2021年中考英语外研版一轮复习状语从句在书面表达中的应用 课件（66张PPT）

状语从句在书面表达中的应用
九年级复习 英语学科
状语从句
1. 时间状语从句 连词：when, while, as, before, after, until，
as soon as, since
2. 原因状语从句 连词：because, since, as
3. 条件状语从句 连词：if, unless, as long as
4. 结果状语从句 连词：so…that, such…that, so that
5. 让步状语从句 连词：although, though, even though
6. 目的状语从句 连词：so that, in order that
7. 地点状语从句 连词：where
8. 方式状语从句 连词：as if, as
9. 比较状语从句 连词：than, as…as
学习任务
通过本次课的学习，同学们可以掌握
条件状语从句、目的状语从句和结果状语从句，这三类从句在写作中的使用技巧。
通过对典型例题的分析，同学们可以打开思路，将所学内容灵活运用到语篇写作中。
知识框架
条件状语从句
连词：if, unless, as long as
目的状语从句
连词：so that, in order that
结果状语从句
连词：so…that, such…that, so that
提建议
提建议 客观描述
客观描述
从句及连词
适用语境
条件状语从句 连词：if, unless, as long as
功能简介
We will have a picnic if it is fine tomorrow.
We can’t avoid the possible traffic jam unless we set off now.
Nothing is impossible as long as you put your heart into it.
适用语境
提建议
阅读可以促进英语学习，建议大家多阅读。
If you read more, you will learn English better.
You will make more progress in your English unless you give up reading.
Do more reading, and you will learn English better.
(并列句)
The more reading you do, the better English you will get.
(比较状从)
打开思路，我们还能想到以下句型
说到“建议”，大家还会想到advise, suggest 等词
I advise you to do more reading because it can help improve your English.
I advise / suggest reading more because it can help improve your English.
想健康，多运动。
练习一下吧
阅读可以促进英语学习，建议大家多阅读。
If you read more, you will learn English better.
You will make more progress in your English unless you give up reading.
Do more reading, and you will learn English better.
The more reading you do, the better English you will get.
I advise you to do more reading because it can help improve your English.
I advise / suggest reading more because it can help improve your English.
If you take more exercise, you will become healthier.
You can get better health unless you give up exercising.
Do exercise every day, and you will be in better condition.
The more often you do sports, the better health you can get.
I advise you to take exercise every day because it can help you keep healthy.
I advise/ suggest taking exercise every day because it can help you keep healthy.
If you take more exercise, you will become healthier.
You can get better health unless you give up exercising.
Do exercise every day, and you will be in better condition.
The more often you do sports, the better health you can get.
I advise you to take exercise every day because it can help you keep healthy.
I advise/ suggest taking exercise every day because it can help you keep healthy.
想健康，多运动。
英语写作非常忌讳：
重复
目的状语从句 连词： so that, in order that
功能简介
We work hard so that our country will become stronger.
In order to become healthier, I will take proper exercise every day.
两个句型各有分工，都很重要。
适用语境
提建议
客观描述
提建议
I advise reading more so that you can greatly improve your English.
In order to increase our vocabulary, we are expected to do more reading in our spare time.
It’s wise to take daily exercise so that we can easily keep fit.
In order to stay healthy, we’d better spend more time on our daily exercise.
客观描述
为了写好文章，他上网查资料。
He surfed the Internet so that more information could be found for his article.
In order to write a good article, he spent much time searching online for more information.
结果状语从句
连词： so…that, such…that, so that
功能简介
The weather was so bad that we had to put off the meeting.
It was such bad weather that we had to put off the meeting.
They kept working day and night so that their team finished the task on time.
武汉，加油！ 中国，加油！！
努力学习，锻炼身体，成为更好的自己！
同学们，加油！！！
适用语境
客观描述
空气污染很严重，我们必须采取措施。
The air pollution is so serious that we must take steps to stop it.
他由于太紧张，没能完成演讲。
He was so nervous that he failed to finish his speech.
打开思路，第2个语境也可以换成
too… to…, …enough to…以及as a result,
等句型来表达
He was too nervous to finish his speech.
He couldn’t stay calm enough to finish his speech.
He was so nervous that he failed to express himself clearly. As a result, he didn’t finish his speech.
他乐于助人，大家都喜欢他。
练习一下吧
He is so helpful that everyone likes him.
He is such a helpful boy that everyone around likes him.
He is so helpful that he always gives others a hand.
As a result, everyone around speaks highly of his kindness.
典型案例
（一）
假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示如下：
（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。
（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。
（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。
（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。
（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
困惑
用简单句就能搞定单句翻译，这些状语从句没有用武之地
高水平的书面表达应该是
通过加入过渡句、连接词和适当的细节补充，使文章连贯，层次清晰，内容丰富完整。
直白的说，
就是要大家利用初中学习的句法和高级词汇将题中给出的细节点串联起来，并通过适当的补充，使文章逻辑合理，有更强的可读性。
咱们来重新审题，分析一下各个细节中是否存在逻辑关系，并试着补充所需细节。
（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。（客观描述）
（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。 （结果）
（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。
（喜欢广场舞的原因，或理解为这项运动带来的好处）
（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。 （客观描述，无法入睡是音乐很吵的结果）
（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……（提出建议）
尝试写作
（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。
The square dancing is so helpful that she has become healthier. What’s more, it offers her a chance to make more friends.
或者，改换句型和动词，写成下面这样。
It is such wonderful daily exercise that she has got better health. What’s more, it allows her to make more friends, which brings much pleasure to her life.
（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。
However, square dancing also causes much trouble to her neighbors. (细节补充)
Some complain that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……（提出建议）
In my opinion, square dancing is certainly a good way to exercise. People will enjoy themselves more if they try not to make much noise.
