2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）26
慰问信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily因为节食减肥而生病了，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，鼓励她加强锻炼，早日恢复健康
1.表达同情；
2.保持健康很重要；
3.给出建议。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My
father
asked
me
to
chat
with
him
for
a
while.
Actually,
I
was
unwilling
to
listen
to
his
talking
endlessly
as
he
always
did.
My
father
was
a
lawyer,
but
I
never
wanted
to
go
to
law
school
or
follow
his
path
through
life.
As
was
expected,
he
cleared
his
throat
and
started
to
say,
“Er...
What...
What
do
you
really
want
to
do
in
the
gorgeous
future?”
I
was
silent
for
a
moment
playing
with
the
cell
phone.
I
kept
thinking,
“Should
I
tell
him
my
true
thoughts?
What
if
he
gets
angry?
What
if
I
let
him
down?”
later
I
replied,
“Well,
I
want
to
be
a
writer.”
I
guessed
this
may
be
not
the
answer
he
would
expect.
But
surprisingly,
“Interesting
idea!”
he
answered.
I
was
shocked,
speaking
in
a
low
voice
with
hesitation.
“Are
you
serious,
dad?”
“Well,
you
need
confidence
and
good
preparations,
and
you
still
have
plenty
of
time.
You
need
to
find
out
what
you
really
enjoy
now.
Look,
it’s
late.
Let’s
take
the
boat
out
tomorrow
morning,
just
you
and
me.
Maybe
we
can
catch
some
crabs
(螃蟹)
for
dinner,
and
we
can
talk
more.”
Early
next
morning
we
packed
up
the
equipment
and
set
off
along
the
coast.
We
didn’t
talk
much,
but
enjoyed
the
sound
of
the
seabirds
and
the
sight
of
the
coastline.
There
were
no
big
waves
and
blinding
sunlight
at
that
time.
“Let’s
see
if
we
get
lucky,”
he
said,
picked
up
a
web
basket
with
a
rope
tied
and
threw
it
into
the
sea.
We
waited
a
while,
then
my
father
stood
up
and
said,
“Give
me
a
hand
with
this,”
and
we
pulled
up
the
crab
cage
onto
the
deck.
To
our
joy,
the
cage
was
filled
with
dozens
of
soft
shell
crabs.
Squatting
(蹲)
down,
we
watched
them
for
a
moment.
At
first
they
fought
against
each
other
to
climb
out
hard,
trying
to
escape.
Many
were
pulled
back
into
the
cage.
Later,
some
gave
up,
but
there
are
still
some
crabs
trying
to
escape
again
and
again.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键语。
Paragraph
1:
At
that
moment,
my
father
pointed
to
the
cage,
“Look
at
that
crab,
there!”
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
From
that
day
on,
I
was
determined
to
make
my
dream
come
true.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Bees
are
important
to
the
production
of
food
we
eat.
Bees
make
honey,
but
they
also
pollinate
(授粉)large
areas
of
crops,
such
as
straw
berries,
apples
and
onions.
About
a
third
of
the
food
we
eat
is
a
result
of
pollination
of
the
bees.
Unfortunately,
bees
have
been
disappearing
at
an
alarming
rate.
In
2010,
bee
keepers
started
reporting
about
something
called
Colony
Collapse
Disaster
(CCD).The
main
sign
of
CCD
is
the
loss
of
adult
honey
bees
from
a
hive(蜂巢).
In
October
of
2010,
some
beekeepers
reported
that
they
had
lost
between
30
and
90
percent
of
their
hives.
There
were
many
theories
for
the
disappearance
of
the
bees.
But
the
most
convincing
one
has
to
do
with
pesticides
and
lifestyles
of
bees
today.
Nowadays,
beekeepers
get
most
of
their
income
not
from
producing
honey
but
from
renting
bees
to
pollinate
plants.
This
means
that
the
life
of
the
typical
bee
now
consists
of
travelling
all
around
the
country
to
pollinate
crops
as
the
seasons
change.
That
means
a
lot
of
traveling
on
trucks,
which
is
very
stressful
to
bees.
It
is
not
unusual
for
up
to
30%
of
the
hive
to
die
during
transport
due
to
stress.
In
addition,
bees
that
spend
most
of
their
time
locked
up
on
trucks
are
not
exposed
to
what
they
usually
live
on.
Instead,
they
live
on
a
sweet
liquid
from
corn,
usually
polluted
with
pesticides.
The
exact
reason
for
the
disappearance
of
bees
is
not
sure,
but
losing
bees
is
very
costly
to
the
economy.
The
bee
pollination
services
are
worth
over
$8
billion
a
year.
With
no
bees,
pollination
will
have
to
be
done
by
hand,
which
would
have
effects
on
the
quality
of
food
and
increased
food
priced.
We
hear
a
lot
about
big
environmental
disasters
almost
every
day.
