专题07
句式提升之过去分词或形容词的使用
过去分词或形容词可用来表示伴随状态,描写情绪或心理活动。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的过去分词或形容词的作用
1.
Mr
Bumble
stopped
for
a
moment,amazed
and
even
rather
frightened
by
this
change
in
Oliver.
2.
Frightened
and
frustrated,
she
began
sobbing.
3.
‘Why
is
the
boy
crying?’repeated
the
other
man,
puzzled.
4.
His
mind
went
blank,
and
he
fell
to
the
ground,
unconscious.
5.
Jane
walked
in
the
forest,
tired
and
hopeless.
二、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落
1.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
was
confused.
2.
【答案】For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there,
confused.
3.
They
were
very
frightened.
They
all
jumped
back.
【答案】They
all
jumped
back,
very
frightened.
或Very
frightened,
they
all
jumped
back.
4.
In
the
evening,
the
children
returned
home.
They
were
tired
and
hungry.
【答案】In
the
evening,
the
children
returned
home,
tired
and
hungry.
5.
He
was
exhausted.
He
sat
down
at
the
side
of
the
road.
【答案】Exhausted,
he
sat
down
at
the
side
of
the
road.
6.
One
freezing
night,Gabriel
returned
to
his
hut.
He
was
exhausted.
【答案】One
freezing
night
Gabriel
returned
to
his
hut,exhausted.
7.
He
stood
rooted
to
the
spot.
He
was
shocked.
【答案】He
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
shocked.
8.
Gabriel
Looked
over
the
gate.
He
could
see
a
yellow
cart
which
was
loaded
with
furniture
and
plants
coming
up
the
road.
【答案】Looking
over
his
gate,Gabriel
could
see
a
yellow
cart,loaded
with
furniture
and
plants,coming
up
the
road.
9.
Meg
thought
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl.
She
sat
on
the
floor.
She
felt
hopeless
and
worried.
【答案】Thinking
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl,
Meg
sat
on
the
floor,
hopeless
and
worried.
或Sitting
on
the
floor,
Meg
felt
hopeless
and
worried,
thinking
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl.
10.
Oliver
went
up
to
the
master,with
his
bowl
in
his
hand.He
felt
very
frightened,but
also
desperate
with
hunger.
【答案】Oliver,
frightened
and
desperate
with
hunger,
went
up
to
the
master,
with
his
bowl
in
his
hand.
11.
He
was
dressed
up
as
Father
Christmas
and
was
accompanied
by
a
“guard
of
honour”
of
six
pretty
girls.
He
rode
a
baby
elephant
who
was
called
Jumbo
and
set
off
down
the
main
street
of
the
city.
【答案】Dressed
up
as
Father
Christmas
and
accompanied
by
a
“guard
of
honour”
of
six
pretty
girls,
he
set
off
down
the
main
street
of
the
city,
riding
a
baby
elephant
called
Jumbo.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I
was
responding
to
a
call
from
a
small
brick
flat
in
a
quiet
part
of
town.
I
assumed
I
was
being
sent
to
pick
up
some
party-goers,or
someone
who
had
just
had
a
fight
with
a
lover,or
a
worker
heading
to
an
early
shift
at
some
factory
for
the
industrial
part
of
town.
When
I
arrived
at
2:30
a.m.,the
building
was
dark
except
for
a
single
light
in
a
ground
floor
window.
Under
such
circumstances,
many
drivers
just
honk(按喇叭)
once
or
twice,wait
a
minute,then
drive
away.
But
I
had
seen
too
many
weak
people
who
depended
on
taxis
as
their
only
means
of
transportation.
Unless
a
situation
smelled
of
danger,I
always
went
to
the
door.
This
passenger
might
be
someone
who
needs
my
assistance,I
reasoned
to
myself.
So
I
walked
to
the
door
and
knocked.
“Just
a
minute,”
answered
a
frail,
elderly
voice.
I
could
hear
something
being
dragged
across
the
floor.
After
a
long
pause,the
door
opened.
A
small
woman
in
her
80s
stood
before
me.
She
was
wearing
a
print
dress
and
a
pillbox
hat
,like
somebody
out
of
a
1940s
movie.
By
her
side
was
a
small
nylon
suitcase.
The
apartment
looked
as
if
no
one
had
lived
in
it
for
years.
All
the
furniture
was
covered
with
sheets.
There
were
no
clocks
on
the
walls,
no
equipment
on
the
counters.
In
the
corner
was
a
cardboard
box
filled
with
photos
and
glassware.
“Would
you
carry
my
bag
out
to
the
car?”
she
said.
I
took
the
suitcase
to
the
cab,then
returned
to
assist
the
woman.
She
took
my
arm,and
we
walked
slowly
toward
the
cab.
She
kept
thanking
me
for
my
kindness.
“It's
nothing,”
I
told
her.
“I
just
try
to
treat
my
passengers
the
way
I
would
want
my
mother
treated.”
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Having
given
me
an
address,
a
hospice
,
she
asked.
“Could
you
drive
through
downtown?”
Paragraph
2:
we
drove
in
silence
to
the
address
she
had
given
me
,
and
it…
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
Having
given
me
an
address,
a
hospice
,
she
asked.
“Could
you
drive
through
downtown?”
