2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）15
英语周记+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李津，是一名高中学生，平时忙于学习。上周末你利用休息时间帮助家人做家务。请根据下面的写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你的这次经历。
写作要点：
1.做家务的理由；
2.做家务的过程；
3.你的感受。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
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【答案】
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
I
have
been
busy
with
my
study
and
seldom
helped
my
parents
with
the
housework.
Feeling
quite
sorry
for
that,
I
begin
to
think
about
what
to
do
to
help.
Last
Sunday,
when
my
parents
went
out
shopping,
I
suddenly
got
an
idea:
why
not
give
the
rooms
a
thorough
cleaning?
Firstly
I
collected
all
the
books,
newspapers
and
other
things
scattered
in
the
rooms
and
put
them
in
place.
Then
I
wiped
the
dust
off
all
the
furniture.
After
that,
I
swept
and
mopped
the
floors.
At
this
very
moment,
my
parents
came
back
and
were
quite
surprised
to
see
all
the
rooms
tidy
and
floors
shining.
My
mother
gave
me
a
hug
and
I
could
see
satisfaction
in
her
eyes.
Tired
as
I
was,
I
never
felt
so
happy.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇周记，讲述上周末利用休息时间帮助家人做家务的经历。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
要求：
1.做家务的理由；
2.做家务的过程；
3.你的感受。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
be
busy
with;
begin
to;
thorough;
put
sth.
in
place;
wipe
dust;
be
surprised
to;
satisfaction;
tired
第三步：连词成句
1.
I
have
been
busy
with
my
study
and
seldom
helped
my
parents
with
the
housework.
2.
Feeling
quite
sorry
for
that,
I
begin
to
think
about
what
to
do
to
help.
3.
Last
Sunday,
when
my
parents
went
out
shopping,
I
suddenly
got
an
idea:
why
not
give
the
rooms
a
thorough
cleaning?
4.
Firstly
I
collected
all
the
books,
newspapers
and
other
things
scattered
in
the
rooms
and
put
them
in
place.
5.
Then
I
wiped
the
dust
off
all
the
furniture.
6.
After
that,
I
swept
and
mopped
the
floors.
7.
At
this
very
moment,
my
parents
came
back
and
were
quite
surprised
to
see
all
the
rooms
tidy
and
floors
shining.
8.
My
mother
gave
me
a
hug
and
I
could
see
satisfaction
in
her
eyes.
9.
Tired
as
I
was,
I
never
felt
so
happy.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly,
then,
after
that
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Last
Sunday,
when
my
parents
went
out
shopping,
I
suddenly
got
an
idea:
why
not
give
the
rooms
a
thorough
cleaning?
(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]
Tired
as
I
was,
I
never
felt
so
happy.
(运用了as引导让步状语从句和部分倒装)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mary,
Tom
and
Buddy
Mary
was
a
17-year-old
girl
with
long
brown
hair
and
pretty
eyes.
Every
evening
she
would
take
her
dog,
Buddy,
out
for
a
walk
before
dinner.
She
had
named
her
dog
Buddy
because
it
was
very
friendly
to
everybody
it
met.
But
Buddy
never
barked
(叫)
at
anyone
or
any
dogs
when
they
were
out
for
their
walks.
One
night,
something
strange
happened.
For
the
first
time
in
its
life,
Buddy
barked
when
they
were
taking
a
walk
beside
a
forest.
“What’s
the
matter,
Buddy?”
Mary
asked.
Buddy
replied
in
more
barks.
All
of
a
sudden,
the
wind
grew
stronger
and
the
sky
became
cloudier.
Mary
decided
to
turn
around
and
head
back
home.
But
before
she
could,
a
voice
called
out
her
name.
Mary
wanted
to
run
but
Buddy
refused.
“Who’s
there?”
Mary
asked,
trying
to
be
calm.
A
boy
came
out
from
the
forest.
“Tom,
is
that
you?”
