考点10
短文改错
Passage1（2019·南昌县莲塘第一中学高三月考）
Two
months
ago
my
mother
and
I
were
walking
home
from
shopping
while
we
noticed
a
small
dog
lying
still
on
the
middle
of
the
road.
How
danger
it
was!
We
got
closely
to
him
and
found
that
he
was
badly
injured.
Saw
the
poor
dog,
we
decided
to
help
him.
Immediately
we
called
a
taxi
and
send
him
to
an
animal
hospital,
where
he
was
examined
and
received
treatment.
After
staying
in
hospital
for
few
days,
he
became
good
enough
to
walk.
Then
we
took
him
home
and
looked
after
him
carefully
until
he
was
fully
recovered.
Now
he
is
already
an
important
member
of
our
family
and
brings
ourselves
a
lot
of
happiness.
【答案】(1)while→when
(2)on→in
(3)danger→dangerous
(4)closely→close
(5)Saw→Seeing
(6)send→sent
(7)在few前a
(8)good→well
(9)将was去掉
(10)ourselves→us
【分析】
本文为记叙文。作者讲述了自己和妈妈一起救助小狗的故事。
【详解】
1.考查固定句型。句意：两个月前，我和妈妈逛街回家时，发现一只小狗一动不动地躺在路中间。be
doing......when…为固定句型，意为“正在做某事，这时......”，故将while改为when。
2.考查介词。句意：两个月前，我和妈妈逛街回家时，发现一只小狗一动不动地躺在路中间。in?the
middle
of在......中间，是固定短语，故将on改为in。
3.考查形容词。句意：多危险啊！该句使用感叹句“
How
+
adj./adv.
+
主语
+
谓语！”结构。该句为主系表结构，故how后应接形容词，译为“多么......”，故将danger改为dangerous。
4.考查固定短语。句意：我们接近它，发现它受了重伤。get
close
to意为“接近，靠近”，是固定短语，故将closely改为close。
5.考查非谓语动词。句意：看到那条可怜的狗，我们决定帮助它。we与see之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，应用现在分词形式作状语，故将Saw改为Seeing。
6.考查时态。句意：我们立即叫了一辆出租车，把它送到动物医院，在那里它接受了检查和治疗。根据called可知，此处也应用一般过去时，故将send改为sent。
7.考查冠词。句意：在医院住了几天之后，它已经可以走路了。a
few一些，few几乎没有，根据句意可知，此处应用
a
few，故在few前a。
8.考查副词。句意：在医院住了几天之后，它已经可以走路了。此处作表语，表示“健康的”，应用形容词well，故将good改为well。
9.考查语态。句意：然后我们把它带回家，仔细照顾它，直到完全康复。he与recover之间是主动的关系，不应该用被动语态，故将was去掉。
10.考查代词。句意：现在他已经是我们家庭的重要成员，给我们带来了很多快乐。主语是he，与宾语不一致，不能用反身代词，故将ourselves改为us。
Passage2（（2020·四川成都市·北大附中成都为明学校高三月考）
It
was
a
Sunday
afternoon.
My
parents
and
I
were
watching
TV
excitedly
when
suddenly
I
notice
a
pigeon
on
the
balcony.
It
was
a
white
pigeon
with
a
ring
around
one
of
its
foot.
It
rested
there
quietly
but
refused
to
fly
away.
Realizing
it
must
have
been
lost
its
way
back
home,
I
managed
call
the
Pigeon
Association
up
for
help.
In
the
same
time,
my
parents
brought
the
pigeon
inside
and
gave
it
some
bird
food,
what
helped
refresh
it.
Before
long,
an
owner
got
the
message
and
came
to
take
the
pigeon
back.
He
thanked
us
a
lot.
My
parents
and
I
all
felt
happily
for
what
they
had
done.
【答案】1.notice→noticed
2.foot→feet
3.but→and
4.去掉
been
5.在call前加to
6.In→At
7.what→which
8.
an→the
9.
