2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）06
短文写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．以The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives为题，根据提示，写一篇100字左右的文章。文章标题已给出，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1.网络有助于学习，我们可以查找信息，下载资料，网上上课……
2.网络让我们的生活更加有趣，可在业余时间听音乐，看电影，玩游戏……
3.网络给我们提供了快捷方便的交流，我们可以通过E-mail,
QQ,
MSN等和世界各地的人交朋友。
关键词:
查找
search
for
,材料
materials,
方便
convenient
下载download
The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives
It’s
true
that
the
Internet
has
greatly
changed
our
lives.
First
of
all,
the
Internet
is
a
great
help
to
our
study.
We
can
search
for
information,
download
useful
materials
on
the
Internet
and
take
online
lessons
as
well.
Secondly,
the
Internet
makes
our
lives
more
interesting.
We
usually
listen
to
music,
watch
movies
and
play
computer
games
on
it
in
our
spare
time.
Thirdly,
the
Internet
provides
us
with
quick
and
convenient
means
of
communication,
such
as
E-mail,
QQ
and
MSN,
which
make
it
possible
for
us
to
make
friends
with
people
from
all
over
the
world.
In
a
word,
the
Internet
has
made
our
lives
much
more
convenient
and
colourful
than
before.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives为题，写一篇介绍网络好处的短文。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.网络有助于学习，我们可以查找信息，下载资料，网上上课……
2.网络让我们的生活更加有趣，可在业余时间听音乐，看电影，玩游戏……
3.网络给我们提供了快捷方便的交流，我们可以通过E-mail,
QQ,
MSN等和世界各地的人交朋友。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
First
of
all;
a
great
help
to;
search
for;
take
online
lessons;
as
well;
listen
to;
in
spare
time;
provide…with…;
convenient;
such
as;
make
it
possible
for
sb.
to
do
sth.;
colourful
第三步：连词成句
1.
It’s
true
that
the
Internet
has
greatly
changed
our
lives.
2.
First
of
all,
the
Internet
is
a
great
help
to
our
study.
3.
We
can
search
for
information,
download
useful
materials
on
the
Internet
and
take
online
lessons
as
well.
4.
Secondly,
the
Internet
makes
our
lives
more
interesting.
5.
We
usually
listen
to
music,
watch
movies
and
play
computer
games
on
it
in
our
spare
time.
6.
Thirdly,
the
Internet
provides
us
with
quick
and
convenient
means
of
communication,
such
as
E-mail,
QQ
and
MSN,
which
make
it
possible
for
us
to
make
friends
with
people
from
all
over
the
world.
7.
In
a
word,
the
Internet
has
made
our
lives
much
more
convenient
and
colourful
than
before.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Secondly,
Thirdly
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It’s
true
that
the
Internet
has
greatly
changed
our
lives.
(运用了主语从句)
[高分句型2]
Thirdly,
the
Internet
provides
us
with
quick
and
convenient
means
of
communication,
such
as
E-mail,
QQ
and
MSN,
which
make
it
possible
for
us
to
make
friends
with
people
from
all
over
the
world.
(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mary
and
her
husband,
Jim,
had
driven
three
hours
to
camp
overnight
by
a
lake
in
the
forest.
However,
on
the
way
an
unpleasant
subject
came
up
and
they
started
to
quarrel.
By
the
time
they
reached
the
lake,
Mary
was
so
angry
that
she
said
to
Jim,
"I'm
going
to
find
a
better
spot
for
us
to
camp”
and
walked
away.
With
no
path
to
follow,
Mary
just
walked
on
for
quite
a
long
time.
After
she
had
dim
bed
to
a
high
place,
she
turned
around,
hoping
to
see
the
lake,
To
her
surprise,
she
saw
nothing
but
forest
and
a
snow—covered
mountain
top.
She
suddenly
realized
that
she
was
lost.
"Jim!”,
Mary
cried.
"Help!"
No
reply.
If
only
she
had
not
left
her
mobile
phone
in
that
bag
with
Jim.
Mary
kept
moving,
but
the
farther
she
walked,
the
more
confused
she
became.
As
night
was
beginning
to
fall,
Mary
was
so
tired
that
she
had
to
stop
for
the
night.
Lying
awake
in
the
dark,
Mary
wanted
very
much
to
be
with
Jim
and
her
family.