But
one
of
the
biggest
may
just
be
the
less
of
that
tiny
flying
insect.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）26
慰问信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily因为节食减肥而生病了，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，鼓励她加强锻炼，早日恢复健康
1.表达同情；
2.保持健康很重要；
3.给出建议。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear
Lily:
I'm
sorry
to
hear
that
you
were
ill.
Every
girl
hopes
to
keep
slim.
But
we
know
that
keeping
fit
and
healthy
is
very
important.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
some
ways
to
keep
healthy.
First,
a
healthy
diet
is
good
for
you.
It's
better
to
eat
fresh
fruit
and
vegetables
with
rich
vitamins
and
fiber.
Don't
eat
food
which
contains
too
much
sugar
and
fat,
like
cheese,
chocolate
etc.
Fat
and
sugar
can
make
you
put
on
weight
easily.
Second,
it's
very
important
to
have
good
living
habits.
You
should
do
regular
exercise
and
have
enough
rest.
Besides,
a
cheerful
state
of
mind
is
equally
important
to
our
health
as
healthy
diets
and
regular
exercise.
Let’s
keep
fit
and
healthy
together.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily因为节食减肥而生病了，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，鼓励她加强锻炼，早日恢复健康
1.表达同情；
2.保持健康很重要；
3.给出建议。
第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表达同情；保持健康很重要。第二段，给出建议。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:
keep
slim，be
good
for,
put
on
weight,
do
regular
exercise
and
have
enough
rest.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:
that
引导的宾语从句But
we
know
that
keeping
fit
and
healthy
is
very
important.which引导的定语从句
Don't
eat
food
which
contains
too
much
sugar
and
fat,
like
cheese,
chocolate
etc.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:
First，Second，Besides.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:
that
引导的宾语从句But
we
know
that
keeping
fit
and
healthy
is
very
important.
which引导的定语从句
Don't
eat
food
which
contains
too
much
sugar
and
fat,
like
cheese,
chocolate
etc.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My
father
asked
me
to
chat
with
him
for
a
while.
Actually,
I
was
unwilling
to
listen
to
his
talking
endlessly
as
he
always
did.
My
father
was
a
lawyer,
but
I
never
wanted
to
go
to
law
school
or
follow
his
path
through
life.
As
was
expected,
he
cleared
his
throat
and
started
to
say,
“Er...
What...
What
do
you
really
want
to
do
in
the
gorgeous
future?”
I
was
silent
for
a
moment
playing
with
the
cell
phone.
I
kept
thinking,
“Should
I
tell
him
my
true
thoughts?
What
if
he
gets
angry?
What
if
I
let
him
down?”
later
I
replied,
“Well,
I
want
to
be
a
writer.”
I
guessed
this
may
be
not
the
answer
he
would
expect.
But
surprisingly,
“Interesting
idea!”
he
answered.
I
was
shocked,
speaking
in
a
low
voice
with
hesitation.
“Are
you
serious,
dad?”
“Well,
you
need
confidence
and
good
preparations,
and
you
still
have
plenty
of
time.
You
need
to
find
out
what
you
really
enjoy
now.
Look,
it’s
late.
Let’s
take
the
boat
out
tomorrow
morning,
just
you
and
me.
Maybe
we
can
catch
some
crabs
(螃蟹)
for
dinner,
and
we
can
talk
more.”
Early
next
morning
we
packed
up
the
equipment
and
set
off
along
the
coast.
We
didn’t
talk
much,
but
enjoyed
the
sound
of
the
seabirds
and
the
sight
of
the
coastline.
There
were
no
big
waves
and
blinding
sunlight
at
that
time.
“Let’s
see
if
we
get
lucky,”
he
said,
picked
up
a
web
basket
with
a
rope
tied
and
threw
it
into
the
sea.
We
waited
a
while,
then
my
father
stood
up
and
said,
“Give
me
a
hand
with
this,”
and
we
pulled
up
the
crab
cage
onto
the
deck.
To
our
joy,
the
cage
was
filled
with
dozens
of
soft
shell
crabs.
Squatting
(蹲)
down,
we
watched
them
for
a
moment.
At
first
they
fought
against
each
other
to
climb
out
hard,
trying
to
escape.
Many
were
pulled
back
into
the
cage.
Later,
some
gave
up,
but
there
are
still
some
crabs
trying
to
escape
again
and
again.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键语。
Paragraph
1:
At
that
moment,
my
father
pointed
to
the
cage,
“Look
at
that
crab,
there!”
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph
2:
From
that
day
on,
I
was
determined
to
make
my
dream
come
true.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
At
that
moment,
my
father
pointed
to
the
cage,
“Look
at
that
crab,
there!”
Staring
at
the
crab,
I
found
that
every
time
he
wanted
to
escape,
he
was
pulled
back
into
the
cage.
However,
he
didn’t
give
up
his
fight.
Fortunately,
he
survived
from
the
struggle
eventually.
Shocked
and
amazed,
I
suddenly
understood
why
my
father
had
suggested
catching
crabs
that
morning.
I
thought
the
future
would
be
filled
with
many
possibilities.
