2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）09
申请信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，获悉2022北京冬奥会正在全国招募志愿者为国外来宾提供服务，你希望有机会为冬奥添彩。请给组委会写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1.个人基本情况；
2.个人优势：爱好运动、善于交际等；
3.承诺：提供最佳服务。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear
Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best
regards.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Sir/Madam,
My
name
is
Li
Hua,
a
17-year-old
high
school
student
in
Beijing.
I
would
like
to
be
a
volunteer
for
the
Winter
Olympic
Games
in
2022.
I
believe
I
can
do
my
job
well.
First,
I
like
sports
and
I
am
very
familiar
with
the
city
where
the
Games
are
to
be
held.
Second,
I
am
out-going
and
can
get
along
with
different
people.
Above
all,
I
can
communicate
with
foreigners
in
English
fluently.
I
promise
to
offer
the
best
service
to
the
people
at
the
Games.
Please
take
my
application
into
consideration.
Best
regards.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封英文申请信，为在2022北京冬奥会为国外来宾提供服务。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.个人基本情况；
2.个人优势：爱好运动、善于交际等；
3.承诺：提供最佳服务。
第二步：列提纲
（重点词组）
be
a
volunteer
for;
be
familiar
with;
get
along
with;
communicate
with;
offer
the
best
service
to;
take
my
application
into
consideration
第三步：连词成句
1.I
would
like
to
be
a
volunteer
for
the
Winter
Olympic
Games
in
2022.
2.First,
I
like
sports
and
I
am
very
familiar
with
the
city
where
the
Games
are
to
be
held.
3.
Second,
I
am
out-going
and
can
get
along
with
different
people.
4.Above
all,
I
can
communicate
with
foreigners
in
English
fluently.
5.I
promise
to
offer
the
best
service
to
the
people
at
the
Games.
6.Please
take
my
application
into
consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although
+clause(从句),
In
spite
of
+n/doing,
On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First,
I
like
sports
and
I
am
very
familiar
with
the
city
where
the
Games
are
to
be
held.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句表达高级。
[高分句型2]Above
all,
I
can
communicate
with
foreigners
in
English
fluently.这句话运用短语above
all首先，communicate
with与……交流，表达高级。
[高分句型3]I
promise
to
offer
the
best
service
to
the
people
at
the
Games.
这句话运用短语promise
to
do
sth.、offer
sth.to
sb.，表达高级。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Chito
Shedden
was
a
simple
fisherman
and
tour
guide
from
Siquirres,
Limon
Province,
Costa
Rica.He
had
a
broad
range
of
interesting
facts
about
nature,
which
helped
his
business
quite
a
bit.
The
year
was
1989
and
Chito
was
walking
along
the
banks
of
the
Reventazón
River
when
he
happened
upon
something
very
strange.
There
was
a
dying
male
crocodile(鳄鱼).
When
he
stepped
up
to
carefully
examine
the
skinny
reptile,
he
realized
it
had
been
shot
through
the
head
and
then
left
eyes.
He
knew,
dangerous
as
it
was,
he
couldn’t
leave
the
poor
animal
there,
alone
and
helpless.
Chito
acted
quickly,
calling
for
the
help
of
several
brave
friends
to
load
the
heavy
reptile
into
his
boat.
He
knew
if
he
could
heal
it,
he
would
then
send
it
back
into
the
wild.
He
named
the
huge
reptile
“Pocho”,
which
means
strength
and
began
to
care
for
him
in
his
own
backyard.
The
kind
and
helpful
fisherman
started
to
heal
Pocho
with
medicine,
food,
and
more
importantly,
lots
of
care
and
attention.
Chito
fed
the
crocodile
a
steady
diet
of
chicken
and
fish.
He
bought
medicine
to
prevent
infection(感染)
and
even
slept
by
his
side
at
night.
Affection
was
one
of
the
most
important
factors.
Chito
gave
him
kisses
and
hugs.
He
talked
to
him
and
petted
him.“The
crocodile
needed
my
love
to
regain
the
will
to
live,”
he
said.
In
time,
Pocho
improved
enough
to
returned
to
normal
health.
It
was
time
for
him
to
return
to
his
own
river
in
the
wild.
Chito
and
his
friends
loaded
the
crocodile
back
into
his
boat
and
set
him
free
in
a
nearby
river.
The
two
parted
ways
and
Chito
returned
home
alone.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Chito
awoke
the
next
morning,
and
walked
outside.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
A
closer
relationship
was
formed
between
Pocho
and
Chito.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Paragraph1:
Chito
awoke
the
next
morning,
and
walked
outside.
To
his
surprise,
a
crocodile
was
sleeping
in
his
backyard.
He
recognized
it
at
the
first
sight:
it
was
Pocho.
This
crocodile
had
swum
down
the
river
and
followed
him
home
quietly.
