2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）05
欢迎致辞+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你校为来自英国的交流生举办了一场介绍中国传统节日的欢迎宴会，请你代表学校向他们介绍一个你认为最重要的中国传统节日。内容包括：
1.节日庆祝时间和方式；
2.节日象征意义。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good
morning,
my
dear
friends.
I’m
Li
Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
listening.
【答案】
Good
morning,
my
dear
friends.
I’m
Li
Hua.
Welcome
to
our
school.
Knowing
you’re
keen
on
traditional
Chinese
culture,
I’d
like
to
introduce
a
traditional
Chinese
festival
to
you—the
Dragon
Boat
Festival.
The
Dragon
Boat
Festival
falls
on
the
fifth
day
of
the
fifth
lunar
month,
so
it’s
also
called
the
Double
Fifth
Festival.
On
that
day,
we
usually
eat
Zongzi—sticky
rice
dumplings
wrapped
in
bamboo
leaves.
As
the
festival
name
shows,
people
hold
dragon
boat
races
to
celebrate
it,
especially
in
the
southern
places
in
memory
of
Qu
Yuan,
a
great
poet
of
ancient
China.
Therefore,
it’s
regarded
as
a
day
of
mourning
and
cherishing
the
memory.
Thanks
for
your
listening.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生在一场介绍中国传统节日的欢迎宴会上，给来自英国的交流生介绍一个你认为最重要的中国传统节日。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.
节日庆祝时间和方式；
2.
节日象征意义。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
be
keen
on
sth.;
introduce
sth.
to
sb.;
the
Dragon
Boat
Festival;
falls
on;
in
memory
of
sb.;
be
regarded
as
sth.
第三步：连词成句
1.
Knowing
you’re
keen
on
traditional
Chinese
culture,
I’d
like
to
introduce
a
traditional
Chinese
festival
to
you—the
Dragon
Boat
Festival.
2.
The
Dragon
Boat
Festival
falls
on
the
fifth
day
of
the
fifth
lunar
month,
so
it’s
also
called
the
Double
Fifth
Festival.
3.
As
the
festival
name
shows,
people
hold
dragon
boat
races
to
celebrate
it,
especially
in
the
southern
places
in
memory
of
Qu
Yuan,
a
great
poet
of
ancient
China.
4.
Therefore,
it’s
regarded
as
a
day
of
mourning
and
cherishing
the
memory.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表因果关系：so,
Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Knowing
you’re
keen
on
traditional
Chinese
culture,
I’d
like
to
introduce
a
traditional
Chinese
festival
to
you—the
Dragon
Boat
Festival.用了省略that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
As
the
festival
name
shows,
people
hold
dragon
boat
races
to
celebrate
it,
especially
in
the
southern
places
in
memory
of
Qu
Yuan,
a
great
poet
of
ancient
China.
用了As引导的定语从句。
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
John
was
crazy
about
playing
basketball.
Every
day
after
school,
he
would
spend
much
time
practicing
basketball
skills.
Sometimes,
he
didn't
go
back
home
until
sunset,
which
made
his
mother
extremely
angry.
One
day.
as
he
was
given
a
chance
to
watch
a
basketball
game,
he
dreamed
about
being
a
member
of
the
college
basketball
team
the
next
year.
On
the
way,
he
was
delighted
secretly.
He
thought
no
one
in
the
world
was
luckier
than
him.
Suddenly.
a
car
hit
him.
What
a
terrible
experience!
It
seemed
like
a
bad
dream.
John
woke
up
in
a
hospital
room.
He
was
frightened
to
death.
He
realized
that
he
couldn't
move
both
of
his
legs.
At
that
time,
the
doctor
came
in.
When
the
doctor
told
him
that
both
his
legs
were
broken
and
he
had
to
sit
in
the
wheelchair
for
the
time
being,
he
knew
his
college
basketball
dream
was
over.
He
was
really
depressed.
John
followed
what
the
doc
tors
had
told
him.
but
it
did
not
work
entirely.
When
he
left
hospital#
John
was
sent
to
a
health
recovery
center.
He
never
heard
of
this
center
before,
but
it
was
not
far
away
from
his
house.
Although
he
felt
unwilling
to
go
there,
he
had
no
choice
but
to
accept
the
fact.
A
week
later,
he
arrived
there
unhappily.
