专题01
高分副词的使用（1）
一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)
1.
2.
轻轻地;悄悄地(walk/close
the
door)
quietly
3.
轻轻地(sway/tremble)slightly
4.
轻轻地softly(rain/wind)
/gently（not
violently）
5.
温柔地；和蔼地mildly/
gently
6.
谦虚地modestly
7.
沉默地speechlessly
/dumbly
8.
感激地gratefully
9.
迅速地swiftly
10.
坚定地firmly/determinedly
11.
勇敢地bravely
12.
热情地；热烈地warmly
13.
和蔼地kindly
14.
渴望地；热切地eagerly
15.
害羞地；内向地shyly
16.
仔细地closely
17.
专心地attentively
18.
舒服地comfortably
19.
考虑周到地；体谅地considerately
20.
故意地deliberately
21.
慷慨地generously
22.
凶猛地；凶狠地；愤怒地fiercely
23.
怀希望地hopefully
24.
仁慈地mercifully
25.
快乐地；愉快地
(smile)
/brightly
/
cheerfully
26.
绝望地；拼命地desperately
27.
大声地
loudly
28.
友好地；礼貌地pleasantly
二、高分副词运用
1.
She
grinned
at
me
_________（害羞地）,
her
eyes
sparkling.
【答案】shyly
2.
The
audience
listened
to
the
lecture
_________.（专心地）
【答案】attentively
3.
He
was
_________（故意地）trying
to
upset
her.
【答案】deliberately
4.
The
detective
watched
him
_________（仔细地）,
waiting
for
a
reply.
【答案】closely
5.
He
was
treated
_________.（仁慈地）
【答案】mercifully
6.
'Morning!'
she
called
_________.（快乐地）
【答案】cheerfully/brightly
7.
If
you're
all
sitting
_________（舒适地）,
then
I'll
begin.
【答案】comfortably
8.
Please
give
_________（慷慨地）to
the
refugee
fund.
【答案】generously
9.
'Will
there
be
any
food
left
over?'
he
asked
_________.（满怀希望地）
【答案】hopefully
10.
He
treats
everyone
equally
and
_________.（体谅他人地）
【答案】considerately
11.
He
looked
round
_________（拼命地）for
someone
to
help
him.
【答案】desperately
12.
He
walked
_________（迅速地）towards
home
down
the
dark
street.
【答案】swiftly
13.
She
smiled
_________.（愉快地）
【答案】brightly
14.
`I'll
do
the
dishes,'
he
said
_________.（友好地；礼貌地）
【答案】pleasantly
15.
_________（勇敢地）he
went
into
the
burning
house
【答案】Bravely
16.
The
trees
swayed
_________（轻轻地）in
the
breeze.
【答案】gently/slightly
17.
For
a
few
seconds
she
gazed
_________（沉默地；一声不啃地）at
him.
【答案】dumbly/speechlessly
18.
Terry
greeted
the
visitor
_________.（热情地）
【答案】warmly
19.
'Of
course
I
don't
mind,'
she
answered
_________.（和蔼地；温柔地）
【答案】mildly
/gently
20.
They're
_________（渴望地）awaiting
the
big
day.
【答案】eagerly
21.
he
stood
up
soundlessly
and
_________（沉默地；一声不啃地）and
glided
across
the
hallway
and
through
a
door
【答案】speechlessly/
dumbly
22.
He
swayed
_________（轻轻地）,
as
if
about
to
fall.
【答案】slightly此句不宜用gently,
请与17题比较。
23.
'I
can
manage,'
she
said
_________.（坚定地）
【答案】firmly/determinedly
24.
'I
was
just
lucky,'
he
said
_________.（谦虚地）
【答案】modestly
25.
The
authors
_________（感激地）acknowledge
your
financial
support.
【答案】gratefully
26.
Rosa
shut
the
door
_________.（轻轻地）
【答案】quietly(without
making
much
noise)
/softly
(not
loudly)
27.
Music
played
_________（轻轻地）in
the
background.
【答案】softly(not
loudly)
28.
The
dog
looked
at
her
____________（凶狠地）.
【答案】fiercely
三、实战演练（2017年6月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，
根据所给情节进行续写，
使之构成一个完整的故事。
On
a
bright,
warm
July
afternoon,
Mac
Hollan,
a
primary
school
teacher,
was
cycling
from
his
home
to
Alaska
with
his
friends.
One
of
his
friends
had
stopped
to
make
a
bicycle
repair,
but
they
had
encouraged
Mac
to
carry
on,
and
they
would
catch
up
with
him
soon.
As
Mac
pedaled(骑行)
along
alone,
he
thought
fondly
of
his
wife
and
two
young
daughters
at
home.
He
hoped
to
show
them
this
beautiful
place
someday.
Then
Mac
heard
quick
and
loud
breathing
behind
him.“Man,
that’s
a
big
dog！”he
thought.
But
when
he
looked
to
the
side,
he
saw
instantly
that
it
wasn’t
a
dog
at
all,
but
a
wolf,
quickly
catching
up
with
him.
Mac’s
heart
jumped.
He
found
out
his
can
of
bear
spray.
With
one
hand
on
the
bars,
he
fired
the
spray
at
the
wolf.
A
bright
red
cloud
enveloped
the
animal,
and
to
Mac’s
relief,
it
fell
back,
shaking
its
head.
But
a
minute
later,
it
was
by
his
side
again.
Then
it
attacked
the
back
of
Mac’s
bike,
tearing
open
his
tent
bag.
He
fired
at
the
wolf
a
second
time,
and
again,
it
fell
back
only
to
quickly
restart
the
chase(追赶)．
Mac
was
pedaling
hard
now.
He
waved
and
yelled
at
passing
cars
but
was
careful
not
to
slow
down.
He
saw
a
steep
uphill
climb
before
him.
He
knew
that
once
he
hit
the
hill,
he’d
be
easily
caught
up
and
the
wolf’s
teeth
would
be
tearing
into
his
flesh.
At
this
moment,
Paul
and
Becky
were
driving
their
car
on
their
way
to
Alaska.
They
didn’t
think
much
of
it
when
they
saw
two
cyclists
repairing
their
bike
on
the
side
of
the
road.
A
bit
later,
they
spotted
what
they,
too,
assumed
was
a
dog
running
alongside
a
man
on
a
bike.
As
they
got
closer,
they
realized
that
the
dog
was
a
wolf.
Mac
heard
a
large
vehicle
behind
him.
He
pulled
in
front
of
it
as
the
wolf
was
catching
up
fast,
just
a
dozen
yards
away
now.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
A
few
minutes
later,
the
other
two
cyclists
arrived.
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【One
possible
version】：
Paragraph
1：
The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.
Paul
and
Becky
got
out
of
the
car
immediately
to
give
help.
But
with
the
bare
hands,
they
didn’t
dare
to
fight
with
the
wolf.
However,
they
still
approached
the
wolf
bravely.
At
the
same
time,
the
wolf
also
noticed
them
and
fiercely
turned
its
head
back,
shouting
loudly
at
Paul
and
Becky.
Mac
then
jumped
off
the
bicycle
and
was
ready
to
fight
against
the
wolf.
That
reached
deadlock.
Paragraph
2：
A
few
minutes
later,
the
other
two
cyclists
arrived.
They
found
the
dangerous
situation,
where
three
men
circled
the
wolf.
Mac’s
friends
also
jumped
off
their
bicycles
and
joined
the
fight
with
the
wolf.
More
and
more
cars
stopped.
Some
drivers
took
out
the
sticks
from
the
cars,
and
some
took
out
the
knives,
even
the
guns
towards
the
wolf.
Just
at
that
time,
the
wolf
might
feel
the
threats
from
the
people,
starting
to
withdraw.
Soon,
it
ran
away
off
the
road
and
swiftly
disappeared
in
the
distance.
【点评】：故事情节完整紧凑合理，句式结构丰富，副词运用熟练。文中bravely的使用突出Paul
and
Becky尽管赤手空拳，仍然靠近那只狼的勇敢，与下文fiercely
和loudly的使用形成鲜明的对比。Swiftly
突出狼看到人多而感到害怕最终迅速(swiftly)
逃跑。专题02
高分副词的使用（2）
一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)
1.
2.
有礼貌地politely
3.
真诚地sincerely
4.
熟练地skilfully
5.
欲睡地sleepily
6.
伤心地
sadly
7.
宽容地tolerantly
8.
考虑周到地、若有所思地thoughtfully
9.
温顺地meekly
10.
偷偷地(meet/leave)
secretly
11.
默默地silently
12.
自信地confidently
13.
耐心地patiently
14.
自豪地proudly
15.
热心地；热情地；非常感兴趣地enthusiastically
16.
尽情地；由衷地；发自内心heartily
17.
同情地sympathetically
18.
赞美地；钦佩地admiringly
19.
紧紧地
tightly
20.
小心谨慎地cautiously
21.
好奇地curiously
22.
严肃地；认真地seriously
23.
痛苦地（身体）painfully
24.
非常伤心地；痛苦地；悲痛地（心理）；sorrowfully
25.
非常伤心失望地；怨恨地；bitterly
二、高分副词运用
1.
Robyn
swallowed
_____________(
痛苦地
).
【答案】painfully
2.
'What
have
you
got
in
there?'
Felix
asked
_____________(
好奇地
).
【答案】curiously
3.
'Can
I
help
you?'
she
asked
_____________(
礼貌地
).
【答案】politely/pleasantly
4.
'A
lot
of
damage
has
already
been
done,'
he
said
_____________(
悲痛地
).
【答案】sorrowfully
5.
We
are
_____________(
真诚地
)
grateful
for
your
help.
【答案】sincerely
6.
It's
time
we
talked
_____________(
严肃地
)
about
our
relationship.
【答案】seriously
7.
'All
right,'
said
Neil
_____________(
温顺地
).
【答案】meekly
8.
He
complained
_____________(
非常伤心失望地
)
about
his
exam
grades.
【答案】bitterly
9.
He
stared
_____________(
若有所思地
)
out
the
window.
【答案】thoughtfully
10.
He
can
play
soccer
_____________(
熟练地
).
【答案】skilfully
11.
She
lay
on
the
sofa
_____________(
恹恹欲睡地
).
【答案】sleepily
12.
Was
she
_____________(
严重地
)
hurt?
【答案】seriously
13.
He
had
_____________(
考虑周到地
)
brought
with
him
some
food
to
share.
【答案】thoughtfully
14.
He
reacts
rather
_____________(
容忍地
)
toward
his
son's
juvenile
behavior.
【答案】tolerantly
15.
Hugh
laughed
_____________(
尽情地
)
at
the
joke.
【答案】heartily
16.
The
children
_____________(
偷偷地
)
went
to
the
movies
when
they
were
supposed
to
be
at
the
library.
【答案】secretly
17.
They
discussed
the
question
_____________(
热心地、热烈地
).
【答案】enthusiastically/heatedly
18.
We
welcomed
her
_____________(
热情地
).
【答案】heartily/warmly/enthusiastically
19.
He
sat
_____________(
一言不发地
)
by
the
bed.
【答案】silently/speechlessly/dumbly
20.
Carla
smiled
_____________(
自信地
)
at
the
cameras.
【答案】confidently
21.
He
waited
_____________(
耐心地
)
for
Katherine
to
speak.
【答案】patiently
22.
He
looked
at
his
professor
_____________(
钦佩地
).
【答案】admiringly
23.
She
_____________(
自豪地
)
displayed
her
prize.
【答案】proudly
24.
The
government
responded
_____________(
谨慎地
)to
the
move.
【答案】cautiously
25.
He
listened
to
her
_____________(
同情地
)
and
comforted
her.
【答案】sympathetically
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Though
born
into
a
rich
family,
by
twenty,
Hilary
had
spent
all
the
money.
He
then
had
some
trouble
with
the
bank
and
was
put
in
prison.
He
escaped
and
ran
to
Australia,
where
he
could
either
die
or
work,
which
gave
him
no
pleasure.
Then
he
remembered
that
he
had
an
aunt．
She
was
his
father’s
only
sister,
but
his
father
used
to
say
she
brought
no
glory
to
the
family.
It
seemed
that
his
aunt
had
failed
to
marry
a
nobleman.
Instead,
she
had
chosen
a
businessman
as
her
husband.
So
her
brother
considered
her
dead.
Later
on,
her
husband
died
and
left
her
a
lot
of
money;
but
that
did
not
bring
her
back
to
life
in
her
brother’s
opinion.
Hilary
discovered
his
aunt’s
address.
Fortunately
she
remained
faithful
and
honest
to
him.
So
Hilary
soon
moved
into
her
house
and
lived
comfortably.
Soon
his
aunt
was
deadly
ill.
Hilary
was
very
worried.
Fate
had
found
a
home
for
him,
and
was
now
going
to
throw
him
out
of
it.
There
was
only
one
thing
that
could
save
him:
her
will．
“Will？”she
said，“Yes,
I
have
made
one.
That
was
when
I
was
a
girl
and
had
not
much
money.
I
left
all
my
money
to
some
religious
people.”
“Didn’t
you
make
another
will
when
you
were
married.”
Hilary
asked.
“No，”she
said
in
a
low
voice,
“There
was
no
need.
When
I
finally
had
a
lot
of
money
I
found
I
had
no
relations.”
On
the
next
day
he
went
to
the
public
library
and
examined
a
book
of
law.
It
told
him
what
he
already
believed.
When
a
woman
is
married,
an
earlier
will
loses
its
value.
A
new
will
must
be
made.
If
no
new
will
is
made,
the
money
goes
to
the
nearest
relation.
Hilary
knew
that
he
was
his
aunt’s
only
relation.
His
future
was
safe.
After
a
few
months,
Hilary’s
problems
became
serious.
He
badly
needed
money.
He
had
expensive
tastes,
and
owed
a
lot
of
money
to
shopkeepers.
They
trusted
him
because
his
aunt
was
rich;
but
the
debt
was
terrible.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
Unfortunately
his
aunt
did
not
want
to
discuss
money
matters
at
all.__________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
One
night,
his
aunt
asked
him
to
prepare
the
medicine
for
her.______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【One
possible
version】：
Paragraph
1：
Unfortunately
his
aunt
did
not
want
to
discuss
money
matters
at
all.
Hilary
began
to
wonder
about
a
new
problem.
Should
it
be
better
for
his
aunt
to
die
now
so
that
he
could
get
the
money
to
pay
off
his
debts?
Just
then,
his
aunt
told
him
that
she
was
going
to
send
for
her
lawyer.
Worried
that
his
aunt
might
leave
all
her
money
to
someone
else
in
her
new
will,
he
made
a
quick
decision
to
put
her
life
to
an
end.
Paragraph
2：
One
night,
his
aunt
asked
him
to
prepare
the
medicine
for
her.
Realizing
it
was
a
good
chance
to
carry
out
his
plan,
Hilary
secretly
doubled
the
amount
of
the
medicine,
which
would
surely
put
his
aunt
to
sleep
forever.
Actually
his
aunt
was
so
well
aware
of
his
intention
that
she
seriously
explained
that
if
she
could
live
until
tomorrow,
she
would
make
a
new
will
in
his
favor
and
that
if
she
died
that
night,
he
would
get
nothing.
Hearing
this,
Hilary
attempted
to
stop
her
drinking
the
medicine,
but
it
was
too
late.
【点评】：故事情节完整合理，连贯性好，心里活动描写细腻，句式结构丰富，能熟练使用现在分词和过去分词结构。文中使用secretly
来突出Hialary
的谋杀意图，his
aunt
看出了他的意图，故认真地（seriously）跟他解释。专题03
高分副词的使用（3）
一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)
1.
2.
拼命地；发疯般地
(work/run)
crazily=like
crazy
3.
随意地;
漫不经心地；粗心大意地；马虎地carelessly
4.
随意地;
漫不经心地casually
5.
狂跳(heart)
beat
wildly
6.
欢呼cheer
wildly
7.
急切地四处张望look
wildly
around
8.
（态度）冷淡地
coldly
9.
猛烈地；剧烈地(shake/tremble/shiver)
violently
10.
无助地helplessly
11.
尴尬地;难为情地awkwardly
/embarrassedly;
12.
笨拙地clumsily
13.
茫然地blankly
14.
贪婪地greedily
15.
不情愿地reluctantly/
unwillingly
16.
怀疑地doubtfully
17.
激动地、兴奋地excitedly
18.
迟钝地；
呆笨地dully
19.
绝望地；无望地hopelessly
20.
憎恨地hatefully
21.
后悔地；遗憾地
regretfully
22.
粗鲁地；无礼地rudely
23.
不安地;
紧张地
uneasily/restlessly/nervously
24.
粗暴地(push/grabbed
sb)
roughly
25.
严厉地
(punish/say)
severely/
sternly
26.
固执地
stubbornly
二、高分副词运用
1.
His
heart
was
beating
______________（疯狂地）.
【答案】wildly
2.
She
nodded
her
head
______________（呆呆地）,thinking
about
something
else.
【答案】dully
3.
After
much
thought,
we
______________（不情愿地）agreed.
【答案】reluctantly/
unwillingly
4.
“Well,
what
can
I
do
for
you?”
he
asked
______________（冷淡地）.
【答案】coldly
5.
She
was
rushing
around
______________（拼命地）trying
to
put
out
the
fire.
【答案】madly/wildly
6.
She
threw
her
coat
______________（随意地）onto
the
sofa.
【答案】carelessly
7.
Anna
stared
______________（茫然地）at
the
wall.
【答案】blankly
8.
They
waited
there
______________（不安地）for
a
long
time.
【答案】uneasily/
restlessly/
nervously
9.
Several
people
have
been
______________（猛烈地）attacked
in
the
subway.
【答案】violently
10.
'I'm
very
sorry
about
your
sister,'
he
said
______________（难为情地）.
【答案】awkwardly/
embarrassedly
11.
Marty
always
bumped
into
things
______________（笨拙地）.
【答案】clumsily
12.
`I
must
die,'
he
said
______________（绝望地）.
【答案】hopelessly
13.
He
grabbed
the
bottle
and
drank
______________（贪婪地）.
【答案】greedily
14.
'Stop
behaving
like
a
fool!'
she
said
______________（严厉地）.
【答案】severely/sternly
15.
They
watched
______________（无助地）as
their
home
went
up
in
flames.
【答案】helplessly
16.
Gerald
shook
his
head
______________（怀疑地）.
【答案】doubtfully
17.
The
audience
cheered______________（欢呼）.
【答案】wildly
18.
I
was
still
trembling
______________（剧烈地）.
【答案】violently
19.
Someone
had
______________（粗心大意地；马虎地）left
a
window
open.
【答案】carelessly
20.
‘You
will
get
punished
one
day,’
he
said
______________（憎恨地）.
【答案】hatefully
21.
He
pushed
her
______________（粗暴地）out
of
the
way.
【答案】roughly
22.
'I
don't
care,'
she
said
______________（固执地）.
【答案】stubbornly
23.
She
looked
______________（急切地）around
for
an
escape.
【答案】wildly
24.
'What
do
you
want?'
she
asked
______________（粗鲁地）.
【答案】rudely
25.
People
had
gathered
and
were
talking
____________（兴奋地）.
【答案】excitedly
26.
