2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）10
道歉信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你和上海中学的英国朋友Tom约好这周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1.
表示歉意；2.
解释原因
3.
另约时间
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear
Tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Tom,
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
that
I
can
no
longer
join
you
for
the
trip
to
Beijing
this
weekend.
I
know
you
are
probably
upset
but
I
have
a
good
explanation.
I
came
down
with
the
flu
and
my
doctor
insisted
that
I
should
stay
indoors
for
a
week
or
so.
This
is
to
avoid
spreading
the
virus
to
others,
including
you.
Of
course,
I
was
quite
disappointed
because
it
ruined
our
plans.
Please
accept
my
deepest
apologies
and
let
me
know
if
you’d
like
to
reschedule
the
trip
following
my
recovery.
Thanks
for
your
understanding
of
my
situation.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Tom写封邮件，你本来和他约好这周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约，在信中表示歉意并解释原因,与他另约时间。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.
表示歉意；
2.
解释原因；
3.
另约时间。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
no
longer;
upset;
have
a
good
explanation;
come
down
with;
insist;
stay
indoors;
avoid
doing
sth.;
disappointed;
ruin;
deepest
apologies;
reschedule;
recovery;
understanding;
situation
第三步：连词成句
1.
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
that
I
can
no
longer
join
you
for
the
trip
to
Beijing
this
weekend.
2.
I
know
you
are
probably
upset
but
I
have
a
good
explanation.
3.
I
came
down
with
the
flu
and
my
doctor
insisted
that
I
should
stay
indoors
for
a
week
or
so.
4.
This
is
to
avoid
spreading
the
virus
to
others,
including
you.
5.
Of
course,
I
was
quite
disappointed
because
it
ruined
our
plans.
6.
Please
accept
my
deepest
apologies
and
let
me
know
if
you’d
like
to
reschedule
the
trip
following
my
recovery.
7.
Thanks
for
your
understanding
of
my
situation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：including
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
that
I
can
no
longer
join
you
for
the
trip
to
Beijing
this
weekend.
(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Of
course,
I
was
quite
disappointed
because
it
ruins
our
plans.
(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
one
of
the
hottest
days
of
the
dry
season.
We
had
not
seen
rain
in
almost
a
month.
The
crops
were
dying.
Cows
had
stopped
giving
milk.
The
streams
were
long
gone
back
into
the
earth.
If
we
didn’t
see
some
rain
soon
we
would
lose
everything.
It
was
on
this
day
that
I
learned
the
true
lesson
of
sharing
and
witnessed
the
best
miracle
I
have
ever
seen
in
my
life.
I
was
in
the
kitchen
making
lunch
for
the
family
when
I
saw
my
six-year-old
son,
Billy,
walking
toward
the
woods.
I
could
only
see
his
back.
He
wasn’t
walking
with
his
usual
steps.
He
was
obviously
walking
with
great
effort,
trying
to
be
as
still
as
possible.
Minutes
after
he
disappeared
into
the
woods,
he
came
running
out
again,
toward
the
house.
I
went
back
to
make
sandwiches,
thinking
that
whatever
he
had
been
doing
was
completed.
Moments
later,
however,
he
was
once
again
walking
in
that
slow
purposeful
long
step
toward
the
woods.
This
activity
went
on
for
over
an
hour:
walking
carefully
to
the
woods,
then
running
back
to
the
house.
Finally,
my
curiosity
got
the
best
of
me.
I
crept
out
of
the
house
and
followed
him
on
his
journey.
He
was
cupping
both
hands
in
front
of
him
as
he
walked;
being
very
careful
not
to
spill
the
water
he
held
in
them.
I
stepped
close
as
he
went
into
the
woods.
Branches
and
thorns
slapped
his
little
face
but
he
never
gave
in.
He
might
have
a
much
greater
purpose,
I
thought.
As
I
came
closer,
I
saw
the
most
amazing
sight.
Several
large
deer
stood
in
front
of
him.
Billy
walked
right
up
to
them,
at
the
sight
of
which
I
almost
screamed
for
him
to
get
away.
A
huge
buck
was
dangerously
close.
But
the
buck
neither
threatened
him
nor
even
moved
as
Billy
knelt
down.
And
I
saw
a
baby
deer
lying
on
the
ground,
obviously
suffering
from
heavy
loss
of
water
and
heat
exhaustion,
lifting
its
head
with
great
effort
to
lap
up
the
water
cupped
in
my
boy’s
hands.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
When
the
water
was
gone,
Billy
jumped
up
to
run
back
to
the
house.
I
followed
him
back
to
the
tap(水龙头).
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2：
This
time
I
joined
him,
with
a
small
bottle
of
water
from
the
kitchen.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
When
the
water
was
gone,
Billy
jumped
up
to
run
back
to
the
house.
I
followed
him
to
the
tap.
Billy
turned
it
on
and
began
to
cup
both
hands.
He
knelt
down,
letting
the
drip
slowly
fill
up
his
“cup”.
And
now
I
knew
what
was
going
on.
Obviously,
he
was
afraid
of
being
scolded
for
wasting
water,
so
he
avoided
asking
me
for
help.
