鲁教版英语九年级全册写作教学课件（49张PPT）

Learning aims
学习目标
1. Learn how to write an article about the hot topic.
2. Master the writing skills of making
an outline for an article.
3. Learn to work cooperatively with others.
English Writing
作文是中考英语中的必
考题，分值为20分 ，占试
卷总分的16.7%。
冲向中考

中考英语作文评分标准：
第一档（17-20分）要点齐全，行文流畅，所写内容符合所提供的各种信息。
第二档（13-16分）内容与提供信息基本符合,表达错误较少,少量语法、词汇错误。
第三档（9-12分）内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符,句子表达错误较多,尚可读懂。
第四档 （5-8分）写出部分要点，行文尚流畅，有较多语 法和词汇错误。
第五档 （0-4分）基本上没有写出要点，语法及拼写错误太多，不知所云。
What is a good
composition ?
Complete content
A good
composition
Proper structure
No language
mistakes
beginning
body
ending
开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间，地点，人物和主要事件及时点出。
（总）
（分）
（总）
中考英语三段式作文法
要摆出事实或提出论据，或事情发展的过程详细写出来。
得出结论或理由
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study.
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.
What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
me soon.

Let’s go for it!
Mary
(the beginning)
(the ending)
the body（正文）
How can we
write a good
composition ?
誊
查
美
连
列
审
作文
美化句子
检查修改
审清题意
连词成句
列出要点
誊写规范
Writing skills—seven steps
加
加头添尾
最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，
同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的想法如何？根据所
提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，
写一篇短文。
主题
以一般现在时为主
时态
内容要点
书面表达第一步：审
原因
赞成
帮助他人是美德；
帮助他人就是帮助自己；
反对
怕陷入麻烦；
怕被误解；
你的观点？（至少两点）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（正文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：美德virtue
列：用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
4.保护自己免于…
protect oneself from doing
5.乐意做某事
be willing to do sth.
1.帮助他人就是帮助自己
helping others is helping ourselves
2.害怕陷入麻烦
3. 被误解
be afraid of getting in trouble
书面表达第二步：列
be misunderstood
加首尾，使文章结构完整。注意简洁，采用开门见山的形式，结尾与开头相呼应，要扣题有力。
Recently our class had a discussion
about whether we should help strangers.
different students have different opinions.
结尾：It’s reported that some people
refuse to help others.
So ,I think if everyone tries a little
kindness,our world will be full of love.
开头：
（比较）
书面表达第三步：加
连：恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，
各部分衔接自然。
1.If everyone isn’t willing to help us just
because we are strangers to them.
2.It’s hard to imagine what our world will
be like.
3.However,some are afraid that helping
others can sometimes bring us trouble.
书面表达第四步：连
恰当的连接词
时间顺序
first, second, then, next， finally/at last, soon, suddenly
空间顺序
here, there, next to, in front of,
at the back of
对称顺序
on the one hand, on the other hand
转折顺序
but, however, though
因果顺序
because, as, thanks to, as a result (of)
条件
if, unless
递进顺序
what’s more, besides,
插入语
I think, I’m afraid, you know,
as we all know
Let’s try
1.____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
2.I didn’t know it _____ you told me.
3.You’d better look up the new word in a dictionary ______ you don’t know it.
4._____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled.
Though/Although
until
if/when
First
Next
Finally/At last
美：写好词句，美化文章
书面表达第五步：美
Writing skills（“美”的技巧）
方法一:善用高级词汇
Which is better?
我们应该帮助别人。
A We should help others.
B We should try our best to help others.
我无法相信我们的世界将变成什么样。
A I can’t imagine what our world will be like.
B It’s hard to imagine what our world will be
like.
Which is better?
如果每个人都能善良，世界将充满爱。
A If everyone is kind,our world will be full of
love.
B If everyone tries a little kindness,our world
will be full of love.
Which is better?
方法二:活用多种句型
Writing skills（“美”的技巧）
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C She is so young that she can’t carry the …
D She is not old enough to carry the…
方法三:加谚语
Writing skills（“美”的技巧）
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies.
As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
我们应该尽力帮助别人，不过我们也应该保护自己不陷入麻烦。
We should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.
We should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,and as the saying goes: “Think twice before you do. ”so we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.
Enjoy some sayings:
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Think twice before you do.