happily→happy
10.they→we
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者一家救助一只迷路的鸽子的故事。
【详解】
1.考查动词时态。句意：我和父母正在兴致勃勃地看电视，这时我突然注意到阳台上的一只鸽子。根据上文“My
parents
and
I
were
watching
TV
excitedly”可知，描述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时，故将notice改为noticed。
2.考查名词复数。句意：它是一只白色的鸽子，其中一只脚上有一个圈。one
of后应接可数名词复数，表示“……之一”，故将foot改为feet。
3.考查连词。句意：它静静地在那儿休息，拒绝飞走。前后文是并列关系，不是转折关系，故将but改为and。
4.考查动词时态语态。句意：我意识到它肯定是在回家时迷路了，就设法给鸽子协会打电话求助。动词lose与主语it之间是主谓关系，应使用主动语态，must
have
done表示对过去有把握的推测，意为“肯定做过某事”。故去掉been。
5.考查不定式。句意：我意识到它肯定是在回家时迷路了，就设法给鸽子协会打电话求助。manage后接动词时常接动词不定式，构成manage
to
do
sth.，意为“设法做某事”，故在call前加to。
6.考查介词。句意：同时，我的父母把鸽子带到里面来，给它一些鸟食，这使它恢复了活力。at
the
same
time是固定短语，意为“同时”，故将In改为At。
7.考查定语从句。句意：同时，我的父母把鸽子带到里面来，给它一些鸟食，这使它恢复了活力。分析句子可知，此处是非限制性定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，应使用which引导，what不可引导定语从句，故将what改为which。
8.考查冠词。句意：不久之后，主人得到信息并赶来把鸽子带了回去。此处特指“鸽子的主人”，用定冠词，故将an改为the。
9.考查连词。句意：我父母和我都为我们做的事情感到开心。feel是系动词，接形容词作表语，故将happily改为happy。
10.考查代词。句意：我父母和我都为我们做的事情感到开心。主语是“My
parents
and
I”，此处指“我们做的事”，故将they改为we。
Passage3（2020·四川乐山市·高三月考）
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I'm
delighting
that
you
will
come
to
China
to
learn
Chinese
paper-cutting,
it
is
one
of
Chinese
traditional
folk
arts.
Paper-cutting,
with
the
history
of
more
than
1,
500
years
，
is
so
much
amazing
that
it
never
fails
to
attract
foreigners.
Craftsmen
can
cut
different
shapes
by
only
use
scissors
or
knives,
making
attractive
but
difficult
for
people
to
master
the
skills.
I
have
started
to
learn
it
when
I
was
seven,
so
you
can
turn
to
me
with
help.
I'm
surely
you'll
have
a
good
time.
See
you
sooner.
【答案】1.delighting→delighted
2.it→which
3.the→a
4.将much去掉
5.use→using
6.在making后加it
7.when→since
8.with→for
9.surely→sure
10.sooner→soon
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，作者在信中介绍了中国的剪纸艺术。
【小题1】
考查形容词。句意：我很高兴你要来中国学习中国剪纸，它是中国传统民间艺术之一。ing形式的形容词常常修饰物，ed形式的形容词常常修饰人，本句的主语是I，因此用ed形式的形容词。故将delighting改为delighted。
【小题2】
考查定语从句。句意同上。本句是非限制性定语从句，先行词为Chinese
paper-cutting，指物，从句中缺少主语，因此用which引导。故将it改为which。
【小题3】
考查冠词。句意：剪纸，至今已有1500多年的历史。“有着多久的历史”用短语“a
history
of”，故将the改为a。
【小题4】
考查so与so
much的区别。句意：剪纸，有1500多年的历史，是如此惊人，它从不错过吸引外国人。
表示“如此多”，多修饰不可数名词，so表示“如此”，修饰形容词或副词，amazing是形容词，不需要much修饰。故将much去掉。
【小题5】
考查非谓语动词。句意：工匠只需要用剪刀或刀就可以剪出不同的形状，使其具有吸引力，但人们很难掌握这种技能。by是介词，后面接动名词作宾语。故将use改为using。
【小题6】
考查代词。句意同上。本句中making后缺少宾语，结合句意可知，此处是指上文中的剪纸（paper-cutting），因此，此处再次出现可以用it代替。故在making后加it。
【小题7】
考查连词。句意：我从七岁开始学剪纸，所以你可以向我求助。根据句意可知，此处是指作者自从七岁时就开始学习剪纸，结合主句的“have
started（现在完成时）”可知，用since引导时间状语从句。故将when改为since。
【小题8】
考查介词。句意同上。turn
to
sb
for
help向某人求助，这是个固定短语。故将with改为for。
【小题9】
考查形容词。句意：我相信你会玩得很开心的。期待早见到你。am是系动词，后跟形容词作表语
。故将surely改为sure。
【小题10】
考查副词。句意同上。根据句意可知，此处不需要比较级，See
you
soon希望尽快见到你。故将sooner改为soon。
Passage4（2020·江西新余市·新余一中高三月考）
Nowadays,
lots
of
people
went
running
in
their
spare
time.
