2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）03
建议信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你班的交换生Tom在中国已经学习三个月，但是他依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。请你给他写封邮件，给出一些建议。内容包括：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear
Tom,
I'm
sorry
to
hear
that
you
have
problems
getting
used
to
the
life
in
China.
I'm
writing
to
offer
you
some
suggestions.
First
of
all，you
can
turn
to
your
classmates
or
teachers
for
help，who
can
offer
some
tips
on
Chinese
learning.
As
for
your
sleep
problem，you'd
better
listen
to
some
relaxing
music，which
can
help
you
to
fall
asleep
quickly.
What's
more,
it's
important
for
you
to
actively
talk
to
others
and
help
others
if
necessary.
In
this
way，you
are
likely
to
make
more
friends.
I
hope
my
advice
can
be
helpful
and
that
you
can
enjoy
your
life
here.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，李华的班里有一个名叫Tom的交换生，他在中国已经学习三个月，但是依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。要求考生以李华的身份给Tom写一封信，就学习、生活和交友方面等给出一些建议。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
写作内容：给出建议
要点：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
第二步:列提纲
sorry
to
hear;
have
problem
doing
sth.;
get
used
to
the
life
in
China;
offer
some
suggestions;
turn
to
sb.
for
help;
offer
some
tips
on
sth.;
listen
to
relaxing
music;
fall
asleep
quickly;
talk
actively
to
others;
make
more
friends;
enjoy
your
life
第三步：连词成句
1.
I'm
sorry
to
hear
that
you
have
problems
getting
used
to
the
life
in
China.
2.
I'm
writing
to
offer
you
some
suggestions.
3.
You
can
turn
to
your
classmates
or
teachers
for
help.
4.
You'd
better
listen
to
some
relaxing
music.
5.
It's
important
for
you
to
actively
talk
to
others
and
help
others
if
necessary.
6.
I
hope
my
advice
can
be
helpful
and
that
you
can
enjoy
your
life
here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序（供参考）：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end
2.表并列补充关系：As
for
…,
What’s
more,
3.表因果关系：In
this
way
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
First
of
all，you
can
turn
to
your
classmates
or
teachers
for
help，who
can
offer
some
tips
on
Chinese
learning.（who引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型2]
As
for
your
sleep
problem，you'd
better
listen
to
some
relaxing
music，which
can
help
you
to
fall
asleep
quickly.（which引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型3]
I
hope
my
advice
can
be
helpful
and
that
you
can
enjoy
your
life
here.（并列宾语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成--篇完整的短文。
When
I
was
in
elementary
school,
I
loved
parties.
I
also
liked
all
different
kinds
of
people.
I
never
quite
fit
into
one
of
the
many
little
groups
at
school,
so
I
made
friends
from
various
groups.
There
was
an
“in”
crowd
made
up
of
the
cool
kids
who
had
the
power
to
rule
the
school-if
a
cool
kid
wore
two
different
colored
socks
to
school
one
day,
everyone
thought
it
was
great.
But
if
an
uncool
kid
did
the
same
thing,
the
other
kids
would
laugh
at
him
or
her.
Shannon
was
one
of
my
friends
who
was
the
uncool
type.
She
was
a
nice
girl
and
wore
pretty
clothes,
but
was
a
little
overweight.
I
don’t
know
why,
but
people
found
it
acceptable
to
make
fun
of
her.
Whenever
there
was
a
strange
noise
or
smell
in
the
classroom
the
kids
would
laugh
and
point
at
her.
Shannon
never
said
anything.
One
year,
to
celebrate
my
birthday,
my
mom
told
me
I
could
have
a
party
at
home.
I
struggled
for
days
deciding
on
which
girls
to
invite.
Once
I
had
chosen
all
the
names,
I
made
the
invitations
and
handed
them
out
to
my
friends
at
school.
“Why
did
you
invite
Shannon?”
asked
a
cool
friend.
She
said
that
I
had
made
a
big
mistake
and
pressured
me
to
tell
her
not
to
come.
