2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）16
口头通知+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席。你校将于本月举办一次有关环保的演讲比赛。在此之前，学校将邀请北京大学的李教授作一场有关环保的报告。请你拟一份有关这场报告的口头通知。
地点：报告厅
时间：10月12日，星期三下午2:00
目的：帮助大家收集信息，为演讲做准备
参加人员：全校同学
其他安排：会后讨论
要求：准时到会
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
the
wedding
anniversary
and
Ria(Wife)
was
waiting
for
her
husband
to
show
up.
After
some
years
of
marriage,
things
changed
between
them.
Once
they
are
a
loving
couple
who
couldn’t
live
without
each
other,
but
now
everything
had
changed.
Now,
they
were
fighting
over
every
little
thing,
but
both
of
them
didn’t
like
to
put
an
end
into
their
marriage.
Ria
was
waiting
to
see
if
Manoj(Husband)
remembered
that
it
was
their
wedding
anniversary.
As
the
doorbell
rang,
she
ran
toward
the
door
and
opened
it
with
a
smile
and
a
bunch
of
flowers
to
greet
her
husband.
They
started
to
celebrate
the
anniversary.
They
wanted
to
make
up
for
fights.
They
planned
to
prepare
champagne
and
light
music
to
celebrate.
All
of
a
sudden,
the
phone
in
the
bedroom
rang.
Ria
went
to
pick
it
up.
On
the
call
there
was
a
man
who
said,
“Hello
ma’am,
I
am
calling
from
the
police
station.
Is
this
Mr.
Manoj
Kumar’s
number？”
She
replied,
“Yes,
it
is!
”
“I
am
sorry,
ma’am,
but
an
accident
happened
and
a
man
died.
We
got
this
number
from
his
wallet.
Can
you
please
come
to
the
police
station
and
identify
the
body？”the
man
replied.
Ria
was
extremely
shocked!
“But
my
husband
is
with
me
here!
”she
replied
in
disbelief.
“Sorry,
ma’am,
but
the
incident
took
place
this
afternoon
and
he
died
while
he
was
getting
off
a
bus.”
the
man
replied.
On
hearing
this,
Ria
was
about
to
lose
her
consciousness.
“How
could
this
happen？”she
thought
to
herself.
She
had
read
some
stories
about
souls
returning
to
meet
their
loved
ones
after
their
death.
Her
heart
sank
.In
fear
she
ran
towards
other
rooms
to
look
for
her
husband.
But
he
was
not
there.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用过的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
She
said
to
herself,
“It’s
true!
He
left
me
forever.”
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
Suddenly
there
was
a
noise
from
bathroom,
and
Manoj
came
out
from
it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Exercising
is
a
free
time
activity
that
helps
people
to
feel
good
in
many
aspects
of
the
health
definition.
The
best
known
part
that
exercising
improves
is
the
physical
part.
The
physical
effect
of
exercising
is
that
every
part
and
system
of
our
body
is
in
continuous
movement.
There
are
many
parts
in
our
body
that
benefit
from
exercise,
but
one
of
the
most
important
parts
that
exercising
helps
is
the
blood
circulation
system.
For
example,
when
you
exercise,
muscles
move,
and
to
move,
muscles
need
oxygen
in
the
blood,
so
the
heart
has
to
pump
blood
at
a
faster
speed
to
keep
the
muscles
moving.
This
trains
your
heart
and
lungs
giving
you
more
strength
for
the
future.
Another
part
of
the
definition
of
health
is
mental
health.
This
is
one
of
the
aspects
that
makes
people
exercise.
Exercise
distracts
and
relaxes
you
for
a
while
because
in
your
exercise,
you
are
getting
rid
of
many
feelings,
such
as
stress.
Many
people
feel
that
after
exercising,
all
the
problems
and
pressures
of
their
lifestyle
disappear
or
at
least
are
forgotten
for
a
while.
While
exercising
problems
of
our
lives
can
be
solved
because
you
are
calm
and
relaxed,
and
it
s
just
much
easier
to
think
clearly.
The
social
aspect
of
health
is
helped
with
exercise
because
many
of
the
sports
are
and
can
be
made
with
someone
else.
This
makes
stronger
relationships
because
you
meet
people
that
like
you
and
share
the
same
things.
I
think
that
this
makes
you
feel
more
secure
and
learn
about
human
relationships.
Exercising
is
an
activity
that
touches
the
three
aspects
of
health.
