中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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如何让英语作文更具“文彩”
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（一）运用高级词汇
词组优先原则
丰富的英语表达少不了用到一些常用的词组。事实上，词组的使用范围远大于单个单词。写作时需要我们运用平时所积累的一些语言知识，尽量增加文章的文采。例如:
A.
We
spent
too
much
time
developing
individual
skills
and
we
don’t
spend
any
time
making
the
team
a
united
one.
?—As
opposed
to?making
the
team
a
united
one,
we
spend
too
much
time
on
developing
individual
skills.
B.
?The
theatre
is
being
built
now.
?
?
—The
theatre
is?under
construction.
C.
?Dirt
and
disease
exist
together.
?
—Dirt
and
disease?go
hand
in
hand.
D.
?When
one
meets
a
demanding
challenge,
the
speech
of
Steve
Jobs
is
a
great
guide.
—In
face
of?a
demanding
challenge,
the
speech
of
Steve
Jobs
serves
as
a
great
puters
are
very
important
in
our
life.
—Computers
play
a
very
important
role/of
great
importance
in
our
life.
Suddenly
I
thought
out
a
good
idea.
—A
good
idea
occurred
to
me./A
good
idea
suddenly
struck
me.
核心高级词汇原则
普通词汇（表达）
VS
核心高级词汇（表达）
普通表达
高级表达
clever
聪明的
bright
/
intelligent
hard
努力地
diligently
sometimes
有时候
occasionally/once
in
a
while
think/consider
认为，考虑
take
sth
into
consideration/account
pay
attention
to
注意
attach
importance
to
We
should
/
must/
can
我们要…
It
would
be
better
if
we
could…
It
is
highly
desirable
if
we…
It
is
our
duty
/
obligation
to
do
…
It
is
highly
recommended/appreciated
that
we…
We
shouldn’t
/
mustn’t
我们不能/
/不应该
Never
should
we
…
On
no
account
should
we…
By
no
means
should
we
…
Under
no
circumstances
should
we…
In
no
case
should
we…
(以上全都表示：在任何情况下我们都不能。。。。。)
用倒装句表示“不能”更加高级
important
意义重大的
crucial
/
vital
/
critical
essential
/
significant
far-reaching
(意义深远的)
be
of
great
importance
be
of
profound
significance
sth
is
the
most
important.
最重要的
sth
is
the
top
priority.
(重中之重)
sth
is
of
vital
importance.
I
think
/
I
believe
In
my
humble
opinion
我相信，我主张
I
maintain
/
hold
/
assert
that
I
am
firmly
convinced
that
I
hold
strong
belief
that
I
hold
the
opinion
that
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
…
I
will
definitely
support
the
idea
that…
From
my
points
of
view
In
my
perspective
support
/
agree
支持，赞成，提倡
I
advocate
the
opinion
that
I
am
in
favor
of
the
proposal
that
I
strongly
recommend
/
suggest
that
I
sing
high
praise
for
sth
I
think
highly
of
I
speak
highly
of
It
is
high
time
that
we
did
sth
consider
sth
as
extremely
important
高度重视,认为…很重要
lay/put/place
great
emphasis
on
attach
great
importance
to
put
a
high
value
on
disagree
反对，抵制
oppose/object
to/resist
the
idea
that
refute
the
opinion
that（反驳…的观点）
ask
consult
sb
(咨询某人)
turn
to
sb
(for
sth)
inquire
sth
/
that
(询问)
we
all
know
that
众所周知
As
is
known
to
all,…
It
is
known
to
all
that
It
is
generally
accepted
that
It
is
widely
believed
that
It
is
universally
acknowledged
that
It
is
common
knowledge
that
no
doubt
毫无疑问
It
goes
without
saying
that
There
is
no
denying
that
It
is
undeniable
that
There
is
no
doubt
that
Undoubtedly,
…Doubtless，…Undeniably,
…
It
is
self-evident
that
It
is
apparent/obvious/clear
that
say
/
tell告诉,表达
voice
one’s
opinion
convey
the
idea
that
deliver
the
message
that
use使用
make
full
/
the
best
use
of
employ/apply/utilize/optimize
good
side
好处//优点
strength
/
strong
points
/
advantage
/
benefit
/
merit
bad
side坏处/缺点
weakness
/
weak
points
disadvantage
/
drawback
/
defect
/
flaw
/deficiency
sth
is
good
（某东西）很好
sth
is
highly
desirable.
sth
is
highly
appreciated.
sth
is
highly
valued.
sth
is
required.
很必要的
sth
is
indispensable.
(不可或缺的)
sth
is
irreplaceable.
(不可替代的)
sth
is
imperative.
(必要的，势在必行的)
famous
杰出的
outstanding
world-renowned
(世界文明的)
eminent
(卓越的)
prestigious
can’t
be
replaced
不可取代的
sth
is
irreplaceable(不可取代的).
sth
is
indispensable
(不可或缺的)
more
and
more
people
越来越多
an
increasing
number
of
people
sth
is
more
and
more
popular越来越受欢迎
sth
is
enjoying
increasing
popularity.
hobby爱好
inclination
have
an
inclination
to
do有做某事的爱好，倾向
be
forced
to
do
被迫做某事
be
compelled
to
do
character个性
individuality
The
number
of
A
is
larger
than
B
A数字超过了B
A
outnumber
B
A
is
more
important
than
B
A比B重要
A
outweigh
B
eg:
The
advantages
far
outweigh
the
disadvantages.
Different
people
have
different
opinions
on
sth有不同的看
关于…不同的人法
Opinions
on
sth
vary
greatly
from
person
to
person
避免重复原则
同义，近义替换
如果一个词在一篇120词左右的文中出现三次，文章可读性必然降低。
因此，要使文章生动，可以在上下文中用同义词或词组替换同一个意思的词语。遇到一时想不起的词语，可以用近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式或使用单词前缀、后缀灵活变通。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉语化表达。例如：
?I
like
reading
while
my
brother
likes
watching
television.
—I
like
reading
while
my
brother
enjoys
/
is
fond
of
/
is
keen
on
watching
television.
?
the
arrival
of
the
age
of
information
—
the
approach
of
the
Internet
era?
—the
emergence
of
the
digital
age
—the
rise
of
the
network
as
a
way
to
relieve
stress
C.
make
students
interested
in
study
?
