高中英语概要写作Summary Writing2课件（14张ppt）
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Summary Writing
Smortpones概要写作
Revision:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
①Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assistants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website.
②The first skill many people have lost is remembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes for you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social ones，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)．People often bury themselves in their smart－phones.As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
③Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.You should try to keep your parents’ number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to take a break from electronic devices because we are social creatures.We need device－free time.
Read for the topic, structure and writing style.
topic:(phenomenon)
smartphones affect people's abilities
reasons
solutions
Exposition
general-specific
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assistants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website.
Get the main points: para.1
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2: What's the function of the last sentence.
Tips2:关注信号词(signal words): but, however, sadly, in fact, so, as a result.
Tips3:transitional sentence过渡句，承上启下
However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important.+many people have lost three basic abilities.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.1
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities.
Tips4:语言改写：改变句式（运用非谓语动词或with 结构）
The first skill many people have lost is remembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes for you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social ones，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)．People often bury themselves in their smart－phones.As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
Get the main points: para.2
Q1:Find out 3 basic abilities, pay attention to the conjunction words.
Q2: What's the function of the last sentence.
bad consequences
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
three basic abilities
① remembering phone numbers
②lost their sense of direction
③ becoming socially inept
bad
consequences
The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the
sense of directions and the social skills.
Tips5:语言改写：同义替换 — 改变词性
运用并列结构
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
Lacking face- to- face communication results in the loss of important social skills.
As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
Tips5:语言改写：压缩长句 — 笼统代替具体
改变主语
Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.You should try to keep your parents’ number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to take a break from electronic devices because we are social creatures.We need device－free time.
Get the main points: para.3
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2: Could you find out more detailed information to support it .
Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.4
① keep your parents’ number in mind
②pay more attention to street signs
③ take a break from electronic devices
Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.
Tips6:语言改写：同义替换；笼统代替具体
档次
描述
第五挡（21-25）
理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确适用相应语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
完全使用自己的语言
第四挡（16-20）
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
有个别整句抄自原文
第三挡（11-15）
理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但不影响意义表达
应用简单的词句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第二挡（6-10）
理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
有些语法结构和词汇方面错误，影响了意义表达
较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第一挡（1-5）
没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
有较多语法结构和词汇方面错误，严重影响了意义表达
Present your own version and score it
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities (要点1). The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the sense of directions and the social skills.(要点2) A research on students confirms that lacking face- to-face communication results in the loss of important social skills.(要点3) Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.(要点4)
Yoke the points to complete a summary:
Tips7:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips8:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
Summary:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
概要写作练习卷
Homework:
Smortpones概要写作
Revision:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
①Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assistants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website.
②The first skill many people have lost is remembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes for you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social ones，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)．People often bury themselves in their smart－phones.As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
③Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.You should try to keep your parents’ number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to take a break from electronic devices because we are social creatures.We need device－free time.
Read for the topic, structure and writing style.
topic:(phenomenon)
smartphones affect people's abilities
reasons
solutions
Exposition
general-specific
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assistants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website.
Get the main points: para.1
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2: What's the function of the last sentence.
Tips2:关注信号词(signal words): but, however, sadly, in fact, so, as a result.
Tips3:transitional sentence过渡句，承上启下
However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important.+many people have lost three basic abilities.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.1
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities.
Tips4:语言改写：改变句式（运用非谓语动词或with 结构）
The first skill many people have lost is remembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes for you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social ones，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)．People often bury themselves in their smart－phones.As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
Get the main points: para.2
Q1:Find out 3 basic abilities, pay attention to the conjunction words.
Q2: What's the function of the last sentence.
bad consequences
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
three basic abilities
① remembering phone numbers
②lost their sense of direction
③ becoming socially inept
bad
consequences
The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the
sense of directions and the social skills.
Tips5:语言改写：同义替换 — 改变词性
运用并列结构
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
Lacking face- to- face communication results in the loss of important social skills.
As we are too addicted to what’s happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes can’t even tell whether a person is happy or not.
Tips5:语言改写：压缩长句 — 笼统代替具体
改变主语
Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.You should try to keep your parents’ number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to take a break from electronic devices because we are social creatures.We need device－free time.
Get the main points: para.3
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2: Could you find out more detailed information to support it .
Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.4
① keep your parents’ number in mind
②pay more attention to street signs
③ take a break from electronic devices
Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.
Tips6:语言改写：同义替换；笼统代替具体
档次
描述
第五挡（21-25）
理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确适用相应语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
完全使用自己的语言
第四挡（16-20）
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
有个别整句抄自原文
第三挡（11-15）
理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但不影响意义表达
应用简单的词句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第二挡（6-10）
理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
有些语法结构和词汇方面错误，影响了意义表达
较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第一挡（1-5）
没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
有较多语法结构和词汇方面错误，严重影响了意义表达
Present your own version and score it
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities (要点1). The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the sense of directions and the social skills.(要点2) A research on students confirms that lacking face- to-face communication results in the loss of important social skills.(要点3) Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.(要点4)
Yoke the points to complete a summary:
Tips7:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips8:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
Summary:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
概要写作练习卷
Homework: