2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）18
新闻报道+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是校英文报的记者。上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟在去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多。刘伟对她进行了简单的急救处理并将她送到了医院，却错过了英语演讲比赛。请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
A
Heroic
Teen
Missed
a
Competition
but
Saved
an
Injured
Woman
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once,
when
I
was
a
teenager
my
father
and
I
were
standing
in
line
to
buy
tickets
for
the
circus.
Finally
there
was
only
one
family
between
us
and
the
ticket
counter.
This
family
made
a
big
impression
on
me.
There
were
eight
children,
all
probably
under
the
age
of
twelve.
You
could
tell
they
didn’t
have
a
lot
of
money.
Their
clothes
were
not
expensive,
but
they
were
clean,
the
children
were
well-behaved,
all
of
them
standing
in
line,
two-by-two
behind
their
parents,
holding
hands.
They
were
excitedly
talking
about
the
clowns,
elephants
and
other
acts
they
would
see
that
night
with
their
brothers
or
sisters
in
a
low
voice.
One
could
sense
they
had
never
been
to
the
circus
before.
It
promised
to
be
a
highlight
of
their
young
lives.
The
father
and
mother
were
at
the
head
of
the
pack,
standing
proud
as
they
could
be.
The
mother
was
holding
her
husband
s
hand,
looking
up
at
him
as
if
to
say,
“You
are
my
knight
in
shining
armor.”
He
was
smiling
and
responding
in
pride,
looking
back
at
her
as
if
to
say
“You
got
that
right”.
The
ticket
lady
asked
the
father
how
many
tickets
he
wanted.
He
proudly
responded
"please
let
me
buy
eight
children’s
tickets
and
two
adult
tickets
so
I
can
take
my
family
to
the
circus.
The
ticket
lady
gave
the
price.
The
man’s
wife
let
go
of
his
hand,
lowered
her
head
and
her
lips
began
to
shake.
The
father
leaned
a
little
closer
and
asked,
“How
much
did
you
say?”
The
ticket
lady
again
told
him
the
price.
The
man
obviously
didn’t
have
enough
money.
How
was
he
supposed
to
turn
and
tell
his
eight
children
that
he
didn’t
have
enough
money
to
take
them
to
the
circus?
Actually
we
were
not
wealthy
in
any
sense,
so
I
understand
how
the
kids
would
feel.
I
felt
sorry
for
them.
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragragh
1:
Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
seemed
to
have
an
idea.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragragh
2:
That
day
my
father
and
I
went
back
to
our
car
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇
60词左右的内容概要。
Ever
done
something
you
didn’t
want
to
do,
just
to
fit
in?
Or
just
because
your
friends
wanted
you
to?
That’s
peer
pressure.And
just
about
everyone
feels
it
at
one
time
or
another.Peers
are
people
at
your
age.such
as
your
friends,
who
have
experiences
similar
to
yours.Your
peers
influence
your
decisions
and
behavior
every
day,
and
they
can
push
you
to
make
bad
choices,
even
dangerous
ones.But
is
peer
pressure
always
bad?
Actually,
peer
pressure
can
sometimes
be
a
good
thing.Friends
can
give
you
the
courage
to
try
something
you
normally
wouldn’t,
like
a
new
sport
or
taking
part
in
the
school
play.Nicole
S.,
16,
used
to
be
afraid
of
singing
in
front
of
people.One
time,
her
friends
persuaded
her
to
sing
karaoke
with
them.She
ended
up
having
fun!
“Now
1
will
sing
anywhere,
even
with
people
present.Positive
peer
pressure
helped
me
face
my
fear,”
she
says.
The
people
around
you
can
also
be
bad
influences,
however.Maybe
a
star
teammate
tells
you
never
to
pass
the
ball
to
a
certain
player,
or
a
popular
student
cheats
on
tests
or
sends
mean
texts.Should
you
try
to
be
like
them
to
fit
in?
What
should
you
do
with
peer
pressure
then?