?---
stir/stimulate
students’
interest
in
study
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
---?arouse
students’
passion
in
learning
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
---?make
students
self-motivated
in
acquiring
knowledge
（2）词性转换
对于一些高频形容词，不妨尝试用一下它的其他词性，使语言不“落入俗套”。
例如：
A.
?Rockets
have
been?applied?to
explore
the
universe.
?
?
?
?
—Rockets
have
found?application?for
the
exploration
of
the
universe.
B.
?Some
people
are?reluctant?to
donate
money
because
the
charity
system
in
China
is
still?immature.
?
?
?
—The?immaturity?of
the
charity
system
in
China
caused
people’s?reluctance?in
donation.
C.
?Independent
thinking
is?necessary?in
study.
?
?
?
?
—Independent
thinking
is?a
necessity?in
study.
D.
?That
the
mobile
devices
can?recognize?the
speaker’s
voice
is
more
and
more
popular.
—Speech?recognition?on
mobile
devices
is
growing
in
popularity.?
（3）一句多表
—
The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
carrying
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
—
The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
with
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
—The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
表达地道原则
俗语成语：为了用地道的英语语言写出漂亮的作文，形象化、生动化及趣味性的词语或词组也应进入我们的备考词典。例如：
能言善辩---
have
a
silver
tongue
害群之马---
a
black
sheep
?
成天看电视的人---a
couch
potato
?
?
?喜欢乱说话的人---
a
big
mouth
???????有经验的新手---
a
green
hand
????????视而不见---turn
a
blind
eye
to
????????备受关注---in
the
spotlight
?
?
??轻而易举的事情---
a
piece
of
cake
????????没前途的工作---dead-end
job
?
?
??最后的忍耐极限---
the
last
straw
?
?
??茫然不知情---
in
the
dark
?
?
??金科玉律---
golden
rule?
插入语：看似漫不经心的插入语，其实能显示作者的功底，也是许多阅卷老师青睐的表达方式。插入语能使句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉。副词、连接词和短语都可以当作插入语，放在句子中间，它们一般位于主语之后，动词或助动词的前面，两边分别加上逗号。
例如：
A.
A
person,?like
a
commodity,?needs
packaging.
B.
The
main
reason
why
people
travel
is,?perhaps,
for
pleasure.
C.
Students,?at
large,
have
to
face
a
tough
choice
when
choosing
majors.
D.
Life
is,?in
a
sense,
a
harsh
battle.
E.
Some
students,?due
to
timidity,
don’t
dare
to
ask
questions
in
class.
F.
Protecting
the
environment,?as
I
see
it,
has
a
far-reaching
influence
on
future
generations.??????
G.
Other
individuals,?however,?take
the
attitude
that
the
government
should
take
the
responsibility
to
take
care
of
the
old.
H.
A
good
teacher
not
only
offers
knowledge,?but
more
importantly,
he
also
teaches
students
how
to
behave
well.
（二）运用多变复杂句式
1、肯定不如双否好
The
postman
comes
on
time
every
day.
[修正]The
postman
never
fails
to
come
on
time.
I
have
made
great
progress
in
English
with
his
help.
[修正]I
couldn’t
have
made
so
much
progress
in
English
without
his
help.
2、陈述不如倒装妙
倒装句：否定词或词组放句首时，句子要部分倒装。Not
only
...
but
also
...前后连接两个句子时，not
only后的句子要用部分倒装，但but
also后的分句不用倒装。
“Only+状语”位于句首时，要用部分倒装，only后的状语可以是副词、介词短语、从
句等。让步状语从句也可以倒装，结构为:
副词/形容词/名词+as+主语+动词(名词放在句首时，冠词要省略)。
例如:
There
is
no
denying
that
we
all
lead
a
busy
school
life,
but
by
no
means
should
this
be
an
excuse
for
not
doing
housework.
Not
only
does
the
Internet
provide
us
with
easy
access
to
a
wealth
of
information,
but
also
it
helps
us
to
escape
from
the
pressure
in
reality.
Small
as
Armstrong's
step
on
the
moon
is,
it
is
a
giant
leap
for
the
human
being.
In
the
center
of
our
school
lies
our
library,
which
is
between
the
garden
and
the
teaching
building.
3.主动不如被动巧
We
can
borrow
five
books
at
most,
and
we
can
keep
them
for
ten
days.
[修正]At
most
we
can
borrow
five
books
at
a
time
and
they
can
be
kept
for
ten
days.
4.、非谓语结构不能少
非谓语动词：非谓语动词改变了动词只能作谓语的功能，使其在英语句子中的用法更加灵活、多变。非谓语动词包括动名词、不定式和分词。对于语法基础牢固的考生来说，应该多尝试运用非谓语结构的表达，这是在英语写作中使文章增色的重要手段之一。例如：
Governments
ought
to
make
efforts
to
reduce
the
increasing
gap
between
cities
and
countryside.
(不定式）
To
make
the
most
of
our
abilities
and
find
the
positions
that
most
fit
us
in
society
are
shortcuts
to
fulfill
our
value.
(不定式)
It
is
no
use
crying
over
the
spilt
milk.
(动名词)
The
majority
of
people
object
to
smoking
in
public.
(动名词)
Government
should
enforce
relevant
laws
or
regulations
to
severely
punish
the
factory
producing
a
great
number
of
pollutants
and
the
people
littering
or
spitting
deliberately.
(现在分词)
If
life
is
a
sea,
dream
is
like
a
compass?
leading
us
to
the
shore.
(现在分词)
President
Obama
said
educational
success
and
economic
well-being
are
linked,
especially
in
a
world
economy
driven
by
information
and
technology.
(过去分词)
Lost
in
the
Internet
world,
you
lose
your
passion
for
life,
miss
the
beauty
of
nature
and
make
an
indifferent
person
of
yourself.
(过去分词)
另外，几乎所有的状语从句（时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等），都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，例如条件状语从句：If
such
is
the
case,
you
should
apologize
to
her.
如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？
The
young
man
couldn’t
help
crying
when
he
heard
the
bad
news.
[修正]
Hearing
the
bad
news,
the
young
man
couldn’t
help
crying.
If
everything
is
taken
into
consideration,
we
ought
to
have
another
chance.
[修正]
Everything
taken
into
consideration,
we
ought
to
have
another
chance.
