16.备战高考写作之如何写好文章开头与结尾（教师版+学生版）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
(
如何
写好
作文
开头和结尾
)
俗话说得好：好的开头是成功的一半(Well
begun
is
half
done)；结尾好，一切都好(All
is
well
that
ends
well)。一篇英语作文的开头如果写得好，就会给阅卷老师良好的印象，吸引他继续读下去；如果结尾又写得好，就会进一步强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感，从而给你的作文打高分。
一、如何写好开头
开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解文章要谈什么，最好能立刻引起读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种常见的写法：
1．背景法——说明事件发生的时间、地点、背景等
Last
Monday，my
father
said
goodbye
to
my
mother
and
me
and
went
on
a
business
trip.
上周一，我爸爸向妈妈与我告别，因为他要外出做生意。
2．主题句法——提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题
Old
people
play
an
important
role
in
our
country，because
they
have
experience，they
are
wiser，and
they
have
enough
time.
老年人在我们国家起着重要的作用，因为他们经验丰富，聪明智慧，时间充足。
3．问题法——用提出问题的方法来引出文章的内容，以吸引读者的注意力
Why
do
we
go
to
university？Different
people
have
different
opinions.
我们为什么要上大学？不同的人有不同的观点。
4．引语法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开端
There
is
an
old
English
saying，“Gain
time，gain
life”．
Then
what
is
time？Time
is
a
kind
of
thing
that
we
can't
see
or
touch，but
we
can
feel
it
pass
by.
有一个古老的英语谚语“赢得时间，就赢得生命”。
那么，时间是什么呢？时间是一种看不见、摸不着的东西，但是我们能感觉到它的流逝。
5．定义法——常见于对标题下定义，然后通过举例、逻辑推理等方法加以说明
A
good
student
is
one
who
possesses
good
morality，sound
health，perfect
knowledge
and
various
abilities.
一个好学生要拥有良好的品德、健全的身体、完美的知识和各种各样的能力。
6．数据法——引用已经证实的某些统计数字来引起话题
The
fact
that
less
than
5%of
the
British
population
graduate
from
universities
may
seem
surprising，especially
compared
with
the
American
percentage
of
over
30%.
英国人口中大学毕业生所占的比例不足5%的事实看上去很令人吃惊，尤其是和美国的超过30%的比率相比。
7．实例法——通过一个实例或现象引出话题
Nowadays，people
in
many
big
cities
are
complaining
about
heavy
traffic.It
has
seriously
influenced
people's
daily
life
and
economic
development.
现今，许多大城市的人们都在抱怨交通拥堵，它严重地影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展。
常见开头方式：
as
far
as...is
concerned对……而言，就……而论
as
far
as
we
know据我们所知
as
everybody
knows/as
is
known
to
all众所周知
as
the
proverb
says正如谚语所说
as
the
saying
goes俗话说
as
has
been
already
discussed正如已经讨论过的
I
am
greatly
convinced
that...我深信……
It
is
estimated/predicted
that...据估计……
It
is
generally
agreed
that...大家通常认为……
It
is
believed/thought
that...人们认为……
It
is
said
that...据说……
It
is
reported
that...据报道……
It
is
well
known
that...众所周知……
It
must
be
admitted
that...必须承认的是……
It
must
be
pointed
out
that...必须指出的是……
to
begin
with首先
to
tell
the
truth老实说
when
it
comes
to...当提到……
with
the
develoment
of...随着……的发展
二、如何写好结尾
结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。主要有以下几种写法：
1．照应开头
Everyone
enjoys
beautiful
things.And
seeing
sunrise
may
be
one
of
the
most
unusual
experiences
in
our
life.
每个人都喜欢美好的事物，看日出也许是我们人生中最不平凡的经历中的一次了。
2．复述中心
We
must
protect
the
water
as
well
as
find
ways
to
reuse
it.If
not，the
last
drop
of
water
will
be
a
teardrop.
我们必须保护水源，寻找再利用水的方法，如果不这样做，最后一滴水将是人类的一滴泪水。
3．总结式
In
a
word，a
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.May
all
of
us
treasure
friendship.
总之，患难之交才是真正的朋友，愿我们所有人珍视友谊。
4．引用式
As
the
saying
goes，every
coin
has
two
sides.