Peer
pressure
is
powerful,
but
the
ability
to
choose
is
yours.If
a
situation
feels
wrong,
there’s
a
good
chance
that
it
is
wrong.Standing
up
for
yourself
and
saying
no
isn’t
always
easy.But
you
might
give
voice
to
a
group
of
peers
that
feel
the
same
way
you
do.It
can
take
just
one
person
to
speak
out
and
change
a
situation.The
main
thing
is
not
to
compromise
(妥协)
who
you
are.The
kind
of
coolness
and
popularity
you
think
you
may
get
by
joining
the
crowd
and
doing
risky
things
won’t
last
long.Your
character
is
with
you
for
the
rest
of
your
life.Be
who
you
are,
not
who
others
want
you
to
be.People
will
respect
you
for
standing
up
for
yourself
-
even
if
it
doesn’t
seem
like
it
right
away.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）18
新闻报道+读后续写+概要写作
1．假设你是校英文报的记者。上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟在去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多。刘伟对她进行了简单的急救处理并将她送到了医院，却错过了英语演讲比赛。请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
A
Heroic
Teen
Missed
a
Competition
but
Saved
an
Injured
Woman
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A
Heroic
Teen
Missed
a
Competition
butSaved
an
Injured
Woman
Last
Saturday,
Liu
Wei,
a
Senior
Two
student
of
our
school,
helped
an
injured
woman.
On
November
10,
Liu
Wei
was
on
his
way
to
the
hall
where
the
English
speaking
competition
took
place
when
a
woman
fell
off
her
bicycle
carelessly.
The
woman
struggled
to
get
to
her
feet
but
failed,
because
her
right
leg
was
bleeding
badly.
Without
any
hesitation,
Liu
Wei
came
to
her
assistance.
He
applied
pressure
to
the
bleeding
area
and
then
tied
his
handkerchief
firmly
to
the
wound.
Finally,
he
took
the
woman
to
the
hospital
nearby.
It
was
at
that
time
that
he
realized
it
was
too
late
for
the
competition—he
missed
it.
In
order
to
give
the
woman
in
need
a
hand,
Liu
Wei
gave
up
the
competition.
As
his
fellow
schoolmates
and
teachers,
we
should
learn
from
him.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇新闻报道，号召全校师生学习刘伟。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：并列法
要求：
1.
陈述陈伟的事迹；
2.
号召师生学习刘伟。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
on
his
way
to;
fell
off;
struggle
to
do;
without
any
hesitation;
apply…to;
tie
to;
be
late
for;
in
need;
learn
from
第三步：连词成句
1.
On
November
10,
Liu
Wei
was
on
his
way
to
the
hall
where
the
English
speaking
competition
took
place
when
a
woman
fell
off
her
bicycle
carelessly.
2.
The
woman
struggled
to
get
to
her
feet
but
failed,
because
her
right
leg
was
bleeding
badly.
3.
Without
any
hesitation,
Liu
Wei
came
to
her
assistance.
4.
He
applied
pressure
to
the
bleeding
area
and
then
tied
his
handkerchief
firmly
to
the
wound.
5.
It
was
at
that
time
that
he
realized
it
was
too
late
for
the
competition—he
missed
it.
6.
In
order
to
give
the
woman
in
need
a
hand,
Liu
Wei
gave
up
the
competition.
7.
As
his
fellow
schoolmates
and
teachers,
we
should
learn
from
him.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Finally
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
On
November
10,
Liu
Wei
was
on
his
way
to
the
hall
where
the
English
speaking
competition
took
place
when
a
woman
fell
off
her
bicycle
carelessly.（使用了定语从句和状语从句）
[高分句型2]
The
woman
struggled
to
get
to
her
feet
but
failed,
because
her
right
leg
was
bleeding
badly.（使用了原因状语从句）
[高分句型3]
It
was
at
that
time
that
he
realized
it
was
too
late
for
the
competition—he
missed
it.（使用了强调句型和宾语从句）
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once,
when
I
was
a
teenager
my
father
and
I
were
standing
in
line
to
buy
tickets
for
the
circus.
Finally
there
was
only
one
family
between
us
and
the
ticket
counter.
This
family
made
a
big
impression
on
me.
There
were
eight
children,
all
probably
under
the
age
of
twelve.
You
could
tell
they
didn’t
have
a
lot
of
money.