I
wasn’t
sure
what
to
do;
I
liked
Shannon,
yet
I
was
afraid
that
the
cool
girls
would
be
angry
at
me.
I
knew
the
right
thing
to
do,
but
I
eventually
decided
not
to
say
anything
to
Shannon
and
let
the
invitations
stay
as
written.
On
the
day
of
my
party,
both
Shannon
and
my
other
friends
came,
and
all
that
happened
was
that
we
had
much
fun
together.
None
of
the
things
I
had
worried
about
came
to
be.
More
parties
and
events
followed
that
one
and
the
memory
of
it
gradually
faded
(模糊).
In
fact,
it
was
many
years
later
before
I
thought
about
that
party
again.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph
1
Twenty
years
later,
I
weas
at
my
high
school
trwenty-year
reunion
(重逢,聚会)
when
a
beautiful,
slim,
very
professional-looking
woman
walked
up
to
me.
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Paragraph
2
Then
she
told
me
something
that
stayed
with
me.
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【答案】
Twenty
years
later,
I
was
at
my
high
school
twenty-year
reunion
when
a
beautiful,
slim,
very
professional-looking
woman
walked
up
to
me.
She
said,
"Lindy,
I
am
so
glad
you
came
tonight.
You're
the
reason
why
I
am
here."
"Oh?"
I
replied,
not
recognizing
her
face
at
first.
She
pointed
her
nametag
that
read,
"Dr.
Shannon
Chatzky."
We
hugged
and
laughed
.
It
was
a
long
time
since
we
had
last
seen
each
other.
She
was
now
a
wife,
a
mother
and
a
doctor!
Then
she
told
me
something
that
stayed
with
me.
She
told
me
elementary
school
was
awful
for
her.
She
struggled
all
the
time
with
thoughts
of
ending
school.
"I
came
tonight
to
thank
you
for
being
my
friend.
You
made
my
days
much
better
and
I
will
never
forget
that
you
invited
me
to
your
party."
hannon
said
it
was
important
to
her
that
I
had
welcomed
her
into
the
party,
and
it
was
a
day
when
she
felt
accepted
and
part
of
a
group.
For
me,
it
was
just
a
party
that
I
hadn't
even
remembered.
But
for
Shannon,
it
was
a
party
she
would
never
forget.
And
now,
neither
will
I.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在上初中时顶着朋友的压力，在自己的生日晚会上邀请了不受大家欢迎的Shannon的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“二十年后，我在高中二十年的聚会上，这时候一个美丽的，苗条的，看起来非常职业的女人走到我面前。”可知，第一段重点应该写这位美丽，纤细，职业女性是谁，以及她的语言动作。
由第二段首句内容“然后她告诉我一些留在我身边的事情。”可知，第二段重点描述Shannon回忆上初中时的遭遇以及作者邀请她参加生日晚会带给她的积极改变。
2.续写线索：聚会遇到Shannon——回忆过去——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走向某人：walked
up
to
me/
go
up
to
me/come
to
me
②.挣扎：struggle/fight/battle
③.结束：end/finish/complete
情绪类
①.感谢：thank/showing
his
appreciation/show
his
gratitude/be
grateful
②.糟糕：awful/bad/trouble
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
It
was
a
long
time
since
we
had
last
seen
each
other.
（since引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2].
Shannon
said
it
was
important
to
her
that
I
had
welcomed
her
into
the
party,
and
it
was
a
day
when
she
felt
accepted
and
part
of
a
group（it
形式主语，that
引导主语从句；以及when引导的定语从句来修饰a
day。）
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Almost
everyone
has
read
about
the
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
It
is
one
of
the
most
beautiful
buildings
in
the
world.
Over
three
hundred
years
ago,
Shah
Jehan
built
the
Taj
Mahal
as
the
tomb
for
his
wife.
Shah
Jehan
wanted
his
wife's
tomb
to
be
perfect.
He
did
not
care
about
time
or
money.
He
brought
together
workmen
from
all
Asia.
Altogether,
over
20,000
men
worked
on
the
building,
and
it
took
them
over
seventeen
years
to
finish
it.
The
building
rests
on
a
platform
of
red
sandstone.
