2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）35
英语广告+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是苏华，你的叔叔开办了一个生态农场（ecological
farm),他想请你写一则英文广告，以吸引更多的外国游客。你的写作内容需包括：
1.农场的位置、面积等；
2.游客在农场上可以体验农民生活、品尝有机食物（organic
food)等；
3.号召游客前来参观。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
time
to
go
home.“Remember
to
work
on
your
class
speeches
for
homework,
”Miss
Walker
called,
as
everyone
started
talking
and
packing
their
school
bags.?Jenny?felt
sick.
She
hated
having
to
read
aloud
in
class.
She
was
sure
everyone
got
really
bored
listening
to
her.
Once,
when
Jenny
was
reading
out
her
holiday
diary,?Lee?was
even
looking
at
his?watch,
a
silver
and
blue
one
which
seemed
just?magical.
Jenny
watched
Lee?walk?ahead
of
her
as
they
left
school.
He
seemed
so
clever,
and
he
had
a
certain
sort
of
shining?confidence.
He
was
just
one
of
those
people
who
were
good
at
everything.
Jenny
sighed.
As
she
turned
the
corner,
she
saw
Lee’s
watch
lying
right
in
the
middle
of
the
path.
Jenny
knew
she
should
just
pick
it
up
and?return?it
to
him,
but
she
didn’t
want
to
run
after
him.
Jenny
bent
down
quickly,
picked
up
the
watch
and
ran
home.
On
arriving
home,
Jenny
put
it
on
almost
without
thinking.
She
was
surprised
it
fitted
so
well.
She
walked
to
the
mirror
and
started
practicing
her?speech.
Words
just?flooded
out?of
her.“I’m
going
to
talk
about
swimming.
I
have
been
lucky.
I’ve
won
lots
of
competitions.
But
when
I’m
in
a
race,
I’m
not
really
thinking
about
winning.
I’m?just
loving
the
feeling
of
being
in
the
water...”Jenny
laughed
with
excitement.
She
walked
across
the
room.
She
suddenly
seemed
to
have
a
certain
sort
of
confidence.
Turning
back
to
the
mirror,
Jenny
saw
a
flash
of
light
from
the
watch
in
the
glass.
The
flashes
of
silver
seemed
almost
magical.
So
maybe
Lee’s
watch
really
DID
have
something
magic.
The
next
day,
as
the
lesson
began,
Miss
Walker
asked
who
was
going
to
be
brave
and
go
first.
No-body
moved.
Jenny
slowly
raised
her
arm.
Before
Miss
Walker
could
say
anything,
there
was
a
shout
from
behind.
“She’s
stolen
my
watch!”
Lee
said
angrily,“
It
went
missing
at
school
yesterday.”
注意：1.?所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
????????????
2.?续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph
1:
Everybody
was
fixing
their
eyes
on
Jenny,
waiting
for
an
explanation.
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Paragraph
2:
At
that
moment,
Miss
Walker
smiled
and
asked
the
class
to
listen
to
Jenny’s
speech
first.
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3．阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Recently,
a
professor
of
philosophy
in
the
United
States
has
written
a
book
calledMoney
and
the
Meaning
of
Life.
He
has
discovered
that
how
we
deal
with
money
in
our
day-to-day
life
has
more
meaning
than
we
usually
think.
One
of
the
things
he
asks
his
students
to
do
is
to
keep
a
record
of
every
penny
they
spend
for
a
week.
From
the
way
they
spend
their
money,
they
often
see
what
they
really
value
in
life.
He
says
our
relation
with
others
often
becomes
clearly
defined
when
money
enters
the
picture.
You
might
have
wonderful
friendship
with
somebody
and
you
think
that
you
are
very
good
friends.
But
you
will
know
him
only
when
you
ask
him
to
lend
you
some
money.
If
he
does,
it
brings
something
to
the
relationship
that
seems
stronger
than
ever
before.
Or
it
can
suddenly
weaken
the
relationship
if
he
doesn’t.
This
person
may
say
that
he
has
a
certain
feeling,
but
if
it
is
not
carried
out
in
the
money
world,
there
is
something
less
real
about
it.