5、单句不比从句强
复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句。在熟练做了各类语法题目后,
也应该具有知识迁移的能力,
在作文中可以运用各类复合句，表达较为复杂的逻辑关系。例如:
This
is
a
century
that
will
be
remembered
for
its
willingness
to
break
classical
bonds
and
nurture
the
creativity
needed
for
scientific
innovation.
(限制性定语从句)
As
people’s
desire
to
get
wealth
and
fame
grows,
many
cases
are
found
in
sports
games
where
athletes
cheat
in
the
games
or
violent
conflicts
between
the
players
happen
(时间状语从句，限制性定语从句)
What
doesn’t
kill
you
will
only
make
you
stronger.
(主语从句)
A
lot
of
people
still
hold
the
opinion
that
appearance
is
far
more
important
than
capability
is.
(同位语从句；
比较状语从句)
Everyone
possesses
a
dream.
That's
why
they
establish
ahead
of
themselves
a
series
of
goals
and
are
motivated
to
fulfill
the
ultimate
dream.
(表语从句)
Home
is
like
a
harbor,
where
we
can
rest
when
we
feel
upset
or
frustrated,
and
then
we
can
set
out
again
with
encouragement
and
confidence.
(非限制性定语从句；
时间状语从句)
Since
we
can't
remove
stress
from
our
lives,
we
need
to
find
ways
to
handle
it.
(原因状语从句)
?If
we
care
for
a
person,
if
we
are
always
ready
to
help
that
person
and
if
we
share
most
of
our
thoughts
and
feelings
with
a
person,
they
are
our
genuine
friends.?
(状语从句)
Success
and
failure
is
often
wrongly
defined
by
grades
where
exam-oriented
education
is
popularized.
(地点状语从句)
Treat
others
as
you
wish
to
be
treated.
(方式状语从句)
?Roses
need
special
care
so
that
they
can
live
through
winter.
(目的状语从句)
Our
relationship
is
so
deep
and
close
that
most
of
the
things
are
automatically
understood
by
each
other.
(结果状语从句)
Human
nature
is
such
that
man
always
desires
to
earn
more
money.
(结果状语从句)
Ecologists
pointed
out
that
a
cluster
of
tall
buildings
in
a
city
often
overburdens
public
transportation
and
parking
lot
capacities.
(宾语从句)
Whatever
the
future
may
have
in
store,we
will
be
well-prepared
for
it
if
we
learn
to
accept
change
and
appreciate
what
is
new
and
different.
(让步状语从句，条件状语从句，宾语从句)
注意：
值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。
固定句型：英语中有大量的固定句型和惯用句式，这些句型和句式都是约定俗成的。如果在平时的学习或复习中能够有意识地、积极有效地积累、总结和归纳这些句型和句式，就能在写作时增强语言的表现力，丰富语言的色彩。例如：
①?Etiquette
to
society
is
what
clothing
is
to
the
individual.
(...对于...就好像…
对于…)
②?We
can’t
be
too
cautious
when
choosing
majors.
(再…也不过分)
③?We
have
to
admit
where
there
is
a
chance，there
might
also
be
a
barrier.
(哪里有……，哪里就有……)
④?There
is
no
denying
that
a
friend
might
change
your
life
by
being
part
of
it.
(不可否认……)
⑤?Just
as
woods
are
absolutely
necessary
to
birds,
so
is
the
earth
to
human
beings.
(正如…,
…也一样)
（三）运用衔接手段
英语作文衔接手段包括逻辑衔接、语法衔接、词汇衔接。对于高中英语作文，这里重点讲解逻辑衔接手段，所谓逻辑衔接手段可分为：并列关系、解释关系、转折和让步关系、递进关系、例证关系、因果关系等等。
转折关系：
but/
while/
yet/
whereas(连词)
however/
nonetheless/
nevertheless/
on
the
other
hand
（副词和短语）
rather/
instead
（副词）
rather
than/
instead
of
（介词）
例：Because
it
is
more
likely
now
that
both
parents
work,
there
is
little
opportunity
for
children
to
stay
in
their
own
home
to
6
or
7.
Instead,
they
will
probably
go
to
a
nursery
school
when
they
are
much
younger.
（可代替词汇
rather）
递进关系
moreover/
what’s
more/
furthermore/
besides/
in
addition
(副词)
in
addition
to/
besides/
apart
from
（介词）
例:
Apart
from
these
tensions
caused
by
cultural
differences,
international
tourism
may
also
lead
to
conflicts
between
tourists
and
a
local
community.
(可代替词汇：in
addition
to,
besides)
让步关系
although/
though/
even
though/
even
if/while
(连词)
in
spite
of/
despite
（介词）
no
matter
how/when/
what
（连词）
例：
In
spite
of
this,
the
obvious
benefits
of
computer
skills
for
young
children
cannot
be
denied.
They
are
allowed
to
buy
whatever
they
want,
no
matter
how
much
it
cost
(高分句式)
学生学习时，可根据以上方法对不同的关系词进行归类。我们发现当中有些副词（最典型为
for
example,
however,
therefore）放在句子中间，前后用逗号隔开，这种句式相当的经典。
例如：
There
is,
however,
another
problem
way
of
defining
that
part
of
the
quotation.
I
think,
therefore,
that
governments
need
to
raise
this
awareness
in
the
general
public.
They
will,
for
example,
be
able
to
fly
planes
and
they
will
be
able
to
co-ordinate
the
movements
of
several
planes
in
the
vicinity
of
an
airport.
佳作赏析1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为“梦想点亮人生（Dream
Lightens
Life）”。请你用英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投稿，要点如下：
你的梦想是什么；
阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生，使你的生活变得不同；
你认为实现梦想需要什么。
Dream
Lightens
Life
Dotted
with
ups
and
downs
and
twists
and
turns,
our
life
is
therefore
twinkling
with
beams
of
light.
Then
what
is
the
reason?
It
is
dreams
that
may
partly
account
for
it.
What
light
is
to
a
dark
night,
dream
is
to
our
supposedly
plain
life.
As
for
me,
my
dream
is
nothing
but
to
be
happy,
happy
enough
to
assure
myself
that
every
day
spent
is
rewarding
and
instructive.
I
benefit
a
lot
from
my
dream.
