Module 9 Great inventions 正反方观点类作文(共24张PPT)

Write
a
passage
about
giving
the
opinions
Welcome
to
our
class!
English
Writing
Learning
aims:
※
Write
a
passage
about
giving
the
opinions.
※
Develop
the
writing
skills.
Why
do
I
still
do
exercise?
Why
do
I
do
exercise?
As
a
middle
school
student
of
Grade
Nine,
I
do
sports
one
or
two
hours
a
day,
such
as
doing
morning
exercise,
playing
basketball,
long-distance
running
and
so
on.
I
think
it
is
very
helpful
to
me.
Why
do
I
think
so?
There
are
two
reasons.
Firstly,
taking
exercise
makes
me
healthier
and
more
energetic.
Secondly,
I
can
feel
relaxed
in
different
kinds
of
sports,
and
then
I
do
a
better
job
in
my
study.
In
a
word,
by
doing
physical
exercise,
I’m
becoming
stronger
and
more
confident
than
before.
So
I
think
it
is
necessary
for
us
to
spend
some
time
on
sports
every
day
though
we
are
in
Grade
Nine.
结构：
总分总
A
topic
sentence:
As
a
middle
school
student
of
Grade
Nine,
I
do
sports
one
or
two
hours
a
day,
such
as
doing
morning
exercise,
playing
basketball,
long-distance
running
and
so
on.
Detail
1:由具体例子引出文章话题
Firstly,
taking
exercise
makes
me
healthier
and
more
energetic.
Secondly,
I
can
feel
relaxed
in
different
kinds
of
sports,
and
then
I
do
a
better
job
in
my
study.
Detail
2:
reasons
Conclusion
Use
the
linking
words.
Beginning:
opinion
Body:
Reasons
Structure（结构）
Ending:
Opinion
________________________________
so,
although
,
so...that...
,
(not)...
until
Join
the
sentences.
I
practised
singing
very
hard.
I
got
a
lot
of
prizes.
_____________________________
I
practised
singing
so
hard
that
I
got
a
lot
of
prizes.
Although
I
met
lots
of
difficulties,
I
had
a
strong
will
and
never
gave
up.
I
met
lots
of
difficulties.
I
had
a
strong
will
and
never
gave
up.
I
argued
with
my
parents.
I
broke
their
hearts.
_____________________________
I
argued
with
my
parents,
so
I
broke
their
hearts.
I
played
computer
games.
My
parents
came
back
from
work.
_________________________________
I
played
computer
games
until
my
parents
came
back
from
work.
Should
students
use
mobile
phones
at
school?
Why
do
we
need
to
use
mobile
phones
at
school?
Why
shouldn’t
we
use
mobile
phones
at
school?
Please
give
your
own
opinion.
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Opinions
Reasons
Mobile
phones
should
be
used
surf
the
Internet
for
information;
play
games
for
enjoyment;
…
Mobile
phones
shouldn’t
be
used
send
messages
in
class;
use
public
phones
at
school;
…
Let's
try!
Linking
words（连接词）
Structure（结构）
※Firstly
,
Secondly,
Finally，However
※
On
one
hand,
On
the
other
hand,
Besides
※
In
a
word;
I
think;
In
my
opinion
How
to
give
your
opinion:
Beginning:
opinion
Body:
Reasons
Ending:
Opinion
观点类作文，写作结构
观点类作文，写作结构
观点类作文，写作结构
Opinions
Reasons
Mobile
phones
should
be
used
surf
the
Internet
for
information;
play
games
for
fun;
…
Mobile
phones
shouldn’t
be
used
use
public
phones
at
school;
Be
bad
for
eyes…
You
can
begin
like
this:
Recently,
we
held
a
discussion
about
whether
the
students
should
use
mobile
phones
at
school
or
not.
Some
of
us
think…
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The
standard
for
evaluation.
Recently,
we
held
a
discussion
about
whether
the
students
should
use
mobile
phones
at
school
or
not.
Some
of
us
think
mobile
phones
should
be
used
at
school.
First,
we
can
surf
the
Internet
to
get
information
we
need.
Second,
if
we
are
tired,
we
can
play
games
for
fun
in
our
free
time.
Finally,
with
the
help
of
mobile
phones,
we
can
keep
in
touch
with
our
family
and
friends
easily.
However,
other
students
don’t
think
so.
On
one
hand,
some
students
send
messages
on
mobile
phones
in
class,
they
can't
listen
to
the
teachers
carefully.
On
the
other
hand,
it's
not
necessary
for
us
to
use
mobile
phones
at
school,
because
we
can
use
the
public
phones
around
us.
Besides,
keeping
a
mobile
phone
for
students
is
a
waste
of
money.
What’s
more,
if
we
spend
too
much
time
using
them,
it
will
be
bad
for
our
eyes.
For
me,
bringing
a
mobile
phone
to
school
is
good
because
I
can
play
games
to
relax
myself
when
I
am
free.
In
my
opinion,
it’s
not
a
good
idea
to
use
mobile
phones
at
school
because
it
does
more
harm
to
our
study
and
health.
Instead,
we
should
use
them
after
school
properly.
Possible
version:
Good
luck
to
you!
Thanks!
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