The
first
person
he
met
was
Sunny
Chen,
who
was
so
kind
and
friendly
that
he
warmly
welcome
John
to
go
there.
Sunny's
legs
were
badly
hurt
in
a
skating
accident.
He
told
John
that
he
would
help
him
recover
soon.
Though
Sunny
couldn't
move
his
legs,
he
became
the
coach
of
a
basketball
team
called
the
Suns.
After
a
period
of
recovery
training.
John
felt
his
legs
were
all
right.
So
Sunny
invited
him
to
join
the
game
Sunny
guided
the
team
on
his
wheelchair.
John
played
badly,
but
for
the
first
time
since
the
accident,
he
stopped
feeling
sorry
for
himself.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右，
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
John
was
glad
that
his
dream
of
being
a
member
of
the
basketball
team
came
true.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sunny
saw
all
John
did.
lost
in
thought.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
John
was
glad
that
his
dream
of
being
a
member
of
the
basketball
team
came
true.
Basketball
was
like
medicine
for
him.
John
was
much
better
and
more
confident
than
before.
John
practiced
hard
to
improve
himself.
He
was
always
the
first
to
come
to
the
court，and
the
last
to
go
back
home.
Although
it
was
not
easy
for
him
to
play
and
did
badly
at
first，he
never
thought
about
giving
up
hope.
He
was
a
boy
with
a
strong
mind.
Sunny
saw
all
John
did,
lost
in
thought.
He
could
not
help
praising
John
for
his
courage
and
love
for
basketball.
There
were
many
ups
and
downs
in
life.
No
one
knew
what
would
happen.
However,
as
long
as
there
was
love
and
hope
in
our
heart,
nothing
could
stop
us
from
achieving
what
we
desired.
As
a
matter
of
fact,
what
we
should
do
was
hold
fast
to
the
dreams
and
fight
to
the
end.
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了一个喜欢篮球的小伙子John在一次车祸中双腿受伤，被迫前往康复中心进行理疗。在理疗中心他碰到了同样受伤的篮球队教练Sunny。Sunny邀请John加入篮球队，从而让John成为篮球运动员的梦想成真的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“John很高兴他成为篮球队队员的梦想实现了。”可知，第一段可描写John在成为篮球运动员之后的具体表现。
②由第二段首句内容“Sunny看到了John所做的一切，陷入了沉思。”可知，第二段可描写Sunny沉思后对John的评价以及感悟。
2.续写线索：成为篮球队员——John的转变——如何训练——Sunny沉思——Sunny的评价——领悟感受
3.
词类激活
行为类
①提高：improve/enhance/raise
②表扬：praise/
commend
③喜欢：love/like/be
fond
of
情感类
①坚强的：strong/firm
②紧紧地：fast/
tightly
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
However,
as
long
as
there
was
love
and
hope
in
our
heart,
nothing
could
stop
us
from
achieving
what
we
desired.（运用了as
long
as引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2].
As
a
matter
of
fact,
what
we
should
do
was
hold
fast
to
the
dreams
and
fight
to
the
end.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Urban
Wildlife
Cities
are
diverse
ecosystems.
In
addition
to
visitors
from
the
wild,
such
as
coyotes(丛林狼)in
Los
Angeles
or
boars
(野猪)
in
Berlin,
a
large
number
of
species
share
our
urban
areas.
As
our
cities
spread,
we
need
to
think
about
what
it
is
like
for
other
species
to
have
human
neighbours
Because
cities
are
built
for
humans,
they
do
not
always
provide
suitable
habitats
for
wildlife.
For
example,
most
city
parks
are
kept
neat
and
tidy
so
that
humans
will
find
them
beautiful.
But
when
we
cut
grass
or
plant
flowers,
we
destroy
natural
habitats.
Our
actions
sometimes
help
other
species.
When
a
bridge
in
Austin,
Texas
was
repaired,
engineers
added
small
gaps
running
along
the
length
of
its
bottom.
This
made
a
good
home
for
bats,
and
soon
the
bridge
was
the
home
of
thousands
of
bats.
At
first,
people
were
afraid
of
the
bats
and
tried
to
get
rid
of
them.
Now,
they
have
come
to
value
their
winged
neighbours.
The
bats
are
a
tourist
attraction,
and
they
eat
lots
of
bugs
every
night.
There
are
also
structures
built
with
the
objective
of
bringing
wildlife
into
the
city.
The
Beijing
Olympic
Forest
Park
is
a
good
example.