When
he
stood
up
and
turned
back,
he
noticed
me
walking
toward
him.
His
eyes
were
filled
with
tears
and
fear.
“Mom,
I’m
not
wasting.”
This
time
I
joined
him,
with
a
small
bottle
of
water
from
the
kitchen.
I
let
him
tend
to
the
baby
deer
alone
while
I
just
helped
fetch
the
water.
It
was
no
easy
job.
Moving
back
and
forth
between
the
house
and
woods,
I
gasped
for
breath
before
long
and
sweated
all
over.
As
beads
of
sweat
began
to
hit
the
ground,
they
were
suddenly
joined
by
other
drops…and
more
drops…and
more.
I
looked
up
at
the
sky.
It
was
as
if
God,
himself,
was
weeping
with
pride.
I
can’t
believe
it
was
raining.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个旱季，几乎有一个月没见过雨了。庄稼快死了。奶牛已经不产奶了。而作者有一天却发现六岁的儿子比利正向树林里走去，且不停在树林和房子之间往返。作者于是尾随儿子，发现他在给树林里的鹿群送水。儿子在偷偷给动物们送水。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“水没了，比利跳起来跑回房子。我跟着他来到水龙头前。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现儿子是如何接水的，以后儿子注意到作者后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“这一次，我和他一起，从厨房拿了一小瓶水。”可知，第二段可描写作者和儿子一起照顾树林里动物的场景，以及最后天空终于下起了雨。
2.续写线索：比利回到房子——比利接水——比利发现作者——比利解释——作者帮助儿子接水——天空下雨
3.词汇激活
行为类
打开：turn
on/
open
装满：fill
up/
be
filled
with
喘气：gasp
for
breath
/
be
out
of
breath
情绪类
恐惧：fear
/
scared
骄傲：pride
/
take
pride
in
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
And
now
I
knew
what
was
going
on.
(运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
As
beads
of
sweat
began
to
hit
the
ground,
they
were
suddenly
joined
by
other
drops…and
more
drops…and
more.
(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
3．阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
Over
the
past
few
years,
there
has
been
a
big
increase
in
the
number
of
people
sharing
information
online.
In
this
article
we
will
learn
about
some
positive
factors
for
people
to
share
information
online.
We
often
share
information
with
our
friends
in
the
office
or
at
home
to
educate,
entertain
or
pleasantly
surprise
them.
In
this
way
we
can
connect
with
others.
This
is
also
true
while
sharing
information
online.
If
you
look
at
the
Facebook
wall
posts
of
your
friends,
you
will
realize
that
most
of
their
updates
are
usually
famous
quotes,
entertaining
videos,
inspirational
images,
funny
jokes,
etc.
94%
of
those
who
responded
to
a
survey
by
the
New
York
Times
said
they
put
a
lot
of
thought
into
how
the
content
they
are
sharing
will
be
beneficial
to
others.
A
lot
of
people
share
information
online
to
represent
their
true
self
to
the
outside
world.
Some
people,
especially
those
who
are
shy
and
not
comfortable
talking
about
their
areas
of
interest
in
the
presence
of
others,
find
it
extremely
convenient
to
share
that
information
online
with
like-minded
individuals.
78%
of
the
respondents
in
the
study
of
The
New
York
Times
said
they
shared
information
online
because
it
helps
them
develop
better
relationships.
Today,
a
lot
of
people
do
not
have
the
time
to
meet
each
other
in
person
and
the
Internet
has
become
a
great
substitute.
A
lot
of
people
now
“meet”
each
other
online,
rather
than
in
conventional
places
like
restaurants
and
pubs.
Lastly,
when
we
share
our
thoughts
online,
we
are
actively
engaging
with
the
vast
community
of
people
who
are
a
part
of
the
World
Wide
Web.
Sharing
information
will
make
a
difference
to
the
viewpoint
of
others,
or
add
to
their
understanding
about
the
world.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
People
increasingly
share
information
online
for
several
positive
reasons(要点1).
Most
people
hope
what
they
share
will
benefit
others(要点2).
Some
people
show
their
true
self
by
sharing
information
online(要点3).
People
also
meet
each
other
online
to
keep
in
touch
with
friends
instead
of
traditional
ways(要点4).
Quite
a
few
people
share
their
thoughts
online
hoping
to
influence
others’
viewpoints
in
a
positive
way(要点5)
.
【分析】
这是一篇概要写作。
【详解】
文章的主要结构为总-分-总。主要讲述越来越多的人在网上分享信息。符合概要写作常规出题思路。
第一段讲述越来越多的人在网上分享信息，下文会列举几个积极因素。可以用到的词汇或句型有：share
information
online,
increase,
positive等。第二段讲述人们在网上分享的多数是正面信息。可以用到的词汇或句式有：benefit,
positive等。第三段主要讲一些人在网上展示真实的自我。可以用到的词汇或句式有：true
self,
outside
world等。第四段讲了大部分在网上分享信息的人是为了建立更好的人际关系。可以用到的词汇或句式有：better
relationships,
contribute
to等。第五段讲了在网上分享信息的积极作用。可以用到的词汇或句式有：influence,
in
a
positive
way等。
【高分句型1】
Online
information
sharing
has
its
benefits
to
the
publice.
