(共29张PPT)
Unit2
I’ll
help
to
clean
up
the
city
parks.
Writing
试用
赠送
修理
曾经
call
up
推迟
提出
分发
cheer
up
打扫干净
to
be
a
helper
clean
up
振奋起来
give
out
come
up
with
put
off
call
up
used
to
fix
up
give
away
try
out
Some
volunteer
jobs
clean
up
the
park
volunteer
to
teach
kids
give
out
some
clothes
care
for
old
people
Some
other
ways
teach
at
a
night
school
help
homeless
people
and
animals
read
newspapers
for
old
people
help
at
a
hospital
Here
is
a
letter.
Dear
Sir
or
Madam，
Thank
you
for
spending
time
reading
my
letter.I
am
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday.
I
believe
I
can
be
a
qualified(合格的)volunteer.Firstly，I
am
good
at
English.I
can
express
myself
clearly
and
fluently
in
English.Secondly，I'm
outgoing
and
good
at
getting
along
with
kids.What's
more，I
am
always
helpful
and
warmhearted
in
my
classmates'
eyes.Finally，if
I
am
lucky
to
get
the
chance，I
will
prepare
my
course
well
before
every
class
and
play
some
meaningful
games
to
inspire
and
motivate(激发……的积极性)
the
students.
I
would
be
very
grateful
if
you
give
me
the
opportunity.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
，
Wu
Hao
Salutation
Closing
Signature
body
Why
Who
How
What
Skimming
Dear
Sir
or
Madam，
Thank
you
for
spending
time
reading
my
letter.I
am
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday.
I
believe
I
can
be
a
qualified(合格的)volunteer.Firstly，I
am
good
at
English.I
can
express
myself
clearly
and
fluently
in
English.Secondly，I'm
outgoing
and
good
at
getting
along
with
kids.What's
more，I
am
always
helpful
and
warmhearted
in
my
classmates'
eyes.Finally，if
I
am
lucky
to
get
the
chance，I
will
prepare
my
course
well
before
every
class
and
play
some
meaningful
games
to
inspire
and
motivate(激发……的积极性)
the
students.
I
would
be
very
grateful
if
you
give
me
the
opportunity.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
truthfully，
Wu
Hao
Salutation
Closing
Signature
who?
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
What?
Why?
How?
am
good
at
English
getting
along
with
kids
helpful
and
warmhearted
Who?
what?
why?
Body
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School
help
the
students
with
English
First,
Secondly,
What's
more
Why?
Firstly
Secondly
What's
more
am
good
at
English
getting
along
with
kids
helpful
and
warmhearted
Finally
advantages
How?
apply
for
Find
out
some
useful
phrase
in
the
passage.
Find
out
some
useful
phrase
in
the
passage.
1.申请
2.期待你的回复
3.在…方面帮助…
4.擅长
5.乐意做……
6.幸运地做……
7.在某人的眼里_
8.与……相处得好
9.得到机会
10给某人机会
apply
for
look
forward
to
your
reply
be
good
at
/do
well
in
be
lucky
to
do…
get
on
/along
well
with
get
the
chance
give
sb.
the
opportunity
help…with…
be
willing
to
do…
in
one’s
eyes
Step
3:Imitate
some
beautiful
sentences.
1.
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday．
我写信是为了申请成为一名志愿者，在这个暑假帮助希望学校的学生学习英语。
即时演练：“幸运儿”可以帮助那些看不见的人。
Lucky
can
help
people
____________
can't
see.
who/that
2.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.我期待你的回复。
即时演练：
我期待拜访你。I
am
____________________________________
you.
looking
forward
to
visiting
Extensive
languages（拓展性语言）
The
rose
is
in
her
hand,
the
flavor
in
mine.
赠人玫瑰，手有余香
One
swallow
doesn’t
make
a
summer.
一燕不成夏
Volunteer
Needed!
Which
why
when
what
3b
Write
a
letter
or
e-mail
to
the
place
you
want
to
volunteer
at.
Which
volunteer
job
do
you
want
to
do?
What
are
your
interests
and
hobbies?
How
?
Why
do
you
want
to
do
the
volunteer
job?
When
are
you
free
to
do
the
job?
01
02
03
体裁
应用文
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
审题
While-writing
你在网站看到这篇学生中心公开招募志愿者的招聘启事，你也很想去帮助需要帮助的人，请写一封回信申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。
申请内容：1.写明你要申请的志愿者工作是什么；
2.说明你有怎样的能力或兴趣爱好能胜任这份工作。
要求：80字左右，内容充实，结构合理，语言流畅得体。
Task
1
审题
Task
2
关键句
Which
voluntary
work
do
you
want
to
do?
I’d
like
to/
I’m
interested
in/
I
want
to
volunteer
at
the
library.
What
are
your
interests
and
hobbies?
How
can
these
help
you
to
do
the
job?