Four
thin
white
towers
rise
from
the
corners
of
the
platform.
A
large
dome
rests
from
the
centre
of
the
building.
Around
this
large
dome
there
are
four
smaller
ones.
The
building
is
made
of
fine
white
and
coloured
marble.
It
has
eight
sides
and
many
arches.
There
is
an
open
corridor
just
inside
the
outer
walls.
From
this
corridor,
the
visitor
looks
through
the
marble
screen
to
a
central
room.
The
bodies
of
Shah
Jehan
and
his
wife
lie
in
a
tomb
below
this
room.
A
beautiful
garden
surrounds
the
Taj
Mahal.
The
green
trees
make
the
marble
look
even
whiter.
In
front
of
the
main
entrance
to
the
building
there
is
a
long,
narrow
pool.
If
you
look
in
this
pool,
you
can
see
all
the
beauty
of
the
Taj
Mahal
in
the
reflection
from
the
water.
Many
people
think
the
Taj
Mahal
is
the
most
beautiful
at
sunset.
Then
the
marble
picks
up
the
colour
of
the
sunset,
and
the
building
and
its
reflection
in
the
pool
gleam
like
red
jewels.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
The
passage
describes
the
famous
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
The
first
paragraph
explains
why
the
Taj
Mahal
was
built
and
how
much
time
and
labour
were
spent
on
it.
(要点1)
The
second
paragraph
describes
the
location
and
appearance
of
the
Taj
Mahal.
(要点2)
The
third
paragraph
details
the
building
materials
and
the
architecture
style
of
the
Taj
Mahal.
(要点3)
The
last
two
sections
picture
the
environment
around
the
Taj
Mahal.
(要点4)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。这篇文章介绍了印度著名的泰姬陵，包括建造泰姬陵的原因、在它上面花费了多少时间和劳力、泰姬陵的位置和外观、它的建筑材料和建筑风格以及它周围的环境。
【详解】
1
要点摘录
①Almost
everyone
has
read
about
the
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
It
is
one
of
the
most
beautiful
buildings
in
the
world.
Over
three
hundred
years
ago,
Shah
Jehan
built
the
Taj
Mahal
as
the
tomb
for
his
wife.
Altogether,
over
20,000
men
worked
on
the
building,
and
it
took
them
over
seventeen
years
to
finish
it.
②The
building
rests
on
a
platform
of
red
sandstone.
Around
this
large
dome
there
are
four
smaller
ones.
③The
building
is
made
of
fine
white
and
coloured
marble.
It
has
eight
sides
and
many
arches.
There
is
an
open
corridor
just
inside
the
outer
walls.
④A
beautiful
garden
surrounds
the
Taj
Mahal.
Many
people
think
the
Taj
Mahal
is
the
most
beautiful
at
sunset.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行重组（作为总说），将第2、3、4两个要点进行整合（作为分说）。
3.遣词造句
The
passage
describes
the
famous
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
The
first
paragraph
explains
why
the
Taj
Mahal
was
built
and
how
much
time
and
labour
were
spent
on
it.
The
second
paragraph
describes
the
location
and
appearance
of
the
Taj
Mahal.
The
last
two
sections
picture
the
environment
around
the
Taj
Mahal.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The
passage
describes
the
famous
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
The
first
paragraph
explains
why
the
Taj
Mahal
was
built
and
how
much
time
and
labour
were
spent
on
it.运用一个主从复合句对第一段进行了概括，其中运用why引导宾语从句的高级表达。
[高分句型2]The
third
paragraph
details
the
building
materials
and
the
architecture
style
of
the
Taj
Mahal.
运用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构对第三段进行概括，其中运用高级表达detail表示“详细介绍”。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）03
建议信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你班的交换生Tom在中国已经学习三个月，但是他依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。请你给他写封邮件，给出一些建议。内容包括：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成--篇完整的短文。
When
I
was
in
elementary
school,
I
loved
parties.
I
also
liked
all
different
kinds
of
people.
I
never
quite
fit
into
one
of
the
many
little
groups
at
school,
so
I
made
friends
from
various
groups.
