2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）01
求助信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，刚进入高一的你遇到了很多困难。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)；
2.恳请他给出建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear
Jack,
How's
everything
going?
I've
been
in
this
new
school
for
a
month,
but
I
still
find
it
difficult
to
get
used
to
the
life
here.
To
be
honest,
I've
met
some
difficulties.
First,
I
feel
lonely
here
because
I'm
far
away
from
my
family
and
old
friends.
Besides,
I'm
too
shy
to
communicate
with
my
new
classmates
or
teachers.
What's
worse,
it's
hard
for
me
to
catch
up
with
the
English
courses,
which
really
upsets
me.
Would
you
be
kind
enough
to
offer
me
some
suggestions?
I
will
be
grateful
if
you
do
so.
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封邮件，因为你刚进入高一就遇到了很多困难，写信向他求助。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)；
2.恳请他给出建议。
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
get
used
to;
to
be
honest;
lonely;
far
away
from;
too…to…;
communicate
with;
catch
up
with;
upset;
suggestion;
be
grateful;
look
forward
to
第三步：连词成句
1.
I've
been
in
this
new
school
for
a
month,
but
I
still
find
it
difficult
to
get
used
to
the
life
here.
2.
To
be
honest,
I've
met
some
difficulties.
3.
First,
I
feel
lonely
here
because
I'm
far
away
from
my
family
and
old
friends.
4.
Besides,
I'm
too
shy
to
communicate
with
my
new
classmates
or
teachers.
5.
What's
worse,
it's
hard
for
me
to
catch
up
with
the
English
courses,
which
really
upsets
me.
6.
Would
you
be
kind
enough
to
offer
me
some
suggestions?
7.
I
will
be
grateful
if
you
do
so.
8.I'm
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides
3.表转折对比关系：but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
First,
I
feel
lonely
here
because
I'm
far
away
from
my
family
and
old
friends.
(运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]
What's
worse,
it's
hard
for
me
to
catch
up
with
the
English
courses,
which
really
upsets
me.
(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Michael
goes
to
his
grandparents
once
or
twice
every
month,
and
he
decided
to
go
round
to
see
them
when
he
had
a
free
evening
the
week
before
they
went
for
a
holiday.
“Come
in,
Michael,”
his
grandfather
said.
“I’m
glad
you’ve
come
round.
Take
your
coat
off
and
sit
down
for
a
minute.
Let’s
see
the
end
of
this
programme
on
TV.
Your
grandmother
and
I
watch
it
every
week
at
this
time
of
night.”
So
Michael
sat
in
a
comfortable
chair,
quietly
waiting
for
the
TV
detective（侦探）to
find
out
who
the
thief
was.
Finally,
his
grandmother
got
up
and
turned
the
TV
off.
Then,
she
said,
“I’m
sorry,
Michael,
but
I
must
go
and
see
a
friend
for
a
few
minutes.
I’ll
come
back
soon.
But
while
I’m
out,
perhaps
you
can
help
your
grandfather
to
bring
down
the
big
blue
case
from
the
attic（阁楼）.We
want
it
for
the
holiday.”
They
watched
her
going
by.
“Let’s
go
round
to
the
pub（小店）for
a
drink,
”
grandfather
said.
“That’s
a
good
idea,”
Michael
answered,
“but
let
me
give
you
a
hand
with
the
case.
Tell
me
where
it
is
and
I’ll
get
it
out
for
you.
It’s
in
the
attic,
isn’t
it?”
Grandfather
pulled
down
the
corners
of
his
mouth.
“That’s
the
trouble.
It’s
not
there.
You
can
go
up
and
look,
but
you
won’t
find
it.
Perhaps,
I
lend
it
to
somebody,
but
I
can’t
remember.
Your
grandmother
doesn’t
know,
but
she’ll
find
out
this
week
that
we’ve
lost
our
best
case.”
Michael
laughed,
“Don’t
worry.
You
can
use
mine.
If
I
go
home
now
I
can
bring
it
back
in
half
an
hour.”
And
he
went
home
quickly
before
the
old
man
could
say
no.
When
he
got
home,
his
father
called,
“What
are
you
looking
for,
Michael?
You’re
throwing
your
things
about,
aren’t
you?”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But
when
Michael
explained
why
he
would
lend
his
case
to
grandfather,
his
father
suddenly
felt
ashamed.
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Michael’s
grandmother
came
back
from
her
friend’s
at
that
moment.
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【答案】
But
when
Michael
explained
why
he
would
lend
his
case
to
grandfather,
his
father
suddenly
felt
ashamed.
“Oh
dear,
I’m
the
one
who
borrowed
the
blue
case
the
year
before
last,”
his
father
cried,
“Michael,
please
take
it
back
for
me
and
tell
grandfather
I’m
very
sorry.”
