广东省深圳市2020-2021学年上学期八年级英语期末试卷分类汇编：书面表达（部分答案）

广东省深圳市
2020-2021学年上学期八年级英语期末试卷分类汇编
书面表达
广东省深圳市福田区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
VI. 书面表达（10分）
假如你是李华, 下个月将有一些英国学生来你校交流学习一个月, Frank被安排入住你 家。请你根据下面所给的要点提示, 给Frank写一封英文电子邮件, 告知你的计划。
Your plans ?show him around school
?go sightseeing
?enjoy Chinese food
? learn languages from each other
要求：
1. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确；
2. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名；
3. 80词以上, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I'm glad that you'll come to stay in my home next month.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
广东省深圳市龙岗区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
IV. 书面表达(15分)
2020年在人们全力防控疫情中转瞬即逝。假如你是八年级学生李华, 你的笔 友Paul来信询问你在这一年里经历的印象最深刻的事以及收获。请根据以下要点 提示写一篇80词左右的回信。
要点：
1. 参加线上课程(online courses)学习, 学到了很多；
2. 英语文化节活动：讲故事比赛, 如何提升记忆力演讲比赛, 均获一等奖；
3. 科学社团活动：了解了很多有趣的发明；
4. 其它印象深刻的事及收获（至少补充一个）。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可围绕要点适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
Dear Paul,
I'm very happy to hear from you and I'd like to share with you some impressive experiences I had in 2020.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Did you do anything special in 2020? Please write back to me and share your stories.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
广东省深圳市罗湖区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
VI. 书面表达（15分）
假如你是李华, 你的笔友Paul在要学校做公开演讲, 鼓励他的同学们面对疫情的挑战, 坚 持学习。Paul以前没有公开演讲的经历, 写信向你寻求建议。请你给Paul写一封回信, 回信 开头已给出。
要点:
1. 列举演讲时可能遇到的问题如因害羞而怯场、忘记演讲内容等（至少2条）；
2. 根据列举的问题提出建议；
3. 预祝他演讲成功；
要求：
1.至少70词，开头和结尾已给出．不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Paul,
How are you? It is great to hear from you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua
广东省深圳市南山区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
V. 书面表达(15分)
假设你是李华, Helen来自英国, 刚刚作为交换生来到你校。她给你发来邮件向你询问学 校附近是否有大型超市。请你给她回一封邮件, 从以下几个方面比较几家超市, 并给她推荐一 家最便利的超市。
要点与提示：
1. Supermarket: large, small
2. Things: cheap, expensive, fresh
3. Service: good, bad
4. Distance (距离):far, close
要求：
1. 短文内容须包含提示中的所有信息, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 语法正确, 条理清晰, 语意连贯；
3. 80词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：convenient便利的
Dear Helen,
Let me tell you something about the supermarkets near our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
广东省深圳市光明区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
Ⅳ.书面表达（15 分）
假如你是李华，你班的外国交流生 David询问你学好中文的方法。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，给 David 提供你的建议。
要点∶
要求∶
1.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
I'm very glad that you're interested in learning Chinese. ______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions will help you learn Chinese well.
广东省深圳高级中学2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末测试题
VI. 书面表达（10分）
假如你是李华，你和同学们在下周五晚上准备举行聚会欢迎新来的交换生Mike，你打算邀请你们学校的外教John参加。请你用英文写一封邮件，告诉他聚会的时间和地点，活动内容，以及需要准备什么。
提示词语：make a welcome speech, sing, game, gift
提示内容：
时间 下周五晚上7—9点
地点 学校餐厅
活动 唱歌，玩游戏，......(请至少补充1个活动)
准备 礼物（聚会后交换）
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear John,
How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our party to welcome our exchange student Mike.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
广东省深圳市
2020-2021学年上学期八年级英语期末试卷分类汇编
书面表达
广东省深圳市福田区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
VI. 书面表达（10分）
假如你是李华, 下个月将有一些英国学生来你校交流学习一个月, Frank被安排入住你 家。请你根据下面所给的要点提示, 给Frank写一封英文电子邮件, 告知你的计划。
Your plans ?show him around school
?go sightseeing
?enjoy Chinese food
? learn languages from each other
要求：
1. 条理清楚, 意思连贯, 语句通顺, 标点正确；
2. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名；
3. 80词以上, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
I'm glad that you'll come to stay in my home next month.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
书面表达： 评分标准
一档：9-10 分 所列信息全写上, 无语法、结构、拼写错误, 语言流畅, 内容衔接合理。
二档：7-8 分 所列信息全写上, 有一些语法、结构、拼写错误, 语言较连贯, 内容衔接合理。三档：5-6 分 漏写一个信息, 有不少语法、结构、拼写错误, 语言不连贯, 内容有重复。四档：3-4 分 漏写二个信息, 有不少语法、结构、拼写错误, 语言不连贯, 内容有重复。五档：0-2 分 看不出明显的信息, 有较多语法、结构、拼写错误, 语言不连贯, 内容有重复。
One possible version:
Dear Frank,
I’m glad that you’ll come to stay in my home next month. When you arrive, I’ll show you around our school and help you get used to life here soon. My parents are friendly and they can speak a little English as well. My father can drive and he will drive us to go sightseeing around the city. My mother can cook delicious Chinese food. I think you will enjoy it. Do you like learning Chinese? We can learn languages from each other. If you like sports, we can play basketball or football with my friends.
