at
the
view.On
the
left－hand
side
of
the
class，I
could
easy
see
the
football
field.In
the
mornings，it
was
full
of
students
exercising.The
view
from
the
back
of
the
classroom
is
also
splendid.Close
to
the
school
there
was
a
beautiful
park
with
many
trees
around
them.Farther
in
the
distance，I
could
not
enjoy
the
view
of
snowy
mountains.On
the
right
side
of
the
class
was
the
road.I
was
always
interested
to
see
the
drivers
in
hurry
in
the
morning.The
position
of
the
classroom
with
its
view
made
me
felt
like
I
was
dreaming.If
I
was
only
a
child
when
I
studied
in
that
classroom，I
will
never
forget
it.
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly
five
years
be
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)fore，and
with
the
help
by
our
father，my
sister
and
I
planted
some
cherry
tomatoes(圣女果)in
our
back
garden.Since
then—for
all
these
year—we
had
been
allowing
tomatoes
to
self－seed
where
they
please.As
result，the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.The
fruits
are
small
in
size，but
juicy
and
taste.There
are
so
much
that
we
often
share
them
with
our
neighbors.Although
we
allow
tomato
plants
to
grow
in
the
same
place
year
after
year，but
we
have
never
had
any
disease
or
insect
attack
problems.We
are
growing
wonderfully
tomatoes
at
no
cost!21·cn·jy·com
Passage
7　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
was
taking
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
a
train
to
London's
Victoria
Station.I
had
noticed
that
the
carriage
was
noise
and
filled
with
people.
Before
long，a
t
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rain
inspector
comes
to
check
our
tickets.A
passenger
realized
he
couldn't
find
his
ticket
but
became
quite
upset.Then
everyone
in
the
carriage
began
searching
the
ticket，which
was
eventually
found
under
a
seat
several
rows
from
his
owner.The
person
who
found
a
ticket
smiled
with
pleasure
at
his
success.
No
one
in
the
car
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)riage
had
previous
spoken
to
or
even
noticed
the
ticket－owner
before.Yet
they
had
so
quickly
offered
the
strangers
their
help.If
we
could
show
concern
to
others
on
need，the
world
would
be
a
better
place
to
live
in.
Passage
8　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，boys
and
girls
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)！Today，I
am
going
to
talk
with
what
you
should
do
when
a
fire
alarm
go
off.If
you
hear
the
alarm，stand
in
line
at
the
door
and
wait
your
teacher
to
lead
you
outside.Stay
close
to
your
teacher
and
classmate.Don't
panic
or
get
out
of
line，and
trying
to
remain
quiet
and
calmly.Soon
the
firefighters
will
come
and
put
out
a
fire.If
it's
a
false
alarm
and
there
is
no
fire，your
teacher
will
lead
us
back
to
the
classroom.If
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing
and
hurt，tell
your
teacher
immediately.
【语篇导读】　这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。
Passage
9　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\
)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
father
took
me
ou
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
camping
for
the
first
time
when
I
was
seven.He
wanted
teach
me
about
animals，insects
and
trees.My
uncles
all
come
along
with
bows
and
arrows
for
hunting.
One
evening
at
sun
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)set，we
sat
by
the
fire，have
our
barbecue.Just
then
a
bird
was
flying
over
us.My
uncles
immediate
jumped
up
and
shot
their
arrows
on
the
bird.Neither
of
the
arrows
hit
the
target.Suddenly
the
arrows
was
flying
down
at
us
from
the
sky－they
were
looked
like
rain！We
ran
to
escape
but
fortunately
no
one
was
injured.
That
day
I
didn't
lea
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rn
much
about
animals，insects
or
trees，but
I
learnt
a
impressive
lesson
about
gravity!
Passage
10　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jeremy
and
Alice，
Although
we've
been
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)delighted
to
have
you
as
neighbors，we're
hoping
to
settle
something
that
bothers
to
us.In
a
word，your
dog—Cleo.
We've
called
sev
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)eral
time
about
Cleo's
early
morning
barking.It
is
difficult
to
understanding
why
she
barks
every
minute
she's
outside.The
early
morning
barking
have
been
disturbing
us
as
we
are
often
up
all
night
with
the
baby.Beside，Cleo
tends
to
bark
a
average
of
six
hours
a
day.This
morning
she
starts
barking
even
before
5
o'clock.That
is
too
much
for
us，considering
how
closely
the
houses
are.
We
apprecia
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)te
our
apologies
and
goodwill，but
we
hope
that
you
can
figure
a
good
way
of
settling
the
matter.
