2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）34
安全须知+读后续写+概要写作
1．近几年全球地震频发。地震会造成包括房屋倒塌、人员伤亡等在内的一系列可怕后果。因此在发生地震时如何保护自己成为了一个重要的话题。请你以”How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。
内容要点:1.地震来临时不要慌张。如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、高压线等物。
2.如果在室内，要尽量躲在桌子等坚固家具下面，并注意保护好头部、颈部。
3.逃生时不要选择乘坐电梯。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake
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【答案】
How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake
Earthquakes
have
happened
in
many
places
recently,
causing
significant
damage.
So
how
to
keep
safe
during
an
earthquake
has
become
an
important
issue.
Here
are
some
guidelines.
Above
all,
don’t
be
nervous
and
try
to
keep
calm.
If
you
are
outdoors,
it’s
necessary
to
get
into
an
open
area
away
from
trees，buildings,
walls,
power
lines
and
anything
else
that
might
fall
on
you.
If
you
are
indoors,
quickly
move
to
a
safe
place
such
as
under
a
strong
desk.
Cover
your
head
and
neck
with
your
arms
to
protect
yourself
from
falling
objects.
Finally,
never
use
the
lift.
Actually
we
can
reduce
the
damage
that
earthquakes
bring
us
if
we
take
right
measures.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求以”How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求以”How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake”为题写一篇文章：近几年全球地震频发。地震会造成包括房屋倒塌、人员伤亡等在内的一系列可怕后果。因此在发生地震时如何保护自己成为了一个重要的话题。请你以”How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。内容要点:1.地震来临时不要慌张。如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、高压线等物；2.如果在室内，要尽量躲在桌子等坚固家具下面，并注意保护好头部、颈部；3.逃生时不要选择乘坐电梯。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；significant（重大的），damage（损毁），calm（冷静的），protect（保护），
measure（措施），power
lines
（高压线），cover（遮盖），necessary（必要的）及reduce（减少）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有above
all（首先），keep
calm（保持冷静），try
to
do
(努力做某事)，protect
sb
from
sth（使某人免受），get
into（进入）以及be
away
from（远离），而且还使用了状语从句“Actually
we
can
reduce
the
damage
that
earthquakes
bring
us
if
we
take
right
measures.”及“If
you
are
indoors,
quickly
move
to
a
safe
place
such
as
under
a
strong
desk.”，祈使句“Above
all,
don’t
be
nervous
and
try
to
keep
calm.”及“Cover
your
head
and
neck
with
your
arms
to
protect
yourself
from
falling
objects.”，形式主语“it’s
necessary
to
get
into
an
open
area
away
from
trees，buildings,
walls,
power
lines
and
anything
else
that
might
fall
on
you.”，非谓语动词“Earthquakes
have
happened
in
many
places
recently,
causing
significant
damage.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2．阅读下面短文,
根据所给情节进行续写,是之构成一个完整的故事。
“If
mum
finds
out
that
I'm
going
to
the
beach,
I'll
be
in
big
trouble.”
I
said
to
myself
softly
in
a
low
voice.
I
went
downstairs
slowly
and
tried
to
walk
casually
into
the
kitchen.
As
I
was
walking
towards
the
back
door,
mum
asked
without
looking
up
from
her
“dish-washing”,
“Where
are
you
going?”
I
answered
back
without
hesitation,
“I
am
going
to
the
garden
to
play.”
After
I
got
out
of
the
kitchen,
I
breathed
a
sign
of
relief.
My
plan
had
worked
out
fine
so
far.
I
climbed
the
fence
and
jumped
onto
the
muddy
field
next
to
my
house
and
started
running
towards
the
bus
stop
at
top
speed.
After
half
an
hour
I
was
at
the
beach
scanning
the
crowd
for
my
friends,
Joyce
and
Loren.
Two
young
men
were
racing
in
the
canoes
(独木舟).
After
a
while,
I
saw
them
near
a
coconut
tree.
Iran
towards
them
and
got
into
my
swimming
trunk
(游泳裤).
For
about
an
hour,
we
played
volleyball
happily.
Suddenly,
Loren
hit
the
ball
too
hard
and
the
ball
fell
into
the
sea.
Just
as
Loren
was
going
to
pick
up
the
ball,
the
tide
came
in
and
carried
the
ball
further
and
further
away
from
the
shore.
