2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）28
告知信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，受疫情（pandemic）影响，学校美术俱乐部的活动不能在原教室进行，改为上一节网课。请写信通知你的英国同学Peter。内容包括：
1.上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00；
2.登录软件：DingTalk
App；
3.内容：卡通画；
4.课前准备。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michelle
one
day
found
herself
the
unexpected
owner
of
fifteen
dollars.
It
seemed
to
her
a
very
large
amount
of
money.
For
a
day
or
two
she
walked
around
in
a
dreamy
state
as
she
thought
about
her
choices.
Her
daughter
Mary
was
wearing
worn
shoes
and
needed
new
ones.
She
would
buy
cloth
for
new
shirts
for
the
boys.
Her
daughter
Jane
should
have
another
dress.
And
still
there
would
be
enough
left
for
new
stockings
for
her
children.
The
idea
about
how
to
spend
the
dollars
made
her
restless
with
excitement.
On
the
day
she
planned
to
go
shopping
with
the
money,
she
ate
a
light
meal---
no!
Between
getting
the
children
fed
and
the
house
cleaned,
and
preparing
herself
to
go
shopping,
she
forgot
to
eat
at
all!
When
she
arrived
at
the
large
department
store,
she
spotted
a
pile
of
silk
stockings
at
the
entrance.
A
sign
nearby
announced
that
they
had
been
reduced
in
price.
A
young
girl
behind
the
counter
asked
her
if
she
wished
to
examine
the
silky
leg
coverings.
She
smiled
as
if
she
had
been
asked
to
inspect
diamond
jewelry,
and
started
to
feel
the
soft,
expensive
items.
Michelle
picked
up
a
black
pair
and
looked
at
them
closely.
Two
red
marks
suddenly
showed
on
her
pale
face.
She
looked
up
at
the
shop
girl
and
said
proudly,
“Well,
I
will
buy
this
pair.”
Michelle
changed
her
cotton
stockings
for
the
new
silk
ones
in
the
ladies’
rest
area.
She
had
let
herself
be
controlled
by
some
machine-like
force
that
directed
her
actions
and
freed
her
of
responsibility.
How
good
was
the
touch
of
the
silk
on
her
skin!
Then
she
put
her
shoes
back
on
and
put
her
old
stockings
into
her
bag.
Next,
she
went
to
the
shoe
department,
where
she
tried
on
a
pair
of
new
boots.
Her
foot
and
ankle
looked
lovely.
She
could
not
believe
that
they
were
a
part
of
herself.
注意：1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
After
buying
a
pair
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
department.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
She
was
about
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The
term
“helicopter（直升机）
parents”
is
a
description
of
parents
who
are
hovering(盘旋)
over
their
children
in
a
state
of
extreme
concern.
They
always
show
up
to
solve
their
children’s
problems,
protect
them
from
real
or
imagined
harm,
resolve
stressful
situations,
offer
advice
and
get
them
out
of
trouble,
even
if
they
behave
wrongly.
Although
out
of
love
and
concern,
it
can
have
harmful
effects
on
their
children’s
emotional
development
and
future
independence.
Children
learn
through
their
mistakes.
But
if
you
intervene(干涉，介入)
at
first
sign
of
struggle
and
finish
your
child’s
homework,
he’ll
miss
out
on
valuable
learning
opportunities.
You’re
sending
him
the
message
that
he
needs
to
be
perfect
and
failure
is
not
an
option;
otherwise
you
wouldn’t
always
take
over
from
him.
By
constantly
rescuing
your
child
from
stressful
situations,
you’re
sending
him
a
message
that
you
don’t
believe
he’s
able
to
take
care
of
himself.
Children
develop
self-esteem(自尊)
by
learning
how
to
complete
challenges
on
their
own.
If
you
are
always
intervening,
he
will
miss
this
vital
stage
in
his
growth.
As
a
result,
your
child
may
lack
the
confidence
necessary
to
do
well
in
school,
pursuing
hobbies
and
interests,
and
developing
friendships.
If
you’re
always
taking
care
of
everything
for
your
child,
it’ll
be
more
difficult
for
him
to
become
independent.
As
an
adult,
he
might
find
it
hard
to
take
care
of
himself,
because
he
has
never
developed
coping
skills
to
deal
with
life’s
challenges.
He
might
suffer
from
irrational(不理智的)
fears,
anxiety
and
depression,
which
could
lead
him
to
drop
out
of
college
or
frequently
change
jobs,
according
to
Dr
Michele
Borba.
