2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）04
邀请信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，你市将举办中华美食节（Chinese
Gourmet
Festival）,
请你给你的外教Henry写一封邮件，邀请他一同前往。内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点；
2.活动内容。
注意:
1.
词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear
Henry,
How
is
it
going?
Knowing
that
there
is
going
to
be
a
Chinese
Gourmet
Festival
in
our
city’s
central
square,
I
am
writing
to
invite
you
to
go
there.
The
festival
is
scheduled
to
be
held
this
Sunday,
during
which,
not
only
will
you
enjoy
a
super
"full
Chinese
breakfast"
of
dim
sum
and
tea,
but
you
will
come
across
stinky
tofu
that
is
hard
to
resist.
Moreover,
a
hands-on
opportunity
will
be
provided
to
cook
your
favorite
dish
under
the
guidance
of
a
cook.
Since
you
are
crazy
about
Chinese
traditional
food,
I
sincerely
hope
you
can
accept
my
invitation.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Henry写封邮件，邀请他参加中华美食节。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.活动的时间、地点；
2.活动内容。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
a
Chinese
Gourmet
Festival;
invite
sb.
to
do
sth.;
not
only…but
(also)…;
come
across;
resist;
a
hands-on
opportunity;
under
the
guidance
of;
be
crazy
about;
invitation
第三步：连词成句
1.
Knowing
that
there
is
going
to
be
a
Chinese
gourmet
festival
in
our
city’s
central
square,
I
am
writing
to
invite
you
to
go
there.
2.
The
festival
is
scheduled
to
be
held
this
Sunday,
during
which,
not
only
will
you
enjoy
a
super
"full
Chinese
breakfast"
of
dim
sum
and
tea,
but
you
will
come
across
stinky
tofu
that
is
hard
to
resist.
3.
Moreover,
a
hands-on
opportunity
will
be
provided
to
cook
your
favorite
dish
under
the
guidance
of
a
cook.
4.
Since
you
are
crazy
about
Chinese
traditional
food,
I
sincerely
hope
you
can
accept
my
invitation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：
Moreover，not
only…but
(also)…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The
festival
is
scheduled
to
be
held
this
Sunday,
during
which
not
only
will
you
enjoy
a
super
"full
Chinese
breakfast"
of
dim
sum
and
tea,
but
you
will
come
across
stinky
tofu
that
is
hard
to
resist.
(运用了部分倒装和“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Since
you
are
crazy
about
Chinese
traditional
food,
I
sincerely
hope
you
can
accept
my
invitation.
(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having
just
graduated
from
high
school,
I
was
18
and
living
with
my
parents
in
Denver,
Colorado.
That
summer
I
decided
to
take
my
most
daring
trip
ever.
I
wanted
to
go
to
Utah
to
visit
a
dear
friend
I'd
known
for
four
years.
My
father
had
given
me
a
small
street
motorcycle
as
a
graduation
present,
and
I
worked
out
a
plan
to
ride
it
to
Utah.
I
was
to
get
an
early
start,
ride
all
day,
and
arrive
at
my
destination
(Paradise,
Utah)
that
evening.
Arriving
in
Ogden,
Utah
in
the
late
afternoon,
I
looked
at
my
map
for
another
route
to
save
time.
A
small
line
on
the
map
indicated
an
unimproved
road
heading
northeast-straight
to
the
little
town
of
Paradise!
Of
course
I
headed
for
it.
The
road
quickly
became
single,
dirty
lane,
winding
through
fields.
As
long
as
it
was
dry,
surely
I'd
be
OK.
Suddenly,
I
lost
control
of
the
motorcycle
and
it
fell
over.
I
didn't
get
hurt
because
wasn't
going
fast,
but
I
was
puzzled
and
couldn't
figure
out
what
had
happened.
It
was
dark.
While
my
headlight
showed
me
where
the
road
was,
I
couldn't
tell
its
condition,
only
that
it
was
smooth.
I
started
again,
and
once
more
fell
over
after
a
few
feet.
I
looked
around
and
found
myself
alone
in
a
high
mountain
field.
For
the
first
time
during
the
trip
I
started
to
get
worried.
A
few
minutes
later
I
couldn't
believe
what
I
saw-a
pair
of
headlights
bouncing
along
the
road
toward
me,
coming
from
the
direction
I
was
heading
for!
The
man
driving
the
small
truck
stopped
and
asked
if
I
needed
any
help.
Not
the
type
to
bother
others
with
my
problems,
I
said
I
thought
I
could
get
where
I
was
going
on
my
own,
but
thanked
him
for
the
offer.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
He
explained
the
problem—a
rain
had
fallen
during
the
day.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I
asked
him
why
he
was
out
there
in
the
field
at
such
a
late
hour.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
He
explained
the
problem—a
rain
had
fallen
during
the
day.
I
then
realized
why
the
road
was
so
slippery
and
muddy.
After
another
unsuccessful
attempt
I
finally
accepted
his
help,
and
we
loaded
the
motorcycle
into
the
back
of
his
truck.
He
turned
around
and
took
me
back
in
the
direction
he
came
from.