____________（遗憾地）,
we
do
not
have
time
to
continue
this
discussion
now.
【答案】Regretfully
三、实战演练（2016年10月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One
weekend
in
July,
Jane
and
her
husband,
Tom,
had
driven
three
hours
to
camp
overnight
by
a
lake
in
the
forest.
Unfortunately,
on
the
way
an
unpleasant
subject
came
up
and
they
started
to
quarrel.
By
the
time
they
reached
the
lake,
Jane
was
so
angry
that
she
said
to
Tom，“I’m
going
to
find
a
better
spot
for
us
to
camp”and
walked
away.
With
no
path
to
follow,
Jane
just
walked
on
for
quite
a
long
time.
After
she
had
climbed
to
a
high
place,
she
turned
around,
hoping
to
see
the
lake.
To
her
surprise,
she
saw
nothing
but
forest
and,
far
beyond,
a
snow?capped
mountain
top.
She
suddenly
realized
that
she
was
lost.
“Tom！”she
cried.“Help！”
No
reply.
If
only
she
had
not
left
her
mobile
phone
in
that
bag
with
Tom.
Jane
kept
moving,
but
the
farther
she
walked,
the
more
confused
she
became.
As
night
was
beginning
to
fall,
Jane
was
so
tired
that
she
had
to
stop
for
the
night.
Lying
awake
in
the
dark,
Jane
wanted
very
much
to
be
with
Tom
and
her
family.
She
wanted
to
hold
him
and
tell
him
how
much
she
loved
him.
Jane
rose
at
the
break
of
day,
hungry
and
thirsty.
She
could
hear
water
trickling(滴落)
somewhere
at
a
distance.
Quickly
she
followed
the
sound
to
a
stream.
To
her
great
joy,_
she
also
saw
some
berry
bushes.
She
drank
and
ate
a
few
berries.
Never
in
her
life
had
she
tasted
anything
better.
Feeling
stronger
now,
Jane
began
to
walk
along
the
stream
and
hope
it
would
lead
her
to
the
lake.
As
she
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream,
Jane
heard
a
helicopter.
Is
that
for
me?
Unfortunately,
the
trees
made
it
impossible
for
people
to
see
her
from
above.
A
few
minutes
later,
another
helicopter
flew
overhead.
Jane
took
off
her
yellow
blouse,_
thinking
that
she
should
go
to
an
open
area
and
flag
them
if
they
came
back
again.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
But
the
helicopter
didn’t
come
back
again,
and
the
day
became
darker.
_______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
Jane
woke
up
at
the
daybreak.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【One
possible
version】：
Paragraph
1：
But
the
helicopter
didn’t
come
back
again,
and
the
day
became
darker.
Jane
was
so
tired,
hungry,
and
extremely
frightened.
Regretfully,
she
thought
to
herself，“If
only
I
had
not
quarreled
with
Tom.
Where
is
Tom?
He
must
have
made
the
emergency
call.
What
indeed
is
enough
courage.
If
I
continue
my
spirits
tomorrow,
I
will
be
likely
to
guide
the
helicopter．”Lying
beside
the
stream,
she
fell
asleep
very
soon.
Suddenly,
she
heard
the
shouts
of
tigers,
which
made
her
scared
to
death.
After
she
held
her
breath
for
a
few
minutes,
everything
was
quiet
again.
In
the
terrible
darkness,
she
slept
again.
Paragraph
2：
Jane
woke
up
at
the
daybreak.
She
caught
sight
of
a
fisherman
at_a_distance,
with
whose
help
she
climbed
to
an
open
area.
To_her_great_joy,
a
helicopter
flew
overhead
just
at
that
moment.
The
fisherman
helped
flag
her
yellow_blouse
wildly.
This
did
catch
the
rescuers’
attention!
Jane
was
rescued.
Seeing
Tom,
she
excitedly
told
him
how
much
she
missed
him.
Never
would
they
be
away
from
each
other.
Tom
gave
her
the
warmest
and
longest
hug
she
had
ever
received.
People
around
smiled
with
satisfaction.
【点评】：故事情节完整合理，心里活动描写细腻，句式结构丰富，能熟练使用现在分词结构，副词运用熟练。文中regretfully与下文Jane的内心独白形成呼应，突出她的后悔。the
fisherman
也是希望Jane
尽快获救，所以他帮助拼命地（wildly）挥动the
yellow
blouse。看到Tom，Jane
显然非常的激动（excitedly）。专题04
高分副词的使用（4）
一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)
1.
2.
犹豫不决地hesitantly
3.
不耐烦地impatiently
4.
无怜悯地；残忍地mercilessly
/cruelly
5.
闷闷不乐地moodily；unhappily
6.
虚弱地；微弱地weakly
7.
生气地angrily
8.
害怕地；恐惧地(run
away/scream)
fearfully
9.
羡慕地；嫉妒地enviously
10.
焦虑地、不安地、担忧地anxiously
11.
有力地；坚定地firmly
12.
担忧地；着急地worriedly
13.
出乎意料地；意外地unexpectedly
14.
困惑地confusedly
15.
忠诚地；一心一意地devotedly
16.
赞美地；钦佩地admiringly
17.
失望地disappointedly
18.
高兴地delightedly
19.
感兴趣地
interestedly
20.
满意地
contentedly
21.
匆忙地
hurriedly
22.
疲倦地tiredly/
wearily
23.
天真地innocently
24.
安全地safely
25.
坚定地；坚决地determinedly
26.
钟爱地；深情地
lovingly
二、高分副词运用
1.
She
glanced
____________（害怕地）over
her
shoulder.
【答案】fearfully
2.
His
friends
teased
him
____________（无情地）when
they
found
the
poem.
【答案】mercilessly
3.
Hearing
the
reply,
he
smiled
____________（满意地）.
【答案】contentedly
4.
"I'm
sorry,"
she
said,
smiling
____________（微弱地）.
【答案】weakly
5.
He
____________（匆忙地）went
to
school,
running
all
the
way.
【答案】hurriedly
6.
She
was
staring
____________（闷闷不乐地）into
the
fire.
【答案】moodily/unhappily
7.
He
signed
his
name
____________（犹豫不决地）.
【答案】hesitantly
8.
We
sat
waiting
____________（不耐烦地）for
the
film
to
start.
【答案】impatiently
9.
He
closed
his
eyes
____________（疲倦地）.
【答案】wearily/tiredly
10.
“I
will
give
up
smoking,”
he
said
____________（坚定地）.
【答案】determinedly/firmly
11.
She
smiled
at
him
____________（深情地）.
【答案】lovingly
12.
He
looked
at
his
friend's
new
car
____________（羡慕地）.
【答案】enviously/admiringly
13.
She
waited
____________（焦急地）by
the
phone.
【答案】anxiously/worriedly
14.
She
left
the
gambling
table
____________（失望地）.
【答案】disappointedly
15.
His
father
died
____________（意外地）.
【答案】unexpectedly
16.
The
two
friends
shook
hands
____________（有力地）.
【答案】firmly
17.
____________（高兴地）,
she
accepted
the
invitation.
【答案】Delightedly
18.
He
served
his
master
____________（忠诚地）.
【答案】devotedly
19.
“What
has
happened?”
He
asked
____________（困惑地）.
【答案】confusedly
20.
“Who
will
win
the
game?”
He
asked
____________（饶有兴趣地）.
【答案】interestedly
21.
`I
wonder
what
to
do,'
she
said
____________（担忧地）.
【答案】worriedly/anxiously
22.
She
smiled
at
him
_________.（天真地）
【答案】innocently
三、实战演练（2017年11月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A?vacation
with
my
mother
?
?I
had
an
interesting
childhood:
It
was
filled
with
surprise
and
amusements,
all
because
of
my
mother-loving,
sweet,
and
yet?absent-minded?and?forgetful.
One
strange
family?trip?we
took
when
I
was
eleven
tells
a
lot
about
her.
?
?
My
two
sets
of
grandparents
lived
in
Colorado
and
North
Dakota,
and
my
parents
decided
to
spend
a
few
weeks
driving
to
those
states
and
seeing
all
the
sights
along
the
way.
As
the
first
day
of
our
trip
approached,?David,
my
eight-year-old
brother,
and
I
unwillingly
said
good-bye
to
all
of
our
friends.
Who
knew
if
we’d
ever
see
them
again?
Finally,
the
moment
of
our
departure
arrived,
and
we
loaded
suitcases,
books,
games,?camping?equipment,
and
a?tent?into
the
car
and
bravely
drove
off.
We
bravely
drove
off
again
two
hours
later
after
we’d
returned
home
to
get
the
purse
and
traveler’s
checks?Mom?had
forgotten.
?
?
David
and
I
were
always
a
little
nervous
when
using
gas
station
bathrooms
if
Mom
was
driving
while?Dad
slept:
“
You
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout
while
I
go,
and
I’ll
stand
outside
the
door
and
play
lookout
while
you
go.”
I
had
terrible
pictures
in
my
mind:
“Honey,
where
are
the
kids?”
“What?!
Oh,
Gosh…
I
thought
they
were
being
awfully
quiet.”
We
were
never
actually
left
behind
in
a
strange
city,
but
we
weren’t
about
to
take
any
chances.
On
the
fourth
or
fifth
night,
we
had?trouble?finding
a
hotel
with
a
vacancy.
After
driving
in
vain
for
some
time,
Mom
suddenly
got
a
great
idea:
Why
didn’t
we
find
a
house
with
a
likely-looking
backyard
and
ask
if
we
could
set
up
tent
there?
David
and
I
became
nervous.
To
our
great
relief,
Dad
turned
down
the
idea.
Mom
never
could
understand
our
objections.If
a
strange
family
showed
up
on
her
front
doorsteps,
Mom
would
have
been
delighted.