Every
time
I
challenge
myself
to
complete
a
seemingly
impossible
task
and
manage
to
work
it
out,
I
will
feel
uplifted
from
the
bottom
of
my
heart.
As
a
result,
I
hardly
bear
the
assumption
that
there
is
anything
I
can
never
deal
with,
painstaking
though
it
is.
Additionally,
dream
can
favorably
better
my
attitudes
toward
life.
For
example,
sometimes
when
I
am
in
low
spirits,
my
dream
will
pop
into
my
mind
to
convince
me
not
to
waste
time
complaining
about
what
has
happened
but
to
fully
utilize
remaining
time
to
adjust
myself
to
what
will
happen.
However,
on
the
way
of
fulfilling
my
dream,
there
are
sure
to
be
some
obstacles.
The
key
factors
to
get
rid
of
them,
personally,
are
perseverance,
flexible
ability
to
regulate
the
mindset
and
the
sharp
observation
to
look
for
beauty.
In
the
first
place,
perseverance
is
the
fuel
for
your
procession.
Only
by
persisting
in
your
dream
and
keeping
on
striving
for
it
can
you
render
it
become
a
habit
and
a
daily
routine
to
you.
Then
the
capacity
of
adjustment
is
also
an
indispensable
part,
which
will
constantly
ensure
you
the
sweetness
of
escaping
from
sorrow
and
balancing
your
state.
Being
ready
to
find
beauty,
above
all,
is
an
addition
of
pleasure
in
the
event
of
boredom
or
trouble.
Different
as
our
dreams
are,
chances
are
that
everyone
has
a
burning
desire
to
make
it
come
true.
Therefore,
everyone
should
spare
no
pains,
no
trouble
and
no
expense
to
scale
his
or
her
new
heights
and
step
into
a
brand
new
prospect.
佳作赏析2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
腾讯公司（Tencent
Company）就微信用户的阅读偏好做了一项调查，调查结果如下图。请你仔细观察这张图片，然后谈谈这张图片反映出的现象或问题，并向微信用户提出你的建议。
注意：作文中不得出现你自己的真实姓名、班级及学校。
提示：WeChat:
微信
Moments:
朋友圈
respondents:
受访者
Text:
微信朋友圈文章
Articles:
微信公众号文章
At
the
dawn
of
information
age,
WeChat
has
revolutionized
the
way
of
personal
involvement
in
reading
with
its
convenience
and
efficiency.
A
recent
survey
has
been
carried
out
to
research
into
the
type
of
content
users
like
to
see
on
WeChat
Moments.
As
is
specifically
shown
in
the
chart,
Pictures
and
Text
on
Moments,
by
and
large,
win
half
of
the
respondents’
favor,
while
45%
people
fancy
Short
videos.
Impressively,
those
who
have
a
taste
for
Articles
merely
account
for
22.3%.
The
statistics
from
the
chart
shed
light
on
the
conspicuous
phenomenon
that
increasingly
more
people
prioritize
fragmented
reading,
thus
ignorant
of
the
charm
of
Articles
which
may
bring
them
food
for
thought.
There
is
no
denying
that
fragmented
reading
do
boasts
its
quickness
and
freshness,
especially
in
such
a
fast-paced
society.
However,
deep
reading
of
Articles
can
exert
a
fascination
of
its
own
that
fragmented
reading
will
never
overshadow.
Not
only
can
it
ensure
readers
the
pleasant
reading
experience,
but
it
features
quality
content
as
well,
such
as
classics
and
masterpieces.
Actually,
I’m
a
hardcore
fan
of
kindle.
Whenever
I
take
a
long
journey,
I
will
be
preoccupied
in
my
kindle
for
novels.
So,
why
not
open
your
Articles
and
strike
up
your
journey
for
in-depth
reading?
I’m
sure
it
will
also
be
your
oyster!
实战演练
近年来，人工智能(Artificial
Intelligence)发展迅速，人们日益关注AI对人类未来的影响。马云认为，人类创造出的机器，不可能超越人类。霍金(Stephen
Hawking)则表示：“人工智能的完全发展可能预示着人类的终结”。你同意谁的观点，请说明理由。
参考范文：
(话题引入段+亮明自己立场)
With
the?fast-paced?development
of
Artificial
Intelligence,
human-beings'
concerns
about
its
influence
are
also
growing.?While?(对比结构)
others?are
persuaded
into?Ma
Yun’s
believing
that?(同位语)
the
machines
created
by
human-beings
can’t?exceed?human
intelligence,?I
will
always
stick
to
my
personal
opinion?that?(同位语)
the
sufficient
development
of
Artificial
Intelligence?may?cause
the
end
of
human-beings,?the
same
as?Stephen
Hawking's
perspective.
(理由段01)
Firstly,
many
people?only?have
seen
the
AI’s
benefits
of?charting
us
a?bold
course?
to?a
more
convenient
and
easy
life,?but?they
haven’t
seen
that
the
AI
has?robbed?most
workers’
job,??which(定从)
led
them
to
a
miserable
life
of
failing
to
support
their
families.
?Then?it
triggered
a
fresh
argument??that(同位从)
AI
would
replace
us
in
every
industry
and
people
from?all
walks
of
life?might
lose
their
jobs,??being
short
of
income
and
even
food.(现在分词作结果状语)
(理由段02)
Secondly,
I
don't
believe
that
we
can
always
control
the
AI.
The
problem
is
that
now
we
just
have
invented
it
but
really
haven't
known
about
whether
it
has
its
own
mind
to
think?while?,("然而"，表对比)it
actually
knows
what
we
are
thinking
about.
If
it
has
its
ability
to
damage
us
all
by
taking
control
of
our
life,
we
will
be
finished
easily.
(总结段)
All
in
all,
we
can't?turn
a
blind
eye
to?these
concerns.?There
is
no
better
choice
than?doing
something(there
be句型+比较结构)?
to
change
the
present
situation??so
that
(结果状从)
we
can?spare
people
their
anxiety?and
live
with
the
help
of
AI
conveniently.?
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
about120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
近年来，随着科技的迅猛发展，身边的新事物取代旧事物的事例层出不穷，请你简要描述一个具体实例，并说明这一新事物存在的理由。
参考范文：
With
the
rapid
development
of
modern
technology
and
science,
new
inventions
and
products
have
conveniently
emerged
to
better
our
urban
life
and
give
us
more
convenience.