By
exercising
you
could
improve
the
functioning
of
your
body,
be
calm
in
your
mind,
and
meet
new
people
which
make
a
healthier
life.
All
in
all,
exercising
enables
you
to
get
the
satisfaction
of
doing
something
that
helps
you
to
live
a
healthy
life.
This
idea
causes
many
people
to
think
of
exercise
as
a
drug.
You
should
try
it.
Exercise,
and
be
healthy.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）16
口头通知+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席。你校将于本月举办一次有关环保的演讲比赛。在此之前，学校将邀请北京大学的李教授作一场有关环保的报告。请你拟一份有关这场报告的口头通知。
地点：报告厅
时间：10月12日，星期三下午2:00
目的：帮助大家收集信息，为演讲做准备
参加人员：全校同学
其他安排：会后讨论
要求：准时到会
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hi,
everyone!
May
I
have
your
attention,
please?
To
help
us
prepare
for
the
speech
contest
on
environmental
protection
to
be
held
this
month,
our
school
will
invite
Dr
Li
from
Peking
University
to
give
us
a
lecture
on
this
topic.
The
lecture
will
begin
at
2：00
pm
on
Wednesday,
October
12
in
the
lecture
hall.
I'm
sure
we
can
get
much
useful
information
from
his
lecture.
Everyone
should
be
there
on
time.
By
the
way,
we
will
have
a
discussion
after
the
lecture.
That's
all.
Thank
you.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一则有关环保的演讲比赛的通知。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：通知内容需包括：
地点：报告厅
时间：10月12日，星期三下午2:00；
目的：帮助大家收集信息，为演讲做准备；
参加人员：全校同学；
其他安排：会后讨论；
要求：准时到会
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
prepare
for；
have
your
attention；on
time；by
the
way；
have
a
discussion；give
sb
a
lecture
第三步：连词成句
1.May
I
have
your
attention,
please?
2.To
help
us
prepare
for
the
speech
contest
on
environmental
protection
to
be
held
this
month,
our
school
will
invite
Dr
Li
from
Peking
University
to
give
us
a
lecture
on
this
topic.
3.The
lecture
will
begin
at
2：00
pm
on
Wednesday,
October
12
in
the
lecture
hall.
4.I'm
sure
we
can
get
much
useful
information
from
his
lecture.
5.Everyone
should
be
there
on
time.
6.By
the
way,
we
will
have
a
discussion
after
the
lecture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
To
help
us
prepare
for
the
speech
contest
on
environmental
protection
to
be
held
this
month,
our
school
will
invite
Dr
Li
from
Peking
University
to
give
us
a
lecture
on
this
topic.（动词不定式to
help作目的状语）
[高分句型2]
I'm
sure
we
can
get
much
useful
information
from
his
lecture.
（sure后是省略that的宾语从句）
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
the
wedding
anniversary
and
Ria(Wife)
was
waiting
for
her
husband
to
show
up.
After
some
years
of
marriage,
things
changed
between
them.
Once
they
are
a
loving
couple
who
couldn’t
live
without
each
other,
but
now
everything
had
changed.
Now,
they
were
fighting
over
every
little
thing,
but
both
of
them
didn’t
like
to
put
an
end
into
their
marriage.
Ria
was
waiting
to
see
if
Manoj(Husband)
remembered
that
it
was
their
wedding
anniversary.
As
the
doorbell
rang,
she
ran
toward
the
door
and
opened
it
with
a
smile
and
a
bunch
of
flowers
to
greet
her
husband.
They
started
to
celebrate
the
anniversary.
They
wanted
to
make
up
for
fights.
They
planned
to
prepare
champagne
and
light
music
to
celebrate.
All
of
a
sudden,
the
phone
in
the
bedroom
rang.
Ria
went
to
pick
it
up.
On
the
call
there
was
a
man
who
said,
“Hello
ma’am,
I
am
calling
from
the
police
station.
Is
this
Mr.
Manoj
Kumar’s
number？”
She
replied,
“Yes,
it
is!
”
“I
am
sorry,
ma’am,
but
an
accident
happened
and
a
man
died.
We
got
this
number
from
his
wallet.
Can
you
please
come
to
the
police
station
and
identify
the
body？”the
man
replied.
Ria
was
extremely
shocked!
“But
my
husband
is
with
me
here!
”she
replied
in
disbelief.
“Sorry,
ma’am,
but
the
incident
took
place
this
afternoon
and
he
died
while
he
was
getting
off
a
bus.”
the
man
replied.
