2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）13
感谢信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，假期在英国旅游时得到导游Peter的帮助，回来后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。
主要内容：1．回忆旅行中的难忘经历；
2．表示感谢并邀请他来你的家乡。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once,
when
I
was
a
teenager,
my
father
and
I
were
standing
in
line
to
buy
tickets
for
the
circus.
Finally,
there
was
only
one
family
between
us
and
the
ticket
counter.
This
family
made
a
big
impression
on
me.
There
were
eight
children,
all
probably
under
the
age
of
twelve.
You
could
tell
they
didn't
have
a
lot
of
money.
Their
clothes
were
not
expensive,
but
they
were
clean.
The
children
were
well-behaved,
all
of
them
standing
in
line,
two-by-two
behind
their
parents,
holding
hands.
They
were
excitedly
talking
about
the
clowns,
elephants,
and
other
acts
they
would
see
that
night
with
their
brothers
or
sisters
in
a
low
voice.
One
could
sense
they
had
never
been
to
the
circus
before.it
promised
to
be
highlight
of
their
young
lives.
The
father
and
mother
were
at
the
head
of
the
pack,
standing
proud
as
could
be.
The
mother
was
holding
her
husband's
hand,
looking
up
at
him
as
if
to
say,
"You
are
my
knight
in
shining
armor."
He
was
smiling
and
responding
in
pride,
looking
back
at
her
as
if
to
say.
"You
got
that
right."
The
ticket
lady
asked
the
father
how
many
tickets
he
wanted.
He
proudly
responded,
"Please
let
me
buy
eight
children's
tickets
and
two
adult
tickets
so
I
can
take
my
family
to
the
circus."
The
ticket
lady
gave
the
price.
The
man's
wife
let
go
of
his
hand,
her
head
dropped,
and
his
lips
began
to
shake.
The
father
leaned
a
lite
closer
and
asked,
"How
much
did
you
say?"
The
ticket
lady
again
quoted
the
price.
The
man
didn't
have
enough
money.
How
was
he
supposed
to
turn
and
tell
his
eight
children
that
he
didn't
have
enough
money
to
take
them
to
the
circus?
Actually
we
were
not
wealthy
in
any
sense.
So
I
understand
how
the
kids
would
feel.
I
felt
sorry
for
them.
注意：
1.
所需写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
Paragraph
1
Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket,
pulled
out
a
$20
bill
and
dropped
it
on
the
ground.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2
That
day
my
father
and
I
went
back
to
our
car
and
drove
home
without
any
tickets.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
Many
Chinese
students
have
studied
English
for
approximately
ten
years,
but
most
of
them
cannot
even
speak
English
correctly
or
fluently.
In
my
opinion,
there
are
several
obstacles(障碍)that
have
caused
this
to
happen.
The
main
obstacle
is
fear!
Another
is
the
habit
of
mentally
translating
from
Chinese
to
English
and
then
to
change
these
thoughts
into
spoken
words
and
sentences.
Many
of
these
difficulties
are
caused
by
the
way
Chinese
people
study
and
learn
the
language.
We
must
learn
to
speak
as
a
child
does.
When
we
are
learning
a
second
language
we
need
to
remember
how
we
learned
our
native
language.
Learning
to
understand
and
speak
a
language
is
one
of
the
first
skills
a
child
develops.
How
does
a
child
learn
the
language?
He
listens
for
a
time
and
then
he
tries
to
repeat
the
words.
Parents
give
great
praise
for
the
smallest
effort
and
slightest
improvement.
Therefore,
the
child
develops
courage
and
is
excited
about
learning.
It
takes
a
long
time
before
he
knows
anything
about
grammar,
spelling
or
formal
sentence
structures.
As
for
language
teachers,
they
should
avoid
criticism(批评)and
be
very
encouraging
and
generous
with
praise.
Criticism
or
pointing
out
faults
too
often
causes
students
to
lose
self-confidence
and
develop
a
fear
of
speaking.
The
best
way
to
motivate
a
student
is
using
Praise.
The
most
important
aspect
of
speaking
is
having
self-esteem.
Self-esteem
is
how
you
feel
about
yourself.
