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河北省平乡县第一中学2012届高三二轮复习
专题十一 英语
考试范围：第二轮复习用卷
一、短文改错（共10小题）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（1）
Good afternoon, everyone!
Welcome to the Cycling Club．This is the ideal place for you to make more friend, to experience the excitement of discover, and to keep fit．
The Cycling Club had a wide range of activities for members．We have basic training once a week, that will be instructed by teachers．It will arranged during the time of after-class physical activities．We arrange an outdoor cycling trip at the weekends every month．And we will have some races with other teams if possibly．
If you are interesting in our club, you can either come to our club in Room 702, on the fourteenth floor, Building 5 and call us at 02585559955．By the way, we have to get the equipment ready by yourself, but the charge is free．
Don’t wait．Join us now! Thank you!
（2）
One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was in low spirits．
When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise． Seen her so happy ，I quick took out of my Chinese exam paper．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily．At that moment, I couldn’t help cry．
I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my mother’s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her slaps．
（3）
There are various way to get relaxed for middle school students．One way is take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc．We can either watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well as．Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment．
As for me, surfing the Internet appeal to me most．For one thing, the Internet offered a wide range of activities for relaxation．In general, I keep track of the latest news as a enjoyment．Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh me．For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and at abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them．In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and living videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy．
（4）
Dear Sophie,
I am glad you will have the chance to get close look at my country．
You were more than welcome to stay in my home during your visit Beijing．Now that you have two weeks here, that will be a good idea to take several activities through them you can get a taste of the local culture．Pay a visit to some famous cultural relics such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City or the Summer Place will help you picture our country with a long history．In addition to, you may be interesting in having a look at our school and taking part in a Chinese Story Telling Competition．It, of course, will be beneficially to your understanding of Chinese language．
Yours sincerely,
Zhangli
（5）
Dear Joe,
I’m glad to receive you letter．It is true to read successfully requires correct ways of reading．Here is some suggestions．
Firstly, choose books which are either too difficult nor too easy for you to read．If you find a book too difficult to go on with it, just put it aside for a moment and change a easier one．Secondly, read books that not only interest you but also benefit
you, for reading was always just for fun．Thirdly, as to some books, you need to read them careful while as to others, you need to read it roughly．Lastly, don’t forget to take notes, make good use of dictionaries and ask questions whenever necessary．
I wish you will succeed of reading．
（6）
Chinese is one of the most ancient language in the world．It is also one of the official languages of United Nations．Now that China is becoming stronger, Chinese is playing a much important part in international communication．So if you can speak Chinese good, I am sure, you will make more friends．
Here are some suggestions．First, that is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．Then, it also helps to read books, newspapers and magazines on Chinese whenever possible．Besides, you should take more Chinese friends．They would tell you a lot about China and help you learn the Chinese．Finally, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs．Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
（7）
Many students are now facing with problems like deciding whether to focus on science or art．Not taking the children’s interest or preferences in account, some parents force their children to make the choice as their will, that troubles many students．
Throughout our lives we are going to have to make much choices．As students, we should talk to our parents or teachers especial on life-changing decisions．But when it came down to it, we’re the ones who must live with their choices．On the
other hand, parents should try to help their children make the best possible decisions, instead forcing them to do something that against their will．
It depends on students themselves whether they’ll be science students and arts students．Just let their hearts show them the way．
（8）
I had a dream for over a year to attend Climate Change Conference in Copenhagen．I have even reserved a hostel room
a year for advance．I had worked very hard to arrange things, but was having trouble raise money for the trip．I asked one
of my MBA professor for help, but he apologized, because of not much money available right now．Then he asked me that if she could help me out with flight miles．I thanked him and two weeks late his assistant contacted me to get all my information．After that I had my ticket! The professor’s kindness in support my dream is so a wonderful act of kindness!