She
thinks
everyone
in
the
world
as?nice?as
she
is.
We
finally
found
a
vacancy
in
the
next
town.?
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
?
The
next
day
we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us._____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
1：
We
drove
through
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【One
possible
version】：
Paragraph
1：
The
next
day
we
remembered
the
brand-new
tent
we
had
brought
with
us.?Mom?firmly
insisted
that
we
must
make
full
use
of
it
since
we
had
brought
it.?David?and
I
looked
at?Dad,
hoping
he
could
stop
her
crazy
idea.
To
our
great
disappointment,
he
agreed.
We
spent
a
whole
afternoon
seeking
a?nicecamping?place
and
set
upour?tent?before
the
night
fell.
It
was
the
first
time
that
I
had
thought
mom
could
be
wise
as
I
gazed
at
our
stunning
tent
admiringly.
“Oh,
I
forgot
the
pillows!”
What
a
misconception!
Despite
the
ache
of
my
neck,
we
had
some
great
nights.
Paragraph
2：
We
drove
through
several
states
and
saw
lots
of
great
sights
along
the
way.?The
bright
blue
sky,
the
limitless
green
grass,
the
group
of
sheep,
the
setting
sun
and
the
countless
stars
in
the
curtain
of
nights
kept
me
spellbound.
Not
only
did
we
see
the
picturesque
scenery,
we
also
managed
to
consider
mom’s
scandals
as
a
kind
of
fun.I
really
love
my
Mum.?To
our
relief,
the
four
of
us
safely
arrived
at
grandparents’
place
and
went
back
to
our
home.
It
was
so
fortunate
to
see
my
friends
again.
【点评】：故事情节完整合理，句式结构丰富，能熟练使用倒装句、感叹句等句型。文中firmly
强调妈妈一定要使用我们带来的新帐篷。新帐篷非常漂亮，所以作者带着欣赏(admiringly)的目光看着它。safely与文章开头及下文形成呼应，强调我们安全到家。专题05
高分介词短语的使用
一、高分介词短语
1.
determinedly=with
determination
坚定地；毅然决然地;
坚忍不拔地
2.
interestedly=with
interest
饶有兴趣地
3.
confidently=with
confidence
满怀信心地
4.
patiently=with
patience
耐心地
5.
proudly=with
pride
骄傲地；自豪地
6.
enthusiastically=with
enthusiasm
热心地;
热情地；感兴趣地
7.
sympathetically=with
sympathy
同情地
8.
cautiously
=with
caution
小心地；谨慎地
9.
enviously=with
envy
嫉妒地
10.
curiously=with
curiosity
好奇地
11.
anxiously=with
anxiety
焦虑地
12.
devotedly=with
devotion
热爱地；忠诚地；全心全意地
13.
sorrowfully=with
sorrow
悲痛地；非常伤心地
14.
with
sadness
伤心地
15.
with
fear
因为害怕
16.
with
courage
勇敢地
17.
with
joy
高兴地
18.
embarrassedly=with/in
embarrassment
难为情地；尴尬地
19.
contentedly=with/in
satisfaction
满意地
20.
delightedly=with/in
delight
高兴地
21.
excitedly=with/in
excitement
激动地；兴奋地
22.
disgustedly=with/in
disgust
厌恶地
23.
with/
in
relief
如释重负地；松了口气；欣慰地
24.
with/in
surprise
吃惊地
25.
amazedly=in
amazement
吃惊地
26.
confusedly=in
confusion
困惑地
27.
admiringly=in
admiration
仰慕地
28.
silently=
in
silence
默默地
29.
angrily=in
anger
愤怒地；生气地
30.
secretly=in
secret
秘密地；偷偷地
31.
hurriedly=in
a
hurry
匆忙地
32.
fearfully=in
fear=in
(a)
panic=in
terror=
in
horror
害怕地
33.
in
puzzlement
困惑地
34.
in
shock
震惊地
二、高分介词短语运用
1.
He
fought
the
illness
_________________（勇敢地）
and
determination.
【答案】with
courage
2.
They
watched
the
experiment
____________________（非常感兴趣地）.
【答案】with
great
interest；with
great
enthusiasm
3.
He
answered
the
questions
_________________（自信地）.
【答案】with
confidence
4.
He
listened
to
her
explanation
________________（耐心地）.
【答案】with
patience
5.
I
wear
my
policeman's
uniform
________________（自豪地）.
【答案】with
pride
6.
He
went
into
the
cave
________________（非常好奇地）.
【答案】with
great
curiosity
7.
We
waited
for
news
________________（焦虑地）.
【答案】with
anxiety
8.
We
all
watched
________________（尴尬地）
as
Mr
Rogers
started
to
cry.
【答案】with/in
embarrassment
9.
'I've
passed
all
my
exams',
he
announced
________________（满意地）.
【答案】with/in
satisfaction
10.
Gillian
and
Darren
greeted
the
speakers
________________（热情地）.
【答案】with
great
enthusiasm
11.
Desmond
eyed
her
anguished
face
________________（同情地）.
【答案】with
sympathy
12.
In
fog
you
should
drive
________________（特别小心地）.
【答案】with
extreme
caution;
with
great
care
13.
I
look
________________（羡慕地）
on
those
lucky
people
with
big
families.
【答案】with
envy
14.
The
kids
were
screaming
________________（高兴地）.
【答案】with/in
delight；with
joy
15.
He
looked
at
me
________________（困惑地）
and
did
not
answer
the
question.
【答案】in
confusion/puzzlement
16.
The
whole
ceremony
took
place
________________（寂静无声地）.
【答案】in
complete
silence
17.
'It's
a
lie!'
he
shouted
________________（愤怒地）.
【答案】in
anger
18.
They
accepted
the
decision
________________（伤心地）.
【答案】with
sadness
19.
She
clapped
her
hands
________________（激动地）.
【答案】with/in
excitement
20.
He
stared
at
the
animal
________________（吃惊地）.
【答案】in
amazement;
with/in
surprise
21.
Sam
threw
his
books
down
________________（厌恶地）
and
stormed
out
of
the
room.
【答案】with/in
disgust
22.
He
watched
________________（如释重负地）as
the
girl
nodded.
【答案】with/in
relief
23.
Daniel
gazed
at
her
________________（仰慕地；钦佩地）.
【答案】with/in
admiration
24.
She
looked
round
________________（震惊地）,
unwilling
to
believe
what
she
had
seen.
【答案】in
shock
25.
The
meeting
was
held
________________（秘密地）.
【答案】in
secret
26.
He
had
something
to
deal
with,
so
he
had
to
leave
________________（匆忙地）.
【答案】in
a
hurry
27.
He
ran
away
________________（害怕地）.
【答案】in
fear/panic/terror/horror
28.
His
face
was
white
________________（因为害怕）.
【答案】with
fear
29.
He
had
to
leave
his
hometown
________________（非常伤心地）.
【答案】with
sorrow
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
a
warm
and
sunny
morning
at
the
Central
Park
Zoo.
Abigail
and
her
classmates
were
abuzz
with
excitement
as
their
school
bus
entered
the
zoo
park
lot.
Today,
Abigail’s
class
was
going
on
a
field
trip
to
the
zoo
to
learn
more
about
the
animals
and
their
natural
habitats.
“Before
you
leave
the
bus,
please
make
sure
you
have
your
buddy！”
Mrs.
Brown
announced.
To
make
sure
no
one
got
lost
in
the
zoo,
each
student
had
a
buddy
(companion/friend).
Abigail’s
buddy
was
named
Derrick.
Derrick
loves
animals
and
was
also
excited
to
go
to
the
zoo.
But
sometimes,
Derrick
does
not
follow
the
rules
and
gets
in
trouble.
Abigail
hoped
that
today,
Derrick
would
follow
the
rules
so
they
would
not
get
in
trouble.
While
the
rest
of
the
students
got
off
the
bus,
Abigail
and
Derrick
quickly
ran
off
to
explore.
They
found
the
exhibits
for
many
different
kinds
of
animals
and
learned
a
lot
about
their
natural
habitats.
They
saw
the
elephants
playing
and
they
saw
giraffes
eating.
They
saw
the
polar
bears
sleeping
and
the
monkeys
leaping.
Abigail
asked
Derrick：
“Derrick,
what
is
your
favorite
animal？”
“I
think
I
like
chimpanzees
best.
They
have
a
lot
of
energy,
just
like
me!
What
animal
do
you
like,
Abigail？”
“I
love
polar
bears!
I
think
their
lifestyle
in
the
Arctic
is
very
interesting.”
A
few
hours
later,
Abigail
and
Derrick
started
to
feel
hungry.
They
made
their
way
back
to
the
zoo
entrance
to
eat
lunch
at
the
Rainforest
Cafe.
The
Rainforest
Cafe
is
both
Abigail
and
Derrick’s
favorite
restaurant
because
there
is
an
aquarium
inside.
The
restaurant
is
also
famous
for
its
chocolate
cake,
which
Abigail
ordered
for
dessert
after
they
had
finished
their
lunch.
As
Abigail
was
finishing
her
cake,
Derrick
excused
himself
to
go
to
the
restroom.
About
ten
minutes
later,
a
sudden
alarm
began
to
go
off
and
a
voice
came
over
the
loudspeaker.
“Attention!
Someone
has
opened
the
chimpanzee
exhibit!
Some
chimpanzees
have
escaped！”
People
were
screaming
and
starting
to
run.
Abigail
looked
for
Derrick,
but
he
was
nowhere
to
be
found.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
As
more
and
more
people
ran
out
of
the
zoo,
Abigail
began
to
think
__________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
As
Abigail
raced
up
the
path
to
the
animal
exhibits,
she
was
stopped
_________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【One
possible
version】：
Paragraph
1：
As
more
and
more
people
ran
out
of
the
zoo,
Abigail
began
to
think
where
her
buddy,_Derrick,
could
be.