The
park
used
native
plants
and
created
open,
natural
spaces
for
wildlife.
The
result
is
a
zone
in
Beijing
with
over
160
species
of
birds.
In
many
ways,
the
park
is
the
opposite
of
a
zoo.
Instead
of
being
kept
in
cages,
wildlife
can
move
about
freely.
Another
example
is
a
2011
proposal
for
a
tall
"Birdscraper"
building
in
New
York.
The
building
is
intended
to
protect
birds
and
fight
pollution
at
the
same
time.
It
would
be
in
the
middle
of
a
lake,
birds
would
sit
on
it,
and
their
droppings
would
fall
into
the
water.
The
droppings
would
feed
water
plants
which
would
then
create
oxygen
through
photosynthesis(光合作用).
If
we
learn
to
share
our
space,
we
can
become
better
neighbours
to
the
wildlife
around
us.
If
we
do
not,
more
species
will
become
extinct
and
our
own
future
will
be
endangered.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Cities
are
home
to
humans
and
some
species
of
wildlife.
But
cities
don’t
always
provide
suitable
environment
for
wildlife.
In
order
to
help
our
urban
neighbors,
engineers
take
wildlife
into
consideration
when
designing
buildings
and
structures
are
built
to
attract
more
wildlife
into
cities.
Only
when
we
learn
to
share
our
space
with
wildlife,
can
we
live
a
better
life.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。作者通过举例德克萨斯州奥斯汀市在修复一座桥时，在桥底增加了一些小缝隙，为蝙蝠提供了一个很好的栖息环境，人类与蝙蝠友好相处；北京奥林匹克森林公园利用了当地的植物，为野生动物创造了开放的自然空间；2011年在纽约提议建造一座“摩天大楼”，旨在保护鸟类，来说明自己对于人类城市与野生动物关系的观点：只有当我们学会与野生动物分享我们的空间，我们才能过上更好的生活。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①A
large
number
of
species
share
our
cities.
②But
cities
do
not
always
provide
suitable
habitats
for
wildlife.
③Our
actions
sometimes
help
other
species.
Engineers
take
wildlife
into
consideration
when
designing
buildings
and
structures
are
built
to
attract
more
wildlife
into
cities.
④If
we
learn
to
share
our
space,
we
can
become
better
neighbours
to
the
wildlife
around
us.
If
we
do
not,
more
species
will
become
extinct
and
our
own
future
will
be
endangered.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点罗列出来，说明现状，存在的问题；第3要点说明解决问题的方法；第4要点说明作者的观点态度。
3.遣词造句
Cities
are
home
to
humans
and
some
species
of
wildlife.
But
cities
don’t
always
provide
suitable
environment
for
wildlife.
In
order
to
help
our
urban
neighbors,
engineers
take
wildlife
into
consideration
when
designing
buildings
and
structures
are
built
to
attract
more
wildlife
into
cities.
Only
when
we
learn
to
share
our
space
with
wildlife,
can
we
live
a
better
life.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
In
order
to
help
our
urban
neighbors,
engineers
take
wildlife
into
consideration
when
designing
buildings
and
structures
are
built
to
attract
more
wildlife
into
cities.
用不定式短语In
order
to作目的状语，表明了做事情的目的；句中用了一个高级短语“take···into
consideration”来表达把野生动物纳入考虑范围；“structures
are
built
”用了被动语态，使表达形式多样化，表达高级，灵活多样。
[高分句型2]：Only
when
we
learn
to
share
our
space
with
wildlife,
can
we
live
a
better
life.
用“Only+状语”置于句首引起的部分倒装，在结尾强调了作者的观点态度，表达非常高级。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）05
欢迎致辞+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你校为来自英国的交流生举办了一场介绍中国传统节日的欢迎宴会，请你代表学校向他们介绍一个你认为最重要的中国传统节日。内容包括：
1.节日庆祝时间和方式；
2.节日象征意义。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good
morning,
my
dear
friends.
I’m
Li
Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
listening.
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
John
was
crazy
about
playing
basketball.
Every
day
after
school,
he
would
spend
much
time
practicing
basketball
skills.
Sometimes,
he
didn't
go
back
home
until
sunset,
which
made
his
mother
extremely
angry.
One
day.
as
he
was
given
a
chance
to
watch
a
basketball
game,
he
dreamed
about
being
a
member
of
the
college
basketball
team
the
next
year.