还可以写成
In my opinion, people should try to avoid making too much noise so that they won’t bring trouble to others.
困惑
讲的都懂，练的都会，写作时用不上
写作诀窍，那就是“带着任务写作”。
在写文章前，我们列出自己会用的从句或句型，然后在构思时，带着任务把它们融合到文章的语境中。
如果文章里没有现成的因果逻辑等，我们就自己补充细节，自己创造。
（二）
英国学生Frank 八月底将要来天津学习并住在李明家。请根据以下提示，以李明的名义给Frank 写一封电子邮件。
（1）Frank 到来前，你们会给他准备好房间。
（2）你爸爸送你们上学，妈妈做美味的食物。
（3）周末你们会邀请Frank 游览天津，如逛古文化街、乘船
游海河。
（4）Frank 喜欢打排球，你们可以一起看天津女排比赛。
（5）你相信……
Dear Frank, I’m happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I’m writing to say welcome to you. Before you arrive, we will …
请大家思考
（1）Frank 到来前，你们会给他准备好房间。
准备好房间的结果或者目的是什么呢?
Before you arrive, we will get your room ready so that you can have a good rest after a busy day.
（2）你爸爸送你们上学。
爸爸为什么要送你们上学呢？
Our school is big and beautiful though a bit far from my home. Luckily, my father can give us a lift on his way to work.
妈妈做美味的食物。
妈妈能做哪些美味的食物呢？
中餐还是西餐呢？
作者特别提及食物的目的是什么呢？
My mother is good at cooking, and she is planning to make many kinds of traditional Chinese food for you.
In this way, you can experience our life so that your trip will become more unforgettable.
先不要逐句翻译
要仔细审题，认真思考
记住:“眼前的黑不是黑，你说的白是什么白”。
题目中的简单动作要放到大语境中去理解，然后再用清晰的语言阐述出来。
庆春节，我们看电视，吃大餐。
举个例子
直白的翻译就是
We celebrate the Spring Festival, watch TV and have a big dinner.
仔细想想
庆春节是目的，后面的看电视和吃大餐是庆祝形式。
In order to celebrate the Spring Festival, we watch TV and have a big dinner.
还可以写成
We celebrate the Spring Festival in many ways, such as watching TV and having a big dinner.
再想想
春节期间，尤其是大年夜，我们看的电视节目跟平时的有什么不同呢?
说到吃大餐，年夜饭跟平时的大餐有着同样的意义吗？
We celebrate the Spring Festival in many ways,
such as watching a special program on TV
and having a traditional family dinner.
We celebrate the Spring Festival, watch TV and have a big dinner.
In order to celebrate the Spring Festival, we watch TV and have a big dinner.
We celebrate the Spring Festival in many ways, such as watching TV and having a big dinner.
We celebrate the Spring Festival in many ways, such as watching a special program on TV and having a traditional family dinner.
配套练习
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
( l ) 一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
( 2 )地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
( 3 )你认为… …
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed…
审题后，大家考虑这几个问题：
男孩为什么感觉不舒服？
这位穿着漂亮的女士为什么要帮着擦拭地面？
地铁到站，人们为什么挤向座位？
想到答案后，我们就可以将这些细节补充到文章中，再加上适当的连接词，以实现使文章连贯，层次清晰，内容丰富完整的目的。
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things happen, which touched me deeply.
补全首句，考查大家基础知识是否落实到位。
see sb. do / doing
notice sb. do / doing
注意宾补的形式
At that time, the train was so crowded that it was full of people. After a while, a boy felt awful and began to vomit. The terrible smell spread everywhere. As a result, many people complained about it.
我们猜测，地铁内拥挤不堪和空气不流通，这可能是造成男孩不舒服呕吐的原因。而呕吐物使得地铁内气味更不好，很多人对此抱怨。这样的铺陈使得衣着靓丽的女士帮助打扫地面的行为更为高尚，也体现了女士的心灵美。
What made us moved was that a young lady who was beautifully dressed helped him clean the floor. With tears in his eyes, the boy gave thanks to the lady.
穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面是非常令人感动的行为。因此，在描述时，我们可以加上评论What made us moved was that…
男孩在表示感谢时，必然是心怀感激的，因此加上诸如With tears in his eyes 的猜测，就使故事更为生动。
When the train stopped at a station, there were many people who wanted to get on it. Some pushed towards the seats. Because of this, many passengers found it hard to get off. What’s worse, some people even had a quarrel.
地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车。这说明有很多乘客上下车。 Because of this，点明了因果关系。
描述这种不需要评论的场景时，我们可把重心放在句式结构上，如 found it hard to get off。
As far as I’m concerned, we should always be helpful and ready to offer others a hand.
结尾段，可以用As far as I’m concerned, 或者In my opinion, 等来引出自己的评论。
表述个人观点，一定要独立成段，使用建议句型，两到三句话即可，不宜过长。
As far as I’m concerned, we should always be helpful and ready to offer others a hand. Besides, I feel it a must to behave politely in public. We will have a better world as long as every one of us helps out a little bit.
最后一句还可以写成
I hope every one of us helps out a little bit so that we will have a better world.
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things happen, which touched me deeply.
At that time, the train was so crowded that it was full of people. After a while, a boy felt awful and began to vomit. The terrible smell spread everywhere. As a result, many people complained about it. What made us moved was that a young lady who was beautifully dressed helped him clean the floor. With tears in his eyes, the boy gave thanks to the lady.
When the train stopped at a station, there were many people who wanted to get on it. Some pushed towards the seats. Because of this, many passengers found it hard to get off. What’s worse, some people even had a quarrel.
As far as I’m concerned, we should always be helpful and ready to offer others a hand. Besides, I feel it a must to behave politely in public. We will have a better world as long as every one of us helps out a little bit.