Their
clothes
were
not
expensive,
but
they
were
clean,
the
children
were
well-behaved,
all
of
them
standing
in
line,
two-by-two
behind
their
parents,
holding
hands.
They
were
excitedly
talking
about
the
clowns,
elephants
and
other
acts
they
would
see
that
night
with
their
brothers
or
sisters
in
a
low
voice.
One
could
sense
they
had
never
been
to
the
circus
before.
It
promised
to
be
a
highlight
of
their
young
lives.
The
father
and
mother
were
at
the
head
of
the
pack,
standing
proud
as
they
could
be.
The
mother
was
holding
her
husband
s
hand,
looking
up
at
him
as
if
to
say,
“You
are
my
knight
in
shining
armor.”
He
was
smiling
and
responding
in
pride,
looking
back
at
her
as
if
to
say
“You
got
that
right”.
The
ticket
lady
asked
the
father
how
many
tickets
he
wanted.
He
proudly
responded
"please
let
me
buy
eight
children’s
tickets
and
two
adult
tickets
so
I
can
take
my
family
to
the
circus.
The
ticket
lady
gave
the
price.
The
man’s
wife
let
go
of
his
hand,
lowered
her
head
and
her
lips
began
to
shake.
The
father
leaned
a
little
closer
and
asked,
“How
much
did
you
say?”
The
ticket
lady
again
told
him
the
price.
The
man
obviously
didn’t
have
enough
money.
How
was
he
supposed
to
turn
and
tell
his
eight
children
that
he
didn’t
have
enough
money
to
take
them
to
the
circus?
Actually
we
were
not
wealthy
in
any
sense,
so
I
understand
how
the
kids
would
feel.
I
felt
sorry
for
them.
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragragh
1:
Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
seemed
to
have
an
idea.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragragh
2:
That
day
my
father
and
I
went
back
to
our
car
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph
1
Then
he
picked
it
up
and
tapped
the
man
on
the
shoulder
and
said,
“Excuse
me,
sir,
this
fell
out
of
your
pocket.’
The
man
turned
around
and
saw
the
money.
He
knew
what
was
going
on,
he
looked
straight
into
my
dad’s
eyes,
took
my
dad’s
hand
in
both
of
his,
squeezed
tightly
onto
the
$20
bill,
and
with
his
lip
shaking
and
a
tear
running
down
his
cheek,
he
replied,
“Thank
you,
thank
you,
sir.
This
really
means
a
lot
to
me
and
my
family.”
Paragraph
2
We
didn’t
go
to
the
circus
that
night,
when
I
asked
dad
why
he
did
so,
Dad
said,
“My
child,
it
was
a
desperate,
heartbreaking
and
embarrassing
situation
for
a
father.
Surely
he
wasn’t
begging
for
a
handout,
but
he
reminded
me
of
my
father,
when
I
was
young.”
He
paused
for
a
while,
as
if
wandering
in
his
memory.
“We
should
appreciate
what
we
have
obtained
from
life
and
seize
every
opportunity
to
help
others.
We
didn’t
go
to
the
circus
tonight,
but
we
didn’t
go
without.
Now,
who
wants
an
ice
cream?”
【详解】
第一段所给首句，Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket,
pulled
out
a
$20
bill
and
dropped
it
on
the
ground.这一句是故事发展的转折点，接下来他应该是手里拿着20美元，眼含热泪表达感谢。无论从何角度续写需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
第二段所给首句，That
day
my
father
and
I
went
to
our
car
and
drove
home
without
any
tickets.接下来应该是问父亲为什么要这么做的时候，父亲做出了的回答。文章应从这一角度入手进行续写。
【点睛】
本文是一篇续写，结构严谨，层次分明，文中使用高级句子。He
knew
what
was
going
on,
he
looked
straight
into
my
dad's
eyes,
took
my
dads
hand
in
both
of
his,
squeezed
tightly
onto
the$20
bill,句中what引导的宾语从句；Surely
he
wasn't
begging
for
ahandout,
but
he.
reminded
me
of
my
father,
when
1
was
young-"
句中when引导时间状语从句；We
didnt
go
to
the
eircus
tonight,
but
we
didn't
go
without.句中but引导并列句；Now,
whowants
an
ice
cream?句中使用who的特殊疑问句。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇
60词左右的内容概要。
Ever
done
something
you
didn’t
want
to
do,
just
to
fit
in?