Sincerely，
Passage
11　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
book
I'm
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)reading
of
talks
about
afternoon
tea
in
Britain.It
is
said
to
have
started
in
the
early
1800's.Have
tea
in
the
late
afternoon
provides
a
bridge
between
lunch
and
dinner，that
might
not
be
served
until
8
o'clock
at
night.This
custom
soon
becomes
another
meal
of
day.Interesting，it
had
a
connection
by
the
British
porcelain(瓷器)
industry.Tea
in
China
was
traditionally
drank
from
cups
without
handles.When
tea
got
popular
in
Britain，there
was
a
crying
need
for
good
cup
with
handles
to
suit
British
habits.This
made
for
the
grow
in
the
porcelain
industry.
答案　
Passage
12　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today
we
had
a
chemis
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)try
test.I
found
the
test
difficulty，but
I
tried
hardly
to
do
it.Suddenly
Mary,
my
best
friend，asking
me
to
let
her
to
copy
my
answers.After
think
for
some
time，I
let
her
copy
my
answers.But
after
the
test，all
of
us
were
called
to
the
teacher's
office.The
teacher
was
angry
because
we
had
same
answers
in
the
tests.We
were
warned
not
to
cheat
again
so
she
would
need
to
see
our
parents.I
was
very
upset.I
didn't
cheat.I
was
just
helping
a
friend.Why
does
she
punish
me?
答案　
Passage
13　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
father
an
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
I
stayed
at
the
South
Lake
Hotel
for
a
week
when
we
visit
Beijing
last
month.
It
is
in
the
downtown
area,
but
it
is
easy
to
go
to
anywhere
from
the
hotel
by
public
transport.
We
lived
in
a
c
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)omfortably
double－room
with
a
big
bath.
What
I
liked
best
were
the
free
high－speed
Internet
connection
in
the
room.
I
checked
my
email
messages
every
day.
I
also
shared
for
my
friends
many
photos
taking
in
Beijing.
The
food
was
wonderful
with
reasonable
prices,
and
we
enjoyed
several
local
dish.
It
is
such
gre
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)at
hotel
that
I
would
recommend
it
to
any
friend
of
me
who
is
going
to
Beijing.
答案　
Passage
14　
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
was
playing
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)at
my
cousin
house.Since
his
family
was
rich
than
mine，he
had
more
toys
than
I
did.There
was
one
on
particular
I'd
always
wanted.I
put
into
my
pocket
when
he
wasn't
looking.I
guessed，even
at
that
age，I
would
never
be
able
to
enjoy
to
playing
with
the
toy
or
faced
my
cousin
again；I
would
always
know
I'd
done
something
wrong.Late
on，my
aunt
drove
my
home.When
she
dropped
me
off，I
pulled
out
the
toy
slow
and
gave
it
back.She
knows
what
had
happened，but
she
thanked
me
and
ever
mentioned
it
again.
答案　
A组　模拟基础题
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，everyone.It's
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
nice
to
speak
about
that
we
can
do
for
our
school，and
I
think
small
actions
can
make
big
difference.The
first
thing
we
can
do
is
to
make
our
campus
more
beautifully.Every
one
of
them
may
plant
a
tree
in
the
school
or
to
organize
a
thorough
cleaning
on
the
campus.We
can
also
form
a
good
habit
of
putting
rubbishes
into
trashcans.Never
forget
to
turn
off
the
lights
and
close
the
doors.We
should
not
leave
the
tap
water
run
or
waste
any
materials
in
the
laboratory
class.In
that
case，I
believe
we'll
turn
our
school
in
a
better
place
to
study
and
live
in.21
cnjy
com
How
I
wish
we
can
enjoy
a
better
school
life!
Thank
you
for
listening!
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jack，
Welcome
to
my
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)chool！Upon
your
arrival，there
will
be
a
party
for
you
organizing
by
my
classmates.You
may
attend
to
English
classes
to
feel
a
differently
learning
style.After
that，you
can
go
to
your
host
family
that
you
can
experience
the
Chinese
way
of
life.You
can
have
meals
together
chatting
about
whatever
interest
you.
The
host
fami
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ly
will
also
show
you
off
some
famous
scenic
spots.You
can
see
people
selling
kites
everywhere
because
our
city
was
home
to
kites.There
are
varieties
of
kites
to
choose.So
isn't
that
a
good
idea
to
buy
some
for
your
friends？Write
to
me
unless
you
have
any
questions
about
the
schedule.