在线信息共享对公众有好处。动名词作主语。
【高分句型2】
People
also
meet
each
other
online
so
that
they
could
keep
in
contact
with
friends
rather
than
traditional
ways.
人们也在网上见面，这样他们就可以和朋友保持联系，而不是传统的方式。so
that引导目的状语从句；keep
in
contact
with与……有联系；rather
than而不是。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）10
道歉信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你和上海中学的英国朋友Tom约好这周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1.
表示歉意；2.
解释原因
3.
另约时间
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear
Tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It
was
one
of
the
hottest
days
of
the
dry
season.
We
had
not
seen
rain
in
almost
a
month.
The
crops
were
dying.
Cows
had
stopped
giving
milk.
The
streams
were
long
gone
back
into
the
earth.
If
we
didn’t
see
some
rain
soon
we
would
lose
everything.
It
was
on
this
day
that
I
learned
the
true
lesson
of
sharing
and
witnessed
the
best
miracle
I
have
ever
seen
in
my
life.
I
was
in
the
kitchen
making
lunch
for
the
family
when
I
saw
my
six-year-old
son,
Billy,
walking
toward
the
woods.
I
could
only
see
his
back.
He
wasn’t
walking
with
his
usual
steps.
He
was
obviously
walking
with
great
effort,
trying
to
be
as
still
as
possible.
Minutes
after
he
disappeared
into
the
woods,
he
came
running
out
again,
toward
the
house.
I
went
back
to
make
sandwiches,
thinking
that
whatever
he
had
been
doing
was
completed.
Moments
later,
however,
he
was
once
again
walking
in
that
slow
purposeful
long
step
toward
the
woods.
This
activity
went
on
for
over
an
hour:
walking
carefully
to
the
woods,
then
running
back
to
the
house.
Finally,
my
curiosity
got
the
best
of
me.
I
crept
out
of
the
house
and
followed
him
on
his
journey.
He
was
cupping
both
hands
in
front
of
him
as
he
walked;
being
very
careful
not
to
spill
the
water
he
held
in
them.
I
stepped
close
as
he
went
into
the
woods.
Branches
and
thorns
slapped
his
little
face
but
he
never
gave
in.
He
might
have
a
much
greater
purpose,
I
thought.
As
I
came
closer,
I
saw
the
most
amazing
sight.
Several
large
deer
stood
in
front
of
him.
Billy
walked
right
up
to
them,
at
the
sight
of
which
I
almost
screamed
for
him
to
get
away.
A
huge
buck
was
dangerously
close.
But
the
buck
neither
threatened
him
nor
even
moved
as
Billy
knelt
down.
And
I
saw
a
baby
deer
lying
on
the
ground,
obviously
suffering
from
heavy
loss
of
water
and
heat
exhaustion,
lifting
its
head
with
great
effort
to
lap
up
the
water
cupped
in
my
boy’s
hands.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1：
When
the
water
was
gone,
Billy
jumped
up
to
run
back
to
the
house.
I
followed
him
back
to
the
tap(水龙头).
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Paragraph2：
This
time
I
joined
him,
with
a
small
bottle
of
water
from
the
kitchen.
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3．阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
Over
the
past
few
years,
there
has
been
a
big
increase
in
the
number
of
people
sharing
information
online.
In
this
article
we
will
learn
about
some
positive
factors
for
people
to
share
information
online.
We
often
share
information
with
our
friends
in
the
office
or
at
home
to
educate,
entertain
or
pleasantly
surprise
them.
In
this
way
we
can
connect
with
others.
This
is
also
true
while
sharing
information
online.
If
you
look
at
the
Facebook
wall
posts
of
your
friends,
you
will
realize
that
most
of
their
updates
are
usually
famous
quotes,
entertaining
videos,
inspirational
images,
funny
jokes,
etc.
94%
of
those
who
responded
to
a
survey
by
the
New
York
Times
said
they
put
a
lot
of
thought
into
how
the
content
they
are
sharing
will
be
beneficial
to
others.
A
lot
of
people
share
information
online
to
represent
their
true
self
to
the
outside
world.
Some
people,
especially
those
who
are
shy
and
not
comfortable
talking
about
their
areas
of
interest
in
the
presence
of
others,
find
it
extremely
convenient
to
share
that
information
online
with
like-minded
individuals.
78%
of
the
respondents
in
the
study
of
The
New
York
Times
said
they
shared
information
online
because
it
helps
them
develop
better
relationships.
Today,
a
lot
of
people
do
not
have
the
time
to
meet
each
other
in
person
and
the
Internet
has
become
a
great
substitute.
A
lot
of
people
now
“meet”
each
other
online,
rather
than
in
conventional
places
like
restaurants
and
pubs.
Lastly,
when
we
share
our
thoughts
online,
we
are
actively
engaging
with
the
vast
community
of
people
who
are
a
part
of
the
World
Wide
Web.
Sharing
information
will
make
a
difference
to
the
viewpoint
of
others,
or
add
to
their
understanding
about
the
world.
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