2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）38
人物介绍+读后续写+概要写作
1．在抗击新冠肺炎疫情期间，有太多让我们感动的人和事。请按下面的要求，用英语写一个人物故事。人物可以是医务工作者、社区工作者、志愿者等。
要求：
1、简要介绍该人物。
2、他/她的感人事迹。
3、你的感想。
提示词：the
Covid-19
epidemic新冠肺炎疫情
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Surprises
are
beautiful
because
they
come
without
waiting.
It
was
not
so
true
for
Nancy
though.
She
was
sure
her
younger
sister,
Kate,
was
planning
a
surprise
for
her
birthday.
Opening
the
curtains
of
her
bedroom
window,
she
hungrily
drank
in
the
fresh
morning
air.
Nancy
was
turning
30
today.
“Keep
calm.
It’s
only
your
30th
birthday.”
she
thought
to
herself,
quickly
glancing
at
the
mirror
and
looking
away.
She
never
liked
looking
at
the
mirror.
It
always
reminded
her
of
what
she
had
suffered.
She
didn’t
want
to
think
of
the
past
and
all
that
it
had
done
to
her.
Over
these
years
she
had
worked
at
different
factories
and
cleaned
the
floors
at
big
hotels
where
perfumed
men
and
women
floated
easily.
Ever
since
their
parents
died,
her
only
goal
was
to
educate
Kate.
Nancy
didn’t
go
to
her
dreamy
university.
Her
emotions
came
running
back
to
the
present.
Quickly,
she
wiped
her
tears
and
rushed
to
the
door.
“A
sister
is
a
little
bit
of
childhood
that
can
never
be
lost.”
Kate
was
her
dream,
her
hope,
her
happiness
and
her
precious
possession.
She
meant
everything
to
her.
Kate
was
so
outstanding
that
she
was
admitted
to
Harvard
University.
And
today,
Nancy
was
sure
Kate
would
surprise
her
with
a
gift
like
she
did
every
year.
Nancy
imagined
the
freshly
baked
chocolate
cake
that
would
welcome
her.
Her
tongue
was
eager
to
lick
up
the
soft,
brown
cream
and
her
teeth
were
ready
to
bite
it.
She
heard
the
sound
of
Kate’s
footsteps
coming
towards
her.
She
waited
smiling.
It
seemed
like
an
endless
wait.
Finally,
she
heard
her
younger
sister
approaching
her
room.
Her
eyes
lit
up,
steps
turned
into
a
spring
and
her
heart
was
pounding.
She
sniffed
the
air
to
catch
a
breath
of
the
chocolate
cake
but
she
couldn’t.
“Maybe
it
is
not
chocolate
flavor
this
time.”
she
imagined
with
pride.
Her
sister
was
a
grown-up
now.
She
could
surprise
her
with
something
else.
注意:
1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2、至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．读下列短文，用60个字概括大意。
Do
you
want
to
work
with
people
or
animals
or
machines
or
tools?
Do
you
want
to
work
indoors
or
outdoors，directly
serve
people
in
need
or
serve
people
behind
the
scenes?
These
are
the
typical
questions
that
a
volunteer
service
agency
would
ask.
Every
year，thousands
and
thousands
of
people
in
the
west
offer
volunteer
services.Volunteering
greatly
strengthens
the
community
partly
because
it
helps
the
old，the
young，the
weak，the
sick，the
disabled
and
the
injured
to
overcome
difficulties.
Volunteers
usually
help
in
many
different
ways.They
may
give
people
advice，offer
friendship
to
the
young，drive
the
elderly
to
church，counsel(劝告)
kids
against
drugs.Work
as
an
assistant
in
a
school
or
nursing
home，raise
funds，plant
trees，help
out
in
local
libraries
and
do
many
other
things.
Volunteering
can
be
a
few
hours
a
week
or
a
few
hours
a
month，time
during
the
day，evenings
or
weekends，either
part
time
or
full
time.Anybody
can
become
a
volunteer.
The
art
of
volunteering
is
a
process
of
both
giving
and
receiving.Volunteering
allows
volunteers
to
meet
new
people
and
make
new
friends
and
mix
with
people
from
all
walks
of
life.Volunteering
is
an
excellent
way
to
experiment，practice
and
try
out
new
techniques
and
skills.It
is
much
more
effective
to
practice
a
skill
than
to
read
about
it
or
study
it
in
a
classroom.Volunteering
is
a
great
way
to
develop
good
teamwork
skills，discover
your
individual
talents(个人智慧)
and
explore
career
choices.Being
a
volunteer
takes
individuals
on
a
wonderful
journey
and
helps
them
learn
many
important
things
beyond
their
school
learning.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）38
人物介绍+读后续写+概要写作
1．在抗击新冠肺炎疫情期间，有太多让我们感动的人和事。请按下面的要求，用英语写一个人物故事。人物可以是医务工作者、社区工作者、志愿者等。
要求：
1、简要介绍该人物。
2、他/她的感人事迹。
3、你的感想。
提示词：the
Covid-19
epidemic新冠肺炎疫情
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
There
are
so
many
people
and
things
that
have
moved
us
in
the
fight
against
COVID-19.The
most
impressive
one
is
academician
Zhong
Nanshan,
who
is
84
years
old.