Yours，
Li
Hua
Passage
3　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
am
very
happ
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)y
that
you
are
interested
in
the
protection
of
antelopes
in
China，so
I'd
like
to
tell
you
everything
about
it.
In
the
past，some
peop
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)le
kill
antelopes
for
their
free
fur
which
can
be
made
into
many
beautiful
things
that
are
very
expensive.As
the
result，the
number
of
antelopes
was
decreasing
day
by
day.Now
things
are
begun
to
change.The
government
and
the
local
people
take
powerful
measures
to
protect
antelopes
so
that
they
will
not
die
in
the
future.They
had
taken
many
effective
measures，such
as
making
strict
laws
to
protecting
antelopes，setting
up
several
reserves
for
the
antelopes，and
so
on.Of
course，it's
strong
prohibited
to
buy
or
sell
anything
made
of
antelopes
fur.
Nowadays，to
our
joy，t
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)here
are
much
more
and
more
antelopes
in
China.What's
more，their
living
conditions
have
greatly
improved.
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In
the
summer
hol
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)iday，we
travelled
to
Qingdao
and
paid
visit
to
my
uncle
there.It's
a
long
and
bored
journey.But
the
moment
I
arrived，I
fall
in
love
with
the
city.It's
such
beautiful
a
city
that
I
can
hardly
find
any
word
to
describe
it.The
streets
are
cleaning
and
the
sky
is
blue.If
you
walk
along
the
coast，you
can
feel
the
wind
to
blowing
on
your
face.The
sea
is
vast
and
sometimes
you
can
find
a
boat
or
a
ship.You
may
also
do
some
fishing
as
far
as
it
is
permitted.Moreover，I
think
the
driver
there
drive
too
fast
in
the
street.You
can
never
be
too
careless
when
crossing
the
street.
Passage
5　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As
we
all
know，e
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)veryone
have
a
dream.I
have
dreamed
of
being
a
doctor
since
I
entered
into
the
primary
school.Nowadays
with
modern
life
go
rapidly，many
people
suffer
from
different
kind
of
diseases，both
mentally
and
physically.As
a
result，doctors
are
in
great
need
at
home
and
abroad.My
dream
is
to
become
successful
doctor，helping
to
save
people's
lives.Although
to
be
a
good
doctor
was
very
difficult，I
will
do
whatever
I
can
to
keep
everyone
health.To
make
my
dream
come
true，I
have
told
me
over
and
over
again
that
I'll
concentrate
more
to
studies.After
all，only
by
working
hardly
can
one
succeed.【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We
all
have
dreams，bu
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)t
not
all
these
dreams
can
come
true.People
give
up
his
dreams
for
this
or
that
reason.Those
who
dreams
have
come
true
have
at
least
one
thing
in
common，which
is，they
always
hold
fast
to
their
dreams.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Marie
Curie
set
us
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)the
good
example.In
1898，Marie
has
found
a
new
element.In
order
to
prove
her
discovery，she
had
to
get
it
and
showed
it
to
the
world.Then
to
get
the
new
element
become
her
dream
and
goal
of
her
life.After
four
years'
hard
work，Marie
and
her
husband
last
saw
the
dim
blue
light
of
the
new
element—radium.
Hold
fast
to
your
dr
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)eams，no
matter
how
big
and
small
they
are.The
path
to
your
dreams
may
not
be
smoothly
and
wide，even
some
sacrifices
are
needed，but
hold
on
to
the
end.
Passage
7　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'd
like
to
give
you
some
advices
on
how
to
learn
Chinese
well.
First，it
wa
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)s
important
to
take
a
Chinese
course，as
you'll
be
able
to
learn
from
the
teacher
and
practising
with
your
fellow
students.Then，it
also
help
to
watch
TV
and
read
books，newspapers
and
magazines
in
the
Chinese
whenever
possible.It
will
make
you
familiar
to
Chinese
characters
and
enlarge
your
vocabulary
even
before
you
notice
it!
Besides，it
is
a
go
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)od
idea
learn
and
sing
Chinese
songs，because
by
doing
so
you'll
learn
and
remember
Chinese
words
more
easy.You
can
also
make
more
Chinese
friends，they
will
tell
you
a
lot
about
China
and
help
you
learn
Chinese.Try
to
speak
Chinese
as
many
as
possible.
