2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）23
在线求助帖+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是高一新生李华，你们学校要开设英音课程和美音课程，但你对要学习英音还是美音很是困惑，故而想在某英语网站论坛发帖（post）寻求帮助。请你就此事在论坛里发一份求助帖。
注意：
1.
词数80-100左右(发帖格式已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Li
Hua
Post
at
17-9-2020
20:00
Hi,
everyone.
I
am
writing
to
ask
for
some
advice
on
a
question
that
has
been
bothering
me
for
a
long
time.
Recently,
our
school
claimed
it
is
going
to
offer
British
English
courses
and
American
English
courses.
But
I
have
no
idea
about
which
course
I
should
take.
Actually,
I
am
more
likely
to
choose
British
English
because
it
is
usually
recognized
as
a
noble
language.
If
I
can
speak
British
English
well,
I
will
be
proud
of
myself.
However,
knowing
that
British
English
is
difficult
to
learn,
especially
for
its
pronunciation,
I
am
afraid
that
I
won’t
be
able
to
master
it
very
pared
to
British
English,
American
English
is
easier
to
learn.
So
I
am
struggling
with
which
one
to
choose.
What
should
I
do?
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是高一新生李华，你们学校要开设英音课程和美音课程，但你对要学习英音还是美音很是困惑，故而想在某英语网站论坛发帖（post）寻求帮助。请你就此事在论坛里发一份求助帖。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：ask
for
some
advice
on；have
no
idea；be
likely
to；be
recognized
as；struggle
with等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I
am
writing
to
ask
for
some
advice
on
a
question
that
has
been
bothering
me
for
a
long
time.运用定语从句；However,
knowing
that
British
English
is
difficult
to
learn,
especially
for
its
pronunciation,
I
am
afraid
that
I
won’t
be
able
to
master
it
very
well.
和Compared
to
British
English,
American
English
is
easier
to
learn.运用了非谓语动词。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面短文，根据文章的情节续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Harry
Black
was
tired
of
the
daily
routine
and
always
desired
for
something
new
to
happen.
One
weekend
in
August
Harry
Black
and
his
wife
walked
down
to
a
river
near
their
house.
The
sun
was
hot
and
they
did
not
walk
quickly.
"There's
nothing
new
here,"
Harry
said.
"It's
always
the
same.
Let's
go
somewhere
else.
"
His
wife
laughed.
"Look
over
there
on
the
ground,"
she
said.
"Isn't
it
a
key?"
Harry
walked
over
to
the
key
and
looked
at
it.
The
key
was
not
very
large
and
it
had
the
number
164
on
it.
Obviously,
it
wasn't
a
car
key
or
a
door
key
but
a
key
to
a
box
and
they
decided
to
take
it
to
the
police
station.
The
railway
station
was
near
the
police
station.
There
was
a
hotel
in
the
railway
station.
"Shall
we
have
a
drink
in
the
hotel？"
Harry
said.
Harry
and
his
wife
began
to
walk
through
the
railway
station
to
the
hotel.
They
came
to
some
lockers.
Each
locker
had
a
number,
a
lock
and
a
key.
People
put
things
in
these
lockers,
and
left
them
there
for
an
hour
or
two.
The
people
locked
the
doors
and
took
the
keys
away
with
them.
When
she
saw
the
lockers,
Harry's
wife
said,
"I
know
what
that
key
is.
It's
the
key
from
one
of
those
lockers.
Someone
put
something
in
a
locker,
locked
the
door,
took
the
key
away
and
then
lost
it.
"
Harry
took
the
key
out
of
his
pocket
and
wondered
whether
there
was
a
locker
number
164
there.
They
went
to
the
lockers
and
soon
found
number
164.
Harry
looked
at
the
key.
He
looked
at
the
key
in
locker
number
164.
He
told
his
wife
that
he
was
going
to
open
the
locker
but
his
wife
didn't
like
that.
"I'm
not
going
to
take
them,"
Harry
said.
"I'm
only
going
to
look
at
them.
"
"Please
don't,"
his
wife
said.
"Let's
go
and
have
our
drink
and
then
take
the
key
to
the
police
station.
"
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：
But
Harry
wanted
to
see
what
was
in
the
locker.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Harry
turned
quickly
and
two
policemen
were
standing
next
to
him.
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【答案】
But
Harry
wanted
to
see
what
was
in
the
locker.
Neglecting?his?wife’s?disagreement,?Harry?inserted?the?key?into?the?lock?and?easily?unlocked?the?locker.There?was?a?small?wooden?box?in?it.?Curious,?Harry?stared?at?it?for?a?while,?attempting?to?figure?out?what?was?in?it.?Harry?took?out?the?box?and?was?about?to?open?it?when?his?wife?uttered?in
a?trembling?voice,?“Please?don’t.?Lock?it?and?go?to?the?police?station,?please.”?Hesitating?for?a?while,?Harry?decided?to?follow?his?wife.?However,?just?at?this?moment,?another?voice?emerged.?“Please?put?the?box?down,?sir,?and?turn?around.Give?us?the?key?to?the?number?164?locker?please.”
