2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）30
介绍信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是李华，你在美国的笔友Jack写信告诉你他对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣。请给你的笔友Jack写一封信介绍端午节。信的具体内容包括：
1.
端午节的时间：农历5月5日；
2.
端午节纪念的对象的是爱国诗人屈原；
3.
现在人们吃粽子、划龙舟庆祝节日；
4.
你对端午节的看法
参考词汇：端午节-Dragon
Boat
Festival
农历
Lunar
Year
粽子
zongzi
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【答案】
Dear
jack,
I
am
glad
to
receive
your
letter.
Knowing
that
you
are
interested
in
Dragon
Boat
Festival,
I
am
willing
to
introduce
something
about
it
to
you.
Dragon
Boat
Festival,
also
called
Duan
Wu
Festival,
is
celebrated
on
the
fifth
day
of
the
fifth
month
of
the
Chinese
Lunar
Year.
The
festival
was
created
in
honor
of
a
respectable
poet
in
ancient
China,
who
had
great
devotion
for
the
people
but
was
unfairly
treated
by
the
king
of
his
country.
Hopeless
and
angry,
he
threw
himself
into
the
Milo
River.
Nowadays,
people
in
China
observe
this
traditional
holiday
by
holding
dragon
boat
races
and
eating
zongzi.
In
my
opinion,
Dragon
Boat
Festival
is
one
of
the
most
important
holidays
in
China,
for
it
reminds
us
the
true
spirit
of
honesty
and
loyalty
of
our
ancestors.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给美国笔友Jack写信，给他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。
【详解】
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.
端午节的时间：农历5月5日；
2.
端午节纪念的对象的是爱国诗人屈原；
3.
现在人们吃粽子、划龙舟庆祝节日；
4.
你对端午节的看法
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
fall
on/
in
honor
of/
devote…to…/
in
one's
opinion/
remind
sb.
sth.
第三步：连词成句
1.
Dragon
Boat
Festival,
also
called
Duan
Wu
Festival,
falls
on
the
fifth
day
of
the
fifth
month
of
the
Chinese
Lunar
Year.
2.
The
festival
was
created
in
honor
of
a
respectable
poet
in
ancient
China,
who
had
great
devotion
for
the
people
but
was
unfairly
treated
by
the
king
of
his
country.
3.
Hopeless
and
angry,
he
threw
himself
into
the
Milo
River.
4.
Nowadays,
people
in
China
observe
this
traditional
holiday
by
holding
dragon
boat
races
and
eating
zongzi.
5.As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
Dragon
Boat
Festival
is
one
of
the
most
important
holidays
in
China,
for
it
reminds
us
the
true
spirit
of
honesty
and
loyalty
of
our
ancestors.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/
if/
though/
although…
定语从句连词：which/
that/
when/
where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：The
festival
was
created
in
honor
of
a
respectable
poet
in
ancient
China,
who
had
great
devotion
for
the
people
but
was
unfairly
treated
by
the
king
of
his
country.
中who引导非限制性定语从句；Hopeless
and
angry,
he
threw
himself
into
the
Milo
River.
使用了形容词作状语。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事
Many
years
ago,
there
was
a
king
who
often
thought,
“Nothing
good
can
come
to
a
nation
whose
people
only
complain
and
expect
others
to
solve
their
problems.”
One
day,
he
had
an
idea.
Early
one
morning,
the
king
disguised(伪装)
himself
and
went
to
a
local
village.
He
placed
a
large
stone
in
the
middle
of
the
main
street
and
hid
a
diamond
under
the
stone
.Then
he
hid
behind
a
huge
maple
tree
and
watched.
The
first
person
down
the
street
was
a
milkman
with
his
cart.
He
crashed
into
the
stone,
spilling
the
milk
everywhere.
“What
fool
put
this
stone
here?”he
shouted.
He
picked
himself
up
and
angrily
went
away.
After
a
while,
a
group
of
women
came
along,
each
balancing
a
pot
of
water
on
her
head.
One
woman
tripped
over
the
stone
and
her
water
pot
went
crashing
to
the
ground.
She
picked
herself
up
and
walked
away
in
tears.
Neither
she
nor
her
friends
thought
about
moving
the
stone
out
of
the
road.
The
king
watched
all
day
as
many
people
complained
about
the
stone,
but
he
found
nobody
making
an
attempt
to
move
it.
The
king
was
in
despair(绝望).
“Is
there
no
one
in
his
village
who
feels
any
responsibility
to
keep
their
neighbours
from
harm?”
注意:1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Just
then,
the
king
saw
a
young
boy
coming
along.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Just
then,
the
king
stepped
out
from
behind
the
tree.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Just
then,
the
king
saw
a
young
boy
coming
along.
He
was
the
son
of
a
local
farmer.
He
had
been
working
all
day
and
was
very
tired.
But
when
he
saw
the
stone,
he
said
to
himself,
“This
stone
is
a
danger
to
anyone
who
comes
down
the
street
after
dark.
I’ll
move
it
out
of
the
way.”
The
boy
pushed
the
stone
with
all
his
might.