When
most
Chinese
people
are
asked
how
their
English
is,
or
they
are
told
their
English
is,
or
very
are
told
their
English
is
very
good,
they
immediately
respond
by
saying,
''Oh
my
English
is
very
poor.
''If
you
say
this
to
yourself
often
enough,
you
will
believe
it.
When
someone
compliments(称赞)you,
just
say
''thank
you
''.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）13
感谢信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，假期在英国旅游时得到导游Peter的帮助，回来后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。
主要内容：1．回忆旅行中的难忘经历；
2．表示感谢并邀请他来你的家乡。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Peter,
I’m
writing
to
express
my
heartfelt
gratitude
for
your
help
while
I
was
travelling
in
England
during
my
vacation.
It
is
your
detailed
and
humorous
introduction
that
enables
me
to
have
a
deeper
insight
into
British
culture
and
have
a
wonderful
time
there.
I
am
also
deeply
impressed
by
your
sincere
help
to
get
some
medicine
when
I
caught
a
cold
and
your
perfect
advice
in
choosing
gifts
for
my
family.
Thanks
again
for
all
your
efforts!
I
do
hope
someday
you’ll
come
to
China
and
let
me
show
you
around
my
hometown.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给导游Peter写封邮件，表达对于在英国旅游期间Peter给与帮助的谢意，并邀请他来家乡。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，少量使用一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段表达感谢；第二段描述旅途回忆；第三段提出邀请。
要求：
1.
表达感谢；
2.
回忆旅行中的难忘经历；
3.
表示感谢并邀请他来你的家乡。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
express
my
heartfelt
gratitude;
during
summer
vacation;
enable
sb.
to
do;
have
a
deeper
insight
into;
have
a
wonderful
time;
be
deeply
impressed
by;
catch
a
cold;
let
sb.
do;
show
sb.
around
第三步：连词成句
1.
I’m
writing
to
express
my
heartfelt
gratitude
for
your
help
while
I
was
traveling
in
England
during
summer
vacation.
2.
It
is
your
detailed
and
humorous
introduction
that
enables
me
to
have
a
deeper
insight
into
British
culture
and
have
a
wonderful
time
there.
3.
I
am
also
deeply
impressed
by
your
sincere
help
to
get
some
medicine
when
I
caught
a
cold
and
your
perfect
advice
in
choosing
gifts
for
my
family.
4.
I
do
hope
someday
you’ll
come
to
China
and
let
me
show
you
around
my
hometown.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What
is
more;
Besides;
Moreover;
Furthermore;
In
addition;
As
well
as;
not
only…but
(also);
including(供参考)
2.表因果关系：Because;
As;
So;
Thus;
Therefore;
As
a
result
(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I’m
writing
to
express
my
heartfelt
gratitude
for
your
help
while
I
was
traveling
in
England
during
my
vacation.(我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢，感谢你在我暑假在英国旅游时对我的帮助。)
这句中使用了“while”引导时间状语从句“while
I
was
traveling
in
England
during
my
vacation”。
[高分句型2]
It
is
your
detailed
and
humorous
introduction
that
enables
me
to
have
a
deeper
insight
into
British
culture
and
have
a
wonderful
time
there.(正是你细致幽默的介绍，让我对英国文化有了更深入的了解，并在英国度过了一段美好的时光。)
这句中使用了“it
is
+被强调部分+that+其他”强调句式，本句强调主语“your
detailed
and
humorous
introduction”。
[高分句型3]
I
do
hope
someday
you’ll
come
to
China
and
let
me
show
you
around
my
hometown.(
我非常希望有一天你能来中国，让我带你参观我的家乡。)
这句中“someday
you’ll
come
to
China
and
let
me
show
you
around
my
hometown”为省略that的宾语从句，且使用“do”强调谓语“hope”。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once,
when
I
was
a
teenager,
my
father
and
I
were
standing
in
line
to
buy
tickets
for
the
circus.
Finally,
there
was
only
one
family
between
us
and
the
ticket
counter.
This
family
made
a
big
impression
on
me.
There
were
eight
children,
all
probably
under
the
age
of
twelve.