I’m sure we will get on well and have a lot of fun together. Yours,
Li Hua
广东省深圳市龙岗区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
IV. 书面表达(15分)
2020年在人们全力防控疫情中转瞬即逝。假如你是八年级学生李华, 你的笔 友Paul来信询问你在这一年里经历的印象最深刻的事以及收获。请根据以下要点 提示写一篇80词左右的回信。
要点：
1. 参加线上课程(online courses)学习, 学到了很多；
2. 英语文化节活动：讲故事比赛, 如何提升记忆力演讲比赛, 均获一等奖；
3. 科学社团活动：了解了很多有趣的发明；
4. 其它印象深刻的事及收获（至少补充一个）。
要求：
1. 词数80左右；开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可围绕要点适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
Dear Paul,
I'm very happy to hear from you and I'd like to share with you some impressive experiences I had in 2020.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Did you do anything special in 2020? Please write back to me and share your stories.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Paul,
I’m very happy to hear from you and I’d like to share with you some impressive experiences I had in 2020.
Last term, I took some online courses. Although COVID-19 kept us indoors for quite a long time, online courses were great fun and I learnt a lot（3 分 ）. During the English Culture Festival in our school, I took part in the story telling competition and made a speech on how to improve our memory. I was very proud to win both first prizes （ 4 分 ）. What’s more, I joined the science club. I knew about some funny inventions（2 分 ）. I have also taken up a new hobby --- singing and made some new friends with amazing voices!（3 分）
Did you do anything special in 2020? Please write back to me and share your stories.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
评分标准
1. 评分原则：
A. 采用整体印象评分法。评分时, 先根据文章内容要点表达的完整性, 初步确定其所属档次, 然后在该档次内选择合理的分数。
B. 注重内容表达。评分是要重点看所传达的信息是否有效, 能否完成题目要求。
C. 注重语言正确性、连贯性和得体性。语言正确性是基础, 连贯性和得体性是更高的要求。
D. 鼓励考生充分发挥。考生可以不使用参考词汇。
E. 同类错误不重复扣分。
2. 内容要点：
（1）线上课程(online courses)学习, 学到了很多； 3 分
英语文化节活动：讲故事比赛, 如何提升记忆力演讲比赛, 均获一等奖； 4 分
科学社团活动：了解了很多有趣的发明； 2 分
其它印象深刻的事及收获（至少补充一个）。 3 分
（2）条理清楚, 语句通顺, 无标点、单词拼写及语法错误, 2 分
（3）书面整洁, 和已给出部分衔接自然, 1 分
3. 评分档次和要求：
第一档：15-13 分, 语言正确无误, 表达得体, 行文流畅, 要点齐全。
第二档：12-10 分, 内容较完整, 表达流畅, 意思较连贯, 但有少量错误。第三档：9-7 分, 意思表达尚清楚, 但有一些错误。
第四档：6-4 分, 部分意思表达尚清楚, 但有较多错误。
第五档：3-0 分, 能写出与文章相关的词, 但不能表达完整的意思。
广东省深圳市罗湖区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
VI. 书面表达（15分）
假如你是李华, 你的笔友Paul在要学校做公开演讲, 鼓励他的同学们面对疫情的挑战, 坚 持学习。Paul以前没有公开演讲的经历, 写信向你寻求建议。请你给Paul写一封回信, 回信 开头已给出。
要点:
1. 列举演讲时可能遇到的问题如因害羞而怯场、忘记演讲内容等（至少2条）；
2. 根据列举的问题提出建议；
3. 预祝他演讲成功；
要求：
1.至少70词，开头和结尾已给出．不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Paul,
How are you? It is great to hear from you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua
答案：
Dear Paul,
How are you? It is great to hear from you. I think making a speech in public won't be difficult if you follow my suggestions.
