2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）24
主题投稿写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，有时会和父母产生分歧。假定你是李华，你校英语杂志社正在开展题为“How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents”的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1.
事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的意见；
2.
跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；
3.
多花时间跟父母在一起，如跟他们在一起去野餐等。
注意：
1.
写作词数80词左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents
As
you
are
growing
up,
you
may
want
to
be
free
from
your
parents.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Robert
and
Henry
were
good
friends
in
the
same
class.
They
always
played
together
and
went
home
together.
One
day
Robert
and
Henry
were
going
home
from
school
when
Robert
shouted
at
Henry
and
said
,“You
are
a
coward(胆小鬼),
and
I
won’t
play
with
you.”
Without
any
words,
Henry
was
a
little
angry
and
went
home
alone.
The
next
day
Henry
went
to
school
as
usual,
but
Robert
told
all
the
boys
that
Henry
was
a
coward
and
all
of
them
laughed
at
Henry
a
great
deal.
Robert
didn’t
invite
Henry
to
go
home
with
him
anymore.
Instead,
he
played
with
some
other
boys
who
also
thought
Henry
was
a
coward.
Every
day
after
school,
they
didn’t
go
home
directly
but
went
to
the
river
or
somewhere
to
play.
A
few
days
later,
Robert
was
swimming
with
his
new
friends
in
a
river,
and
he
struggled
in
the
water
and
suddenly
cried
“Help,
help”.
His
new
friends
didn’t
help
him
and
ran
away
as
fast
as
they
could.
注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右。
2、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好
Paragraph
1:
Robert
was
still
struggling
in
the
river.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Robert’s
life
was
saved.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
If
there
was
one
thing
you
could
make
parents
understand
about
kids,
what
would
it
be?
That
is
one
of
the
questions
TFK
and
KidsHealth.
org
recently
asked
in
an
anonymous(匿名的)
survey
conducted
online.
More
than
8,000
kids
answered.
“We
just
want
to
spend
time
with
you,”
said
a
12-year-old
child.
“At
13,
you
can’t
treat
me
like
I’m
6,”
another
kid
said.
An
11-year-old
child
wrote,
“Being
a
kid
is
a
lot
harder
than
it
looks.”
The
kids
who
took
our
survey
made
it
clear
that
they
want
to
feel
close
to
the
important
people
in
their
life—their
mum,
dad
and
other
caring
adults.
But
their
answers
also
show
that
it
is
not
always
easy
to
deal
with
these
close
relationships.
Many
kids—two
out
of
three—said
they
get
along
pretty
well
or
very
well
with
their
parents.
About
four
out
of
five
kids
told
us
that
they
have
fun
with
their
parents.
But
that
doesn’t
mean
they
never
disagree.
In
fact,
most
kids
reported
arguing
with
their
parents,
at
least
sometimes.
“It’s
absolutely
normal
to
disagree
and
argue,”
says
D’Arcy
Lyness,
a
child
psychologist.
“But
it’s
also
important
to
learn
how
to
do
so
respectfully.”
About
half
of
the
kids
said
they
are
doing
that.
When
they
disagree
with
their
parents,
they
say
they
discuss
issues
calmly.
But
two
out
of
five
kids
said
arguments
tend
to
involve
yelling
at
each
other.
Lyness
points
out
that
shouting
never
helps.
“Speak
up,
and
let
your
parents
know
your
ideas
and
your
opinions,”
she
advises.
“But
be
patient.
Don’t
use
a
raised,
angry
voice.”
Kids
made
it
clear
that
they
would
rather
avoid
conflict
altogether.
Not
surprisingly,
three
out
of
four
kids
admitted
lying
at
times.
Many
said
they
lie
to
avoid
getting
in
trouble
or
disappointing
their
parents.
According
to
Lyness,
lying
isn’t
just
wrong.
It
can
actually
get
negative
results.
Telling
the
truth
builds
trust.
“When
parents
can
trust
you,
they
are
more
likely
to
give
you
more
freedom
and
more
privileges,”
she
says.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）24
主题投稿写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，有时会和父母产生分歧。假定你是李华，你校英语杂志社正在开展题为“How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents”的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1.
事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的意见；
2.
跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；
3.
多花时间跟父母在一起，如跟他们在一起去野餐等。
注意：
1.
写作词数80词左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents
As
you
are
growing
up,
you
may
want
to
be
free
from
your
parents.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents
As
you
are
growing
up,
you
may
want
to
be
free
from
your
parents.
Sometimes
you
will
have
conflicts
with
your
parents,
and
you
may
feel
deeply
regretful
later.
If
you
want
to
prevent
such
moments
from
happening,
you
should
follow
these
steps.
Firstly,
you
should
communicate
with
them
and
ask
for
their
advice
before
taking
certain
action.
Secondly,
If
you
disagree
with
your
parents
about
something,
you
should
stay
cool
and
consider
it
carefully.
What’s
more,
you’d
better
spend
more
time
with
them,
such
as
having
a
picnic
with
them.
