2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）25
想象类写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
要点：1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。
注意：1.写作词数为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Me
in
10
Years
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Me
in
10
Years
I
often
imagine
what
my
life
will
be
like
in
the
future.
I
think
my
life
will
be
extremely
different
in
ten
years.
I
will
be
twenty-eight
years
old
by
then.
I
will
have
my
own
family,
probably
with
a
lovely
baby.
I
hope
I
will
work
as
a
program
designer
in
a
company
which
produces
the
computer.
I
will
enjoy
my
work
and
get
along
well
with
my
colleagues.
I
will
do
a
good
job
in
whatever
I
do.
In
my
spare
time,
I
will
continue
to
take
regular
exercise,
such
as
swimming,
running
and
various
ball
games.
On
my
holidays,
I
will
travel
around
the
world.
In
a
word,
my
life
will
be
richer
and
more
colorful.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇短文。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。要点：1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in
the
future(未来)；extremely
different(极为不同)；by
then(到那时候)；probably(大概)；lovely(可爱的)；work
as(担任)；program
designer(程序设计师)；get
along
well
with(与……相处融洽)；continue
to(继续……)；take
regular
exercise(定期运动)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I
often
imagine
what
my
life
will
be
like
in
the
future.运用宾语从句；I
hope
I
will
work
as
a
program
designer
in
a
company
which
produces
the
computer.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last
weekend,
I
went
to
Mark’s
new
house
near
a
forest
for
a
little
get-together.
After
lunch
when
I
was
chatting
with
him
and
his
wife
Cody,
he
asked
me,
“Hey,
Thora,
have
you
ever
been
to
a
secret
spot?”
Before
I
could
even
finish
saying
no,
Cody
and
Mark
were
already
at
the
door
with
their
jackets
on.
And
the
next
moment
we
were
heading
out
into
the
forest
with
a
camera,
a
fishing
net
and
a
plastic
bucket(桶).
We
walked
through
the
forest
along
a
path
by
a
small
river.
Breathing
the
fresh
air,
we
three
talked
and
laughed
all
the
way.
“Hey!
What
are
you
guys
doing
?”
someone
suddenly
shouted
from
behind.
Mark
and
Cody’s
eyes
immediately
widened,
and
without
a
word
they
started
running.
I
had
no
choice
but
to
follow
them,
getting
my
shoes
wet
and
dirty
with
mud.
We
probably
ran
for
about
10
minutes
before
Mark
and
Cody
slowed
down.
I
stopped
to
catch
my
breath
and
asked,
“Who
was
that?”
Mark
replied,
“The
most
annoying
neighbor
ever.
There’s
no
telling
what
could
happen
if
he
caught
up
with
us.
He
is
always
making
fun
of
us.
I
dislike
him.”
We
kept
walking
on
for
a
few
more
minutes.
Then
a
beautiful
lake
appeared
before
our
eyes.
“Wow!
Amazing！”
I
shouted
and
could
hardly
hold
back
my
excitement.
The
lake
was
large
and
the
water
was
deep
and
blue,
looking
so
peaceful
with
tall
trees
around
it.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph1:
Looking
around,
we
saw
a
boat
floating
by
the
shore.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
“Help!
Help!
Help!”
I
was
so
frightened
and
cried
for
help.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph1:
Looking
around,
we
saw
a
boat
floating
by
the
shore.
“How
about
going
boating?”Mark
asked.
“Good
idea.”I
agreed.
I
was
excited
to
find
so
many
fishes
in
the
lake.
Before
I
could
say
a
word,
Mark
had
cast
the
fishing
net
into
the
water.
“Look
this
way.
Let
me
take
a
photo
of
you
two.”
Cody
said,
taking
out
the
camera.
Hearing
that,
I
quickly
approached
Mark.
But
all
of
a
sudden
I
lost
my
balance
and
fell
into
the
water.
Paragraph
2:
“Help!
Help!
Help!”
I
was
so
frightened
and
cried
for
help.
However,
none
of
us
could
swim.
Mark
and
Cody
tried
to
pull
me
up
from
the
water
but
failed.
Struggling
in
the
water,
I
was
almost
exhausted.
Suddenly,
I
felt
myself
lifted
by
someone.
It
was
Mark’s
neighbor,
who
followed
us
there.