Since
money
is
so
important
to
us,
we
consider
those
who
possess
a
lot
of
it
to
be
very
important.
The
author
interviewed
some
millionaires
in
researching
his
book.
Answer:
The
most
surprising
thing
is
why
people
give
me
so
much
respect.
I
am
nothing.
I
don’t
know
much.
All
I
am
is
rich.
People
just
have
an
idea
of
making
more
and
more
money,
but
what
is
it
for?
How
much
do
I
need
for
ant
given
purposes
in
my
life?
In
his
book,
the
professor
uncovered
an
important
need
in
modern
society:
to
bring
back
the
idea
that
money
is
an
instrument
rather
than
the
end.
Money
plays
an
important
role
in
the
material
world,
but
expecting
money
to
give
happiness
may
be
missing
the
meaning
of
life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）35
英语广告+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是苏华，你的叔叔开办了一个生态农场（ecological
farm),他想请你写一则英文广告，以吸引更多的外国游客。你的写作内容需包括：
1.农场的位置、面积等；
2.游客在农场上可以体验农民生活、品尝有机食物（organic
food)等；
3.号召游客前来参观。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Do
you
get
tired
of
city
life?
Do
you
want
to
try
something
different?
If
you
say
yes,
Hongxing
Ecological
Farm
is
a
good
place
for
you
to
visit.
Located
in
the
east
of
our
city,
it
covers
an
area
of
more
than
100
mu.
Besides
learning
about
the
latest
progress
made
in
agriculture,
you
can
also
work
as
a
farmer
and
eat
as
much
organic
food
as
you
like
on
the
farm.
You’ll
surely
have
an
unforgettable
experience.
Don’t
hesitate
anymore!
Please
come
and
experience
a
completely
new
life!
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一则英文广告。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是苏华，你的叔叔开办了一个生态农场（ecological
farm),他想请你写一则英文广告，以吸引更多的外国游客。你的写作内容需包括：
1.农场的位置、面积等；
2.游客在农场上可以体验农民生活、品尝有机食物（organic
food)等；
3.号召游客前来参观。
第二，人称为第一人称、第二人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段。引题，吸引对相关内容的兴趣。第二段，农场的位置、面积等；游客在农场上可以体验农民生活、品尝有机食物（organic
food)等；第三段，号召游客前来参观。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:
cover
an
area
of，work
as
，make
progress，have
an
unforgettable
experience.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:
if引导的条件状语从句If
you
say
yes,
Hongxing
Ecological
Farm
is
a
good
place
for
you
to
visit.
非谓语动词Located
in
the
east
of
our
city,
it
covers
an
area
of
more
than
100
mu.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides，however，finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:
if引导的条件状语从句If
you
say
yes,
Hongxing
Ecological
Farm
is
a
good
place
for
you
to
visit.
非谓语动词Located
in
the
east
of
our
city,
it
covers
an
area
of
more
than
100
mu.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
time
to
go
home.“Remember
to
work
on
your
class
speeches
for
homework,
”Miss
Walker
called,
as
everyone
started
talking
and
packing
their
school
bags.?Jenny?felt
sick.
She
hated
having
to
read
aloud
in
class.
She
was
sure
everyone
got
really
bored
listening
to
her.
Once,
when
Jenny
was
reading
out
her
holiday
diary,?Lee?was
even
looking
at
his?watch,
a
silver
and
blue
one
which
seemed
just?magical.
Jenny
watched
Lee?walk?ahead
of
her
as
they
left
school.
He
seemed
so
clever,
and
he
had
a
certain
sort
of
shining?confidence.
He
was
just
one
of
those
people
who
were
good
at
everything.
Jenny
sighed.
As
she
turned
the
corner,
she
saw
Lee’s
watch
lying
right
in
the
middle
of
the
path.
Jenny
knew
she
should
just
pick
it
up
and?return?it
to
him,
but
she
didn’t
want
to
run
after
him.
Jenny
bent
down
quickly,
picked
up
the
watch
and
ran
home.
On
arriving
home,
Jenny
put
it
on
almost
without
thinking.
She
was
surprised
it
fitted
so
well.