You may gel nervous to face so many people when you give a speech in public. Why not practice with your families before the speech? Smile and useful advice from your families will cheer you up.
It is also a common problem for you to forget what (o say during the speech. Keep practicing before the speech and try to keep every word in your mind. I think these might be the keys to the problem.
In a word, practice makes perfect. Keep practicing . and you will make it. I wish you will make a wonderful speech and enjoy the platform.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
评分建议：
1. 根据文章内容要点表达的完整性、传达信息的有效性、语言表达的正确性以及连贯得体性, 确定文章所属档次并给出合理分数。
2. 在完整传达题目要求的信息的前提下, 语言的正确性是基础, 连贯性和得体性是更髙的能 力体现.
3. 同类语言错误不重夏扣分。
内容要点：
1. 列举可能遇到的问题（至少2点）4分
2. 提出的建议。5分
3. 预祝他演讲成功。2分
4. 书信开头及结尾的寒暄及过度语句。2分
5. 书写规范、工整, 卷面整洁。2分
广东省深圳市南山区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
V. 书面表达(15分)
假设你是李华, Helen来自英国, 刚刚作为交换生来到你校。她给你发来邮件向你询问学 校附近是否有大型超市。请你给她回一封邮件, 从以下几个方面比较几家超市, 并给她推荐一 家最便利的超市。
要点与提示：
1. Supermarket: large, small
2. Things: cheap, expensive, fresh
3. Service: good, bad
4. Distance (距离):far, close
要求：
1. 短文内容须包含提示中的所有信息, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 语法正确, 条理清晰, 语意连贯；
3. 80词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：convenient便利的
Dear Helen,
Let me tell you something about the supermarkets near our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
One possible version;
Dear Helen.
Let me tell you something about the supermarkets near our school. Yongxing Super market is large and it has all kinds of things. It is the closest to our school. But students hardly shop there bemuse things are pretty expensive. Tiny Supermarket is the cheapest. However, It is a little far from our school and the service is the worst. Xinhua Supermarket is more popular than the other two. It has the best service and the food is both fresh and cheap, I think Xinhua Supermarket is the best of the three. I hope you'll enjoy shopping there.
Yours.
Li Hua
广东省深圳市光明区2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末考试试题
Ⅳ.书面表达（15 分）
假如你是李华，你班的外国交流生 David询问你学好中文的方法。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，给 David 提供你的建议。
要点∶
要求∶
1.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数内;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
I'm very glad that you're interested in learning Chinese. ______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions will help you learn Chinese well.
广东省深圳高级中学2020-2021学年第一学期八年级英语期末测试题
VI. 书面表达（10分）
假如你是李华，你和同学们在下周五晚上准备举行聚会欢迎新来的交换生Mike，你打算邀请你们学校的外教John参加。请你用英文写一封邮件，告诉他聚会的时间和地点，活动内容，以及需要准备什么。
提示词语：make a welcome speech, sing, game, gift
提示内容：
时间 下周五晚上7—9点
地点 学校餐厅
活动 唱歌，玩游戏，......(请至少补充1个活动)
准备 礼物（聚会后交换）
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear John,
How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our party to welcome our exchange student Mike.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
Dear John,
How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our party to welcome our exchange student Mike.
Next Friday evening, we'll get together and make a welcome speech in a dining hall in our school. If you want to join us, don't be late. The party will begin at seven o'clock. At the party, we are going to have many activities, such as singing songs, playing games, dancing and so on. The party will be over at 9:00 pm. Then we'll exchange gifts after the party.
You'd better prepare a nice gift, but remember not too expensive. Just give the gift with your best wishes. I think your arrival will make him very happy.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如invite you to our party, welcome our exchange student, next Friday evening, get together, make a welcome speech, want to join us, be going to, such as, and so on, exchange gifts, You'd better, with your best wish, make him very happy等。而If you want to join us, don't be late./ I think your arrival will make him very happy.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。