Some
people
want
to
lose
weight
when
others
run
to
keep
up
fit.
Unfortunately,
running
is
not
always
popularly
among
young
people
at
school.
In
some
school
when
it
rains
and
it’s
too
wet
to
play
football
or
basketball,
children
have
no
choice
but
do
cross-country
running
instead.
However,
some
students
dislike
do
it.
Running
is
beneficial
to
us
physically
and
mentally,
so
we
call
it
the
healthy
activity.
You
will
find
that
even
short
runs
can
increase
you
energy
and
make
you
more
likely
to
enjoy
that
life
has
to
offer.
So
let’s
do
running
every
day.
【答案】1.
第一句：went→go
2.
第二句：when→while
3.
第二句：删掉keep后的up
4.
第三句：popularly→popular
5.
第四句：school→schools
6.
第四句：but
后加上to
7.
第五句：do→doing
8.
第六句：the
→a
9.
第七句：you→your
10.
第七句：that→what
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。文章就跑步这项运动对健康的好处展开说明，倡议大家每天跑步。
【详解】
1.考查时态。句意：当今许多人空余时间跑步。讲的是现在人们跑步的现象，应该用一般现在时。故将went改为go。
2.考查连词。句意：有些人跑步是为了减肥，而另一些是为了保持身体健康。根据句意可知，本句中有“some…,while
others
…”（有些人……，而另一些……）这样的前后逻辑，故将when改为while。
3.考查固定短语。句意：有些人跑步是为了减肥，而另一些是为了保持身体健康。“保持身体健康”翻译为“keep
fit”,故删掉keep后的up。
4.考查形容词。句意：不幸的是，在学校里跑步运动并不是总是受年轻人的欢迎。英语短语“be
popular
among
sb”意为“受到某人的欢迎”，be
后面用形容词作表语。故将popularly
改为popular。
5.考查名词的数。句意：在一些学校里，下雨天时地面太湿不能打篮球或踢足球，孩子们别无选择只能去越野跑。School是可数名词，所以“一些学校”翻译为“some
schools”,
school用复数形式。故将school
改为schools。
6.考查固定搭配。句意：在一些学校里，下雨天时地面太湿不能打篮球或踢足球，孩子们别无选择只能去越野跑。“别无选择只能做……”英语翻译为“have
no
choice
but
to
do
sth”
。故在but
后加上to。
7.考查动名词。句意：然而，一些学生不喜欢越野跑。句中的动词dislike后面接动词时，动词要用动名词形式作dislike
的宾语。故将do改为doing。
8.考查冠词。句意：跑步对身心都有益，所以我们称之为一项健康的活动。文中第一交出现
“healthy
activity”，所以根据冠词用法只能用
a。故将
the改为a。
9.考查人称代词。句意：你会发现即使是短跑也会增添你的精力，使你更有可能地享受生活所带来的快乐。句中的“增添你的精力”，在名词energy前用形容词性物主代词。故将you改为your。
10.考查宾语从句。句意：你会发现即使是短跑也会增添你的精力，使你更有可能地享受生活所带来的快乐。本句中的动词enjoy后接一个宾语从句，宾语从句中what作为动词offer的宾语，意为“享受生活所带来的快乐”，故将that改为what。
【点睛】
做改错题时，先通读全文。认真阅读短文，在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。根据短文大意和上下文逻辑关系，对文章进行逐字逐句的分析，检查句子的结构是否完整，语气是否连贯等等。然后综合运用所学语言知识，根据各行不同的错误情况分别进行答题(即改词、加词或减词)。
Passage5（2020·内蒙古乌兰察布市·集宁一中高三月考）
I
like
Li
Ziqi,
which
has
inspired
many
people
all
over
the
world.
Over
the
years,
she
had
transformed?from
a
village
girl
into
food
and
lifestyle
expert.
She
has
become
worldwide
famous
by
making
videos
introduced?the
beauty
of
traditional
Chinese
culture.?Therefore,
Li’s
success
did?not
come
easily.?Her
father’s
death
left
her
living
with
her
grandparents
in
a
poor
village
after?she
went
to
work
in
the
city
on
the
age
of
14.
In
2012,
Li
returned
to
home
and
opened
an
online
shop
to
sell?locally
products.
In
2016,
she
began
to
display
Chinese
culture
by
filming
how
his
products
were
created.