One
possible
example
is
the
"Robot
Servant".
It
is
believed
to
gradually
substitute
some
easy
human
labor.
Robot
Servant
is
a
machine
that
can
help
us
with
housework
and
delivery
procedures
in
workplace.
For
example,
we
used
to
fail
to
clean
the
corner
of
the
house
and
find
it
hard
to
swipe
the
wine
stink
on
the
carpet.
However,
robot
servant
can
solve
all
these
problems
by
just
switching
the
"Cleaning
Mode"
in
one
second.
Additionally,
in
the
delivery
field,
T-mall
and
Taobao
have
already
hired
robots
to
identify
and
distribute
products.
Just
imagine,
compared
with
hiring
workers
to
do
the
repeated
procedures,
when
millions
of
parcels
arrive,
robots
can
sort
them
out
at
a
very
fast
speed
without
making
a
mistake.
This
can
profoundly
save
much
time
and
money
and
more
importantly
release
human
from
the
burden
of
inefficient
work.
Hence,
the
benefits
of
Robot
Servant
are
obvious.
Firstly
it
is
smart
and
professional.
The
invention
and
popularity
of
robots
is
to
some
extent
avoid
the
emotional
effects
from
human
being
at
work.
Secondly,
during
this
artificial
intelligence
era,
we
actually
have
stepped
ourselves
out
to
improve
the
quality
of
life
and
efficiency
of
work
so
that
we
can
save
up
more
energy
and
time
to
do
other
things.
Though
invented
by
human
beings,
Robots
Servant
doesn't
mean
to
take
place
of
human,
but
to
serve
human.
This
is
the
victory
of
human
intelligence.
To
conclude,
robots
are
helpful
and
will
be
more
and
more
popular
in
the
future.
We
can't
avoid
changes
just
like
we
can't
go
back
to
yesterday.
The
only
thing
we
can
do
is
to
embrace
new
things
in
the
proper
way.
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如何让英语作文更具“文彩”
)
（一）运用高级词汇
词组优先原则
丰富的英语表达少不了用到一些常用的词组。事实上，词组的使用范围远大于单个单词。写作时需要我们运用平时所积累的一些语言知识，尽量增加文章的文采。例如:
A.
We
spent
too
much
time
developing
individual
skills
and
we
don’t
spend
any
time
making
the
team
a
united
one.
?—As
opposed
to?making
the
team
a
united
one,
we
spend
too
much
time
on
developing
individual
skills.
B.
?The
theatre
is
being
built
now.
?
?
—The
theatre
is?under
construction.
C.
?Dirt
and
disease
exist
together.
?
—Dirt
and
disease?go
hand
in
hand.
D.
?When
one
meets
a
demanding
challenge,
the
speech
of
Steve
Jobs
is
a
great
guide.
—In
face
of?a
demanding
challenge,
the
speech
of
Steve
Jobs
serves
as
a
great
puters
are
very
important
in
our
life.
—Computers
play
a
very
important
role/of
great
importance
in
our
life.
Suddenly
I
thought
out
a
good
idea.
—A
good
idea
occurred
to
me./A
good
idea
suddenly
struck
me.
核心高级词汇原则
普通词汇（表达）
VS
核心高级词汇（表达）
普通表达
高级表达
clever
聪明的
bright
/
intelligent
hard
努力地
diligently
sometimes
有时候
occasionally/once
in
a
while
think/consider
认为，考虑
take
sth
into
consideration/account
pay
attention
to
注意
attach
importance
to
We
should
/
must/
can
我们要…
It
would
be
better
if
we
could…
It
is
highly
desirable
if
we…
It
is
our
duty
/
obligation
to
do
…
It
is
highly
recommended/appreciated
that
we…
We
shouldn’t
/
mustn’t
我们不能/
/不应该
Never
should
we
…
On
no
account
should
we…
By
no
means
should
we
…
Under
no
circumstances
should
we…
In
no
case
should
we…
(以上全都表示：在任何情况下我们都不能。。。。。)
用倒装句表示“不能”更加高级
important
意义重大的
crucial
/
vital
/
critical
essential
/
significant
far-reaching
(意义深远的)
be
of
great
importance
be
of
profound
significance
sth
is
the
most
important.
最重要的
sth
is
the
top
priority.
(重中之重)
sth
is
of
vital
importance.
I
think
/
I
believe
In
my
humble
opinion
我相信，我主张
I
maintain
/
hold
/
assert
that
I
am
firmly
convinced
that
I
hold
strong
belief
that
I
hold
the
opinion
that
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
…
I
will
definitely
support
the
idea
that…
From
my
points
of
view
In
my
perspective
support
/
agree
支持，赞成，提倡
I
advocate
the
opinion
that
I
am
in
favor
of
the
proposal
that
I
strongly
recommend
/
suggest
that
I
sing
high
praise
for
sth
I
think
highly
of
I
speak
highly
of
It
is
high
time
that
we
did
sth
consider
sth
as
extremely
important
高度重视,认为…很重要
lay/put/place
great
emphasis
on
attach
great
importance
to
put
a
high
value
on
disagree
反对，抵制
oppose/object
to/resist
the
idea
that
refute
the
opinion
that（反驳…的观点）
ask
consult
sb
(咨询某人)
turn
to
sb
(for
sth)
inquire
sth
/
that
(询问)
we
all
know
that
众所周知
As
is
known
to
all,…
It
is
known
to
all
that
It
is
generally
accepted
that
It
is
widely
believed
that
It
is
universally
acknowledged
that
It
is
common
knowledge
that
no
doubt
毫无疑问
It
goes
without
saying
that
There
is
no
denying
that
It
is
undeniable
that
There
is
no
doubt
that
Undoubtedly,
…Doubtless，…Undeniably,
…
It
is
self-evident
that
It
is
apparent/obvious/clear
that
say
/
tell告诉,表达
voice
one’s
opinion
convey
the
idea
that
deliver
the
message
that
use使用
make
full
/
the
best
use
of
employ/apply/utilize/optimize
good
side
好处//优点
strength
/
strong
points
/
advantage
/
benefit
/
merit
bad
side坏处/缺点
weakness
/
weak
points
disadvantage
/
drawback
/
defect
/
flaw
/deficiency
sth
is
good
（某东西）很好
sth
is
highly
desirable.
sth
is
highly
appreciated.
sth
is
highly
valued.
sth
is
required.