I’m
good
at/
I’m
strong
in
______.I
can/am
able
to
__________,
so
I
think
I'll
be
good
at
this
job
.
（3）Why
do
you
want
to
do
volunteer
job?
I
want
to
help
out
as
a
volunteer
at
the
library
/
school/
museum/
group,
because
__________
篇章方面
词语方面
代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？
名词单复数是否准确？
动词搭配、动词的形式正确？
形容词、副词的使用是否达?与修饰的对象是否相符？
。
句子方面
主谓是否一致？时态、语态是否正确？连词使用是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用到好词好句？
细节方面
单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？
布局是否完整？
逻辑是否合理？
要点是否齐全/丰富？
After-writing
Task
1:
Self-check
Task
2:
Peer-check
(同伴互改)
项目
标准
自我
评价
同伴
评价
教师
评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(
1分)
内容（8分）
要
点
全
面
申请的志愿工作（2分）
怎样胜任这份工作（4分）
拓展合理
(
2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1
分)
句法正确，语言优美
(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
注意使用修改字符：
优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／；语法错
误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
Show
Time
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
am
writing
to
you
about
volunteering
at
the
library.
I’m
interested
in
computers
and
teaching,
and
I
want
to
volunteer
as
a
computer
teacher
for
people
who
lack
computer
skills.
I
love
working
with
computers
and
I’m
good
at
explaining
how
to
use
new
software
to
younger
students
at
my
school.
I’ve
taught
my
grandparents
how
to
use
e-mail
and
word
processing
software.
Salutation
Body
I
like
to
help
people
to
enjoy
computers
as
much
as
I
do,
so
I
think
I’d
be
good
at
this
job.
I
want
to
help
out
as
a
volunteer
at
your
library
because
I
know
that
many
people
go
there
to
use
your
computers.
I’m
free
to
help
on
weekends
and
sometimes
in
the
evenings.
Your
truly,
Jiang
Hua
Body
Closing
Signature
Please
Remember
No
matter
how
little
the
power
is,it's
still
a
kind
of
support!
再小的力量也是一种支持！
It
works
The
world
works
2017年北京省北京市通州区
假如你是李华，你们学校组织了一次以“你快乐，我快乐”为主题的慈善义卖活动(acharity
sale)来帮助社区有困难的人。请你用英语写一语短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中做了什么，帮助了谁，以及你的感受。
提示词语：sell,buy,toy,picture,book,playground,community,proud
提示问题：
◎What
did
you
do?
◎Who
did
you
help?
◎How
do
you
feel?
At
my
school,we
had
a
charity
sale
last
week.__________
Homework
参考范文
At
my
school,
we
had
a
charity
sale
last
week．（引出话题）A
charity
sale
was
held
on
our
school
playground
Last
Saturday
morning．
（活动的背景）We
prepared
many
things
which
we
made
by
hand
in
our
spare
time,
such
as
kites,
model
planes
and
so
on.
They
looked
very
beautiful.
We
also
brought
old
toys
and
second﹣hand
books
to
sell
on
the
sale.
At
8：30,
the
activity
started.
Many
students
and
teachers
came
to
take
part
in
it．
Everyone
chose
their
favorite
items
and
paid
for
them
at
a
much
cheaper
price.
In
the
end
the
money
we
made
added
up
to
over
￥2,0（00）（对于活动做了哪些事情具体）
We
sent
the
money
to
the
community
to
help
children
who
cannot
attend
school
and
the
seniors
who
needed
better
care．（高分句型）
I
had
a
wonderful
experience.
I'm
proud
of
what
we
have
done.
If
everyone
makes
a
contribution
to
the
charity,
the
world
will
become
much
better．（高分句型）
参考范文
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit
2
I’ll
help
to
clean
up
the
city
parks.
Writing导学案
（一）写作目标
1.
掌握应用文中申请书的写作方法及技巧，培养在写前分析题目及列提纲的习惯。
2.
学会利用自己的特长为社会做点滴贡献，积极参与志愿者工作，培养乐于助人的品德。
Reading
and
Writing
Dear
Sir
or
Madam，
Thank
you
for
spending
time
reading
my
letter.I
am
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday.
I
believe
I
can
be
a
qualified(合格的)volunteer.Firstly，I
am
good
at
English.I
can
express
myself
clearly
and
fluently
in
English.Secondly，I'm
outgoing
and
good
at
getting
along
with
kids.What's
more，I
am
always
helpful
and
warmhearted
in
my
classmates'
eyes.Finally，if
I
am
lucky
to
get
the
chance，I
will
prepare
my
course
well
before
every
class
and
play
some
meaningful
games
to
inspire
and
motivate(激发……的积极性)
the
students.
I
would
be
very
grateful
if
you
give
me
the
opportunity.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
truthfully，
Wu
Hao
Step
1:
Read
and
complete
the
chart.
