2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）27
著作推介+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，上个月过生日时，你的父母送给你一本书作为生日礼物。阅读之后，你觉得这本书非常适合青少年朋友阅读。请你以“My
favorite
book”为题写一篇短文向你全班同学推荐该书。
内容要点：
1.书的基本信息；
2.书的大概内容；
3.你的推荐理由；
4.你的阅读观念。
注意：
1.词数80个单词左右；
2.
开头和结尾已给出，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．不许出现暴露考生信息的任何记号，包括真实的人名校名。
My
favorite
book
Dear
class:
I’d
like
to
recommend(推荐)
a
good
book
for
you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Have
a
happy
reading
!
Thank
you
!
2．阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Diane
Ray
was
completely
self-centred
and
very
spoilt(溺爱的).
Her
parents
gave
her
everything
that
she
wanted,
knowing
that
she
would
throw
a
temper
tantrum(耍小孩脾气)
if
they
did
not
satisfy
her
desire.
She
would
scream(尖叫)
and
lie
on
the
floor
drumming
her
heels.
Finally
her
parents
always
gave
in.
That
was
why
she
was
alone
on
the
beach,
wearing
an
expensive
swimsuit.
It
had
taken
a
big
tantrum
to
get
her
parents
to
buy
it
for
her.
They
were
back
at
the
beach-house,
recovering
from
the
tantrum
she
had
thrown
when
they
told
her
that
it
was
too
dangerous
to
go
diving
alone.
“Dangerous?
”
she
had
said.
“You
just
don’t
want
me
to
have
fun.
I’m
going
and
if
you
try
to
stop
me,
I’ll
scream.”
“What
are
you
doing?”
a
voice
asked.
Diane
jumped
and
looked
around.
She
did
not
know
that
the
man
was
there
until
he
spoke.
“I’m
going
to
dive,”
she
answered
coldly.
“You
shouldn’t
swim
today,”
the
man
advised.
“There
is
a
storm(风暴)
coming
up.”
“You
should
mind
your
own
business!”
Diane
replied
and
walked
into
the
gentle
waves.
“If
you
go
out
there
you’ll
be
sorry,”
the
man
called
after
her.
But
she
did
not
want
to
reply.
Diane
slipped
into
the
water
and
dived
happily
until
white
waves
began
rolling
in
and
it
became
harder
to
swim
against
the
current(水流).
Sea
water
hit
against
her
face,
making
it
difficult
to
breathe.
Oh,
why
did
I
not
listen
to
the
advice?
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Frightened,
she
began
to
scream.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After
Diane
closed
her
bedroom’s
door,
she
was
lost
in
thought.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的概要。
Robert,
an
11-year-old
boy,
saw
something
special
in
a
shop
window
that
set
his
heart
racing.
But
the
price-five
dollars-was
too
much
for
him.
Five
dollars
would
be
almost
a
week's
expense
for
his
family,
so
Robert
couldn't
ask
them
for
the
money.
However,
Robert
went
inside
the
shop
and
asked
if
the
shopkeeper
could
keep
it
for
him.
Luckily,
the
shopkeeper
promised
to
help.
However,
it
was
hard
to
find
a
part-time
job
for
a
primary
school
student
like
him.
After
thinking
about
it
for
two
weeks,
Robert
decided
to
make
money
by
collecting
and
selling
plastic
bottles.
Every
day
Robert
dropped
his
coins
inside
a
rusty
soda
tin
and
hid
it
in
a
secret
corner.
During
the
summer
vacation,
Robert
kept
to
his
secret
task
and
diligently
searched
for
his
secret
treasures
while
other
boys
were
playing.
Although
he
was
often
exhausted
and
hungry,
the
thought
of
the
object
in
the
shop
window
inspired
him.
Sometimes
his
mother
would
ask
him
what
he
was
doing,
but
he
always
told
a
white
lie,
saying
he
was
playing.
After
working
for
almost
a
whole
year,
he
finally
saved
enough
money.
With
all
the
money
in
his
tin
can,
he
said
to
the
shopkeeper
excitedly,
"I've
got
enough
money."
That
day
was
Mother's
Day.
The
moment
he
got
his
gift,
he
raced
home
and
placed
a
small
box
in
his
mother's
wrinkled
hand.
It
was
a
jewel
box,
in
which
was
a
heart-shaped
necklace
with
a
note
"To
my
dear
Mum".
The
mother
picked
it
up,
tears
rolling
down
her
face.
All
her
life
she
had
no
jewellery
except
her
wedding
ring.
Speechless,
she
smiled
and
held
her
son
into
her
arms.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）27
著作推介+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，上个月过生日时，你的父母送给你一本书作为生日礼物。阅读之后，你觉得这本书非常适合青少年朋友阅读。请你以“My
favorite
book”为题写一篇短文向你全班同学推荐该书。
内容要点：
1.书的基本信息；
2.书的大概内容；
3.你的推荐理由；
4.你的阅读观念。
注意：
1.词数80个单词左右；
2.