（9）
Li Ming is a student who have been living in Shanghai since he was born．But his grandfather lives in Taiwan, because he went to Taiwan after Shanghai was liberated．He is a merchant．For about half a century, Li Ming’s family have no idea where she lives．They miss him very much．Fortunate, a letter from his grandfather reached them this October, which said that his grandfather would be back Shanghai on December 24th．Li Ming’s parents were such excited about the news that they didn’t sleep well for several nights．So did Li Ming．
The day finally came．In December 24th, the family of Li Ming are on their way to the airport．When they met at the
last, they gave his grandfather a big hug, tears in their eyes．They got together．
（10）
In modern society, competition is everywhere．No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety．Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress．In my opinion, all are important and necessary．
Let's take the competition at school for example．Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition．That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward．On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other．And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation．
To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation．河北省平乡县第一中学2012届高三二轮复习
专题卷英语专题十一答案与解析
（1）
1．【答案】第一行friend改为friends。make friends表“交朋友”，为固定短语。
2．【答案】第二行discover改为discovery。用在介词of后，应该是名词，而discover是动词。
3．【答案】第三行had改为has。本文是介绍一个骑车俱乐部，是一篇说明文，用一般现在时态。
4．【答案】第四行that改为which。这是非限制性定语从句，所以用which而不可用that。
5．【答案】第四行will与arranged之间添加be。arrange与主语it之间有动宾关系，所以需用被动形式。
6．【答案】第五行the去掉。at weekends表“在周末”，为固定短语。
7．【答案】第五行possibly改为possible。这是状语从句的省略，省略了it is。
8．【答案】第六行interesting改为interested。be interested in …“对…感兴趣”。
9．【答案】第六行and改为or。这里与前面的either一词构成either…or…结构，表示“要么…，要么…；可以…，亦可以…”。
10．【答案】第七行we改为you，本文是以第一人称的手法，对谈话对象You介绍情况的。
（2）
1．【答案】第一行and改为but。前后两个部分是明显的转折关系，所以用but。
2．【答案】第三行at去掉。home是副词，所以不用介词。
3．【答案】第四行bring改为take。take sb．to …表“带某人去某地”之意。
4．【答案】第四行Seen改为Seeing。此处“看到她非常高兴”的动作是主句主语“I”发出的，所以需用主动形式。
5．【答案】第五行quick改为quickly。修饰实义动词took需用副词形式。
6．【答案】第五行he改为she。这里是说母亲，需用she。
7．【答案】第六行cry改为crying。这里是couldn’t help doing，表“情不自禁”做某事。
8．【答案】第七行much改为more。依据后面的than可知，这里应该用比较级。
9．【答案】第七行as与matter间加a。as a matter of fact表“事实上”，为固定搭配。
10．【答案】第七行have改为had。本文是过去时态。
（3）
1．【答案】第一行way改为ways。various表“各种各样的”，后面接可数名词时，需用复数形式。
2．【答案】第一行is后添加to。此处用动词不定式作表语。
3．【答案】第二行either改为also。这个句子是肯定句，所以需用also。
4．【答案】第三行well后的as去掉。后面没有接成分，所以as多余。as well在此是副词。
5．【答案】第四行appeal改为appeals。surfing the Internet是动名词短语作主语，所以需用第三人称单数形式。
6．【答案】第四行offered改为offers。本文是现在时态。
7．【答案】第五行a改为an。enjoyment是以元音音素开头的单词，需用an修饰。
8．【答案】第五行me改为myself。主语是I，所以此处需用反身代词。
9．【答案】第六行at去掉。at home and abroad是固定短语，表“国内外”之意。
10．【答案】第七行living改为live。此处是看直播，所以用live，表“现场直播的”之意。
（4）
1．【答案】第一行get后添加a。get a look at是固定短语，表“看一看”之意。
2．【答案】第二行were改为are。本文都是现在时态，所以不可以用过去时。
3．【答案】第二行将visit改为visiting或者在visit后添加to。visit如果作动词，用在了形容词性物主代词之后，需用动名词形式；如果visit做名词，与to连用，表“去某地的参观”。
4．【答案】第二行that改为it。it在此是形式主语，代替不定式作主语。
5．【答案】第三行them改为which。这里是定语从句，which代指activities。
6．【答案】第三行Pay改为Paying。这里作主语，需用动名词。