You
could
tell
they
didn't
have
a
lot
of
money.
Their
clothes
were
not
expensive,
but
they
were
clean.
The
children
were
well-behaved,
all
of
them
standing
in
line,
two-by-two
behind
their
parents,
holding
hands.
They
were
excitedly
talking
about
the
clowns,
elephants,
and
other
acts
they
would
see
that
night
with
their
brothers
or
sisters
in
a
low
voice.
One
could
sense
they
had
never
been
to
the
circus
before.it
promised
to
be
highlight
of
their
young
lives.
The
father
and
mother
were
at
the
head
of
the
pack,
standing
proud
as
could
be.
The
mother
was
holding
her
husband's
hand,
looking
up
at
him
as
if
to
say,
"You
are
my
knight
in
shining
armor."
He
was
smiling
and
responding
in
pride,
looking
back
at
her
as
if
to
say.
"You
got
that
right."
The
ticket
lady
asked
the
father
how
many
tickets
he
wanted.
He
proudly
responded,
"Please
let
me
buy
eight
children's
tickets
and
two
adult
tickets
so
I
can
take
my
family
to
the
circus."
The
ticket
lady
gave
the
price.
The
man's
wife
let
go
of
his
hand,
her
head
dropped,
and
his
lips
began
to
shake.
The
father
leaned
a
lite
closer
and
asked,
"How
much
did
you
say?"
The
ticket
lady
again
quoted
the
price.
The
man
didn't
have
enough
money.
How
was
he
supposed
to
turn
and
tell
his
eight
children
that
he
didn't
have
enough
money
to
take
them
to
the
circus?
Actually
we
were
not
wealthy
in
any
sense.
So
I
understand
how
the
kids
would
feel.
I
felt
sorry
for
them.
注意：
1.
所需写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.
应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
Paragraph
1
Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket,
pulled
out
a
$20
bill
and
dropped
it
on
the
ground.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2
That
day
my
father
and
I
went
back
to
our
car
and
drove
home
without
any
tickets.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Seeing
what
was
going
on,
my
dad
put
his
hand
in
his
pocket,
pulled
out
a
$20
bill
and
dropped
it
on
the
ground.
Then
he
picked
it
up
and
tapped
the
man
on
the
shoulder
and
said,
“Excuse
me,sir，this
fell
out
of
your
pocket”.
The
man
turned
around
and
saw
the
money.
He
knew
what
was
going
on,
he
looked
straight
into
my
dad'
s
eyes,
took
my
dad'
s
hand
in
both
of
his,
squeezed
tightly
onto
the
$20
bill,
and
with
his
lip
shaking
and
a
tear
running
down
his
cheek,
he
replied,
“Thank:
you,
thank
you,
sir.
This
really
means
a
lot
to
me
and
my
family”
That
day
my
father
and
I
went
back
to
our
car
and
drove
home
without
any
tickets.We
didn'
t
go
to
the
circus
that
night,
when
I
asked
dad
why
he
did
so,
Dad
said,
“My
child,
it
was
a
desperate,
heartbreaking
and
embarrasing
situation
for
a
father.
Surely
he
wasn'
t
begging
for
a
handout,
but
he
reminded
me
of
my
father,
when
I
was
young”.
He
paused
for
a
while,
as
if
wandering
in
his
memory.
“We
should
appreciate
what
we
have
obtained
from
life
and
seize
every
opportunity
to
he1p
others.
We
didn'
t
go
to
the
circus
tonight,but
we
didn'
t
go
without.
Now,
who
wants
an
ice
cream?
”
【分析】
本篇考查的是读后续写。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，作者小时候与他的父亲在排队买马戏团的票的时候，遇到了排在他们前面的一家人。这一家孩子们正兴高采烈地期待看马戏节目，他们的父亲却发现自己没有足够的钱买票。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我爸爸看到这个事情，把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞票掉在地上……，
因此，应该续写那家父亲发现我爸爸是故意这样做，真诚地想帮助他，他因此而感激地热泪盈眶等内容。第二段开头是：那天，我和父亲回到车上，没有买票就开车回家了。作者对于爸爸默默帮助那家父亲的行为，感到很疑惑。本段中，爸爸告诉作者，要抓住每一个机会去帮助别人。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【高分句型】
when
I
asked
my
dad
why
he
help
them,
he
said,
“
If
I
didn’t
help
the
father,
he
would
feel
desperate,
heartbreaking
and
embarrasing.”