After
a
great
deal
of
effort,
he
finally
succeeded
in
moving
it
to
the
side
of
the
street.
Imagine
his
surprise
when
he
saw
the
diamond
where
the
stone
had
been!
Just
then,
the
king
stepped
out
from
behind
the
tree.
“Oh
sir,”
the
boy
said,
“does
this
diamond
belong
to
you?
If
not,
we
surely
must
find
the
owner,
for
he
will
certainly
miss
it.”
The
king
said,
“My
dear,
the
diamond
is
mine.
I
put
it
in
the
road
and
moved
the
stone
over
it.
Now
the
diamond
is
yours,
because
you
are
the
only
person
who
has
learnt
the
lesson
I
wanted
to
teach
my
people.”
【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写。
【详解】
文章讲述了一个国王想通过一个测试了解他的臣民是否只是抱怨，指望别人来解决他们的问题。而非自己动手解决问题。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：就在这时，国王看到一个小男孩走过来。所以后文应该是描写这个男孩搬开挡在路上的石头。并且惊讶的发现了一颗国王放在那边的钻石。第二段开头是：就在这时，国王从树后走了出来。所以后文应该描写男孩本想和国王一起找到丢失钻石的主人。但国王告诉了真相并且将钻石送给他。
续写时注意本篇的基础时态为一般过去时，内容应符合逻辑。要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：如：定语从句：This
stone
is
a
danger
to
anyone
who
comes
down
the
street
after
dark.；原因状语从句：Now
the
diamond
is
yours,
because
you
are
the
only
person
who
has
learnt
the
lesson
I
wanted
to
teach
my
people等。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Choosing
the
right
college
can
be
a
difficult
task.
There
are
thousands
of
colleges
and
universities
for
you
to
choose
from
and
many
are
worthy
of
being
considered.
For
each
potential
college,
find
out
the
success
rate
of
students'
getting
their
jobs,
especially
those
related
to
your
majors.
Here
are
some
strategies（策略）for
you
to
make
the
right
choice.
Colleges
which
offer
practice
in
some
of
the
fields
are
worthy
of
your
attention.
It
can
provide
you
with
a
large
amount
of
information
on
job
panies
often
prefer
employees
that
perform
well.
Practice
gives
you
the
valuable
experience
and
necessary
opportunities.
Some
practical
skills
that
you
learn
will
really
prepare
yourself
for
the
certain
jobs.
Besides,
choosing
a
college
that
has
teacher
members
with
good
reputations
in
their
fields
can
also
be
very
useful
since
these
teacher
members
can
provide
you
with
steps
into
the
working
world
by
practice.
School
rankings
and
a
national
reputation
of
academic
success
are
often
the
important
factors（因素）for
your
potential
employers.
This
type
of
information
can
be
found
easily
on
the
Internet
and
in
magazines.
To
the
employers,
graduates
from
high
ranking
colleges
are
often
considered
more
reliable.
They
have
a
stronger
ability
to
learn
and
are
more
likely
to
create
wealth
for
the
company.
Sometimes
it
can
even
be
a
more
important
factor
in
looking
for
a
job
than
the
actual
quality
of
education
the
college
provides.
After
narrowing
down
your
choices
to
a
few
colleges,
it's
time
to
visit
them.
Taking
a
look
at
the
campus（校园）can
change
your
attitude
to
a
particular
school.
Plan
your
tour
and
then
do
some
research
on
your
own.
It
is
also
important
to
talk
to
as
many
students
as
you
can
and
find
out
if
earning
a
degree
from
the
school
is
helpful
in
getting
a
job.
Meanwhile,
you
can
speak
to
the
students
in
the
majors
you're
considering
to
know
what
the
courses
are
like,
what
you'll
learn,
and
what
your
expected
outcome
will
be.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Challenging
as
it
is
to
choose
an
ideal
college,
there’re
some
tips
that
may
help.
(要点1)
First,
colleges
that
provide
practice
and
have
distinguished
teachers
in
certain
fields
are
worth
considering.
(要点2)
Second,
it’s
advisable
to
search
for
academic
rankings
and
reputation,
which
your
future
employers
may
care
about.
(要点3)
After
you
have
candidates,
visit
them
and
enquire
more
of
related
students.
(要点4)
【分析】
这是一篇议论文，文章就如何选择一个好的大学给出几点建议。
【详解】
第一步：概括每个段落的大意
第一段主要说明了选择一个理想的大学是一个挑战，会影响到未来的工作，所以作者给出几点选择大学的建议。可以用Challenging
as
it
is
to
choose
an
ideal
college,
there’re
some
tips
that
may
help.表示。
第二段给出第一个建议，第一句就给出了主旨句子Colleges
which
offer
practice
in
some
of
the
fields
are
worthy
of
your
attention提供实践经验的大学值得考虑，后文又说到choosing
a
college
that
has
teacher
members
with
good
reputations
in
their
fields
can
also
be
very
useful，选择一个有好的老师，老师的名声不错的学校也是有用的。即colleges
that
provide
practice
and
have
distinguished
teachers
in
certain
fields
are
worth
considering.。
第三段给出第二个建议：School
rankings
and
a
national
reputation
of
academic
success
are
often
the
important
factors（因素）for
your
potential
employers.
