人教版新目标2021中考英语一轮话题写作（一）日常生活（写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
话题写作（一）日常活动
教材话题链接
七下Unit2
What
time
do
you
go
to
school
?
七下Unit
6
I’m
watching
TV.
七下Unit
12
What
did
you
do
last
weekend
?
八上Unit
2
How
often
do
you
exercise
?
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华，请给你的好朋友Mike
写一封电子邮件，向他简要介绍你一天的主要活动。
要点如下：
1.生活方式：很健康，早上6:00起床，早餐前锻炼半个小时。
2
交通：你家离学校很近，通常步行上学，大概花十分钟到达学校。
3
爱好：喜欢阅读和写作，每天会阅读和写作1个小时。因为擅长写作，所以梦想着成为一名作家。
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3
文中得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Mike
,
How
is
it
going
?
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Yours
Li
Hua
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
My
daily
Life
开篇点题：Topic
:
my
everyday
life
Lifestyle:
have
a
healthy
living
style
主体内容：get
up
at
six
;
do
exercise
before
breakfast
;
walk
to
school
/go
to
school
on
foot
;
like
reading
and
writing
;
dream
of
becoming
a
great
writer
总结收尾：Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
开篇点题：
Let
me
tell
you
___________________________________
.
I
have
_______________________________________
.
主体内容：
I
get
up
_______________________________every
morning
I
usually
_____________________________in
the
park
.
My
home
is
not
far
from
our
school
.
I
often
_________________________________________.
I
like
________________________________________
.
I
dream
____________________________________.
总结收尾
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Dear
Mike
,
How
is
it
going
?
Let
me
tell
you
my
daily
life
.
I
have
a
healthy
living
style
.
I
get
up
at
six
every
morning
.
Before
having
breakfast
,
I
usually
do
exercise
for
half
an
hour
in
the
park
.
My
home
is
not
far
from
our
school
.
So
I
often
walk
to
school
.
It
takes
me
about
ten
minutes
to
get
to
school.
I
like
reading
and
writing
.
I
spend
one
hour
enjoying
them
.
I
dream
of
becoming
a
great
writer
.
I’m
sure
my
everyday
life
is
happy
and
interesting
.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Yours
Li
Hua
Step
5
修-修饰美化
扩句：
Let
me
tell
you
_____________________________my
everyday
life
扩句：
So
I
often
walk
to
school
.
_________________________________
makes
me
relaxed
.
扩句：___________________
,
I
like
reading
and
writing
.
I
spend
one
hour
enjoying
them
every
day
.
My
dream
is
_______________________a
great
writer
someday
.
【名师点晴】
文章的连贯性是评分的一条标准，因此同学们应根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列，递进等关系的过渡词，对写好的句子进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
同时避免汉化现象，尽量使用熟悉的句型。
其次，正确使用固定搭配以及两三个好的句型，如：被动句、非谓语动词、复合句或it作形式主语的句子等。
最后，应该围绕动词中心进行恰当地联想和发挥。
美文诵读
Dear
Mike
,
How
is
it
going
?
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
my
everyday
life
.
I
have
a
healthy
living
style
.
I
get
up
at
six
every
morning
.
Before
having
breakfast
,
I
usually
do
exercise
for
half
an
hour
in
the
park
.
My
home
is
not
far
from
our
school
.
So
I
often
walk
to
school
.
Going
to
school
on
foot
/
Walking
to
school
makes
me
relaxed
.
It
only
takes
me
about
ten
minutes
to
get
to
school
.
In
my
free
time
,
I
like
reading
and
writing
.
I
spend
one
hour
enjoying
them
every
day
.
My
dream
is
to
be
a
great
writer
someday
.
I’m
sure
my
everyday
life
is
happy
and
interesting
.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
Yours.
