专题09
高分情绪描写技巧
一、情绪描写之笑
smile
brightly;
grin
at
sb;
laugh;
beam;
light
(sth)
up;
light
up
with;
burst
into
laughter;
burst
out
laughing；wear
a
bright/broad
smile;
give
sb
a
smile
学一学：
beam:
smile
very
happily
例：
获胜者满意地笑了。
译法一：The
winner
beamed/smiled
with
satisfaction.
译法二：The
winner
wore
a
satisfied
smile
on
his
face.
light
up:
if
someone’s
face
or
eyes
light
up,
they
show
pleasure,
excitement
etc
light
up
with：His
eyes
lit
up
with
laughter.
Her
face
lit
up
with
pleasure.
light
sth
up:
to
make
someone’s
face
or
eyes
show
pleasure
or
excitement
Suddenly
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face/eyes.
练一练：
看到直升飞机，Jane
高兴地笑了起来。
【答案一】：At
the
sight
of
the
helicopter,
Jane
beamed
with
wild
joy.
【答案二】：Seeing
the
helicopter,
Jane
beamed
with
wild
joy.
【答案三】：The
moment
she
caught
sight
of
the
helicopter,
Jane’s
eyes/
face
lit
up
with
delight.
【答案四】：The
moment
she
caught
sight
of
the
helicopter,
a
bright
smile
lit
up
Jane’s
face/eyes.
判断正误：Seeing
the
helicopter,
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face.
【答案】：错
seeing
和a
bright
smile
逻辑不一致。
二、情绪描写之高兴激动
V.
dance;
whistle;
jump/leap
with
joy;
feel
a
surge
of
happiness/delight/joy/excitement;
be
overcome
with
happines/delight/joy/excitement;
(one’s
eyes)
twinkle；(one’s
heart)
beat/pound
wildly
Adj.
happy;
delighted;
overjoyed;
excited;
thrilled;
wild
with
joy
练一练：
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
【答案一】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
she
felt
excited/
thrilled.
【答案二】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
her
eyes
twinkled
with
excitement.
【答案三】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
her
heart
was
pounding
with
wild
joy.
【答案四】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
a
wild
excitement
took
hold
of
her.
【答案五】：Knowing
the
result
of
the
test,
she
felt
a
surge
of
excitement.
【答案六】：Knowing
the
result
of
the
test,
she
was
overcome
with
excitement.
三、情绪描写之生气
feel/get
angry/furious;
feel
a
surge
of
anger(rage/fury);
eyes
blaze;
storm
out
of/into/off
;
storm(say
angrily);
sth.
makes
sb’s
blood
boil(sth
makes
sb
extremely
angry);
clasp
one’s
hands;
clench
one’s
fists/teeth;
speechless
练一练：
Sam
感到非常生气。
【答案一】：Sam
felt
very
angry.
【答案二】：Sam
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
his
eyes
blazing
with
anger.
【答案三】：Sam
felt
so
angry
that
he
stormed
out
of
the
room,
slamming
the
door
furiously
behind
him.
【答案四】：Boiling
with
rage,
Sam
shook
his
fist
at
me.
【答案五】：Filled
with
fury,
Sam
was
unable
to
utter
a
single
word.
四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
sad;
bitter;
sorrowful;
feel
a
surge
of
sadness;
(sadness)
surge
within
sb;
one’s
heart
ache;
be
overcome
with
sadness
练一练：
她伤心不已。
【答案一】：She
felt
extremely
sad.
【答案二】：A
sadness
came
over
her.
【答案三】：Her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming
down
her
cheeks.
【答案四】：Numb
with
grief,
she
became
speechless.
【答案五】：Feeling
a
surge
of
sadness,
she
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.
【答案六】：Sadness
surging
within
her,
she
burst
into
tears.
五、情绪描写之哭
cry;
sob;
weep;
burst
into
tears;
burst
out
crying;
(one’s
eyes)
brim
with/be
full
of/be
filled
with
tears
练一练：
1.
他哽咽欲哭。
【答案】：A
lump
came
to
his
throat.
2.
她的双眼哭得通红
【答案】：Her
eyes
were
red
from
crying.
3.
她的眼里满含泪水。
【答案】：Her
eyes
brimmed
with
tears.
