高中英语高考二轮专题:读后续写：5R解读、4句框架和3大原则word版有答案

读后续写指导：5R解读、4句框架和3大原则
一、题目：
读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两端，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike
licked
the
last
of
the
mint
chocolate
chip
ice
cream.
It
was
almost
time
to
leave.
He
jumped
into
the
car
with
his
parents
and
headed
off
to
the
Olympic-sized
pool
for
the
big
swim
meet.
When
his
race
came
up,
Mike
was
confident.
He
was
strong
and
swift.
Mike
climbed
out
the
pool,
smiling.
He
had
just
won
first
place,
making
him
the
fastest
boy
in
his
age
group.
"Congratulations,
son,"
his
father
said.
His
mom
gave
him
a
hug,
even
though
he
was
soaking
wet.
A
week
later,
it
was
time
for
another
swim
meet.
Like
before,
Mike
decided
to
enjoy
his
favorite
ice
cream
flavor.
Mike
remembered
that
the
last
time
he
had
won
a
race,
he
also
ate
mint
chocolate
chip
ice
cream
first.
Maybe
he'd
win
again.
He’s
taken
first
place
again
in
his
race.
Mike
was
feeling
pretty
good.
As
it
turned
out,
Mike
decided
to
have
some
mint
chocolate
chip
Ice
cream
before
every
one
of
the
next
few
swim
meets.
He
began
to
think
of
it
as
his
lucky
charm.
After
several
months
of
placing
in
the
top
positions
of
every
race
he
swam,
Mike
was
feeling
unbeatable.
And
he
wouldn’t
admit
it,
but
all
that
ice
cream
was
adding
a
few
pounds
to
his
athletic
swimmer's
build.
It
didn’t
take
long
after
that
for
Mike
to
start
coming
in
second
place-and
then
third-and
then
last
place
in
his
races.
The
lucky
mint
chocolate
chip
ice
cream
had
lost
its
magic.
On
the
day
of
his
next
swim
meet,
his
mother
sat
down
at
the
table
with
him.
“Mike,
we
all
love
ice
cream,
but
it's
not
healthy
for
your
body
to
eat
so
much
of
it.
Maybe
it's
time
to
quit
the
sweet
treats
for
a
while,
especially
before
you
go
swimming.
Mike
unwillingly
agreed.
He
went
to
the
swim
meet,
and
didn’t
perform
well.
His
father
offered
to
go
running
with
him
a
few
days
a
week
to
help
him
feel
better
and
strengthen
his
muscles.
The
extra
weight
soon
disappeared,
and
Mike
found
himself
breathing
easier
at
swim
practices.
It
was
the
last
meet
of
the
season,
and
Mike
wasn’t
sure
what
to
expect.
He
felt
healthy
again,
but
he
didn’t
know
if
he
still
had
any
speed
in
the
pool.
注意:
1.
所续写短文的字数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用五个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
Paragraph
1
:
As
he
drove
into
the
water,
he
kicked
his
legs
and
stretched
his
arms
as
far
as
he
could.
Paragraph
2
:
His
jaw
dropped
as
he
realized
he
had
beaten
his
own
best
time
,and
everyone
else
too.
二、如何快速写：
第一步：Analyze
the
story：5Rs
1.
Read
for
characters:
Mike,
his
parents,
Ice
cream,
teammates
2.
Read
for
conflict
/
problems：
Ice
cream
and
Mike’s
performance:
Whether
is
it
a
Lucky
charm
3.
Read
for
plot:
4.
Read
for
emotional
changes:
When
his
race
came
up,
Mike
was
confident
Mike
was
feeling
pretty
good.
After
several
months
of
placing
in
the
top
positions
of
every
race
he
swam,
Mike
was
feeling
unbeatable.
Mike
unwillingly
agreed.
5.
Read
for
theme
What
contributes
to
Mike’s
success
in
swimming?
第二步：四句步定框架：
写读后续写不同于写其它作文，有可能需要先倒着写的
Step
1:
先把最后一句写好，即：主题句
Mike
realized
that
one’s
lucky
charm
was
nothing
but
his
diligence.
Step
2:
再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句：
He
dashed
to
the
finish
line.
Step
3:
紧接着每段的提示语句写角色的情感：
As
he
dove
into
the
water,
he
kicked
his
legs
and
stretched
his
arms
as
far
as
he
could.
It
struck
endless
energy
and
motivation
into
his
body.
Mike’s
jaw
dropped
as
he
realized
he
had
beaten
his
own
best
time,
and
everyone
else’s
too.
The
flowers
in
his
heart
were
already
in
bloom.
接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：
1.Action—Response原则：角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的一系列反应的。每段对话1-2句，不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。
2.Conflict—Solution原则：一般而言第二段会有问题的solution，但本文和高考的读后续写文章出题不一样，因为solution在所给文章中就已经有了。
同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段铺垫。
3.Negative—Positive原则：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是这样的变化，最终都是积极的。
最终：
As
he
dove
into
the
water,
he
kicked
his
legs
and
stretched
his
arms
as
far
as
he
could.
1.
It
struck
endless
energy
and
motivation
into
his
body.
（心情）
2.“This
is
where
I
belong.
I
can
win
the
race,”
thought
he,
his
teeth
clenched
and
his
eyes
fixed
on
the
finish
line
forward.
（内心独白）
3.Suddenly,
two
figures
whizzed
past,
which
startled
him.
（心情变化））
4.
Fearing
to
fall
behind,
he
felt
his
heart
pounded
frantically
and
his
mind
went
blank.
（解释心情变化和问题）
5.
Just
then,
he
thought
of
his
sweat
and
his
father’s
encouraging
smile.
（问题的解决方法）
6.
Gradually,
his
worry
gave
way
to
his
confidence
and
the
last
5
minutes
saw
him
dash
to
the
finish
line,
followed
by
the
end
of
the
race.
（衔接句）
Mike’s
jaw
dropped
as
he
realized
he
had
beaten
his
own
best
time,
and
everyone
else’s
too.
7.
The
flowers
in
his
heart
were
already
in
bloom.
（心情变化）
8.
However,
he
knew
he
deserved
the
honor
of
championship.
（拓展）
9.
His
parents
came
up
and
gave
him
a
high
five,
grinning
from
ear
to
ear.
（次要角色的回应）
10.
“Hey,
why
not
try
your
favorite
ice
cream
and
celebrate!”
said
his
father,
patting
his
on
the
shoulder.
（对话1）
11.
“Thanks,
Dad,
but
I
have
given
up
the
ice
cream.
It’s
not
such
a
lucky
charm
at
all.”
His
eyes
shone
with
wisdom.（对话2）
12.
It
was
that
day
that
Mike
realized
that
one’s
lucky
charm
was
nothing
but
his
diligence.（照应开头的主旨句）
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