学校的等级和学术成功通常也是潜在雇主考虑的重要因素。即Second,
it’s
advisable
to
search
for
academic
rankings
and
reputation,
which
your
future
employers
may
care
about.
第四段给出第三个建议：After
narrowing
down
your
choices
to
a
few
colleges,
it's
time
to
visit
them.
在缩小大学的选择时，是时候去参观大学了，后文接着说It
is
also
important
to
talk
to
as
many
students
as
you
can
and
find
out
if
earning
a
degree
from
the
school
is
helpful
in
getting
a
job.
和尽可能多的学生交流，弄清楚在学校获得学位是否有助于找工作，这也是很重要的。
即After
you
have
candidates,
visit
them
and
enquire
more
of
related
students.
第二步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）30
介绍信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是李华，你在美国的笔友Jack写信告诉你他对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣。请给你的笔友Jack写一封信介绍端午节。信的具体内容包括：
1.
端午节的时间：农历5月5日；
2.
端午节纪念的对象的是爱国诗人屈原；
3.
现在人们吃粽子、划龙舟庆祝节日；
4.
你对端午节的看法
参考词汇：端午节-Dragon
Boat
Festival
农历
Lunar
Year
粽子
zongzi
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事
Many
years
ago,
there
was
a
king
who
often
thought,
“Nothing
good
can
come
to
a
nation
whose
people
only
complain
and
expect
others
to
solve
their
problems.”
One
day,
he
had
an
idea.
Early
one
morning,
the
king
disguised(伪装)
himself
and
went
to
a
local
village.
He
placed
a
large
stone
in
the
middle
of
the
main
street
and
hid
a
diamond
under
the
stone
.Then
he
hid
behind
a
huge
maple
tree
and
watched.
The
first
person
down
the
street
was
a
milkman
with
his
cart.
He
crashed
into
the
stone,
spilling
the
milk
everywhere.
“What
fool
put
this
stone
here?”he
shouted.
He
picked
himself
up
and
angrily
went
away.
After
a
while,
a
group
of
women
came
along,
each
balancing
a
pot
of
water
on
her
head.
One
woman
tripped
over
the
stone
and
her
water
pot
went
crashing
to
the
ground.
She
picked
herself
up
and
walked
away
in
tears.
Neither
she
nor
her
friends
thought
about
moving
the
stone
out
of
the
road.
The
king
watched
all
day
as
many
people
complained
about
the
stone,
but
he
found
nobody
making
an
attempt
to
move
it.
The
king
was
in
despair(绝望).
“Is
there
no
one
in
his
village
who
feels
any
responsibility
to
keep
their
neighbours
from
harm?”
注意:1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Just
then,
the
king
saw
a
young
boy
coming
along.
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Paragraph
2:
Just
then,
the
king
stepped
out
from
behind
the
tree.
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3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Choosing
the
right
college
can
be
a
difficult
task.
There
are
thousands
of
colleges
and
universities
for
you
to
choose
from
and
many
are
worthy
of
being
considered.
For
each
potential
college,
find
out
the
success
rate
of
students'
getting
their
jobs,
especially
those
related
to
your
majors.
Here
are
some
strategies（策略）for
you
to
make
the
right
choice.
Colleges
which
offer
practice
in
some
of
the
fields
are
worthy
of
your
attention.
It
can
provide
you
with
a
large
amount
of
information
on
job
panies
often
prefer
employees
that
perform
well.
Practice
gives
you
the
valuable
experience
and
necessary
opportunities.
Some
practical
skills
that
you
learn
will
really
prepare
yourself
for
the
certain
jobs.
Besides,
choosing
a
college
that
has
teacher
members
with
good
reputations
in
their
fields
can
also
be
very
useful
since
these
teacher
members
can
provide
you
with
steps
into
the
working
world
by
practice.
School
rankings
and
a
national
reputation
of
academic
success
are
often
the
important
factors（因素）for
your
potential
employers.
This
type
of
information
can
be
found
easily
on
the
Internet
and
in
magazines.
To
the
employers,
graduates
from
high
ranking
colleges
are
often
considered
more
reliable.
They
have
a
stronger
ability
to
learn
and
are
more
likely
to
create
wealth
for
the
company.
Sometimes
it
can
even
be
a
more
important
factor
in
looking
for
a
job
than
the
actual
quality
of
education
the
college
provides.
After
narrowing
down
your
choices
to
a
few
colleges,
it's
time
to
visit
them.
Taking
a
look
at
the
campus（校园）can
change
your
attitude
to
a
particular
school.
Plan
your
tour
and
then
do
some
research
on
your
own.
It
is
also
important
to
talk
to
as
many
students
as
you
can
and
find
out
if
earning
a
degree
from
the
school
is
helpful
in
getting
a
job.
Meanwhile,
you
can
speak
to
the
students
in
the
majors
you're
considering
to
know
what
the
courses
are
like,
what
you'll
learn,
and
what
your
expected
outcome
will
be.
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