By
doing
these,
your
family
bond
will
be
stronger.
Once
you
follow
these
steps,
I’m
sure
that
it
will
be
easy
for
you
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校英语杂志社写一篇题为“How
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents”的征文。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.说明现状，引出主题。
2.如何和父母友好
相处的建议。
1）事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的意见
2）跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静
3)
多花时间跟父母在一起，如跟他们在一起去野餐等
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
get
along
well
with；grow
up；be
free
from；conflict
with；prevent
from；communicate
with；
ask
for
advice；disagree
with；what’s
more；have
a
picnic
with;
get
along
well
with.
第三步：连词成句
1.
As
you
are
growing
up,
you
may
want
to
be
free
from
your
parents.
2.If
you
want
to
prevent
such
moments
from
happening,
you
should
follow
these
steps.
3.Secondly,
if
you
disagree
with
your
parents
about
something,
you
should
stay
cool
and
consider
it
carefully.
4.What’s
more,
you’d
better
spend
more
time
with
them,
such
as
having
a
picnic
with
them.
5.Once
you
follow
these
steps,
I’m
sure
that
it
will
be
easy
for
you
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Secondly,
if
you
disagree
with
your
parents
about
something,
you
should
stay
cool
and
consider
it
carefully.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；Once
you
follow
these
steps,
I’m
sure
that
it
will
be
easy
for
you
to
get
along
well
with
your
parents.使用了宾语从句。也使用了一些固定词组，如get
along
well
with；grow
up；be
free
from；conflict
with；prevent
from；communicate
with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Robert
and
Henry
were
good
friends
in
the
same
class.
They
always
played
together
and
went
home
together.
One
day
Robert
and
Henry
were
going
home
from
school
when
Robert
shouted
at
Henry
and
said
,“You
are
a
coward(胆小鬼),
and
I
won’t
play
with
you.”
Without
any
words,
Henry
was
a
little
angry
and
went
home
alone.
The
next
day
Henry
went
to
school
as
usual,
but
Robert
told
all
the
boys
that
Henry
was
a
coward
and
all
of
them
laughed
at
Henry
a
great
deal.
Robert
didn’t
invite
Henry
to
go
home
with
him
anymore.
Instead,
he
played
with
some
other
boys
who
also
thought
Henry
was
a
coward.
Every
day
after
school,
they
didn’t
go
home
directly
but
went
to
the
river
or
somewhere
to
play.
A
few
days
later,
Robert
was
swimming
with
his
new
friends
in
a
river,
and
he
struggled
in
the
water
and
suddenly
cried
“Help,
help”.
His
new
friends
didn’t
help
him
and
ran
away
as
fast
as
they
could.
注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右。
2、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好
Paragraph
1:
Robert
was
still
struggling
in
the
river.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Robert’s
life
was
saved.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Robert
was
still
struggling
in
the
river.
It
was
clear
that
he
was
in
danger.
He
thought
that
he
would
die
soon
if
nobody
came
to
help
him.
Just
at
the
moment,
Henry
happened
to
be
passing
by.
Hearing
the
cry,
Henry
ran
to
the
riverside,
threw
off
his
clothes
and
jumped
into
the
water
quickly.
He
swam
to
Robert
as
fast
as
possible
and
helped
Robert
out
just
as
he
couldn’t
swim
any
longer.
By
his
great
effort,
he
saved
Robert
at
last.
Robert’s
life
was
saved.
Robert
was
deeply
moved
by
Henry’s
heroic
deed
and
burst
into
tears.
He
and
his
new
friends
were
ashamed
at
having
called
Henry
a
coward.
They
realized
that
Henry
had
true
courage
and
he
was
a
real
hero,
not
a
coward.
When
Robert
shook
Henry’s
hands
and
said
sorry
to
Henry,
Henry
forgave
him
with
a
smile.
Robert
and
Henry
were
friends
again
and
after
school
they
went
home
together
happily
as
usual.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，罗伯特和亨利是一个班级的好朋友，有一天罗伯特骂亨利是胆小鬼，说不会再和亨利一起回家了，之后罗伯特还和其他同学说亨利是胆小鬼，并且一起嘲笑亨利。几天过去了，罗伯特在和其他小伙伴在河边玩耍时不幸溺水，但是其他小伙伴并没有救罗伯特，而是跑走了。
【详解】
续写部分分为2段，第一段的开头罗伯特仍然在水里挣扎……，
所以这里写罗伯特溺水之后的场景，此时亨利恰巧路过，他立刻脱下衣服下河去救罗伯特，最终成功救出罗伯特。
第二段开头是罗伯特被救了……，
所以这里要描写罗伯特被救之后的场景。罗伯特被亨利的行为深深地感动了，他和他的新朋友也不再认为亨利是胆小鬼，认为他才是真正的英雄。亨利也原谅了罗伯特，从此以后他们又像以前一样是好朋友，并且一起放学回家。
【点睛】
本文的续写比较有趣，故事情节比较吸引读者，使用了高级词汇和句子。如：at
the
moment,
happen
to,
throw
off;
burst
into
tears,
as
usual等高级词汇。主语从句It
was
clear
that
he
was
in
danger.