She
got
up
from
the
table
quickly
and
circled
back
to
the
restrooms,
calling
Derrick’s
name.
There
was
no
answer,
so
Abigail
left
the
restaurant.
As
she
looked
around
the
zoo
grounds,
she
remembered
that
Derrick
had
a
lot
of
energy
and
had
told
her
that
chimpanzees
were
his
favorite
animals.
Derrick
wouldn’t
have
left
the
restaurant
to
release
the
chimpanzees，would
he?
Oh
no!
In
shock
Abigail
was
sure
she
knew
where
Derrick
had
gone.
Paragraph
2：
As
Abigail
raced
up
the
path
to
the
animal
exhibits,
she
was
stopped
in
her
tracks
by
none
other
than
Derrick
himself,
with
two
chimpanzees
cradled
in
his
arms.
He
offered
a
small,
guilty
smile.
“I
didn’t
mean
to
let
them
escape,”
he
began.
“I
just
wanted
to
take
them
out
to
play
for
a
little
while!
I
took
the
key
from
a
zookeeper
who
wasn’t
looking.
But
then,
the
lock
broke
and...”
Behind
Abigail,
Mrs.
Brown
had
begun
to
walk
up
the
path
and
saw
Derrick
holding
the
animals
with
excitement.
It
was
clear
from
her
stern
expression
that
he
was
in
big
trouble
because
he
didn’t
follow
the
rules．
【点评】：故事情节完整紧凑合理，叙述流畅，句式结构丰富，介词短语的运用更好地描写了角色的情感。文中in
shock
体现了Abigail
一想到Derrick
很可能把chimpanzees放了出来时的震惊之情。with
excitement
则体现了Derrick怀抱喜爱动物时的兴奋之情。专题06
句式提升之现在分词的使用
现在分词短语可以常用来表示伴随动作，也可替换状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句等，使句子结构更加紧凑。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的现在分词的使用
1.
"None
of
us
do,"
said
Dr.
Dorian,
sighing.
"
2.
He
said,
looking
down
at
his
daughter
with
love.
3.
"How's
Avery?"
he
asked,
opening
his
eyes
wide.
4.
"What
are
your
names,
please?"
asked
Wilbur,
trembling
with
joy.
5.
Mrs
Black
sat
down,
breathing
heavily．
6.
He
slept
the
first
night
in
a
field，feeling
lonely,
tired,
cold
and
hungry.
7.
Seeing
the
helicopter,
Jane
waved
her
yellow
blouse,
screaming
for
help.
二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落
1.
He
was
trembling
in
a
blanket
and
he
said,
“I’m
cold.”
【答案】
Trembling
in
a
blanket,
he
said,
“I’m
cold.”
2.
I
sat
back
in
an
easy
chair
and
fell
asleep.
【答案】
Sitting
back
in
an
easy
chair,
I
fell
asleep.
3.
When
I
saw
no
one
noticing
us,
I
put
the
Christmas
present
down
and
left.
【答案】
Seeing
no
one
noticing
us,
I
put
the
Christmas
present
down
and
left.
4.
When
she
arrived
there,
she
searched
the
unfamiliar
building,
and
asked
for
Zatanna’s
dormitory
from
door
to
door.
【答案】Arriving
there,
she
searched
the
unfamiliar
building,
asking
for
Zatanna’s
dormitory
from
door
to
door.
5.
He?looked?at?me
and
bit?his?lips,?as?if?he
was
thinking.
【答案】He?looked?at?me,?biting?his?lips,?as?if?thinking.
6.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
held
that
ten-dollar
bill
and
I
wondered
what
to
buy
and
who
to
buy
it
for.
【答案】For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there,
holding
that
ten-dollar
bill
and
wondering
what
to
buy
and
who
to
buy
it
for.
7.
When
he
saw
the
coat
in
the
bag,
he
looked
very
astonished
and
then
asked
his
mother
to
come
out.
【答案】Seeing
the
coat
in
the
bag,
he
asked
his
mother
to
come
out,
looking
very
astonished.
8.
‘Here,’
he
said.
At
the
same
time
he
handed
the
coins
to
the
gatekeeper.
【答案】
‘Here,’
he
said，handing
the
coins
to
the
gatekeeper.
9.
A
tall
girl
answered
the
door
and
she
was
frowning.
She
told
Emily
that
Zatanna
was
working
in
the
school
café.
When
she
heard
this,
Emily
forced
a
faint
smile,
thanked
her
and
left.
【答案】A
tall
thin
girl,
frowning,
answered
the
door
and
told
Emily
that
Zatanna
was
working
in
the
school
café.
Hearing
this,
Emily
forced
a
faint
smile,
thanked
her
and
left.
10.
She
wrote
“To
Bobby,
From
Santa
Claus”
on
it.
Then
she
drove
me
over
to
Bobby
Decker’s
house
as
she
explained
I
was
officially
one
of
Santa’s
helpers.
【答案】Having
written
“To
Bobby,
From
Santa
Claus”
on
it,
she
drove
me
over
to
Bobby
Decker’s
house,
explaining
I
was
officially
one
of
Santa’s
helpers.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
An
80-year-old
man
was
sitting
on
the
sofa
in
his
house
along
with
his
45-year-old
highly
educated
son.
Suddenly
a
crow（乌鸦）perched（栖息）on
their
window.
The
father
asked
his
son,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
replied,
“It
is
a
crow.”
After
a
few
minutes,
the
father
asked
his
son
for
the
second
time,
“What
is
this?”
The
son
said,
“Father,
I
have
just
now
told
you,
it’s
a
crow!”
After
a
little
while,
the
old
father
again
asked
his
son
for
the
third
time,
“What
is
this?”
At
this
time
some
expression
of
irritation（恼怒）was
felt
in
the
son’s
tone
when
he
said
to
his
father
with
a
rebuff（生硬回绝）.
“It’s
a
crow,
a
crow.”
A
little
while
later,
the
father
again
asked
his
son
the
fourth
time,
“What
is
this?”
This
time,
the
son
shouted
at
his
father,
“Why
do
you
keep
asking
me
the
same
question
again
and
again,
although
I
have
told
you
so
many
times
‘IT
IS
A
CROW’.
Are
you
not
able
to
understand
this?”
A
little
later
the
father
went
to
his
room
and
came
back
with
an
old
tattered（发皱的）diary,
which
he
had
maintained
since
his
son
was
born.
On
opening
a
page,
he
asked
his
son
to
read
that
page.
When
the
son
read
it,
the
following
words
were
written
in
the
diary:
“Today
my
little
son
aged
three
was
sitting
with
me
on
the
sofa,
when
a
crow
was
sitting
on
the
window.
My
son
asked
me
23
times
what
it
was,
and
I
replied
to
him
all
23
times
that
it
was
a
crow.
I
hugged
him
lovingly
each
time
he
asked
me
the
same
question.
I
did
not
at
all
feel
irritated
but
I
rather
felt
affection
for
my
innocent
son.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
After
reading
the
diary,_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Feeling
ashamed,
the
son
got
down
on
his
knees
before
his
father.__________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
After
reading
the
diary,
the
son
was
filled
with
tears
and
began
to
reflect
on
the
days
when
he
used
to
sit
together
with
his
father.
His
father
would
patiently
answer
the
same
question
all
23
times
without
feeling
irritation
while
his
father
asked
him
the
same
question
just
four
times!
The
son
thought
to
himself:
If
I
attain
old
age,
how
will
my
son
look
at
me?
Will
he
think
of
me
as
a
burden?
Will
he
shout
at
me
because
of
my
poor
sight,
poor
hearing
or
poor
understanding?
Paragraph
2:
Feeling
ashamed,
the
son
got
down
on
his
knees
before
his
father.
He
made
an
apology
to
his
father,
begging
his
father
to
forgive
him
for
his
bad
behavior.
He
said
this
aloud,
“I
promise
to
see
you
happy
forever,
Dad.
It
is
you
who
have
cared
for
me
ever
since
I
was
a
little
child,
showering
your
selfless
affection
on
me.
You
worked
hard
to
make
money
so
that
I
could
afford
to
go
to
university.
I
will
look
after
you
in
the
best
way.”
【点评】故事情节完整合理、叙述流畅、描写细腻。文中Ving的使用使得故事情节更加紧凑、描写更加生动传神、语言表达形式也更加丰富。专题07
句式提升之过去分词或形容词的使用
过去分词或形容词可用来表示伴随状态，描写情绪或心理活动。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中的过去分词或形容词的作用
1.
Mr
Bumble
stopped
for
a
moment，amazed
and
even
rather
frightened
by
this
change
in
Oliver．
2.
Frightened
and
frustrated,
she
began
sobbing.
3.
‘Why
is
the
boy
crying?’repeated
the
other
man,
puzzled.
4.
His
mind
went
blank,
and
he
fell
to
the
ground,
unconscious.
5.
Jane
walked
in
the
forest,
tired
and
hopeless.
二、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落
1.
For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there.
I
was
confused.
【答案】For
a
few
moments
I
just
stood
there,
confused.
2.
They
were
very
frightened.
They
all
jumped
back.
【答案】They
all
jumped
back,
very
frightened.
或Very
frightened,
they
all
jumped
back.
3.
In
the
evening,
the
children
returned
home.
They
were
tired
and
hungry.
【答案】In
the
evening,
the
children
returned
home,
tired
and
hungry.
4.
He
was
exhausted.
He
sat
down
at
the
side
of
the
road.
【答案】Exhausted,
he
sat
down
at
the
side
of
the
road.
