2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）17
咨询信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，计划寒假期间去新西兰(New
Zealand)旅行。请你用英语给你的新西兰朋友Jack写一封电子邮件询问一些信息，内容包括：
1.
著名旅游景点信息；
2.
当地特色(如小吃、节日等)；
3.
注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
few
years
ago,
the
company
I
worked
for
sent
my
wife
and
me
to
live
in
New
York
for
a
year.
I’ve
always
loved
running,
so
I
was
really
happy
when
I
found
out
I
lived
next
to
Central
Park.
This
meant
that
every
morning
I
could
go
for
a
run
before
I
went
to
work.
Because
a
lot
of
people
had
told
me
to
be
careful
of
robbers
in
the
park,
so
usually
I
didn’t
take
anything
with
me.
How
could
they
rob
me
if
I
didn’t
have
anything?
But
one
morning,
my
wife
gave
me
a
$
10
bill
and
asked
me
to
buy
some
bread
on
the
way.
It
was
a
beautiful
morning
and
the
park
was
quiet
with
very
few
people
walking
or
jogging
(慢跑)around.
While
I
was
running
through
the
park,
another
jogger
knocked
into
me.
He
apologized
and
continued
running.
For
a
while,
I
didn’t
think
too
much
of
it.
However,
when
I
noticed
the
wide
path
where
I
was
running,
I
thought
it
was
kind
of
strange.
The
warning
of
robbers
in
the
park
occurred
to
me.
“It
could
have
been
a
robber!”
I
suddenly
became
alarmed,
so
I
checked
my
pocket
and
found
that
the
money
was
missing.
Without
thinking
twice,
I
ran
after
that
jogger.
I
finally
caught
up
and
held
him
by
the
arm.
I
shouted,
“Give
me
the
$
10
bill!
Now!”
I
am
not
usually
a
hot-headed(性急的)
person,
but
I
got
really
angry
this
time.
I
couldn’t
believe
the
robbery
was
actually
happening
to
me.
Filled
with
anger,
I
shook
my
fist
at
him.
This
seemed
to
frighten
him.
He
quickly
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket
and
gave
me
the
money.
Then
he
ran
away
as
fast
as
he
could.
I
bought
the
bread
and
went
home.
As
soon
as
I
got
home,
I
couldn’t
wait
to
tell
my
wife
my
story.
“You
won’t
believe
what
happened
to
me,”
I
started
with
pride.
She
immediately
stopped
me,
“I
know,
you
left
the
money
for
the
bread
on
the
kitchen
table.”
注意：
1.
续写词数应为150左右；
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1
Looking
at
the
money
on
the
table,
I
stood
there,
shocked.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
For
several
days,
I
waited
at
the
same
spot.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It
may
help
you
to
know
that
there
is
no
such
thing
as
a
perfect
speech.
At
some
point
in
every
speech,
every
speaker
says
something
that
is
not
understood
exactly
as
he
has
planned.
Fortunately,
such
moments
are
usually
not
obvious
to
the
listeners.
Why?
Because
the
listeners
do
not
know
what
the
speaker
plans
to
say.
They
hear
only
what
the
speaker
does
say.
If
you
lose
your
place
for
a
moment,
wrongly
change
the
order
of
a
couple
of
sentences,
or
forget
to
stop
at
a
certain
point,
no
one
will
be
any
the
wiser.
When
such
moments
occur,
don't
worry
about
them.
Just
continue
as
if
nothing
happened.
Even
if
you
do
make
an
obvious
mistake
during
a
speech,
that
doesn’t
really
matter.
If
you
have
ever
listened
to
Martin
Luther
King’s
famous
speech
—
“I
Have
a
Dream”,
you
may
notice
that
he
stumbles
(结巴)
over
his
words
twice
during
the
speech.
Most
likely,
however,
you
don’t
remember.
Why?
Because
you
were
fixing
your
attention
on
his
message
rather
than
on
his
way
of
speech-making.
People
care
a
lot
about
making
a
mistake
in
a
speech
because
they
regard
speech-making
as
a
kind
of
performance
rather
than
as
an
act
of
communication.