She
wanted
to
hold
him
and
tell
him
how
much
she
loved
him.
Mary
rose
at
the
break
of
day,
hungry
and
thirsty.
She
could
hear
water
trickling（滴落）somewhere
at
a
distance.
Quickly
she
followed
the
sound
to
a
stream.
To
her
great
joy,
she
also
saw
some
berry
bushes.
She
drank
and
ate
a
few
berries.
Never
in
her
life
had
she
lasted
anything
better.
Feeling
stronger,
Mary
began
to
walk
along
the
stream
and
hope
it
would
lead
her
to
the
lake.
As
she
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream,
Mary
heard
a
helicopter.
Is
that
for
me?
Unfortunately,
the
trees
made
it
impossible
for
people
to
see
her
from
above.
A
few
minutes
later,
another
helicopter
flew
overhead.
Mary
took
off
her
yellow
blouse,
thinking
that
she
should
go
to
an
open
area
and
flag
it
if
they
came
back
again.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph
1:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.
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Paragraph
2:
It
was
daybreak
when
Mary
woke
tip.
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【答案】
But
no
more
helicopters
cameand
it
was
getting
dark
again.
Mary
fell
down
into
the
soft
grass.
The
stream
sounded
amusing.
She
thought
about
Jim,
memories
flooding
out
as
she
closed
her
eyes
and
recalled
the
kindnessof
him.
Soon,
she
fell
asleep.
It
was
daybreak
whenMary
woke
up.
Sunshine
poured
on
the
forest
plain,
reflecting
to
bloom
her
yellow
blouseto
be
an
attractive
“flower”.
In
her
sleepy
eyes,
ahelicopter
was
right
in
the
sky.
Wild
with
joy,
she
jumped
up,
waving
the
blouse
while
crying.
The
helicopter
spotted
her
and
began
to
land
on
the
grass.
“It’s
Jim!
I
know
he
will
come!”A
pair
of
warm
hands
reached
Mary’s
cheeks.
“Where
did
you
go?
If
something
happened
to
you,
I
would
alway
shave
it
on
my
conscience.”
“I’m
sorry.”
Mary
said.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了Mary和她的丈夫Jim在森林露营，因为一个不愉快的话题争吵，Mary独自出走。夜幕降临，Mary发现自己迷路了，没有手机，没有方向，她非常想念Jim。天刚亮，她起来继续走，希望能走到湖边，这时她发现了直升机，但是因为树太多，直升机看不到她。她想用自己黄色的衬衫让直升机看到她。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。”可知，第一段可描写天黑后Mary在森林中的感受，她反思着和Jim的争吵，后悔的泪水模糊了她的双眼。Mary被恐惧和疲劳包围着，感到筋疲力尽，最后睡着了。
②由第二段首句内容“Mary醒来时天已经亮了。”可知，第二段可描写Mary天亮后继续找路，最后被一架直升机营救最终和丈夫团圆的事情。
2.续写线索：天黑——回忆——睡着——天亮——被发现——团聚
3.词汇激活
行为类①.
回忆：think
about/think
of/recall/bring
to
mind/look
back
on
②.
睡着：sleep/fall
asleep/feel
sleepy/go
to
sleep
③.
发现：spot/find/discover
情绪类①.
激动：
be
(so,
really,
very)
happy
/
excited
/
delighted
for…/can't
wait
to
do
sth./be
(really)
looking
forward
to
sth./wild
with
joy
【点睛】
[高分句型1].She
thought
about
Jim,
memories
flooding
out
as
she
closed
her
eyes
and
recalled
the
kindness
of
him.（独立主格结构作状语）
[高分句型2].Wild
with
joy,
she
jumped
up,
waving
the
blouse
while
crying.
（形容词短语作状语；现在分词作状语）
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Many
things
—
genetics,
environment,
the
food
you
eat,
illness,
sleep,
even
the
seasons
—
influence
your
emotional
state.
But
at
the
heart
of
it
is
how
you
regard
yourself.
If
you
have
a
healthy
level
of
self-esteem
(自尊),
you
not
only
deal
with
life's
challenges
better
than
people
with
low
self-esteem,
but
you're
probably
more
content,
confident,
and
successful.
You're
probably
also
healthier.
Studies
show
that
positive
self-esteem
actually
helps
prevent
people
against
depression
and
anxiety.Most
people's
sense
of
worth
is
rooted
in
their
childhood
—
in
the
early
approval
or
disapproval
of
parents,
teachers,
and
friends.