Harry
turned
quickly
and
two
policemen
were
standing
next
to
him.
The?small?box?was?still?in?his?hands?and?the?man?standing?beside?the?police?seemed?to?be?the?owner.?His?wife?was?frozen?to?the?spot?with?an?unusual?pale?face.?Harry?was?clear?he?must?give?an?explanation,?so?he?gathered?his?courage?to?open?his?mouth,?“I’m?sorry.?We?found?it?in?the?railway?station?and?I?just?want?to?check?it.?We’re?going?to?take?the?key?to?the?police?actually.?I’m?sorry.”?The?owner?nodded?his?head?and?said,?“I?know.?I?heard?your?wife’s?words.?Anyhow,?thank?you.”?Harry?sighed?with?relief?and?thought
“I
will?not?desire?anything
new
to?happen?any?longer.”
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，Harry厌倦了每天的例行公事，总是希望有新的事情发生。八月的一个周末，Harry和他的妻子走到他们家附近的一条河边时，捡到了一把钥匙，本来他们打算把钥匙交给警察局。结果Harry意识到那是储物柜的钥匙，于是他们拿着钥匙找到了164号储物柜，Harry告诉他的妻子他要打开储物柜，但他的妻子不喜欢那样。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：但Harry想看看储物柜里有什么。所以后文应该是讲述Harry不顾妻子的阻拦试图打开柜子的事情，在他正要打开时，另一个声音出现了，阻止了他们。
第二段开头是：Harry迅速转过身，两个警察站在他旁边。本段应该写失主找到了Harry，Harry和妻子都很紧张，Harry连忙解释事情的经过，告诉失主他们正要把钥匙交给警察，失主相信了他们的话。
续写部分主要应用一般过去时，最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：neglect；disagreement；insert；for?a?while；stare
at；figure?out；trembling
；give?an?explanation；with?relief等高级词汇；Curious,?Harry?stared?at?it?for?a?while,?attempting?to?figure?out?what?was?in?it.?运用现在分词作状语和宾语从句；Harry?took?out?the?box?and?was?about?to?open?it?when?his?wife?uttered?in
a?trembling?voice,?“Please?don’t.?Lock?it?and?go?to?the?police?station,?please.”?运用“sb.
be
about
to
do
when…”句型等高级句式。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Gold
has
exercised
power
for
ages.
People
have
been
looking
for
gold
since
the
beginning
of
mankind
Whole
(帝国)
have
been
built
on
gold.
The
Spanish
conquered
all
of
Central
and
South
America
in
order
to
bring
gold
back
to
their
home
country.
Inca
and
Maya
civilizations
worshipped
gold
and
thought
it
came
from
the
sun.
Explorers
traveled
for
thousands
of
miles
in
search
of
the
precious
metal.
Gold
is,
once
again,
in
great
need,
people
want
to
have
gold
as
a
kind
of
safety
in
changing
times.
They
invest
in
(投资于)
gold
instead
of
saving
their
money
in
banks.
Many
people
argue
that
since
9/11
the
world
has
become
a
more
dangerous
place.
When
in
2008
the
financial
markets
collapsed
(崩溃),
the
major
money
of
the
world
became
weaker.
Investors
were
no
longer
sure
how
safe
their
money
was.
They
bought
more
and
more
gold
which
made
the
price
of
the
yellow
metal
rise.
One
of
the
reasons
why
gold
is
so
valuable
is
that
it
practically
cannot
be
destroyed.
It
always
stays
the
same
and
never
changes.
It
can
be
recycled
and
afterwards
be
used
for
many
things.
In
Iraq
poor
people
collect
gold
dust
and
bring
it
back
to
jewellery
shops
to
be
recycled.
Recycling
gold
is
also
a
big
business
in
Japan,
where
gold
is
collected
from
old
mobile
phones
and
other
industrial
waste.
The
demand
for
the
metal
and
increased
production
leads
to
a
number
of
environmental
problems.
A
single
ounce
of
gold
produces
over
30
tons
of
waste,
more
than
any
other
metal
on
earth.
Poisonous
substances
can
leak
into
rivers
and
pollute
the
water.
In
Peru
and
Brazil
wide
areas
of
the
Amazon
rainforest
are
cut
down
by
the
illegal
mining
of
gold.
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【答案】
Gold
has
exercised
power
for
ages.
People
are
crazy
about
searching
for
the
precious
metal.
One
reason
why
gold
is
so
valuable
is
that
people
want
to
have
gold
as
a
kind
of
safety
in
changing
times.
In
addition,
gold
is
so
valuable
because
it
can
be
recycled
and
afterwards
be
used
for
many
things.
However,
people
are
so
crazy
that
we
are
facing
a
lot
of
environmental
problems.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概要写作。文章讲述了从古至今人们对黄金的追逐以及过度开采黄金造成的环境问题。
【详解】
第一段讲述了历史上人们对于黄金的热爱和追逐。可以用到的词汇或句型有：be
crazy
about…,
search
for,
precious等。第二段讲述了人们热爱黄金的原因之一，作为投资，黄金可以保值。可以用到的词汇或句型有：valuable,
a
kind
of等。第三段讲述了人们热爱黄金的另一个原因，黄金可以被回收并利用。可以用到的词汇或句型有：recycle,
afterwards,
be
used
for等。第四段讲述了过度开采黄金引起的环境问题。可以用到的词汇或句型有：so…that…,
a
lot
of,
environmental等。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：“However,
people
are
so
crazy
that
we
are
facing
a
lot
of
environmental
problems.”