I
wanted
to
show
off
my
swimming
skills
so
I
declared
to
help
get
the
ball
for
them.
I
dived
into
the
water
and
started
swimming
at
a
steady
pace.
After
swimming
for
about
ten
minutes,
I
became
tired
but
when
I
saw
that
the
ball
was
only
a
few
feet
away
from
me,
I
put
in
an
extra
burst
of
speed.
However,
just
as
I
was
going
to
get
the
ball,
a
very
strong
current
swept
the
ball
further
away
from
me.
At
that
moment,
a
string
of
weed
(海草)tangled
(缠绕)
up
with
my
feet
and
I
could
not
swim
properly.
I
struggled
to
keep
afloat
but
it
was
no
use.
“If
I
had
listened
to
my
parents,
this
would
never
have
happened,”I
thought
silently.
注意:
1.
所续写的短文词数应为
150
左右;
2.
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph
1
Finally,
after
struggling
for
a
minute
or
two,
I
still
got
pulled
underwater.
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Paragraph
2
When
I
woke
up,
I
was
in
an
empty
room
lying
on
a
bed.
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【答案】
Paragraph
1
Finally,
after
struggling
For
a
minute
or
two,
I
still
got
putted
underwater.
I
told
myself
I
should
never
give
up.
Then
I
pulled
the
weed
again
with
great
efforts.
The
weed
finally
broke.
I
swam
back
to
the
surface
to
take
a
deep
breath.
I
saw
two
young
men
in
canoes,
racing
each
other.
I
was
exhausted
and
shouted
for
help.
The
two
men
saw
me
and
raced
towards
me.
By
the
time
they
reached
me,
I
had
been
already
unconscious.
Paragraph
2
When
I
woke
up,
I
was
in
an
empty
room
lying
on
a
bed.
It
was
not
until
a
doctor
came
into
the
room
that
I
realized
that
I
was
in
a
hospital.
Joyce
and
Loren
told
me
the
two
young
men
brought
me
to
the
shore
and
sent
me
to
the
hospital.
After
a
few
minutes,
my
parents
with
half
angry
and
half
worried
faces
walked
in.
My
parents
scolded
me
for
running
out
of
the
house
secretly
but
were
also
glad
that
I
was
not
seriously
injured.
I
will
never
forget
that
terrifying
experience.
Neither
will
I
ever
want
to
show
off
again.
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是作者瞒着父母去海滩游玩，当他们打排球时不小心把球打到水里，作者为了炫耀自己的游泳技能潜入水中去捞球，但被海草缠住，后来住进医院的故事。作者从来不会忘记那次可怕的经历，并且再也不炫耀自己。
【详解】
1.第一段给出的首句是Finally,
after
struggling
for
a
minute
or
two,
I
still
got
pulled
underwater.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“我告诉自己我不应该放弃。然后我又使劲地拔了起来。”入手扩展开去，——无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2.第二段所给首句When
I
woke
up,
I
was
in
an
empty
room
lying
on
a
bed.这一句呼应前文，紧接着可以从“直到一位医生走进房间，我才意识到我是在医院里。”入手续写。
【点睛】
这是一篇续写。段与段之间衔接紧密，句与句之间层层相扣，同时文中使用高级句子。I
told
myself
I
should
never
give
up.句中使用宾语从句；I
saw
two
young
men
in
canoes,
racing
each
other.现在分词作伴随状语；When
I
woke
up,
I
was
in
an
empty
room
lying
on
a
bed.句中使用when引导的时间状语从句；It
was
not
until
a
doctor
came
into
the
room
that
I
realized
that
I
was
in
a
hospital.句中使用强调句型；Neither
will
I
ever
want
to
show
off
again.句中使用部分倒装。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Retirement
is
the
point
where
a
person
stops
employment
completely.
The
“standard”
retirement
age
varies
from
country
to
country,
but
it
is
generally
between
50
and
70,
according
to
the
latest
statistics,
2011.
However,
for
a
long
time,
people
have
got
into
an
argument
about
whether
the
age
of
retirement
should
be
increased
or
reduced
in
their
own
countries.
There
are
several
arguments
for
allowing
older
people
to
continue
working
as
long
as
they
are
able.
Many
people
think
that
older
employees
have
a
large
amount
of
knowledge
and
experience
which
can
be
lost
to
a
business
or
organization
if
they
are
made
to
retire.