开头和结尾已给出，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．不许出现暴露考生信息的任何记号，包括真实的人名校名。
My
favorite
book
Dear
class:
I’d
like
to
recommend(推荐)
a
good
book
for
you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Have
a
happy
reading
!
Thank
you
!
【答案】
My
favorite
book
Dear
class:
I’d
like
to
recommend(推荐)
a
good
book
for
you.
My
favorite
book
is
The
Old
and
the
Sea,
written
by
an
American
writer
Ernest
Hemingway.
This
book
tells
about
a
fisherman
who
is
lucky
enough
to
catch
a
huge
fish
at
sea,
but
finds
it
hard
to
take
it
home.
On
the
way
back,
he
has
to
fight
against
the
fish,
and
the
sea
as
well.
The
reason
why
I
recommend
this
book
is
that
the
story
tells
us
that
we
never
give
up
when
meeting
with
difficulties.
I
still
remember
the
well-known
sentence
from
the
book:
Man
is
not
made
for
defeat.
This
tells
us
that
nothing
seems
terrible
as
long
as
we
have
a
strong
will
and
a
brave
heart.
Have
a
happy
reading
!
Thank
you
!
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，上个月过生日时，你的父母送给你一本书作为生日礼物。阅读之后，你觉得这本书非常适合青少年朋友阅读。请你以“My
favorite
book”为题写一篇短文向你全班同学推荐该书。内容要点：1.书的基本信息；2.书的大概内容；3.你的推荐理由；4.你的阅读观念。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be
lucky
to，enough
to
do，give
up，On
the
way
back，as
well，as
long
as，等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如My
favorite
book
is
The
Old
and
the
Sea,
written
by
an
American
writer
Ernest
Hemingway.运用了非谓语动词；This
book
tells
about
a
fisherman
who
is
lucky
enough
to
catch
a
huge
fish
at
sea,
but
finds
it
hard
to
take
it
home.运用定语从句；The
reason
why
I
recommend
this
book
is
that
the
story
tells
us
that
we
never
give
up
when
meeting
with
difficulties.运用了定语从句、表语从句和宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Diane
Ray
was
completely
self-centred
and
very
spoilt(溺爱的).
Her
parents
gave
her
everything
that
she
wanted,
knowing
that
she
would
throw
a
temper
tantrum(耍小孩脾气)
if
they
did
not
satisfy
her
desire.
She
would
scream(尖叫)
and
lie
on
the
floor
drumming
her
heels.
Finally
her
parents
always
gave
in.
That
was
why
she
was
alone
on
the
beach,
wearing
an
expensive
swimsuit.
It
had
taken
a
big
tantrum
to
get
her
parents
to
buy
it
for
her.
They
were
back
at
the
beach-house,
recovering
from
the
tantrum
she
had
thrown
when
they
told
her
that
it
was
too
dangerous
to
go
diving
alone.
“Dangerous?
”
she
had
said.
“You
just
don’t
want
me
to
have
fun.
I’m
going
and
if
you
try
to
stop
me,
I’ll
scream.”
“What
are
you
doing?”
a
voice
asked.
Diane
jumped
and
looked
around.
She
did
not
know
that
the
man
was
there
until
he
spoke.
“I’m
going
to
dive,”
she
answered
coldly.
“You
shouldn’t
swim
today,”
the
man
advised.
“There
is
a
storm(风暴)
coming
up.”
“You
should
mind
your
own
business!”
Diane
replied
and
walked
into
the
gentle
waves.
“If
you
go
out
there
you’ll
be
sorry,”
the
man
called
after
her.
But
she
did
not
want
to
reply.
Diane
slipped
into
the
water
and
dived
happily
until
white
waves
began
rolling
in
and
it
became
harder
to
swim
against
the
current(水流).
Sea
water
hit
against
her
face,
making
it
difficult
to
breathe.
Oh,
why
did
I
not
listen
to
the
advice?
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Frightened,
she
began
to
scream.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After
Diane
closed
her
bedroom’s
door,
she
was
lost
in
thought.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Frightened,
she
began
to
cry.
And
she
felt
that
she
would
slip
beneath
the
surface.
Then,
she
heard
a
calm
voice,
“Hold
on!
I’m
coming.”
With
relief,
she
saw
the
man
rowing
a
boat
towards
her.
“I
hope
you’ve
learned
a
lesson.You
put
us
both
in
danger,”
he
shouted
angrily,
as
he
dragged
her
into
the
boat.
Gratefully,
Diane
thanked
him
and
ran
towards
the
beach-house.
After
Diane
closed
her
bedroom’s
door,
she
was
lost
in
thought.