Passage
8　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It's
pleasure
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)for
me
to
have
a
chance
to
make
a
short
speech
today.I
have
found
that
some
of
my
classmates
study
deeply
into
the
night.What's
more，they
did
not
spare
any
time
to
exercise
during
the
day.But
they
are
less
energetic
than
the
others
in
class
and
can't
always
stay
focusing
on
their
lessons.Worse
than
that，some
of
them
seldom
have
breakfast，with
which
is
also
a
bad
habit
and
will
certainly
do
harm
for
their
health.
Obvious，it's
imp
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ortant
for
us
to
have
enough
sleep
and
a
proper
diet.We
must
learn
to
make
wise
use
of
our
time，and
only
in
this
way
can
we
keep
fit
and
study
well.I
hope
my
advices
can
help
you.
Thanks
for
listen.
Passage
9　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，Peter.I'm
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)very
grateful
for
your
concern
about
my
coming
exam.To
tell
you
truth，I
have
been
busy
prepare
for
the
exam
recently.Some
classmates
are
feeling
real
stressed
due
to
the
exam，but
I
don't
take
them
so
seriously.I
always
learn
in
a
relaxing
mood
and
I'm
making
a
great
progress.Now
that
I
had
tried
my
best，it
doesn't
matter
much
to
me
what
the
result
is.
In
my
opinio
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)n，we
should
keep
a
good
balance
among
our
study，rest
or
exercise.I
believe
we
can
be
succeeded
if
we
prepare
for
the
exam
in
a
proper
way.【出处：21教育名师】
I'd
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
good
advices.【版权所有：21教育】
Passage
10　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mother
is
very
goo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d
for
raising
plants
and
flowers.
We
have
plants
and
flowers
indoors
and
outdoors
all
the
years
round.
Some
of
our
plants
were
very
small
several
years
before,
but
now
they
are
large
and
very
beautifully.
On
top
of
our
roof
there
is
a
larger
glass－enclosed
green－house.
All
our
friends
love
to
come
to
our
house
see
the
beautiful
world
my
mother
had
made
for
us.
Every
morning
and
evening
we
see
my
mother
taken
care
of
her
plants
like
little
children.
As
her
real
children
have
grown
up,
and
my
mother
devotes
more
time
to
her
garden.
This
is
the
very
good
way
of
spending
her
free
time.
B组　模拟能力题
Passage
1　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
saying
that
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
practice
makes
perfect
mean
that
after
you
have
plenty
of
practice
in
what
you
were
doing，you
will
be
perfect
in
it.If
you
want
improve
your
study
and
work，remembering
that
the
most
important
thing
is
how
to
put
the
knowledge
you
have
learned
into
practice.For
example，when
learning
a
language，though
you
can
make
full
use
for
your
talent，practice
is
necessary.If
you
only
learn
grammar
rules
by
the
heart
and
don't
do
enough
exercise，it's
certain
that
you
can't
understand
the
language
perfectly.But
if
you
real
practise
a
lot，maybe
you
will
understand
them
much
better.In
this
way，you
can
apply
that
you
have
learned
better.
Passage
2　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm
very
gratef
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ul
for
my
parents.They
not
only
gave
me
life，but
also
brought
me
up
with
endless
love
and
support，feel
so
proud
of
my
every
improvements.I
still
remember
once
I
was
seriously
ill.They
were
so
worrying
and
almost
kept
me
company
the
whole
night.Now
I'm
Grade
3.
Lucky
for
me，my
parents
can
understand
my
stressful
condition
but
often
communicate
with
me
with
encouraging
words.Furthermore，they
give
me
enough
personal
space，which
I
appreciate
it
so
much.
I
should
study
har
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)d.When
I
grow
up，I
will
become
an
useful
person
and
make
my
parents
lived
a
happy
life.21教育名师原创作品
Passage
3　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My
mom
and
I
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)m
fighting.We
used
to
get
up
so
well.But
these
days，she
has
been
arguing
with
me
about
me
not
come
home.She
thinks
I
should
spend
more
time
help
her
with
the
housework
instead
going
out
a
lot.In
her
eyes，I'm
just
a
lazy
boy
whom
only
loves
playing.The
fact
is
that
some
of
my
friends
and
I
are
going
to
different
school
soon.So
I
want
to
spend
as
many
time
as
I
can
with
her
now.I
know
I
should
try
to
understand
the
situation
from
her
point
of
a
view.But
I
hope
she
can
understand
how
important
these
friends
are
to
me.
