2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）14
英语日记+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，今天（星期日，11月15日，晴）在学校英语角遇到一个外教，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却由于口语水平有限不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
November
15,
Sunday
Sunny
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
November
15,
Sunday
Sunny
This
morning
when
I
was
in
the
English
Corner,
I
came
across
a
foreign
teacher.
This
was
the
first
time
that
I
had
seen
a
foreigner.
I
wanted
to
talk
with
him,
but
I
was
so
excited
and
nervous
that
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do
and
how
to
start
a
conversation.
Eager
to
practice
my
oral
English,
I
encouraged
myself
to
say
hello
to
him.
He
was
very
friendly
and
we
talked
about
15
minutes.
As
a
native,
I
introduced
attractions
and
tasty
food
of
this
city
to
him.
Finally,
he
gave
me
some
advice
on
how
to
further
improve
my
English.
It
was
more
than
an
experience!
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生写一篇日记，以在英语角遇到外教并与他进行了交流为主题进行叙述。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：分总结构。先具体讲述发生的事件，即：遇到外教并与其交流；然后对此次经历作出感受总结。
要求：
1．想跟他谈话却由于口语水平有限不知所措；
2．你向他介绍你的城市；
3．他给你一些学习英语的建议；
4．总结经历感受。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
come
across;
talk
with
sb.;
so...that;
eager
to
do;
encourage
sb.
to
do;
introduce
sth
to
sb.;
give
sb.
advice
on
sth;
how
to
do;
more
than
第三步：连词成句
1.
This
morning
when
I
was
in
the
English
Corner,
I
came
across
a
foreign
teacher.
2.
I
wanted
to
talk
with
him,
but
I
was
so
excited
and
nervous
that
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do
and
how
to
start
a
conversation.
3.
Eager
to
practice
my
oral
English,
I
encouraged
myself
to
say
hello
to
him.
4.
As
a
native,
I
introduced
attractions
and
tasty
food
of
this
city
to
him.
5.
Finally,
he
gave
me
some
advice
on
how
to
further
improve
my
English.
6.
It
was
more
than
an
experience!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章时间顺序：Finally；In
the
end；At
last
2.表结果系：so…that…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This
was
the
first
time
that
I
had
seen
a
foreigner.(这是我第一次见到外国人。)
本句使用了“This
was
the+序数词+time+that+主语+had
done”句式。
[高分句型2]
I
wanted
to
talk
with
him,
but
I
was
so
excited
and
nervous
that
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do
and
how
to
start
a
conversation.(我想和他谈谈，但我又兴奋又紧张，不知道该怎么做，也不知道该怎么开口。)
本句使用“but”作为并列连词连接前后两个句子，且后句中使用了“so…that”结果状语从句。
[高分句型3]
Eager
to
practice
my
oral
English,
I
encouraged
myself
to
say
hello
to
him.(我渴望练习我的英语口语，我鼓励自己和他打招呼。)
本句中“Eager
to
practice
my
oral
English”为形容词短语作状语。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Surprises
are
beautiful
because
they
come
without
waiting.
It
was
not
so
true
for
Nancy
though.
She
was
sure
her
younger
sister,
Kate,
was
planning
a
surprise
for
her
birthday.
Opening
the
curtains
of
her
bedroom
window,
she
hungrily
drank
in
the
fresh
morning
air.
Nancy
was
turning
30
today.
“Keep
calm.
It’s
only
your
30th
birthday.”
she
thought
to
herself,
quickly
glancing
at
the
mirror
and
looking
away.
She
never
liked
looking
at
the
mirror.
It
always
reminded
her
of
what
she
had
suffered.
She
didn’t
want
to
think
of
the
past
and
all
that
it
had
done
to
her.
Over
these
years
she
had
worked
at
different
factories
and
cleaned
the
floors
at
big
hotels
where
perfumed
men
and
women
floated
easily.
Ever
since
their
parents
died,
her
only
goal
was
to
educate
Kate.
Nancy
didn’t
go
to
her
dreamy
university.
Her
emotions
came
running
back
to
the
present.
Quickly,
she
wiped
her
tears
and
rushed
to
the
door.
“A
sister
is
a
little
bit
of
childhood
that
can
never
be
lost.”
Kate
was
her
dream,
her
hope,
her
happiness
and
her
precious
possession.
She
meant
everything
to
her.
Kate
was
so
outstanding
that
she
was
admitted
to
Harvard
University.
And
today,
Nancy
was
sure
Kate
would
surprise
her
with
a
gift
like
she
did
every
year.
Nancy
imagined
the
freshly
baked
chocolate
cake
that
would
welcome
her.
Her
tongue
was
eager
to
lick
up
the
soft,
brown
cream
and
her
teeth
were
ready
to
bite
it.
She
heard
the
sound
of
Kate’s
footsteps
coming
towards
her.
She
waited
smiling.
It
seemed
like
an
endless
wait.
Finally,
she
heard
her
younger
sister
approaching
her
room.
Her
eyes
lit
up,
steps
turned
into
a
spring
and
her
heart
was
pounding.
