小升初-书面表达之空间类课件（共28张PPT）

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书面表达之空间类
通用版
小升初
书面表达之空间类
目录
3.思路点拨
2.
范文赏析
4.万能模板
1.
典型例题
5.
写作训练
经典例题
第一名
第二名
第三名
典型例题
请以My
hometown
为题，写一篇作文，要求语句连贯，思路清晰，不少于60个词。
范文赏析
范文赏析
Luoyang?is?my?hometown.?It?is?a?
busy
and?modern
?city.?It?
has?a?long?history.?There?are?
many?big?supermarkets,?beautiful?gardens?and?good?factories?here.?
You?can?see?green?hills,?
big?
trees?and?nice?flowers.?
Many?
visitors?come?here?to?enjoy?it.?
There?are?many?good?places?to?visit.?There?is?a?park?and?a?big?Shopping?Mall.?You?can?
see?films?in?Wanda
Theatre.?I?hope?you?can?come?
and?visit?soon.
范文赏析
My
hometown
思路点拨
请以My
hometown
为题，写一篇作文，要求语句连贯，思路清晰，不少于60个词。
第一步-审题抓点
字数要求
题目要求
第二步-定人称&定时态
Luoyang?is?my?hometown.?It
is?a?modern?and?busy?city.?It?has?a?
long?history.?There
are
many?big?supermarkets,?
beautiful?gardens?and?good?
factories?here.?It?is?very?easy?to?go?
shopping.
?You
?can?
see?green?hills,?big?trees?and?nice?flowers.?
There
be连接
开头点题
结尾呼应
There?are?many?big?supermarkets,?
beautiful?gardens?and?good?factories?here.
第三步-搭建结构
Luoyang?is?my?hometown.?It?is?a?modern?and?busy?town.?
I?hope?you?can?come?and?visit?soon.
It?have?a?long?history.
There?is?many?big?supermarkets,?
beautiful?gardens?and?good?factories?here.?
第四步-检查易错句型
There?is?a?park?and?a?big?Shopping?Mall.?
It
has
a
long
history.
There?are?many?big?supermarkets,?
beautiful?gardens?and?good?factories?here.?
第四步-检查易错句型
There?is?a?park?and?a?big?Shopping?Mall.?
假如这是你的房间，请你根据图片对房间进行描述，要求语言流畅，思路清晰，不少于60词
典型例题
I
have
a
new
room.
There
are
too
many
things
in
my
room.
My
hats
are
on
the
sofa.
My
books
are
in
the
bookcase.
My
clock
is
on
the
chair.
My
dictionary
and
my
pens
are
on
the
table.
My
bags
are
under
the
table
.
My
computer
is
on
the
desk
.
Oh,
there
is
a
picture
on
the
wall.
My
room
is
very
nice
,
but
not
tidy.
I
like
it
very
much.
Do
you
have
your
own
room?
Tell
me!
My
Room
范文赏析
假如这是你的房间，请你根据图片对房间进行描述，要求语言流畅，思路清晰，不少于60词
第一步-审题抓点
字数要求
无题目要求
第二步-定人称&定时态
I
have
a
new
room.
There
are
too
many
things
in
my
room.
My
hats
are
on
the
sofa.
My
books
are
in
the
bookcase.
My
clock
is
on
the
chair.
My
dictionary
and
my
pens
are
on
the
table.
There
be连接
开头点题
结尾呼应
第三步-搭建结构
I
have
a
new
room.
There
are
too
many
things
in
my
room.
Do
you
have
your
own
room?
Tell
me!
There
is
too
many
things
in
my
room.
I
books
are
in
the
bookcase.
第四步-检查易错句型
There
are
a
picture
on
the
wall
.
There
are
too
many
things
in
my
room.
My
books
are
in
the
bookcase.
第四步-检查易错句型
There
is
a
picture
on
the
wall
.
万能模板
01
03
04
万能模板
你猜中了开头
This
is
my....（地点）
Welcome
to.....（地点）
I
am
from.....（地点）
I
was
born
in.....（地点）
02
01
03
04
万能模板
猜中了结尾吗
I
love
my......
（地点）
This
is
my...（地点）How
about
you?
I?hope?you?can?come?and?visit?soon.
Do?you?like?my?hometown??
02
01
04
万能模板
过程一样很有意义
There
is
.....（物品）
There
are.....（物品）
You
can
see.....（物品）
03
It’s
in/
on
the...
（方位词）
02
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