Passage
4　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It
was
a
year
a
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)go
when
Joshua
got
a
bike
for
Christmas，but
he
rode
it
every
day.One
morning，he
suddenly
found
the
bike
gone.Ran
to
his
front
yard，he
saw
a
man
loading
it
into
his
car.He
shouted，but
the
man
drive
off.As
a
devoted
Christian，he
told
his
dad
he
real
forgave
the
thief.What's
more，he
wanted
the
thief
know
he
was
forgiven.So
the
next
day，he
posted
the
message
on
a
poster－board
and
put
it
in
the
front
yard：“To
the
person
who
stole
my
bike；You
hurt
my
feeling.But
I
am
a
Christian
and
I
forgive
him！”When
he
left
for
home
the
next
morning，at
the
end
of
the
driveway，the
bike
was
back
with
new
brakes.
Passage
5　
假定英语课上老师要求同
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A
recent
sur
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)vey
shows
that
many
students
have
got
into
some
bad
living
habit，which
do
great
harm
to
their
health.
As
we
all
kno
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)w
it，health
is
more
important
than
wealth.Without
a
healthy
body，you
cannot
do
everything
even
if
you
are
a
millionaire.In
order
keep
healthy，it's
necessary
to
get
rid
of
unhealthy
habits
and
form
good
ones.
First
of
all，eat
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)a
healthy
breakfast
is
a
great
way
to
start
the
day.You
should
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables，which
are
rich
of
vitamins.Secondly，getting
enough
sleep.Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
make
you
feel
great
all
day
long.Lastly，take
exercise
every
day
to
make
your
body
strong.
As
long
as
you
fo
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)rm
health
habits
and
keep
them，you'll
have
a
strong
body
and
live
the
healthy
life.
Passage
6　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here
are
the
infor
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)mation
about
Manchester
University.It
is
about
200
miles
far
away
from
London，and
it
has
a
very
big
schoolyard.You
can
live
in
the
school
or
near
the
school.They
have
all
sorts
of
course.I'm
sure
you
will
find
one
you
like
it.I
know
you
are
particular
interested
in
Human
Rights.So
I
will
see
that
there
is
anything
in
their
websites.I'll
send
my
friend
Charlie
meet
you
at
the
airport
when
you
arrived.You
met
him
a
few
years
ago，but
he
has
changed
a
lot
since
then.Both
your
aunt
or
I
look
forward
to
seeing
you
again.
Passage
7　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Jim，
Our
friend
Li
Mi
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ng
will
leave
to
Shanghai
to
study.So
we
are
going
to
have
a
get－together
on
3：30
this
Friday
afternoon.He
lived
at
No.225
Dongfeng
Street.It
is
not
very
difficulty
to
find
your
way
to
your
home.Take
a
No.2
bus，the
stop
of
that
is
on
the
left
of
your
university，and
get
off
at
second
crossing.There
is
a
cinema
cross
the
street.Turning
right
at
the
corner，and
you
will
find
Dongfeng
Street.Li
Ming's
home
is
200
yards
down
the
street
on
the
right.There
is
a
post
office
is
opposite
to
Li
Ming's
home.
Yours，
Zhang
Hua
Passage
8　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I
have
a
bicycle
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)
that
came
to
me
as
birthday
present
from
my
mum
and
dad
when
I
was
12.It
cost
about
1，200
yuan，that
was
half
of
my
father's
monthly
salary.The
bicycle
was
made
in
Shanghai
and
it's
color
is
red，my
favorite.Which
is
important
is
that
my
bicycle
plays
an
important
part
on
my
school
life.It
also
represent
the
deep
love
from
my
parents.But
I
ride
it
to
school
every
day.I
have
made
up
my
mind
to
work
hardly
so
that
I
can
repay
them
in
the
future.I
will
buy
a
car
to
drive
them
to
wherever
they
want
when
I
grow
up
because
the
car
is
faster
and
very
convenient
than
the
bike，especially
when
it
rains.
Passage
9　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线(
)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today
is
Sunday.The
s
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ky
is
full
of
sunshine，so
does
my
life.At
about
9：00
a.m.，I
go
to
the
bookstore
with
my
friends.There
was
a
lot
of
new
books.I
didn't
know
what
one
to
buy
because
these
books
were
all
useful
to
me.At
10：00，we
went
to
cinema.The
film
was
called
The
Earthquake
of
Tangshan
but
some
people
were
waiting
outside
the
booking
office.It
took
us
about
two
hours
to
see
it.Having
been
seen
the
film，everyone
was
deeply
moving.Some
of
my
friends
even
burst
into
tear.That's
a
really
wonderful
film.It
is
very
worth
seeing.
What
a
happy
day！I
hope
tomorrow
I
will
be
even
happier.