5.
One
freezing
night，Gabriel
returned
to
his
hut.
He
was
exhausted.
【答案】One
freezing
night
Gabriel
returned
to
his
hut，exhausted.
6.
He
stood
rooted
to
the
spot.
He
was
shocked.
【答案】He
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
shocked.
7.
Gabriel
Looked
over
the
gate.
He
could
see
a
yellow
cart
which
was
loaded
with
furniture
and
plants
coming
up
the
road.
【答案】Looking
over
his
gate，Gabriel
could
see
a
yellow
cart，loaded
with
furniture
and
plants，coming
up
the
road.
8.
Meg
thought
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl.
She
sat
on
the
floor.
She
felt
hopeless
and
worried.
【答案】Thinking
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl,
Meg
sat
on
the
floor,
hopeless
and
worried.
或Sitting
on
the
floor,
Meg
felt
hopeless
and
worried,
thinking
that
her
classmates
would
consider
her
to
be
a
lazy
girl.
9.
Oliver
went
up
to
the
master，with
his
bowl
in
his
hand．He
felt
very
frightened，but
also
desperate
with
hunger．
【答案】Oliver,
frightened
and
desperate
with
hunger,
went
up
to
the
master,
with
his
bowl
in
his
hand.
10.
He
was
dressed
up
as
Father
Christmas
and
was
accompanied
by
a
“guard
of
honour”
of
six
pretty
girls.
He
rode
a
baby
elephant
who
was
called
Jumbo
and
set
off
down
the
main
street
of
the
city.
【答案】Dressed
up
as
Father
Christmas
and
accompanied
by
a
“guard
of
honour”
of
six
pretty
girls,
he
set
off
down
the
main
street
of
the
city,
riding
a
baby
elephant
called
Jumbo.
三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I
was
responding
to
a
call
from
a
small
brick
flat
in
a
quiet
part
of
town.
I
assumed
I
was
being
sent
to
pick
up
some
party-goers，or
someone
who
had
just
had
a
fight
with
a
lover，or
a
worker
heading
to
an
early
shift
at
some
factory
for
the
industrial
part
of
town.
When
I
arrived
at
2：30
a.m.，the
building
was
dark
except
for
a
single
light
in
a
ground
floor
window.
Under
such
circumstances，
many
drivers
just
honk（按喇叭）
once
or
twice，wait
a
minute，then
drive
away.
But
I
had
seen
too
many
weak
people
who
depended
on
taxis
as
their
only
means
of
transportation.
Unless
a
situation
smelled
of
danger，I
always
went
to
the
door.
This
passenger
might
be
someone
who
needs
my
assistance，I
reasoned
to
myself.
So
I
walked
to
the
door
and
knocked.
“Just
a
minute,”
answered
a
frail,
elderly
voice.
I
could
hear
something
being
dragged
across
the
floor.
After
a
long
pause，the
door
opened.
A
small
woman
in
her
80s
stood
before
me.
She
was
wearing
a
print
dress
and
a
pillbox
hat
，like
somebody
out
of
a
1940s
movie.
By
her
side
was
a
small
nylon
suitcase.
The
apartment
looked
as
if
no
one
had
lived
in
it
for
years.
All
the
furniture
was
covered
with
sheets.
There
were
no
clocks
on
the
walls,
no
equipment
on
the
counters.
In
the
corner
was
a
cardboard
box
filled
with
photos
and
glassware.
“Would
you
carry
my
bag
out
to
the
car？”
she
said.
I
took
the
suitcase
to
the
cab，then
returned
to
assist
the
woman.
She
took
my
arm，and
we
walked
slowly
toward
the
cab.
She
kept
thanking
me
for
my
kindness.
“It's
nothing,”
I
told
her.
“I
just
try
to
treat
my
passengers
the
way
I
would
want
my
mother
treated.”
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Having
given
me
an
address,
a
hospice
,
she
asked.
“Could
you
drive
through
downtown?”
Paragraph
2:
we
drove
in
silence
to
the
address
she
had
given
me
,
and
it…
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
Having
given
me
an
address,
a
hospice
,
she
asked.
“Could
you
drive
through
downtown?”
When
asked
why
we
didn’t
take
the
shortest
way,
the
small
woman
told
me
it
was
the
last
chance
for
her
to
visit
the
city.
We
drove
through
the
neighborhood
where
she
and
her
husband
had
lived.
Besides,
she
asked
me
to
slow
down
in
front
of
a
particular
building
or
corner
and
would
sit
staring
into
the
darkness,
speechless.
At
last,
she
said
she
was
tired
and
wanted
to
go
to
the
hospice.
Paragraph
2:
We
drove
in
silence
to
the
address
she
had
given
me
,
and
it
was
a
low
building,
where
the
old
lady
would
live
the
rest
of
her
life.
Two
nurses
who
must
have
been
expecting
her
came
out
to
the
cab
as
soon
as
we
pulled
up.
I
opened
the
trunk
and
took
the
suitcase
to
the
door
and
the
woman,
a
little
tired,
was
already
seated
in
a
wheelchair.
When
she
asked
how
much
she
owed
me,
without
thinking,
I
said
nothing
and
bent
to
give
her
a
hug.
It
was
my
assistance
that
helped
one
of
weak
people
realize
her
wish.
【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理，叙述流畅，表达准确。文中speechless
体现了老人的忧伤、留恋之情。a
little
tired
准确地刻画了八十几岁老人坐车后的神态。专题08
读后续写句式提升之独立结构的使用
独立主格结构是由“名词或代词+现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词短语、名词短语、介词短语或副词短语”构成的一种独立结构。在该结构中，名词或代词与其后的部分构成逻辑上的主谓关系，用来修饰谓语动词或整个句子。在句中作状语，表示?“时间、条件、原因、伴随，方式或结果”等含义，其位置比较灵活，可放于句首、句中或句末。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中独立结构的作用
1.?名词（代词）+
现在分词
The
clock
striking
twelve,
I
went
to
bed.?（表原因）
2.?名词（代词）+
过去分词
He
lay
there
on
his
back,?his
teeth
set,
his
right
hand
clenched
on
his
breast.?（表伴随）
3.?名词（代词）+?形容词短语
Her
face
pale
with
anger,
she
rose
to
go
away.?（表原因）
4.?名词（代词）+?介词短语
Then,
last
night,
I
followed
him
here
and
climbed
in,?sword
in
hand.?（表方式）
5.?名词（代词）+?副词短语
Summer
over,?the
students
returned
to
school.?（表原因）
二、请使用独立结构改写下列句子
1.
Her
eyes
brimmed
with
tears
and
she
left.
【答案】(Her)
eyes
brimming
with
tears,
she
left.
2.
The
boy
stood
there
and
his
face
was
rigid
with
anger.
【答案】The
boy
stood
there,
his
face
rigid
with
anger.
3.
I
clasped
my
hands
behind
me
and
I
was
too
shocked
to
say
a
word.
【答案】I
was
too
shocked
to
say
a
word,
my
hands
clasped
behind
me.
4.
A
girl
came
in
with
a
book
in
her
hand.
【答案】A
girl
came
in,
book
in
hand.
5.
The
manager
sat
quietly
in
the
office
and
his
eyes
were
closed.
【答案】The
manager
sat
quietly
in
the
office,
(his
)
eyes
closed.?
6.
They
sat
in
the
room
with
the
curtains
drawn.
【答案】They
sat
in
the
room,
the
curtains
drawn.
7.
Oliver
jumped
up
and
his
face
was
bright
red
with
anger.
【答案】His
face
bright
red
with
anger,
Oliver
jumped
up.
8.
Linda
leapt
to
her
feet
and
her
eyes
was
blazing
with
anger.
【答案】Linda
leapt
to
her
feet,
her
eyes
blazing
with
anger.
9.
As
we
hugged
Ruth
good-bye,
she
said
to
me.
Her
tears
was
shining
in
her
eyes.
【答案】As
we
hugged
Ruth
good-bye,
she
said
to
me,
tears
shining
in
her
eyes.
10.
He
cried
and
his
blue
eyes
was
shining
behind
his
glasses.
【答案】He
cried,
his
blue
eyes
shining
behind
his
glasses.
三、实战演练（2018年6月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
summer,
and
my
dad
wanted
to
treat
me
to
a
vacation
like
never
before.
He
decided
to
take
me
on
a
trip
to
the
Wild
West.
We
took
a
plane
to
Albuquerque,
a
big
city
in
the
state
of
New
Mexico.
We
reached
Albuquerque
in
the
late
afternoon.
Uncle
Paul,
my
dad’s
friend,
picked
us
up
from
the
airport
and
drove
us
up
to
his
farm
in
Pecos.
His
wife
Tina
cooked
us
a
delicious
dinner
and
we
got
to
know
his
sons
Ryan
and
Kyle.
My
dad
and
I
spent
the
night
in
the
guestroom
of
the
farm
house
listening
to
the
frogs
and
water
rolling
down
the
river
nearby.
Very
early
in
the
morning,
Uncle
Paul
woke
us
up
to
have
breakfast.
"The
day
starts
at
dawn
on
my
farm,"
he
said.
After
breakfast,
I
went
to
help
Aunt
Tina
feed
the
chickens.
while
my
dad
went
with
Uncle
Paul
to
take
the
sheep
out
to
graze(吃草).
I
was
impressed
to
see
my
dad
and
Uncle
Paul
riding
horses.
They
looked
really
cool.
In
the
afternoon,
I
asked
Uncle
Paul
if
I
could
take
a
hose
ride,
and
he
said
yes,
as
long
as
my
dad
went
with
me.
I
wasn’t
going
to
take
a
horse
ride
by
myself
anyway.