At
the
beginning
of
the
epidemic
in
Wuhan,
Academician
Zhong
Nanshan
immediately
went
to
the
front
line
to
save
those
patients
suffering
from
the
virus.
He
was
so
loved
by
the
whole
nation
that
some
people
said
"When
will
we
go
out?Zhong
Nanshan
asked
us
to
go
out,
we
will
go
out!"
Such
a
brave
and
noble
man
for
the
country,
we
can't
help
but
deeply
respect
him,
we
should
learn
from
him.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一个在抗击新冠肺炎疫情期间的人物的故事，并写出自己的感想。
【详解】
第一步：审题
类型：提纲类
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明文章的主旨
2.介绍人物故事
1）简要介绍该人物
2）他/她的感人事迹
3.感想
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
Move;
the
fight
against
COVID-19;
impressive;
at
the
beginning
of;
epidemic;
the
front
line;
suffer
from;
go
out;
brave;
noble;
respect;
learn
from.
第三步：连词成句
1.
There
are
so
many
people
and
things
that
have
moved
us
in
the
fight
against
COVID-19.
2.
The
most
impressive
one
is
academician
Zhong
Nanshan,
who
is
84
years
old.
3.
At
the
beginning
of
the
epidemic
in
Wuhan,
Academician
Zhong
Nanshan
immediately
went
to
the
front
line
to
save
those
patients
suffering
from
the
virus.
4.
He
was
so
loved
by
the
whole
nation
that
some
people
said
"When
will
we
go
out?Zhong
Nanshan
asked
us
to
go
out,
we
will
go
out!"
5.
Such
a
brave
and
noble
man
for
the
country,
we
can't
help
but
deeply
respect
him,
we
should
learn
from
him.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second...
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：The
most
impressive
one
is
academician
Zhong
Nanshan,
who
is
84
years
old.这句话运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如suffer
from，go
out，learn
from等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Surprises
are
beautiful
because
they
come
without
waiting.
It
was
not
so
true
for
Nancy
though.
She
was
sure
her
younger
sister,
Kate,
was
planning
a
surprise
for
her
birthday.
Opening
the
curtains
of
her
bedroom
window,
she
hungrily
drank
in
the
fresh
morning
air.
Nancy
was
turning
30
today.
“Keep
calm.
It’s
only
your
30th
birthday.”
she
thought
to
herself,
quickly
glancing
at
the
mirror
and
looking
away.
She
never
liked
looking
at
the
mirror.
It
always
reminded
her
of
what
she
had
suffered.
She
didn’t
want
to
think
of
the
past
and
all
that
it
had
done
to
her.
Over
these
years
she
had
worked
at
different
factories
and
cleaned
the
floors
at
big
hotels
where
perfumed
men
and
women
floated
easily.
Ever
since
their
parents
died,
her
only
goal
was
to
educate
Kate.
Nancy
didn’t
go
to
her
dreamy
university.
Her
emotions
came
running
back
to
the
present.
Quickly,
she
wiped
her
tears
and
rushed
to
the
door.
“A
sister
is
a
little
bit
of
childhood
that
can
never
be
lost.”
Kate
was
her
dream,
her
hope,
her
happiness
and
her
precious
possession.
She
meant
everything
to
her.
Kate
was
so
outstanding
that
she
was
admitted
to
Harvard
University.
And
today,
Nancy
was
sure
Kate
would
surprise
her
with
a
gift
like
she
did
every
year.
Nancy
imagined
the
freshly
baked
chocolate
cake
that
would
welcome
her.
Her
tongue
was
eager
to
lick
up
the
soft,
brown
cream
and
her
teeth
were
ready
to
bite
it.
She
heard
the
sound
of
Kate’s
footsteps
coming
towards
her.
She
waited
smiling.
It
seemed
like
an
endless
wait.
Finally,
she
heard
her
younger
sister
approaching
her
room.
Her
eyes
lit
up,
steps
turned
into
a
spring
and
her
heart
was
pounding.
She
sniffed
the
air
to
catch
a
breath
of
the
chocolate
cake
but
she
couldn’t.
“Maybe
it
is
not
chocolate
flavor
this
time.”
she
imagined
with
pride.
Her
sister
was
a
grown-up
now.
She
could
surprise
her
with
something
else.
注意:
1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2、至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
No
cakes,
no
flowers,
and
no
package
wrapped
in
shiny
golden
paper,
tied
with
red
ribbons.
The
excitement
disappeared
from
Nancy’s
face.