【答案】which→who
had→has
into后加a
introduced→introducing
Therefore→However
after→before
on→at
去掉to
locally→local
his→her
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文，简要讲述了李子柒的故事。她通过拍摄视频介绍了中国传统文化。
【详解】
1.
考查非限制性定语从句关系代词。句意：我喜欢李子柒，她激励了全世界很多人。由分析句子得出，逗号之后的句子是对李子柒做补充说明，因而属于非限制性定语从句。先行词Li
Ziqi在从句中做主语，所以，关系代词要用
who。故将which改为who。
2.
考查现在完成时。句意：这些年来，她已经从一个乡村女孩，转变成了食物和生活方式专家。当时间状语是over
the+时间段时，主句的时态要用完成时。结合前一个句子，得出本篇文章用的是现在时，所以本句要用现在完成时。故将
had改为has。
3.
考查冠词。句意：这些年来，她已经从一个乡村女孩，转变成了食物和生活方式专家。当可数名词以单数形式出现时，需要加上冠词。结合本句，从一个乡村女孩变成了一个专家
expert为可数名词，且
food首字母的的发音为辅音音素。所以要加上冠词。故into后加a
。
4.
考查现在分词。句意：她因制作介绍中国传统文化之美的录像而闻名于世。videos与introduce在逻辑上是主动关系，所以用现在分词作定语。故将introduced改为introducing
。
5.
考查副词。句意；然而，她的成功并不容易。根据前后句子的逻辑关系，可以得出用转折副词。故将Therefore改为However
。
6.
考查时间状语从句。句意：在她14岁去城里工作之前，她父亲去世，留下她和祖父母一起生活在一个贫穷的村庄。根据句意可知，父亲的去世发生在她去城市工作之前。故将after
改为before。
7.
考查介词。句意：在她14岁去城里工作之前，她父亲去世，留下她和祖父母一起生活在一个贫穷的村庄。此处为固定搭配：at
the
age
of
在……岁时。故将on改为
at。
8.
考查介词。句意：2012年，李回到家乡，开了一家网店，销售当地产品。home为地点副词，其前面不用介词。故
删掉to。
9.
考查形容词。句意同上。句中products为名词，修饰名词要用形容词。故将locally改为
local。
10.
考查人称代词。句意：2016年，她开始通过拍摄她的产品是如何创作的，来展示中国文化。全文讲述的都是李的成功故事，所以后面的代词应该和主语一致。故将his
改为her。
Passage6（（2020·六盘山高级中学高三月考）
Rowing
boats
are
always
a
fun
activity
for
me.
Last
summer
I
went
to
Hainan
with
my
father
and
spent
a
week
there.
We
stayed
in
a
hotel
which
was
short
distance
from
the
sea.
On
the
five
day,
my
father
hired
a
boat.
Look
around,
I
found
there
were
not
many
more
boats
on
the
sea.
I
wanted
to
row
of
my
own,
but
my
father
was
afraid
to
let
us
do
that.
He
didn't
agree
unless
later
a
boatman
came
and
helpfully
taught
me
how
to
row.
I
was
very
pride
when
I
was
finally
able
to
row
the
boats
and
keep
it
on
course.
【答案】1.
are→is
2.在short前面加a
3.
five→fifth
4.
Look→Looking
5.去掉more
6.
of→on
7.
us→me
8.
unless→until/till
9.
pride→proud
10.
boats→boat
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了，去年夏天，作者和爸爸去海南划船的经历。
【详解】
1.
考查主谓一致。句意：划船对我来说总是一项有趣的活动。Rowing
boats动名词短语作主语，谓语用单数形式。故将are改为is。
2.
考查冠词。句意：我们住在一家离海不远的旅馆里。short
distance表可数含义，此处泛指“一段短距离”，short以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a表泛指。故在short前面加a。
3.
考查数词。句意：第五天，我父亲租了一艘船。此处指“第五天”，用序数词fifth。故将five改为fifth。
4.
考查现在分词。句意：环顾四周，我发现海上没有多少船。本句已有谓语found且无连词，look用非谓语形式，主语I和动词look是逻辑上的主谓关系，用现在分词（doing）形式表主动，作状语，首字母大写。故将Look改为Looking。
5.
考查比较级。句意：环顾四周，我发现海上没有多少船。由语境可知，此处没有比较对象，不需要用比较级，去掉more。故去掉more。
6.
考查介词。句意：我想独自划船，但我父亲不敢让我划船。固定搭配on
one’s
own(独自)，用介词on。故将of改为on。
7.
考查代词。句意：我想独自划船，但我父亲不敢让我划船。由上文语境可知，是作者想独自划船，而不是作者和父亲，应用人称代词me。故将us改为me。
8.
