专题06
句式提升之现在分词的使用
现在分词短语可以常用来表示伴随动作，也可替换状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句等，使句子结构更加紧凑。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的现在分词的使用
1.
"None
of
us
do,"
said
Dr.
Dorian,
sighing.
"
2.
He
said,
looking
down
at
his
daughter
with
love.
3.
"How's
Avery?"
he
asked,
opening
his
eyes
wide.
4.
"What
are
your
names,
please?"
asked
Wilbur,
trembling
with
joy.
5.
Mrs
Black
sat
down,
breathing
heavily．
6.
He
slept
the
first
night
in
a
field，feeling
lonely,
tired,
cold
and
hungry.
7.
Seeing
the
helicopter,
Jane
waved
her
yellow
blouse,
screaming
for
help.
二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落
1.
He
was
trembling
in
a
blanket
and
he
said,
“I’m
cold.”
2.
I
sat
back
in
an
easy
chair
and
fell
asleep.
3.
When
I
saw
no
one
noticing
us,
I
put
the
Christmas
present
down
and
left.
4.
When
she
arrived
there,
she
searched
the
unfamiliar
building,
and
asked
for
Zatanna’s
dormitory
from
door
to
door.
5.
He?looked?at?me
and
bit?his?lips,?as?if?he
was
thinking.
6.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
held
that
ten-dollar
bill
and
I
wondered
what
to
buy
and
who
to
buy
it
for.
7.
When
he
saw
the
coat
in
the
bag,
he
looked
very
astonished
and
then
asked
his
mother
to
come
out.
8.
‘Here,’
he
said.
At
the
same
time
he
handed
the
coins
to
the
gatekeeper.
9.
A
tall
girl
answered
the
door
and
she
was
frowning.
She
told
Emily
that
Zatanna
was
working
in
the
school
café.
When
she
heard
this,
Emily
forced
a
faint
smile,
thanked
her
and
left.
10.
She
wrote
“To
Bobby,
From
Santa
Claus”
on
it.
Then
she
drove
me
over
to
Bobby
Decker’s
house
as
she
explained
I
was
officially
one
of
Santa’s
helpers.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
An
80-year-old
man
was
sitting
on
the
sofa
in
his
house
along
with
his
45-year-old
highly
educated
son.
Suddenly
a
crow（乌鸦）perched（栖息）on
their
window.
The
father
asked
his
son,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
replied,
“It
is
a
crow.”
After
a
few
minutes,
the
father
asked
his
son
for
the
second
time,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
said,
“Father,
I
have
just
now
told
you,
it’s
a
crow!”
After
a
little
while,
the
old
father
again
asked
his
son
for
the
third
time,
“What
is
this?”
At
this
time
some
expression
of
irritation（恼怒）was
felt
in
the
son’s
tone
when
he
said
to
his
father
with
a
rebuff（生硬回绝）.
“It’s
a
crow,
a
crow.”
A
little
while
later,
the
father
again
asked
his
son
the
fourth
time,
“What
is
this?”
This
time,
the
son
shouted
at
his
father,
“Why
do
you
keep
asking
me
the
same
question
again
and
again,
although
I
have
told
you
so
many
times
‘IT
IS
A
CROW’.
Are
you
not
able
to
understand
this?”
A
little
later
the
father
went
to
his
room
and
came
back
with
an
old
tattered（发皱的）diary,
which
he
had
maintained
since
his
son
was
born.
On
opening
a
page,
he
asked
his
son
to
read
that
page.
When
the
son
read
it,
the
following
words
were
written
in
the
diary:
“Today
my
little
son
aged
three
was
sitting
with
me
on
the
sofa,
when
a
crow
was
sitting
on
the
window.
My
son
asked
me
23
times
what
it
was,
and
I
replied
to
him
all
23
times
that
it
was
a
crow.
I
hugged
him
lovingly
each
time
he
asked
me
the
same
question.
I
did
not
at
all
feel
irritated
but
I
rather
felt
affection
for
my
innocent
son.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
After
reading
the
diary,_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Feeling
ashamed,
the
son
got
down
on
his
knees
before
his
father.__________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________专题06
句式提升之现在分词的使用
现在分词短语可以常用来表示伴随动作，也可替换状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句等，使句子结构更加紧凑。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的现在分词的使用
1.
"None
of
us
do,"
said
Dr.
Dorian,
sighing.
"
2.
He
said,
looking
down
at
his
daughter
with
love.
3.
"How's
Avery?"
he
asked,
opening
his
eyes
wide.
4.
"What
are
your
names,
please?"
asked
Wilbur,
trembling
with
joy.
5.
Mrs
Black
sat
down,
breathing
heavily．
6.
He
slept
the
first
night
in
a
field，feeling
lonely,
tired,
cold
and
hungry.
7.
Seeing
the
helicopter,
Jane
waved
her
yellow
blouse,
screaming
for
help.
二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落
1.
He
was
trembling
in
a
blanket
and
he
said,
“I’m
cold.”
【答案】
Trembling
in
a
blanket,
he
said,
“I’m
cold.”
2.
I
sat
back
in
an
easy
chair
and
fell
asleep.
【答案】
Sitting
back
in
an
easy
chair,
I
fell
asleep.
3.
When
I
saw
no
one
noticing
us,
I
put
the
Christmas
present
down
and
left.
【答案】
Seeing
no
one
noticing
us,
I
put
the
Christmas
present
down
and
left.