Besides,
older
employees
are
often
extremely
faithful
employees
and
are
more
willing
to
implement
(执行)
company
policies
than
the
young.
A
more
important
Point
is
regarding
the
attitudes
in
society
to
old
people.
To
force
someone
to
resign
or
retire
at
60
or
65
indicates
that
the
society
does
not
value
the
input
of
these
people
and
that
practically
their
useful
life
is
over.
Allowing
old
people
to
work
indefinitely
(无限地),
however,
is
not
always
a
good
policy.
Some
people
took
the
strong
view
that
age
alone
is
no
guarantee
of
ability.
Many
young
employees
have
more
experience
or
skills
than
older
staff,
who
may
have
been
stuck
in
one
area
for
most
of
their
working
lives.
Having
compulsory
(强制性的)
retirement
allows
new
ideas
in
an
organization.
On
the
other
hand,
older
people
should
be
rewarded
by
society
for
their
life’s
labor
by
being
given
generous
pensions
(退休金)
and
the
freedom
to
enjoy
leisure.
They
can
have
time
to
do
whatever
they
like,
that
is,
they
can
have
their
own
plans
or
roles
and
achieve
their
retirement
goals.
With
many
young
people
unemployed
or
frustrated
in
low-level
positions,
there
are
often
calls
to
compulsorily
retire
older
workers.
However,
this
can
affect
the
older
individual’s
freedom—and
right—to
work.
In
my
opinion,
giving
workers
more
choices
over
their
retirement
age
will
benefit
both
society
and
the
individual.
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【答案】
There
has
been
an
ongoing
debate
about
the
proper
retirement
age(要点1).
Some
argue
that
older
people
should
be
allowed
to
delay
retirement
considering
their
ability
and
loyalty
as
well
as
recognition
from
society(要点2).
However,
opponents
advocate
compulsory
retirement
to
make
room
for
young
innovative
employees
and
reward
older
people
for
their
work
(要点3).
The
writer
claims
that
it
is
beneficial
to
society
and
individuals
to
provide
more
options
about
retirement
age(要点4).
(70
words)
【分析】
文章的主要结构为总-分-总。主要讲述了对提高或降低退休年龄的问题的争论。
【详解】
第一段讲述对退休年龄有激烈的争论。可以用到的词汇或句型有：fierce
debate,
retirement
age等。第二段讲述允许老年人在力所能及的情况下继续工作的理由。可以用到的词汇或句式有：accumulate
a
wealth
of
experiences,
loyalty,
attitudes等。第三段主要讲允许老年人无限期地工作并不总是一个好政策。可以用到的词汇或句式有：new
ideas,
retirement
plan等。第四段讲了作者认为给老年人对退休与否的选择权对个人和社会都有好处。可以用到的词汇或句式有：be
beneficial
to,
freedom—and
right等。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
However,
to
allow
people
to
work
as
long
as
they
need
is
not
always
that
good.
然而，允许人们只要需要工作就一直工作并不总是那么好。动名词作主语。
[高分句型2]
Some
young
people
think
that
allowing
everyone
to
retire
early
means
that
there
will
be
more
jobs
for
18
year
olds
to
fill.
一些年轻人认为，允许每个人提前退休意味着18岁的人将有更多的工作可以填补。that引导宾语从句，there
will
be将会有……。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）34
安全须知+读后续写+概要写作
1．近几年全球地震频发。地震会造成包括房屋倒塌、人员伤亡等在内的一系列可怕后果。因此在发生地震时如何保护自己成为了一个重要的话题。请你以”How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。
内容要点:1.地震来临时不要慌张。如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、高压线等物。
2.如果在室内，要尽量躲在桌子等坚固家具下面，并注意保护好头部、颈部。
3.逃生时不要选择乘坐电梯。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How
to
Survive
in
an
Earthquake
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文,
根据所给情节进行续写,是之构成一个完整的故事。
“If
mum
finds
out
that
I'm
going
to
the
beach,
I'll
be
in
big
trouble.”
I
said
to
myself
softly
in
a
low
voice.
I
went
downstairs
slowly
and
tried
to
walk
casually
into
the
kitchen.
As
I
was
walking
towards
the
back
door,
mum
asked
without
looking
up
from
her
“dish-washing”,
“Where
are
you
going?”
