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Traveling
初四英语写作课
Traveling
Light
souvenirs
of
misery
And
with
each
step
taken
my
back
was
breaking
tilI
I
found
the
One
who
took
it
all
from
me
.
Down
by
the
riverside
I
laid
my
burdens
down
Now
I’m
traveling
light
My
spirit
lifted
high
I
found
my
freedom
now
And
I'm
traveling
light
Well
I
was
doubling
over
the
load
on
my
shoulders
was
a
weight
I
carried
with
me
everyday.
Crossing
miles
of
frustrations
and
rivers
a
raging
Picking
up
stones
I
found
along
the
way
I
staggered
and
I
stumbled
down
Pathways
of
trouble
I
was
hauling
those
Do
you
like
travelling
?
Where
have
you
traveled?
Share
your
traveling
experiences.
Where
have
you
traveled?
What
did
you
do
there?
Traveling
can
open
up
our
eyes.
Aim
3
Aim2
Aim
1
To
talk
about
and
write
something
on
traveling.
Enjoy
the
life,
love
the
nature
and
the
culture.
Objectives
To
learn
some
strategies
to
improve
the
ability
of
writing.
(学习目标)
Learning
aims(学习目标)
Travling
The
First
Stop
Beautiful
China
桂林山水甲天下
Guilin
is
famous
for
mountains
and
rivers.
East
or
west
,
Guilin's
scenery（风景）
is
the
best.
The
First
Stop
,.
Welcome
to
Guilin
You
can
watch
the
great
show
Forever
Love
for
Guilin
to
learn
about
the
local
culture.
You
can
drift
on
the
Yulong
River.
You
can
go
bike
riding
in
the
10-mile
Gallery
(十里画廊）
（漂流）
Poster
You
can
drift
on
the
Yulong
River
go
bike
riding
in
the
10-mile
Gallery
.
,
you
can
also
watch
the
great
show
Forever
Love
for
Guilin
to
learn
about
the
local
culture.
What’s
more
However
but
also
not
only
Which
is
better？
2
Use
some
linking
words（巧用连接词）
to
make
your
article
more
fluent
.
Strategy
1
1
The
Second
Stop
The
Longmen
Grottoes
(龙门石窟)
Luoyang
Peonies
(牡丹花）
The
Second
Stop
Last
summer,
I
went
to
Luoyang
and
visited
the
Longmen
Grottoes
.
They
are
the
crystal
of
the
wisdom
of
the
ancient
people
（古代人民智慧的结晶
）.
The
tallest
statue
is
as
tall
as
17.14
meters
while
the
shortest
is
only
2
centimeters
tall.
Many
people
thought
touching
the
statues
could
bring
them
the
buddha’s
bless(得到佛祖保佑）
and
did
so.
As
a
result,
some
of
the
statues
turned
into
black
and
bright.
I
felt
very
sad
and
angry.
中国的国宝
national
treasures
of
China
good
luck
好运
If
you
can’t
express
something
,
try
another
way.
(不会表达，另辟蹊径）
Strategy
2
Because
many
people
touched
them.
Why
are
their
colors
so
strange?
What
other
uncivilized
behaviors
can
you
think
of
?
He
wants
to
leave
his
name
He
will
leave
not
only
but
also
his
shame
Nature
Culture
The
Last
Stop
Heavenly
Pool
(天池)
Changbai
Mountain
The
Last
Stop
Please
don’t
destroy
anything.
Please
don’t
be
close
to
the
cliffs.
(峭壁）
Please
don’t
swim
in
the
heavenly
pool
Please
don’t
throw
litter
everywhere
Try
to
write
as
many
expressions
as
you
can
to
take
the
place
of
Rewrite
the
suggestions
Suggestions
for
Tourists
Use
different
expressions
to
avoid
repetition
(避免重复）
Strategy
3
“Please
don’t”
Discuss
in
groups
What
have
you
learned
during
our
trip?
Luoyang
Guilin
Mount
Changbai
Challenge
yourselves
随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的人
喜欢旅游。旅途中我们可以欣赏到美丽的风景，结识不同的人，还能学习到很多知识。然而，很多人在旅游的时候，不注重自己的行为，请你以Civilized
Traveling
为题写一篇短文，号召大家文明出游。
写作要求：
列举2-3条旅游中的不文明行为。
谈一谈你的建议。
80-100词。
Civilized
Traveling
Civilized
Traveling
Show
Time
1.
Did
he\
she
use
any
linking
words?
2.
Did
he\
she
use
different
expressions
to
avoid
repetition?
3.
Can
you
find
out
any
mistakes?
A
traveler
without
knowledge
is
a
bird
without
wings.
一个没有知识的旅行者就是一只没有翅膀的鸟。
While
you
are
enjoying
the
scenery,
others
are
watching
you.
你在看风景，别人也在看你。
Famous
sayings
Use
some
famous
sayings
to
make
your
composition
better.
(巧用谚语，给文章增色）
Additional
Strategy
A
．
Must
do
：
Rewrite
your
composition
to
make
it
more
perfect
and
then
copy
it
on
your
composition
paper.
B.
Can
do：
Search
for
more
linking
words
or
phrases
and
classify
them.
Homework