Key
Information
:
Who
What
Why
How
Information
Card
The
school
Wu
Hao
is
from
The
people
who
he
wants
to
help
this
summer
holiday
The
subject
he
is
good
at
The
thing
he
will
do
before
every
class
The
number
of
reasons
why
he
can
be
a
qualified
volunteer
Step
2:
Find
out
some
useful
phrase
in
the
passage.
1.申请_____________
2.期待你的回复_______________________
3.在……方面帮助……
______________
4.擅长____________________
5.乐意做……___________________
6.幸运地做……___________________
7.在某人的眼里___________________
8.与……相处得好______________________
9.得到机会_____________________
10给某人机会____________________________
Step
3:Imitate
some
beautiful
sentences.
1.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday．
我写信是为了申请成为一名志愿者，在这个暑假帮助希望学校的学生学习英语。
即时演练：
“幸运儿”可以帮助那些看不见的人。
Lucky
can
help
people
____________
can't
see.
2.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.我期待你的回复。
即时演练：
我期待拜访你。
I
am
____________________________________
you.
Writing
Dear
Sir
of
Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
truly,
_____________
注意使用修改字符：
优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／；语法错
误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
Homework:
2017年北京省北京市通州区
假如你是李华，你们学校组织了一次以“你快乐，我快乐”为主题的慈善义卖活动(acharity
sale)来帮助社区有困难的人。请你用英语写一语短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中做了什么，帮助了谁，以及你的感受。
提示词语：sell,buy,toy,picture,book,playground,community,proud
提示问题：
◎What
did
you
do?
◎Who
did
you
help?
◎How
do
you
feel?
At
my
school,we
had
a
charity
sale
last
week.__________×××学校（八）年级（英语）学科
智慧课堂学习清单
课堂
Unit2
Writing
周次
第
周
编号
评价等级
设计
年级
八年级
班次
学生姓名
书写是人生的第一张名片，每次作业是一次书法训练
（一）写作目标
1.
掌握应用文中申请书的写作方法及技巧，培养在写前分析题目及列提纲的习惯。
2.
学会利用自己的特长为社会做点滴贡献，积极参与志愿者工作，培养乐于助人的品德。
Reading
and
Writing
Dear
Sir
or
Madam，
Thank
you
for
spending
time
reading
my
letter.I
am
a
student
from
No.1
Middle
School.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday.
I
believe
I
can
be
a
qualified(合格的)volunteer.Firstly，I
am
good
at
English.I
can
express
myself
clearly
and
fluently
in
English.Secondly，I'm
outgoing
and
good
at
getting
along
with
kids.What's
more，I
am
always
helpful
and
warmhearted
in
my
classmates'
eyes.Finally，if
I
am
lucky
to
get
the
chance，I
will
prepare
my
course
well
before
every
class
and
play
some
meaningful
games
to
inspire
and
motivate(激发……的积极性)
the
students.
I
would
be
very
grateful
if
you
give
me
the
opportunity.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
truthfully，
Wu
Hao
Step
1:
Read
and
complete
the
chart.
Key
Information
:
Who
What
Why
How
Information
Card
The
school
Wu
Hao
is
from
The
people
who
he
wants
to
help
this
summer
holiday
The
subject
he
is
good
at
The
thing
he
will
do
before
every
class
The
number
of
reasons
why
he
can
be
a
qualified
volunteer
Step
2:
Find
out
some
useful
phrase
in
the
passage.
1.申请_____________
2.期待你的回复_______________________
3.在……方面帮助……
______________
4.擅长____________________
5.乐意做……___________________
6.幸运地做……___________________
7.在某人的眼里___________________
8.与……相处得好______________________
9.得到机会_____________________
10给某人机会____________________________
Step
3:Imitate
some
beautiful
sentences.
1.I
am
writing
to
apply
for
being
a
volunteer
who
will
help
the
students
with
their
English
in
Hope
School
this
summer
holiday．
我写信是为了申请成为一名志愿者，在这个暑假帮助希望学校的学生学习英语。
即时演练：
“幸运儿”可以帮助那些看不见的人。
Lucky
can
help
people
____________
can't
see.
2.I
am
looking
forward
to
your
reply.我期待你的回复。
即时演练：
我期待拜访你。
I
am
____________________________________
you.
Writing
Dear
Sir
of
Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
truly,
_____________
注意使用修改字符：
优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／；语法错
误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
Homework:
2017年北京省北京市通州区
假如你是李华，你们学校组织了一次以“你快乐，我快乐”为主题的慈善义卖活动(acharity
sale)来帮助社区有困难的人。请你用英语写一语短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中做了什么，帮助了谁，以及你的感受。
提示词语：sell,buy,toy,picture,book,playground,community,proud
提示问题：
◎What
did
you
do?
◎Who
did
you
help?
◎How
do
you
feel?
At
my
school,we
had
a
charity
sale
last
week.__________