On
the
way,
he
was
delighted
secretly.
He
thought
no
one
in
the
world
was
luckier
than
him.
Suddenly.
a
car
hit
him.
What
a
terrible
experience!
It
seemed
like
a
bad
dream.
John
woke
up
in
a
hospital
room.
He
was
frightened
to
death.
He
realized
that
he
couldn't
move
both
of
his
legs.
At
that
time,
the
doctor
came
in.
When
the
doctor
told
him
that
both
his
legs
were
broken
and
he
had
to
sit
in
the
wheelchair
for
the
time
being,
he
knew
his
college
basketball
dream
was
over.
He
was
really
depressed.
John
followed
what
the
doc
tors
had
told
him.
but
it
did
not
work
entirely.
When
he
left
hospital#
John
was
sent
to
a
health
recovery
center.
He
never
heard
of
this
center
before,
but
it
was
not
far
away
from
his
house.
Although
he
felt
unwilling
to
go
there,
he
had
no
choice
but
to
accept
the
fact.
A
week
later,
he
arrived
there
unhappily.
The
first
person
he
met
was
Sunny
Chen,
who
was
so
kind
and
friendly
that
he
warmly
welcome
John
to
go
there.
Sunny's
legs
were
badly
hurt
in
a
skating
accident.
He
told
John
that
he
would
help
him
recover
soon.
Though
Sunny
couldn't
move
his
legs,
he
became
the
coach
of
a
basketball
team
called
the
Suns.
After
a
period
of
recovery
training.
John
felt
his
legs
were
all
right.
So
Sunny
invited
him
to
join
the
game
Sunny
guided
the
team
on
his
wheelchair.
John
played
badly,
but
for
the
first
time
since
the
accident,
he
stopped
feeling
sorry
for
himself.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右，
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
John
was
glad
that
his
dream
of
being
a
member
of
the
basketball
team
came
true.
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Sunny
saw
all
John
did.
lost
in
thought.
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3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Urban
Wildlife
Cities
are
diverse
ecosystems.
In
addition
to
visitors
from
the
wild,
such
as
coyotes(丛林狼)in
Los
Angeles
or
boars
(野猪)
in
Berlin,
a
large
number
of
species
share
our
urban
areas.
As
our
cities
spread,
we
need
to
think
about
what
it
is
like
for
other
species
to
have
human
neighbours
Because
cities
are
built
for
humans,
they
do
not
always
provide
suitable
habitats
for
wildlife.
For
example,
most
city
parks
are
kept
neat
and
tidy
so
that
humans
will
find
them
beautiful.
But
when
we
cut
grass
or
plant
flowers,
we
destroy
natural
habitats.
Our
actions
sometimes
help
other
species.
When
a
bridge
in
Austin,
Texas
was
repaired,
engineers
added
small
gaps
running
along
the
length
of
its
bottom.
This
made
a
good
home
for
bats,
and
soon
the
bridge
was
the
home
of
thousands
of
bats.
At
first,
people
were
afraid
of
the
bats
and
tried
to
get
rid
of
them.
Now,
they
have
come
to
value
their
winged
neighbours.
The
bats
are
a
tourist
attraction,
and
they
eat
lots
of
bugs
every
night.
There
are
also
structures
built
with
the
objective
of
bringing
wildlife
into
the
city.
The
Beijing
Olympic
Forest
Park
is
a
good
example.
The
park
used
native
plants
and
created
open,
natural
spaces
for
wildlife.
The
result
is
a
zone
in
Beijing
with
over
160
species
of
birds.
In
many
ways,
the
park
is
the
opposite
of
a
zoo.
Instead
of
being
kept
in
cages,
wildlife
can
move
about
freely.
Another
example
is
a
2011
proposal
for
a
tall
"Birdscraper"
building
in
New
York.
The
building
is
intended
to
protect
birds
and
fight
pollution
at
the
same
time.
It
would
be
in
the
middle
of
a
lake,
birds
would
sit
on
it,
and
their
droppings
would
fall
into
the
water.
The
droppings
would
feed
water
plants
which
would
then
create
oxygen
through
photosynthesis(光合作用).
If
we
learn
to
share
our
space,
we
can
become
better
neighbours
to
the
wildlife
around
us.
If
we
do
not,
more
species
will
become
extinct
and
our
own
future
will
be
endangered.
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