常言道，任何事情都有两面性。
5．希望式
The
Internet
is
now
very
important
to
me
because
it
not
only
gives
me
a
lot
of
fun
but
also
it
is
very
useful.I
like
it
and
hope
you
will
like
it
too.
现在网络对我来说非常重要，因为它给我带来很多乐趣，而且非常有用，我喜欢它，希望你也喜欢它。
常见结尾方式：
all
in
all总的来说
as
a
consequence/result结果
from
this
point
of
view就此而论
If
we
can
do
as
mentioned
above，there
can
be
no
doubt
that...如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问……
in
a
word/in
brief/in
conclusion/in
general/in
short/in
summary总之；简言之
In
this
way，I
believe
that...如此，我相信……
We
must
recognize
the
fact
that...我们必须承认……
What
calls
for
special
attention
is
that...需引起特别注意的是……
What
we
believe
is
that...我们相信的是……
on
the
whole总的来看
Only
with
combined
efforts
can
we...唯有通力合作我们才……
Therefore，we
have
the
reason
to
believe
that...
因此，我们有理由相信……
to
sum
up概括地说
We
can，therefore，come
to
the
conclusion
that...
因此，我们可以得出如下结论……
We，therefore，can
make
it
clear
from
the
above
discussion
that...因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白……
范文赏析之一：
俗话说“万事开头难”（All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy.）。你是否同意这一说法？请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.
你对这句俗语的理解；
2.
结合生活中一个具体事例加以说明。
注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
As
an
old
saying
goes,
“All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy.”
The
widespread
notion
reveals
the
truth
that
we
are
likely
to
encounter
setbacks
when
we
start
to
do
something
but
if
we
face
them
with
perseverance
and
determination,
we
will
find
the
rest
of
the
work
easier.
/It
is
said
that:
all
things
are
difficult
before
they’re
easy”,
I
couldn’t
agree
with
it
more.
Life
is
no
plain
sailing,
nothing
can
be
achieved
with
ease
unless
you
have
the
quality
of
devotion
and
perseverance.
Personally,
I
am
strongly
in
favour
of
the
proverb
and
my
own
experience
can
well
serve
as
case
in
point.When
I
was
a
Senior
One
student,
I
made
up
my
mind
to
set
up
a
science
fiction
community
in
our
school.I
thought
it
would
be
a
piece
of
cake,
but
the
first
few
weeks
following
my
decision
turned
out
tough.
To
my
disappointment,
few
students
showed
interest
in
the
community.
Filled
with
the
bitterness
of
failure,
I
was
almost
going
to
give
up
but
the
bottom
of
my
heart
urged
me
to
keep
calm
and
go
on.After
weeks
of
struggle
and
every
possible
means
tried,
I
managed
to
find
several
members
and
once
we
started
to
hold
activities,
more
students
became
interested
and
joined
our
community.
What
can
be
learnt
from
my
experience
is
that
perseverance
carries
true
weight
in
our
pursuit
of
success.
Life
is
never
like
those
fairy
tales
and
we
in
reality
all
tend
to
meet
frustrations
and
setbacks
in
our
lives.
Tricky
as
the
situation
might
seem
in
the
beginning,we
must
always
bear
in
mind
that
“Every
cloud
has
a
silver
lining”
and
our
efforts
won’t
go
in
vain.
Nevertheless,
if
we
give
up
halfway,
chances
are
that
we’ll
never
see
the
easiness
following
the
difficulties
and
he
who
is
easily
beaten
to
the
ground
by
hardship
is
certain
to
end
up
achieve
nothing.
To
sum
up,
the
saying
“All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy”
us
a
perfect
reminder
that
things
all
seem
tough
at
the
beginning.
Faced
with
difficulties,
we
should
cheer
up
and
work
with
perseverance.
Thus,
success
is
bound
to
be
within
arm’s
reach.
/The
experience
has
indeed
taught
me
something.
That
is
all
things
are
difficult
before
they’re
easy.
As
long
as
you
devote
yourself
and
hang
on,
you’ll
succeed.
范文赏析之二：
马拉松(marathon)比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个感兴趣的志愿者岗位，写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由。
Dear
sir,
Hearing
that
the
marathon
match
and
school
celebration
need
a
lot
of
volunteers
and
guides,
I
think
I
am
qualified
for
the
position
of
guides
and
it
will
be
my
great
honor
to
do
the
job,
so
I
write
to
you
to
enter
for
the
guide.