Her
face
looked
like
a
blank
white
page.
Kate
was
smiling.
She
could
win
the
world
with
the
radiance
of
her
smile.
She
gave
her
sister
a
tight
hug.
“Happy
birthday,”
said
Kate.
Nancy
loosened
herself
from
the
warm
embrace
and
looked
at
her
sister.
“Thank
you,”
she
said,
smiling
coldly.
“And
here’s
your
gift,”
Kate
said.
Paragraph
2:
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
Nancy’s
eyebrows
shot
up
like
mountain
peaks
and
her
eyes
were
flooded
with
questions.
“Sacrificing
your
happiness
for
the
happiness
of
the
one
you
love
is
by
far
the
truest
type
of
love.
This
is
an
admission.
You
are
admitted
to
the
community
university.
I
want
you
to
pick
up
from
where
you
left.
It’s
time
that
you
achieve
your
dream.”
Nancy’s
eyes
grew
wet
and
her
trembling
hands
were
held
firmly
by
Kate.
【分析】
本篇书面表达考查读后续写。
【详解】
本文是一篇读后续写的短文。要求阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。要求包括：(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；(3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；(4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。写作时运用第三人称写作，用一般过去时为主写作。写作时应该发挥想象力，在原有内容基础上进行创作，要做到行文连贯，内容合理，流畅自然适当运用亮点词汇和高分句型，使句式多样化。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了高级表达方式，如Nancy’s
eyebrows
shot
up
like
mountain
peaks
and
her
eyes
were
flooded
with
questions.使用了并列句式；Sacrificing
your
happiness
for
the
happiness
of
the
one
you
love
is
by
far
the
truest
type
of
love.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．读下列短文，用60个字概括大意。
Do
you
want
to
work
with
people
or
animals
or
machines
or
tools?
Do
you
want
to
work
indoors
or
outdoors，directly
serve
people
in
need
or
serve
people
behind
the
scenes?
These
are
the
typical
questions
that
a
volunteer
service
agency
would
ask.
Every
year，thousands
and
thousands
of
people
in
the
west
offer
volunteer
services.Volunteering
greatly
strengthens
the
community
partly
because
it
helps
the
old，the
young，the
weak，the
sick，the
disabled
and
the
injured
to
overcome
difficulties.
Volunteers
usually
help
in
many
different
ways.They
may
give
people
advice，offer
friendship
to
the
young，drive
the
elderly
to
church，counsel(劝告)
kids
against
drugs.Work
as
an
assistant
in
a
school
or
nursing
home，raise
funds，plant
trees，help
out
in
local
libraries
and
do
many
other
things.
Volunteering
can
be
a
few
hours
a
week
or
a
few
hours
a
month，time
during
the
day，evenings
or
weekends，either
part
time
or
full
time.Anybody
can
become
a
volunteer.
The
art
of
volunteering
is
a
process
of
both
giving
and
receiving.Volunteering
allows
volunteers
to
meet
new
people
and
make
new
friends
and
mix
with
people
from
all
walks
of
life.Volunteering
is
an
excellent
way
to
experiment，practice
and
try
out
new
techniques
and
skills.It
is
much
more
effective
to
practice
a
skill
than
to
read
about
it
or
study
it
in
a
classroom.Volunteering
is
a
great
way
to
develop
good
teamwork
skills，discover
your
individual
talents(个人智慧)
and
explore
career
choices.Being
a
volunteer
takes
individuals
on
a
wonderful
journey
and
helps
them
learn
many
important
things
beyond
their
school
learning.
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【答案】
Volunteering
has
a
great
effect
on
the
community
,which
can
be
done
in
a
flexible
time.
Many
people
volunteer
to
help
others.
Volunteers
can
help
people
in
many
ways
by
giving
and
receiving.
Generally,
it
is
of
great
benefit
to
be
a
volunteer.
【解析】
【分析】
本文属于说明文，介绍志愿者服务对社区有很大的影响，志愿者服务的时间也是弹性的，也对志愿者本人有很大的好处。
【详解】
本文属于总分结构，首先介绍志愿者服务对社区的意义，其次志愿者活动有很多方面；再次讲述任何人都可以成为志愿者，最后，志愿者活动对志愿者本人的意义。
【点睛】
概要写作做题技巧。概要写作不是对段落大意的简单堆积，需要学生读懂文章的大概意思和文章结构，还需要一定写作替换技巧，且注意语言的简洁性。第一步，确定文章的话题和各段的段落大意，比如本文话题为志愿者服务，首先介绍志愿者服务对社区的意义，其次志愿者活动有很多方面；再次讲述任何人都可以成为志愿者，最后，志愿者活动对志愿者本人的意义；第二步，分析各个段落的逻辑关系，确定主观点和次要观点；第三步，注意一定的写作技巧，比如同义词、近义词的替换，句型和结构的转换；第四步，检查单词拼写，语法规则，字数问题等。