She
walked
to
the
mirror
and
started
practicing
her?speech.
Words
just?flooded
out?of
her.“I’m
going
to
talk
about
swimming.
I
have
been
lucky.
I’ve
won
lots
of
competitions.
But
when
I’m
in
a
race,
I’m
not
really
thinking
about
winning.
I’m?just
loving
the
feeling
of
being
in
the
water...”Jenny
laughed
with
excitement.
She
walked
across
the
room.
She
suddenly
seemed
to
have
a
certain
sort
of
confidence.
Turning
back
to
the
mirror,
Jenny
saw
a
flash
of
light
from
the
watch
in
the
glass.
The
flashes
of
silver
seemed
almost
magical.
So
maybe
Lee’s
watch
really
DID
have
something
magic.
The
next
day,
as
the
lesson
began,
Miss
Walker
asked
who
was
going
to
be
brave
and
go
first.
No-body
moved.
Jenny
slowly
raised
her
arm.
Before
Miss
Walker
could
say
anything,
there
was
a
shout
from
behind.
“She’s
stolen
my
watch!”
Lee
said
angrily,“
It
went
missing
at
school
yesterday.”
注意：1.?所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
????????????
2.?续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph
1:
Everybody
was
fixing
their
eyes
on
Jenny,
waiting
for
an
explanation.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
At
that
moment,
Miss
Walker
smiled
and
asked
the
class
to
listen
to
Jenny’s
speech
first.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Everybody
was
fixing
their
eyes
in
Jenny,
waiting
for
an
explanation.
Dead
silence
suddenly
fell.
So
embarrassed
was
Jenny
that
she
felt
her
face
burning
and
her
mind
going
blank.
Despite
the
unwillingness
to
admit
it,
she
had
actually
made
the
most
shameful
mistake.?Jenny?was
thrown
into
a
dilemma
whether
to
tell
the
truth
or
not.
Considering
the
well-prepared?speech?and
the
magic
of
the
watch,
she
plucked
up
her
courage,
uttering
in
a
begging
tone,
“But?Miss
Walker,
could
I
deliver
the
speech
first?”
All
the
classmates
fell
into
tremendous
curiosity,
eager
to
witness
her
performance.
At
that,
Miss
Walker
smiled
and
asked
the
class
to
listen
to
Jenny’s
speech.
Overwhelmed
with
excitement,
Jenny
confidently
made
her
way
to
the
platform,
words?flooding
out?of
her
fluently.
Never
before
in
her
life
had
she
delivered
such
a
terrific
speech.
Praises
spread
around
the
classroom
and
even
Miss
Walker
nodded
with
approval.
Feeling
incredibly
refreshed,
Jenny
finished
her
speech,
which
was
greeted
with
thunderous
applause.
Relieved,
Jenny
exposed
the
truth
and
especially
the
magic
of
the?watch.
“But
it’s
just
an
ordinary
watch
without
any
magic.”
announced?Lee.
Not
until
then
did
Jenny
realize
the
real
source
of?confidence?comes
from
his
effort
rather
than
the
watch.
【分析】
本文为读后续写。前文是Jenny捡到了Lee的手表，感觉自己的演讲变得流畅了。可是在她第二天要上台演讲时，Lee指认Jenny偷了他的手表，Jenny恳求老师让自己先演讲，Jenny流利的演讲得到了老师和同学们的赞扬，Jenny分享了手表有魔力的事情，可是Lee说手表没有魔力，其实是Jenny自己努力的结果。
【详解】
根据前文的故事以及第一段Everybody
was
fixing
their
eyes
on
Jenny,
waiting
for
an
explanation.可知第一段应该是Jenny在被Lee揭穿后所做的反应，再根据第二段At
that
moment,
Miss
Walker
smiled
and
asked
the
class
to
listen
to
Jenny’s
speech
first.可知第一段中Jenny应该是要求先听完Jenny的演讲，或者是老师要求先听Jenny的演讲，稍后处理Lee的watch的事。第二段则应该主要写Jenny演讲的效果良好以及演讲后对Lee的手表做出解释。
高分句型1:
倒装句型
So
embarrassed
was
Jenny
that
she
felt
her
face
burning
and
her
mind
going
blank.