很必要的
sth
is
indispensable.
(不可或缺的)
sth
is
irreplaceable.
(不可替代的)
sth
is
imperative.
(必要的，势在必行的)
famous
杰出的
outstanding
world-renowned
(世界文明的)
eminent
(卓越的)
prestigious
can’t
be
replaced
不可取代的
sth
is
irreplaceable(不可取代的).
sth
is
indispensable
(不可或缺的)
more
and
more
people
越来越多
an
increasing
number
of
people
sth
is
more
and
more
popular越来越受欢迎
sth
is
enjoying
increasing
popularity.
hobby爱好
inclination
have
an
inclination
to
do有做某事的爱好，倾向
be
forced
to
do
被迫做某事
be
compelled
to
do
character个性
individuality
The
number
of
A
is
larger
than
B
A数字超过了B
A
outnumber
B
A
is
more
important
than
B
A比B重要
A
outweigh
B
eg:
The
advantages
far
outweigh
the
disadvantages.
Different
people
have
different
opinions
on
sth有不同的看
关于…不同的人法
Opinions
on
sth
vary
greatly
from
person
to
person
避免重复原则
同义，近义替换
如果一个词在一篇120词左右的文中出现三次，文章可读性必然降低。
因此，要使文章生动，可以在上下文中用同义词或词组替换同一个意思的词语。遇到一时想不起的词语，可以用近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式或使用单词前缀、后缀灵活变通。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉语化表达。例如：
?I
like
reading
while
my
brother
likes
watching
television.
—I
like
reading
while
my
brother
enjoys
/
is
fond
of
/
is
keen
on
watching
television.
?
the
arrival
of
the
age
of
information
—
the
approach
of
the
Internet
era?
—the
emergence
of
the
digital
age
—the
rise
of
the
network
as
a
way
to
relieve
stress
C.
make
students
interested
in
study
?
?---
stir/stimulate
students’
interest
in
study
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
---?arouse
students’
passion
in
learning
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
---?make
students
self-motivated
in
acquiring
knowledge
（2）词性转换
对于一些高频形容词，不妨尝试用一下它的其他词性，使语言不“落入俗套”。
例如：
A.
?Rockets
have
been?applied?to
explore
the
universe.
?
?
?
?
—Rockets
have
found?application?for
the
exploration
of
the
universe.
B.
?Some
people
are?reluctant?to
donate
money
because
the
charity
system
in
China
is
still?immature.
?
?
?
—The?immaturity?of
the
charity
system
in
China
caused
people’s?reluctance?in
donation.
C.
?Independent
thinking
is?necessary?in
study.
?
?
?
?
—Independent
thinking
is?a
necessity?in
study.
D.
?That
the
mobile
devices
can?recognize?the
speaker’s
voice
is
more
and
more
popular.
—Speech?recognition?on
mobile
devices
is
growing
in
popularity.?
（3）一句多表
—
The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
carrying
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
—
The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
with
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
—The
old
lady
walked
out
of
the
supermarket,
a
heavy
shopping
bag
on
her
shoulder.
表达地道原则
俗语成语：为了用地道的英语语言写出漂亮的作文，形象化、生动化及趣味性的词语或词组也应进入我们的备考词典。例如：
能言善辩---
have
a
silver
tongue
害群之马---
a
black
sheep
?
成天看电视的人---a
couch
potato
?
?
?喜欢乱说话的人---
a
big
mouth
???????有经验的新手---
a
green
hand
????????视而不见---turn
a
blind
eye
to
????????备受关注---in
the
spotlight
?
?
??轻而易举的事情---
a
piece
of
cake
????????没前途的工作---dead-end
job
?
?
??最后的忍耐极限---
the
last
straw
?
?
??茫然不知情---
in
the
dark
?
?
??金科玉律---
golden
rule?
插入语：看似漫不经心的插入语，其实能显示作者的功底，也是许多阅卷老师青睐的表达方式。插入语能使句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉。副词、连接词和短语都可以当作插入语，放在句子中间，它们一般位于主语之后，动词或助动词的前面，两边分别加上逗号。
例如：
A.
A
person,?like
a
commodity,?needs
packaging.
B.
The
main
reason
why
people
travel
is,?perhaps,
for
pleasure.
C.
Students,?at
large,
have
to
face
a
tough
choice
when
choosing
majors.
D.
Life
is,?in
a
sense,
a
harsh
battle.
E.
Some
students,?due
to
timidity,
don’t
dare
to
ask
questions
in
class.
F.
Protecting
the
environment,?as
I
see
it,
has
a
far-reaching
influence
on
future
generations.??????
G.
Other
individuals,?however,?take
the
attitude
that
the
government
should
take
the
responsibility
to
take
care
of
the
old.
H.
A
good
teacher
not
only
offers
knowledge,?but
more
importantly,
he
also
teaches
students
how
to
behave
well.
（二）运用多变复杂句式
1、肯定不如双否好
The
postman
comes
on
time
every
day.
[修正]The
postman
never
fails
to
come
on
time.
I
have
made
great
progress
in
English
with
his
help.
[修正]I
couldn’t
have
made
so
much
progress
in
English
without
his
help.
2、陈述不如倒装妙
倒装句：否定词或词组放句首时，句子要部分倒装。Not
only
...
but
also
...前后连接两个句子时，not
only后的句子要用部分倒装，但but
also后的分句不用倒装。
“Only+状语”位于句首时，要用部分倒装，only后的状语可以是副词、介词短语、从
句等。让步状语从句也可以倒装，结构为:
副词/形容词/名词+as+主语+动词(名词放在句首时，冠词要省略)。
例如:
There
is
no
denying
that
we
all
lead
a
busy
school
life,
but
by
no
means
should
this
be
an
excuse
for
not
doing
housework.
Not
only
does
the
Internet
provide
us
with
easy
access
to
a
wealth
of
information,
but
also
it
helps
us
to
escape
from
the
pressure
in
reality.
Small
as
Armstrong's
step
on
the
moon
is,
it
is
a
giant
leap
for
the
human
being.
In
the
center
of
our
school
lies
our
library,
which
is
between
the
garden
and
the
teaching
building.