They
feel
the
listeners
are
like
judges
in
an
ice-skating
competition.
But,
in
fact,
the
listeners
are
not
looking
for
a
perfect
performer.
They
are
looking
for
a
well-though-out
speech
that
expresses
the
speaker’s
ideas
clearly
and
directly.
Sometimes
a
mistake
or
two
can
actually
increase
a
speaker’s
attractiveness
by
making
him
more
human.
As
you
work
on
your
speech,
don’t
worry
about
being
perfect.
Once
you
free
you
mind
of
this,
you
will
find
it
much
easier
to
give
your
speech
freely.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）17
咨询信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，计划寒假期间去新西兰(New
Zealand)旅行。请你用英语给你的新西兰朋友Jack写一封电子邮件询问一些信息，内容包括：
1.
著名旅游景点信息；
2.
当地特色(如小吃、节日等)；
3.
注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear
Jack，
I
am
planning
to
visit
New
Zealand
this
winter
vacation.
How
excited
I
am
when
I
think
of
meeting
you
in
New
Zealand!
As
you
are
a
local
resident
and
an
experienced
traveler,
I
would
like
to
ask
you
for
some
information.
First
of
all,
I
wonder
if
you
can
recommend
some
places
of
interest
which
are
worth
a
visit
for
foreigners
like
me.
Your
first
hand
experience
will
be
more
convincing
than
the
advertisements
provided
by
travel
agencies.
Besides,
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
detailed
information
about
my
destination
such
as
local
snacks,
festivals
or
traditions.
Last
but
not
least,
is
there
anything
else
I
need
to
pay
special
attention
to
when
I
am
there?
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
reply!
Yours，
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Jim写封邮件，询问寒假期间去新西兰(New
Zealand)旅行相关事宜。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容：
1.
著名旅游景点信息；
2.
当地特色(如小吃、节日等)；
3.
注意事项。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
plan
to
do
sth.;
ask
sb.
for
some
information;
recommend
some
places
of
interest;
first
hand
experience;
travel
agency;
give
sb.
some
detailed
information;
destination;
pay
special
attention
to;
look
forward
to
第三步：连词成句
1.
I
am
planning
to
visit
New
Zealand
this
winter
vacation.
2.
As
you
are
a
local
resident
and
an
experienced
traveler,
I
would
like
to
ask
you
for
some
information.
3.
I
wonder
if
you
can
recommend
some
places
of
interest
which
are
worth
a
visit
for
foreigners
like
me.
4.
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
detailed
information
about
my
destination
such
5.
Is
there
anything
else
I
need
to
pay
special
attention
to
when
I
am
there?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all
2.表并列补充关系：
Besides,
Last
but
not
least
3.表因果关系：As
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
First
of
all,
I
wonder
if
you
can
recommend
some
places
of
interest
which
are
worth
a
visit
for
foreigners
like
me.使用了定语从句；
[高分句型2]
Besides,
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
detailed
information
about
my
destination
such
as
local
snacks,
festivals
or
traditions.使用了高级句式“I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could…
(如果您能…我将不胜感激)”
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
few
years
ago,
the
company
I
worked
for
sent
my
wife
and
me
to
live
in
New
York
for
a
year.
I’ve
always
loved
running,
so
I
was
really
happy
when
I
found
out
I
lived
next
to
Central
Park.
This
meant
that
every
morning
I
could
go
for
a
run
before
I
went
to
work.
Because
a
lot
of
people
had
told
me
to
be
careful
of
robbers
in
the
park,
so
usually
I
didn’t
take
anything
with
me.
How
could
they
rob
me
if
I
didn’t
have
anything?
But
one
morning,
my
wife
gave
me
a
$
10
bill
and
asked
me
to
buy
some
bread
on
the
way.
It
was
a
beautiful
morning
and
the
park
was
quiet
with
very
few
people
walking
or
jogging
(慢跑)around.
While
I
was
running
through
the
park,
another
jogger
knocked
into
me.
He
apologized
and
continued
running.
For
a
while,
I
didn’t
think
too
much
of
it.
However,
when
I
noticed
the
wide
path
where
I
was
running,
I
thought
it
was
kind
of
strange.