Passage
10　
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
Sir/Madam，
I'm
one
of
your
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customer.The
day
before
yesterday
I
bought
a
walkman
in
your
shop.
Before
I
le
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do
check
it
carefully
and
everything
was
all
right.When
I
got
home，therefore，I
found
a
fault
with
it.The
problem
is
what
the
“Play”
doesn't
work
at
all.Probable
it's
not
your
fault
and
so
is
mine.Anyhow，I
can't
solve
the
problem
in
person.
You
see，a
walkman
is
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great
useful
for
me
to
learn
English
and
I
cannot
wait
for
too
long
before
this
problem
is
solved.Hopefully
you
will
deal
with
the
walkman
without
delay，when
you
accept
my
letter.
Hoping
to
hear
of
you
in
the
earliest
possible
time!
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sincerely，
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Passage
1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear
teachers
and
schoolmates，
It's
great
h
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)onor
for
me
to
be
here
today
and
share
my
experience
of
learning
English
with
you.I
want
to
learn
English
well
to
take
a
better
job，but
I
learn
English
in
some
difference
ways.In
class，I
learn
new
words，useful
expressions
and
grammar
and
take
efforts
to
understand
the
texts
under
the
help
of
our
English
teacher.After
the
class，I
do
a
lot
of
exercises
prepare
for
the
college
entrance
examination.You
also
read
news
and
watch
videos
on
the
Internet
and
from
other
source.I
have
a
lot
of
fun
especial
when
learning
English
with
cartoon
movies.
Thanks
for
listening!
　
Passage
2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It
seemed
that
eve
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)ryone
is
studying
hard
for
the
College
Entrance
Examination.There
are
such
many
books
to
read.Nowadays，many
a
parent
expect
too
much
of
their
children.They
hope
their
sons
or
daughters
study
hard
in
order
to
get
great
colleges.It
is
the
reason
what
parents
are
strict
with
their
children.They
don't
know
what
they
do
with
has
become
a
heavy
burden
on
their
children.On
my
opinion，that
isn't
right.Instead，I
think
parents
should
create
a
proper
learned
environment
for
the
children
and
allow
me
to
play
from
time
to
time.Only
in
this
way
can
the
child
do
their
best
and
succeed
at
last.
Passage
3
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
(?http:?/??/?www.21cnjy.com?)交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
day
before
y
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father
invited
to
a
restaurant
by
his
good
friends.At
the
restaurant
they
didn't
stop
drinking
until
both
of
them
were
drunk.My
father
didn't
realize
the
serious
of
driving
a
car
after
drinking.He
decided
to
send
his
friends
to
their
home.And
then
he
drove
home.While
driven
home，my
father
felt
uneasy.Before
he
realized
that
would
happen，my
father
run
into
a
house
near
the
road.The
police
came
and
examined
the
amount
of
alcohol
my
father
had
drunk.It
was
over
the
normally
standard.So
the
police
fined
my
father.After
that，my
father
regretted
what
he
had
done
but
made
up
his
mind
never
to
drink
again
before
driving.
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今日课题
短文改错
How
to
correct
a
composition
高考短文改错的短文通常只有110个词左右，文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文(以书信为主)。所选取的语言材料贴近实际生活，多为考生所熟知，且话题贴近学生，有的带点幽默，有的包含教育意义。文字浅显易懂，材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇；句子结构简单，基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句；语言地道，符合英语语言习惯。各种错误所占比例为
1：1：8
多
缺
错
命题特点
短文改错的错误主要是以下两方面。
一，语法方面。主要考察动词时态和语态、非谓语动词、名词和代词的各种形式、主谓一致、冠词、连词、介词、词形(指应该用动词、名词、形容词还是副词形式，以及平行结构中词的正确形式)
二，行文逻辑方面。主要考察人物的性别及相应的物主代词或物的数量及相应的物主代词。句子的并列，递进，转折，因果关系和时间的先后顺序等。
考点
1．“规范性”原则：要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“\”分别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。
2．“四不改”原则：①单词拼写不改；②大小写不改；③词序错误不改(应从错词或少词方面考虑)；④标点符号不改。
3．“四改动”原则：①忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的原意)；②错误以改动最少为原则；③虚词以添加或者删除为原则；④实词以改变形式为原则。
答题原则
常考的考点
一、冠词
二、谓语动词形
三、非谓语
四、名词数
五、形容词、副词
六、代词
七、介词和固定搭配
八、复合句连词、疑问词
九、逻辑
【1】
but
I
miss
my
home
in
countryside.