When
Michael
walked
into
his
grandparents’
house
with
their
lost
case,
grandfather
laughed,
“Your
father
borrowed
it,
I
remember
now.
But
let’s
not
tell
your
grandmother.
Put
it
against
the
wall
there.”
Michael’s
grandmother
came
back
from
her
friend’s
at
that
moment.
When
she
saw
the
case
by
the
wall,
she
laughed
happily.
Then
she
picked
it
up
and
found
a
small
label-Michael’s
father’s
name
and
address
on
it.
She
suddenly
understood
why
her
husband
did
not
want
to
go
to
the
attic
to
look
for
the
case.
Because
it
was
lost
long
ago.
And
he
didn’t
tell
her
the
truth
for
fear
of
breaking
her
heart.
What
a
loving
lie!
Grandmother
came
over
and
hugged
grandfather
tightly,
with
tears
of
happiness
in
her
eyes.
【分析】
本文以箱子为线索展开，讲述了Michael的爷爷奶奶在要去旅游之际，要找到自己家心爱的行李箱为旅游做准备，但是奶奶却忘记行李箱已丢，这时爷爷为避免奶奶伤心，也没有揭穿真相。出人意料的是，在Michael帮忙的过程中，在父亲那儿把箱子找到。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当Michael向父亲解释了他为什么要把箱子借给爷爷时，他的父亲突然感到很羞愧”可知，箱子的丢失和父亲有关，所以第一段可描写父亲和这个箱子之间的故事；②由第二段首句内容“这时奶奶从朋友家回来”可知，第二段可描写奶奶看到箱子后发生的事。
2.续写线索：回家——找箱子——父亲解释——把箱子拿回家——想起——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）行为类①借箱子：borrow
the
case/
lend
the
case②带回箱子：take
it
bace/bring
it
back③.突然想起：suddenly
remember/come
to
realize情绪类①.高兴地：happily②.幸福的眼泪：with
tears
of
happiness
in
her
eyes.
【点睛】
高分句型1：I’m
the
one
who
borrowed
the
blue
case
the
year
before
last.
本句中用到who引导的定语从句
高分句型2：
What
a
loving
lie!本句是一个what引导的感叹句。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Social
Practice
Social
practice
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools.
Senior
school
students
are
asked
to
enter
society
and
get
some
ideas
of
it.
Surely，social
practice
has
many
advantages.
Firstly，social
practice
can
offer
students
a
chance
to
contact
society
and
meet
different
kinds
of
people.
In
this
way
students
can
gain
some
precious
social
experience，which
will
be
useful
to
their
future
career.
Secondly，students
can
apply
what
they
have
learned
in
class
to
practical
work，thus
knowing
themselves
more
clearly.
Thirdly，social
practice
can
bring
them
some
financial
reward
and
make
them
more
independent
of
their
family.
However，some
problems
may
arise
if
no
correct
guidance
is
made.
For
example，some
students
get
overly
interested
in
social
practice
and
want
to
work
full-time
and
earn
more
money，thus
neglecting
their
studies.
And
some
students
are
likely
to
get
in
touch
with
the
dark
side
of
society，which
will
affect
their
future
values.
In
order
to
carry
out
social
practice
smoothly，students
should
first
know
their
objective.
They
should
put
their
studies
in
the
first
place
and
see
social
practice
just
as
a
useful
supplement
(补充)，so
they
ought
to
try
to
strike
a
balance
between
social
practice
and
their
studies.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Social
practice,
which
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools,
enriches
students'
social
experience,
puts
their
knowledge
into
practice
and
rewards
them
with
money.
However
it
may
affect
their
studies
and
their
future
values
due
to
getting
overly
interested
in
social
practice.
Therefore,
students
should
put
their
studies
in
the
first
place
and
balance
their
studies
and
social
practice.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，社会实践，在学校已经越来越受欢迎，丰富了学生的社会经验，把他们的知识付诸实践，并奖励他们金钱。然而，过度热衷于社会实践可能会影响他们的学习和未来的价值观。因此，学生应该把学习放在第一位，并平衡他们的学习和社会实践。
【详解】
1
要点摘录①Social
practice
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools.
②In
this
way
students
can
gain
some
precious
social
experience，which
will
be
useful
to
their
future
career.
③Secondly，students
can
apply
what
they
have
learned
in
class
to
practical
work，thus
knowing
themselves
more
clearly.
④Thirdly，social
practice
can
bring
them
some
financial
reward
and
make
them
more
independent
of
their
family.
⑤For
example，some
students
get
overly
interested
in
social
practice
and
want
to
work
full-time
and
earn
more
money，thus
neglecting
their
studies.