这句话为结果状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：be
crazy
about…;
a
kind
of;
be
used
for等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如precious;
valuable;
environmental等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）23
在线求助帖+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是高一新生李华，你们学校要开设英音课程和美音课程，但你对要学习英音还是美音很是困惑，故而想在某英语网站论坛发帖（post）寻求帮助。请你就此事在论坛里发一份求助帖。
注意：
1.
词数80-100左右(发帖格式已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据文章的情节续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Harry
Black
was
tired
of
the
daily
routine
and
always
desired
for
something
new
to
happen.
One
weekend
in
August
Harry
Black
and
his
wife
walked
down
to
a
river
near
their
house.
The
sun
was
hot
and
they
did
not
walk
quickly.
"There's
nothing
new
here,"
Harry
said.
"It's
always
the
same.
Let's
go
somewhere
else.
"
His
wife
laughed.
"Look
over
there
on
the
ground,"
she
said.
"Isn't
it
a
key?"
Harry
walked
over
to
the
key
and
looked
at
it.
The
key
was
not
very
large
and
it
had
the
number
164
on
it.
Obviously,
it
wasn't
a
car
key
or
a
door
key
but
a
key
to
a
box
and
they
decided
to
take
it
to
the
police
station.
The
railway
station
was
near
the
police
station.
There
was
a
hotel
in
the
railway
station.
"Shall
we
have
a
drink
in
the
hotel？"
Harry
said.
Harry
and
his
wife
began
to
walk
through
the
railway
station
to
the
hotel.
They
came
to
some
lockers.
Each
locker
had
a
number,
a
lock
and
a
key.
People
put
things
in
these
lockers,
and
left
them
there
for
an
hour
or
two.
The
people
locked
the
doors
and
took
the
keys
away
with
them.
When
she
saw
the
lockers,
Harry's
wife
said,
"I
know
what
that
key
is.
It's
the
key
from
one
of
those
lockers.
Someone
put
something
in
a
locker,
locked
the
door,
took
the
key
away
and
then
lost
it.
"
Harry
took
the
key
out
of
his
pocket
and
wondered
whether
there
was
a
locker
number
164
there.
They
went
to
the
lockers
and
soon
found
number
164.
Harry
looked
at
the
key.
He
looked
at
the
key
in
locker
number
164.
He
told
his
wife
that
he
was
going
to
open
the
locker
but
his
wife
didn't
like
that.
"I'm
not
going
to
take
them,"
Harry
said.
"I'm
only
going
to
look
at
them.
"
"Please
don't,"
his
wife
said.
"Let's
go
and
have
our
drink
and
then
take
the
key
to
the
police
station.
"
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：
But
Harry
wanted
to
see
what
was
in
the
locker.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Harry
turned
quickly
and
two
policemen
were
standing
next
to
him.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Gold
has
exercised
power
for
ages.
People
have
been
looking
for
gold
since
the
beginning
of
mankind
Whole
(帝国)
have
been
built
on
gold.
The
Spanish
conquered
all
of
Central
and
South
America
in
order
to
bring
gold
back
to
their
home
country.
Inca
and
Maya
civilizations
worshipped
gold
and
thought
it
came
from
the
sun.
Explorers
traveled
for
thousands
of
miles
in
search
of
the
precious
metal.
Gold
is,
once
again,
in
great
need,
people
want
to
have
gold
as
a
kind
of
safety
in
changing
times.
They
invest
in
(投资于)
gold
instead
of
saving
their
money
in
banks.
Many
people
argue
that
since
9/11
the
world
has
become
a
more
dangerous
place.
When
in
2008
the
financial
markets
collapsed
(崩溃),
the
major
money
of
the
world
became
weaker.
Investors
were
no
longer
sure
how
safe
their
money
was.
They
bought
more
and
more
gold
which
made
the
price
of
the
yellow
metal
rise.
One
of
the
reasons
why
gold
is
so
valuable
is
that
it
practically
cannot
be
destroyed.
It
always
stays
the
same
and
never
changes.
It
can
be
recycled
and
afterwards
be
used
for
many
things.
In
Iraq
poor
people
collect
gold
dust
and
bring
it
back
to
jewellery
shops
to
be
recycled.
Recycling
gold
is
also
a
big
business
in
Japan,
where
gold
is
collected
from
old
mobile
phones
and
other
industrial
waste.
The
demand
for
the
metal
and
increased
production
leads
to
a
number
of
environmental
problems.
A
single
ounce
of
gold
produces
over
30
tons
of
waste,
more
than
any
other
metal
on
earth.
Poisonous
substances
can
leak
into
rivers
and
pollute
the
water.
In
Peru
and
Brazil
wide
areas
of
the
Amazon
rainforest
are
cut
down
by
the
illegal
mining
of
gold.
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