当我问爸爸为什么要帮助他们时，他说：“如果我不帮助那个父亲，他会感到绝望、伤心和尴尬。”运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
Many
Chinese
students
have
studied
English
for
approximately
ten
years,
but
most
of
them
cannot
even
speak
English
correctly
or
fluently.
In
my
opinion,
there
are
several
obstacles(障碍)that
have
caused
this
to
happen.
The
main
obstacle
is
fear!
Another
is
the
habit
of
mentally
translating
from
Chinese
to
English
and
then
to
change
these
thoughts
into
spoken
words
and
sentences.
Many
of
these
difficulties
are
caused
by
the
way
Chinese
people
study
and
learn
the
language.
We
must
learn
to
speak
as
a
child
does.
When
we
are
learning
a
second
language
we
need
to
remember
how
we
learned
our
native
language.
Learning
to
understand
and
speak
a
language
is
one
of
the
first
skills
a
child
develops.
How
does
a
child
learn
the
language?
He
listens
for
a
time
and
then
he
tries
to
repeat
the
words.
Parents
give
great
praise
for
the
smallest
effort
and
slightest
improvement.
Therefore,
the
child
develops
courage
and
is
excited
about
learning.
It
takes
a
long
time
before
he
knows
anything
about
grammar,
spelling
or
formal
sentence
structures.
As
for
language
teachers,
they
should
avoid
criticism(批评)and
be
very
encouraging
and
generous
with
praise.
Criticism
or
pointing
out
faults
too
often
causes
students
to
lose
self-confidence
and
develop
a
fear
of
speaking.
The
best
way
to
motivate
a
student
is
using
Praise.
The
most
important
aspect
of
speaking
is
having
self-esteem.
Self-esteem
is
how
you
feel
about
yourself.
When
most
Chinese
people
are
asked
how
their
English
is,
or
they
are
told
their
English
is,
or
very
are
told
their
English
is
very
good,
they
immediately
respond
by
saying,
''Oh
my
English
is
very
poor.
''If
you
say
this
to
yourself
often
enough,
you
will
believe
it.
When
someone
compliments(称赞)you,
just
say
''thank
you
''.
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【答案】
Caused
by
their
fear
and
way
of
learning,
many
Chinese
students
cannot
speak
English
fluently
even
after
ten-years'
learning.(要点1)
Actually
we
should
learn
to
speak
English
as
a
child
learns
his
native
language
by
listening
and
repeating
a
lot.(要点2)
And
teachers
should
praise
and
encourage
rather
than
criticize
students,
just
as
parents
do.(要点3)
Finally,
having
good
self-esteem
is
of
vital
importance
in
speaking
English.(要点4)
【分析】
本篇考查概要写作。文章主要讲述了中国学生英语说不好的原因，并就该问题提出了一些解决方法。
【详解】
通读全文，我们可以从以下四点进行概括：因为恐惧和不正确的学习方法，很多中国学生经过10年的学习也不能流利地说出英语；我们可以像孩子学习母语一样通过多听多重复来学习英语；老师应该多鼓励和表扬学生而不是批评他们；此外，自尊心在英语学习方面尤其重要。
【高级句型一】
It
is
important
for
students
to
have
good
self-esteem
in
speaking
English.对学生来说在说英语方面有自尊心是很重要的。句中使用了it
is
+
adj
+for
sb.
to
do“对于某人来说做某事是怎么样的”，it是形式主语，to
do是真正的主语。
【高级句型二】
Actually,
we
should
learn
to
speak
English
the
way
a
child
learns
his
native
language
by
listening
and
repeating
a
lot.事实上，我们应该用孩子学母语的方法，通过听和不停的重复来学习说英语。the
way作为先行词，定语从句是a
child
learns
his
native
language。先行词是the
way时定语从句的关系词用that/
in
which/或省略连接词，本句省略了关系词。