/
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
volunteer
who
gives
mineral
water
to
marathon
runners.
Why
i
think
am
qualified
for
this
position
can
be
concluded
in
the
following
three
aspects.
First,
I
have
a
great
sense
of
direction,
which
enables
me
to
lead
actors
and
actress
to
arrive
at
their
positions
without
difficulties.
It’s
very
essential
when
the
back
of
stage
is
crowded
with
people
and
different
kinds
of
decorations
and
all
the
performers
are
hurrying
to
dress
them
up
and
get
their
needed
things
ready.
Second,
I
have
the
experience
of
being
a
guide
before
and
I
knew
how
to
deal
with
unexpected
accidents
and
mistakes.
Such
experience
is
helpful
to
calm
myself
down
to
arrange
things
in
order.
Besides,
I
am
familiar
with
my
schoolmates
an
d
have
great
abilities
to
communicate
with
them,
which
makes
it
possible
for
me
to
find
the
right
person
and
talk
to
them
to
relieve
their
nerve
for
the
performance.
According
to
all
the
abilities
above,
I
think
I’m
suitable
for
the
position
and
I
really
hope
that
you
can
give
me
a
chance
to
use
my
power
to
add
a
touch
to
our
School
Celebration.
Thank
you
for
reading
my
letter./I
would
be
greatly
obliged
if
you
would
allow
me
this
golden
opportunity
to
enhance
my
social
skills
and
to
contribute
to
the
as
a
volunteer.
/I
really
respect
the
participants
not
only
for
their
dogged
perseverance
but
also
for
their
huge
courage
to
sign
up
for
marathon
i
wish
one
day
i
could
take
part
in
the
event
as
well.But
before
that,
i
feel
like
serving
as
a
volunteer
to
contribute
my
own
effort
so
as
to
show
my
respect.
Hope
i
will
be
your
first
choice.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ping
实战演练
目前，根据规定，上海高中生必须在三年内完成一项课题研究（Project
Research）才能拿到高中毕业文凭。对此，大家意见不一。请谈谈你对此规定的看法，并陈述你理由。
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Many
parents
may
hold
the
view
that
it's
a
waste
of
time
doing
so,
thus
having
an
adverse
effect
on
students
academic
performances.
However
from
my
perspective,
the
benefits
outweigh
the
drawbacks
in
terms
of
all-round
development.
My
reasons
are
as
follows.
First
and
foremost,
students
tend
to
learn
knowledge
and
skills
from
the
text
books
so
that
they
have
no
idea
how
to
apply
what
they've
learned
to
practice.
Fortunately,
the
new
reform
offers
them
a
platform
where
they
can
combine
theory
with
practice,
which
is
a
good
way
to
enhance
their
mental
and
physical
development.
Secondly,
what
students
can
acquire
from
the
research
is
more
than
specific
knowledge
in
one
certain
field.
Only
in
this
way
can
they
get
to
know
the
significance
of
team
spirits
and
something
new
about
this
amazing
world.
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参考答案开头部分：
According
to
the
newly
released
regulations,
only
when
shanghai
senior
high
students
finish
a
project
research
in
three
years
can
they
receive
the
great
education
diploma.
/Aside
from
academic
achievements,
Shanghai
high
school
students
are
required
to
accomplish
a
Project
Research
in
three
years,
otherwise,
they
cannot
get
the
diploma
for
graduation.
Although
many
think
ill
of
the
requirement,
I
support
it
because
shows
an
attempt
to
spark
students’
underlying
qualities.
/According
to
the
rules，high
school
students
in
Shanghai
are
supposed
to
accomplish
a
project
research
within
three
years;
otherwise
they
won’t
get
their
high
school
diplomas.
/According
to
a
latest
regulation,
the
diploma
for
senior
High
School
can
only
be
issued
after
the
students
finishing
a
project
research
within
3
years.
It
divides
criticizers:
some
applaud
the
requirement,
while
others
are
critical.
As
for
me,
I
would
like
to
join
the
latter
group.
参考答案结尾部分：
In
conclusion,
I
strongly
approve
of
this
regulation
in
that
students
can
have
access
to
what
they
desire
to
learn
and
improve
their
all-round
development
to
a
large
degree.
/In
brief,
Project
Research
is
an
innovative
approach
to
urge
students
to
broaden
their
horizon
and
to
escape
from
the
heavy
study
burden.