本句使用了倒装句型。本句使用了so…that句型，so+形容词放句首句子用部分倒装。
Never
before
in
her
life
had
she
delivered
such
a
terrific
speech.本句never为否定词，放句首，句子用部分倒装。
Not
until
then
did
Jenny
realize
the
real
source
of
confidence
comes
from
his
effort
rather
than
the
watch.本句not
unitl
否定短语放句首，句子要用部分倒装。
高分句型2：
Considering
the
well-prepared
speech
and
the
magic
of
the
watch,
she
plucked
up
her
courage,
uttering
in
a
begging
tone.
现在分词做原因状语。
Overwhelmed
with
excitement,
Jenny
confidently
made
her
way
to
the
platform,
words
flooding
out
of
her
fluently.
过去分词做原因状语。
Feeling
incredibly
refreshed,
Jenny
finished
her
speech,
which
was
greeted
with
thunderous
applause.
现在分词做伴随状语。
Relieved,
Jenny
exposed
the
truth
and
especially
the
magic
of
the
watch.过去分词做伴随状语。
这几句都使用了非谓语动词做状语。
3．阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Recently,
a
professor
of
philosophy
in
the
United
States
has
written
a
book
calledMoney
and
the
Meaning
of
Life.
He
has
discovered
that
how
we
deal
with
money
in
our
day-to-day
life
has
more
meaning
than
we
usually
think.
One
of
the
things
he
asks
his
students
to
do
is
to
keep
a
record
of
every
penny
they
spend
for
a
week.
From
the
way
they
spend
their
money,
they
often
see
what
they
really
value
in
life.
He
says
our
relation
with
others
often
becomes
clearly
defined
when
money
enters
the
picture.
You
might
have
wonderful
friendship
with
somebody
and
you
think
that
you
are
very
good
friends.
But
you
will
know
him
only
when
you
ask
him
to
lend
you
some
money.
If
he
does,
it
brings
something
to
the
relationship
that
seems
stronger
than
ever
before.
Or
it
can
suddenly
weaken
the
relationship
if
he
doesn’t.
This
person
may
say
that
he
has
a
certain
feeling,
but
if
it
is
not
carried
out
in
the
money
world,
there
is
something
less
real
about
it.
Since
money
is
so
important
to
us,
we
consider
those
who
possess
a
lot
of
it
to
be
very
important.
The
author
interviewed
some
millionaires
in
researching
his
book.
Answer:
The
most
surprising
thing
is
why
people
give
me
so
much
respect.
I
am
nothing.
I
don’t
know
much.
All
I
am
is
rich.
People
just
have
an
idea
of
making
more
and
more
money,
but
what
is
it
for?
How
much
do
I
need
for
ant
given
purposes
in
my
life?
In
his
book,
the
professor
uncovered
an
important
need
in
modern
society:
to
bring
back
the
idea
that
money
is
an
instrument
rather
than
the
end.
Money
plays
an
important
role
in
the
material
world,
but
expecting
money
to
give
happiness
may
be
missing
the
meaning
of
life.
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【答案】
A
US
professor
has
found
out
the
relationship
between
money
and
the
meaning
of
life.
Some
people
think
friendship
and
good
relationship
depend
on
whether
you
have
money
and
whether
you
are
generous.
Money
is
generally
considered
very
important,
but
a
millionaire
doesn’t
feel
he
is
very
important,
because
he
thinks
he
is
nothing
except
that
he
has
money.
The
professor’s
findings
reveal
that
money
is
a
tool
rather
than
the
goal,
and
money
is
not
equal
to
happiness.
【分析】
本文要求针对所给文章写出内容概要，这首先要求要清楚这篇文章的主题，这篇文章由一位美国教授的书引出这篇文章要讨论的主题：钱和生活的意义；第二要搞清楚文章的结构，第一段介绍这位美国教授的书和书的大概内容，第二、三、四、五段着重介绍作者在书中提出的观点，并进行论述。所以进行内容概括时，首先要提出这本书，接下来对第二、三、四、五段的内容进行提炼。