⑥They
should
put
their
studies
in
the
first
place
and
see
social
practice
just
as
a
useful
supplement
(补充)，so
they
ought
to
try
to
strike
a
balance
between
social
practice
and
their
studies.
2.缜密构思将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行整合，将第5、6两个要点进行重组。3.遣词造句Social
practice
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools,
which
enriches
students'
social
experience,
puts
their
knowledge
into
practice
and
rewards
them
with
money.
Some
students
get
overly
interested
in
social
practice
and
want
to
work
full-time
and
earn
more
money，neglecting
their
studies.
They
should
put
their
studies
in
the
first
place
and
try
to
strike
a
balance
between
social
practice
and
their
studies.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Social
practice,
which
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools,
enriches
students'
social
experience,
puts
their
knowledge
into
practice
and
rewards
them
with
money.运用一个which引导的定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。
[高分句型2]：However
it
may
affect
their
studies
and
their
future
values
due
to
getting
overly
interested
in
social
practice.用due
to引出的原因状语对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）01
求助信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，刚进入高一的你遇到了很多困难。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)；
2.恳请他给出建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Michael
goes
to
his
grandparents
once
or
twice
every
month,
and
he
decided
to
go
round
to
see
them
when
he
had
a
free
evening
the
week
before
they
went
for
a
holiday.
“Come
in,
Michael,”
his
grandfather
said.
“I’m
glad
you’ve
come
round.
Take
your
coat
off
and
sit
down
for
a
minute.
Let’s
see
the
end
of
this
programme
on
TV.
Your
grandmother
and
I
watch
it
every
week
at
this
time
of
night.”
So
Michael
sat
in
a
comfortable
chair,
quietly
waiting
for
the
TV
detective（侦探）to
find
out
who
the
thief
was.
Finally,
his
grandmother
got
up
and
turned
the
TV
off.
Then,
she
said,
“I’m
sorry,
Michael,
but
I
must
go
and
see
a
friend
for
a
few
minutes.
I’ll
come
back
soon.
But
while
I’m
out,
perhaps
you
can
help
your
grandfather
to
bring
down
the
big
blue
case
from
the
attic（阁楼）.We
want
it
for
the
holiday.”
They
watched
her
going
by.
“Let’s
go
round
to
the
pub（小店）for
a
drink,
”
grandfather
said.
“That’s
a
good
idea,”
Michael
answered,
“but
let
me
give
you
a
hand
with
the
case.
Tell
me
where
it
is
and
I’ll
get
it
out
for
you.
It’s
in
the
attic,
isn’t
it?”
Grandfather
pulled
down
the
corners
of
his
mouth.
“That’s
the
trouble.
It’s
not
there.
You
can
go
up
and
look,
but
you
won’t
find
it.
Perhaps,
I
lend
it
to
somebody,
but
I
can’t
remember.
Your
grandmother
doesn’t
know,
but
she’ll
find
out
this
week
that
we’ve
lost
our
best
case.”
Michael
laughed,
“Don’t
worry.
You
can
use
mine.
If
I
go
home
now
I
can
bring
it
back
in
half
an
hour.”
And
he
went
home
quickly
before
the
old
man
could
say
no.
When
he
got
home,
his
father
called,
“What
are
you
looking
for,
Michael?
You’re
throwing
your
things
about,
aren’t
you?”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But
when
Michael
explained
why
he
would
lend
his
case
to
grandfather,
his
father
suddenly
felt
ashamed.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Michael’s
grandmother
came
back
from
her
friend’s
at
that
moment.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Social
Practice
Social
practice
has
been
more
and
more
popular
in
schools.
Senior
school
students
are
asked
to
enter
society
and
get
some
ideas
of
it.
Surely，social
practice
has
many
advantages.
Firstly，social
practice
can
offer
students
a
chance
to
contact
society
and
meet
different
kinds
of
people.
In
this
way
students
can
gain
some
precious
social
experience，which
will
be
useful
to
their
future
career.
Secondly，students
can
apply
what
they
have
learned
in
class
to
practical
work，thus
knowing
themselves
more
clearly.
Thirdly，social
practice
can
bring
them
some
financial
reward
and
make
them
more
independent
of
their
family.
However，some
problems
may
arise
if
no
correct
guidance
is
made.
For
example，some
students
get
overly
interested
in
social
practice
and
want
to
work
full-time
and
earn
more
money，thus
neglecting
their
studies.
And
some
students
are
likely
to
get
in
touch
with
the
dark
side
of
society，which
will
affect
their
future
values.
In
order
to
carry
out
social
practice
smoothly，students
should
first
know
their
objective.
They
should
put
their
studies
in
the
first
place
and
see
social
practice
just
as
a
useful
supplement
(补充)，so
they
ought
to
try
to
strike
a
balance
between
social
practice
and
their
studies.
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