Instead
of
developing
healthy
relationships,
he
might
seek
a
partner
who
will
take
care
of
or
control
him,
as
his
parents
did.
You
can
help
your
child
become
more
independent
by
allowing
him
to
complete
tasks
and
challenges
on
his
own
without
your
intervention.
Even
if
he
fails
at
first,
don’t
interfere(干涉，干预)
—
encourage
him
to
start
again.
Show
that
you
have
faith
in
his
abilities
to
succeed
without
your
help.
Allow
him
to
learn
natural
consequences（后果）.
Even
small
things
can
help
him
become
more
independent—
making
his
own
bed,
preparing
his
own
lunch,
shopping
for
his
own
clothes
and
doing
homework
without
your
help.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）28
告知信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，受疫情（pandemic）影响，学校美术俱乐部的活动不能在原教室进行，改为上一节网课。请写信通知你的英国同学Peter。内容包括：
1.上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00；
2.登录软件：DingTalk
App；
3.内容：卡通画；
4.课前准备。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Peter,
How
are
you
these
days?
I
am
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
our
art
class.
Because
of
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom
as
usual.
Instead,
we
will
have
an
online
class
by
DingTalk
App.
The
class
will
begin
at
9:00
am
on
July
21st
.
It
will
last
about
one
hour,
during
which
we
will
learn
to
draw
our
favorite
cartoon
figures.
To
make
good
preparations
for
the
online
class,
you
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance
and
log
on
at
least
five
minutes
before
the
class.
Hope
everything
goes
well!
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步：
审题：信件
通知你的英国同学Peter上网课
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分说明网课具体安排，
第三部分祝愿一切安好。
要点：
1.
说明写信目的：告知美术俱乐部上课事项
2．说明网课具体安排
①上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00
②登录软件：DingTalk
App
③内容：绘画卡通画
④课前准备：提前下载DingTalk
App，上课前5分钟必须登陆
3．祝愿一切安好
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
tell
sb.
about;
organize
activities;
as
usual;
have
an
online
class;
last
;
cartoon
figures;
make
preparations
for
;be
required
to
do…;
in
advance
;
log
on
第三步：连词成句
(1)I
am
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
our
art
class.
(2)
Because
of
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom.
(3)
We
will
have
an
online
class
by
DingTalk
App.
(4)The
class
will
begin
at
9:00
am
on
July
21st
.
(5)
It
will
last
about
one
hour.
(6)
During
this
period,
we
will
learn
to
draw
our
favorite
cartoon
figures.
(7)
You
have
to
make
good
preparations
for
the
online
class.
(8)
You
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance,
(9)
You
log
on
at
least
five
minutes
before
the
class.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用多种句式表达“由于/因为……”
(2)Because
of
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom.
→Due
to
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom.
→As
a
result
of
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom.
→
The
pandemic
has
broken
out.
As
a
result,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom.
将第二个句子改写成定语从句，连接下面两个句子
(5)
It
will
last
about
one
hour.
(6)
During
this
period,
we
will
learn
to
draw
our
favorite
cartoon
figures.
→It
will
last
about
one
hour,
during
which
we
will
learn
to
draw
our
favorite
cartoon
figures.
将第一个句子作目的状语，连接下面两个句子
(7)
You
have
to
make
good
preparations
for
the
online
class.
(8)
You
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance,
→To
make
good
preparations
for
the
online
class,
you
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance.
→In
order
to
make
good
preparations
for
the
online
class,
you
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如
tell
sb.
about
;
organize
activities
;
as
usual;
have
an
online
class;
make
preparations
for;be
required
to
do…;
in
advance;
log
on
等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如because
of引导的原因状语的运用Because
of
the
pandemic,
we
can’t
organize
any
activities
in
our
former
classroom
as
usual；非限制性定语从句的运用It
will
last
about
one
hour,
during
which
we
will
learn
to
draw
our
favorite
cartoon
figures；被动语态的运用，使句式多变you
are
required
to
download
DingTalk
App
on
your
cellphone
in
advance等。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michelle
one
day
found
herself
the
unexpected
owner
of
fifteen
dollars.
It
seemed
to
her
a
very
large
amount
of
money.
For
a
day
or
two
she
walked
around
in
a
dreamy
state
as
she
thought
about
her
choices.
Her
daughter
Mary
was
wearing
worn
shoes
and
needed
new
ones.
She
would
buy
cloth
for
new
shirts
for
the
boys.
Her
daughter
Jane
should
have
another
dress.