/According
to
the
rules，high
school
students
in
Shanghai
are
supposed
to
accomplish
a
project
research
within
three
years;
otherwise
they
won’t
get
their
high
school
diplomas.
/
In
a
word,
the
regulation
not
only
exercises
extra
pressure
to
the
students,
but
also
proves
to
be
against
the
present
variety-encouraging
education.
假设你是学生李华，你校正在下学期开设的选修课程征求学生意见，请你向学校课程部老师写一封
email,
提出你的课程建议。你的email
中必须包括：
课程名称
课程的主要内容
设置该课程的理由
补上开头部分：
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As
far
as
I’
m
concerned,
most
classmates
really
expect
to
have
a
course
named
Selected
Reading
from
British
and
American
Newspaper．The
content
of
this
course
can
be
separated
into
three
parts:
current
affairs,
exotic
culture
and
practical
techniques
in
daily
life.
There
are
four
reasons
accounting
for
my
preference.
Firstly,
we
will
be
informed
of
the
latest
affairs
that
is
happening
in
the
world
very
well,
through
which
we
can
keep
pace
with
the
changing
times.
Secondly,
we
will
learn
a
variety
of
culture
and
customs,
which
can
help
to
broaden
our
horizons
and
enrich
our
knowledge.
Thirdly,
we
will
learn
to
work
out
the
practical
problems
in
daily
life
on
our
own,
becoming
independent
of
our
parents.
In
addition,
we
can
enlarge
our
vocabulary
and
improve
our
capacity
of
reading
comprehension
by
having
access
to
considerable
articles
written
by
native
speakers.
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Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
参考答案开头部分：
Dear
teacher,
It’s
really
a
surprise
to
learn
that
our
school
is
seeking
suggestions
from
us
students
about
the
course
to
be
developed
next
semester.
The
proposals
I
put
forward
are
as
follows:
参考答案结尾部分：
There
is
no
denying
that
we
will
benefit
a
lot
from
the
new
course
we
can
take
next
term.
We
would
appreciate
it
very
much
if
our
humble
suggestions
can
receive
your
favorable
consideration.
你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》（The
Chinese
Poetry
Competition)、《国家宝藏》(National
Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。
你的发言稿必须包括：
?简单介绍一个此类节目；
?分析此类节目热播的原因。
(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。文章的开头已为你写好。）
参考范文：（注意划线开头与结尾部分）
Apparently,
such
kind
of
TV
programs
definitely
need
our
praise
for
they
help
us
better
appreciate
the
beauty
of
Chinese
culture.
The
Chinese
poetry
competition,
is
a
vivid
example
of
how
technology
and
traditional
cultural,
once
combined
together,
can
create
a
national
trend.
It
features
competitions
among
high
school
students
to
help
them
truly
understand
the
value
of
traditional
poems
instead
of
memorizing
them
for
exams.
So,
you
might
wonder
why
these
shows
can
enjoy
such
a
great
popularity.
Personally,
I
find
the
reason
quite
simple.
First,
I
am
convinced
that
it
is
the
charm
of
traditional
Chinese
culture
itself
that
draws
us
to
these
shows
like
a
magnet.
Traditional
culture,
like
poems,
provides
us
with
a
glimpse
of
what
life
was
like
before.
It
seems
as
if
an
invisible
bridge
leading
to
Chinese
culture
was
then
built
by
these
shows.
For
example,
Every
time
I
read
a
poem,
I
feel
myself
identifying
with
the
writer,
feeling
what
he
felt,
though
there
might
be
thousands
of
years
apart
between
us.
Secondly,
the
increasing
awareness
on
culture
identity
is
another
reason.
Cultural
identity,
I
assume
is
what
binds
us
together
as
a
whole.
Imagine
if
Beijing
lost
Great
wall,
what
it
would
be
like.
Maybe
it
will
become
nothing
but
another
New
York
or
Tokyo.
Through
exploring
traditional
culture,
we
deepen
our
recognition
of
who
we
are,
what
we
belong
to
as
a
family.
So,
from
the
reasons
mentioned
above,
I
call
on
everyone
to
support
these
programs
as
well
as
try
our
best
to
preserve
our
traditional
culture
from
now
in
case
it
becomes
a
thing
of
past.
If
not
now,
then
when.