There
was
an
“in”
crowd
made
up
of
the
cool
kids
who
had
the
power
to
rule
the
school-if
a
cool
kid
wore
two
different
colored
socks
to
school
one
day,
everyone
thought
it
was
great.
But
if
an
uncool
kid
did
the
same
thing,
the
other
kids
would
laugh
at
him
or
her.
Shannon
was
one
of
my
friends
who
was
the
uncool
type.
She
was
a
nice
girl
and
wore
pretty
clothes,
but
was
a
little
overweight.
I
don’t
know
why,
but
people
found
it
acceptable
to
make
fun
of
her.
Whenever
there
was
a
strange
noise
or
smell
in
the
classroom
the
kids
would
laugh
and
point
at
her.
Shannon
never
said
anything.
One
year,
to
celebrate
my
birthday,
my
mom
told
me
I
could
have
a
party
at
home.
I
struggled
for
days
deciding
on
which
girls
to
invite.
Once
I
had
chosen
all
the
names,
I
made
the
invitations
and
handed
them
out
to
my
friends
at
school.
“Why
did
you
invite
Shannon?”
asked
a
cool
friend.
She
said
that
I
had
made
a
big
mistake
and
pressured
me
to
tell
her
not
to
come.
I
wasn’t
sure
what
to
do;
I
liked
Shannon,
yet
I
was
afraid
that
the
cool
girls
would
be
angry
at
me.
I
knew
the
right
thing
to
do,
but
I
eventually
decided
not
to
say
anything
to
Shannon
and
let
the
invitations
stay
as
written.
On
the
day
of
my
party,
both
Shannon
and
my
other
friends
came,
and
all
that
happened
was
that
we
had
much
fun
together.
None
of
the
things
I
had
worried
about
came
to
be.
More
parties
and
events
followed
that
one
and
the
memory
of
it
gradually
faded
(模糊).
In
fact,
it
was
many
years
later
before
I
thought
about
that
party
again.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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1
Twenty
years
later,
I
weas
at
my
high
school
trwenty-year
reunion
(重逢,聚会)
when
a
beautiful,
slim,
very
professional-looking
woman
walked
up
to
me.
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Paragraph
2
Then
she
told
me
something
that
stayed
with
me.
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3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Almost
everyone
has
read
about
the
Taj
Mahal
in
India.
It
is
one
of
the
most
beautiful
buildings
in
the
world.
Over
three
hundred
years
ago,
Shah
Jehan
built
the
Taj
Mahal
as
the
tomb
for
his
wife.
Shah
Jehan
wanted
his
wife's
tomb
to
be
perfect.
He
did
not
care
about
time
or
money.
He
brought
together
workmen
from
all
Asia.
Altogether,
over
20,000
men
worked
on
the
building,
and
it
took
them
over
seventeen
years
to
finish
it.
The
building
rests
on
a
platform
of
red
sandstone.
Four
thin
white
towers
rise
from
the
corners
of
the
platform.
A
large
dome
rests
from
the
centre
of
the
building.
Around
this
large
dome
there
are
four
smaller
ones.
The
building
is
made
of
fine
white
and
coloured
marble.
It
has
eight
sides
and
many
arches.
There
is
an
open
corridor
just
inside
the
outer
walls.
From
this
corridor,
the
visitor
looks
through
the
marble
screen
to
a
central
room.
The
bodies
of
Shah
Jehan
and
his
wife
lie
in
a
tomb
below
this
room.
A
beautiful
garden
surrounds
the
Taj
Mahal.
The
green
trees
make
the
marble
look
even
whiter.
In
front
of
the
main
entrance
to
the
building
there
is
a
long,
narrow
pool.
If
you
look
in
this
pool,
you
can
see
all
the
beauty
of
the
Taj
Mahal
in
the
reflection
from
the
water.
Many
people
think
the
Taj
Mahal
is
the
most
beautiful
at
sunset.
Then
the
marble
picks
up
the
colour
of
the
sunset,
and
the
building
and
its
reflection
in
the
pool
gleam
like
red
jewels.
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