And
still
there
would
be
enough
left
for
new
stockings
for
her
children.
The
idea
about
how
to
spend
the
dollars
made
her
restless
with
excitement.
On
the
day
she
planned
to
go
shopping
with
the
money,
she
ate
a
light
meal---
no!
Between
getting
the
children
fed
and
the
house
cleaned,
and
preparing
herself
to
go
shopping,
she
forgot
to
eat
at
all!
When
she
arrived
at
the
large
department
store,
she
spotted
a
pile
of
silk
stockings
at
the
entrance.
A
sign
nearby
announced
that
they
had
been
reduced
in
price.
A
young
girl
behind
the
counter
asked
her
if
she
wished
to
examine
the
silky
leg
coverings.
She
smiled
as
if
she
had
been
asked
to
inspect
diamond
jewelry,
and
started
to
feel
the
soft,
expensive
items.
Michelle
picked
up
a
black
pair
and
looked
at
them
closely.
Two
red
marks
suddenly
showed
on
her
pale
face.
She
looked
up
at
the
shop
girl
and
said
proudly,
“Well,
I
will
buy
this
pair.”
Michelle
changed
her
cotton
stockings
for
the
new
silk
ones
in
the
ladies’
rest
area.
She
had
let
herself
be
controlled
by
some
machine-like
force
that
directed
her
actions
and
freed
her
of
responsibility.
How
good
was
the
touch
of
the
silk
on
her
skin!
Then
she
put
her
shoes
back
on
and
put
her
old
stockings
into
her
bag.
Next,
she
went
to
the
shoe
department,
where
she
tried
on
a
pair
of
new
boots.
Her
foot
and
ankle
looked
lovely.
She
could
not
believe
that
they
were
a
part
of
herself.
注意：1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
After
buying
a
pair
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
department.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
She
was
about
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph
1:
After
buying
a
pair
of
new
boots,
she
walked
into
the
clothing
ing
to
a
dressing
mirror,
looking
at
herself
in
the
mirror,
“Won’t
I
look
more
beautiful
if
my
shoe
matches
a
perfect
dress
on
my
body?”
thought
Michelle.
She
waved
to
the
salesgirl
of
the
department
and
asked
her
whether
she
could
try
on
the
fashionable
dress
styles.
Her
request
was
approved,
Michelle
kept
trying
on.
One
dress
after
another
tried
on,
she
put
them
into
her
shopping
cart
fondly.
Paragraph
2:
She
was
about
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something.
“Oh,
My
God!
I
forgot
all
about
my
kids!”
yelled
Michelle,
starting
to
blame
herself.
“Excuse
me,
salesgirl,
would
you
be
so
kind
as
to
let
me
put
back
all
I
had
chosen,
for
I
had
intended
to
buy
my
daughter
Mary
a
new
pair
of
shoes,
boy’s
new
shirts
and
all
of
them
new
stockings?
I
must
have
lost
my
head!”
A
sense
of
responsibility
of
caring
about
her
kids
drove
her
to
think
of
the
right
idea
where
the
money
should
go.
【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写。
【详解】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲的是Michelle太太意外得到15美元，非常高兴。想着给女儿和儿子们买鞋子和衬衫，结果在百货公司试穿衣服时逐渐忘记了自己要给孩子们买东西。最后退还了购物车里所有的衣服的故事。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：买了一双新靴子后，她走进了服装部。这一段的关键词是“the
clothing
department(服装部)”。说明Michelle后来去了服装部。第一段应当围绕她在服装部所发生的事情展开。第二段开头是：她正要离开商店，这时一个孩子跑来跑去让她想起了一件事。这一段应该围绕的“kid”展开。Michelle想到了要给孩子买东西后，退掉了购物车她所选的东西。她知道她要把钱花在哪里。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：宾语从句：She
waved
to
the
salesgirl
of
the
department
and
asked
her
whether
she
could
try
on
the
fashionable
dress
styles；时间状语从句：She
was
about
to
leave
the
store
when
a
kid
running
around
reminded
her
of
something
等。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The
term
“helicopter（直升机）
parents”
is
a
description
of
parents
who
are
hovering(盘旋)
over
their
children
in
a
state
of
extreme
concern.
They
always
show
up
to
solve
their
children’s
problems,
protect
them
from
real
or
imagined
harm,
resolve
stressful
situations,
offer
advice
and
get
them
out
of
trouble,
even
if
they
behave
wrongly.
Although
out
of
love
and
concern,
it
can
have
harmful
effects
on
their
children’s
emotional
development
and
future
independence.