Mary
asked
the
shy
boy.
Tom
looked
down
at
the
ground
with
his
hands
in
his
pockets.
“What
are
you
doing,
Tom?
Have
you
been
following
me?”
Mary
asked.
“I’m
sorry.
I
didn’t
mean
to
frighten
you,”
Tom
said.
Mary
could
tell
that
he
was
nervous.
She
suddenly
knew
of
the
feelings
Tom
had
for
her.
“Would
you
like
to
walk
me
home,
Tom?”
Mary
asked
finally.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tom
was
too
happy
to
answer.
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In
the
kitchen,
they
made
hamburgers,
cakes
and
more.
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【答案】
Tom
was
too
happy
to
answer.
Buddy
reminded
him
by
barking
loudly.
Then
he
nodded.
The
three
together
went
back
home.
On
the
way,
Tom
said
“I
had
intended
to
make
an
apology
to
you,
for
I
broke
your
bike
during
the
day.
So
I
followed
you.
But
I
am
shy,
thinking
what
if
you
don't
forgive
me.
So…”
Mary
listened
attentively,
and
came
to
understand
what
had
happened.
“Forget
it
Tom.
I
have
had
my
bike
repaired.”
Suddenly,
an
idea
struck
her.
On
arriving
home,
Mary
led
Tom
into
the
kitchen,
telling
him
“Let’s
cook
by
ourselves.”
In
the
kitchen,
they
made
hamburgers,
cakes
and
more.
They
talked
about
what
had
happened
with
Buddy
barking
delightedly
now
and
then,
and
then
shared
the
delicious
food
together.
Tom
praised
buddy,
petting
it
and
saying
“Thank
you
Buddy!
Without
you,
I
couldn’t
have
had
a
chance
to
apologize
to
Mary.”,
adding
“May
I
be
your
friends,
Mary?”
Mary
answered
“We
have
been
friends
all
the
time.”
They
laughed
happily.
What
a
wonderful
night.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。
【详解】
本文讲述了一个小故事。Mary的狗，名叫Buddy，它很乖，出去遛弯时从不乱叫。但是一天晚上，它一反常态，对着树林大叫。后来发现树林里藏着的是Tom。Tom很紧张，并说自己不是故意要吓唬Mary。Mary让Tom和她一起回家。
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：Tom太高兴了而没有回答Mary的问题。所以下文可以接着写，Tom给Mary解释他躲在树林里的原因，Mary明白了发生的一切，并想出了一个可以让Tom不那么难受的方法。第二段的开头是：在厨房里，他们一起做汉堡包、蛋糕等。所以下文可以接着写，他们在此过程中愉快的交谈，小狗Buddy也很开心。Tom感谢Buddy发现了自己，让自己可以有道歉的机会，也感谢Mary能原谅他，并请求成为她的朋友。
本篇以一般过去时为主。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：Mary
listened
attentively,
and
came
to
understand
what
had
happened.中what引导宾语从句；They
talked
about
what
had
happened
with
Buddy
barking
delightedly
now
and
then,
and
then
shared
the
delicious
food
together.中使用了with的复合结构。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
With
busy
life,
it
can
be
hard
to
find
time
to
volunteer.However,
volunteering
brings
you
lots
of
benefits.The
more
you
volunteer,
the
more
benefits
you
will
gain.Of
course,
volunteering
does
not
have
to
involve
a
long-term
commitment
or
take
a
huge
amount
of
time
out
of
your
busy
days.Giving
in
simple
ways
can
not
only
help
those
in
need
but
also
improve
your
health
all
happiness.
One
of
the
better-known
benefits
of
volunteering
is
that
it
allows
you
to
connect
to
your
community,
boast
your
social
skills
and
make
it
a
better
place.Even
helping
out
with
the
smallest
tasks
can
make
a
real
difference
to
the
lives
of
people,
animals
and
organizations
in
need.And
volunteering
is
a
two-way
street:
It
can
benefit
you
and
your
family
as
much
as
the
others
you
choose
to
help.