7．【答案】第四行or改为and。这里是并列关系，而非选择关系，所以用and。
8．【答案】第五行to去掉。此处是副词短语，而非介词短语，所以to多余。
9．【答案】第五行interesting改为interested。主语是人，对事物感兴趣，需用interested，构成be interested in…结构，意思“对…感兴趣”。
10．【答案】第六行beneficially改为beneficial。位于be动词后作表语，需用形容词，构成be beneficial to，表“对…有益处”。
（5）
1．【答案】第一行you 改为your。修饰名词，应该是形容词性物主代词。
2．【答案】第一行true后加that。这里的it是形式主语，后面的句子是主语从句，主语从句的that不可以省略。
3．【答案】第一行is改为are。这是倒装句子，所以谓语动词跟主语suggestions的单复数保持一致。
4．【答案】第二行either改为neither。构成neither…nor…结构。
5．【答案】第三行with后的it去掉。这里动词短语go on with与book之间存在着动宾关系，这里用主动形式表达被动含义，所以it多余。
6．【答案】第三行第二个a改为an。easier是以元音音素开头的单词，所以需用an。
7．【答案】第四行was改为is。本文是现在时态。
8．【答案】第四行careful改为carefully。read是实义动词，修饰动词需用副词。
9．【答案】第五行it改为them。这里others代指other books，所以代词需用复数形式。
10．【答案】第五行of改为in。succeed in doing…为固定搭配。
（6）
1．【答案】第一行language改为languages。one of后接可数名词复数形式。
2．【答案】第一行United前加the。the United Nations是由普通名词构成的专有名词，前面需要the修饰。
3．【答案】第二行much改为more。上文提及China is becoming stronger，可知这里也应该用比较级。
4．【答案】第三行good改为well。修饰动词speak需用副词形式。
5．【答案】第四行that改为it。it是形式主语，代替后面的不定式做真正的主语。
6．【答案】第四行在able前添加be。able是形容词，而非动词，构成be able to 结构，且位于助动词之后。
7．【答案】第五行on改为in。用某种语言需用介词in。
8．【答案】第六行take改为make。make friends表“交朋友”，为固定短语。
9．【答案】第六行would改为will。这里是一般将来时态，需用will。
10．【答案】第六行the去掉。Chinese在此是一种语言，其前面用零冠词。
（7）
1．【答案】第一行facing改为faced。be faced with表“面临”之意，是固定短语。
2．【答案】第二行in改为into。take…into account表“将…考虑在内”。
3．【答案】第二行that改为which。这里是非限制性定语从句，且做从句的主语。
4．【答案】第四行much改为many。choices是可数名词复数形式。
5．【答案】第五行especial改为especially。这里是especially后接介词短语。
6．【答案】第五行came改为comes。本文是现在时态，所以用comes。
7．【答案】第五行their改为our。前面主语是we，所以用our。
8．【答案】第六行在instead后添加of。后面接动名词，需用instead of。
9．【答案】第七行that去掉或在that后添加is。against是介词而非动词，所以不是定语从句，分析结构可知不属于句子，故that多余。如果添加is，则构成定语从句。
10．【答案】第八行and改为or。构成whether…or…结构。
（8）
1．【答案】第一行climate前添加the。由普通名词构成的专有名词前需要the修饰。
2．【答案】第一行have改为had。本文都是过去时态，且订房间发生在后来教授帮忙之前，所以是过去的过去，用过去完成时态。
3．【答案】第二行for改为in。in advance为固定短语，表“提前”之意。
4．【答案】第二行raise改为raising。have trouble（in）doing sth.表“做某事有困难”。
5．【答案】第三行professor改为professors。one of+可数名词的复数形式。
6．【答案】第三行that去掉。这是一个主从复合句，if是连词，所以that多余。
7．【答案】第四行she改为he。下文提及的he、his等都暗示了是男性。
8．【答案】第四行late改为later。表多久时间以后，需用一段时间+later。
9．【答案】第五行support改为supporting。置于介词后，且后面带有名词，所以需用动名词形式。
10．【答案】第五行so改为such。置于冠词前，后接名词，需用such。
（9）
1．【答案】第一行have改为has。定语从句的谓语动词单复数与先行词保持一致。
2．【答案】第二行after改为before。依据常识，理应是解放前才可能离开。
3．【答案】第三行she改为he。grandfather是男性。
4．【答案】第三行Fortunate改为Fortunately。此处用来修饰句子，故此使用副词，称为句子副词。
5．【答案】第四行在back后添加to。be back to表“回到某地”之意。
6．【答案】第四行such改为so。这里修饰形容词，需用副词，且构成so…that…这一结构。
7．【答案】第五行So改为Neither/Nor。表示否定的“也一样不…”需用neither或者nor。
8．【答案】第六行In改为On。表示具体的某一天需用介词on。
9．【答案】第六行are改为were。本文是过去时态，需用过去时谓语动词。
10．【答案】第六行the去掉。at last表“最后”，是固定短语。
（10）
1．【答案】第一行a改为an。English是元音音素开头的单词，所以需用an。
2．【答案】第二行problem改为problems。problem可数名词，且被a series of修饰。
3．【答案】第二行Therefore改为However。前后句子间是转折关系而非因果关系。
4．【答案】第二行stress改为stressed。这里是对现在的虚拟。
5．【答案】第三行all改为both。文章提及的是竞争与合作，是两者，而非三者。需用both。
6．【答案】第四行第二个a去掉。progress是不可数名词，用零冠词。
7．【答案】第五行and改为or。or rather表“确切地说”，为固定搭配。
8．【答案】第五行made改为making。这里用making作后置定语，属于主动结构，相当于which makes…。
9．【答案】第六行us与learn间添加to。for sb. to do …属于动词不定式的复合结构，充当句子的真正主语。
10．【答案】第八行successful改为successfully。修饰动词短语cope with需用副词。