【2】
A
woman
saw
him
crying
and
told
him
to
wait
outside
a
shop.
【3】
As
result,
the
plants
are
growing
somewhere.
【4】
There
are
all
kinds
of
the
flowers
and
trees
around
the
classroom
buildings.
【5】
Besides,
Cleo
tends
to
bark
a
average
of
six
hours
a
day
.
一、冠词
∨
the
the
∨
a
an
二、动词形式
When
I
was
a
child,
I
hoped
to
live
in
the
city.
I
think
I
would
be
happy
there.
Lots
of
studies
have
been
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
serious
problem.
We
must
found
ways
to
protect
your
environment.
Tony
was
scared
and
begun
to
cry.
If
they
will
give
me
some
information
I
will
tell
you.
thought
find
began
提醒：在含有时间、条件状语从句的复合句中，
主句用将来时态，从句中则用一般现在时态
My
dream
school
look
like
a
big
garden.
The
understanding
between
two
friends
mean
both
of
them
have
similar
ideas
and
trusting
each
other.
Finally,
there
were
a
sudden
pull
at
the
pole
and
fish
was
caught.
looks
means
was
动名词，不定式或从句做主语谓语动词用单数。
The
students
as
well
as
the
teacher
likes
the
film.
like
1）
there
be…;
or;
either…or…;
neither…nor…;
not
(only)…but
(also)…;
2）
as
well
as;
together
with;
with;
rather
than;
like;
but….
就近原则
就远原则
主谓一致特别提醒
Many
a
student
have
this
kind
of
phone.
Every
man
and
every
woman
have
such
a
good
chance.
has
has
提醒：主语有every;
many
a;
each或no
修饰或被
这些词修饰的并列成分做主语谓语用单数。
三、非谓语，细辨别
After
looks
at
the
toy
for
some
time,
he
turned
around
and
found
where
his
parents
were
missing.
I
enjoyed
sit
close
to
the
windows
and
looking
at
the
view.
I
really
want
share
with
you
some
of
the
problems
I
have
been
experiencing.
We've
been
spending
a
lot
of
time
sing
in
karaoke
bars.
I
might
have
to
retire
again
next
year
just
get
some
more
of
these
biscuits.”
looking
sitting
∧
to
singing
∧
to
I
caught
him
cheated
in
the
exam.
I
also
shared
with
my
friends
many
photos
taking
in
Bingjing.
Mary,
my
best
friend
asked
me
to
let
her
to
copy
my
answers.
He
has
never
been
heard
speak
ill
of
others.
cheating
taken
解决方案
除了并列谓语的存在，一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，如出现其他动词就必需转化成非谓语。
to
do
表将来的主动动作。
done
被动，完成
doing
主动，进行
∧
to
A
woman
saw
him
crying
and
telling
him
to
wait
outside
the
shop
提醒：看动词是充当谓语还是非谓语
told
四、名词数
The
airs
we
breathe
in
is
getting
dirtier
and
dirtier
One
day
,
little
Tony
went
to
a
shopping
center
with
his
parent.
A
group
of
sheeps
are
eating
grass
and
leaves
at
the
foot
of
the
hill.
The
book
will
give
you
all
the
informations
you
need.
air
parents
sheep
information
单复数同形：fish;
deer;
sheep;
means;
Chinese;
Japanese等
不可数：furniture
；fun；homework；paper；news；progress；trouble；advice;
information;
work（工作);
equipment等
可数名词单数形式不单独使用，要么用复数要么前面加冠词
In
their
opinions,
they
should
have
more
holidays.
记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法如：
in
one’s
opinion
keep
one’s
word
take
measures
to
do
sth.
take
action
to
do
sth.
opinion
五、还要注意形和副
Lots
of
studies
have
been
shown
that
global
warming
has
already
become
a
very
seriously
problem.
Much
rare
animals
are
dying
out
Dad
and
I
were
terrible
worried.
I
am
awfully
tiring.
I
learned
that
I
had
to
be
more
patient
and
little
aggressive.
serious
Many
terribly
tired
less
解决方案
１.在系动词后要常用形容词做表语。修饰
名词后也用
形容词。
２.修饰动词，形容词或整个句子用副词
３.关注比较级和最高级的使用。
Unfortunate，there
are
too
many
people
in
my
family.
Unfortunately
fortunately，luckily，obviously，naturally，interestingly
I
tried
hardly
to
do
it.
hard
六、
代词格，细领悟
1.　人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself?的使用．
3．不定代词的使用．
4．Both,all,either,neither,none的使用.