On
hearing
this,
Ria
was
about
to
lose
her
consciousness.
“How
could
this
happen？”she
thought
to
herself.
She
had
read
some
stories
about
souls
returning
to
meet
their
loved
ones
after
their
death.
Her
heart
sank
.In
fear
she
ran
towards
other
rooms
to
look
for
her
husband.
But
he
was
not
there.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用过的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
She
said
to
herself,
“It’s
true!
He
left
me
forever.”
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2：
Suddenly
there
was
a
noise
from
bathroom,
and
Manoj
came
out
from
it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph
1：
She
said
to
herself,
“It’s
true!
He
left
me
forever.”
What
happened
flooded
into
her
mind.
Deeply
drowned
in
sorrow,
she
regretted
fighting
with
Manoj
for
every
little
thing
and
reflected
on
herself,
“How
silly
I
was!
How
could
I
live
without
him!
Oh,
God!
I
can
die
to
have
another
chance
to
make
up
for
every
fight
we
had,
but
now
I
lost
the
chance
forever...”
With
tears
rolling
down,
Ria
fell
on
the
floor
in
great
pain.
Paragraph
2：
Suddenly
there
was
a
noise
from
bathroom,
and
Manoj
came
out
from
it.
“Darling,
what
happened？”Manoj
asked
and
rushed
towards
Ria.
She
held
him
tightly,
and
crying,
“Oh,
God,
it’s
you!
I
received
a
phone
call
from
the
police
station
saying
you
died,
I...”Manoj
interrupted,
“Sorry,
I
forgot
to
tell
you
my
wallet
was
stolen...”Hearing
this,
Ria
wiped
the
tears
in
relief,
“Thank
goodness!
It
was
a
false
alarm.Anyhow,
I
will
never
fight
with
you!
”
The
couple
hugged
each
other,
determined
to
cherish
and
enjoy
every
moment
of
life
because
life
might
not
give
you
a
second
chance.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，上文主要讲述了Ria和丈夫Manoj在家庆祝结婚周年纪念日时，Ria接到警察局的电话，说她的丈夫出事故去世了，他们通过钱包里的电话找到了Ria，让她去警察局辨认尸体。Ria不敢相信，说自己的丈夫就在家里，但是对方坚持说她丈夫已经死了，Ria也想起一些故事，讲的是灵魂在亲人死后回来与他们见面。她的心一沉，恐惧之下，她跑到别的房间去找她的丈夫。但他不在那里。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：她对自己说:“这是真的！他永远地离开了我。”所以后文应该是讲述Ria相信自己丈夫确实死了之后的反应，所发生的事涌进了她的脑海。她沉浸在悲伤之中，后悔和Manoj为小事争吵，Ria陷入了无尽的自责中，倒在了地板上；第二段开头是：突然浴室里传来一阵响声，Manoj从里面走了出来。本段应该写Manoj看到妻子哭泣时的反应，以及解释说自己的钱包被偷了，才造成了这场误会。这对夫妻互相拥抱，决心要珍惜和享受生命的每一刻，因为生命可能不会给你第二次机会。
文章主要应用一般过去时，最后还要注意至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，续写完成后，用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：deeply
drowned
in；reflect
on
oneself；interrupt；in
relief；determined
to等高级词汇；What
happened
flooded
into
her
mind.
运用主语从句；The
couple
hugged
each
other,
determined
to
cherish
and
enjoy
every
moment
of
life
because
life
might
not
give
you
a
second
chance.运用原因状语从句等高级句式。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Exercising
is
a
free
time
activity
that
helps
people
to
feel
good
in
many
aspects
of
the
health
definition.
The
best
known
part
that
exercising
improves
is
the
physical
part.
The
physical
effect
of
exercising
is
that
every
part
and
system
of
our
body
is
in
continuous
movement.
There
are
many
parts
in
our
body
that
benefit
from
exercise,
but
one
of
the
most
important
parts
that
exercising
helps
is
the
blood
circulation
system.
For
example,
when
you
exercise,
muscles
move,
and
to
move,
muscles
need
oxygen
in
the
blood,
so
the
heart
has
to
pump
blood
at
a
faster
speed
to
keep
the
muscles
moving.
This
trains
your
heart
and
lungs
giving
you
more
strength
for
the
future.
Another
part
of
the
definition
of
health
is
mental
health.
This
is
one
of
the
aspects
that
makes
people
exercise.