Volunteering
provides
many
benefits
to
both
mental
and
physical
health.Almost
everyone
has
to
fight
against
stress,
anger
and
anxiety.The
social
contact
aspect
of
helping
and
working
with
others
can
have
a
profound
effect
on
your
overall
psychological
well-being.Nothing
relieves
stress
better
than
a
meaningful
connection
to
another
person.Working
with
pest
and
other
animal
has
also
been
shown
to
improve
mood
and
reduce
stress
and
anxiety.
Volunteering
can
also
advance
your
career.If
you
are
considering
a
new
career,
volunteering
can
help
you
get
experience
in
your
area
of
interest
and
meet
people
in
the
field.Even
if
you
are
not
planning
on
changing
careers,
volunteering
gives
you
the
opportunity
to
practice
important
skills
used
in
the
workplace,
such
as
teamwork,
communication,
problem
solving,
project
planning,
task
management
and
organization.You
might
feel
more
comfortable
stretching
your
wings
at
work
once
you
have
developed
these
skills
in
a
volunteer
position
first.
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【答案】
Volunteering
brings
many
benefits
to
you.
Firstly
of
all,
you
can
give
a
hand
to
those
who
are
in
need
of
help
and
it
doesn’t
require
a
great
deal
of
time
and
energy.
Secondly,
it
is
really
happy
and
meaningful
when
you
help
others
solve
problems
successfully.
In
this
sense,
volunteering
can
effectively
relieve
stress
and
anxiety,
and
it
is
good
for
your
mental
health.
Finally,
by
doing
voluntary
work,
you
can
also
improve
social
skills
and
promote
career
development.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章主要阐述了做志愿者工作的好处。做志愿者不需要花费大量时间和精力就可以帮助别人，能够提高社交技能，减轻压力和焦虑，使身心更加健康，锻炼自己解决问题的能力，结识感兴趣的领域的人，促进事业的发展。
【详解】
1.
要点摘录
①Of
course,volunteering
does
not
have
to
involve
a
long-term
commitment
or
take
a
huge
amount
of
time
out
of
your
busy
days.
②One
of
the
better-known
benefits
of
volunteering
is
that
it
allows
you
to
connect
to
your
community,
boast
your
social
skills
and
make
it
a
better
place.
③Volunteering
provides
many
benefits
to
both
mental
and
physical
health.
④Volunteering
can
also
advance
your
career.If
you
are
considering
a
new
career,
volunteering
can
help
you
get
experience
in
your
area
of
interest
and
meet
people
in
the
field.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行重组并对全文加以概括（作为总说），将第2、3、4两个要点进行整合（作为分说）。
3.遣词造句
Volunteering
work
only
requires
you
to
help
others
in
your
spare
time.
You
will
feel
happy
when
you
do
something
for
others.
You
can
benefit
a
lot
by
doing
voluntary
work,
for
example,
it
can
enrich
our
spirit,
reduce
stress
and
anxiety.
Volunteering
can
help
you
improve
your
problem-solving
skills
and
you
will
have
a
better
career
development.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：Firstly
of
all,
you
can
give
a
hand
to
those
who
are
in
need
of
help
and
it
doesn’t
require
a
great
deal
of
time
and
energy.
运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句，表达非常高级。
[高分句型2]：In
this
sense,
volunteering
can
effectively
relieve
stress
and
anxiety,
and
it
is
good
for
your
mental
health.
运用了in
this
sense，be
good
for等固定短语对第三段进行了概括，表达非常高级。
[高分句型3]：Finally,
by
doing
voluntary
work,
you
can
also
improve
social
skills
and
promote
career
development.