人称
单数
复数
主格
宾格
主格
宾格
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
I
me
we
us
you
you
you
you
he
him
she
her
it
it
they
them
单数
复数
形容词性物主代词
my
your
his
her
its
our
your
their
名词性物主代词
yours
mine
his
hers
its
ours
yours
theirs
We
appreciate
our
apologies
and
goodwill,
but
we
hope
that
you
can
figure
a
good
way
of
settling
the
matter
We
took
ours
fishing
poles
and
headed
for
the
lake.
I
will
recommend
it
to
any
friend
of
me
who
is
going
to
Beijing.
I
knew
that
they
would
be
worried
about
myself.
your
mine
me
our
I
let
her
copy
my
answers
.
But
after
the
test,
all
of
us
were
called
to
the
teacher’s
office.
How
are
you
those
days?
I
have
been
missing
you
very
much.
I
was
happy
when
the
toys
worked,
but
when
things
went
wrong,
I
got
angry
and
broke
it.
Dad
lost
his
job,
and
as
Mom
explained,
“he
was
lucky
to
find
other
one”
both
these
them
another
[考点剖析]
此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：
1)?
代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.
2)?
“it”
一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语).
3)?
不定代词或反身代词的误用.
七、介词、短语要记住．
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，错误表现形式主要有多词、少词和搭配错误。
Tony
saw
a
toy
on
a
shop
window.
Unfortunately,
on
the
development
of
industrialization,
the
environment
has
been
polluted.
We
can
lie
on
the
grass
for
a
rest,
or
sat
by
the
lake
listening
music.
in
with
∨
to
lose
my
heart
such
many
people
Please
help
with
me
and
give
me
some
advice.
I
carefully
wrote
down
her
address,
phone
number
and
the
set
time
in
case
of
I
forget.
so
八、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。这些都有待于我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。
he
turned
around
and
found
where
his
parents
were
missing.
How
do
you
think
I
should
do?
If
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing
and
hurt,
tell
your
teacher
immediately.
that
或
What
九、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误常是这类错误的考查对象。
There
the
air
is
clean
or
the
mountains
are
green.
A
passenger
realized
he
couldn’t
find
his
ticket
but
became
quite
upset.
and
and
He
was
the
gentlest
man
I
have
never
know.
In
the
end,
we
drove
to
a
service
station
and
waited
there
till
the
road
was
clear.
In
the
car
park
here
Gina
nearly
got
knocked
over
as
a
car
drove
out
far
too
quickly.
ever
there
I
wanted
to
do
anything
special
for
him
at
his
retirement
party.
I
don’t
like
to
go
anymore,
so
I’m
afraid
I’ll
lose
their
friendship.
what
do
you
think
I
should
do?
something
but
解决方案:
(1)?培养用英语思维的良好习惯，避免汉语影响.
(2)??分析句子成分，把握句子结构
.
(3)
结合上下文，完整领会短文内容
.
【解题步骤】
1
浏览全文，掌握大意
2
分句阅读，逐句找错
3
检查核对，攻克难点
4
规范答题
不留空白
At
Christmas
Eve,
Jim
went
with
his
father
to
choose
a
Christmas
tree.
They
choose
a
big
one.
It
was
almost
as
taller
as
the
room!
They
put
them
in
the
corner
of
the
sitting
____
on
_________
chose
_______
tall
_______
it
动词形
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
还要注意形和副
代词格，细领悟
高考英语短文改错模拟训练
room.
Kate
was
covered
it
with
a
lot
of
Christmas
light.
The
sitting
room
looked
really
beautifully
at
the
moment.
There
was
a
fire
burn
in
the
fire
place,
and
the
Christmas
tree
lights
were
shinning
brightly.
Jim
or
his
parents
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Dear?Alice,
I?have?just?got?some?good?news?to?tell?to?you.????
I?win?a?national?prize?for?painting?last?week.?????????
My?father?was?so?pleasing?that?he?suggested?????????
I?went?to?England?for?a?holiday.?I’d?like?to?staying??????
there?for?half?a?month,?visiting?place?of?interest??????
or?practicing?my?English?as?well.?We’ve?been????????
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pleased
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places
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go
Writing?to?each?for?nearly?a?year?now.?I?have?????????
often?dreamed?of?talk?face?to?face?with?you.??????????????
I?imagine?you’ll?be?at?vacation?yourself?by?that???????
time.?Perhaps?we?could?go?out?to?do?some??????????
sightseeing?together.????????????????????????????
Best
wishes！
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Lily
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