3.主动不如被动巧
We
can
borrow
five
books
at
most,
and
we
can
keep
them
for
ten
days.
[修正]At
most
we
can
borrow
five
books
at
a
time
and
they
can
be
kept
for
ten
days.
4.、非谓语结构不能少
非谓语动词：非谓语动词改变了动词只能作谓语的功能，使其在英语句子中的用法更加灵活、多变。非谓语动词包括动名词、不定式和分词。对于语法基础牢固的考生来说，应该多尝试运用非谓语结构的表达，这是在英语写作中使文章增色的重要手段之一。例如：
Governments
ought
to
make
efforts
to
reduce
the
increasing
gap
between
cities
and
countryside.
(不定式）
To
make
the
most
of
our
abilities
and
find
the
positions
that
most
fit
us
in
society
are
shortcuts
to
fulfill
our
value.
(不定式)
It
is
no
use
crying
over
the
spilt
milk.
(动名词)
The
majority
of
people
object
to
smoking
in
public.
(动名词)
Government
should
enforce
relevant
laws
or
regulations
to
severely
punish
the
factory
producing
a
great
number
of
pollutants
and
the
people
littering
or
spitting
deliberately.
(现在分词)
If
life
is
a
sea,
dream
is
like
a
compass?
leading
us
to
the
shore.
(现在分词)
President
Obama
said
educational
success
and
economic
well-being
are
linked,
especially
in
a
world
economy
driven
by
information
and
technology.
(过去分词)
Lost
in
the
Internet
world,
you
lose
your
passion
for
life,
miss
the
beauty
of
nature
and
make
an
indifferent
person
of
yourself.
(过去分词)
另外，几乎所有的状语从句（时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等），都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，例如条件状语从句：If
such
is
the
case,
you
should
apologize
to
her.
如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？
The
young
man
couldn’t
help
crying
when
he
heard
the
bad
news.
[修正]
Hearing
the
bad
news,
the
young
man
couldn’t
help
crying.
If
everything
is
taken
into
consideration,
we
ought
to
have
another
chance.
[修正]
Everything
taken
into
consideration,
we
ought
to
have
another
chance.
5、单句不比从句强
复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句。在熟练做了各类语法题目后,
也应该具有知识迁移的能力,
在作文中可以运用各类复合句，表达较为复杂的逻辑关系。例如:
This
is
a
century
that
will
be
remembered
for
its
willingness
to
break
classical
bonds
and
nurture
the
creativity
needed
for
scientific
innovation.
(限制性定语从句)
As
people’s
desire
to
get
wealth
and
fame
grows,
many
cases
are
found
in
sports
games
where
athletes
cheat
in
the
games
or
violent
conflicts
between
the
players
happen
(时间状语从句，限制性定语从句)
What
doesn’t
kill
you
will
only
make
you
stronger.
(主语从句)
A
lot
of
people
still
hold
the
opinion
that
appearance
is
far
more
important
than
capability
is.
(同位语从句；
比较状语从句)
Everyone
possesses
a
dream.
That's
why
they
establish
ahead
of
themselves
a
series
of
goals
and
are
motivated
to
fulfill
the
ultimate
dream.
(表语从句)
Home
is
like
a
harbor,
where
we
can
rest
when
we
feel
upset
or
frustrated,
and
then
we
can
set
out
again
with
encouragement
and
confidence.
(非限制性定语从句；
时间状语从句)
Since
we
can't
remove
stress
from
our
lives,
we
need
to
find
ways
to
handle
it.
(原因状语从句)
?If
we
care
for
a
person,
if
we
are
always
ready
to
help
that
person
and
if
we
share
most
of
our
thoughts
and
feelings
with
a
person,
they
are
our
genuine
friends.?
(状语从句)
Success
and
failure
is
often
wrongly
defined
by
grades
where
exam-oriented
education
is
popularized.
(地点状语从句)
Treat
others
as
you
wish
to
be
treated.
(方式状语从句)
?Roses
need
special
care
so
that
they
can
live
through
winter.
(目的状语从句)
Our
relationship
is
so
deep
and
close
that
most
of
the
things
are
automatically
understood
by
each
other.
(结果状语从句)
Human
nature
is
such
that
man
always
desires
to
earn
more
money.
(结果状语从句)
Ecologists
pointed
out
that
a
cluster
of
tall
buildings
in
a
city
often
overburdens
public
transportation
and
parking
lot
capacities.
(宾语从句)
Whatever
the
future
may
have
in
store,we
will
be
well-prepared
for
it
if
we
learn
to
accept
change
and
appreciate
what
is
new
and
different.
(让步状语从句，条件状语从句，宾语从句)
注意：
值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。
固定句型：英语中有大量的固定句型和惯用句式，这些句型和句式都是约定俗成的。如果在平时的学习或复习中能够有意识地、积极有效地积累、总结和归纳这些句型和句式，就能在写作时增强语言的表现力，丰富语言的色彩。例如：
①?Etiquette
to
society
is
what
clothing
is
to
the
individual.
(...对于...就好像…
对于…)
②?We
can’t
be
too
cautious
when
choosing
majors.
(再…也不过分)
③?We
have
to
admit
where
there
is
a
chance，there
might
also
be
a
barrier.
(哪里有……，哪里就有……)
④?There
is
no
denying
that
a
friend
might
change
your
life
by
being
part
of
it.
(不可否认……)
⑤?Just
as
woods
are
absolutely
necessary
to
birds,
so
is
the
earth
to
human
beings.
(正如…,
…也一样)
（三）运用衔接手段
英语作文衔接手段包括逻辑衔接、语法衔接、词汇衔接。对于高中英语作文，这里重点讲解逻辑衔接手段，所谓逻辑衔接手段可分为：并列关系、解释关系、转折和让步关系、递进关系、例证关系、因果关系等等。
转折关系：
but/
while/
yet/
whereas(连词)
however/
nonetheless/
nevertheless/
on
the
other
hand
（副词和短语）
rather/
instead
（副词）
rather
than/
instead
of
（介词）
例：Because
it
is
more
likely
now
that
both
parents
work,
there
is
little
opportunity
for
children
to
stay
in
their
own
home
to
6
or
7.
Instead,
they
will
probably
go
to
a
nursery
school
when
they
are
much
younger.