If
not
us,
who?
学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：
简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）。
如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？
注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字。
参考范文：（注意划线开头与结尾部分）
Dear
Sir/Madam，
I
am
a
student
named
Li
Qing
from
Grade
3
Class
1，writing
this
letter
to
campaign
for
the
president
of
the
Student
Union．【高分句型】（开头﹣引出话题）
From
my
point
of
view，I
am
the
right
one
you
want．I've
been
in
the
Student
Union
for
two
years，serving
as
a
key
member
in
the
Publicity
Department．【高分句型】Moreover，I
am
outgoing
and
capable
of
having
effective
talks
with
others．When
in
charge
of
the
Publicity
Department，I
always
helped
the
former
president
to
organize
large﹣scale
activities．In
addition，I
am
fond
of
making
friendly
and
taking
new
challenges，which
will
facilitate
my
future
role
as
a
president．【高分句型】（简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件）
If
given
this
position，I
will
do
my
utmost．【高分句型】On
one
hand，I
will
hold
more
interesting
and
meaningful
activities，such
as
culture
festivals，singing
competitions，debates
and
so
forth，so
as
to
enrich
campus
life．On
the
other
hand，what
I
will
do
is
to
call
for
students
to
protect
our
campus
environment，for
I
firmly
believe
that
a
pleasant
environment
is
of
vital
importance
to
every
student
and
teacher．【高分句型】（具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么）
I
will
appreciate
your
kindness
if
you
choose
me
as
the
new
president．And
your
prompt
reply
is
warmly
welcomed．【高分句型】（结尾）
Best
regards,
Li
Qing
21世纪教育网
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(
如何
写好
作文
开头和结尾
)
俗话说得好：好的开头是成功的一半(Well
begun
is
half
done)；结尾好，一切都好(All
is
well
that
ends
well)。一篇英语作文的开头如果写得好，就会给阅卷老师良好的印象，吸引他继续读下去；如果结尾又写得好，就会进一步强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感，从而给你的作文打高分。
一、如何写好开头
开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解文章要谈什么，最好能立刻引起读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种常见的写法：
1．背景法——说明事件发生的时间、地点、背景等
Last
Monday，my
father
said
goodbye
to
my
mother
and
me
and
went
on
a
business
trip.
上周一，我爸爸向妈妈与我告别，因为他要外出做生意。
2．主题句法——提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题
Old
people
play
an
important
role
in
our
country，because
they
have
experience，they
are
wiser，and
they
have
enough
time.
老年人在我们国家起着重要的作用，因为他们经验丰富，聪明智慧，时间充足。
3．问题法——用提出问题的方法来引出文章的内容，以吸引读者的注意力
Why
do
we
go
to
university？Different
people
have
different
opinions.
我们为什么要上大学？不同的人有不同的观点。
4．引语法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开端
There
is
an
old
English
saying，“Gain
time，gain
life”．
Then
what
is
time？Time
is
a
kind
of
thing
that
we
can't
see
or
touch，but
we
can
feel
it
pass
by.
有一个古老的英语谚语“赢得时间，就赢得生命”。
那么，时间是什么呢？时间是一种看不见、摸不着的东西，但是我们能感觉到它的流逝。
5．定义法——常见于对标题下定义，然后通过举例、逻辑推理等方法加以说明
A
good
student
is
one
who
possesses
good
morality，sound
health，perfect
knowledge
and
various
abilities.
一个好学生要拥有良好的品德、健全的身体、完美的知识和各种各样的能力。
6．数据法——引用已经证实的某些统计数字来引起话题
The
fact
that
less
than
5%of
the
British
population
graduate
from
universities
may
seem
surprising，especially
compared
with
the
American
percentage
of
over
30%.
英国人口中大学毕业生所占的比例不足5%的事实看上去很令人吃惊，尤其是和美国的超过30%的比率相比。
7．实例法——通过一个实例或现象引出话题
Nowadays，people
in
many
big
cities
are
complaining
about
heavy
traffic.It
has
seriously
influenced
people's
daily
life
and
economic
development.