Without
hesitation,
he
jumped
into
the
water
and
saved
me.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，我去了马克森林附近的新家，并且我和他以及他的妻子去了秘密地点，在途中他们的邻居喊我们，我们为了躲避他便一路奔跑。最后我们走到了一个美丽的湖边，湖面很大，湖水又深又蓝，四周有高大的树木。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：环顾四周，我们看见一艘船在岸边漂浮，所以应该写看到船之后发生的事情，要描述我们打算去打渔，并且我在给他们夫妻拍照的时候掉到了水里。第二段开头是：“救命啊！救命啊！救命啊！“我吓坏了，哭着求救。本段应该写我掉进水里之后的事情，马克夫妻想把我救起来但没成功，最后是我们一直躲避的马克的邻居毫不犹豫跳进水里救了我。
续写时要求注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：take
a
photo
of，be
excited
to
do，without
hesitation,all
of
a
sudden
等高级词汇；before引导的时间状语从句，Before
I
could
say
a
word,
Mark
had
cast
the
fishing
net
into
the
water.复合结构等高级句式。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It
is
clear
that
young
people
are
now
renting
at
record
rates,
yet
the
appetite
to
make
a
house
a
home
remains
equally
high.
While
picking
out
the
perfect
color
for
the
living
room
or
putting
down
new
carpets
might
have
been
important
decorative
choices
for
their
parents,
young
people
are
increasingly
finding
more
temporary
solutions
to
the
challenge
of
making
a
rental
home
look
fantastic
without
annoying
their
landlords.
For
some
young
renters,
personalizing
a
home
can
come
down
to
affordable,
stylish
additions.
Houseplant
sales
have
increased
almost
50%
in
the
US
over
the
last
three
years,
and
mass
market
retailers
such
as
Zara,
ASOS
and
H&M
have
all
recently
launched
homeware
ranges,
focusing
largely
on
smaller
items
like
vases,
cushions
and
candles
that
are
easy
to
be
included
into
an
already
furnished
space.
Some
businesses
are
now
even
offering
to
equip
homes
with
pay-per-month
furniture,
with
everything
from
sofas
to
houseplants
up
for
rent.
This
gives
landlords
the
opportunity
to
attract
renters
with
fashionable
decorations
rather
than
old
sofas
and
mismatched
furnishings,
as
well
as
offering
renters
the
opportunity
to
personalize
their
own
temporary
space.
“I
think
that
in
all
industries
personalized
yet
accessible,
affordable
services
are
very
popular,”
says
Rhiannon
Smith,
a
spokesperson
for
plant
rental
company
The
Plant
Library.
“People
want
things
to
feel
good,
without
having
to
think
too
much
about
it
or
pay
too
much
for
it.
I’d
expect
it’s
a
section
that
will
be
very
popular
and
continue
to
grow.”
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
With
an
increasing
number
of
young
people
who
intend
to
customize
their
living
environment
of
a
rented
house
or
apartment
nowadays,
companies
are
competing
for
a
market
share
in
decorative
item
industry,
eagerly
creating
products
that
cater
for
their
young
customers
or
providing
them
with
a
chance
to
rent
housewares.
As
a
result,
it
benefits
both
renters
and
landowners
and
will
be
a
trend
in
the
future.
【分析】
本文属于装饰租房的文章，介绍了年轻租客打算装饰自己的租房或公寓居住的环境的需求日益增长，公司正在推出为年轻顾客创造新产品或为他们提供租用家庭用品，这样对于租客和房东都好，而且这也将成为未来的一种趋势。要求考生阅读完总结文章概要，不能超过60个词。
【详解】
第一步，归纳各个段落大意，第一段描述租客想要定制自己的租房的但又不想给房东造成困扰的现状；第二段讲述了针对年轻租客的需求，像Zara等这样的大公司相继开始出售那种可以在已装修好的租房里放置像花瓶，蜡烛之类的小件装饰商品；第三段讲述了对于现在的情况，市场上现在也有一些可以让房东或租客租用家具之类的生意出现了；第四段通过Rhiannon
Smith的话可知，现在为租客提供经济实惠的相关的装修服务很受欢迎。
第二步，可以择出重要的信息，年轻租客在定制租房日益增长，给租客提供用来装修租房的小物件或者可租用家具等相关生意出现，且很受欢迎。
第三步，得出答案，注意过渡与衔接，字数控制在60字以内。
【点睛】
概要写作做题技巧。概要写作不是对段落大意的简单堆积，需要学生读懂文章的大概意思和文章结构，还需要一定写作替换技巧，且注意语言的简洁性。第一步，确定文章的话题和各段的段落大意，比如本文话题为年轻租客装饰租房，第一段描述租客想要定制自己的租房的但又不想给房东造成困扰的现状；第二段讲述了针对年轻租客的需求，像Zara等这样的大公司相继开始出售那种可以在已装修好的租房里放置像花瓶，蜡烛之类的小件装饰商品；第三段讲述了对于现在的情况，市场上现在也有一些可以让房东或租客租用家具之类的生意出现了；第四段通过Rhiannon
Smith的话可知，现在为租客提供经济实惠的相关的装修服务很受欢迎；
第二步，分析各个段落的逻辑关系，确定主观点和次要观点；第三步，注意一定的写作技巧，比如句型和结构的转换；第四步，检查单词拼写，语法规则，字数问题等。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）25
想象类写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
要点：1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。
注意：1.写作词数为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Me
in
10
Years
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last
weekend,
I
went
to
Mark’s
new
house
near
a
forest
for
a
little
get-together.