运用介词by+动名词doing结构作状语，对原文第四段进行了概括，表达非常高级。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）15
英语周记+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李津，是一名高中学生，平时忙于学习。上周末你利用休息时间帮助家人做家务。请根据下面的写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你的这次经历。
写作要点：
1.做家务的理由；
2.做家务的过程；
3.你的感受。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mary,
Tom
and
Buddy
Mary
was
a
17-year-old
girl
with
long
brown
hair
and
pretty
eyes.
Every
evening
she
would
take
her
dog,
Buddy,
out
for
a
walk
before
dinner.
She
had
named
her
dog
Buddy
because
it
was
very
friendly
to
everybody
it
met.
But
Buddy
never
barked
(叫)
at
anyone
or
any
dogs
when
they
were
out
for
their
walks.
One
night,
something
strange
happened.
For
the
first
time
in
its
life,
Buddy
barked
when
they
were
taking
a
walk
beside
a
forest.
“What’s
the
matter,
Buddy?”
Mary
asked.
Buddy
replied
in
more
barks.
All
of
a
sudden,
the
wind
grew
stronger
and
the
sky
became
cloudier.
Mary
decided
to
turn
around
and
head
back
home.
But
before
she
could,
a
voice
called
out
her
name.
Mary
wanted
to
run
but
Buddy
refused.
“Who’s
there?”
Mary
asked,
trying
to
be
calm.
A
boy
came
out
from
the
forest.
“Tom,
is
that
you?”
Mary
asked
the
shy
boy.
Tom
looked
down
at
the
ground
with
his
hands
in
his
pockets.
“What
are
you
doing,
Tom?
Have
you
been
following
me?”
Mary
asked.
“I’m
sorry.
I
didn’t
mean
to
frighten
you,”
Tom
said.
Mary
could
tell
that
he
was
nervous.
She
suddenly
knew
of
the
feelings
Tom
had
for
her.
“Would
you
like
to
walk
me
home,
Tom?”
Mary
asked
finally.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tom
was
too
happy
to
answer.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In
the
kitchen,
they
made
hamburgers,
cakes
and
more.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
With
busy
life,
it
can
be
hard
to
find
time
to
volunteer.However,
volunteering
brings
you
lots
of
benefits.The
more
you
volunteer,
the
more
benefits
you
will
gain.Of
course,
volunteering
does
not
have
to
involve
a
long-term
commitment
or
take
a
huge
amount
of
time
out
of
your
busy
days.Giving
in
simple
ways
can
not
only
help
those
in
need
but
also
improve
your
health
all
happiness.
One
of
the
better-known
benefits
of
volunteering
is
that
it
allows
you
to
connect
to
your
community,
boast
your
social
skills
and
make
it
a
better
place.Even
helping
out
with
the
smallest
tasks
can
make
a
real
difference
to
the
lives
of
people,
animals
and
organizations
in
need.And
volunteering
is
a
two-way
street:
It
can
benefit
you
and
your
family
as
much
as
the
others
you
choose
to
help.
Volunteering
provides
many
benefits
to
both
mental
and
physical
health.Almost
everyone
has
to
fight
against
stress,
anger
and
anxiety.The
social
contact
aspect
of
helping
and
working
with
others
can
have
a
profound
effect
on
your
overall
psychological
well-being.Nothing
relieves
stress
better
than
a
meaningful
connection
to
another
person.Working
with
pest
and
other
animal
has
also
been
shown
to
improve
mood
and
reduce
stress
and
anxiety.
Volunteering
can
also
advance
your
career.If
you
are
considering
a
new
career,
volunteering
can
help
you
get
experience
in
your
area
of
interest
and
meet
people
in
the
field.Even
if
you
are
not
planning
on
changing
careers,
volunteering
gives
you
the
opportunity
to
practice
important
skills
used
in
the
workplace,
such
as
teamwork,
communication,
problem
solving,
project
planning,
task
management
and
organization.You
might
feel
more
comfortable
stretching
your
wings
at
work
once
you
have
developed
these
skills
in
a
volunteer
position
first.
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