When
asked
why
we
didn’t
take
the
shortest
way,
the
small
woman
told
me
it
was
the
last
chance
for
her
to
visit
the
city.
We
drove
through
the
neighborhood
where
she
and
her
husband
had
lived.
Besides,
she
asked
me
to
slow
down
in
front
of
a
particular
building
or
corner
and
would
sit
staring
into
the
darkness,
speechless.
At
last,
she
said
she
was
tired
and
wanted
to
go
to
the
hospice.
Paragraph
2:
We
drove
in
silence
to
the
address
she
had
given
me
,
and
it
was
a
low
building,
where
the
old
lady
would
live
the
rest
of
her
life.
Two
nurses
who
must
have
been
expecting
her
came
out
to
the
cab
as
soon
as
we
pulled
up.
I
opened
the
trunk
and
took
the
suitcase
to
the
door
and
the
woman,
a
little
tired,
was
already
seated
in
a
wheelchair.
When
she
asked
how
much
she
owed
me,
without
thinking,
I
said
nothing
and
bent
to
give
her
a
hug.
It
was
my
assistance
that
helped
one
of
weak
people
realize
her
wish.
【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理,叙述流畅,表达准确。文中speechless
体现了老人的忧伤、留恋之情。a
little
tired
准确地刻画了八十几岁老人坐车后的神态。专题07
句式提升之过去分词或形容词的使用
过去分词或形容词可用来表示伴随状态,描写情绪或心理活动。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的过去分词或形容词的作用
1.
Mr
Bumble
stopped
for
a
moment,amazed
and
even
rather
frightened
by
this
change
in
Oliver.
2.
Frightened
and
frustrated,
she
began
sobbing.
3.
‘Why
is
the
boy
crying?’repeated
the
other
man,
puzzled.
4.
His
mind
went
blank,
and
he
fell
to
the
ground,
unconscious.
5.
Jane
walked
in
the
forest,
tired
and
hopeless.
二、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落
1.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
was
confused.
2.
They
were
very
frightened.
They
all
jumped
back.
3.
In
the
evening,
the
children
returned
home.
They
were
tired
and
hungry.
4.
He
was
exhausted.
He
sat
down
at
the
side
of
the
road.
5.
One
freezing
night,Gabriel
returned
to
his
hut.
He
was
exhausted.
6.
He
stood
rooted
to
the
spot.
He
was
shocked.
7.
Gabriel
Looked
over
the
gate.
He
could
see
a
yellow
cart
which
was
loaded
with
furniture
and
plants
coming
up
the
road.
8.
Meg
thought
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl.
She
sat
on
the
floor.
She
felt
hopeless
and
worried.
9.
Oliver
went
up
to
the
master,with
his
bowl
in
his
hand.He
felt
very
frightened,but
also
desperate
with
hunger.
10.
He
was
dressed
up
as
Father
Christmas
and
was
accompanied
by
a
“guard
of
honour”
of
six
pretty
girls.
He
rode
a
baby
elephant
who
was
called
Jumbo
and
set
off
down
the
main
street
of
the
city.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I
was
responding
to
a
call
from
a
small
brick
flat
in
a
quiet
part
of
town.
I
assumed
I
was
being
sent
to
pick
up
some
party-goers,or
someone
who
had
just
had
a
fight
with
a
lover,or
a
worker
heading
to
an
early
shift
at
some
factory
for
the
industrial
part
of
town.
When
I
arrived
at
2:30
a.m.,the
building
was
dark
except
for
a
single
light
in
a
ground
floor
window.
Under
such
circumstances,
many
drivers
just
honk(按喇叭)
once
or
twice,wait
a
minute,then
drive
away.
But
I
had
seen
too
many
weak
people
who
depended
on
taxis
as
their
only
means
of
transportation.
Unless
a
situation
smelled
of
danger,I
always
went
to
the
door.
This
passenger
might
be
someone
who
needs
my
assistance,I
reasoned
to
myself.
So
I
walked
to
the
door
and
knocked.
“Just
a
minute,”
answered
a
frail,
elderly
voice.
I
could
hear
something
being
dragged
across
the
floor.
After
a
long
pause,the
door
opened.
A
small
woman
in
her
80s
stood
before
me.
She
was
wearing
a
print
dress
and
a
pillbox
hat
,like
somebody
out
of
a
1940s
movie.
By
her
side
was
a
small
nylon
suitcase.
The
apartment
looked
as
if
no
one
had
lived
in
it
for
years.
All
the
furniture
was
covered
with
sheets.
There
were
no
clocks
on
the
walls,
no
equipment
on
the
counters.
In
the
corner
was
a
cardboard
box
filled
with
photos
and
glassware.
“Would
you
carry
my
bag
out
to
the
car?”
she
said.
I
took
the
suitcase
to
the
cab,then
returned
to
assist
the
woman.
She
took
my
arm,and
we
walked
slowly
toward
the
cab.
She
kept
thanking
me
for
my
kindness.
“It's
nothing,”
I
told
her.
“I
just
try
to
treat
my
passengers
the
way
I
would
want
my
mother
treated.”
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Having
given
me
an
address,
a
hospice
,
she
asked.
“Could
you
drive
through
downtown?”
Paragraph
2:
we
drove
in
silence
to
the
address
she
had
given
me
,
and
it…