He
asked
me
where
I
was
going
and
I
told
him
I
was
going
to
visit
a
friend
in
Paradise.
It
happened
that
he
had
planned
to
go
back
to
Paradise
that
evening.
I
asked
him
why
he
was
out
there
in
the
field
at
such
a
late
hour.
He
told
me
he
was
a
roadman.
He
had
a
feeling
that
he
needed
to
go
down
the
road,
but
wasn't
sure
why.
Then
he
found
me.
It
took
us
the
better
part
of
an
hour
to
make
it
to
the
next
paved
road.
All
the
while
I
was
amazed
that
he
was
able
and
willing
to
be
there.
He
was
so
kind
that
he
drove
me
to
my
friend's
home,
which
made
me
less
worried.
I
will
always
be
grateful
to
him
for
going
out
of
his
way
on
a
dark
night
to
the
middle
of
nowhere
to
help
me.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想骑着摩托车去犹他州拜访朋友，为了节省时间选择了抄近路，小路不好走，作者在路上摔车了，四周只有作者一个人。这时，遇到了一个开小卡车的人，那人主动提出帮助作者，但作者一开始拒绝了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他解释了问题所在——白天下了一场雨。”可知，第一段可描写卡车司机是如何帮助作者的。
②由第二段首句内容“我问他为什么这么晚了还在外面。”可知，第二段可描写作者对卡车司机的了解以及如何在他的帮助下到达朋友家的。
2.续写线索：作者接受帮助——司机表示顺路——作者了解司机——司机送作者到朋友家——作者感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①搬运：load
into/
move
into
②计划：plan
to/
aim
to/
intend
to
③询问：ask/
inquire
情绪类
①感谢：be
grateful
/show
appreciation
to
②惊讶：amazed
/
surprised
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
He
asked
me
where
I
was
going
and
I
told
him
I
was
going
to
visit
a
friend
in
Paradise.
(运用了where引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
He
was
so
kind
that
he
drove
me
to
my
friend's
home,
which
made
me
less
worried.
(运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
This
incident
happened
over
twenty
years
ago
when
I
was
in
high
school.
There
was
a
debate
competition
in
my
neighbouring
school.
My
friend
and
I
volunteered
to
participate
in
the
debate.
There
were
many
topics
to
choose
from
and
I
choose
to
speak
on
AIDS.
Even
though
I
had
no
idea
what
the
competition
would
be
like,
I
decided
to
go
ahead
and
prepare
for
it
and
I
used
an
article
from
a
magazine
as
reference.
On
the
day
of
the
event,
I
practiced
my
lines
but
was
feeling
nervous
as
there
would
be
many
listeners
and
the
stage
fear
was
chasing
me
already
and
truly
it
caught
up
with
me.
I
reached
the
auditorium
(礼堂),
and
it
was
large.
The
competition
began,
and
I
was
getting
sweaty
palms.
I
was
at
a
loss
when
the
speaker
before
my
turn
unexpectedly
had
chosen
the
same
topic
as
me
and
also
referred
to
the
same
magazine
and
reproduced
it
line
by
line,
leaving
me
in
a
daze
(恍惚)
on
what
to
do
next
as
I
just
had
a
couple
of
minutes
with
me.
Soon
enough
I
was
on
the
stage
and
I
could
gather
courage
and
speak
for
only
two
minutes.
I
felt
so
bad.
I
had
not
only
let
my
school
down
but
also
myself.
I
then
decided
to
put
in
my
best
efforts
and
overcome
my
stage
fear
and
prepare
well
for
the
next
debate.
Luckily
I
did
not
have
to
wait
long
as
the
next
competition
was
organized
by
my
school.
This
time
my
topic
was
against
castes
(印度的种姓；等级制度)
in
indian
society.
I
wrote
the
script
with
my
own
efforts
and
practiced
for
hours
in
front
of
the
mirror
even
though
I
had
learned
the
script
by
heart.
The
day
came
and
this
time
I
was
confident
about
myself,
I
just
went
about
doing
my
job
and
lasted
for
five
minutes.
I
had
a
very
satisfied
feeling
coming
from
within.
When
the
results
were
announced,
I
had
come
second
in
the
event,
I
was
so
happy
and
all
my
efforts
paid
off.
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【答案】
Twenty
years
ago,
as
a
middle
school
student
I
attended
a
debate
competition.
As
I
was
not
well
prepared
and
I
got
nervous
and
feared,
I
lost
the
competition.
Soon
another
debate
competition
was
held.
I
prepared
for
every
detail,
conquered
myself
and
got
the
second
place.
From
this
experience
I
know
efforts
will
pay
off
sooner
or
later.