The
warning
of
robbers
in
the
park
occurred
to
me.
“It
could
have
been
a
robber!”
I
suddenly
became
alarmed,
so
I
checked
my
pocket
and
found
that
the
money
was
missing.
Without
thinking
twice,
I
ran
after
that
jogger.
I
finally
caught
up
and
held
him
by
the
arm.
I
shouted,
“Give
me
the
$
10
bill!
Now!”
I
am
not
usually
a
hot-headed(性急的)
person,
but
I
got
really
angry
this
time.
I
couldn’t
believe
the
robbery
was
actually
happening
to
me.
Filled
with
anger,
I
shook
my
fist
at
him.
This
seemed
to
frighten
him.
He
quickly
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket
and
gave
me
the
money.
Then
he
ran
away
as
fast
as
he
could.
I
bought
the
bread
and
went
home.
As
soon
as
I
got
home,
I
couldn’t
wait
to
tell
my
wife
my
story.
“You
won’t
believe
what
happened
to
me,”
I
started
with
pride.
She
immediately
stopped
me,
“I
know,
you
left
the
money
for
the
bread
on
the
kitchen
table.”
注意：
1.
续写词数应为150左右；
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1
Looking
at
the
money
on
the
table,
I
stood
there,
shocked.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
For
several
days,
I
waited
at
the
same
spot.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Looking
at
the
money
on
the
table,
I
stood
there,
shocked.
For
the
rest
of
the
day,
I
felt
extremely
guilty,
with
the
innocent
jogger
and
his
“helplessness"
on
my
mind.
“How
could
I
be
so
rude
to
him
without
knowing
the
truth?
Why
was
it
that
the
jogger
gave
me
the
money?
I
still
remember
his
frightened
face
when
I
scared
him
away
like
a
monster.
I
decided
to
find
a
chance
to
apologize
to
him.
The
next
morning,
I
got
up
and
went
to
the
park
as
usual,
but
not
for
jogging.
I
just
hung
around
where
I
met
that
jogger,
but
in
vain.
For
several
days,
I
waited
at
the
same
spot.
But
to
my
disappointment,
he
didn't
turn
up.
It
was
almost
a
week
later
before
I
finally
spotted
him
again.
I,
the
“robber”,
gave
the
$10
bill
back
to
him
and
said
sorry
to
him
again
and
again.
Fortunately,
he
forgave
me
for
what
I
had
done
to
him
and
said,
“Oh,
it
doesn't
matter.”
Many
years
have
passed,
but
I
can
still
feel
my
cheeks
burning
with
shame.
From
the
experience
1
have
learned
that
it
is
too
early
to
judge
a
person
before
you
know
the
truth.
【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写。
【详解】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者有一次带着十美元去跑步，在和一个人相撞后作者发现钱不见了。最后作者找到那个人强行要回了十美元。回家后作者发现这是个误会，作者的十美元放在桌子上没有带出门。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：看着桌上的钱，我站在那里，震惊了。本段主要写作者感到非常内疚并且一直想找机会对那个人道歉，可是一直没有等到那个人。第二段开头是：我在同一个地方等了好几天。这一段主要写作者最后等到了那个人并且向他道歉和归还了十美元。同时作者觉得在了解真相之前判断一个人还为时过早。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:非谓语动词：Many
years
have
passed,
but
I
can
still
feel
my
cheeks
burning
with
shame.
以及when
引导的时间状语从句：I
still
remember
his
frightened
face
when
I
scared
him
away
like
a
monster.
?高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It
may
help
you
to
know
that
there
is
no
such
thing
as
a
perfect
speech.
At
some
point
in
every
speech,
every
speaker
says
something
that
is
not
understood
exactly
as
he
has
planned.
Fortunately,
such
moments
are
usually
not
obvious
to
the
listeners.
Why?
Because
the
listeners
do
not
know
what
the
speaker
plans
to
say.
They
hear
only
what
the
speaker
does
say.
If
you
lose
your
place
for
a
moment,
wrongly
change
the
order
of
a
couple
of
sentences,
or
forget
to
stop
at
a
certain
point,
no
one
will
be
any
the
wiser.