Li
Hua
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
交通类
walk
to
,
go(to
)....on
foot
,
take
the
subway
by
subway
,
ride
a
bike
,
by
bike
,
take
a
plane
,
by
plane
/air
,
drive
to
,
go
(to)
....by
car
,
thirty
minutes’
walk
,
fifteen
minutes
by
bike
,
cross
the
river
,
between
...and
,,,,
活动类
go
to
school
,
get
up
,
take
a
walk
,
brush
teeth
,
do
one’s
homework
,
get
dressed
,
go
to
bed
,
take
a
shower
,
do
morning
exercises
,
go
swimming
,
go
camping
,
go
on
a
picnic
,
go
on
holiday
,
go
to
visit
,
have
a
good
rest
and
relax
,
go
sightseeing
,
travel
around
the
world
....
感觉类
happy
,
interested
,
excited
,
tired
,
unbelievable
,
nervous
,
enjoyable
,
surprised
,
embarrassed
....
佳句积累
【开头句】
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
my
everyday
life
.
I
have
a
healthy
living
style
.
I
have
the
same
routine
(路线）from
Monday
to
Friday
.
Do
you
want
to
know
about
my
day
?
I
have
a
busy
everyday
life
I’m
very
happy
that
you
are
interested
in
my
daily
life
.
It
is
known
to
us
that
a
healthy
lifestyle
leads
to
a
healthy
life
,
so
it’s
important
for
us
to
keep
a
healthy
lifestyle
.
Nowadays
,
we
students
have
much
more
spare
time
than
ever
before
,
but
how
to
make
our
spare
time
more
meaningful
?
It’s
very
important
for
us
to
develop
good
habits
.
Good
habits
are
important
in
our
lives
.
They
influence
us
a
lot
in
many
ways
.
Getting
up
early
is
a
good
habit
.
It’s
good
for
us
in
many
ways
.
Good
living
styles
and
good
health
are
twins
.
【发展句】
In
my
opinion
,
we
can
do
something
meaningful
instead
of
playing
with
the
smartphone
or
watching
TV.
I
hope
I
can
do
something
to
relax
myself
.
Going
for
a
walk
makes
me
relaxed
and
healthy
.
In
the
evening
,
I
often
listen
to
some
nice
music
or
read
my
favorite
books
.
My
school
is
not
far
away
from
my
home
,
so
I
often
go
to
school
on
foot
.
In
the
past
I
often
went
to
bed
very
late
at
night
.
So
I
felt
very
tired
and
sleepy
the
next
day
.
It
can
help
remember
important
things
easily
.
What’s
more
,
we
should
eat
more
fresh
fruit
and
vegetables
and
less
junk
food
.
We
should
also
care
for
our
parents
and
help
them
do
more
housework
in
our
spare
time
.
【结尾句】
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
all
.
I
hope
you
can
write
and
tell
me
about
your
day
.
All
in
all
,
a
healthy
lifestyle
can
help
you
feel
more
relaxed
in
both
study
and
daily
life
.
Keep
a
healthy
lifestyle
,
and
you’ll
get
healthier
and
healthier
day
by
day
.
Today
is
tiring
and
boring
.
What
an
unlucky
day
I
had
!
I’m
sure
it
is
an
interesting
and
meaningful
day
.
In
a
word
,
the
morning
is
the
key
of
a
day
.
Everyone
should
get
up
early
every
day
.
Good
habits
help
us
get
good
grades
and
live
happily
.
佳/篇/创/作
2020年是非同寻常的一年，在举国上下抗疫（epidemic)的同时，教育部发出了“停课不停学”的号召，鼓励中小学生在线学习，但长时间观看电脑或手机，缺乏户外锻炼的机会，影响视力和身心健康。
假如你是Lin
Hui
,
请从以下三下方面说明在这个特殊时期你是如何保持健康的。
exercise
Do
eye
exercises
,
do
body
building
exercises
(健身操）
Eating
habits
Eat
healthy
food
...
Mood(情绪)
Be
happy
,
smile
...