But
as
we
get
older,
most
of
us
judge
ourselves
by
our
sense
of
how
effectively
we're
managing
in
the
world,
especially
in
the
areas
of
love
and
work.
Our
ability
to
love
and
be
loved
can
give
our
lives
a
sense
of
purpose
and
deep
fulfillment.
We
can
also
find
satisfaction
and
pride
in
work-related
accomplishments,
and
the
people
we
meet
and
work
with
can
strengthen
our
sense
of
self
and
our
role
in
life.
Once
midlife
comes
along,
however,
our
self-esteem
can
take
a
turn
in
response
to
changes
in
our
lives.
Marriage
may
change,
children
may
leave
home,
and
we
may
begin
to
cut
back
on
work
as
we
approach
retirement.
Of
course,
the
view
in
the
mirror
may
not
be
what
it
used
to
be,
either.
If
you
find
your
self-esteem
eroding
(变弱)
a
bit,
there
are
plenty
of
ways
to
build
it
back
up
again.
Reframe
your
identity.
Redefine
what
you
base
your
sense
of
self-worth
on.
Instead
of
“sales
manager”,
“stock
market
analyst”,
or
“mom”,
start
thinking
of
yourself
as
“community
organizer”,
“literacy
volunteer”,
“great
cook”,
“gifted
gardener”,
and
more.
Talk
back
to
your
inner
critic.
Become
conscious
of
how
hard
you're
being
on
yourself,
and
fight
against
a
negative
attitude
with
some
positive
self-talk.
Take
time
for
yourself.
Read
the
paper,
keep
a
journal,
go
for
a
swim.
This
is
especially
important
for
women,
who
are
often
so
busy
nurturing
others
that
they
neglect
their
own
needs
and
interests.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
People
with
high
self-esteem
(a
healthy
level
of
self-esteem/positive
esteem)
turn
out
healthier
and
happier.
While
our
sense
of
self-worth/(self-esteem
is
deeply
influenced
by
childhood
experiences,
it
is
also
shaped
by
our
performances,
fulfillment
and
satisfaction
in
work
and
interpersonal
relationship.
When
your
self-esteem
fails
due
to
different
changes,
you
can
strengthen
it
by
giving
yourself
a
new
identity,
stopping
being
critical
about
yourself
and
satisfying
your
own
needs.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是概要写作。
【详解】
概要写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句。如本文可概括出：自尊心强的人会更健康、更快乐；虽然我们的自尊深受童年经历的影响，但它也受我们在工作和人际关系中的表现、成就感和满足感的影响；当你因不同的变化而失去自尊时，你可以通过给自己一个新的身份，停止对自己的批评，满足自己的需要来增强自尊心。同时要注意词数要求和使用自己的语言。
【点睛】
本篇范文对文章内容概述完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如让步状语从句While
our
sense
of
self-worth/(self-esteem
is
deeply
influenced
by
childhood
experiences,
it
is
also
shaped
by
our
performances,
fulfillment
and
satisfaction
in
work
and
interpersonal
relationship.时间状语从句及非谓语动词When
your
self-esteem
fails
due
to
different
changes,
you
can
strengthen
it
by
giving
yourself
a
new
identity,
stopping
being
critical
about
yourself
and
satisfying
your
own
needs.另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）06
短文写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．以The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives为题，根据提示，写一篇100字左右的文章。文章标题已给出，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1.网络有助于学习，我们可以查找信息，下载资料，网上上课……
2.网络让我们的生活更加有趣，可在业余时间听音乐，看电影，玩游戏……
3.网络给我们提供了快捷方便的交流，我们可以通过E-mail,
QQ,
MSN等和世界各地的人交朋友。
关键词:
查找
search
for
,材料
materials,
方便
convenient
下载download
The
Internet
Has
Changed
Our
Lives
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mary
and
her
husband,
Jim,
had
driven
three
hours
to
camp
overnight
by
a
lake
in
the
forest.
However,
on
the
way
an
unpleasant
subject
came
up
and
they
started
to
quarrel.
By
the
time
they
reached
the
lake,
Mary
was
so
angry
that
she
said
to
Jim,
"I'm
going
to
find
a
better
spot
for
us
to
camp”
and
walked
away.