宾语从句和条件状语从句He
thought
that
he
would
die
soon
if
nobody
came
to
help
him.
They
realized
that
Henry
had
true
courage
and
he
was
a
real
hero,
not
a
coward.运用了宾语从句，Hearing
the
cry,
Henry
ran
to
the
riverside,
threw
off
his
clothes
and
jumped
into
the
water
quickly.
运用了现在分词作状语。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
If
there
was
one
thing
you
could
make
parents
understand
about
kids,
what
would
it
be?
That
is
one
of
the
questions
TFK
and
KidsHealth.
org
recently
asked
in
an
anonymous(匿名的)
survey
conducted
online.
More
than
8,000
kids
answered.
“We
just
want
to
spend
time
with
you,”
said
a
12-year-old
child.
“At
13,
you
can’t
treat
me
like
I’m
6,”
another
kid
said.
An
11-year-old
child
wrote,
“Being
a
kid
is
a
lot
harder
than
it
looks.”
The
kids
who
took
our
survey
made
it
clear
that
they
want
to
feel
close
to
the
important
people
in
their
life—their
mum,
dad
and
other
caring
adults.
But
their
answers
also
show
that
it
is
not
always
easy
to
deal
with
these
close
relationships.
Many
kids—two
out
of
three—said
they
get
along
pretty
well
or
very
well
with
their
parents.
About
four
out
of
five
kids
told
us
that
they
have
fun
with
their
parents.
But
that
doesn’t
mean
they
never
disagree.
In
fact,
most
kids
reported
arguing
with
their
parents,
at
least
sometimes.
“It’s
absolutely
normal
to
disagree
and
argue,”
says
D’Arcy
Lyness,
a
child
psychologist.
“But
it’s
also
important
to
learn
how
to
do
so
respectfully.”
About
half
of
the
kids
said
they
are
doing
that.
When
they
disagree
with
their
parents,
they
say
they
discuss
issues
calmly.
But
two
out
of
five
kids
said
arguments
tend
to
involve
yelling
at
each
other.
Lyness
points
out
that
shouting
never
helps.
“Speak
up,
and
let
your
parents
know
your
ideas
and
your
opinions,”
she
advises.
“But
be
patient.
Don’t
use
a
raised,
angry
voice.”
Kids
made
it
clear
that
they
would
rather
avoid
conflict
altogether.
Not
surprisingly,
three
out
of
four
kids
admitted
lying
at
times.
Many
said
they
lie
to
avoid
getting
in
trouble
or
disappointing
their
parents.
According
to
Lyness,
lying
isn’t
just
wrong.
It
can
actually
get
negative
results.
Telling
the
truth
builds
trust.
“When
parents
can
trust
you,
they
are
more
likely
to
give
you
more
freedom
and
more
privileges,”
she
says.
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【答案】
A
recent
survey
shows
that
most
kids
want
to
feel
close
to
the
important
people
in
their
life(要点1).
However,
it
is
not
always
easy
to
deal
with
these
close
relationships(要点2).
The
majority
of
kids
can
get
along
well
with
parents,
but
sometimes
they
disagree,
which
is
absolutely
normal(要点3).
The
minority
of
kid
yell
at
their
parents(要点4).
However,
kids
would
rather
avoid
conflict
by
telling
lies(要点5).(65字)
【分析】
文章的主要结构为总-分-总。主要讲了最近的一项调查显示，大多数孩子都想和生活中重要的人亲近。然而，处理这些亲密的关系并不总是容易的。许多孩子可以与父母相处得很好，但有时他们不同意，这是绝对正常的。当面对冲突时，说出来会有帮助，但耐心是非常重要的。然而，孩子们宁愿通过撒谎来避免冲突。符合概要写作常规出题思路。
【详解】
第一段讲述了两个要点，第一个是：最近的一项调查表明，大多数孩子都想和生活中重要的人亲近。可以用到的词汇或句型有：a
recent
survey,
close
to,
important
people,
in
one’s
life
等。第二个是：孩子们表明处理这些亲密关系并不总是容易的。可以用到的词汇或句式有：always,
easy,
deal
with,
close
relationships
等。第二段主要讲大部分孩子与父母相处很好，但也会争吵，这是正常现象。可以用到的词汇或句式有：the
majority,
get
along
well
with,
sometimes,
disagree,
normal等。第三段讲少数孩子会与父母争吵。可以用到的词汇或句式有：the
minority
of,
yell
at等。第四段讲孩子们为了避免冲突会撒谎。可以用到的词汇或句式有：would
rather,
avoid,
by
telling
lies等。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It
is
absolutely
normal
that
kids
and
parents
disagree.
孩子和家长意见不一致是绝对正常的。运用it作形式主语从句。
[高分句型2]
Speaking
up
can
help
even
though
being
patient
is
very
important.
尽管耐心是非常重要的，但大声说出来是有帮助的。运用让步状语从句。