考查固定句型。句意：直到后来一个船夫来帮我学划船，他才同意。固定句型not…until/till…(直到……才……)。故将unless改为until/till。
9.
考查形容词。句意：当我终于能够划船并使它保持在航道上时，我感到非常自豪。此处用形容词proud(骄傲的、自豪的)作系动词was的表语。故将pride改为proud。
10.
考查名词单复数。句意：当我终于能够划船并使它保持在航道上时，我感到非常自豪。由上文语境和下文的it可知，作者划的是一只船，用名词单数形式。故将boats改为boat。
Passage7（2020·六盘山高级中学高三期中）
I
took
our
foreign
teacher
Mr.
Brown,
he
came
to
China
for
the
first
time,
to
Shapotou
in
last
weekend.
Having
told
about
the
history
of
Ning
Xia,
he
was
amazing
at
this
wonder.
He
was
struck
by
the
beautiful
of
the
mixture
of
sand
and
water.
I
took
photo
of
him,
which
would
be
a
good
memory
for
him.
At
the
top,
Mr.
Brown
was
very
interested
in
the
activities
of
protecting
the
environment
that
he
was
eager
to
join
in
and
sign
her
name.
Both
Shapotou
and
the
Ning
Xia
people
deep
impressed
him
so
he
decides
to
visit
more
places
of
interest
when
free.
【答案】1.
he→who
2.
将last前的in去掉
3.
having
后加been
4.
amazing→amazed
5.
beautiful→beauty
6.
photo→photos
7.
very→so
8.
sign→signed
9.
her→his
10.
deep→deeply
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者上周六带着第一次来中国的外教布朗先生参观沙坡头，了解宁夏的历史，沙坡头和宁夏的人们给布朗先生留下深刻印象的故事。
【详解】
1.考查定语从句。句意：上周末，我带着第一次来中国的外教布朗先生去了沙坡头。分析句子可知，he
came
to
China
for
the
first
time为定语从句，修饰先行词Mr.
Brown，关系词在从句中作主语，指人，应用关系代词who引导该从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故将he改为who。
2.考查介词。句意：同上。分析可知，last
week为本句的时间状语，意为“上周”，前面不能加介词。故将last前的in去掉。
3.考查非谓语动词。句意：听说了宁夏的历史后，他对这个奇迹感到惊奇。Having
told和逻辑主语he之间为被动关系，应用现在分词的完成式的被动形式Having
been
told。故在having
后加been。
4.考查形容词。句意：同上。分析句子可知，这里是指人感到惊奇，而不是令人惊奇的。修饰人，用v+ed形式的形容词。故将amazing改为amazed。
5.考查名词。句意：他被沙与水的混合物的美丽所震撼。分析句子可知，by为介词，后面应用名词作宾语。beauty当“抽象意义的美”讲时，是不可数名词。故将beautiful改为beauty。
6.考查名词的数。句意：我给他拍了照片，那将是他美好的回忆。分析句子可知，photo是可数名词，根据语境，我应该是给他拍了不止一张照片，应用复数形式。故将photo改为photos。
7.考查固定句型。句意：在顶端，布朗先生对保护环境的活动非常感兴趣，他渴望加入并签上他的名字。so…that…，意为“如此......以致于”，引导结果状语从句，根据句意，故将very改为so。
8.考查时态。句意：同上。分析句子可知，sign和was
eager
to为并列谓语，前半句用一般过去时，后面也应用一般过去时,描述发生在过去的事情。故将sign改为signed。
9.考查代词。句意：同上。根据文章，可知Mr.
Brown是男士，并且从句的主语是he，那么签署他的名字，也应是男士的“他的”。故将her改为his。
10.考查副词。句意：沙坡头和宁夏的人们都给他留下了深刻的印象，于是他决定有空的时候多去参观一些名胜古迹。分析句子可知，deep在句中修饰动词impressed作状语，应用副词形式。故将deep改为deeply。
Passage8（（2020·贵州遵义市·高三月考）
The
Middle-Autumn
Festival
is
one
of
traditional
Chinese
festivals
to
be
hold
in
September
or
October.
During
the
festival,
family
members
get
united
but
have
mooncakes
together.
There
are
various
kinds
of
it,
such
as
bean
paste,
egg-yolk
or
meats.
The
shape
of
a
mooncake
is
round
as
it
symbolize
a
big
moon.