I
answered
back
without
hesitation,
“I
am
going
to
the
garden
to
play.”
After
I
got
out
of
the
kitchen,
I
breathed
a
sign
of
relief.
My
plan
had
worked
out
fine
so
far.
I
climbed
the
fence
and
jumped
onto
the
muddy
field
next
to
my
house
and
started
running
towards
the
bus
stop
at
top
speed.
After
half
an
hour
I
was
at
the
beach
scanning
the
crowd
for
my
friends,
Joyce
and
Loren.
Two
young
men
were
racing
in
the
canoes
(独木舟).
After
a
while,
I
saw
them
near
a
coconut
tree.
Iran
towards
them
and
got
into
my
swimming
trunk
(游泳裤).
For
about
an
hour,
we
played
volleyball
happily.
Suddenly,
Loren
hit
the
ball
too
hard
and
the
ball
fell
into
the
sea.
Just
as
Loren
was
going
to
pick
up
the
ball,
the
tide
came
in
and
carried
the
ball
further
and
further
away
from
the
shore.
I
wanted
to
show
off
my
swimming
skills
so
I
declared
to
help
get
the
ball
for
them.
I
dived
into
the
water
and
started
swimming
at
a
steady
pace.
After
swimming
for
about
ten
minutes,
I
became
tired
but
when
I
saw
that
the
ball
was
only
a
few
feet
away
from
me,
I
put
in
an
extra
burst
of
speed.
However,
just
as
I
was
going
to
get
the
ball,
a
very
strong
current
swept
the
ball
further
away
from
me.
At
that
moment,
a
string
of
weed
(海草)tangled
(缠绕)
up
with
my
feet
and
I
could
not
swim
properly.
I
struggled
to
keep
afloat
but
it
was
no
use.
“If
I
had
listened
to
my
parents,
this
would
never
have
happened,”I
thought
silently.
注意:
1.
所续写的短文词数应为
150
左右;
2.
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph
1
Finally,
after
struggling
for
a
minute
or
two,
I
still
got
pulled
underwater.
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Paragraph
2
When
I
woke
up,
I
was
in
an
empty
room
lying
on
a
bed.
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3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Retirement
is
the
point
where
a
person
stops
employment
completely.
The
“standard”
retirement
age
varies
from
country
to
country,
but
it
is
generally
between
50
and
70,
according
to
the
latest
statistics,
2011.
However,
for
a
long
time,
people
have
got
into
an
argument
about
whether
the
age
of
retirement
should
be
increased
or
reduced
in
their
own
countries.
There
are
several
arguments
for
allowing
older
people
to
continue
working
as
long
as
they
are
able.
Many
people
think
that
older
employees
have
a
large
amount
of
knowledge
and
experience
which
can
be
lost
to
a
business
or
organization
if
they
are
made
to
retire.
Besides,
older
employees
are
often
extremely
faithful
employees
and
are
more
willing
to
implement
(执行)
company
policies
than
the
young.
A
more
important
Point
is
regarding
the
attitudes
in
society
to
old
people.
To
force
someone
to
resign
or
retire
at
60
or
65
indicates
that
the
society
does
not
value
the
input
of
these
people
and
that
practically
their
useful
life
is
over.
Allowing
old
people
to
work
indefinitely
(无限地),
however,
is
not
always
a
good
policy.
Some
people
took
the
strong
view
that
age
alone
is
no
guarantee
of
ability.
Many
young
employees
have
more
experience
or
skills
than
older
staff,
who
may
have
been
stuck
in
one
area
for
most
of
their
working
lives.
Having
compulsory
(强制性的)
retirement
allows
new
ideas
in
an
organization.
On
the
other
hand,
older
people
should
be
rewarded
by
society
for
their
life’s
labor
by
being
given
generous
pensions
(退休金)
and
the
freedom
to
enjoy
leisure.
They
can
have
time
to
do
whatever
they
like,
that
is,
they
can
have
their
own
plans
or
roles
and
achieve
their
retirement
goals.
With
many
young
people
unemployed
or
frustrated
in
low-level
positions,
there
are
often
calls
to
compulsorily
retire
older
workers.
However,
this
can
affect
the
older
individual’s
freedom—and
right—to
work.
In
my
opinion,
giving
workers
more
choices
over
their
retirement
age
will
benefit
both
society
and
the
individual.
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