4.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
【答案】：Tears
coursed/trickled/streamed/ran
down
her
cheeks.
5.
Oliver
独自一人在房间里
流下了孤独伤心的泪水
【答案】：Alone
in
the
room,
Oliver
cried
bitter,
lonely
tears．
6.
Wilbur哭着直到睡着。
【答案】：Wilbur
cried
himself
to
sleep.
六、情绪描写之害怕:
frightened;
panicked;
scared;
speechless;
in
(a)
panic;
in
a
cold
sweat;
be
full
of
fear;
be
filled
with
terror;
be
rooted
to
the
spot;
freeze;
run
away;
flee;
one’s
knees
feel
weak;
(hands)
sweat;
练一练：
我感到很害怕。
【答案一】：I
felt
very
frightened/scared/panicked.
【答案二】：I
was
in
(a)
panic/
was
full
of
fear.
【答案三】：I
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
brimming
with
fear/filled
with
fear.
【答案四】：I
felt
so
scared
that
my
throat
tightened
and
my
knees
felt
weak.
【答案五】：I
froze
with
terror,
too
scared
to
move.
【答案六】：I
was
seized
by
a
strong
sense
of
horror;
my
palms
sweating.
七、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
farmer
grew
some
vegetables
in
his
garden.
One
day
his
wife
was
ill
and
he
had
no
money.
He
had
to
sell
some
cabbages
and
carrots
in
the
market.
The
next
morning
he
took
two
baskets
of
vegetables
to
town.
But
it
was
raining
hard
that
afternoon
and
there
were
few
people
in
the
street.
When
his
vegetables
were
sold
out,
it
was
dark.
He
bought
some
medicine
and
hurried
to
his
village.
On
his
way
home
he
saw
a
person
lying
on
the
snow.
He
placed
his
baskets
on
the
ground
and
was
going
to
help
the
person
to
get
up.
At
that
time
he
found
it
was
a
dead
man
and
there
was
much
blood
on
his
body.
He
was
so
afraid
that
he
ran
away
quickly,
without
taking
the
baskets
with
him.
The
next
afternoon
the
farmer
was
sent
to
the
police
station.
Having
shown
the
baskets,
an
officer
asked,
“Are
these
yours”
“Yes,
sir.”
the
farmer
answered
timidly（胆怯地）.
“Have
you
killed
the
man”
“No,
no,
sir.”
the
farmer
said
in
a
hurry.
“When
did
you
see
the
dead
man”
“About
seven
last
evening.”
“Did
you
see
who
killed
the
man”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
brought
out
a
knife
and
asked,
“Have
you
seen
it
yet”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
became
angry
and
told
the
policemen
to
beat
him
up
and
sent
him
into
prison.
The
officer
wanted
to
trap
the
farmer
into
the
confession(供认),
but
the
farmer
didn’t
admit
he
was
the
murderer.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
The
farmer
was
very
afraid,
thinking
he
would
be
sentenced
to
death
by
killing
people.
But
he
was
innocent.
He
must
tell
people
the
truth,
but
no
one
could
hear
his
voice.
Helpless,
he
was
eager
that
someone
could
come
and
save
him.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,
a
young
man
came
to
the
police
station,
followed
by
a
lot
of
journalists,
saying
that
he
saw
the
murderer.
It
was
the
police
officer
who
killed
the
man
on
the
snow!
Seeing
the
police
officer
use
a
knife
killing
the
man
late
in
the
evening,
he
was
so
frightened
that
he
quickly
ran
away.
The
young
man
thought
the
farmer
was
innocent.
So
he
plucked
up
enough
courage
to
expose
the
real
criminal.
After
the
investigation,
evidence
showed
that
what
the
young
man
had
said
was
true.
Consequently,
the
evil
police
officer
was
sent
into
prison
and
the
brave
young
man
was
regarded
as
the
hero
by
the
villagers.
【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理，叙述流畅，表达准确。语言表达形式丰富，能合理使用各种从句、现在分词、过去分词等。afraid,
helpless,
eager,
frightened
和pluck
up
enough
courage
生动细腻地描写了文中人物的内心活动，使故事内容更加充实动人。专题09
高分情绪描写技巧
一、情绪描写之笑
smile
brightly;
grin
at
sb;
laugh;
beam;
light
(sth)
up;
light
up
with;
burst
into
laughter;
burst
out
laughing；wear
a
bright/broad
smile;
give
sb
a
smile
学一学：
beam:
smile
very
happily
例：
获胜者满意地笑了。
译法一：The
winner
beamed/smiled
with
satisfaction.