With
no
path
to
follow,
Mary
just
walked
on
for
quite
a
long
time.
After
she
had
dim
bed
to
a
high
place,
she
turned
around,
hoping
to
see
the
lake,
To
her
surprise,
she
saw
nothing
but
forest
and
a
snow—covered
mountain
top.
She
suddenly
realized
that
she
was
lost.
"Jim!”,
Mary
cried.
"Help!"
No
reply.
If
only
she
had
not
left
her
mobile
phone
in
that
bag
with
Jim.
Mary
kept
moving,
but
the
farther
she
walked,
the
more
confused
she
became.
As
night
was
beginning
to
fall,
Mary
was
so
tired
that
she
had
to
stop
for
the
night.
Lying
awake
in
the
dark,
Mary
wanted
very
much
to
be
with
Jim
and
her
family.
She
wanted
to
hold
him
and
tell
him
how
much
she
loved
him.
Mary
rose
at
the
break
of
day,
hungry
and
thirsty.
She
could
hear
water
trickling（滴落）somewhere
at
a
distance.
Quickly
she
followed
the
sound
to
a
stream.
To
her
great
joy,
she
also
saw
some
berry
bushes.
She
drank
and
ate
a
few
berries.
Never
in
her
life
had
she
lasted
anything
better.
Feeling
stronger,
Mary
began
to
walk
along
the
stream
and
hope
it
would
lead
her
to
the
lake.
As
she
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream,
Mary
heard
a
helicopter.
Is
that
for
me?
Unfortunately,
the
trees
made
it
impossible
for
people
to
see
her
from
above.
A
few
minutes
later,
another
helicopter
flew
overhead.
Mary
took
off
her
yellow
blouse,
thinking
that
she
should
go
to
an
open
area
and
flag
it
if
they
came
back
again.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph
1:
But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.
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Paragraph
2:
It
was
daybreak
when
Mary
woke
tip.
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3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Many
things
—
genetics,
environment,
the
food
you
eat,
illness,
sleep,
even
the
seasons
—
influence
your
emotional
state.
But
at
the
heart
of
it
is
how
you
regard
yourself.
If
you
have
a
healthy
level
of
self-esteem
(自尊),
you
not
only
deal
with
life's
challenges
better
than
people
with
low
self-esteem,
but
you're
probably
more
content,
confident,
and
successful.
You're
probably
also
healthier.
Studies
show
that
positive
self-esteem
actually
helps
prevent
people
against
depression
and
anxiety.Most
people's
sense
of
worth
is
rooted
in
their
childhood
—
in
the
early
approval
or
disapproval
of
parents,
teachers,
and
friends.
But
as
we
get
older,
most
of
us
judge
ourselves
by
our
sense
of
how
effectively
we're
managing
in
the
world,
especially
in
the
areas
of
love
and
work.
Our
ability
to
love
and
be
loved
can
give
our
lives
a
sense
of
purpose
and
deep
fulfillment.
We
can
also
find
satisfaction
and
pride
in
work-related
accomplishments,
and
the
people
we
meet
and
work
with
can
strengthen
our
sense
of
self
and
our
role
in
life.
Once
midlife
comes
along,
however,
our
self-esteem
can
take
a
turn
in
response
to
changes
in
our
lives.
Marriage
may
change,
children
may
leave
home,
and
we
may
begin
to
cut
back
on
work
as
we
approach
retirement.
Of
course,
the
view
in
the
mirror
may
not
be
what
it
used
to
be,
either.
If
you
find
your
self-esteem
eroding
(变弱)
a
bit,
there
are
plenty
of
ways
to
build
it
back
up
again.
Reframe
your
identity.
Redefine
what
you
base
your
sense
of
self-worth
on.
Instead
of
“sales
manager”,
“stock
market
analyst”,
or
“mom”,
start
thinking
of
yourself
as
“community
organizer”,
“literacy
volunteer”,
“great
cook”,
“gifted
gardener”,
and
more.
Talk
back
to
your
inner
critic.
Become
conscious
of
how
hard
you're
being
on
yourself,
and
fight
against
a
negative
attitude
with
some
positive
self-talk.
Take
time
for
yourself.
Read
the
paper,
keep
a
journal,
go
for
a
swim.
This
is
especially
important
for
women,
who
are
often
so
busy
nurturing
others
that
they
neglect
their
own
needs
and
interests.
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