It
seemed
to
Chito
that
Pocho
had
made
its
choice.
It
wanted
to
live
with
the
man
who
had
saved
its
life.
Chito
felt
an
unspeakable
feeling
that
resonated
in
the
heart
of
a
father
as
he
looked
upon
Pocho.
Paragraph
2:
A
closer
relationship
was
formed
between
Pocho
and
Chito.
They
are
inseparable
now.
Every
day
Chito
wades
into
the
chest-deep
water
in
his
little
lake
and
calls
out
to
his
friend,
who
appears
from
beneath
the
muddy
depths
to
roll
about
and
play
with
its
keeper,
and
then
Chito
would
kiss
it.
Pocho
can
understand
Chito
gradually.
The
unique
friendship
has
drawn
the
attention
of
tourists
from
around
the
world;
more
and
more
tourists
come
into
town
and
visit
Chito
and
Pocho.
In
order
to
welcome
guests,
they
have
performed
a
weekly
act
in
his
own
backyard
before
hundreds
of
tourists.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了渔民Chito在一条河里发现了一只受伤的鳄鱼，它被射中了头部和左眼。他知道，尽管危险，他不能把可怜的动物独自无助地留在那里。Chito最终将鳄鱼带回家救助了它，取名“Pocho”。Chito和Pocho有了深厚的感情，随着时间的推移，Pocho恢复了正常的健康，Chito和朋友们将它放生。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上Chito醒来，走到外面。”可知，第一段可描写Chito如何发现Pocho又回来了，以及Chito的内心感受。
②由第二段首句内容“Pocho和Chito之间的关系更加密切。”可知，第二段可描写Pocho和Chito之后的生活情况。
2.续写线索：Pocho回到家——Chito发现Pocho——Chito和Pocho关系亲密——他们吸引了游客——他们每周都会表演
3.词汇激活
行为类
①作决定：make
one’s
choice
/
make
one’s
decision
②回家：follow
sb.
home/return
home
③注意：draw
the
attention
of/
pay
attention
to
情绪类
①独特的友谊：unique
friendship/
special
friendship
②无法形容的：unspeakable
/
beyond
expression
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It
wanted
to
live
with
the
man
who
had
saved
its
life.
(运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]
In
order
to
welcome
guests,
they
have
performed
a
weekly
act
in
his
own
backyard
before
hundreds
of
tourists.
(运用了不定式作目的状语)
3．阅读下面短文，
根据其内容写一篇60字左右的内容概要。
Over
the
past
few
years,
there
has
been
a
big
increase
in
the
number
of
people
sharing
information
online.
In
this
article,
we
will
learn
about
some
positive
reasons
for
people
to
share
information
online.
94%
of
those
surveyed
by
The
New
York
Times
said
they
put
a
lot
of
thought
into
how
the
content
they
are
sharing
will
be
beneficial
to
others.
We
often
share
information
with
our
friends
in
the
office
or
at
home
to
educate,
entertain,
or
pleasantly
surprise
them.
This
is
also
true
while
sharing
information
online.
If
you
look
at
the
Facebook
wall
posts
of
your
friends,
you
will
realize
that
most
of
their
updates
are
usually
famous
quotes(引述),
entertaining
videos,
humorous
images,
funny
jokes,
etc.
A
lot
of
people
share
information
online
to
picture
their
true
self
to
the
outside
world.
Some
people,
especially
those
who
are
shy
and
not
comfortable
talking
about
their
areas
of
interest
in
the
presence
of
others,
find
it
extremely
convenient
to
share
that
information
online
with
others.
According
to
the
study,
78%
of
the
people
said
they
shared
information
online
because
it
helps
them
develop
better
relationships.
Today,
people
are
so
busy
that
they
do
not
have
the
time
to
meet
each
other
personally.
A
lot
of
people
now
“meet”
each
other
online,
rather
than
in
places
like
restaurants
and
pubs.
Lastly,
when
we
share
our
thoughts
online,
we
are
actively
communicating
with
a
large
number
of
people
who
are
a
part
of
the
World
Wide
Web.
Sharing
information
will
affect
the
viewpoint
of
others,
or
add
to
their
understanding
about
the
world.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
People
increasingly
share
information
online
for
several
positive
reasons.
Most
people
hope
what
they
share
will
benefit
others.
Some
people
show
their
true
self
by
sharing
information
online.
People
also
do
this
to
keep
in
touch
with
friends
and
make
new
friends.