Children
learn
through
their
mistakes.
But
if
you
intervene(干涉，介入)
at
first
sign
of
struggle
and
finish
your
child’s
homework,
he’ll
miss
out
on
valuable
learning
opportunities.
You’re
sending
him
the
message
that
he
needs
to
be
perfect
and
failure
is
not
an
option;
otherwise
you
wouldn’t
always
take
over
from
him.
By
constantly
rescuing
your
child
from
stressful
situations,
you’re
sending
him
a
message
that
you
don’t
believe
he’s
able
to
take
care
of
himself.
Children
develop
self-esteem(自尊)
by
learning
how
to
complete
challenges
on
their
own.
If
you
are
always
intervening,
he
will
miss
this
vital
stage
in
his
growth.
As
a
result,
your
child
may
lack
the
confidence
necessary
to
do
well
in
school,
pursuing
hobbies
and
interests,
and
developing
friendships.
If
you’re
always
taking
care
of
everything
for
your
child,
it’ll
be
more
difficult
for
him
to
become
independent.
As
an
adult,
he
might
find
it
hard
to
take
care
of
himself,
because
he
has
never
developed
coping
skills
to
deal
with
life’s
challenges.
He
might
suffer
from
irrational(不理智的)
fears,
anxiety
and
depression,
which
could
lead
him
to
drop
out
of
college
or
frequently
change
jobs,
according
to
Dr
Michele
Borba.
Instead
of
developing
healthy
relationships,
he
might
seek
a
partner
who
will
take
care
of
or
control
him,
as
his
parents
did.
You
can
help
your
child
become
more
independent
by
allowing
him
to
complete
tasks
and
challenges
on
his
own
without
your
intervention.
Even
if
he
fails
at
first,
don’t
interfere(干涉，干预)
—
encourage
him
to
start
again.
Show
that
you
have
faith
in
his
abilities
to
succeed
without
your
help.
Allow
him
to
learn
natural
consequences（后果）.
Even
small
things
can
help
him
become
more
independent—
making
his
own
bed,
preparing
his
own
lunch,
shopping
for
his
own
clothes
and
doing
homework
without
your
help.
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【答案】
"Helicopter
parents",
parents
getting
deeply
involved
in
children's
life,
actually
do
big
harm
to
children's
growth
.Under
over-protection,
children
miss
the
lessons
taught
by
failures
and
mistakes,fail
to
build
up
their
self-confidence
and
become
weak
in
competence
and
emotions,
which
consequently
makes
it
hard
for
them
to
face
real
life
challenges.Therefore,
parents
should
learn
to
let
go
and
encourage
children
to
be
independent,
staring
from
small
things.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概述写作。
【详解】
读完所给文章后用不多于60个词总结文章要点，要用自己的语言，不能用文章的原句。这是一篇说明文，文章说明了家长教育孩子的一种方式----直升机式父母，并提出这种教育方式的害处，劝说家长不要做直升机式父母。
（1）确定体裁，本文是说明文。明确主题（"Helicopter
parents"）及结构。
（2）划主题句，找关键信息。这篇概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。本文各段主题句是：
1.
Although
out
of
love
and
concern,
it
can
have
harmful
effects
on
their
children’s
emotional
development
and
future
independence.
2.
Children
learn
through
their
mistakes.
But
if
you
intervene(干涉，介入)
at
first
sign
of
struggle
and
finish
your
child’s
homework,
he’ll
miss
out
on
valuable
learning
opportunities.
3.
You’re
sending
him
the
message
that
he
needs
to
be
perfect
and
failure
is
not
an
option;
otherwise
you
wouldn’t
always
take
over
from
him.
4.
By
constantly
rescuing
your
child
from
stressful
situations,
you’re
sending
him
a
message
that
you
don’t
believe
he’s
able
to
take
care
of
himself.
5.
If
you’re
always
taking
care
of
everything
for
your
child,
it’ll
be
more
difficult
for
him
to
become
independent.
6.
You
can
help
your
child
become
more
independent
by
allowing
him
to
complete
tasks
and
challenges
on
his
own
without
your
intervention.
(3)改写。注意要点之间的衍接，要用适当的关联词语要通全文。
(4)计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
从范文中可以看出作者对原文要点的理解正确并呈现完整；应用语法结构和词汇准确；上下文连贯；要点表达独立；完全使用了自己的语言，语法结构准确，词汇应用丰富；所写内容与所提供内容密切相关，无文章原句。