She
sniffed
the
air
to
catch
a
breath
of
the
chocolate
cake
but
she
couldn’t.
“Maybe
it
is
not
chocolate
flavor
this
time.”
she
imagined
with
pride.
Her
sister
was
a
grown-up
now.
She
could
surprise
her
with
something
else.
注意:
1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2、至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
No
cakes,
no
flowers,
and
no
package
wrapped
in
shiny
golden
paper,
tied
with
red
ribbons.
The
excitement
disappeared
from
Nancy’s
face.
Her
face
looked
like
a
blank
white
page.
Kate
was
smiling.
She
could
win
the
world
with
the
radiance
of
her
smile.
She
gave
her
sister
a
tight
hug.
“Happy
birthday,”
said
Kate.
Nancy
loosened
herself
from
the
warm
embrace
and
looked
at
her
sister.
“Thank
you,”
she
said,
smiling
coldly.
“And
here’s
your
gift,”
Kate
said.
Paragraph
2:
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
Nancy’s
eyebrows
shot
up
like
mountain
peaks
and
her
eyes
were
flooded
with
questions.
“Sacrificing
your
happiness
for
the
happiness
of
the
one
you
love
is
by
far
the
truest
type
of
love.
This
is
an
admission.
You
are
admitted
to
the
community
university.
I
want
you
to
pick
up
from
where
you
left.
It’s
time
that
you
achieve
your
dream.”
Nancy’s
eyes
grew
wet
and
her
trembling
hands
were
held
firmly
by
Kate.
【分析】
本篇书面表达考查读后续写。
【详解】
本文是一篇读后续写的短文。要求阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。要求包括：(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；(3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；(4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。写作时运用第三人称写作，用一般过去时为主写作。写作时应该发挥想象力，在原有内容基础上进行创作，要做到行文连贯，内容合理，流畅自然适当运用亮点词汇和高分句型，使句式多样化。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了高级表达方式，如Nancy’s
eyebrows
shot
up
like
mountain
peaks
and
her
eyes
were
flooded
with
questions.使用了并列句式；Sacrificing
your
happiness
for
the
happiness
of
the
one
you
love
is
by
far
the
truest
type
of
love.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting
up
early
has
been
regarded
as
a
good
habit
since
ancient
times.
Many
years
ago,
people
thought
that
if
we
went
to
bed
early
and
got
up
early,
we
would
be
energetic
the
whole
day.
So,
getting
up
early
is
of
great
importance
to
us
all.
In
fact,
morning
is
the
best
time
of
a
day.
In
the
morning,
the
air
is
the
freshest
and
people
are
usually
in
the
best
condition.
Many
of
us
may
have
the
experiences
that
we
memorize
some
things
more
quickly
and
correctly
in
the
morning
than
at
any
other
time
of
the
day.
And
it
is
certain
that
we
find
it
easier
to
understand
what
we
learn
in
the
morning.
If
we
get
up
early
and
do
some
morning
exercise
or
only
take
a
short
walk
in
the
morning,
without
doubt
we
can
build
up
our
bodies
and
become
much
healthier.
Also
we
will
have
enough
time
to
make
a
plan
and
get
ready
for
our
work
or
study
of
the
day
if
we
get
up
early.
For
example,
if
everyone
in
the
family
gets
up
early,
wives
will
have
enough
time
to
prepare
the
breakfast
for
the
whole
family;
children
will
have
enough
time
to
catch
the
school
bus,
and
husbands
will
never
forget
to
change
their
dirty
shirt.
Everything
will
be
in
order.
However,
if
we
get
up
late,
we’ll
probably
have
to
do
everything
in
a
hurry.
Let
us
remember
getting
up
early
is
a
good
habit
and
try
our
best
to
keep
it.
Late
risers
may
find
it
difficult
to
form
the
habit
of
getting
up
early.
They
have
to
make
an
effort
to
do
so.
If
we
stick
to
getting
up
early
every
day,
we
will
certainly
benefit
a
lot
from
it.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Great
importance
has
been
attached
to
getting
up
early
since
ancient
times.
(早起的重要性)(要点1)
To
begin
with,
morning
is
a
fantastic
time
to
enjoy
the
freshest
air
and
have
a
more
accurate
memory.
(对记忆的好处)
(要点2)In
addition,
people
who
stick
to
physical
exercise
in
the
morning
will
be
healthier.
(锻炼)(要点三)
Last
but
not
least,
getting
up
early
enables
us
to
make
good
preparations
for
the
day.
