从句子翻译到主题写作
(题材-体裁)
1.由于屠杀和过度猎取,很多野生动物处于灭绝的危险。
2 野生动物数量减少的原因是动物的栖息地受到了破坏。
3 有些必要性的保护措施(measure/step)应该马上被采 取。
4 应该建立更多的自然保护区。
5 应该制定法律来惩罚(punish)那些对动物造成危害的 人。
6 只有这样,野生动物的数量才会逐渐增加。
7 人与动物将会和谐共处。
As we all know, many wild animals are in danger of
dying out because of killing and overhunting. A a result,
The number of the endangered animals is decreasing
because their habitats are destroyed by humans.
In order to solve the problem, some necessary protective
measures should be taken. First of all, we need to set up
more natural reserves for the wildlife. Besides, laws should
be made to punish those who do harm to the wildlife.
Only in this way can we help protect the wildlife and the
number will be increased. It’s hoped that humans and
animals will live in peace with each other in the future.
Present situation
现状
数量减少
栖息地破坏
濒临灭绝
Protective measures
保护措施
1.?
2.?
Future hope
未来希望
数量增加
和谐相处
请根据下面的文字提示,写一篇关于动物保护的(120字)
的短文,并给《英语周报》投稿。
As we all know, many wild animals are in danger of
dying out because of killing and overhunting. A a result,
the number of the endangered animals is decreasing
because their habitats are destroyed by humans.
In order to solve the problem, some necessary protective
measures should be taken. First of all, we need to set up
more nature reserves for the wildlife. Besides, laws should
be made to punish those who do harm to the wildlife.
Only in this way can we help protect the wildlife and the
number will be increased. It’s hoped that humans and
animals will live in peace with each other in the future.
Love animals, love ourselves!
Dear WWF,
…
Yours sincerely
…
Write a letter to WWF based on the following points:
Why we should help the animal
What we should do to help
Your best wishes
I really appreciate this chance to say something about
wildlife and its protection by writing this letter.
As we all know, many wild animals are in danger of
dying out because of killing and overhunting. A a result,
The number of the endangered animals is decreasing
because their habitats are destroyed by humans.
In order to solve the problem, some necessary protective
measures should be taken. First of all, we need to set up
more nature reserves for the wildlife. Besides, laws should
be made to punish those who do harm to the wildlife.
Only in this way can we help protect the wildlife and the
number will be increased. It’s hoped that humans and
animals will live in peace with each other in the future.
Yours sincerely
Tom
Dear WWF,
Writing Skills
档次范围和要求
1-6:只能写出一两个要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子可懂。
7-12:能写出部分要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达。
13-18:能写明基本要点;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。
19-24:能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文不够连贯,表达基本清楚。
25-30:能写明全部要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。
有必要 没有必要
跟老师学比自己学效果好; 容易养成依赖习惯
可以巩固课堂所学的内容; 学生需要时间休息;
……. ………
你的看法…..
目前,越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。
对此存在两种不同观点:
根据以上提示,以“Are private classes necessary?” 为题,写一篇
英语短文,反映上述内容,并简要阐述自己的观点。
注意:1.词数100---120,文章题目和开头已给出(不计词数)
2.参考词汇:巩固---consolidate
Are private classes necessary
More and more middle school students are taking all kinds of private
Classes at the weekend. Are private classes necessary?
There are two different views concerning this topic.
People who are in favor of the idea hold the view that it will be better for us to learn from teachers than to learn by ourselves. In addition, we can consolidate what we have learned in classes, which will do more good to our study.
Version 1
class
with
Despite the advantages stated above, some people don’t think it necessary for students to take private classes. They advocate that it can easily lead to a bad habit that students will depend on private classes too much. Further more, students don’t have enough time to rest, which will do harm to their health.
of depending
Furthermore
As far as I am concerned, I would favor the latter, considering that we can also learn as much as knowledge in school if we study hard enough. I tend to believe that we can study well without taking private classes. (28分)
Some students think it necessary. Taking private classes at the weekend will be more effective than learning by ourselves. At the same time we can absorb more knowledge and it will be helpful to consolidate what we have learned in class as well.
Version 2
On the contrary, other students hold the idea that we should depend on ourselves when we learn, not always ask the private classes for help. What’s more, we need the weekends to have a good rest.