Everyone
would
need
to
find
out
what
he
enjoyed
and
held
on
to
it.
From
that
day
on,
I
was
determined
to
make
my
dream
come
true.
Besides
my
devotion
to
school
work,
I
spent
all
my
spare
time
making
full
preparations
for
becoming
a
writer.
Reading,
collecting
materials
and
writing
made
my
life
busy
but
fullfilled,
which
laid
a
good
foundation
for
me.
Meanwhile,
I
contributed
to
literary
journals.
Gradually,
some
achievements
as
a
writer
increased
my
confidence.
I
always
think
of
the
crab
whenever
faced
with
difficulties.
What
my
father
said
also
encouraged
me
on
my
way
to
success.
Now
I
am
grateful
for
sticking
to
the
thing
I
truly
dreamed
of.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，作者不愿跟随自己的父亲做一名律师，于是大胆提出了自己想做作家的想法，结果父亲竟然意外同意了。随后作者跟随父亲一同去海边抓螃蟹，作者看到笼子里的螃蟹一开始奋力想爬出笼子，但是后来一部分放弃了，但是仍有一部分一次又一次往外爬着。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：父亲指着笼子“看那个螃蟹，在那儿”……，所以应该写我注意到了笼子中的某一只螃蟹的情况。要详细描述的是看到这只一直不放弃战斗的螃蟹，给我带来的感悟等等。
第二段开头是：从那天以后，我决定实现梦想。本段应该写我从那天以后为了实现梦想，所做出的种种努力，以及在努力过程中我所获得一些成果和感悟。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：Stare
at，be
filled
with，determine
to等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Reading,
collecting
materials
and
writing
made
my
life
busy
but
fullfilled,
which
laid
a
good
foundation
for
me.，主语从句What
my
father
said
also
encouraged
me
on
my
way
to
success.等高级句型。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Bees
are
important
to
the
production
of
food
we
eat.
Bees
make
honey,
but
they
also
pollinate
(授粉)large
areas
of
crops,
such
as
straw
berries,
apples
and
onions.
About
a
third
of
the
food
we
eat
is
a
result
of
pollination
of
the
bees.
Unfortunately,
bees
have
been
disappearing
at
an
alarming
rate.
In
2010,
bee
keepers
started
reporting
about
something
called
Colony
Collapse
Disaster
(CCD).The
main
sign
of
CCD
is
the
loss
of
adult
honey
bees
from
a
hive(蜂巢).
In
October
of
2010,
some
beekeepers
reported
that
they
had
lost
between
30
and
90
percent
of
their
hives.
There
were
many
theories
for
the
disappearance
of
the
bees.
But
the
most
convincing
one
has
to
do
with
pesticides
and
lifestyles
of
bees
today.
Nowadays,
beekeepers
get
most
of
their
income
not
from
producing
honey
but
from
renting
bees
to
pollinate
plants.
This
means
that
the
life
of
the
typical
bee
now
consists
of
travelling
all
around
the
country
to
pollinate
crops
as
the
seasons
change.
That
means
a
lot
of
traveling
on
trucks,
which
is
very
stressful
to
bees.
It
is
not
unusual
for
up
to
30%
of
the
hive
to
die
during
transport
due
to
stress.
In
addition,
bees
that
spend
most
of
their
time
locked
up
on
trucks
are
not
exposed
to
what
they
usually
live
on.
Instead,
they
live
on
a
sweet
liquid
from
corn,
usually
polluted
with
pesticides.
The
exact
reason
for
the
disappearance
of
bees
is
not
sure,
but
losing
bees
is
very
costly
to
the
economy.
The
bee
pollination
services
are
worth
over
$8
billion
a
year.
With
no
bees,
pollination
will
have
to
be
done
by
hand,
which
would
have
effects
on
the
quality
of
food
and
increased
food
priced.
We
hear
a
lot
about
big
environmental
disasters
almost
every
day.
But
one
of
the
biggest
may
just
be
the
less
of
that
tiny
flying
insect.
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【答案】
Bees,
playing
a
significant
part
in
producing
our
food,
are
now
suffering
a
sharp
decline
in
number.
(要点1)And
reports
of
the
loss
started
in
2010,
for
which
the
most
persuasive
theory
lies
in
the
stressful
lifestyle
of
being
transported
to
pollinate
plants
and
feeding
on
polluted
corns.(要点2)
Sadly,
the
loss
of
such
tiny
creatures
will
be
disastrous
to
our
economy.
(要点3)
【分析】
这是一篇概要写作。文章主要讲述了蜜蜂了数量减少的原因，及给经济带来的影响。
【详解】
通读全文，可从以下三个方面进行总结：对植物授粉至关重要的蜜蜂的数量正在减少；蜜蜂数量减少的两个重要原因：被四处运送进行授粉，以生产跟多的蜂蜜，给蜜蜂造成了压力，另外赖以生存的食物被杀虫剂污染；蜜蜂数量的减少会对经济带来巨大影响。