4.Do as the Romans do.


三思而后行。
熟能生巧。
有志者事竟成。
入乡随俗。
早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
失败是成功之母。
5.The early bird catches the worm.
3.Where there is a will,
there is a way.
6.Failure is the mother of success.
7.Save the earth,our only home.
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
9.All roads lead to Rome.
10.Never too old to learn.


保护地球，我们唯一的家。
一天一苹果， 医生远离我。
条条大路通罗马。
活到老，学到老。
PAY ATTENTION :
在有把握的情况下，美化句子，展示自己的语言功底。

否则要以写正确/通顺的简单句为最基本要求，切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙。
查：检查并修改错误。
1.单词拼写
2.时态
3.语态
4.主谓一致
5.名词单复数
6.人称
7.表达、结构
No Chinglish
No grammar mistakes
No spelling mistakes
书面表达第六步
Correct the composition
has
ourselves
If
to imagine
are misunderstood
others’
getting
誊：将作文认真整洁地抄写在横
线上,横线就是我们英语作业本的
第三条线， 都要穿过这
条线。

f,g ,j ,p ,q ,y
书面表达第七步：誊
18分
10分
字母书写不规范
卷面不整洁
有涂改
中考作文热门话题
热点话题一
共享单车
热点话题十一
旅游介绍
热点话题二
校园暴力
热点话题十二
交通安全
热点话题三
健康生活习惯
热点话题十三
节俭
热点话题四
学做好人好事
热点话题十四
家庭教育
热点话题五
二胎
热点话题十五
幸福的意义
热点话题六
网络、游戏
热点话题十六
感恩
热点话题七
如何减压
热点话题十七
传统文化
热点话题八
我的理想职业
热点话题十八
毕业感想
热点话题九
饮食安全
热点话题十九
拯救地球环境
热点话题十
网购
热点话题二十
成长
（2016，烟台）每个人对交友都有不同的看法，请根据图示提供的信息，以“Good Friends in My Eyes”为题，写一篇100字左右的短文。首先分享大众观点，然后从中选出你看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由。
大众观点
热爱运动
交流合作
活泼开朗
努力学习
乐于助人
诚实守信
要求：1.短文语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.题目与开头以给出，不计入总词数。
3.不出现真实信息。
Everyone needs friends.Different people have different ideas about making friends._____________________
___________________________________________
纵观近三年烟台中考作文
(2017,烟台) 当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致
当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子来说，学会自立相当
重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息，
以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇100字左右的短文。
(2018,烟台)分享是一种行为方式，也是一种良好的品质，人生处处充满分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐，快乐加倍；分担烦恼，烦恼减半。请根据以上观点，结合思维导图所示，以“My Sharing Experience”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：be full of, cut…in half, thanks to, overcome
My Sharing Experience
Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people _____________________
列
审
加
连
美
查
誊
作文
beginning
body
ending
Practice by yourselves
(2017,烟台) 当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致
当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子来说，学会自
立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片
及文字信息，以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇
100字左右的短文。
主题
以一般现在时为主
时态
内容要点
现象
观点
the beginning
Main body

the ending
facts
(dis)avantages
Topic
Different people have
different ideas about ….
In my opinion / I think
As far as I'm concerned
Opinion Composition
believe their children
2.give children proper advice and chance
Facts
1.
2.
3.
Disadvantages
In my opinion, We should…We’d better…
I think/believe…
1.don’t do chores
2.can’t look after themselves
3.be angry easily
4.be afraid of difficulties

Learn to Be Independent
show too much love
depend on parents
can’t do things
by themselves
Your opinions
Step 4
Use linking words:
if,however,but,because,or,
all in all…
Step 5
Make the composition more beautiful.
The saying: Think twice before you do.
Step 6
Check and correct.
Step 7
Write the composition correctly
on the paper.
(2017,烟台) 当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子来说，学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息，以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇100字左右的短文。
Pair-correction
Underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes.
Exchange your composition
with your partner .
Then correct the mistakes.
Let’s enjoy
our own compositions!
Self-reflection & summary

Finish writing your composition Then, hand in it to your teacher.