现今，许多大城市的人们都在抱怨交通拥堵，它严重地影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展。
常见开头方式：
as
far
as...is
concerned对……而言，就……而论
as
far
as
we
know据我们所知
as
everybody
knows/as
is
known
to
all众所周知
as
the
proverb
says正如谚语所说
as
the
saying
goes俗话说
as
has
been
already
discussed正如已经讨论过的
I
am
greatly
convinced
that...我深信……
It
is
estimated/predicted
that...据估计……
It
is
generally
agreed
that...大家通常认为……
It
is
believed/thought
that...人们认为……
It
is
said
that...据说……
It
is
reported
that...据报道……
It
is
well
known
that...众所周知……
It
must
be
admitted
that...必须承认的是……
It
must
be
pointed
out
that...必须指出的是……
to
begin
with首先
to
tell
the
truth老实说
when
it
comes
to...当提到……
with
the
develoment
of...随着……的发展
二、如何写好结尾
结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。主要有以下几种写法：
1．照应开头
Everyone
enjoys
beautiful
things.And
seeing
sunrise
may
be
one
of
the
most
unusual
experiences
in
our
life.
每个人都喜欢美好的事物，看日出也许是我们人生中最不平凡的经历中的一次了。
2．复述中心
We
must
protect
the
water
as
well
as
find
ways
to
reuse
it.If
not，the
last
drop
of
water
will
be
a
teardrop.
我们必须保护水源，寻找再利用水的方法，如果不这样做，最后一滴水将是人类的一滴泪水。
3．总结式
In
a
word，a
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.May
all
of
us
treasure
friendship.
总之，患难之交才是真正的朋友，愿我们所有人珍视友谊。
4．引用式
As
the
saying
goes，every
coin
has
two
sides.
常言道，任何事情都有两面性。
5．希望式
The
Internet
is
now
very
important
to
me
because
it
not
only
gives
me
a
lot
of
fun
but
also
it
is
very
useful.I
like
it
and
hope
you
will
like
it
too.
现在网络对我来说非常重要，因为它给我带来很多乐趣，而且非常有用，我喜欢它，希望你也喜欢它。
常见结尾方式：
all
in
all总的来说
as
a
consequence/result结果
from
this
point
of
view就此而论
If
we
can
do
as
mentioned
above，there
can
be
no
doubt
that...如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问……
in
a
word/in
brief/in
conclusion/in
general/in
short/in
summary总之；简言之
In
this
way，I
believe
that...如此，我相信……
We
must
recognize
the
fact
that...我们必须承认……
What
calls
for
special
attention
is
that...需引起特别注意的是……
What
we
believe
is
that...我们相信的是……
on
the
whole总的来看
Only
with
combined
efforts
can
we...唯有通力合作我们才……
Therefore，we
have
the
reason
to
believe
that...
因此，我们有理由相信……
to
sum
up概括地说
We
can，therefore，come
to
the
conclusion
that...
因此，我们可以得出如下结论……
We，therefore，can
make
it
clear
from
the
above
discussion
that...因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白……
范文赏析之一：
俗话说“万事开头难”（All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy.）。你是否同意这一说法？请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.
你对这句俗语的理解；
2.
结合生活中一个具体事例加以说明。
注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
As
an
old
saying
goes,
“All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy.”
The
widespread
notion
reveals
the
truth
that
we
are
likely
to
encounter
setbacks
when
we
start
to
do
something
but
if
we
face
them
with
perseverance
and
determination,
we
will
find
the
rest
of
the
work
easier.
/It
is
said
that:
all
things
are
difficult
before
they’re
easy”,
I
couldn’t
agree
with
it
more.
Life
is
no
plain
sailing,
nothing
can
be
achieved
with
ease
unless
you
have
the
quality
of
devotion
and
perseverance.
Personally,
I
am
strongly
in
favour
of
the
proverb
and
my
own
experience
can
well
serve
as
case
in
point.When
I
was
a
Senior
One
student,
I
made
up
my
mind
to
set
up
a
science
fiction
community
in
our
school.I
thought
it
would
be
a
piece
of
cake,
but
the
first
few
weeks
following
my
decision
turned
out
tough.
To
my
disappointment,
few
students
showed
interest
in
the
community.
Filled
with
the
bitterness
of
failure,
I
was
almost
going
to
give
up
but
the
bottom
of
my
heart
urged
me
to
keep
calm
and
go
on.After
weeks
of
struggle
and
every
possible
means
tried,
I
managed
to
find
several
members
and
once
we
started
to
hold
activities,
more
students
became
interested
and
joined
our
community.