When
such
moments
occur,
don't
worry
about
them.
Just
continue
as
if
nothing
happened.
Even
if
you
do
make
an
obvious
mistake
during
a
speech,
that
doesn’t
really
matter.
If
you
have
ever
listened
to
Martin
Luther
King’s
famous
speech
—
“I
Have
a
Dream”,
you
may
notice
that
he
stumbles
(结巴)
over
his
words
twice
during
the
speech.
Most
likely,
however,
you
don’t
remember.
Why?
Because
you
were
fixing
your
attention
on
his
message
rather
than
on
his
way
of
speech-making.
People
care
a
lot
about
making
a
mistake
in
a
speech
because
they
regard
speech-making
as
a
kind
of
performance
rather
than
as
an
act
of
communication.
They
feel
the
listeners
are
like
judges
in
an
ice-skating
competition.
But,
in
fact,
the
listeners
are
not
looking
for
a
perfect
performer.
They
are
looking
for
a
well-though-out
speech
that
expresses
the
speaker’s
ideas
clearly
and
directly.
Sometimes
a
mistake
or
two
can
actually
increase
a
speaker’s
attractiveness
by
making
him
more
human.
As
you
work
on
your
speech,
don’t
worry
about
being
perfect.
Once
you
free
you
mind
of
this,
you
will
find
it
much
easier
to
give
your
speech
freely.
【答案】
There
is
no
perfect
speech
as
every
speaker
makes
a
mistake,
which
listeners
may
not
notice,
so
just
go
on.
It
doesn’t
matter
when
you
make
mistakes
sometimes,
because
listeners
focus
on
the
thoughts
rather
than
the
way
a
speech
is
made.
Actually,
a
mistake
or
two
can
make
a
speaker
more
attractive
and
more
human.
Therefore,
take
it
easy,
and
it
will
be
much
easier
to
make
a
speech
freely.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，没有完美的演讲，因为每个演讲者都会犯错误，听众可能不会注意到，所以继续吧。有时候你犯错误并不重要，因为听众关注的是演讲的思想，而不是演讲的方式。事实上，一两个错误可以使演讲者更有吸引力，更人性化，所以，放轻松，它会更容易发表演讲自由。
【详解】
1.要点摘录
①It
may
help
you
to
know
that
there
is
no
such
thing
as
a
perfect
speech.
Fortunately,
such
moments
are
usually
not
obvious
to
the
listeners.
②Even
if
you
do
make
an
obvious
mistake
during
a
speech,
that
doesn’t
really
matter.
Because
you
were
fixing
your
attention
on
his
message
rather
than
on
his
way
of
speech-making.
③Sometimes
a
mistake
or
two
can
actually
increase
a
speaker’s
attractiveness
by
making
him
more
human.
④Once
you
free
you
mind
of
this,
you
will
find
it
much
easier
to
give
your
speech
freely.2.缜密构思
可以将以上要点摘录进行整合，如第一、三条摘录中的两句话可以各自整合为一句话进行陈述。
3.遣词造句
There
is
no
perfect
speech
as
every
speaker
makes
a
mistake,
which
listeners
may
not
notice,
so
just
go
on.It
doesn’t
matter
when
you
make
mistakes
sometimes,
because
listeners
focus
on
the
thoughts
rather
than
the
way
a
speech
is
made.
Actually,
a
mistake
or
two
can
make
a
speaker
more
attractive
and
more
human.
Therefore,
take
it
easy,
and
it
will
be
much
easier
to
make
a
speech
freely.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
There
is
no
perfect
speech
as
every
speaker
makes
a
mistake,
which
listeners
may
not
notice,
so
just
go
on.运用there
be句型，as引导的原因状语从句，which引导的非限定性定语从句以及so引导的并列句。
[高分句型2]
It
doesn’t
matter
when
you
make
mistakes
sometimes,
because
listeners
focus
on
the
thoughts
rather
than
the
way
a
speech
is
made.运用because引导的原因状语从句
[高分句型3]
Therefore,
take
it
easy,
and
it
will
be
much
easier
to
make
a
speech
freely.运用祈使句句型。