In my opinion, it needs our patience and perseverance to learn well. Only when we depend on ourselves and find the suitable learning ways can we enjoy our study. (27分)
rather than
turn to
takes
Version 3
Views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of private classes. They think that students who learn from teachers can obtain more knowledge than those who learn by themselves. What’s more, students can consolidate what they have learned through private classes.
with / with the help of
However, there are many people who hold the opposite opinion. They think it will be easy for students to develop a habit of depending on others, if they attend private classes. Moreover, students should spare some time to have a good rest.
As far as I am concerned, we should take a right attitude towards the private classes. Study and rest should go hand in hand. Only in this way can we achieve our goals.
Version 4
Some students think it necessary to take private classes. They think they can learn much better with the help of teachers. What’s more, they can consolidate what they have learnt in class. So they regard taking private classes as an effective way to improve study.
Meanwhile, some students hold the opposite view that taking private classes will lead students to form the habit of depending on teachers. To make the matters worse, private classes take up a lot of time so that students have little time to relax.
As far as I am concerned, private classes have both advantages and disadvantages. Taking proper private classes will contribute to our learning, but at the same time, we should also concentrate on our study at school. Only in this way can we live up to our expectations. (26)
There’s no point in taking such classes.
We should attach importance to...
under the guidance of the teacher
with the help/assistance of the teacher
It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.
It can lead to depending on teachers, which is not good for exploring students’ potential.
I think it necessary to be a good learner rather than a follower.
For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
Despite many obvious advantages of ...
Private classes are intended for those who have spare
time to promote themselves.
Some people think it necessary. First of all, it’s more
effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can consolidate what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily become dependent, and for another, students need time to relax. What’s more, the purpose of many training classes is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a training class or a private teacher is needed just depends. If you are really weak at or interested in certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money
求助信
假定你是李华,今年暑期参加了美国某学校的夏令营,回国后发现自己的小包落在了学校宿舍。请你给该校的朋友Peter写封邮件,希望他帮忙找回。
内容包括:
1. 小包的特征
2. 遗落的地点
3. 期待寄回
Para1: Purpose
(problem)
Para2: Details about the lost bag
Para3: Ending
Para1: purpose
帮我一个忙
做……有困难
遇到问题
寻求帮助
寻求建议
把…落下
由于粗心
do me a favor
have difficulty in
encounter/be faced with some problems
ask for help/seek for help/ask a favor of sb.
ask for advice/instructions
leave sth. in sp
due to my carelessness
很抱歉打扰你,但是我写信希望你能帮我一个忙.
Sorry to bother you, but I am writing to ask a favor of you.
2. 我写信寻求你的帮助因为我遇到了问题…
I am writing this letter to ask you for help, because I am faced with a problem.
I have left my bag in the school dormitory.
It was a black leather bag with my ID card, credit cards and around 200 dollars in it.
It is a blue bag with a small toy cat tied to it. (吕心楠)
It is a small blue bag with a Nike logo.(周震阳)
It is a red cloth bag inside which are some cards and cash.
我可能把它丢在了浴室里
It might have been in the bathroom that I left it.
常见结尾句式:
I would appreciate it if you could find my bag and send it back to me. Looking forward to your earliest reply!
_______________ would be highly appreciated.
如果你能帮我解决这个问题,我将无限感激。
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand to tackle the problem.
Your kind assistance
Dear Peter,
I am writing this letter to ask you for help, because I have left my small bag in the school dormitory during the Summer Camp.
Actually, this bag is of vital importance to me, for it is a valuable gift given by my grandfather. It is a brown leather bag with some cards in it. What’s more, I still remember I might have left it behind in Room 301 in the dormitory. I would greatly appreciate it if you could find it and send it back to me soon.
looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Dear Mr Smith,
Sorry to bother you while you are on vacation.
I am writing to ask a favor of you.
With the English festival approaching, we sincerely need your professional guidance on our drama Hamlet, which we hope can win a prize in the drama contest. Though having prepared for a long time, our performance are far from satisfying for lack of previous experience.
we have sent a video of us practicing the drama. Would you please kindly watch it and give us some valuable advice on how to improve it?
Your professional instructions will make a difference. Looking forward to your reply.
I wonder if you could ……
It couldn’t be better if…
I would be more than grateful If you could …
求助信常见开头句式:
1. I’m writing to ask for your help. I have met much difficulty in…
2. Sorry to bother you, but I m writing to ask a favor of you.