Or
just
because
your
friends
wanted
you
to?
That’s
peer
pressure.And
just
about
everyone
feels
it
at
one
time
or
another.Peers
are
people
at
your
age.such
as
your
friends,
who
have
experiences
similar
to
yours.Your
peers
influence
your
decisions
and
behavior
every
day,
and
they
can
push
you
to
make
bad
choices,
even
dangerous
ones.But
is
peer
pressure
always
bad?
Actually,
peer
pressure
can
sometimes
be
a
good
thing.Friends
can
give
you
the
courage
to
try
something
you
normally
wouldn’t,
like
a
new
sport
or
taking
part
in
the
school
play.Nicole
S.,
16,
used
to
be
afraid
of
singing
in
front
of
people.One
time,
her
friends
persuaded
her
to
sing
karaoke
with
them.She
ended
up
having
fun!
“Now
1
will
sing
anywhere,
even
with
people
present.Positive
peer
pressure
helped
me
face
my
fear,”
she
says.
The
people
around
you
can
also
be
bad
influences,
however.Maybe
a
star
teammate
tells
you
never
to
pass
the
ball
to
a
certain
player,
or
a
popular
student
cheats
on
tests
or
sends
mean
texts.Should
you
try
to
be
like
them
to
fit
in?
What
should
you
do
with
peer
pressure
then?
Peer
pressure
is
powerful,
but
the
ability
to
choose
is
yours.If
a
situation
feels
wrong,
there’s
a
good
chance
that
it
is
wrong.Standing
up
for
yourself
and
saying
no
isn’t
always
easy.But
you
might
give
voice
to
a
group
of
peers
that
feel
the
same
way
you
do.It
can
take
just
one
person
to
speak
out
and
change
a
situation.The
main
thing
is
not
to
compromise
(妥协)
who
you
are.The
kind
of
coolness
and
popularity
you
think
you
may
get
by
joining
the
crowd
and
doing
risky
things
won’t
last
long.Your
character
is
with
you
for
the
rest
of
your
life.Be
who
you
are,
not
who
others
want
you
to
be.People
will
respect
you
for
standing
up
for
yourself
-
even
if
it
doesn’t
seem
like
it
right
away.
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【答案】
Everyone
may
meet
with
peer
pressure
at
one
time
or
another.（要点1）On
the
one
hand，per
pressure
can
sometimes
be
beneficial.（要点2）On
the
other
hand，it
can
be
harmful.（要点3）The
best
way
to
deal
with
peer
pressure
is
to
choose
wisely
and
be
yourself.（要点4）
【分析】
本文是一篇议论文。文章介绍说，每个人都可能在某一时刻或另一时刻遇到同辈压力。一方面，每次压力有时是有益的。另一方面，它可能是有害的。应对同辈压力的最好方法就是做一个明智的选择，做你自己。
【详解】
1
要点摘录①That’s
peer
pressure.
And
just
about
everyone
feels
it
at
one
time
or
another.
②Actually,
peer
pressure
can
sometimes
be
a
good
thing.
③The
people
around
you
can
also
be
bad
influences,
however.
④Be
who
you
are,
not
who
others
want
you
to
be.
2.缜密构思
将第1要点与文章第一段进行重组，将第4要点与文章最后一段进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Everyone
may
meet
with
peer
pressure
at
one
time
or
another.
On
the
one
hand，per
pressure
can
sometimes
be
beneficial.
On
the
other
hand，it
can
be
harmful.
The
best
way
to
deal
with
peer
pressure
is
to
choose
wisely
and
be
yourself.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
On
the
one
hand，per
pressure
can
sometimes
be
beneficial.
On
the
other
hand，it
can
be
harmful.这两句话运用连词短语On
the
one
hand
…
On
the
other
hand
…连接句子，表示相矛盾的两个方面。
[高分句型2]The
best
way
to
deal
with
peer
pressure
is
to
choose
wisely
and
be
yourself.这句话用不定式作定语和不定式作表语，表达非常高级。