4.
When
she
arrived
there,
she
searched
the
unfamiliar
building,
and
asked
for
Zatanna’s
dormitory
from
door
to
door.
【答案】Arriving
there,
she
searched
the
unfamiliar
building,
asking
for
Zatanna’s
dormitory
from
door
to
door.
5.
He?looked?at?me
and
bit?his?lips,?as?if?he
was
thinking.
【答案】He?looked?at?me,?biting?his?lips,?as?if?thinking.
6.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
held
that
ten-dollar
bill
and
I
wondered
what
to
buy
and
who
to
buy
it
for.
【答案】For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there,
holding
that
ten-dollar
bill
and
wondering
what
to
buy
and
who
to
buy
it
for.
7.
When
he
saw
the
coat
in
the
bag,
he
looked
very
astonished
and
then
asked
his
mother
to
come
out.
【答案】Seeing
the
coat
in
the
bag,
he
asked
his
mother
to
come
out,
looking
very
astonished.
8.
‘Here,’
he
said.
At
the
same
time
he
handed
the
coins
to
the
gatekeeper.
【答案】
‘Here,’
he
said，handing
the
coins
to
the
gatekeeper.
9.
A
tall
girl
answered
the
door
and
she
was
frowning.
She
told
Emily
that
Zatanna
was
working
in
the
school
café.
When
she
heard
this,
Emily
forced
a
faint
smile,
thanked
her
and
left.
【答案】A
tall
thin
girl,
frowning,
answered
the
door
and
told
Emily
that
Zatanna
was
working
in
the
school
café.
Hearing
this,
Emily
forced
a
faint
smile,
thanked
her
and
left.
10.
She
wrote
“To
Bobby,
From
Santa
Claus”
on
it.
Then
she
drove
me
over
to
Bobby
Decker’s
house
as
she
explained
I
was
officially
one
of
Santa’s
helpers.
【答案】Having
written
“To
Bobby,
From
Santa
Claus”
on
it,
she
drove
me
over
to
Bobby
Decker’s
house,
explaining
I
was
officially
one
of
Santa’s
helpers.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
An
80-year-old
man
was
sitting
on
the
sofa
in
his
house
along
with
his
45-year-old
highly
educated
son.
Suddenly
a
crow（乌鸦）perched（栖息）on
their
window.
The
father
asked
his
son,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
replied,
“It
is
a
crow.”
After
a
few
minutes,
the
father
asked
his
son
for
the
second
time,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
said,
“Father,
I
have
just
now
told
you,
it’s
a
crow!”
After
a
little
while,
the
old
father
again
asked
his
son
for
the
third
time,
“What
is
this?”
At
this
time
some
expression
of
irritation（恼怒）was
felt
in
the
son’s
tone
when
he
said
to
his
father
with
a
rebuff（生硬回绝）.
“It’s
a
crow,
a
crow.”
A
little
while
later,
the
father
again
asked
his
son
the
fourth
time,
“What
is
this?”
This
time,
the
son
shouted
at
his
father,
“Why
do
you
keep
asking
me
the
same
question
again
and
again,
although
I
have
told
you
so
many
times
‘IT
IS
A
CROW’.
Are
you
not
able
to
understand
this?”
A
little
later
the
father
went
to
his
room
and
came
back
with
an
old
tattered（发皱的）diary,
which
he
had
maintained
since
his
son
was
born.
On
opening
a
page,
he
asked
his
son
to
read
that
page.
When
the
son
read
it,
the
following
words
were
written
in
the
diary:
“Today
my
little
son
aged
three
was
sitting
with
me
on
the
sofa,
when
a
crow
was
sitting
on
the
window.
My
son
asked
me
23
times
what
it
was,
and
I
replied
to
him
all
23
times
that
it
was
a
crow.
I
hugged
him
lovingly
each
time
he
asked
me
the
same
question.
I
did
not
at
all
feel
irritated
but
I
rather
felt
affection
for
my
innocent
son.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
After
reading
the
diary,_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Feeling
ashamed,
the
son
got
down
on
his
knees
before
his
father.__________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
After
reading
the
diary,
the
son
was
filled
with
tears
and
began
to
reflect
on
the
days
when
he
used
to
sit
together
with
his
father.
His
father
would
patiently
answer
the
same
question
all
23
times
without
feeling
irritation
while
his
father
asked
him
the
same
question
just
four
times!
The
son
thought
to
himself:
If
I
attain
old
age,
how
will
my
son
look
at
me?
Will
he
think
of
me
as
a
burden?
Will
he
shout
at
me
because
of
my
poor
sight,
poor
hearing
or
poor
understanding?
Paragraph
2:
Feeling
ashamed,
the
son
got
down
on
his
knees
before
his
father.
He
made
an
apology
to
his
father,
begging
his
father
to
forgive
him
for
his
bad
behavior.
He
said
this
aloud,
“I
promise
to
see
you
happy
forever,
Dad.
It
is
you
who
have
cared
for
me
ever
since
I
was
a
little
child,
showering
your
selfless
affection
on
me.
You
worked
hard
to
make
money
so
that
I
could
afford
to
go
to
university.
I
will
look
after
you
in
the
best
way.”
【点评】故事情节完整合理、叙述流畅、描写细腻。文中Ving的使用使得故事情节更加紧凑、描写更加生动传神、语言表达形式也更加丰富。