(做好一天的准备)(要点4)To
sum
up,
we
are
supposed
to
stick
to
the
good
habit
,
which
will
benefit
us
a
lot
.(建议)(要点5)
【分析】
本文是一篇概要写作。文章告诉我们早起的重要性，会对我们的记忆带来好处，也能够更好的做好一天的准备。
【详解】
本文是一篇概要写作，要求写出文章的主题大意和要点，要写全要点，抓住重点，要使用自己比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型，恰当使用过渡词和连接词，以使文章连贯、流畅。要尽量使用高级词汇和句型、各种从句以及非谓语动词等高级形式，以体现较高的写作水平。本文写作时时态采用一般现在时。
在写作时应注意把握本文文章要点：1.早起的重要性；2.早起对于记忆有很大的帮助；3.可以在早晨进行晨练，增强身体素质；4.可以为一天做好准备。写作时应注意上下文连贯及词数要求。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）14
英语日记+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，今天（星期日，11月15日，晴）在学校英语角遇到一个外教，你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：
1.想跟他谈话却由于口语水平有限不知所措；
2.你向他介绍你的城市；
3.他给你一些学习英语的建议。
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
November
15,
Sunday
Sunny
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Surprises
are
beautiful
because
they
come
without
waiting.
It
was
not
so
true
for
Nancy
though.
She
was
sure
her
younger
sister,
Kate,
was
planning
a
surprise
for
her
birthday.
Opening
the
curtains
of
her
bedroom
window,
she
hungrily
drank
in
the
fresh
morning
air.
Nancy
was
turning
30
today.
“Keep
calm.
It’s
only
your
30th
birthday.”
she
thought
to
herself,
quickly
glancing
at
the
mirror
and
looking
away.
She
never
liked
looking
at
the
mirror.
It
always
reminded
her
of
what
she
had
suffered.
She
didn’t
want
to
think
of
the
past
and
all
that
it
had
done
to
her.
Over
these
years
she
had
worked
at
different
factories
and
cleaned
the
floors
at
big
hotels
where
perfumed
men
and
women
floated
easily.
Ever
since
their
parents
died,
her
only
goal
was
to
educate
Kate.
Nancy
didn’t
go
to
her
dreamy
university.
Her
emotions
came
running
back
to
the
present.
Quickly,
she
wiped
her
tears
and
rushed
to
the
door.
“A
sister
is
a
little
bit
of
childhood
that
can
never
be
lost.”
Kate
was
her
dream,
her
hope,
her
happiness
and
her
precious
possession.
She
meant
everything
to
her.
Kate
was
so
outstanding
that
she
was
admitted
to
Harvard
University.
And
today,
Nancy
was
sure
Kate
would
surprise
her
with
a
gift
like
she
did
every
year.
Nancy
imagined
the
freshly
baked
chocolate
cake
that
would
welcome
her.
Her
tongue
was
eager
to
lick
up
the
soft,
brown
cream
and
her
teeth
were
ready
to
bite
it.
She
heard
the
sound
of
Kate’s
footsteps
coming
towards
her.
She
waited
smiling.
It
seemed
like
an
endless
wait.
Finally,
she
heard
her
younger
sister
approaching
her
room.
Her
eyes
lit
up,
steps
turned
into
a
spring
and
her
heart
was
pounding.
She
sniffed
the
air
to
catch
a
breath
of
the
chocolate
cake
but
she
couldn’t.
“Maybe
it
is
not
chocolate
flavor
this
time.”
she
imagined
with
pride.
Her
sister
was
a
grown-up
now.
She
could
surprise
her
with
something
else.
注意:
1、所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；
2、至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Kate
walked
into
her
room
empty-handed.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kate
handed
her
a
brown
envelope.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting
up
early
has
been
regarded
as
a
good
habit
since
ancient
times.
Many
years
ago,
people
thought
that
if
we
went
to
bed
early
and
got
up
early,
we
would
be
energetic
the
whole
day.
So,
getting
up
early
is
of
great
importance
to
us
all.
In
fact,
morning
is
the
best
time
of
a
day.
In
the
morning,
the
air
is
the
freshest
and
people
are
usually
in
the
best
condition.
Many
of
us
may
have
the
experiences
that
we
memorize
some
things
more
quickly
and
correctly
in
the
morning
than
at
any
other
time
of
the
day.
And
it
is
certain
that
we
find
it
easier
to
understand
what
we
learn
in
the
morning.
If
we
get
up
early
and
do
some
morning
exercise
or
only
take
a
short
walk
in
the
morning,
without
doubt
we
can
build
up
our
bodies
and
become
much
healthier.
Also
we
will
have
enough
time
to
make
a
plan
and
get
ready
for
our
work
or
study
of
the
day
if
we
get
up
early.
For
example,
if
everyone
in
the
family
gets
up
early,
wives
will
have
enough
time
to
prepare
the
breakfast
for
the
whole
family;
children
will
have
enough
time
to
catch
the
school
bus,
and
husbands
will
never
forget
to
change
their
dirty
shirt.
Everything
will
be
in
order.
However,
if
we
get
up
late,
we’ll
probably
have
to
do
everything
in
a
hurry.
Let
us
remember
getting
up
early
is
a
good
habit
and
try
our
best
to
keep
it.
Late
risers
may
find
it
difficult
to
form
the
habit
of
getting
up
early.
They
have
to
make
an
effort
to
do
so.
If
we
stick
to
getting
up
early
every
day,
we
will
certainly
benefit
a
lot
from
it.
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