Quite
a
few
people
share
their
thoughts
online
hoping
to
influence
others'
view
points
in
a
positive
way.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概要写作。这篇文章主要讲了人们越来越多地在网上分享信息，有几个积极的原因。大多数人都希望他们分享的东西能让别人受益。有些人通过在网上分享信息来展示真实的自己。人们这样做也是为了和朋友保持联系，结交新朋友。相当多的人在网上分享他们的想法，希望以一种积极的方式影响别人的观点。注意词数要求和使用自己的语言。
【详解】
1、写之前，需要认真仔细地读几遍原文材料，让理解更深刻。
2、遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要部分的主题、标题、细节进行概括，全面清晰地表明原文信息。
3、给摘要起一个好标题，比如：可以采用文中的主题句。
4、尽量使用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，篇幅控制在原文的三分之一或四分之一长。
【点睛】
这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Most
people
hope
what
they
share
will
benefit
others.宾语从句的运用；Quite
a
few
people
share
their
thoughts
online
hoping
to
influence
others'
view
points
in
a
positive
way.非谓语动词作状语。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）09
申请信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，获悉2022北京冬奥会正在全国招募志愿者为国外来宾提供服务，你希望有机会为冬奥添彩。请给组委会写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1.个人基本情况；
2.个人优势：爱好运动、善于交际等；
3.承诺：提供最佳服务。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear
Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best
regards.
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Chito
Shedden
was
a
simple
fisherman
and
tour
guide
from
Siquirres,
Limon
Province,
Costa
Rica.He
had
a
broad
range
of
interesting
facts
about
nature,
which
helped
his
business
quite
a
bit.
The
year
was
1989
and
Chito
was
walking
along
the
banks
of
the
Reventazón
River
when
he
happened
upon
something
very
strange.
There
was
a
dying
male
crocodile(鳄鱼).
When
he
stepped
up
to
carefully
examine
the
skinny
reptile,
he
realized
it
had
been
shot
through
the
head
and
then
left
eyes.
He
knew,
dangerous
as
it
was,
he
couldn’t
leave
the
poor
animal
there,
alone
and
helpless.
Chito
acted
quickly,
calling
for
the
help
of
several
brave
friends
to
load
the
heavy
reptile
into
his
boat.
He
knew
if
he
could
heal
it,
he
would
then
send
it
back
into
the
wild.
He
named
the
huge
reptile
“Pocho”,
which
means
strength
and
began
to
care
for
him
in
his
own
backyard.
The
kind
and
helpful
fisherman
started
to
heal
Pocho
with
medicine,
food,
and
more
importantly,
lots
of
care
and
attention.
Chito
fed
the
crocodile
a
steady
diet
of
chicken
and
fish.
He
bought
medicine
to
prevent
infection(感染)
and
even
slept
by
his
side
at
night.
Affection
was
one
of
the
most
important
factors.
Chito
gave
him
kisses
and
hugs.
He
talked
to
him
and
petted
him.“The
crocodile
needed
my
love
to
regain
the
will
to
live,”
he
said.
In
time,
Pocho
improved
enough
to
returned
to
normal
health.
It
was
time
for
him
to
return
to
his
own
river
in
the
wild.
Chito
and
his
friends
loaded
the
crocodile
back
into
his
boat
and
set
him
free
in
a
nearby
river.
The
two
parted
ways
and
Chito
returned
home
alone.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Chito
awoke
the
next
morning,
and
walked
outside.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
A
closer
relationship
was
formed
between
Pocho
and
Chito.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，
根据其内容写一篇60字左右的内容概要。
Over
the
past
few
years,
there
has
been
a
big
increase
in
the
number
of
people
sharing
information
online.
In
this
article,
we
will
learn
about
some
positive
reasons
for
people
to
share
information
online.
94%
of
those
surveyed
by
The
New
York
Times
said
they
put
a
lot
of
thought
into
how
the
content
they
are
sharing
will
be
beneficial
to
others.
We
often
share
information
with
our
friends
in
the
office
or
at
home
to
educate,
entertain,
or
pleasantly
surprise
them.
This
is
also
true
while
sharing
information
online.
If
you
look
at
the
Facebook
wall
posts
of
your
friends,
you
will
realize
that
most
of
their
updates
are
usually
famous
quotes(引述),
entertaining
videos,
humorous
images,
funny
jokes,
etc.
A
lot
of
people
share
information
online
to
picture
their
true
self
to
the
outside
world.
Some
people,
especially
those
who
are
shy
and
not
comfortable
talking
about
their
areas
of
interest
in
the
presence
of
others,
find
it
extremely
convenient
to
share
that
information
online
with
others.
According
to
the
study,
78%
of
the
people
said
they
shared
information
online
because
it
helps
them
develop
better
relationships.
Today,
people
are
so
busy
that
they
do
not
have
the
time
to
meet
each
other
personally.
A
lot
of
people
now
“meet”
each
other
online,
rather
than
in
places
like
restaurants
and
pubs.
Lastly,
when
we
share
our
thoughts
online,
we
are
actively
communicating
with
a
large
number
of
people
who
are
a
part
of
the
World
Wide
Web.
Sharing
information
will
affect
the
viewpoint
of
others,
or
add
to
their
understanding
about
the
world.
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