After
lunch
when
I
was
chatting
with
him
and
his
wife
Cody,
he
asked
me,
“Hey,
Thora,
have
you
ever
been
to
a
secret
spot?”
Before
I
could
even
finish
saying
no,
Cody
and
Mark
were
already
at
the
door
with
their
jackets
on.
And
the
next
moment
we
were
heading
out
into
the
forest
with
a
camera,
a
fishing
net
and
a
plastic
bucket(桶).
We
walked
through
the
forest
along
a
path
by
a
small
river.
Breathing
the
fresh
air,
we
three
talked
and
laughed
all
the
way.
“Hey!
What
are
you
guys
doing
?”
someone
suddenly
shouted
from
behind.
Mark
and
Cody’s
eyes
immediately
widened,
and
without
a
word
they
started
running.
I
had
no
choice
but
to
follow
them,
getting
my
shoes
wet
and
dirty
with
mud.
We
probably
ran
for
about
10
minutes
before
Mark
and
Cody
slowed
down.
I
stopped
to
catch
my
breath
and
asked,
“Who
was
that?”
Mark
replied,
“The
most
annoying
neighbor
ever.
There’s
no
telling
what
could
happen
if
he
caught
up
with
us.
He
is
always
making
fun
of
us.
I
dislike
him.”
We
kept
walking
on
for
a
few
more
minutes.
Then
a
beautiful
lake
appeared
before
our
eyes.
“Wow!
Amazing！”
I
shouted
and
could
hardly
hold
back
my
excitement.
The
lake
was
large
and
the
water
was
deep
and
blue,
looking
so
peaceful
with
tall
trees
around
it.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph1:
Looking
around,
we
saw
a
boat
floating
by
the
shore.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
“Help!
Help!
Help!”
I
was
so
frightened
and
cried
for
help.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It
is
clear
that
young
people
are
now
renting
at
record
rates,
yet
the
appetite
to
make
a
house
a
home
remains
equally
high.
While
picking
out
the
perfect
color
for
the
living
room
or
putting
down
new
carpets
might
have
been
important
decorative
choices
for
their
parents,
young
people
are
increasingly
finding
more
temporary
solutions
to
the
challenge
of
making
a
rental
home
look
fantastic
without
annoying
their
landlords.
For
some
young
renters,
personalizing
a
home
can
come
down
to
affordable,
stylish
additions.
Houseplant
sales
have
increased
almost
50%
in
the
US
over
the
last
three
years,
and
mass
market
retailers
such
as
Zara,
ASOS
and
H&M
have
all
recently
launched
homeware
ranges,
focusing
largely
on
smaller
items
like
vases,
cushions
and
candles
that
are
easy
to
be
included
into
an
already
furnished
space.
Some
businesses
are
now
even
offering
to
equip
homes
with
pay-per-month
furniture,
with
everything
from
sofas
to
houseplants
up
for
rent.
This
gives
landlords
the
opportunity
to
attract
renters
with
fashionable
decorations
rather
than
old
sofas
and
mismatched
furnishings,
as
well
as
offering
renters
the
opportunity
to
personalize
their
own
temporary
space.
“I
think
that
in
all
industries
personalized
yet
accessible,
affordable
services
are
very
popular,”
says
Rhiannon
Smith,
a
spokesperson
for
plant
rental
company
The
Plant
Library.
“People
want
things
to
feel
good,
without
having
to
think
too
much
about
it
or
pay
too
much
for
it.
I’d
expect
it’s
a
section
that
will
be
very
popular
and
continue
to
grow.”
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