要求：
1
字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2
要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥；
3
词数90词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(B)
假定你是李大卫，你校校刊的英文版正在开展征文活动，主题为“不同寻常的一天”。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述你昨天不同寻常的经历。要点如下：
1
闹钟没响，所以起床晚了，想洗澡时，爸爸已经在洗了；
2
没吃早餐去赶公交车，可到达公交车站时公交车已经开车了；
到了学校，老师因为你迟到很生气。
3
历史课上受到老师的表扬，因为你在家做了大量的准备工作。
注意：
1
书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥。
2
文中不得出现真实的地名、校名及姓名。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（C
）
文明礼貌表现的不仅是个人形象、城市形象、市民素质，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市”（build
a
civilized
city
)活动，学校号召学生在校内校外做一个文明的中学生，特举办以“How
to
behave
well”为主题的英文比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。
1.be
on
time
and
honest
;
be
polite
and
friendly
to
others
;
help
others
respect
parents
and
teachers
;
help
parents
do
housework
.
follow
the
traffic
rules
;
not
make
noise
in
public
.
protect
the
environment
;
take
care
of
flowers
and
trees
;
not
throw
litter
everywhere
;
.....
注意：
1
文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；
2
内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥；
3
词数：90词左右；
4
文章的开关已给出，
但不计入总词数。
How
to
behave
well
To
be
a
civilized
student
is
very
important
for
a
student
.
Here
is
what
we
should
do
and
shouldn’t
be
allowed
to
do
.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(A)
Hello
!
I’m
Lin
Hui
.
We
all
know
that
it’s
unusual
for
Chinese
in
2020
.
As
a
student
,
I
have
to
study
online
at
home
.
But
at
the
same
time
,
I
take
all
kinds
of
ways
to
keep
healthy
.
First
,
I
do
eye
exercises
between
classes
to
make
my
eyes
relax
.
Because
of
the
epidemic
I
can’t
go
out
to
play
.
So
I
do
body
building
exercises
indoors
every
day
.
Second
,
I
have
healthy
eating
habits
.
I
eat
a
lot
of
vegetables
and
fresh
fruit
rather
than
junk
food
.
Last
,
being
happy
is
another
way
to
keep
healthy
.
When
I’m
lonely
or
unhappy
,
I
usually
try
to
make
myself
relax
by
listening
to
music
or
talking
to
my
friends
.
I
often
also
smile
.
I
think
smile
makes
me
happy
and
healthy
.
(B)
Yesterday
was
a
really
bad
day
for
me
.
To
start
with
,
my
alarm
clock
didn’t
go
off
so
that
I
got
up
late
.
By
the
time
I
got
up
,
my
father
had
already
gotten
in
the
shower
.
Then
I
rushed
to
the
bus
top
without
breakfast
.
By
the
time
I
got
there
,
the
bus
had
already
left
and
I
had
to
rush
to
school
.
When
I
got
to
school,
my
teacher
had
already
started
class
and
he
was
really
angry
with
me
.
Then
it
was
time
to
hand
in
homework
,
but
I
had
left
mine
at
home
.
I
was
really
embarrassed
at
that
time
.
One
good
thing
was
that
my
history
teacher
said
something
good
to
me
because
I
had
done
a
lot
to
prepare
from
this
class
.
Yesterday
was
tiring
and
boring
.
What
an
unlucky
day
I
had
!
(
C)
To
be
a
civilized
student
is
very
important
for
a
student
.
Here
is
what
we
should
do
and
shouldn’t
be
allowed
to
do
.
First
,
I
think
it’s
very
important
to
do
everything
on
time
and
be
honest
.
Be
polite
and
friendly
to
others
and
always
ready
to
help
the
people
in
need
.
Second
,
we
should
respect
our
parents
and
teachers
.
If
possible
,
we
can
try
our
best
to
help
parents
do
housework
.
Third
,
remember
to
follow
the
traffic
rules
and
never
make
noise
in
public
.
Last
,
we’d
better
protect
the
environment
.
For
example
,
we
should
take
care
of
flowers
and
trees
.
Don’t
throw
litter
everywhere
.
If
everyone
behaves
well
,
our
city
will
be
more
beautiful
and
more
attractive
.
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