The
pictures
of
her
throwing
a
temper
tantrum
appeared
in
her
mind.
Feeling
ashamed,
she
went
out
and
walked
towards
her
mother.
She
made
an
apology
to
her
mother
for
her
bad
behavior.
She
said:
“I’m
sorry,
Mum.
You
and
my
Dad
have
cared
me
a
lot,
showing
your
selfless
love
on
me.
But
I
didn’t
cherish
it,
even
worse
hurt
you
deeply.
I
promise
I
will
listen
to
your
words
later
”
With
tears
in
eyes,
they
hugged
tightly.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，一位不听话的女孩子Diane，不听劝阻在暴风雨来临前去游泳，发生危险最终得救的事情。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：很害怕，她开始哭了…，所以应该写她觉得自己的情况很危险，之后给她提醒的那个人发现了她并过来救她，教训她说希望她能吸取教训。她得救了之后道谢就回家了。应该着重表达她发现自己身处危险得救的过程和感悟。第二段开头是：Diane关上房门之后开始陷入沉思…，本段应该写Diane在这次历险得救后的回想起自己发脾气的画面感到惭愧懊悔，为自己的不良行为跟母亲道歉，并表达向父母感激。文章最后叙述Diane意识到自己的错误，才理解父母对她的爱和无私付出。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：slip
beneath
the
surface；learn
a
lesson；in
danger；make
an
apology
to；selfless；cherish等高级词组和词汇；表语从句she
felt
that
she
would
slip
beneath
the
surface.分词作状语Feeling
ashamed,
she
went
out
and
walked
towards
her
mother.等高级表达。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的概要。
Robert,
an
11-year-old
boy,
saw
something
special
in
a
shop
window
that
set
his
heart
racing.
But
the
price-five
dollars-was
too
much
for
him.
Five
dollars
would
be
almost
a
week's
expense
for
his
family,
so
Robert
couldn't
ask
them
for
the
money.
However,
Robert
went
inside
the
shop
and
asked
if
the
shopkeeper
could
keep
it
for
him.
Luckily,
the
shopkeeper
promised
to
help.
However,
it
was
hard
to
find
a
part-time
job
for
a
primary
school
student
like
him.
After
thinking
about
it
for
two
weeks,
Robert
decided
to
make
money
by
collecting
and
selling
plastic
bottles.
Every
day
Robert
dropped
his
coins
inside
a
rusty
soda
tin
and
hid
it
in
a
secret
corner.
During
the
summer
vacation,
Robert
kept
to
his
secret
task
and
diligently
searched
for
his
secret
treasures
while
other
boys
were
playing.
Although
he
was
often
exhausted
and
hungry,
the
thought
of
the
object
in
the
shop
window
inspired
him.
Sometimes
his
mother
would
ask
him
what
he
was
doing,
but
he
always
told
a
white
lie,
saying
he
was
playing.
After
working
for
almost
a
whole
year,
he
finally
saved
enough
money.
With
all
the
money
in
his
tin
can,
he
said
to
the
shopkeeper
excitedly,
"I've
got
enough
money."
That
day
was
Mother's
Day.
The
moment
he
got
his
gift,
he
raced
home
and
placed
a
small
box
in
his
mother's
wrinkled
hand.
It
was
a
jewel
box,
in
which
was
a
heart-shaped
necklace
with
a
note
"To
my
dear
Mum".
The
mother
picked
it
up,
tears
rolling
down
her
face.
All
her
life
she
had
no
jewellery
except
her
wedding
ring.
Speechless,
she
smiled
and
held
her
son
into
her
arms.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Finding
something
special
in
the
shop,
Robert
asked
the
shopkeeper
to
hold
it
until
he
got
the
money
needed.
Then
he
kept
collecting
plastic
bottles
in
exchange
for
money.
After
working
for
almost
a
whole
year,
he
managed
to
buy
the
necklace
as
a
Mother’s
Day
present,
which
moved
his
mother
to
tears.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概要写作，通读文章内容可知，
本文主要讲述11岁的Robert为了给妈妈买礼物，收集塑料瓶子换钱，坚持了一年后终于有足够的钱买下礼物，妈妈收到礼物后感动得流下泪水的故事。
【详解】
1、写之前，需要认真仔细地读几遍原文材料，让理解更深刻。
2、遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要部分的主题及细节进行概括，保留原文的主要事实，全面清晰地表明原文信息。
3、注意要点之间的衔接，使用适当的关联词贯通全文，使文章更流畅。
4、尽量使用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，注意词数控制在60词左右。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：After
working
for
almost
a
whole
year,
he
managed
to
buy
the
necklace
as
a
Mother’s
Day
present,
which
moved
his
mother
to
tears.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如ask
sb.
to
do
sth.;
in
exchange
for;
manage
to
do等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