So,
my
dad
and
I
put
on
our
new
cowboy
hats,
got
on
our
horses,
and
headed
slowly
towards
the
mountains.
"Don’t
be
late
for
supper,"
Uncle
Paul
cried,
"and
keep
to
the
track
so
that
you
don’t
get
lost!"
"OK!
"
my
dad
cried
back.
After
a
while
Uncle
Paul
and
his
fam
house
were
out
of
sight.
It
was
so
peaceful
and
quiet
and
the
colors
of
the
brown
rocks,
the
deep
green
pine
trees,
and
the
late
afternoon
sun
mixed
to
create
a
magic
scene.
It
looked
like
a
beautiful
woven(编织的）blanket
spread
out
upon
the
ground
just
for
us.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.
___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
We
had
no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.___________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
?
?
?Suddenly
a
little
rabbit
jumped
out
in
front
of
my
horse.?My
horse
reared
into
the
air,
let
out
a
frightened
whinny,
and
galloped
off
the?track.
?I
held
on
for
dear
life,
branches
lashing
into
my
arms
and
face.
Finally
he
slowed
down,
then
stopped,
but
looking
around
at
the
endless
sea
of
trees,
I
knew
we?had
gotten?hopelessly?lost.
I
called
and
the
only
answer
was
the
rustling
of
the
wind
in
the
trees.
The
horse
meandered
through
the
lonesome
pines,
with
me
continuing
to
call
and
scan
the
horizon
for
a
familiar
landmark,
ears
pricked
for
the
sound
of
a
horse
or
a
human
voice.
?
?
?We
had
no
idea
where
we
were
and
it
got
dark.?At
last
I
heard
the
welcome
sound
of
rushing
water
--
the?river!
?Gratefully
we
went
to
the
bank
and
drank
our
fill.
We
followed
it
in
the
direction
that
the
sun
had
set,
and
eventually
heard
the
familiar
frogs,
and
saw
the
comforting?sight?of
the
old?farm
house,
my?dad?shining
a
huge
lamp
from
the
porch,
guiding
our
way
home.
【点评】独立结构是英语语言表达中的一种高级形式，也是高中生英语学习中的一个难点。在这篇文章中，作者熟练地使用独立结构进行辅助描写，使故事的表达更加出彩。专题09
高分情绪描写技巧
一、情绪描写之笑
smile
brightly;
grin
at
sb;
laugh;
beam;
light
(sth)
up;
light
up
with;
burst
into
laughter;
burst
out
laughing；wear
a
bright/broad
smile;
give
sb
a
smile
学一学：
beam:
smile
very
happily
例：
获胜者满意地笑了。
译法一：The
winner
beamed/smiled
with
satisfaction.
译法二：The
winner
wore
a
satisfied
smile
on
his
face.
light
up:
if
someone’s
face
or
eyes
light
up,
they
show
pleasure,
excitement
etc
light
up
with：His
eyes
lit
up
with
laughter.
Her
face
lit
up
with
pleasure.
light
sth
up:
to
make
someone’s
face
or
eyes
show
pleasure
or
excitement
Suddenly
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face/eyes.
练一练：
看到直升飞机，Jane
高兴地笑了起来。
【答案一】：At
the
sight
of
the
helicopter,
Jane
beamed
with
wild
joy.
【答案二】：Seeing
the
helicopter,
Jane
beamed
with
wild
joy.
【答案三】：The
moment
she
caught
sight
of
the
helicopter,
Jane’s
eyes/
face
lit
up
with
delight.
【答案四】：The
moment
she
caught
sight
of
the
helicopter,
a
bright
smile
lit
up
Jane’s
face/eyes.
判断正误：Seeing
the
helicopter,
a
bright
smile
lit
up
her
face.
【答案】：错
seeing
和a
bright
smile
逻辑不一致。
二、情绪描写之高兴激动
V.
dance;
whistle;
jump/leap
with
joy;
feel
a
surge
of
happiness/delight/joy/excitement;
be
overcome
with
happines/delight/joy/excitement;
(one’s
eyes)
twinkle；(one’s
heart)
beat/pound
wildly
Adj.
happy;
delighted;
overjoyed;
excited;
thrilled;
wild
with
joy
练一练：
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
【答案一】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
she
felt
excited/
thrilled.
【答案二】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
her
eyes
twinkled
with
excitement.
【答案三】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
her
heart
was
pounding
with
wild
joy.
【答案四】：When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
a
wild
excitement
took
hold
of
her.
【答案五】：Knowing
the
result
of
the
test,
she
felt
a
surge
of
excitement.
【答案六】：Knowing
the
result
of
the
test,
she
was
overcome
with
excitement.
三、情绪描写之生气
feel/get
angry/furious;
feel
a
surge
of
anger(rage/fury);
eyes
blaze;
storm
out
of/into/off
;
storm(say
angrily);
sth.
makes
sb’s
blood
boil(sth
makes
sb
extremely
angry);
clasp
one’s
hands;
clench
one’s
fists/teeth;
speechless
练一练：
Sam
感到非常生气。
【答案一】：Sam
felt
very
angry.
【答案二】：Sam
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
his
eyes
blazing
with
anger.
【答案三】：Sam
felt
so
angry
that
he
stormed
out
of
the
room,
slamming
the
door
furiously
behind
him.
【答案四】：Boiling
with
rage,
Sam
shook
his
fist
at
me.
【答案五】：Filled
with
fury,
Sam
was
unable
to
utter
a
single
word.
四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
sad;
bitter;
sorrowful;
feel
a
surge
of
sadness;
(sadness)
surge
within
sb;
one’s
heart
ache;
be
overcome
with
sadness
练一练：
她伤心不已。
【答案一】：She
felt
extremely
sad.
【答案二】：A
sadness
came
over
her.
【答案三】：Her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming
down
her
cheeks.
【答案四】：Numb
with
grief,
she
became
speechless.
【答案五】：Feeling
a
surge
of
sadness,
she
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.
【答案六】：Sadness
surging
within
her,
she
burst
into
tears.
五、情绪描写之哭
cry;
sob;
weep;
burst
into
tears;
burst
out
crying;
(one’s
eyes)
brim
with/be
full
of/be
filled
with
tears
练一练：
1.
他哽咽欲哭。
【答案】：A
lump
came
to
his
throat.
2.
她的双眼哭得通红
【答案】：Her
eyes
were
red
from
crying.
3.
她的眼里满含泪水。
【答案】：Her
eyes
brimmed
with
tears.
4.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
【答案】：Tears
coursed/trickled/streamed/ran
down
her
cheeks.
5.
Oliver
独自一人在房间里
流下了孤独伤心的泪水
【答案】：Alone
in
the
room,
Oliver
cried
bitter,
lonely
tears．
6.
Wilbur哭着直到睡着。
【答案】：Wilbur
cried
himself
to
sleep.
六、情绪描写之害怕:
frightened;
panicked;
scared;
speechless;
in
(a)
panic;
in
a
cold
sweat;
be
full
of
fear;
be
filled
with
terror;
be
rooted
to
the
spot;
freeze;
run
away;
flee;
one’s
knees
feel
weak;
(hands)
sweat;
练一练：
我感到很害怕。
【答案一】：I
felt
very
frightened/scared/panicked.
【答案二】：I
was
in
(a)
panic/
was
full
of
fear.
【答案三】：I
stood
rooted
to
the
spot,
brimming
with
fear/filled
with
fear.
【答案四】：I
felt
so
scared
that
my
throat
tightened
and
my
knees
felt
weak.
【答案五】：I
froze
with
terror,
too
scared
to
move.
【答案六】：I
was
seized
by
a
strong
sense
of
horror;
my
palms
sweating.
七、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
farmer
grew
some
vegetables
in
his
garden.
One
day
his
wife
was
ill
and
he
had
no
money.
He
had
to
sell
some
cabbages
and
carrots
in
the
market.
The
next
morning
he
took
two
baskets
of
vegetables
to
town.
But
it
was
raining
hard
that
afternoon
and
there
were
few
people
in
the
street.
When
his
vegetables
were
sold
out,
it
was
dark.
He
bought
some
medicine
and
hurried
to
his
village.
On
his
way
home
he
saw
a
person
lying
on
the
snow.
He
placed
his
baskets
on
the
ground
and
was
going
to
help
the
person
to
get
up.
At
that
time
he
found
it
was
a
dead
man
and
there
was
much
blood
on
his
body.
He
was
so
afraid
that
he
ran
away
quickly,
without
taking
the
baskets
with
him.
The
next
afternoon
the
farmer
was
sent
to
the
police
station.
Having
shown
the
baskets,
an
officer
asked,
“Are
these
yours”
“Yes,
sir.”
the
farmer
answered
timidly（胆怯地）.
“Have
you
killed
the
man”
“No,
no,
sir.”
the
farmer
said
in
a
hurry.
“When
did
you
see
the
dead
man”
“About
seven
last
evening.”
“Did
you
see
who
killed
the
man”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
brought
out
a
knife
and
asked,
“Have
you
seen
it
yet”
“No,
sir.”
The
officer
became
angry
and
told
the
policemen
to
beat
him
up
and
sent
him
into
prison.
The
officer
wanted
to
trap
the
farmer
into
the
confession(供认),
but
the
farmer
didn’t
admit
he
was
the
murderer.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1:
The
officer
was
so
angry
that
he
asked
the
policeman
to
beat
him
up
again.
The
farmer
was
very
afraid,
thinking
he
would
be
sentenced
to
death
by
killing
people.
But
he
was
innocent.
He
must
tell
people
the
truth,
but
no
one
could
hear
his
voice.
Helpless,
he
was
eager
that
someone
could
come
and
save
him.
Paragraph
2:
The
farmer
was
lucky.