What
can
be
learnt
from
my
experience
is
that
perseverance
carries
true
weight
in
our
pursuit
of
success.
Life
is
never
like
those
fairy
tales
and
we
in
reality
all
tend
to
meet
frustrations
and
setbacks
in
our
lives.
Tricky
as
the
situation
might
seem
in
the
beginning,we
must
always
bear
in
mind
that
“Every
cloud
has
a
silver
lining”
and
our
efforts
won’t
go
in
vain.
Nevertheless,
if
we
give
up
halfway,
chances
are
that
we’ll
never
see
the
easiness
following
the
difficulties
and
he
who
is
easily
beaten
to
the
ground
by
hardship
is
certain
to
end
up
achieve
nothing.
To
sum
up,
the
saying
“All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy”
us
a
perfect
reminder
that
things
all
seem
tough
at
the
beginning.
Faced
with
difficulties,
we
should
cheer
up
and
work
with
perseverance.
Thus,
success
is
bound
to
be
within
arm’s
reach.
/The
experience
has
indeed
taught
me
something.
That
is
all
things
are
difficult
before
they’re
easy.
As
long
as
you
devote
yourself
and
hang
on,
you’ll
succeed.
范文赏析之二：
马拉松(marathon)比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个感兴趣的志愿者岗位，写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由。
Dear
sir,
Hearing
that
the
marathon
match
and
school
celebration
need
a
lot
of
volunteers
and
guides,
I
think
I
am
qualified
for
the
position
of
guides
and
it
will
be
my
great
honor
to
do
the
job,
so
I
write
to
you
to
enter
for
the
guide.
/
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
volunteer
who
gives
mineral
water
to
marathon
runners.
Why
i
think
am
qualified
for
this
position
can
be
concluded
in
the
following
three
aspects.
First,
I
have
a
great
sense
of
direction,
which
enables
me
to
lead
actors
and
actress
to
arrive
at
their
positions
without
difficulties.
It’s
very
essential
when
the
back
of
stage
is
crowded
with
people
and
different
kinds
of
decorations
and
all
the
performers
are
hurrying
to
dress
them
up
and
get
their
needed
things
ready.
Second,
I
have
the
experience
of
being
a
guide
before
and
I
knew
how
to
deal
with
unexpected
accidents
and
mistakes.
Such
experience
is
helpful
to
calm
myself
down
to
arrange
things
in
order.
Besides,
I
am
familiar
with
my
schoolmates
an
d
have
great
abilities
to
communicate
with
them,
which
makes
it
possible
for
me
to
find
the
right
person
and
talk
to
them
to
relieve
their
nerve
for
the
performance.
According
to
all
the
abilities
above,
I
think
I’m
suitable
for
the
position
and
I
really
hope
that
you
can
give
me
a
chance
to
use
my
power
to
add
a
touch
to
our
School
Celebration.
Thank
you
for
reading
my
letter./I
would
be
greatly
obliged
if
you
would
allow
me
this
golden
opportunity
to
enhance
my
social
skills
and
to
contribute
to
the
as
a
volunteer.
/I
really
respect
the
participants
not
only
for
their
dogged
perseverance
but
also
for
their
huge
courage
to
sign
up
for
marathon
i
wish
one
day
i
could
take
part
in
the
event
as
well.But
before
that,
i
feel
like
serving
as
a
volunteer
to
contribute
my
own
effort
so
as
to
show
my
respect.
Hope
i
will
be
your
first
choice.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ping
实战演练
1.目前，根据规定，上海高中生必须在三年内完成一项课题研究（Project
Research）才能拿到高中毕业文凭。对此，大家意见不一。请谈谈你对此规定的看法，并陈述你理由。
补上开头部分：
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Many
parents
may
hold
the
view
that
it's
a
waste
of
time
doing
so,
thus
having
an
adverse
effect
on
students
academic
performances.
However
from
my
perspective,
the
benefits
outweigh
the
drawbacks
in
terms
of
all-round
development.
My
reasons
are
as
follows.
First
and
foremost,
students
tend
to
learn
knowledge
and
skills
from
the
text
books
so
that
they
have
no
idea
how
to
apply
what
they've
learned
to
practice.
Fortunately,
the
new
reform
offers
them
a
platform
where
they
can
combine
theory
with
practice,
which
is
a
good
way
to
enhance
their
mental
and
physical
development.