In
addition
to,
in
the
evening
of
the
day,
people
get
together,
eaten
delicious
mooncakes.
Often,
they
also
appreciate
the
beautiful
moon
what
hangs
in
the
dark
sky.
To
conclude,
the
Middle-Autumn
Festival
is
a
very
nicely
festival
for
Chinese
people.
【答案】
1.
traditional前面加the
2.
hold→held
3.
but→and
4.
it→them
5.
meats→meat
6.
symbolize→symbolizes
7.
in
addition
to的to去掉
8.
eaten→eating
9.
what→which/that
10.
nicely→nice
【分析】
本文是说明文，主要介绍了中秋节的习俗。
【小题1】
考查冠词。句意：中秋节是中国的传统节日之一，通常在九月或十月举行。此处特指中秋节，需要用定冠词the修饰，故在traditional前面加the。
【小题2】
考查动词不定式。句意：中秋节是中国的传统节日之一，通常在九月或十月举行。hinese
festivals
与
hold在逻辑上是被动关系，可知此处是不定式的被动语态，所以hold需要用过去分词形式held，故将hold改为held。
【小题3】
考查连词。句意：在节日期间，家人们聚集在一起，一起吃月饼。前文的聚集在一起和后文的吃月饼之间是并列关系，不是转折，所以用and连接，故将but改为and。
【小题4】
考查代词。句意：有各种各样的，如豆沙，蛋黄或肉。此处表示月饼有各种各样的，mooncakes是复数，指代复数用代词them，故将it改为them。
【小题5】
考查不可数名词。句意：有各种各样的，如豆沙，蛋黄或肉。meat是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将meats改为meat。
【小题6】
考查时态和主谓一致。句意：月饼的形状是圆的，因为它象征着一个大月亮。本句由as连接，后半句的主语是it，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词需要用三单形式，故将symbolize改为symbolizes。
【小题7】
考查固定搭配。句意：此外，在这一天的晚上，人们聚在一起，吃美味的月饼。表示“此外”，需要用短语in
addition，后面没有宾语时，不需要介词to，故将to去掉。
【小题8】
考查现在分词。句意：此外，在这一天的晚上，人们聚在一起，吃美味的月饼。后半句没有主语，两个句子没有连接词连接，所以eat是非谓语动词，eat的逻辑主语是people，两者之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词形式，故将eaten改为eating。
【小题9】
考查定语从句。句意：通常，他们也欣赏挂在黑暗天空中的美丽月亮。本句是定语从句，从句修饰名词moon，先行词是物，在从句中做主语，关系词用which/that。故将what改为which/that。
【小题10】
考查形容词。句意：中秋节对中国人来说是一个非常美好的节日。此处用形容词修饰名词festival，形容词做定语，故将nicely改为nice。
Passage9（2020·贵州遵义市·高三月考）
Dear
Editor,
I'm
writing
to
tell
you
about
a
food
poisoning
accident.
Several
days
ago,
my
neighbor
ate
a
bag
of
food
buying
from
the
market．After
the
meal,
they
had
stomachaches
and
our
faces
turned
pale.Fortunate,
one
of
their
friends
found
the
accident
and
immediately
called
a
ambulance,
which
carried
them
quickly
to
a
hospital．After
several
hours'
treatment
they
finally
escaped
with
death．As
some
illegal
businessmen
only
interested
in
making
profits
to
become
rich
quickly,
they
seldom
care
about
the
necessary
safe
measures．Nor
do
they
care
about
which
happens
to
consumers．They
shall
be
charged
by
law．Meanwhile,
I
do
hope
the
whole
society
can
realize
the
important
of
food
safety
and
begin
taking
action
together
to
make
sure
food
is
safe.
Li
Hua
【答案】1.neighbor→neighbors
2.buying→bought
3.our→their
4.Fortunate→Fortunately
5.a→an
6.删除with
7.only前加are
8.safe→safety
9.which→what
10.important→importance
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。作者叙述了邻居们食物中毒的事，并且呼吁采取措施惩治不法商人，确保食物安全。
【详解】
1.
考查名词。句意：几天前，我的邻居们吃了一包从市场买的食物。根据下文中提到的they可知，作者的“邻居们”不止一人，neighbor应用复数形式。故将neighbor改为neighbors。
2.
考查非谓语动词。句意：几天前，我的邻居们吃了一包从市场买的食物。分析句子结构可知，food后面的部分是定语，修饰a
bag
of
food，a
bag
of
food和buy之间是被动关系，应用过去分词作定语，故将buying改为bought。
3.