（可代替词汇
rather）
递进关系
moreover/
what’s
more/
furthermore/
besides/
in
addition
(副词)
in
addition
to/
besides/
apart
from
（介词）
例:
Apart
from
these
tensions
caused
by
cultural
differences,
international
tourism
may
also
lead
to
conflicts
between
tourists
and
a
local
community.
(可代替词汇：in
addition
to,
besides)
让步关系
although/
though/
even
though/
even
if/while
(连词)
in
spite
of/
despite
（介词）
no
matter
how/when/
what
（连词）
例：
In
spite
of
this,
the
obvious
benefits
of
computer
skills
for
young
children
cannot
be
denied.
They
are
allowed
to
buy
whatever
they
want,
no
matter
how
much
it
cost
(高分句式)
学生学习时，可根据以上方法对不同的关系词进行归类。我们发现当中有些副词（最典型为
for
example,
however,
therefore）放在句子中间，前后用逗号隔开，这种句式相当的经典。
例如：
There
is,
however,
another
problem
way
of
defining
that
part
of
the
quotation.
I
think,
therefore,
that
governments
need
to
raise
this
awareness
in
the
general
public.
They
will,
for
example,
be
able
to
fly
planes
and
they
will
be
able
to
co-ordinate
the
movements
of
several
planes
in
the
vicinity
of
an
airport.
佳作赏析1
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为“梦想点亮人生（Dream
Lightens
Life）”。请你用英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投稿，要点如下：
你的梦想是什么；
阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生，使你的生活变得不同；
你认为实现梦想需要什么。
Dream
Lightens
Life
Dotted
with
ups
and
downs
and
twists
and
turns,
our
life
is
therefore
twinkling
with
beams
of
light.
Then
what
is
the
reason?
It
is
dreams
that
may
partly
account
for
it.
What
light
is
to
a
dark
night,
dream
is
to
our
supposedly
plain
life.
As
for
me,
my
dream
is
nothing
but
to
be
happy,
happy
enough
to
assure
myself
that
every
day
spent
is
rewarding
and
instructive.
I
benefit
a
lot
from
my
dream.
Every
time
I
challenge
myself
to
complete
a
seemingly
impossible
task
and
manage
to
work
it
out,
I
will
feel
uplifted
from
the
bottom
of
my
heart.
As
a
result,
I
hardly
bear
the
assumption
that
there
is
anything
I
can
never
deal
with,
painstaking
though
it
is.
Additionally,
dream
can
favorably
better
my
attitudes
toward
life.
For
example,
sometimes
when
I
am
in
low
spirits,
my
dream
will
pop
into
my
mind
to
convince
me
not
to
waste
time
complaining
about
what
has
happened
but
to
fully
utilize
remaining
time
to
adjust
myself
to
what
will
happen.
However,
on
the
way
of
fulfilling
my
dream,
there
are
sure
to
be
some
obstacles.
The
key
factors
to
get
rid
of
them,
personally,
are
perseverance,
flexible
ability
to
regulate
the
mindset
and
the
sharp
observation
to
look
for
beauty.
In
the
first
place,
perseverance
is
the
fuel
for
your
procession.
Only
by
persisting
in
your
dream
and
keeping
on
striving
for
it
can
you
render
it
become
a
habit
and
a
daily
routine
to
you.
Then
the
capacity
of
adjustment
is
also
an
indispensable
part,
which
will
constantly
ensure
you
the
sweetness
of
escaping
from
sorrow
and
balancing
your
state.
Being
ready
to
find
beauty,
above
all,
is
an
addition
of
pleasure
in
the
event
of
boredom
or
trouble.
Different
as
our
dreams
are,
chances
are
that
everyone
has
a
burning
desire
to
make
it
come
true.
Therefore,
everyone
should
spare
no
pains,
no
trouble
and
no
expense
to
scale
his
or
her
new
heights
and
step
into
a
brand
new
prospect.
佳作赏析2
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
腾讯公司（Tencent
Company）就微信用户的阅读偏好做了一项调查，调查结果如下图。请你仔细观察这张图片，然后谈谈这张图片反映出的现象或问题，并向微信用户提出你的建议。
注意：作文中不得出现你自己的真实姓名、班级及学校。
提示：WeChat:
微信
Moments:
朋友圈
respondents:
受访者
Text:
微信朋友圈文章
Articles:
微信公众号文章
At
the
dawn
of
information
age,
WeChat
has
revolutionized
the
way
of
personal
involvement
in
reading
with
its
convenience
and
efficiency.
A
recent
survey
has
been
carried
out
to
research
into
the
type
of
content
users
like
to
see
on
WeChat
Moments.
As
is
specifically
shown
in
the
chart,
Pictures
and
Text
on
Moments,
by
and
large,
win
half
of
the
respondents’
favor,
while
45%
people
fancy
Short
videos.
Impressively,
those
who
have
a
taste
for
Articles
merely
account
for
22.3%.
The
statistics
from
the
chart
shed
light
on
the
conspicuous
phenomenon
that
increasingly
more
people
prioritize
fragmented
reading,
thus
ignorant
of
the
charm
of
Articles
which
may
bring
them
food
for
thought.
There
is
no
denying
that
fragmented
reading
do
boasts
its
quickness
and
freshness,
especially
in
such
a
fast-paced
society.
However,
deep
reading
of
Articles
can
exert
a
fascination
of
its
own
that
fragmented
reading
will
never
overshadow.
Not
only
can
it
ensure
readers
the
pleasant
reading
experience,
but
it
features
quality
content
as
well,
such
as
classics
and
masterpieces.
Actually,
I’m
a
hardcore
fan
of
kindle.
Whenever
I
take
a
long
journey,
I
will
be
preoccupied
in
my
kindle
for
novels.
So,
why
not
open
your
Articles
and
strike
up
your
journey
for
in-depth
reading?
I’m
sure
it
will
also
be
your
oyster!
实战演练
近年来，人工智能(Artificial
Intelligence)发展迅速，人们日益关注AI对人类未来的影响。马云认为，人类创造出的机器，不可能超越人类。霍金(Stephen
Hawking)则表示：“人工智能的完全发展可能预示着人类的终结”。你同意谁的观点，请说明理由。
写作指导：
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Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
about120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
近年来，随着科技的迅猛发展，身边的新事物取代旧事物的事例层出不穷，请你简要描述一个具体实例，并说明这一新事物存在的理由。
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