Secondly,
what
students
can
acquire
from
the
research
is
more
than
specific
knowledge
in
one
certain
field.
Only
in
this
way
can
they
get
to
know
the
significance
of
team
spirits
and
something
new
about
this
amazing
world.
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假设你是学生李华，你校正在下学期开设的选修课程征求学生意见，请你向学校课程部老师写一封
email,
提出你的课程建议。你的email
中必须包括：
课程名称
课程的主要内容
设置该课程的理由
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As
far
as
I’
m
concerned,
most
classmates
really
expect
to
have
a
course
named
Selected
Reading
from
British
and
American
Newspaper．The
content
of
this
course
can
be
separated
into
three
parts:
current
affairs,
exotic
culture
and
practical
techniques
in
daily
life.
There
are
four
reasons
accounting
for
my
preference.
Firstly,
we
will
be
informed
of
the
latest
affairs
that
is
happening
in
the
world
very
well,
through
which
we
can
keep
pace
with
the
changing
times.
Secondly,
we
will
learn
a
variety
of
culture
and
customs,
which
can
help
to
broaden
our
horizons
and
enrich
our
knowledge.
Thirdly,
we
will
learn
to
work
out
the
practical
problems
in
daily
life
on
our
own,
becoming
independent
of
our
parents.
In
addition,
we
can
enlarge
our
vocabulary
and
improve
our
capacity
of
reading
comprehension
by
having
access
to
considerable
articles
written
by
native
speakers.
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Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
1.你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》（The
Chinese
Poetry
Competition)、《国家宝藏》(National
Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。
你的发言稿必须包括：
?简单介绍一个此类节目；
?分析此类节目热播的原因。
(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。文章的开头已为你写好。）
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The
Chinese
poetry
competition,
is
a
vivid
example
of
how
technology
and
traditional
cultural,
once
combined
together,
can
create
a
national
trend.
It
features
competitions
among
high
school
students
to
help
them
truly
understand
the
value
of
traditional
poems
instead
of
memorizing
them
for
exams.
So,
you
might
wonder
why
these
shows
can
enjoy
such
a
great
popularity.
Personally,
I
find
the
reason
quite
simple.
First,
I
am
convinced
that
it
is
the
charm
of
traditional
Chinese
culture
itself
that
draws
us
to
these
shows
like
a
magnet.
Traditional
culture,
like
poems,
provides
us
with
a
glimpse
of
what
life
was
like
before.
It
seems
as
if
an
invisible
bridge
leading
to
Chinese
culture
was
then
built
by
these
shows.
For
example,
Every
time
I
read
a
poem,
I
feel
myself
identifying
with
the
writer,
feeling
what
he
felt,
though
there
might
be
thousands
of
years
apart
between
us.
Secondly,
the
increasing
awareness
on
culture
identity
is
another
reason.
Cultural
identity,
I
assume
is
what
binds
us
together
as
a
whole.
Imagine
if
Beijing
lost
Great
wall,
what
it
would
be
like.
Maybe
it
will
become
nothing
but
another
New
York
or
Tokyo.
Through
exploring
traditional
culture,
we
deepen
our
recognition
of
who
we
are,
what
we
belong
to
as
a
family.
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2.学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：
简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）。
如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？
注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字。
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From
my
point
of
view，I
am
the
right
one
you
want．I've
been
in
the
Student
Union
for
two
years，serving
as
a
key
member
in
the
Publicity
Department．【高分句型】Moreover，I
am
outgoing
and
capable
of
having
effective
talks
with
others．When
in
charge
of
the
Publicity
Department，I
always
helped
the
former
president
to
organize
large﹣scale
activities．In
addition，I
am
fond
of
making
friendly
and
taking
new
challenges，which
will
facilitate
my
future
role
as
a
president．【高分句型】（简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件）
If
given
this
position，I
will
do
my
utmost．【高分句型】On
one
hand，I
will
hold
more
interesting
and
meaningful
activities，such
as
culture
festivals，singing
competitions，debates
and
so
forth，so
as
to
enrich
campus
life．On
the
other
hand，what
I
will
do
is
to
call
for
students
to
protect
our
campus
environment，for
I
firmly
believe
that
a
pleasant
environment
is
of
vital
importance
to
every
student
and
teacher．【高分句型】（具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么）
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Best
regards,
Li
Qing
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