A
few
days
later,
a
young
man
came
to
the
police
station,
followed
by
a
lot
of
journalists,
saying
that
he
saw
the
murderer.
It
was
the
police
officer
who
killed
the
man
on
the
snow!
Seeing
the
police
officer
use
a
knife
killing
the
man
late
in
the
evening,
he
was
so
frightened
that
he
quickly
ran
away.
The
young
man
thought
the
farmer
was
innocent.
So
he
plucked
up
enough
courage
to
expose
the
real
criminal.
After
the
investigation,
evidence
showed
that
what
the
young
man
had
said
was
true.
Consequently,
the
evil
police
officer
was
sent
into
prison
and
the
brave
young
man
was
regarded
as
the
hero
by
the
villagers.
【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理，叙述流畅，表达准确。语言表达形式丰富，能合理使用各种从句、现在分词、过去分词等。afraid,
helpless,
eager,
frightened
和pluck
up
enough
courage
生动细腻地描写了文中人物的内心活动，使故事内容更加充实动人。专题10
读后续写高分技巧综合训练
一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。
（一）
Jim
看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim
仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？”
【参考范文】
Seeing
the
attacker
flee/disappear/run
into
the
darkness,
Jim
thought
of
the
girl.
Still
breathing
heavily,
Jim
walked
towards
her.
The
girl
was
sitting
behind
the
bushes,
sobbing.
Although
in
the
darkness
Jim
could
hardly
see
the
girl
clearly,
he
could
sense
her
trembling
alarm
with
certainty.
To
avoid
frightening
the
girl
further,
Jim
spoke
to
her
at
a
distance.
In
a
soft
voice,
Jim
told
her
that
the
attacker
had
run
away
and
that
she
was
safe.
There
was
a
long
silence
and
then
in
astonishment
he
heard
the
girl
ask,
“Dad,
is
that
you?”
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。
（二）
第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson
解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs.
Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs.
Gilson
打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg
如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。
【参考范文】
The
next
day,
Meg
went
to
tell
Mrs.
Gilson
why
she
couldn’t
hand
in
her
homework.
To
avoid
being
known
by
her
classmates,
she
secretly
slid
into
Mrs.
Gilson’s
office
without
being
noticed.
Her
head
drooped,
Meg
told
Mrs.
Gilson
the
truth
that
she
just
could
not
find
her
homework.
“I
promise
that
I
did
finish
my
homework
and…”
she
explained,
tears
welling
up
in
her
eyes/
eyes
brimming
with
tears.
Seeing
this,
Mrs.
Gilson
interrupted
her.
With
a
smile,
she
told
Meg
that
she
had
handed
in
her
homework
with
her
paper
the
day
before.
She
knew
Meg
was
not
lying
because
of
laziness.
Hearing
this,
Meg
felt
a
surge
of
relief.
She
smiled
brightly,
drops
of
tears
rolling
down
her
cheeks.
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文中三处使用了独立结构，生动细腻地描写了Meg的情感变化。
二、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
From
the
first
day
he
entered
my
classroom,
Willard
P.
Frank
existed
in
his
own
world,
shutting
out
his
classmates
and
me.
My
attempts
at
building
a
friendly
relationship
with
him
were
met
with
complete
indifference.
I
could
see
that
his
classmates
fared
no
better.
Willard
was
strictly
a
loner
who
seemed
to
have
no
desire
or
need
to
break
his
silence．
Shortly
after
the
Thanksgiving
holiday,
we
received
word
of
the
annual
Christmas
collection
of
money
for
the
less
fortunate
people
in
our
school
district.
“Christmas
is
a
season
of
giving，”I
told
my
students.
“There
are
a
few
students
in
the
school
who
might
not
have
a
happy
holiday
season.
By
contributing
to
our
Christmas
collection,
you
will
help
buy
food,
clothing
and
toys
for
these
needy
people.
We
will
start
the
collection
tomorrow.”
When
I
called
for
the
contributions
the
next
day,
I
discovered
that
almost
everyone
had
forgotten
except
for
Willard
P.
Frank.
The
boy
dug
deep
into
his
pants
pockets
as
he
walked
slowly
to
my
desk.
Carefully,
he
dropped
two
quarters
into
the
small
container.
“I
don’t
need
milk
for
lunch，”
he
mumbled.
For
a
moment,
just
a
moment,
he
smiled.
Then
he
turned
and
walked
back
to
his
desk.
That
night,
after
school,
I
took
our
few
contributions
to
the
school
principal.
I
couldn’t
help
sharing
the
incident
that
had
taken
place.
“I
may
be
wrong,
but
I
believe
Willard
might
be
getting
ready
to
become
a
part
of
the
world
around
him,”
I
told
the
principal.
“Yes.”
he
nodded.“And
we
might
do
well
to
have
him
share
a
bit
of
his
world
with
us.
I
just
received
a
list
of
the
poor
families
in
our
school
who
most
need
help
through
the
Christmas
collection.
Here,
take
a
look
at
it.”
As
I
gazed
down
to
read,
I
discovered
Willard
P.
Frank
and
his
family
were
the
top
names
on
the
list.
Seeing
this,
I
decided
to
do
something
for
him．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
On
that
Sunday,
I
paid
a
visit
to
Willard’s
family._________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
The
next
day,
I
had
a
special
class
for
Willard.___________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Paragraph
1：
On
that
Sunday,
I
paid
a
visit
to
Willard’s
family.
On
entering
his
house,
I
was
surprised
to
find
a
barely
empty
room
with
only
a
broken
bed
and
a
dirty
second
hand
sofa.
Willard
told
me
that
his
mother
died
a
few
years
ago
and
that
his
father
was
missing,
leaving
him
to
live
with
a
sick
grandma.
When
asked
why
he
had
given
the
two
quarters,_Willard
mumbled,_“There
are
people
poorer
than
me,
so
I
just
want
to
do
some
help
by
contributing
my
milk
money.”
Hearing
his
words,
I
couldn’t
help
bursting
into
tears.
I
thought
I
should
help
him
break
his
silence.
Paragraph
2：
The
next
day,
I
had
a
special
class
for
Willard.
I
shared
his
story
with
the
whole
class
and
said,
“Now,
on
behalf
of
the
people
in
need,
I
should
say
thank
you
Willard,
you
are
great！”
After
a
silence,
all
the
students
clapped,
saying,
“Willard,
you
are
great!
Willard,
you
are
great！”
and
they
walked
slowly
to
him
and
hugged
him
tightly.
A
friendly
relationship
was
built
and
Willard’s
silence
was
broken
by
a
smile
on
his
face.
【点评】故事内容连贯，情节感人，与所给材料前后呼应，自成一体。表达形式丰富，能熟练使用现在分词和过去分词。
B
A
friend
of
mine,
named
Jack,
received
an
expensive
car
from
his
brother
as
a
Christmas
present.
On
Christmas
Eve
when
Jack
came
out
of
his
office,
a
street
urchin(顽童)was
walking
around
the
shining
car.
“Is
this
your
car,
sir?”
He
asked.
Jack
answered,
“Yes,
my
brother
gave
it
to
me
for
Christmas.”
The
boy
was
surprised.
“You
mean
your
brother
gave
it
to
you
and
it
did
cost
you
nothing?
Sir,
I
wish…”He
hesitated.
Jack
thought
of
course
he
knew
what
the
boy
wanted,
but
what
the
boy
said
surprised
him
greatly.
“I
wish,”
the
boy
went
on,
“that
I
could
be
a
brother
like
that.”
Jack
looked
at
the
boy
in
surprise,
and
then
he
said
again,
“Would
you
like
to
take
a
ride
in
my
car?”
“Oh
yes,
I’d??love
to,”
the
boy
answered.
After
a
short
ride,
the
boy
turned
and
with
his
eyes
shining,
said,
“Sir,
would
you
mind
driving
in
front
of
my
house?”
Jack
smiled
a
little.
He
thought
he
knew
what
the
boy
wanted.
He
wanted
to
show
his
neighbors
that
he
could
ride
home
in
a
big
car.
But
Jack
was
wrong
again.
“Will
you
stop
where
those
two
steps
are?”
The
boy
asked.
注意：
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Paragraph
1
He
got
out
and
ran
up
to
the
steps.
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Paragraph
2
Jack
got
out
and
lifted
the
boy
to
the
front
seat
of
his
car.
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【参考范文】
Paragraph
1：
He
got
out
and
ran
up
to
the
steps.
Then
in
a
short
while
Jack
heard
him
coming
back,
but
he
was
not
coming
fast.
He
was
carrying
his
little
crippled(残疾的)
brother.
Then
he
Cheerfully
sat
down
on
the
step,
pointing
to
the
car.
“There
he
is,
Buddy,
just
like
I
told
you
upstairs.
His
brother
gave
it
to
him
for
Christmas
and
it
didn’t
cost
him
a
cent.
And
some
day
I’m
going
to
give
you
one
just
like
it…then
you
can
see
for
yourself
all
the
nice
things
in
the
Christmas
windows
that
I’ve
been
trying
to
tell
you
about.”
Paragraph
2：
Jack
got
out
and
lifted
the
boy
to
the
front
seat
of
his
car.
The
shining-eyed
elder
brother
climbed
in
beside
him
and
the
three
began
an
unforgettable
holiday
ride,
looking
at
all
those
beautiful
things.
That
Christmas
Eve,
Jack
learned
the
real
meaning
of
the
words:
“It’s
more
blessed
to
give
than
to
receive.”
He
also
learned
what
it
means
to
be
“an
elder
brother
like
that.”
【点评】故事流畅，情节充满正能量，与所给材料首尾呼应，构思巧妙，结尾出乎意料。词汇丰富，句式多样，表达准确。