考查代词。句意：饭后，他们胃疼，他们的脸色变得苍白。该处指“邻居们的脸”，而不是指“我们的脸”，应用代词their，故将our改为their。
4.
考查副词。句意：幸运的是，他们的一个朋友发现了这场事故，马上叫了一辆救护车。修饰整个句子应用副词。故将Fortunate改为Fortunately。
5.
考查冠词。句意：幸运的是，他们的一个朋友发现了这场事故，马上叫了一辆救护车。ambulance为可数名词，ambulance的发音开头是元音因素，应用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。
6.
考查介词。句意：经过几个小时的治疗，他们终于逃脱了死亡的危险。escape可用作及物动词，后面接名词作宾语，意为“避开……，逃避……”，故with多余，去掉。
7.
考查主谓一致。句意：由于一些非法商人只对快速致富的利润感兴趣，他们很少关心必要的安全措施。as引导原因状语从句，从句中少谓语。表示“对……感兴趣”应用be
interested
in。结合上下文可知，该句应用一般现在时态。且主语为businessmen，根据主谓一致原则，应用are作谓语。故在only和interested之间加上are。
8.
考查名词。句意：由于一些非法商人只对快速致富的利润感兴趣，他们很少关心必要的安全措施。表示“安全措施”，应用名词safety修饰measures，表示措施的类别。故将safe改为safety。
9.
考查名词性从句。句意：他们也不关心消费者会发生什么。about后面是宾语从句，在从句中，从句引导词作主语，表示“什么”，应用what引导该从句。which引导名词性从句时，意为“哪一个”，不符合语境。故将which改为what。
10.
考查名词。句意：同时，我也希望全社会都能意识到食品安全的重要性，并开始共同采取行动来确保食品安全。表示“重要性”，应用名词importance。the
importance
of
food
safety作realize的宾语。故将important改为importance。考点10
短文改错
Passage1（2019·南昌县莲塘第一中学高三月考）
Two
months
ago
my
mother
and
I
were
walking
home
from
shopping
while
we
noticed
a
small
dog
lying
still
on
the
middle
of
the
road.
How
danger
it
was!
We
got
closely
to
him
and
found
that
he
was
badly
injured.
Saw
the
poor
dog,
we
decided
to
help
him.
Immediately
we
called
a
taxi
and
send
him
to
an
animal
hospital,
where
he
was
examined
and
received
treatment.
After
staying
in
hospital
for
few
days,
he
became
good
enough
to
walk.
Then
we
took
him
home
and
looked
after
him
carefully
until
he
was
fully
recovered.
Now
he
is
already
an
important
member
of
our
family
and
brings
ourselves
a
lot
of
happiness.
Passage2（（2020·四川成都市·北大附中成都为明学校高三月考）
It
was
a
Sunday
afternoon.
My
parents
and
I
were
watching
TV
excitedly
when
suddenly
I
notice
a
pigeon
on
the
balcony.
It
was
a
white
pigeon
with
a
ring
around
one
of
its
foot.
It
rested
there
quietly
but
refused
to
fly
away.
Realizing
it
must
have
been
lost
its
way
back
home,
I
managed
call
the
Pigeon
Association
up
for
help.
In
the
same
time,
my
parents
brought
the
pigeon
inside
and
gave
it
some
bird
food,
what
helped
refresh
it.
Before
long,
an
owner
got
the
message
and
came
to
take
the
pigeon
back.
He
thanked
us
a
lot.
My
parents
and
I
all
felt
happily
for
what
they
had
done.
Passage3（2020·四川乐山市·高三月考）
Thank
you
for
your
letter.
I'm
delighting
that
you
will
come
to
China
to
learn
Chinese
paper-cutting,
it
is
one
of
Chinese
traditional
folk
arts.
Paper-cutting,
with
the
history
of
more
than
1,
500
years
，
is
so
much
amazing
that
it
never
fails
to
attract
foreigners.
Craftsmen
can
cut
different
shapes
by
only
use
scissors
or
knives,
making
attractive
but
difficult
for
people
to
master
the
skills.
I
have
started
to
learn
it
when
I
was
seven,
so
you
can
turn
to
me
with
help.
I'm
surely
you'll
have
a
good
time.
See
you
sooner.
Passage4（2020·江西新余市·新余一中高三月考）
Nowadays,
lots
of
people
went
running
in
their
spare
time.
Some
people
want
to
lose
weight
when
others
run
to
keep
up
fit.
Unfortunately,
running
is
not
always
popularly
among
young
people
at
school.