【分析】
这是一篇概要写作。
【详解】
写作步骤
1）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。文章主要讲述了二十年前，作者作为一名中学生参加了一次辩论赛。由于作者没有准备好，作者紧张和害怕，最后输了比赛。不久，另一场辩论赛举行了。作者准备好了每一个细节，战胜了自己，获得了第二名。从这次经历中，作者知道努力迟早会有回报的。
2）弄清要求。新高考的概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。
3）列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。
4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点：
（1）概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。
（2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。
（3）注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。
（4）不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。
（5）计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：attend；a
debate
competition；well
prepared；conquer；effort；pay
off；sooner
or
later等高级词汇；As
I
was
not
well
prepared
and
I
got
nervous
and
feared,
I
lost
the
competition.运用了原因状语从句；等高级句式。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）04
邀请信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假如你是李华，你市将举办中华美食节（Chinese
Gourmet
Festival）,
请你给你的外教Henry写一封邮件，邀请他一同前往。内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点；
2.活动内容。
注意:
1.
词数80左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having
just
graduated
from
high
school,
I
was
18
and
living
with
my
parents
in
Denver,
Colorado.
That
summer
I
decided
to
take
my
most
daring
trip
ever.
I
wanted
to
go
to
Utah
to
visit
a
dear
friend
I'd
known
for
four
years.
My
father
had
given
me
a
small
street
motorcycle
as
a
graduation
present,
and
I
worked
out
a
plan
to
ride
it
to
Utah.
I
was
to
get
an
early
start,
ride
all
day,
and
arrive
at
my
destination
(Paradise,
Utah)
that
evening.
Arriving
in
Ogden,
Utah
in
the
late
afternoon,
I
looked
at
my
map
for
another
route
to
save
time.
A
small
line
on
the
map
indicated
an
unimproved
road
heading
northeast-straight
to
the
little
town
of
Paradise!
Of
course
I
headed
for
it.
The
road
quickly
became
single,
dirty
lane,
winding
through
fields.
As
long
as
it
was
dry,
surely
I'd
be
OK.
Suddenly,
I
lost
control
of
the
motorcycle
and
it
fell
over.
I
didn't
get
hurt
because
wasn't
going
fast,
but
I
was
puzzled
and
couldn't
figure
out
what
had
happened.
It
was
dark.
While
my
headlight
showed
me
where
the
road
was,
I
couldn't
tell
its
condition,
only
that
it
was
smooth.
I
started
again,
and
once
more
fell
over
after
a
few
feet.
I
looked
around
and
found
myself
alone
in
a
high
mountain
field.
For
the
first
time
during
the
trip
I
started
to
get
worried.
A
few
minutes
later
I
couldn't
believe
what
I
saw-a
pair
of
headlights
bouncing
along
the
road
toward
me,
coming
from
the
direction
I
was
heading
for!
The
man
driving
the
small
truck
stopped
and
asked
if
I
needed
any
help.
Not
the
type
to
bother
others
with
my
problems,
I
said
I
thought
I
could
get
where
I
was
going
on
my
own,
but
thanked
him
for
the
offer.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
He
explained
the
problem—a
rain
had
fallen
during
the
day.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I
asked
him
why
he
was
out
there
in
the
field
at
such
a
late
hour.
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3．读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
This
incident
happened
over
twenty
years
ago
when
I
was
in
high
school.
There
was
a
debate
competition
in
my
neighbouring
school.
My
friend
and
I
volunteered
to
participate
in
the
debate.
There
were
many
topics
to
choose
from
and
I
choose
to
speak
on
AIDS.
Even
though
I
had
no
idea
what
the
competition
would
be
like,
I
decided
to
go
ahead
and
prepare
for
it
and
I
used
an
article
from
a
magazine
as
reference.
On
the
day
of
the
event,
I
practiced
my
lines
but
was
feeling
nervous
as
there
would
be
many
listeners
and
the
stage
fear
was
chasing
me
already
and
truly
it
caught
up
with
me.
I
reached
the
auditorium
(礼堂),
and
it
was
large.
The
competition
began,
and
I
was
getting
sweaty
palms.
I
was
at
a
loss
when
the
speaker
before
my
turn
unexpectedly
had
chosen
the
same
topic
as
me
and
also
referred
to
the
same
magazine
and
reproduced
it
line
by
line,
leaving
me
in
a
daze
(恍惚)
on
what
to
do
next
as
I
just
had
a
couple
of
minutes
with
me.
Soon
enough
I
was
on
the
stage
and
I
could
gather
courage
and
speak
for
only
two
minutes.
I
felt
so
bad.
I
had
not
only
let
my
school
down
but
also
myself.
I
then
decided
to
put
in
my
best
efforts
and
overcome
my
stage
fear
and
prepare
well
for
the
next
debate.
Luckily
I
did
not
have
to
wait
long
as
the
next
competition
was
organized
by
my
school.
This
time
my
topic
was
against
castes
(印度的种姓；等级制度)
in
indian
society.
I
wrote
the
script
with
my
own
efforts
and
practiced
for
hours
in
front
of
the
mirror
even
though
I
had
learned
the
script
by
heart.
The
day
came
and
this
time
I
was
confident
about
myself,
I
just
went
about
doing
my
job
and
lasted
for
five
minutes.
I
had
a
very
satisfied
feeling
coming
from
within.
When
the
results
were
announced,
I
had
come
second
in
the
event,
I
was
so
happy
and
all
my
efforts
paid
off.
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