Exercise
distracts
and
relaxes
you
for
a
while
because
in
your
exercise,
you
are
getting
rid
of
many
feelings,
such
as
stress.
Many
people
feel
that
after
exercising,
all
the
problems
and
pressures
of
their
lifestyle
disappear
or
at
least
are
forgotten
for
a
while.
While
exercising
problems
of
our
lives
can
be
solved
because
you
are
calm
and
relaxed,
and
it
s
just
much
easier
to
think
clearly.
The
social
aspect
of
health
is
helped
with
exercise
because
many
of
the
sports
are
and
can
be
made
with
someone
else.
This
makes
stronger
relationships
because
you
meet
people
that
like
you
and
share
the
same
things.
I
think
that
this
makes
you
feel
more
secure
and
learn
about
human
relationships.
Exercising
is
an
activity
that
touches
the
three
aspects
of
health.
By
exercising
you
could
improve
the
functioning
of
your
body,
be
calm
in
your
mind,
and
meet
new
people
which
make
a
healthier
life.
All
in
all,
exercising
enables
you
to
get
the
satisfaction
of
doing
something
that
helps
you
to
live
a
healthy
life.
This
idea
causes
many
people
to
think
of
exercise
as
a
drug.
You
should
try
it.
Exercise,
and
be
healthy.
【答案】
Exercising
is
helpful
in
many
aspects
of
people’s
health(要点一).
First,
it
improves
our
physical
health,
especially
our
blood
circulation
system(要点二).
It
also
does
great
good
to
people’s
mental
health,
with
many
negative
feelings
released
(
要点三).
Besides,
exercising
can
strengthen
people’s
social
relationships
by
exercising
with
those
having
the
same
interests.
In
a
word,
exercising
benefits
us
physically,
mentally,
and
socially,
which
is
of
great
help
for
us
to
live
a
healthy
life
(要点四).
(71
词)
【分析】
这是一篇说明文,文章分别从身体健康、心理健康和人际关系三个方面分析了运动的好处。
【详解】
1
要点摘录：
①Exercising
is
a
free
time
activity
that
helps
people
to
feel
good
in
many
aspects
of
the
health
definition.
②The
best
known
part
that
exercising
improves
is
the
physical
part.
③There
are
many
parts
in
our
body
that
benefit
from
exercise,
but
one
of
the
most
important
parts
that
exercising
helps
is
the
blood
circulation
system.
④Another
part
of
the
definition
of
health
is
mental
health.
⑤Many
people
feel
that
after
exercising,
all
the
problems
and
pressures
of
their
lifestyle
disappear
or
at
least
are
forgotten
for
a
while.
⑥The
social
aspect
of
health
is
helped
with
exercise
because
many
of
the
sports
are
and
can
be
made
with
someone
else.
⑦This
makes
stronger
relationships
because
you
meet
people
that
like
you
and
share
the
same
things.
⑧By
exercising
you
could
improve
the
functioning
of
your
body,
be
calm
in
your
mind,
and
meet
new
people
which
make
a
healthier
life.
⑨All
in
all,
exercising
enables
you
to
get
the
satisfaction
of
doing
something
that
helps
you
to
live
a
healthy
life.
2.要点整合：
分别将②③、④⑤、⑥⑦、⑧⑨，整合重组。
3.遣词造句：
第①句整合后：Exercising
is
helpful
in
many
aspects
of
people’s
health
.
第②③句重组整合后：Exercising
improves
our
physical
health,
especially
our
blood
circulation
system.
第④⑤句重组整合后：Exercising
also
does
great
good
to
people’s
mental
health,
with
many
negative
feelings
released.
第⑥⑦句重组整合后：exercising
can
strengthen
people’s
social
relationships
by
exercising
with
those
having
the
same
interests.
第⑧⑨句重组整合后：exercising
benefits
us
physically,
mentally,
and
socially,
which
is
of
great
help
for
us
to
live
a
healthy
life.
4.
连句成文（采用适当的表示文章结构和逻辑关系的连词或过渡词句，使文章连贯起来）
表文章结构顺序：First/First
of
all/
Firstly/First,
And
also/Secondly/Second,
And
then/Besides,
Finally,/In
the
end
At
last
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It
also
does
great
good
to
people’s
mental
health,
with
many
negative
feelings
released.with的复合结构。
[高分句型2]：In
a
word,
exercising
benefits
us
physically,
mentally,
and
socially,
which
is
of
great
help
for
us
to
live
a
healthy
life.which引导目的非限制性定语从句。