In
some
school
when
it
rains
and
it’s
too
wet
to
play
football
or
basketball,
children
have
no
choice
but
do
cross-country
running
instead.
However,
some
students
dislike
do
it.
Running
is
beneficial
to
us
physically
and
mentally,
so
we
call
it
the
healthy
activity.
You
will
find
that
even
short
runs
can
increase
you
energy
and
make
you
more
likely
to
enjoy
that
life
has
to
offer.
So
let’s
do
running
every
day.
Passage5（2020·内蒙古乌兰察布市·集宁一中高三月考）
I
like
Li
Ziqi,
which
has
inspired
many
people
all
over
the
world.
Over
the
years,
she
had
transformed?from
a
village
girl
into
food
and
lifestyle
expert.
She
has
become
worldwide
famous
by
making
videos
introduced?the
beauty
of
traditional
Chinese
culture.?Therefore,
Li’s
success
did?not
come
easily.?Her
father’s
death
left
her
living
with
her
grandparents
in
a
poor
village
after?she
went
to
work
in
the
city
on
the
age
of
14.
In
2012,
Li
returned
to
home
and
opened
an
online
shop
to
sell?locally
products.
In
2016,
she
began
to
display
Chinese
culture
by
filming
how
his
products
were
created.
Passage6（（2020六盘山高级中学高三月考）
Rowing
boats
are
always
a
fun
activity
for
me.
Last
summer
I
went
to
Hainan
with
my
father
and
spent
a
week
there.
We
stayed
in
a
hotel
which
was
short
distance
from
the
sea.
On
the
five
day,
my
father
hired
a
boat.
Look
around,
I
found
there
were
not
many
more
boats
on
the
sea.
I
wanted
to
row
of
my
own,
but
my
father
was
afraid
to
let
us
do
that.
He
didn't
agree
unless
later
a
boatman
came
and
helpfully
taught
me
how
to
row.
I
was
very
pride
when
I
was
finally
able
to
row
the
boats
and
keep
it
on
course.
Passage7（2020·六盘山高级中学高三期中）
I
took
our
foreign
teacher
Mr.
Brown,
he
came
to
China
for
the
first
time,
to
Shapotou
in
last
weekend.
Having
told
about
the
history
of
Ning
Xia,
he
was
amazing
at
this
wonder.
He
was
struck
by
the
beautiful
of
the
mixture
of
sand
and
water.
I
took
photo
of
him,
which
would
be
a
good
memory
for
him.
At
the
top,
Mr.
Brown
was
very
interested
in
the
activities
of
protecting
the
environment
that
he
was
eager
to
join
in
and
sign
her
name.
Both
Shapotou
and
the
Ning
Xia
people
deep
impressed
him
so
he
decides
to
visit
more
places
of
interest
when
free.
Passage8（（2020·贵州遵义市·高三月考）
The
Middle-Autumn
Festival
is
one
of
traditional
Chinese
festivals
to
be
hold
in
September
or
October.
During
the
festival,
family
members
get
united
but
have
mooncakes
together.
There
are
various
kinds
of
it,
such
as
bean
paste,
egg-yolk
or
meats.
The
shape
of
a
mooncake
is
round
as
it
symbolize
a
big
moon.
In
addition
to,
in
the
evening
of
the
day,
people
get
together,
eaten
delicious
mooncakes.
Often,
they
also
appreciate
the
beautiful
moon
what
hangs
in
the
dark
sky.
To
conclude,
the
Middle-Autumn
Festival
is
a
very
nicely
festival
for
Chinese
people.
Passage9（2020·贵州遵义市·高三月考）
Dear
Editor,
I'm
writing
to
tell
you
about
a
food
poisoning
accident.
Several
days
ago,
my
neighbor
ate
a
bag
of
food
buying
from
the
market．After
the
meal,
they
had
stomachaches
and
our
faces
turned
pale.Fortunate,
one
of
their
friends
found
the
accident
and
immediately
called
a
ambulance,
which
carried
them
quickly
to
a
hospital．After
several
hours'
treatment
they
finally
escaped
with
death．As
some
illegal
businessmen
only
interested
in
making
profits
to
become
rich
quickly,
they
seldom
care
about
the
necessary
safe
measures．Nor
do
they
care
about
which
happens
to
consumers．They
shall
be
charged
by
law．Meanwhile,
I
do
hope
the
whole
society
can
realize
the
important
of
food
safety
and
begin
taking
action
together
to
make
sure
food
is
safe.
Li
Hua