译法二：The
winner
wore
a
satisfied
smile
on
his
face.
light
up:
if
someone’s
face
or
eyes
light
up,
they
show
pleasure,
excitement
etc
light
up
with：His
eyes
lit
up
with
laughter.
Her
face
lit
up
with
pleasure.
light
sth
up:
to
make
someone’s
face
or
eyes
show
pleasure
or
excitement
Suddenly
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face/eyes.
练一练：
看到直升飞机，Jane
高兴地笑了起来。
判断正误：Seeing
the
helicopter,
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face.
二、情绪描写之高兴激动
V.
dance;
whistle;
jump/leap
with
joy;
feel
a
surge
of
happiness/delight/joy/excitement;
be
overcome
with
happines/delight/joy/excitement;
(one’s
eyes)
twinkle；(one’s
heart)
beat/pound
wildly
Adj.
happy;
delighted;
overjoyed;
excited;
thrilled;
wild
with
joy
练一练：
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
三、情绪描写之生气
feel/get
angry/furious;
feel
a
surge
of
anger(rage/fury);
eyes
blaze;
storm
out
of/into/off
;
storm(say
angrily);
sth.
makes
sb’s
blood
boil(sth
makes
sb
extremely
angry);
clasp
one’s
hands;
clench
one’s
fists/teeth;
speechless
练一练：
Sam
感到非常生气。
四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
sad;
bitter;
sorrowful;
feel
a
surge
of
sadness;
(sadness)
surge
within
sb;
one’s
heart
ache;
be
overcome
with
sadness
练一练：
她伤心不已。
五、情绪描写之哭
cry;
sob;
weep;
burst
into
tears;
burst
out
crying;
(one’s
eyes)
brim
with/be
full
of/be
filled
with
tears
练一练：
1.
他哽咽欲哭。
2.
她的双眼哭得通红
3.
她的眼里满含泪水。
4.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
5.
Oliver
独自一人在房间里
流下了孤独伤心的泪水
6.
Wilbur哭着直到睡着。
六、情绪描写之害怕:
frightened;
panicked;
scared;
speechless;
in
(a)
panic;
in
a
cold
sweat;
be
full
of
fear;
be
filled
with
terror;
be
rooted
to
the
spot;
freeze;
run
away;
flee;
one’s
knees
feel
weak;
(hands)
sweat;
练一练：
我感到很害怕。
七、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
farmer
grew
some
vegetables
in
his
garden.
One
day
his
wife
was
ill
and
he
had
no
money.
He
had
to
sell
some
cabbages
and
carrots
in
the
market.
The
next
morning
he
took
two
baskets
of
vegetables
to
town.
But
it
was
raining
hard
that
afternoon
and
there
were
few
people
in
the
street.
When
his
vegetables
were
sold
out,
it
was
dark.
He
bought
some
medicine
and
hurried
to
his
village.
On
his
way
home
he
saw
a
person
lying
on
the
snow.
He
placed
his
baskets
on
the
ground
and
was
going
to
help
the
person
to
get
up.
At
that
time
he
found
it
was
a
dead
man
and
there
was
much
blood
on
his
body.
He
was
so
afraid
that
he
ran
away
quickly,
without
taking
the
baskets
with
him.
The
next
afternoon
the
farmer
was
sent
to
the
police
station.
Having
shown
the
baskets,
an
officer
asked,
“Are
these
yours”
“Yes,
sir.”
the
farmer
answered
timidly（胆怯地）.
“Have
you
killed
the
man”
“No,
no,
sir.”
the
farmer
said
in
a
hurry.
“When
did
you
see
the
dead
man”
“About
seven
last
evening.”
“Did
you
see
who
killed
the
man”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
brought
out
a
knife
and
asked,
“Have
you
seen
it
yet”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
became
angry
and
told
the
policemen
to
beat
him
up
and
sent
him
into
prison.
The
officer
wanted
to
trap
the
farmer
into
the
confession(供认),
but
the
farmer
didn’t
admit
he
was
the
murderer.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,
